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Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)

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No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年9月21日 星期日 at 9:13:43

Artist: Ray
Title: lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)
Source: Nagi no Asukara
Tags: 凪のあすから Fumika Netsukawa Momochikun
BPM: 133
Filesize: 16357kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.33 stars, 84 notes)
  2. Fumika's Hard (2.68 stars, 206 notes)
  3. Insane (3.49 stars, 268 notes)
  4. Mochi's Normal (1.97 stars, 145 notes)
Download: Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)
Download: Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#58
I love Ray >3<

Normal - Momochikun
Hard - Fumika
mp3 & video from Fumika
Last edited by No_Gu , edited 9 times in total.
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
:O...
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
>3<
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
師父啊 要不要BG啊 我有現成的
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
wow
Fumika
1,425 posts
Joined November 2011
Fumika
I love Ray too >3< !
Momochikun
1,927 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun
o3o
http://puu.sh/50HDm.osu
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
pigu a
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Pokie wrote:

pigu a
Popo a
Kodora
Kodora
awesome
Losertic
461 posts
Joined May 2012
Losertic
Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

  1. Disible countdown.....ummm.why not working countdown?

Easy

  1. 00:41:654 (4) - change new rhythm?.... ex) 00:40:301 ~ 00:43:684 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1188413
  2. 01:08:722 (2) - move (184,144)?

Mochi's Normal

  1. 00:10:526 (2,3,4) - change slider's axis?
    ─ 00:10:526 (2) - move (236,176) / move slider's middle point (296,184) / move slider's tail point - (340,152)
    ─ 00:11:203 (3) - move (276,116)
    ─ 00:12:331 (4) - move (440,188)
  2. 00:23:835 (4) - NC, 00:24:060 (1) - remove NC?
  3. 00:26:090 (1) - remove NC?
  4. 01:26:316 (3) - move (316,288)? / 01:26:541 (4) - move (256,328) / 01:27:218 (1) - move (80,292)?
  5. 01:27:218 (1) - remove NC? , because.. 01:27:444 - start vocal part. so.. remove nc

Fumika's Hard

  1. 00:13:008 (1,1,2,3,4) - hmmm. maybe too hard?.. but, it's okay
  2. 01:07:368 (1) - stack the - 01:06:241 (7) - this note?
  3. 01:26:767 (1) - remove NC?

Insane

  1. 01:00:150 (1) - stack the - 00:59:248 (9) - this note?
    (if you change this mod, change axis↓)
    01:00:601 (2) - (406,163)
    01:00:827 (3) - (278,123)
    01:01:278 (4) - (326,203)
  2. 01:10:752 (6) - change two notes?

last mod 9 days ago.
ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
Joined September 2012
ritsu-tanaika
M4M

GENERAL

I would suggest adding a spinner at the end which ends at 01:28:797, just to finish it off well

EASY

00:16:842 (2) - Move one grid up and to the right to blanket 00:14:586 (5) - more

00:40:301 (1,2,3) - Three 1/2 sliders may be hard for Easy so consider changing maybe two of them into a single 1/1 slider instead


MOCHI'S NORMAL

00:28:571 (3) - A double turn back maybe confusing, try changing it to turn back only once and add a note at (320,240)

00:31:278 (1) - Move head of slider to (392,112) to make the overlap look nicer


FUMIKA'S HARD

00:02:406 (3) - Add whistle at slider head

00:18:421 (10) - Distance spacing issue, suggest moving it to (32,184)

00:20:451 (5) - Try stacking the head of this slider on top of 00:19:323 (2) -

00:28:459 (3) - This note may be hard to see, try increase distance spacing to 0.7 to make this note more obvious between the sliders

00:44:361 (4) - Add a note at this section because the rhythm flow feels broken without it (strong note)

01:15:038 (2) - I think the flow would be better if this was stacked on top of 01:15:263 (3) -

INSANE

00:00:602 (1) - Try moving the red node of the slider to (96,48) to make the bend more symmetrical

00:07:368 (5) - Is the 1/8 bounce back intentional?

00:42:331 (2) - Distance between this and 00:41:880 (1) - is too large since it is 1/4 of a note apart. (224,328) might be a good location to put it instead

00:54:624 (7,1) - Think it'll look more neat if both were perfectly stacked under the tail of 00:54:286 (6) -


Hope i helped
Oriance
87 posts
Joined May 2013
Oriance
zzzz random m4m... zzzz

Easy
00:04:211 (1) - Shouldn't use the whistle, feels out of place.
00:15:714 (1) - Move it closer the the second slider for a better blanket
00:20:451 (2) - Add a whistle for it to be similar to 00:18:647
00:22:256 (1) - Add a whistle or a soft finish.
00:43:008 (5) - This slider confuses me, it doesn't sound right. Try moving it to 00:43:233 and shorten it at 00:43:684? If you are, should change the green tick to N:C1
00:56:316 (3) - Shorten to 00:56:767
01:18:195 (1) - Remove whistle.

Normal
00:31:053 (4,1) - Move it down a little more to blanket it better.
00:39:850 (3) - Extend to 00:40:075
01:00:150 (1) - Finish
01:26:316 (3) - Move it like this?

Hard
00:29:023 (5) - There should be a finish or a whistle here. There's a faint sound
00:43:684 (1,2,3) - I feel as if you should add a green tick here with N:C1

Insane
00:37:594 (3) - Move the slider down a little like this for better blanket

00:39:398 (3) - Move the third slider like this?
01:16:842 (2) - Could blanket a little better.


I just lost my headache because of this song. Thanks. Not sure if this really helps, hopefully though.
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
all fixed some..thanks
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
來偷懶了

[General]
  1. E/N/I都去letterbox/countdown
    其他沒aibat不看了
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:429 (1,2) - 不是啥大問題，不過你這裡不是應該用1.2x間距嗎，突然變小了感覺十分莫名（雖然也看不太出來）
  2. 00:13:684 (2) - 我怎麼感覺這裡該上Soft-finish，跟00:14:361 (5) - 搭起來也挺對味
  3. 00:43:008 (4,5,6) - 等距？大概抓個2.15左右。是說我認為(5)能再下去點，這裡的音樂還算挺高潮
  4. 00:50:000 (3,4,5) - 純吐槽，這分開的有點突然orz
  5. 00:53:835 (3) - 上個S-whistle，能聽到叮的聲音
  6. 00:58:346 (5,6,7,8,9) - 有點驚訝你沒用normal-sampleset，其實我覺得用n-sampleset然後帶s-whistle也不錯
[Fumika's Hard]
  1. 00:29:023 (5) - Add a whistle at the sliderhead of this slider, you can here the sound which performs in 1/8, it's like the sound of the original whistle lol
  2. 00:58:346 (7,1) - That five sound in the music starts at (7), so why not just put an new combo there instead of put it on current (1)? It would be much fitter to the song itself than now. Oh btw, how about changing them to normal-sampleset, and add soft-whistles on them? That would emphasize the song in an impressive way imo!
  3. 01:04:774 - Oh gawd, this sounds horrible. That normal-sampleset here is just too noisy and loudly. I know that you copy the green lines from Insane diff, but you truely should remove the green line at 01:04:662 -. Because of that green line, the slidertail of 01:04:436 (3) - would be a normal-sampleset sound, which is just.. meh. You know that.
    Pretty nice!
[Mochi's Normal]
  • 00:18:647 (1,2,3) - I don't really like these three sliders, they're too urgent for a normal diff I'll say. The music isn't too high tide, so those 1/2s might be weird here. Suggest you to change those three 1/2 sliders to two 1/1 sliders like this:
    http://puu.sh/5Yei9.jpg
    much fitter to the vocal~
  1. 00:31:278 (1) - Just an attention for this slider, but you sure that hidden reverse is safe enough?
  2. 01:13:459 (2,3,4) - I don't feel you need some rhythm like this in the music that just have 3 sounds on each white lines. It's okay if you want to emphasize those 3 sounds like this, which's "set a sliderhead at there".
    http://puu.sh/5Yev2.jpg
  3. 01:25:639 (2,3) - These two objects might be more reasonable if you make a blanket between them. Current placements of them aren't that-so-flow, and it's a bit ugly in my opinion.
    Sometimes you use a slider to across the white lines, and sometimes you don't. That might be weird if you don't make them consistency. Because you emphasize the music on the white line by adding normal sampleset on those objects, it would be like "I do hear a normal-sampleset at last white line, so where's the normal-sampleset sound at this white line?"
[Easy]
  1. 00:07:368 - Whistle消失了
  2. 00:40:301 (1,2,3) - 安全嗎..E這樣玩沒事?
  3. 01:13:233 - / 01:13:684 - / 01:14:135 - 得上whistle 背景音太明顯 想無視都不行
給你射兩顆 +12走走
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
[Insane]

  1. 00:05:564 (4) - Shouldn't the blue tick be mapped since you follow the instruments that closely?

Awesome map as always!
Fumika
1,425 posts
Joined November 2011
Fumika

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

M4M

FUMIKA'S HARD

00:02:406 (3) - Add whistle at slider head :arrow: ok

00:18:421 (10) - Distance spacing issue, suggest moving it to (32,184) :arrow: Its Hard diff, so Its fine to jump.

00:20:451 (5) - Try stacking the head of this slider on top of 00:19:323 (2) - :arrow: Nope

00:28:459 (3) - This note may be hard to see, try increase distance spacing to 0.7 to make this note more obvious between the sliders :arrow: nah

00:44:361 (4) - Add a note at this section because the rhythm flow feels broken without it (strong note) :arrow: nuuuuuu

01:15:038 (2) - I think the flow would be better if this was stacked on top of 01:15:263 (3) - :arrow: just jump by following the vocal.

Hope i helped

Oriance wrote:

zzzz random m4m... zzzz

Hard
00:29:023 (5) - There should be a finish or a whistle here. There's a faint sound :arrow: ok
00:43:684 (1,2,3) - I feel as if you should add a green tick here with N:C1 :arrow: ok

I just lost my headache because of this song. Thanks. Not sure if this really helps, hopefully though.

Flask wrote:

來偷懶了

[General]

[Fumika's Hard]
  1. 00:58:346 (7,1) - That five sound in the music starts at (7), so why not just put an new combo there instead of put it on current (1)? It would be much fitter to the song itself than now. Oh btw, how about changing them to normal-sampleset, and add soft-whistles on them? That would emphasize the song in an impressive way imo! :arrow: k
  2. 01:04:774 - Oh gawd, this sounds horrible. That normal-sampleset here is just too noisy and loudly. I know that you copy the green lines from Insane diff, but you truely should remove the green line at 01:04:662 -. Because of that green line, the slidertail of 01:04:436 (3) - would be a normal-sampleset sound, which is just.. meh. You know that.
    Pretty nice! :arrow: k
給你射兩顆 +12走走
Thanks !

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Fumi.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59474
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15038,29474,43910,60150,74586
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:lull〜そして僕らは〜 (TV Size)
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:No_Gu
Version:Fumika's Hard
Source:Nagi no Asukara
Tags:凪のあすから Fumika Netsukawa Momochikun
BeatmapID:336576
BeatmapSetID:123893

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.35
SliderTickRate:1

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No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
up from graveyard
Regou
1,916 posts
Joined July 2010
Regou
[Insane]
00:22:256 (1,2,3) - 間距太類似了 雖然我讀的了可是感覺有點危險
00:46:391 (3,4) - 臥槽簡直無情 好不容易才接上的
01:05:789 (1,2) - 感覺這組的弧度可以改善下
01:26:992 (5) - NC
沒啥好摸得,good job
[Hard]
00:01:504 (2,3,4) - it's better to remove the whistle here imo....
00:13:008 (1,1) - oooo that's interesting
00:31:278 (6,7,8,9) - improve the placement here?
01:10:752 (1) - It's better for you to divide this into two notes so as to emphasize the downbeat
01:24:511 (1) - mmmmmm idk but the NC pattern suddenly changed here....it doesn't look good imo
nice

[Normal]
00:01:955 (4,1) - Maybe you can improve the overlap here wwww (plz don't let the slider tails overlap
00:28:571 (3) - maybe you can add a clap in 2nd reverse?
00:52:030 (2,3) - Spacing?
01:18:195 (1,2) - ooo same issue
The rhythm in kiai time is pretty hard for a normal imo but well done~

[Easy]
00:02:406 (2,1) - 沒blanket好 建議改掉00:00:602 (1,2) - 的弧度
00:15:489 (1,2) - 233這blanket 前後blanket間距不一樣了不好看
00:40:301 (1,2,3) - 屁股醒醒 easy放這個是人????QWQ
我靠後面還連到00:44:586 (2) - 啊,給跪
01:27:218 (3) - NC?
Kuuhaku
104 posts
Joined October 2011
Kuuhaku
好紧张啊，第一次摸屁股，希望能让您舒♂服

Insane
00:06:917 (4) - 实话说，这里觉得有些看不明白，我觉得00:06:692 (3,4) - 中间加一个note，
然后于00:07:143加一个四分拍的kickslider更加的适合
00:18:421 (5) - 要不要试试把这里变成了kick slider，并放在00:18:647 (1) - 附近？
00:20:902 (1,2,3) - 这里的三连相对有些突兀啊，
我认为这样能更好些
上图1的位置在00:20:677

00:34:662 (5) - 这里换成一个四分拍的折返滑条，好像打起来挺爽的？
这样似乎也不算太突兀？

00:48:759 (4) - 排列上和前面的几个超快折返不很一样啊，
总觉得移动到（320,208）并与00:49:323 (1) - 平行能更好些
01:00:150 (1) - 斗胆说，我觉得这里1的位置不好，从节奏上来看感觉不该与前面的9重叠
试试这种排列？


Fumika`s Hard
00:05:113 (2) - se here is different from previous ones,and did`t fit so much
in my opinion,remove whistle se in 00:03:308 (4) - ,and add a whistle at the beginning of 00:05:113 (2) -
00:08:947 (1) - remove nc
00:32:632 (10) - just an idea here,try ctrl+g
00:59:023 (3) - how about exchange the whistle se at the end to normal hitfinish?
01:26:767 (1) - maybe we need a finish se at the middle of this slider~

Mochi`s Normal
00:04:211 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - in this part,just follow the 2/4 without whistle is a better choice(strongly recommend)
00:24:962 (3) - remove hit whistle at 00:24:962
01:26:541 (4) - soft hitfinish at the beginning and normal hitfinish at the end

Easy
00:43:008 (5) - 这里太长了，对于新手是不是有些难？
00:50:000 (4) - 尾部是不是缺了个音效？

以上
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
SPOILER

Regou wrote:

[Insane]
00:22:256 (1,2,3) - 間距太類似了 雖然我讀的了可是感覺有點危險恩
00:46:391 (3,4) - 臥槽簡直無情 好不容易才接上的可能有点远?...看看再说吧
01:05:789 (1,2) - 感覺這組的弧度可以改善下跟前面复制过来的
01:26:992 (5) - NC好像不用吧重音在后面
沒啥好摸得,good job

[Easy]
00:02:406 (2,1) - 沒blanket好 建議改掉00:00:602 (1,2) - 的弧度blanket懒动。。
00:15:489 (1,2) - 233這blanket 前後blanket間距不一樣了不好看^
00:40:301 (1,2,3) - 屁股醒醒 easy放這個是人????QWQ
我靠後面還連到00:44:586 (2) - 啊,給跪[/color]
01:27:218 (3) - NC?k
SPOILER

Kuuhaku wrote:

好紧张啊，第一次摸屁股，希望能让您舒♂服

Insane
00:06:917 (4) - 实话说，这里觉得有些看不明白，我觉得00:06:692 (3,4) - 中间加一个note，
然后于00:07:143加一个四分拍的kickslider更加的适合实际上你整体听的话这边流动感很强。你说中间加那个地方的音其实是从06692起的 我局的这样更合一些
00:18:421 (5) - 要不要试试把这里变成了kick slider，并放在00:18:647 (1) - 附近？kick slider啥意思啊。。
00:20:902 (1,2,3) - 这里的三连相对有些突兀啊，估计我当时听错了。。删了中间那个
我认为这样能更好些
上图1的位置在00:20:677

00:34:662 (5) - 这里换成一个四分拍的折返滑条，好像打起来挺爽的？没有特别的音啊这里 还破坏pattern
这样似乎也不算太突兀？

00:48:759 (4) - 排列上和前面的几个超快折返不很一样啊，不好看啊感觉。。
总觉得移动到（320,208）并与00:49:323 (1) - 平行能更好些
01:00:150 (1) - 斗胆说，我觉得这里1的位置不好，从节奏上来看感觉不该与前面的9重叠你说完才发现这边少下了个节奏。。整体动了下
试试这种排列？

Easy
00:43:008 (5) - 这里太长了，对于新手是不是有些难？。。也许是不过还是想keep
00:50:000 (4) - 尾部是不是缺了个音效？I 没加啊应该没吧

以上

update sry for late reply
Chloe
1,160 posts
Joined April 2011
Chloe
话说这个还接GD么 我想试试
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Chloe wrote:

话说这个还接GD么 我想试试
填不填还是个事 再说吧
Momochikun
1,927 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun
Thanks for modding >.< ~

SPOILER
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TitleUnicode:lull〜そして僕らは〜 (TV Size)
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ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:No_Gu
Version:Mochi's Normal
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wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
[General]
建议去掉countdown，wildscreen support和letterbox，没啥用

[Easy]
00:40:301 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏最好改简单点，尤其4，没有对准音

[Mochi's Normal]
00:58:571 (1) - why not start this slider from 00:58:346 - ? would sound much better imo

[Fumika's Hard]
01:04:774 - this slider end sounds too loud imo, hope you can try to use other hitsounds or turn the volume down a bit

摸不出啥，好了叫我吧，记得别漏vid
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
allllllll fixed.thank you very much!
wcx19911123
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No_Gu
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No_Gu
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Konei
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Konei
Gonna check this one later.
Here we go.


[General]

  1. Audio Lead-in is inconsistent between difficulties, please add 1800 like in Hard to Easy, Normal and Insane.

[Insane]

  1. 00:14:135 (3,4,5) - This rhythm sounds seriously much better without the note on 4, it just doesn't fit the rhythm and song here.
  2. 00:16:278 - You could try adding a note here to fit the sync.
  3. 00:22:256 (1,2) - I'd rather not do that extension since there's no song on the blue tick, try making 1 and 2 an 1/1
  4. 00:24:060 (1,2) - Same here, but try making 1 1/2, it will follow the sync on the red tick.
  5. 00:27:105 (5) - I don't see why you are using this 1/4 note all of a sudden and break the rhythm, remove it?
  6. 00:50:564 (4) - Spacing could be easily missread as 1/2 for this part, could you try reducing the spacing?
  7. 00:53:947 (4) - Again, I do think this 1/4 note does not fit the rhythm.

[Fumika's Hard]

  1. 00:17:744 (9) - Move the end a bit down to blanket 8?
  2. 00:33:083 (1) - Add a whistle to the start to emphasize the piano play?
  3. 00:39:850 (1) - This plays weird since the drum rhythm starts on the downbeat which is the repeat. Would be better if the start of this new rhythm was clickable. So you could remove the repeat and make a simple triplet starting on the downbeat.
  4. 01:01:278 (4) - Might be good to tone this jump a bit down since this is a Hard difficulty.
  5. 01:04:436 (3) - You could shorten this by 1/4 and add a note to the blue tick, this way you could map the white tick and keep your drum rhythm.
  6. 01:11:203 (2) - Reduce this jump a bit here, it feels harsh in gameplay.
  7. 01:15:038 (2,3) - Nerf this spacing a bit aswell, it's not very fitting the difficulty curve. (while 2,0 jumps are really high for a Hard)

[Mochi's Normal]

  1. 01:24:286 (5,6,7) - Make spacing consistent here.

The rest is fine, just some suggestions before we let this go.
Taking the bubble for the inconsistent Audio Lead-in though.

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No_Gu
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No_Gu

Konei wrote:

Gonna check this one later.
Here we go.


[General]

  1. Audio Lead-in is inconsistent between difficulties, please add 1800 like in Hard to Easy, Normal and Insane.added 1500

[Insane]

  1. 00:14:135 (3,4,5) - This rhythm sounds seriously much better without the note on 4, it just doesn't fit the rhythm and song here.orz seems so,i donno why I used this rhythm that time
  2. 00:16:278 - You could try adding a note here to fit the sync.don't want...
  3. 00:22:256 (1,2) - I'd rather not do that extension since there's no song on the blue tick, try making 1 and 2 an 1/1 vocal "ke" is on blue
  4. 00:24:060 (1,2) - Same here, but try making 1 1/2, it will follow the sync on the red tick.vocal "sa".easy to hear when using 25% speed
  5. 00:27:105 (5) - I don't see why you are using this 1/4 note all of a sudden and break the rhythm, remove it?it does have sound on the 1/4...
  6. 00:50:564 (4) - Spacing could be easily missread as 1/2 for this part, could you try reducing the spacing?orz I think it's really not easy to be read as 1/2 cuz my 1/2 have enough spacing and this is enough crowded
  7. 00:53:947 (4) - Again, I do think this 1/4 note does not fit the rhythm.if you delete the 3 notes together then hear,you'll get it does have sound.

[Fumika's Hard]

  1. 00:17:744 (9) - Move the end a bit down to blanket 8? hmm.it's not going to be like to blanket 8 cuz the slider itself is a opposite to 8
  2. 00:33:083 (1) - Add a whistle to the start to emphasize the piano play?he is adding whsitle on red line in this part
  3. 00:39:850 (1) - This plays weird since the drum rhythm starts on the downbeat which is the repeat. Would be better if the start of this new rhythm was clickable. So you could remove the repeat and make a simple triplet starting on the downbeat.yes,ok
  4. 01:01:278 (4) - Might be good to tone this jump a bit down since this is a Hard difficulty.
  5. 01:04:436 (3) - You could shorten this by 1/4 and add a note to the blue tick, this way you could map the white tick and keep your drum rhythm.if he sets this rhythm,then it means he wants to have a different thing here.and in fact this rhythm sounds ingenious,isn't it?
  6. 01:11:203 (2) - Reduce this jump a bit here, it feels harsh in gameplay.
  7. 01:15:038 (2,3) - Nerf this spacing a bit aswell, it's not very fitting the difficulty curve. (while 2,0 jumps are really high for a Hard)
    orz,about the jumps...imo it's enough small jump for hard diff.u know,my hard diffs are always with jumps..

[Mochi's Normal]

  1. 01:24:286 (5,6,7) - Make spacing consistent here.k

The rest is fine, just some suggestions before we let this go.
Taking the bubble for the inconsistent Audio Lead-in though.

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Konei
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Qualified.
Len
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Len
congratz /o/
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