1. Easy (1.36 stars, 171 notes)
2. Insane (4.61 stars, 752 notes)
3. Last Bubble's Hard (2.87 stars, 357 notes)
4. Light Insane (4.02 stars, 585 notes)
5. Normal (1.8 stars, 256 notes)

StarFury wrote:

lol

• 
  00:14:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - 간격 일정하게
  00:18:343 (3,5,6) - clap
  00:26:290 (3) - nc
  00:27:085 (1) - 복사해서 각도 바꿔서 (2)에 배치
  00:28:675 (7) - nc
  00:32:548 (5) - 4랑 간격좁히기
  00:38:211 (5) - nc
  00:41:985 (1) - 피니시를 00:42:383 로 하고 00:42:581에 노트추가
  00:45:959 (2) - nc
  00:56:489 (3,4) - 간격 좁히기
  01:08:409 (1) - 피니시를 01:08:906
  01:13:575 (7,8) - 간격좁히기
  02:08:409 (1) - 노트삭제후 (2)에 nc하고 3,4 시작점 딱 중간에 배치
  02:45:362 (6) - nc
  02:50:130 (7) - ^
  02:53:309 (7) - ^
  03:13:971 (3) - 한칸 옆으로
  03:22:514 (6) - nc
  03:26:190 , 03:26:389 노트추가

Azmato wrote:

[Komari]
[list]
00:14:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - 간격 일정하게 Finished!
00:18:343 (3,5,6) - clap Finished!
00:26:290 (3) - nc Finished!
00:27:085 (1) - 복사해서 각도 바꿔서 (2)에 배치 Finished!
00:28:675 (7) - nc Finished!
00:32:548 (5) - 4랑 간격좁히기 Finished!
00:38:211 (5) - nc Finished!
00:41:985 (1) - 피니시를 00:42:383 로 하고 00:42:581에 노트추가 Finished!
00:45:959 (2) - nc Finished!
00:56:489 (3,4) - 간격 좁히기 Finished!
01:08:409 (1) - 피니시를 01:08:906 Finished!
01:13:575 (7,8) - 간격좁히기 Finished!
02:08:409 (1) - 노트삭제후 (2)에 nc하고 3,4 시작점 딱 중간에 배치 Finished!
02:45:362 (6) - nc Finished!
02:50:130 (7) - ^ Finished!
02:53:309 (7) - ^ Finished!
03:13:971 (3) - 한칸 옆으로 Finished!
03:22:514 (6) - nc Finished!
03:26:190 , 03:26:389 노트추가 이건 한 필요가 없다고 생각되어 남겨두엇습니다 D:

GL

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi~ in game req

배경이미지가 너무 작네요.. 좀 큰걸 구하시는걸 추천합니다

[Easy]

전반적으로 보았을때 디스턴스가 좀 엉망이네요 디스턴스 하나로 일치시키는게 좋을듯 합니다 (디스턴스 스냅을 사용할 것)

00:23:906 (1) - 스피너가 끝난 후에 바로 노트가 나오면 어려워지기 때문에 00:25:495 - 이곳에서 끝내시길 바랍니다 뱃이 많이 지적하는 부분이기도 합니다
00:29:469 (4) - 뜬근없는 피니쉬네요 피니시 삭제
00:33:442 (1) - ? 디스턴스 넓혀야 되실듯요 리듬이 멀리있는데 너무 디스턴스가 짧다고 생각드네요
00:42:581 (1) - 제안입니다 아래로 둥글게 하시는건 어떨까요?
00:46:157 (1,2) - 디스턴스가 왜 바뀌는지 모르겠네요
00:47:747 (3,4) - ^
01:04:436 (4) - 01:02:846 (2) - 얘랑 평행하게 맞추세요 약간 어긋나있네요
01:05:230 (1) - 스피너길이 01:06:621 - 이곳까지
01:14:767 (4,5) - 제가 보았을때는 별로 좋아보이지 않는 슬라이더 입니다 다르게 바꿔보시는게 어떠신가요?
01:27:482 (1,2,3,4) - 디스턴스 엉망이네요
01:33:442 (3,4) - 노트 따로 빼는게 좋아보입니다
01:45:760 (2,3) - ^
01:46:555 (4) - 뉴콤보
02:12:780 (3) - 박자 어색
02:27:084 (1,1,1) - 이렇게 배치하신 의도가 뭔지 모르겠네요
02:39:005 (1) - 왜 뉴콤보 넣으셨는지? 뉴콤제거
02:40:594 (1) - 스피너길이 02:41:985 - 이곳까지
03:00:859 (2) - 그냥 1/1박 슬라이더랑 03:01:654 - 이곳에 노트 추가하는게 좋을듯
03:04:236 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
03:05:031 (1) - ^
03:06:024 (2) - 위에 두개 뉴콤보 제거하셨으면 여기에 뉴콤보
03:14:766 (1) - 뉴콤제거
03:23:508 (2) - 03:21:918 (1) - 얘 복붙해서 평행하게 하는게 좋을듯
03:26:289 (3,4) - 지우고 슬라이더 짧은거 하는게 쉬울듯요


[Normal]

00:15:959 (1) - 뉴콤제거
00:19:038 (1) - 00:19:138 - 이자리로 옳기세요 그리고 뉴콤제거
00:35:032 (2,3) - 피니쉬 제거
00:42:581 (1) - 피니시와 뉴콤보 제거
00:42:979 (2) - 여기에 뉴콤보
00:44:171 (3,4,5,6) - orz... 이런건 별로 보기 않좋은데..
00:47:747 (1) - 뉴콤제거
00:53:310 (1) - 왼쪽으로 볼록하게
01:02:051 (5) - 뉴콤보
01:19:535 (5,6) - 리듬제안입니다


01:32:250 (1) - 이런건 치기 어려워요 다르게 매핑하는거 추천
01:56:091 (5) - 뉴콤보
02:00:859 (3) - 테스트 해보았는데 HP바 건드리네요 저거 건드리면 언랭이니 반드시 수정하세요
02:31:455 (6) - 뉴콤보
02:59:270 (1) - 아래사진처럼 하는건 어떨까요?


03:26:587 - 아얘 여기 브레이크 넣지말고 스피너 넣으시면 자연스러울텐데..


[Komari]

00:21:919 (6,7,8) - 디스턴스 좁게 줄이세요 너무 넓어요
00:55:694 (5) - 디스턴스 맞추기
01:08:210 (7) - 디스턴스 유지바랍니다

디스턴스 어긋난곳이 많네요

디스턴스 맞춘후에 다시 불러주세요~

GL~

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[Komari]
난이도명을 그냥 Insane으로 하는건 어떨까 싶습니다.

00:16:754 (3,4) - 어울리지 않습니다. 그냥 노트 서클 두개로 처리하는게 좋겠군요. 이렇게

00:18:939 (4) - 이 경우도 음악에 맞추시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 이런 형식의 배치도 좋겠군요.

00:27:482 (1) - NC 제거

00:52:515 - 이 부분부터 변속을 주는 것도 좋겠군요. 0.75정도? 면 될 것 같습니다.

00:53:906 (5) - 슬라이더를 한칸 당겨주세요. 이게 맞을 것 같습니다.

01:19:932 (5,6,7,8) - 4번 슬라 끝나는 지점에 완전히 겹쳐주세요.

01:20:528 - 여기다가 서클을 하나 추가하는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

01:20:727 - 여기서 키아이를 끊고 01:21:124 - 여기서 다시 시작하는 것도 좋을 것 같습니다.

01:40:197 (1) - 슬라이더말고 01:40:793 (2,3,4,5,6) - 이것 처럼 노트로 처리해보시는건 어떤가요? 이렇게

01:59:866 (4,5) - 어울리지 않습니다. 이런 식으로 바꾸시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

02:02:449 (1,2) - 1/2 서클로 교체하시고, 02:02:945 - 여기 노트를 추가하셔서 3연타를 만드시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

02:03:243 (5,6) - 여기도 1/2 서클로 교체후에 점프로 바꾸셔도 좋을 것 같네요.

02:35:031 (1) - NC 제거
02:35:627 (1) - ^
02:36:223 (1) - ^
02:36:621 (1) - ^

02:37:018 (2) - NC 추가
02:37:217 (1) - NC 제거

02:49:336 - 여기다가 노트를 추가해서 3연타를 만들어주세요.
02:49:435 (4) - 이 지점에는 아무 소리도 없습니다. 02:49:534 - 여기다가 서클을 넣어주세요.

02:56:091 - 역시 여기서 키아이를 끊고, 02:56:488 - 여기서 다시 시작하는 것도 좋을 것 같습니다. < 만약 이렇게 하신다면 02:56:488 (8) - 여기다가 NC를 넣어주세요.

03:06:223 (1) - NC 제거
03:08:210 (1) - ^
03:19:534 (1) - ^
03:23:210 (1,1) - ^

일단 제 수준에선 이게 한계인 것 같군요.
힛사 모딩도 받아보시는게 어떨까요 ㄹ
GL !

bubble156 wrote:

모딩겸 하드 완성을 알리는글

[General]

02:43:376 (3) - (인세인 기준) 이 부분의 키아이 타임을 한박자뒤로

03:14:369 (3) - 슬라이더 끝부분의 키아이 타임을 두박자 앞으로(Easy는 제외)

[Easy]

AR, CS, OD, HP +1

01:27:482 (1,2,3,4) - 아래 박자처럼 하면 헷갈리는게 줄어들지도.... (*디스턴스 맞춰주시고)



211057,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0 - 이 포인트는 존재감이 없으니 제거

[Normal]

01:27:482 (1,2,3) - 아래 박자처럼 (*이것도 디스턴스 맞춰주시고)

http://puu.sh/4wpPJ.jpg

[Komari(Insane)]

AR, OD -1

나머지는 패스

그리고 하드완성

http://puu.sh/4wqjQ.zip

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

Hi :] In-game req

솔직히 이지와 노말은 제가 제대로 볼 수 있는 난이도가 아니라서 하드~인세인급 난이도만 모딩 하겠습니다.
제 모딩은 모두 추천형식입니다.
무엇을 수정했고, 안했는지 알려주시면 감사하겠습니다 :]
안한 것은 이유도 적어주심 감사 ㄹ

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[Komari]
난이도명을 그냥 Insane으로 하는건 어떨까 싶습니다.

00:16:754 (3,4) - 어울리지 않습니다. 그냥 노트 서클 두개로 처리하는게 좋겠군요. 이렇게

00:18:939 (4) - 이 경우도 음악에 맞추시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 이런 형식의 배치도 좋겠군요.

00:27:482 (1) - NC 제거

00:52:515 - 이 부분부터 변속을 주는 것도 좋겠군요. 0.75정도? 면 될 것 같습니다.

00:53:906 (5) - 슬라이더를 한칸 당겨주세요. 이게 맞을 것 같습니다.

01:19:932 (5,6,7,8) - 4번 슬라 끝나는 지점에 완전히 겹쳐주세요.

01:20:528 - 여기다가 서클을 하나 추가하는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

01:20:727 - 여기서 키아이를 끊고 01:21:124 - 여기서 다시 시작하는 것도 좋을 것 같습니다.

01:40:197 (1) - 슬라이더말고 01:40:793 (2,3,4,5,6) - 이것 처럼 노트로 처리해보시는건 어떤가요? 이렇게

01:59:866 (4,5) - 어울리지 않습니다. 이런 식으로 바꾸시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

02:02:449 (1,2) - 1/2 서클로 교체하시고, 02:02:945 - 여기 노트를 추가하셔서 3연타를 만드시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

02:03:243 (5,6) - 여기도 1/2 서클로 교체후에 점프로 바꾸셔도 좋을 것 같네요.

02:35:031 (1) - NC 제거
02:35:627 (1) - ^
02:36:223 (1) - ^
02:36:621 (1) - ^

02:37:018 (2) - NC 추가
02:37:217 (1) - NC 제거

02:49:336 - 여기다가 노트를 추가해서 3연타를 만들어주세요.
02:49:435 (4) - 이 지점에는 아무 소리도 없습니다. 02:49:534 - 여기다가 서클을 넣어주세요.

02:56:091 - 역시 여기서 키아이를 끊고, 02:56:488 - 여기서 다시 시작하는 것도 좋을 것 같습니다. < 만약 이렇게 하신다면 02:56:488 (8) - 여기다가 NC를 넣어주세요.

03:06:223 (1) - NC 제거
03:08:210 (1) - ^
03:19:534 (1) - ^
03:23:210 (1,1) - ^

일단 제 수준에선 이게 한계인 것 같군요.
힛사 모딩도 받아보시는게 어떨까요 ㄹ
GL !

Startrick wrote:

hi, as your request

• [Komari]
  OD 7

1. 00:27:482 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
2. 00:37:019 (1,2,3) - 이런거 좀 복잡하지 싶네요... 차라리 서로 붙여놓으시는건?
3. 00:45:364 (1) - 노트 제거하는게 나을꺼 같아요...
4. 00:49:932 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
5. 00:58:078 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
6. 01:02:846 (5) - Ctrl + G?
7. 01:03:641 (7) - Ctrl + G?
8. 01:04:436 (9) - Ctrl + G?
9. 01:08:310 - 노트 추가해서 3연타로 해보시는건?
10. 01:13:575 (7,8,1) - 위에서 말했던 00:37:019 (1,2,3) 처럼 좀 불편해보이네요... 아닌가
11. 01:33:045 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
12. 01:41:389 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거?
13. 01:53:111 (10) - 뉴 콤보 추가
14. 01:53:310 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
15. 01:54:700 (8) - 뉴 콤보 추가
16. 01:56:389 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
17. 01:59:270 (5) - 뉴 콤보 추가
18. 01:59:468 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
19. 02:06:323 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
20. 02:12:581 (1,1,1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
21. 02:23:111 (5) - 뉴 콤보 추가
22. 02:24:104 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
23. 02:24:700 (4) - 뉴 콤보 추가
24. 02:34:237 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
25. 02:35:031 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
26. 02:35:627 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
27. 02:36:621 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
28. 02:59:667 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거?
29. 03:06:223 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
30. 03:08:210 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
31. 03:14:766 (1,1) - 이거 좀 이상한거 같아요...
32. 03:19:534 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
33. 03:23:210 (1,1) - 뉴 콤보 제거
34. 03:32:846 - 그냥 스피너를 여기까지 당겨보시는건...?

good luck!

HabiHolic wrote:

ok recheck~

[156's Hard]

디스턴스 스냅으로 디스턴스를 제대로 맞추시길 바랍니다

ok~ a nice map~

hard diff fixed please~

call me back~

1. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9.(https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria)
   즉,4:3 사이즈의 BG(예로 800x600,1024x768)또는 16:9의 사이즈의 BG(예로 852x480,1366x768)를 써주세요.
2. 설정에 'Letter Box during breaks' 체크 풀어주세요.
3. 검은 노트 안 써주셨으면 하네요...백그라운드 검게해버리면 보기도 힘들 뿐더러 특히 노멀에서 02:27:084 이부분은 아예 배경 자체가 검은색이에요.
   다른 색으로 바꾸는 것을 권장합니다. 가능한 밝은 색으로요!

1. 00:17:548 (4) - 뉴콤보
2. 00:19:932 (6) - 피니쉬 제거
3. 00:20:727 (1) - 첫부분에 피니쉬를 넣어주세요
4. 00:22:118 (2) - 끝 부분에 피니쉬
5. 00:27:085 (1) - 첫부분 피니쉬
6. 00:36:224 - 여가 노트 하나 추가요
7. 00:36:621 (4) - 휘슬....안 어울리네요,뉴콤보
8. 00:52:515 (3) - 뉴콤보
9. 00:58:873 (4,1) - 4번 뉴콤보해주고,1번 뉴콤보 제거
10. 01:02:051 (1) - 피니쉬
11. 01:08:409 (3) - 뉴콤보
12. 01:14:767 (4) - ^
13. 03:26:289 (3) - 끝에 피니쉬

1. 00:30:263 (1) - 첫부분 피니쉬
2. 00:44:965 (3) - 안쪽으로 꺽어 주시는게 나아 보여요
3. 00:46:157 (1) - 첫부분 피니쉬
4. 00:52:118 - 노트 넣어줘도 될 듯 싶어요
5. 01:05:230 (1) - 01:07:217 이 떄 끝내는 것 어떤가요? "탕"하는 소리에 맞춰서..
6. 01:49:733 (1) - 끝에 피니쉬 제거
7. 01:56:091 (5) - 뉴콤보
8. 02:11:985 (3) - 이건 진짜 아니에요... 노트 추가!!
9. 02:40:197 (1,2,3) - 이 패턴은 노멀에서는 잘 안 써요...겹치게 하는 것은 노멀 유저에게 힘든 패턴이라고 봅니다.
10. 02:41:786 (5,6,7) - 이것보다 이 리듬으로!그리고 5번 노트 뉴콤보입니다

1. 00:18:741 (4) - 00:17:350 (3) 이 노트에 맞춰서 딱 겹치게 해주세요
2. 00:23:906 (4) - 피니쉬
3. 00:25:595 (1) - ^
4. 00:54:700 - 노트 추가
5. 00:55:495 - ^
6. 00:55:694 (3) - 뉴콤보?
7. 01:02:051 (1) - 첫부분 피니쉬
8. 01:05:329 (1) - 01:07:217 이 떄 끝나게 하는 것 어떤가요? 그 뒷 부분 빈 부분에 노트 더 추가시키고
9. 01:25:098 (3) - 01:23:508 (3) 이 노트에 딱 겹치게!
10. 01:59:270 (1,2) - 휘슬을 넣은 의도를 모르겠어요
11. 02:04:038 (3,4) - ^
12. 02:12:084 (1) - - 스핀 너무 길어요 02:13:375 이 때 끝나게 시켜주시고,02:16:355 까지 노트 더 추가 해주시고요

1. 00:25:098 (5,6) - Ctrl+G?
2. 00:26:886 (9) - 클랩 제거
3. 00:27:085 (1) - 첫부분 피니쉬
4. 00:45:959 (8) - 뉴콤보
5. 00:51:323 (7) - 확실히 겹치게 해주세요
6. 01:52:018 (6) - 별로 보기 좋지않은 슬라이더네요
7. 01:53:906 (6) - 뉴콤보?
8. 01:55:892 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 리듬에 맞지않는 것 같아요
9. 02:18:343 (6) - 뉴콤보

HabiHolic wrote:

ok recheck~

[156's Hard]

디스턴스 스냅으로 디스턴스를 제대로 맞추시길 바랍니다

ok~ a nice map~

hard diff fixed please~

call me back~

TaMul wrote:

[Hard]00:18:741 (4) - 00:17:350 (3) 이 노트에 맞춰서 딱 겹치게 해주세요
00:23:906 (4) - 피니쉬
00:25:595 (1) - ^
00:54:700 - 노트 추가
00:55:495 - ^
00:55:694 (3) - 뉴콤보?
01:02:051 (1) - 첫부분 피니쉬
01:05:329 (1) - 01:07:217 이 떄 끝나게 하는 것 어떤가요? 그 뒷 부분 빈 부분에 노트 더 추가시키고
01:25:098 (3) - 01:23:508 (3) 이 노트에 딱 겹치게!
01:59:270 (1,2) - 휘슬을 넣은 의도를 모르겠어요
02:04:038 (3,4) - ^
02:12:084 (1) - - 스핀 너무 길어요 02:13:375 이 때 끝나게 시켜주시고,02:16:355 까지 노트 더 추가 해주시고요

TaMul wrote:

[General]

1. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9.(https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria)
   즉,4:3 사이즈의 BG(예로 800x600,1024x768)또는 16:9의 사이즈의 BG(예로 852x480,1366x768)를 써주세요.
2. 설정에 'Letter Box during breaks' 체크 풀어주세요.
3. 검은 노트 안 써주셨으면 하네요...백그라운드 검게해버리면 보기도 힘들 뿐더러 특히 노멀에서 02:27:084 이부분은 아예 배경 자체가 검은색이에요.
   다른 색으로 바꾸는 것을 권장합니다. 가능한 밝은 색으로요!

[Easy]
노스 간 거리(Distance)가 뒤죽 박죽이네요. 이지는 가능하면 일정하게 만드세요. 0.8로 둔건지,0.9로 둔건지 모르겠네요.
중간에 1.3도 보이고...

1. 00:17:548 (4) - 뉴콤보
2. 00:19:932 (6) - 피니쉬 제거
3. 00:20:727 (1) - 첫부분에 피니쉬를 넣어주세요
4. 00:22:118 (2) - 끝 부분에 피니쉬
5. 00:27:085 (1) - 첫부분 피니쉬
6. 00:36:224 - 여가 노트 하나 추가요
7. 00:36:621 (4) - 휘슬....안 어울리네요,뉴콤보
8. 00:52:515 (3) - 뉴콤보
9. 00:58:873 (4,1) - 4번 뉴콤보해주고,1번 뉴콤보 제거
10. 01:02:051 (1) - 피니쉬
11. 01:08:409 (3) - 뉴콤보
12. 01:14:767 (4) - ^
13. 03:26:289 (3) - 끝에 피니쉬

[Normal]
전체적으로 길 슬라이더를 많이 쓰셨네요? 조금 지루한 느낌이 드네요..서클 노트도 더 써가면서 난이도 조절해주세요ㅎ

1. 00:30:263 (1) - 첫부분 피니쉬
2. 00:44:965 (3) - 안쪽으로 꺽어 주시는게 나아 보여요
3. 00:46:157 (1) - 첫부분 피니쉬
4. 00:52:118 - 노트 넣어줘도 될 듯 싶어요
5. 01:05:230 (1) - 01:07:217 이 떄 끝내는 것 어떤가요? "탕"하는 소리에 맞춰서..
6. 01:49:733 (1) - 끝에 피니쉬 제거
7. 01:56:091 (5) - 뉴콤보
8. 02:11:985 (3) - 이건 진짜 아니에요... 노트 추가!!
9. 02:40:197 (1,2,3) - 이 패턴은 노멀에서는 잘 안 써요...겹치게 하는 것은 노멀 유저에게 힘든 패턴이라고 봅니다.
10. 02:41:786 (5,6,7) - 이것보다 이 리듬으로!그리고 5번 노트 뉴콤보입니다

노멀 후반부가 갑자기 어려워지는 것 같은데...(겹침노트때문에) 일단 고려사항으로 알아두세요

[Hard]

1. 00:18:741 (4) - 00:17:350 (3) 이 노트에 맞춰서 딱 겹치게 해주세요
2. 00:23:906 (4) - 피니쉬
3. 00:25:595 (1) - ^
4. 00:54:700 - 노트 추가
5. 00:55:495 - ^
6. 00:55:694 (3) - 뉴콤보?
7. 01:02:051 (1) - 첫부분 피니쉬
8. 01:05:329 (1) - 01:07:217 이 떄 끝나게 하는 것 어떤가요? 그 뒷 부분 빈 부분에 노트 더 추가시키고
9. 01:25:098 (3) - 01:23:508 (3) 이 노트에 딱 겹치게!
10. 01:59:270 (1,2) - 휘슬을 넣은 의도를 모르겠어요
11. 02:04:038 (3,4) - ^
12. 02:12:084 (1) - - 스핀 너무 길어요 02:13:375 이 때 끝나게 시켜주시고,02:16:355 까지 노트 더 추가 해주시고요

[Insane]

1. 00:25:098 (5,6) - Ctrl+G? << 이 모양도 괜찮은거 같아서 그냥 냅둿어요
2. 00:26:886 (9) - 클랩 제거
3. 00:27:085 (1) - 첫부분 피니쉬
4. 00:45:959 (8) - 뉴콤보
5. 00:51:323 (7) - 확실히 겹치게 해주세요
6. 01:52:018 (6) - 별로 보기 좋지않은 슬라이더네요
7. 01:53:906 (6) - 뉴콤보?
8. 01:55:892 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 리듬에 맞지않는 것 같아요
9. 02:18:343 (6) - 뉴콤보

많은 모딩이 필요할 것 같아요
파이팅!

happy623 wrote:

Request via PM~

Neru <3

General

1. 4582275373226.jpg sized 767*767, idk if this ratio is okay, if not, you may need to change it in 4:3/16:9 size instead
2. Since you have a video here, you can remove Letterbox during breaks
3. Black combo color is too hard to read in this map, since everything are quite dark, Maybe you should change a brighter one
4. imo, these two colors are so similar while playing, I suggest you change one of them to another color would be better :
   

Easy

1. idk if my bad or not, the distance in this diff isnt equal, you may need to spend some time and recheck the diff, make sure you used the same distance for mapping Easy and Normal, or it will be too hard for newbies, for example, 00:29:469 (4,1) -, they have become a jump for here, you should not putting any jumps in Easy diff, newbies may hardly catch the notes
2. 00:20:727 (1) - By referring to 00:22:118 (2) - , it seems that you want to follow the drums here, so I suggest you end this slider at 00:21:323 -, the current one is quite weird for me
3. 00:26:290 (1,1) - I think you need to remove the NC in 00:27:085 (1) - because it has a bit NC overused. Btw if you want to keep the NC here, I suggest you remove the slider ( 00:26:290 (1) - ) and extend the spinner in 00:23:906 (1) - , end it at 00:26:290 - isnt a bad idea xD, anyway its up to you
4. 00:36:621 (1) - I suggest you need to reduce one reverse for this slider, idk if newbies get enough time to react it
5. 00:41:787 (3) - remove the finish I guess, it sounds pretty weird if you add a finish here, the finish should be added at the head of 00:39:800 (1) -, once you heard carefully, you will find a finish sound in the music, moreover, Big white tick is mostly fit for a finish! you can try to read this , to get more information about the sound placement
6. 00:45:363 (4) - try not to stack this please, idk if newbies are able to read it
7. The rhythm in Kiai is great <3, the major problem is the distance spacing, make sure you keep the same distance and this kiai wiill be perfect!
8. 01:27:482 (1,2,3,4) - this is a 1/2 rhythm, if you put only notes here , it maybe too hard, i suggest you replace them in 3 sliders:
9. 01:56:091 (3,4) - Here is a big drum in 01:56:687 -, you may try to follow what you did in 00:49:336 (1,2) -, use a long slider to undermap this, in order to make it easier
10. 02:27:879 (1,1) - remove the NC in 02:28:674 (1) -, it isnt a necessary for a NC imo
11. 02:43:773 (3) - Please NC here, it can consist your NC pattern thats what you did in 01:08:409 (1) - . Plus, Kiai started here, I think a new combo is great for it
12. 03:09:203 (1) - this rhythm isnt fit with the music, try to end the slider in red ticks
13. 03:21:918 (1,1) - NC overused, remove one of them
14. 03:26:687 - hmm, this break is weird for me, if I were you, I would have put a spinner here, or you can try to keep it and looks for further mods

Normal

1. Same as Easy, make sure the distance are okay, and place some hitsound
2. 00:35:032 (2,3) - this undermap sounds empty, If I were you, I would have done something like 00:33:442 (1) - , making a long slider
3. 00:49:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - listen to the music, how about remap it like this? :
   
4. 00:53:310 (1) - remove this NC, not really a necessary for it, since you have a NC in 00:52:515 (1)
5. 01:21:124 - hey, dont miss this big drum!, try to add a note here to fill the empty
6. 01:28:475 (2) - I guess end this slider at 01:28:873 - will be much better
7. 01:30:661 (1) - you did a right rhythm in 01:27:482 (1) -, so, do the same to it!
8. 02:00:064 (2,3) - do not overlap each other, move 02:00:859 (3) - one grid down, so it will get neater and tidy
9. 02:05:230 (1,2) - swap NC, because melody changed in 02:05:627 (2) instead of 02:05:230 (1)
10. 03:24:700 (3,2) - do not overlap, or it will affect the readability to players, if you really want to keep this, stack 03:24:700 (3) with 03:25:693 (2) -'s tail exactly
11. 03:26:587 (1) - start this spinner in 03:26:687 (1) - is better imo

156's Hard

1. 00:44:171 (3,3) - stack them exactly, so it wont be too hard to read
2. 00:46:157 (1,2) - for me, I think this overlapping is quite weird, maybe replace them like this? :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:25:892 (1) - move it 2 grids up, to avoid overlapping
4. nothing big deal, the only thing is , try to avoid some overlapped object, to make the diff looks neater

Insane

1. 00:27:880 (3,4,5,6) - this square isnt perfect enough, try to move 00:28:079 (4,5,6) - 2 grids up
2. 00:32:548 (5) - I suggest you add a green line and lower the sound in the slidertick
3. 00:41:190 (6) - unstack it? It flows better imo
4. 03:04:832 (7) - it should start at 03:05:031
5. 03:25:693 (2) - SV changed here, you should add a NC, to notice players for it

Keep going and looks for more mods!!
Good Luck!!

Mei wrote:

from your request
just some suggestions, i am not good at modding

[Insane]

* 00:15:959 (1) - i prefer use 1/4 slider there


* 00:30:662 (4) - stack with (5)

* 00:33:443 (1) - ctrl+g and move (6,7) to the head of slider

* 00:38:211 (1,2,3,4) - i prefer the order in 2 4 1 3

* 00:41:985 (1,2) - blanket not good

* 00:41:985 (1,2) - blanket not good , move to x:172 y :56

* 00:42:780 (3) - this note touch rthe slider, which i think is bad

* 00:42:979 (4,5,6) - advice

Picture

* 00:45:363 maybe need something there...spinner or slider or stream

* 00:47:747 (4) - nc

* 01:00:860 (6) - add a repeat for this

well i think you can change slider speed to a higher rate when it is kiai time. it always make maps become interesting and exciting

* 01:19:336 (4) - nc

* 01:20:131 (6,7,8) - this stack is bad for me , but i think it will be fine for some people

* 01:20:528 (1,1) - remove nc from the first one and add nc to the second

* 01:23:707 (7) - this flow seems bad, move a bit downward

* 02:00:660 (1,1) - remove nc from the second one and add nc to the first

* 02:02:250 (7,1) - remove nc from the second one and add nc to the first

* 02:02:250 (7,1) - move to x:292 y 72

* 02:17:747 (3,4,5) - stack is a bad idea there

* 02:54:601 (6) - remove this

* 03:13:574 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g

* 03:31:057 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴



[156's hard]

* 01:02:051 set a green point, i think the sound there can be louder

* 02:12:084 (1) - end at 02:13:177 and move (1) to 02:13:375 (1) -

* 01:58:078 (5) - nc

i think for hard , you can have some short streams there. the whole diff is full of 1/ 4 slider, which i think it is boring


[normal]

first check you AI mod

* 00:44:965 (3) - you can add a repeat there

* 01:19:336 add note there

* 01:20:131 (6,1,2,3,4) - advice

Picture

* 01:28:475 (2) - remove this slider and add note at 01:28:475 01:28:873

* 02:02:051 add note or change your DS

* 03:24:700 (3,2) - stack not perfect


[easy]

just check your ai mod , so many probelms there

-RIKKA- wrote:

Hi, from M4M.
I mod Easy, Normal and Insane.

Easy

・00:30:263 (1,2,3) - like this?



・00:33:045 - add note.
・00:33:442 (1) - slider end to 00:34:273. or add note at 00:34:273.
・00:35:032 (3) - ^
・00:42:184 - add note.
・00:45:363 - ^
・00:52:118 - ^
・01:07:217 (1) - change slider to circle ( 01:07:614 ).　　(too hard for beginner, because slider too near after spin. )
・01:47:747 - add note.
・01:50:925 (3,4) - like this?



・01:59:667 (1,2) - circle repeat at same place. (too hard for beginner.)
・02:03:641 - add note.
・02:05:230 - ^
・02:07:614 - ^
・02:12:382 (3,4) - like this ?



・02:38:607 - add note.
・02:42:581 (1) - too hard for beginner, because slider too near after spin.
・02:52:515 (4,1) - spacing too near.
・03:03:442 (1,2,3) - change to return slider.
・03:05:627 - add note.
・03:07:415 (2,3) - change to slider.
・03:09:005 (1) - move to 03:08:806.
・ 03:09:203 (2,3) - like this?



・03:23:508 (1) - remove NC (New combo)
・03:25:097 (1,2,3) - like this?

　　

Normal

・00:20:727 (1) - slider end to 00:21:720.
・01:19:535 (5,6) - spacing too far.
・01:58:475 (1) - remove NC.
・01:59:667 (1) - NC.
・02:00:859 (3,4) - spacing too far.
02:02:449 (4) - NC.
・02:18:343 (1,2) - like this?



・02:28:475 (2) - NC.
・02:41:389 (4,5,6) - like this?



・02:53:309 (5) - NC.
・02:54:899 (1) - remove NC. and slider start at 02:54:899. slider end at 02:55:693.

Insane

・00:34:932 - add note.
・01:29:270 (5) - repeat to circle(4) ?
・02:08:111 - ^

nice map

MasterKirin wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[General]
You need to update your map description :c because the "Insane" diff is "Komari" diff so update it c:

(Green is a tip
Orange is a thing that you can change or not change
Red is a thing that you must change.

And now.. Let's mod!

[Easy]
00:31:257 (3,4) I think this pattern is too much confusing for newbies. Try to change it with something else :C

[Insane]
00:26:290 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) This stream isn't uniform. Try to change it :C

Good luck-

Pagno wrote:

Hello! From your queue~

Black text: Just a suggestion!
Blue text: You should fix this

~ Mod here ~

[Easy]
00:31:853 (4) - You should remove this and place a single hitcircle on the second white tick

00:47:747 (3) - NC

02:42:978 (3) - The kiai time should not start here, it should start on 02:43:773 (1)

03:25:693 (2,1) - Spinner?

[Normal]
A suggestion for your next maps: put the slider velocity at a lower value for easier difficulties

00:50:926 (2) - Convert this into a single hitcircle

01:05:230 (1) - Make this finish 1 white tick before

01:08:409 (2) - NC

01:21:124 (8) - NC
01:21:522 (1) - Remove NC

01:30:065 (4,1) - It's hard to tell it's 1½ beat of difference, consider to put more spacing

01:33:442 (5) - Put a hitcircle instead

01:43:376 (1) - Make it finish 1 white tick before

01:43:376 (1,1,2,3,4) - This part should be remapped, it's quite difficult for a beginner: try placing notes only on white ticks

02:40:395 (2) - Remove this

02:43:376 (8) - The kiai time should not start here, it should start on 02:43:773 (1)

[156's Hard]
Please make it AR7~AR8

00:27:482 (1,2,3,4) - Notes are missing on the red ticks among these notes, fill them

00:42:581 (3) - Convert into a slider

00:45:561 (4) - Move this ½ beat after and place another slider before


01:29:667 (2,3) - Move these lower

01:33:442 (5) - Remove NC

02:13:972 (1,2) - Add a hitcircle on the red tick between those two

[Insane]
00:20:330 (7) - In my opinion it would be better if you removed this hitcircle and instead you put a reverse arrow on 00:19:535 (6)

00:21:323 (1,2,3,4,5) - CTRL+G

00:21:919 (1,2,3) - Pheraps make it like this



00:23:906 (5) - New Combo
00:24:303 (1) - Remove NC

00:28:675 (1,2,3) - It's hard to get the timing of these, put them in a way that it becomes more readable



00:32:250 (4,5) - Same with these two, you should stack the ending of the first slider on the beginning of the next slider



00:38:012 (4) - Remove finish and add it on 00:38:210 (1)

00:41:191 (6) - Stack this on 00:41:389 (7) or just place it nearer to have the correct spacing

00:41:389 (7) - NC
00:41:985 (1) - Remove NC
00:42:979 (6) - NC

00:45:561 (1,2) - Place 00:45:561 (1) on x:388 y:84; stack 00:45:760 (2) on x:449 y:178 (on slider's end)

01:13:575 (7,8,1) - Place these sliders nearer, by the current spacing you can't tell they're 1/4 apart
01:15:164 (4,5,6) - Same with these, it's hard to tell their rythmical difference if they're so far
01:16:753 (2,3,4) - ^

01:17:747 (1) - NC

01:20:727 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:926 (2) - Add NC

01:26:290 (1,2,3) - Move these slightly lower

01:30:661 (8) - NC
01:30:859 (1) - Remove NC

01:56:886 (1,2) - Less spacing

02:08:210 (6) - Stack this on 02:08:607 (1) ?

02:31:455 (3) - CTRL+G?

02:35:031 (1) - Remove NC

02:37:018 (1) - Stack this on 02:37:217 (2)

02:40:197 (3) - You shouldn't stack this, if you really want to stack it place it on the slider's head

02:43:376 (3) - The kiai time should not start here, it should start on 02:43:773 (6)
02:43:773 (6) - NC
02:44:170 (1) - Remove NC

03:32:846 (3) - Convert this into a slider long ½ beat

Good luck for ranking! o/

• 
  [Easy]

1. You can add more hit sound.
   [Normal]
2. Spacing... you should unity DS all note better.
   [156's Hard]
3. 00:23:906 (4) - this.. seems 1/4 rhythm. so, DS far better. or, (3) reverse better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1059147
4. 00:23:906 - add finish.
5. 00:31:456 (3) - stack next (1) head better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1059155
6. 01:56:687 (2,1) - overlaps is ugly.
7. 02:50:130 (1) - Add finish slider head.
8. 02:54:700 (1,3) - slider head add finish and add finish.
9. 03:14:369 x) - add note.
10. 03:14:766 x) - ^
11. 03:15:164 x) - ^
12. 03:26:091 (3) - 1/2 reverse slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1059172
    
    • 
      [Insane]
    1. 00:20:727 (1) - Add finish.
    2. 00:21:323 (1) - ^
    3. 00:22:118 (3) - add Finish slider head. and Remove slider tail.
    4. 00:22:913 (3) - Add Finish.
    5. 00:23:906 (1) - Add finish Slider Head.
    6. 00:27:482 (2,3) - sound this better. vocal fit :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1059091
    7. 00:33:442 (1) - add finish slider head.
    8. 00:39:005 (1) - lol. really big jump. i think bit shorten better.
    9. 00:42:979 (1) - Add finish Slider head.
    10. 00:48:343 (6,7) - Spacing small. so, little far better.
    11. 00:52:515 (4) - Add finish.
    12. 00:58:078 (4) - Add finish Slider head and reverse and tail.
    13. 01:02:051 (3) - Add finish.
    14. 01:42:184 (2,3) - spacing far better. seems 1/4 rhythm (2,3) orz.
    15. 01:49:733 (4) - Add finish slider head.
    16. 01:52:912 (4) - Add finish.
    17. 01:56:687 (3) ~ 01:58:574 - try this rhythm
    18. 02:40:495 x) - add note. and 02:40:594 x) - add note. and spinner start is 02:40:693. end is 02:41:786.
    19. 02:54:700 (1) - add finish slider head.
    20. 02:56:488 (8) - add finish

P o M u T a wrote:

hi. from your queue (M4M)

• 
  [Easy]

1. You can add more hit sound.
   [Normal]
2. Spacing... you should unity DS all note better.
   [156's Hard]
3. 00:23:906 (4) - this.. seems 1/4 rhythm. so, DS far better. or, (3) reverse better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1059147
4. 00:23:906 - add finish.
5. 00:31:456 (3) - stack next (1) head better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1059155
6. 01:56:687 (2,1) - overlaps is ugly.
7. 02:50:130 (1) - Add finish slider head.
8. 02:54:700 (1,3) - slider head add finish and add finish.
9. 03:14:369 x) - add note.
10. 03:14:766 x) - ^
11. 03:15:164 x) - ^
12. 03:26:091 (3) - 1/2 reverse slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1059172
    
    • 
      [Insane]
    1. 00:20:727 (1) - Add finish.
    2. 00:21:323 (1) - ^
    3. 00:22:118 (3) - add Finish slider head. and Remove slider tail.
    4. 00:22:913 (3) - Add Finish.
    5. 00:23:906 (1) - Add finish Slider Head.
    6. 00:27:482 (2,3) - sound this better. vocal fit :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1059091
    7. 00:33:442 (1) - add finish slider head.
    8. 00:39:005 (1) - lol. really big jump. i think bit shorten better.
    9. 00:42:979 (1) - Add finish Slider head.
    10. 00:48:343 (6,7) - Spacing small. so, little far better.
    11. 00:52:515 (4) - Add finish.
    12. 00:58:078 (4) - Add finish Slider head and reverse and tail.
    13. 01:02:051 (3) - Add finish.
    14. 01:42:184 (2,3) - spacing far better. seems 1/4 rhythm (2,3) orz.
    15. 01:49:733 (4) - Add finish slider head.
    16. 01:52:912 (4) - Add finish.
    17. 01:56:687 (3) ~ 01:58:574 - try this rhythm
    18. 02:40:495 x) - add note. and 02:40:594 x) - add note. and spinner start is 02:40:693. end is 02:41:786.
    19. 02:54:700 (1) - add finish slider head.
    20. 02:56:488 (8) - add finish

good luck!

leon1341414 wrote:

Hi from M4M ~

[General]

1. Try lighter combo color? I feel hard to read during play.
2. set "押入れP" in tag and "Neru" in artist.
3. remove "neru" from tag , you have it already on artist.
4. maybe set "しづ" in tag too

[Insane]

1. 00:51:720(1,2,3) - I feel rhythm like this one is more fix.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:54:402(6) - Suggest to remove this , it's not fix the music
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:01:654 - 01:01:952 - seems you can set a successive note to fix the durm sound.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:04:436 - 01:05:032 - You can set notes more densely to follow lyrics from here :3 I can bring a nice attention effect
5. 01:05:230 - Spin start at here.
6. 01:10:694(3) - Ctrl + G seems more symmetry
7. 01:11:389(5,6,7) - I suggust like this
   
   SPOILER

   
   It can make symmetry with 01:12:184(2,3,4) - , also current one is hard to read the rhythm.
8. 01:59:965 - add a note here , will fix with vocal
9. 02:02:647(3,4,5,6) - maybe like this if you want.
   
   SPOILER

   
   guess you want to follow vocal from 02:02:945 - , but current you miss front one that same with here.
10. 02:13:376 - I will sugget to underline this piano voice like
    
    SPOILER

    or some other like this
11. 02:32:647 - miss a piano voice here. maybe repeat 02:32:250 - 's slider?

[Hard]

1. 01:14:767(1,2,3) - make distance longer like front , it really look like 1/4 rhythm , but if you have your own opinion just ignore this :3
2. 01:16:356(1,2) - ^
3. 02:13:972(1,2,3) - bigger distance. it look like 3 combo hit.

umm.... nice , but some spacing maybe will make player misjudgment , or maybe just my feeling , you can focus on this after.
[Normal]

1. 00:53:310(1,2,3,4) - spacing consistency

[Easy]

1. 00:30:661 - afird it cloud be too hard to new player :<

Love this song !!
GL!!

[ Yuki ] wrote:

안녕하세여 M4M

mod

[Easy]
00:22:118 (2) - 머리,꼬리에 피니쉬 추가
00:33:442 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 추가
00:46:157 (1) - 머리에 휘슬 빼고 피니쉬 추가
00:49:336 (1) - ^^
00:58:873 (1) - 피니쉬 추가
01:07:217 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 추가
01:08:409 (1) - ^
01:14:767 (1) - ^
01:16:356 (2) - ^
01:17:945 (1) - ^
01:21:124 (1) - ^
01:33:839 (4) - 피니쉬 추가
01:46:555 (1) - ^^
01:49:733 (2) - ^
01:52:912 (1) - ^
01:57:680 (3) - 꼬리 피니쉬 추가
02:05:627 (5) - 피니쉬 추가
02:33:442 (5) - 머리,꼬리 피니쉬 추가
02:40:594 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 추가
02:56:488 (1) - ^
03:09:005 (1) - 꼬리 피니쉬 추가
03:10:594 (3) - 머리,꼬리 피니쉬 추가
03:12:382 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 추가
03:21:918 (1) - ^
03:25:097 (1) - 피니쉬 추가
03:25:693 (1) - 03:26:488에서 끝
03:26:587 (1) - 스핀 추가(03:33:243에서 끝)

[Normal]
00:39:800 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 Add<줄인말로 ㅁ 합니다..;
00:46:157 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 ㅁ
00:49:336 (1) - ^
00:58:078 (1) - ^
00:58:873 (2) - ^
01:02:051 (1) - ^
01:08:409 (1) - ^
01:14:767 (1) - ^
01:16:356 (3) - ^
01:17:945 (1) - ^
01:27:084 (1) - 꼬리 피니쉬 ㅁ
01:30:263 (5) - ^
01:46:555 (1) - 피니쉬 ㅁ
01:52:912 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 ㅁ
01:56:091 (1) - ^
01:56:687 (2) - ^
01:57:283 (3) - 꼬리 피니쉬 ㅁ
02:04:833 (2) - ^
02:13:177 (2) - ^
02:15:164 (5) - 머리 피니쉬 ㅁ
02:27:084 (1) - ^^
02:33:442 (2) - ^^
02:34:237 (3) - 피니쉬 ㅁ
02:40:594 (2) - 머리 피니쉬 ㅁ
02:41:985 (3) - ^
02:43:376 (1) - 꼬리 피니쉬 ㅁ
02:51:720 (4) - ^^
02:53:309 (1) - ^
02:54:501 (3) - 리버스 피니쉬 ㅁ
02:55:693 (5) - 꼬리 피니쉬 ㅁ
03:02:448 (10) - 꼬리 피니쉬 ㅁ
03:08:409 (5) - ^
03:11:587 (5) - ^
03:21:918 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 ㅁ
03:22:514 (2) - ^
03:23:309 (3) - ^
03:24:104 (4) - ^
03:25:097 (1) - ^
03:25:693 (2) - ^
03:26:289 (3) - 꼬리 피니쉬 ㅁ

피니쉬 힛사 이렇게 인데 맘에 드시면 하드,인세인도 마져 잡아드릴께여

Main Black wrote:

안녕하세요~ M4M

[ Easy ]

( 03:25:693 (1) - 스피너를 03:25:495 로 이동 후 03:32:846 까지 늘리고
03:32:846 에 inherited point를 추가 후 오디오 볼륨을 5%로 낮춰주세요 )

03:31:057 하고 03:32:250 - 사용하지 않는 inherited point 삭제

[ Normal ]

03:32:647 (1) - 노트 삭제

( 03:26:587 부터 03:32:846 까지 스피너 추가하시고
03:32:846 에 inherited point를 추가 후 오디오 볼륨을 5%로 낮춰주세요
그리고 03:32:250 - inherited point 삭제 )

03:31:057 - 사용하지 않는 inherited point 삭제


[ 156's Hard ]

02:56:488 (1) - additions에서 Soft를 Auto로 변경


[ Insane ]

00:27:681 (3) - 이전 노트랑 꼬리가 겹치네요 00:28:278 (5) 노트를 삭제하고 한칸씩 미루면 되겠네요

00:44:966 (5) - 지금보다 사진대로 바꾸는게 좋을듯 합니다. 사진 참고
++추가
( 00:45:363 쯤 노래파일 자체에서 심벌 소리가 나는데 노트가 비어서 제안하는겁니다. 사진대로 말고도 다른 방법으로 추가해도 상관없을듯..)

IMG

00:51:323 (7) - 슬라꼬리랑 깔끔하게 겹쳐주세요

01:03:641 (1) - 뉴 콤보

01:10:992 (4) - 꼬리를 같은 콤보의 1번째 슬라이드랑 깔끔하게 겹쳐주세요

01:23:409 (6) - 꼬리를 같은 콤보의 3번째 슬라이드랑 깔끔하게 겹쳐주세요

01:32:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 디스탠드 x1,0으로 잘 맞춰주세요

02:09:104 (3) - x 164 y 216 로 이동

02:09:402 (1) - 정 중앙에 배치해주세요 x 256 y 192

02:11:190 (1) - 정 중앙에 배치해주세요 x 256 y 192


++추가
02:11:389 (2,3) - Y축을 192로 해주시면 좋을듯합니다

[ ]

그런데 인세인 00:43:972 (4) 부분을 보다가 알아낸건데
몇몇개 스냅 배치가 살짝 미묘하게 뒤로 밀려서 안맞더군요
전체검사 방법은 어떻게하는지 전 모르기땜에 그냥 알아두셨으면 좋을것같아서 말씀드릴께요

노래는 정말 좋군요

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

[ Yuki ] wrote:

안녕하세여 M4M

mod

[Easy]
00:22:118 (2) - 머리,꼬리에 피니쉬 추가
00:33:442 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 추가
00:46:157 (1) - 머리에 휘슬 빼고 피니쉬 추가
00:49:336 (1) - ^^
00:58:873 (1) - 피니쉬 추가
01:07:217 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 추가
01:08:409 (1) - ^
01:14:767 (1) - ^
01:16:356 (2) - ^
01:17:945 (1) - ^
01:21:124 (1) - ^
01:33:839 (4) - 피니쉬 추가
01:46:555 (1) - ^^
01:49:733 (2) - ^
01:52:912 (1) - ^
01:57:680 (3) - 꼬리 피니쉬 추가
02:05:627 (5) - 피니쉬 추가
02:33:442 (5) - 머리,꼬리 피니쉬 추가
02:40:594 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 추가
02:56:488 (1) - ^
03:09:005 (1) - 꼬리 피니쉬 추가
03:10:594 (3) - 머리,꼬리 피니쉬 추가
03:12:382 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 추가
03:21:918 (1) - ^
03:25:097 (1) - 피니쉬 추가
03:25:693 (1) - 03:26:488에서 끝
03:26:587 (1) - 스핀 추가(03:33:243에서 끝)

[Normal]
00:39:800 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 Add<줄인말로 ㅁ 합니다..;
00:46:157 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 ㅁ
00:49:336 (1) - ^
00:58:078 (1) - ^
00:58:873 (2) - ^
01:02:051 (1) - ^
01:08:409 (1) - ^
01:14:767 (1) - ^
01:16:356 (3) - ^
01:17:945 (1) - ^
01:27:084 (1) - 꼬리 피니쉬 ㅁ
01:30:263 (5) - ^
01:46:555 (1) - 피니쉬 ㅁ
01:52:912 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 ㅁ
01:56:091 (1) - ^
01:56:687 (2) - ^
01:57:283 (3) - 꼬리 피니쉬 ㅁ
02:04:833 (2) - ^
02:13:177 (2) - ^
02:15:164 (5) - 머리 피니쉬 ㅁ
02:27:084 (1) - ^^
02:33:442 (2) - ^^
02:34:237 (3) - 피니쉬 ㅁ
02:40:594 (2) - 머리 피니쉬 ㅁ
02:41:985 (3) - ^
02:43:376 (1) - 꼬리 피니쉬 ㅁ
02:51:720 (4) - ^^
02:53:309 (1) - ^
02:54:501 (3) - 리버스 피니쉬 ㅁ
02:55:693 (5) - 꼬리 피니쉬 ㅁ
03:02:448 (10) - 꼬리 피니쉬 ㅁ
03:08:409 (5) - ^
03:11:587 (5) - ^
03:21:918 (1) - 머리 피니쉬 ㅁ
03:22:514 (2) - ^
03:23:309 (3) - ^
03:24:104 (4) - ^
03:25:097 (1) - ^
03:25:693 (2) - ^
03:26:289 (3) - 꼬리 피니쉬 ㅁ

피니쉬 힛사 이렇게 인데 맘에 드시면 하드,인세인도 마져 잡아드릴께여

더해주시면 저야 고맙죠 헤헤
님맵은 주말에 모딩할게요 시간이 없어서

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi~

General
- The 2nd kiai of 156's Hard seems to be off by 1ms. It'd probably be easiest to copy the kiai time (02:43:773 - 03:14:766 - ) from the other diffs. Right now it's
02:43:772 - 03:13:971 - . Fixed

- The recommended background dimensions are 1024 x 768 or 1366 x 768 pixels. Please resize it to one of these ratios. Right now, you have a 767 x 767 bg, which is unrankable. Ok I will find it


Easy
00:14:369 (1) - Finish on head would be a nice way to open up the song~ Fixed
00:22:118 (2) - You can rotate this a little so that it blankets (1) better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074800 the copy and pasting looks a bit obvious atm xD
00:27:085 (1) - NC Fixed
00:44:171 (3) - Consider adding a reverse and deleting the note after it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074804 It'll fit the general rhythm better imo. The current 00:45:363 (4) - seems a bit out of place when it's emphasizing a weird spot Fixed
01:18:740 (2) - try this rhythm instead: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074813 (finish on reverse) Similar as before, i felt that 01:19:535 (3,4) - were hit on subtle parts of the bgm Fixed
01:46:555 (1,2) - Too close, stay with 0.8x distance snap Fixed
01:57:680 (3) - hmm I'd really avoid using multiple repeats like this in your easiest diff Fixed
02:06:422 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:08:011 (2) - Ctrl + J would look neater with (1) imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074818 Fixed
02:43:773 (1) - Finish on head, emphasis on kiai time Fixed
02:50:925 (2,3) - Try to stay consistent with distance snap in this case. For this, use 0.9x like you did for (1,2). Be sure to check all your other combos in this diff for spacing. For kiais you tend to use 0.9x and the others use 0.8x. Fixed
03:07:415 (2,3) - Whoa a bit far xD distance snap Just my mistake
03:25:694 (2) - Finish on both ends would sound cool. Also, the violin after this note screams for a spinner. i feel the gap between this and the last note is a bit long for a single-note ending Fixed

Normal
00:14:369 (1) - Finish on head, same as Easy Fixed
01:33:045 (4) - Finish on tail, i hear cymbals in the bgm Fixed
01:48:939 (1,2,3,4) - Consider this rhythm: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074831 the random difficulty spike with the stream kinda felt funny Fixed
03:00:065 (6) - NC would introduce the new measure here Fixed

Insane
00:46:754 (1) - Delete NC, follow the NC pattern from 00:35:628 (3) - Fixed


Don't kds this yet!
gonna edit this later, I'm falling asleep loll

HabiHolic wrote:

[156's Hard]

00:34:634 (3) - 디스턴스가 좀 좁지 않나 싶네요
00:36:224 (3) - ^
00:37:813 (3) - ^
00:52:118 (1) - 여기에 뉴콤이 들어갈 필요는 없습니다

지금 피곤해서 여기까지
내일 이어서 할게용~

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

이틀이 지낫다고 합니다

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi~

Insane
00:46:754 (1) - Delete NC, follow the NC pattern from 00:35:628 (3) - Fixed
00:57:283 - i suggest you add something here, this is where the piano is emphasized most in this section Fixed
01:00:264 (5) - Delete whistle from slider body. Don't think there's any use for this here.. Fixed
01:14:767 (3) - Finish on head, keep consistent with 01:16:356 (1) - Fixed
01:21:124 (3) - Finish, i hear cymbals in the bgm Fixed
01:41:588 (3) - ^, again just watch out for potential Finish spots, usually at the beginnings of new measures =v= Fixed
01:45:860 (5) - Make this a 1/4 slider as well, i see no reason to create a small "pause" here that may throw players off rhythmically. You can also make this section neater so it's not so clustered: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081057 (NC'd (5) to indicate the sudden change) Fixed
01:52:019 (1) - recently, there's been some debate over whether these struggle sliders are unrankable or not orz. I highly suggest you redesign this to be safe! Ummm... I don 't want change this
02:43:773 (1) - Finish on head Fixed

Lovely song and lots of potential in this map <3
I found several antijumps like 01:53:509 (5,1) - and 03:07:416 (7,1) - that could be adjusted a bit to fit the song tone but I liked your slider designs. Watch out for hitsound consistency too and make sure the finishes are especially well represented~
Good luck!!

44,32,104966,6,0,P|44:76|64:124,1,95
184,168,105363,2,0,P|183:120|164:77,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,236,105760,2,0,L|92:288,1,47.5
195,347,105959,2,0,L|192:300,1,47.5
280,224,106158,2,0,L|284:276,1,47.5
388,336,106357,2,0,L|384:288,1,47.5
400,252,106555,6,0,P|428:216|480:208,1,95

HabiHolic wrote:

44,32,104966,6,0,P|44:76|64:124,1,95
184,168,105363,2,0,P|183:120|164:77,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,236,105760,2,0,L|92:288,1,47.5
195,347,105959,2,0,L|192:300,1,47.5
280,224,106158,2,0,L|284:276,1,47.5
388,336,106357,2,0,L|384:288,1,47.5
400,252,106555,6,0,P|428:216|480:208,1,95

일단 요것들 메모장에 붙이세요 ㅋㅋㅋ

Kenterz9 wrote:

Random Mod =D

[General]
Please take a normal-sliderside without sounds D=

[Easy]
Why are they "whistle" sliderslides on some of the sliders ?
00:44:171 (3,1) - Try to make a better blanket :

SPOILER

01:00:462 (3,2) - Place the circle on the end of this slider, because it's quite ugly :

SPOILER

01:07:217 (1) - Maybe add a clap for the head of the slider
01:25:892 (3,1) - Try to make something better between these 2 sliders :

SPOILER

01:33:442 (3,4) - Better in triangle :

SPOILER

01:48:144 (2,1) - Distance Snap
02:09:601 (2,4) - There sliders are crossed
02:11:190 (4,5) - Blanket ?
02:40:594 (1,2) - Crossed =/
02:42:184 (2) - Finish and Clap at the end of this slider

[Normal]
00:42:581 (4,1) - Better blanket ? =3
00:44:568 (3) - The white point (to form the slider) needs to be on the slidertick
00:52:913 (1) - x : 244 and y : 232
01:21:522 (1,2) - Blanket
01:48:939 (1,2) - Distance Snap
02:42:581 (4) - Clap + Finish on the head of this slider
02:48:144 (4,5) - Blanket
03:13:972 (1,2,3,4) - Delete the Finish because it's bad with the music background (Maybe you can put the volume down)


[Insane]
00:34:038 (3,4) - Blanket
00:40:396 (3,4) - Place the circle on the head of the slider
00:46:754 (5,1) - Distance Snap ?
01:07:217 (2) - Finish + Clap
01:09:005 (2) - On the head of the slider 3
01:23:707 (7,8,9,1) - Distance Snap ?
02:08:211 (6,1) - ^
02:42:581 (2) - Clap + Finish

Hope it'll be helpful =3

• 02:11:489

• 02:11:688

Datzuke-Oni wrote:

(Insane) Try some parts not blow this so far

Here are the times:

• 02:11:489

Come a little

• 02:11:688

Come a little

About some hits for not impossible from my point of view and in the pace meets the condition

1. I suggest to increase DS to 0.9x~1.0x, and you can avoid some overlapping
2. 01:30:661 (1) - I prefer to end at 01:31:654
3. 01:56:091 (1) - end at
4. 01:56:091 (1,2,3) - how about this rhythm?
   
5. 02:09:601 (2,3,4) - conform DS
6. 02:12:382 (5,6) - avoid overlap

1. 00:20:727 (1,1) - for normal-diff, it's difficult. please move the head of 00:23:906 (1) - near the center
2. 01:19:535 (3) - how about making curve and blanket?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:59:071 (6) - it is better to change for normal slider
   
4. 02:02:250 (1,2) - a little difficult. I suggest to change for 1 slider

1. 00:42:581 (4) - move to x:220 y:58 (stack correctly)
2. 00:51:323 (7) - move to x:448 y:282 (^)
3. 01:05:230 (1) - end at 01:06:224
4. 01:15:164 (4,5,6) - avoid overlap
5. 01:16:754 (2,3,4) - they are parallel correctly?
6. 01:30:860 (1) - remove NC
7. 01:31:853 (5,1) - I prefer to add a slider at 01:32:052~01:32:449- how about this?
   
8. 01:47:548 (4,5,6) - move to x:291 y:27 (stack correctly)
9. 01:59:270 (1) - how about stack on the head of 01:58:873 (3) -
10. 02:25:694 (4,6) - avoid overlap
11. 02:44:767 (4) - it is better straight slider parallel to 02:44:171 (2,3) -
12. 02:47:648 (3,4) - avoid overlap

1. HD+1
2. 00:58:476 (2,1) - increase DS. this overlap is not good
3. 01:49:733 (1,3) - stack correctly
4. 02:31:852 (3,4) - DS 1.2x and avoid overlap
5. 02:55:296 (2) - move to x:191 y:111 (stack correctly)

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy]

1. I suggest to increase DS to 0.9x~1.0x, and you can avoid some overlapping
2. 01:30:661 (1) - I prefer to end at 01:31:654
3. 01:56:091 (1) - end at
4. 01:56:091 (1,2,3) - how about this rhythm?
   
5. 02:09:601 (2,3,4) - conform DS
6. 02:12:382 (5,6) - avoid overlap

[Normal]

1. 00:20:727 (1,1) - for normal-diff, it's difficult. please move the head of 00:23:906 (1) - near the center
2. 01:19:535 (3) - how about making curve and blanket?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:59:071 (6) - it is better to change for normal slider
   
4. 02:02:250 (1,2) - a little difficult. I suggest to change for 1 slider

[Insane]

1. 00:42:581 (4) - move to x:220 y:58 (stack correctly)
2. 00:51:323 (7) - move to x:448 y:282 (^)
3. 01:05:230 (1) - end at 01:06:224
4. 01:15:164 (4,5,6) - avoid overlap
5. 01:16:754 (2,3,4) - they are parallel correctly?
6. 01:30:860 (1) - remove NC
7. 01:31:853 (5,1) - I prefer to add a slider at 01:32:052~01:32:449- how about this?
   
8. 01:47:548 (4,5,6) - move to x:291 y:27 (stack correctly)
9. 01:59:270 (1) - how about stack on the head of 01:58:873 (3) -
10. 02:25:694 (4,6) - avoid overlap
11. 02:44:767 (4) - it is better straight slider parallel to 02:44:171 (2,3) -
12. 02:47:648 (3,4) - avoid overlap

[156's Hard]

1. HD+1
2. 00:58:476 (2,1) - increase DS. this overlap is not good
3. 01:49:733 (1,3) - stack correctly
4. 02:31:852 (3,4) - DS 1.2x and avoid overlap
5. 02:55:296 (2) - move to x:191 y:111 (stack correctly)

~Good Luck~

• 00:20:727 (1,2) - 모양을 똑같이 하는게 보기에 더 좋을 듯 하네요~ㅎ
  00:27:085 (1,2) - 슬라이더 살짝 겹친거 떼어주세요
  00:44:171 (3) - 끝 부분 사각형을 (408,224)로 옮기는게 보기에 더 나을 듯 해요!
  01:11:588 (1) - 모양을 반대로 해도 될 듯 합니다만..;w;
  01:27:482 (1,3) - 겹치게 하는것도 나쁘지 않을 것 같아요~
  01:32:051 (2,3) - 디스턴스가?
  
  [Normal]
  
  • 00:15:164 (2,4) - blanket. 약간 보기 안좋네요 ;w;
    01:02:052 (1,3) - 반대 모양으로 만드셔서 (2)를 블랭킷하는 것도 괜찮을 것 같네요~
    01:04:833 (4) - 01:03:244 (2)랑 겹치는게 더 나을 것 같습니다.
    01:27:879 (2,3) - blanket
    02:39:403 (2) - 약간만 구부리는게 더 보기 좋은 것 같아요!
    03:22:515 (2) - 다른곳에 배치하심이.. 보기에 안좋네요 ;w;
    
    [156's Hard]
    
    • 괜찮은 것 같네요~!
      
      [Insane]
      
      • 00:44:767 (4) - (316,164)로 이동시켜주세요. ((2)와 대칭 위함)
        00:44:966 (5) - (344,264)로 이동시켜주세요. ((1)과 대칭 위함)
        00:45:264 (6) - 위의 내용을 하실거라면 (5)와 겹쳐주세요!
        01:16:754 (2,3,4) - 디스턴스를 다 똑같이해서 배치하는게 보기에 더 나을 것 같아요
        01:27:879 (1,2) - 블랭킷하는건 어떠신가요?
        01:41:389 (1,2,3) - 01:40:197 (1)과 겹쳐도 무방할 듯 합니다!
        02:58:773 (8,9) - 살짝 겹치는거 떼주세요
        03:10:992 (1,1) - 오버랩
        
        아아.. 일단 모딩을 해보긴 해봤는데 딱히 도움은 안 될 것같네요 ㅠㅠㅠ

[ Raphael ] wrote:

Hi~! from my queue!

[Easy]

• 00:20:727 (1,2) - 모양을 똑같이 하는게 보기에 더 좋을 듯 하네요~ㅎ똑같이 해봤는데 뭔가 어색해서 그냥 직선으로 고쳣습니다.
  
  00:27:085 (1,2) - 슬라이더 살짝 겹친거 떼어주세요 디스탄스 지켜야 해서...
  00:44:171 (3) - 끝 부분 사각형을 (408,224)로 옮기는게 보기에 더 나을 듯 해요! 고쳣습니다
  01:11:588 (1) - 모양을 반대로 해도 될 듯 합니다만..;w; 디스탄스 때문에 안고쳣습니다color]
  01:27:482 (1,3) - 겹치게 하는것도 나쁘지 않을 것 같아요~
  01:32:051 (2,3) - 디스턴스가? 고쳣습니다
  
  [Normal]
  
  • 00:15:164 (2,4) - blanket. 약간 보기 안좋네요 ;w; 두번째 슬라이더를 직선으로 고쳣습니다
    01:02:052 (1,3) - 반대 모양으로 만드셔서 (2)를 블랭킷하는 것도 괜찮을 것 같네요~ 고쳣습니다
    01:04:833 (4) - 01:03:244 (2)랑 겹치는게 더 나을 것 같습니다. 고쳣습니다
    01:27:879 (2,3) - blanket 두번째 슬라이더를 직선으로 고쳣습니다
    02:39:403 (2) - 약간만 구부리는게 더 보기 좋은 것 같아요! 고쳣습니다
    03:22:515 (2) - 다른곳에 배치하심이.. 보기에 안좋네요 ;w; 고쳣습니다
    
    [156's Hard]
    
    • 괜찮은 것 같네요~!
      
      [Insane]
      
      • 00:44:767 (4) - (316,164)로 이동시켜주세요. ((2)와 대칭 위함) 고쳣습니다
        00:44:966 (5) - (344,264)로 이동시켜주세요. ((1)과 대칭 위함) 고쳣습니다
        00:45:264 (6) - 위의 내용을 하실거라면 (5)와 겹쳐주세요! 고쳣습니다
        01:16:754 (2,3,4) - 디스턴스를 다 똑같이해서 배치하는게 보기에 더 나을 것 같아요 고쳣습니다
        01:27:879 (1,2) - 블랭킷하는건 어떠신가요? 나중에 모딩받을때 같은 내용 잇으면 고치겟습니다
        01:41:389 (1,2,3) - 01:40:197 (1)과 겹쳐도 무방할 듯 합니다! 고쳣습니다
        02:58:773 (8,9) - 살짝 겹치는거 떼주세요 고쳣습니다
        03:10:992 (1,1) - 오버랩 고쳣습니다
        모딩 감사합니다
        
        아아.. 일단 모딩을 해보긴 해봤는데 딱히 도움은 안 될 것같네요 ㅠㅠㅠ

ZZHBOY wrote:

[general]
[*]sound of normal whistle may be strange with this song, trying to use other sound could make player feels better. Ok I delete hitsound
[*]offset-5 may make player's hiting more accurate.
[*]diff spread is not good, Hard diff is too easy.

[Easy]
00:20:727 (1) - change into 3/2 slider to follow the music
00:42:184 (4,1) - overlap, consider to move away
00:50:727 - next slider starts from here may feels more natual
02:41:985 - ^
02:39:005 (3,1) - overlap is unsightly here
02:46:555 - consider to add a note
03:03:243 (1,2) - try to change in this way

SPOILER

[Normal]
00:21:522 (2,3) - try to change in this way

SPOILER

00:30:860 - next slider start from here could follow the vocal
01:11:191 - consider to add a note
01:27:879 (2,3,4) - unconfortable to play,consider to follow the music
01:31:456 (2,3,4) - ^
from 03:03:244, here is the same problem.Do not just set 1/1slider to fill the time axis, follw the rhythm will make the map better
03:33:045 - consider to stop the spinner at here

I changed some 1/1 sliders

[Hard]
00:22:118 (2,2) - overlap here is ugly
00:24:005 (1) - stop at previous blue line an next spinner start at here will follow the strong beat
00:27:879 (3) - start at previous blue line
00:32:449 (3,4) - this stack is bad,and here hasn't follow the rhythm, consider to
00:37:217 (2) - slider of this style are too much, i think it's ugly
00:52:515 (1,2,3,4) - overlap here is not good, i think
02:36:422 (2,1) - overlap here will make 02:37:416 (1) hard to read
02:52:118 (2,4) - haven't stacked well

[Insane]
01:13:575 (7,8,1) - hard to read, consider to decrease ds
01:18:343 (4,5) - ^
01:15:760 (6,7) - this way could be better

SPOILER

01:33:939 - consider to add a spinner here
01:43:177 (5) - overmap is strange here


that's all i can mod,finally wish you success

No Dap wrote:

M4M'ish...??

[Easy]

박자는 다 맞는거 같습니다.

Easy의 묘미인 blanket 이 너무 없네요. 허나, Flow는 아주 좋아요.

00:20:727 (1,2) - 이런거 라든가.. 다 지적하기엔 너무 많아서 직접 보시고 고치실지 안고치실지 정하세요~ 고친다면 아주 귀찮아질듯

02:39:006 (3,1) - 슬라 이렇게 겹쳐놓으면 뱃들이 지적 할거같네요 이지난이도에서는. 최대한 깔끔하게!

[Normal]

00:39:800 (1,2) - 더 이쁘게 다듬어 질수 있을거같네요 00:39:800 (1) 가

00:44:568 (3) - 00:44:369 여기서 시작하게하는게 어울리는거 같네요

01:22:714 (3,1) - 1을 움직이던지 3을 움직이던지 해서 blanket 하는거 추천

01:48:144 (4,1) - blanket

01:51:720 (5) - end point를 좀 위로 올리는게 01:52:913 (1) 랑 잘 어울릴거 같네요

03:01:257 (4) - 딱 꺾은 슬라이더 보다는 blanket 하는게..

[156's Hard]

Why not HP+1, OD+1

00:44:369 (1) - What happened to this slider?

01:33:740 (7) - this is where vocal ends

02:32:449 (4,1) - better blanket

[Insane]

00:23:707 (5) - 전 안어울리는거 같네요. 삭제

00:24:303 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 디스턴스 엉망

00:26:985 (10,1) - 간격 좁히세요 연타처럼

02:37:615 (3,5,8,9) - 보컬에 맞추시고 배치를 다시 하는건 어떨까요

03:14:767 (1,1) - 추천. 슬밋 크리에이터

솔직히 말하자면 히트사운드 볼륨50%에다가 거의 없어서 전 이게 맞는건지 안맞는건지 리듬감이 안잡히네요 플레이하면서..

01:31:456 (2,3,4,5) - 이런거 라던지 소리가 안들리니 도무지 무슨 박자인지 ..

히트사운드 작업 추천

Rakuen wrote:

Hi~

M4M from your queue
My map: CLIFF EGDE feat. Nakamura Maiko - Endless Tears

[Easy]
00:14:369 (1) - Try to make this point below the head of 00:15:164 (2) -
00:17:548 (1) - ^
00:27:085 (1) - ^
00:30:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too many circles here, I prefer Easy with more sliders
00:33:442 - You should decrease the note density starts here, Easy shouldn't have too many notes
00:34:634 (2,3) - Will make confuse (hard to read)
00:34:634 (2,3) - They are not in either straight line or fold
00:43:376 (2) - Flow broken
00:46:157 - Add Finish here
00:46:952 (2) - Remove Finish
00:48:542 (2) - ^
00:53:310 (2) - Bad flow and lead, the end of (2) is pointing to the reverse arrow of 00:54:899 (1) -
00:56:489 (2) - Ctrl+G (for better flow)
01:02:051 (1) - Blanket this
01:02:846 (2) - This is hidden and bad flow which lead 01:03:641 (3,4) - to another direction
01:07:217 (1,2) - Remove this and make 01:05:230 (1) - extend to 01:07:615 -
01:09:601 (2,3,1) - A bit crowded here
01:12:780 (2) - Put it below tail of 01:11:588 (1) -
01:27:482 (1) - Don't put this behind arrow of 01:25:892 (3) - , players might think the arrow reverses 2 times
01:29:667 (3) - Note is hidden, hard to play on Easy
01:52:912 (1,2) - Make it symmetry on center line
01:57:482 - Add Finish
01:59:270 - ^
02:00:859 (3) - Not good to bounce 2 times in Easy
02:06:422 (1) - Flow broken, make slider point to the right side instead of up
02:28:674 (2) - DS (Use Distance Snap)
02:28:674 (2) - You should use a constant DS (distance snap) and not changing between 0.8x and 0.9x
02:33:442 (5) - Make this shape same with 02:35:826 (2) -
02:42:978 (3) - Try not to let this slider touch 02:40:594 (1) -

[Normal]
00:27:085 (1) - Reverse 2 times is hard to play, try to remove 1 reverse and add circle at 00:29:071 (3) -
00:39:800 (1) - Ctrl+J and rotate 45* anti-clockwise to match flow with 00:40:595 (2) -
00:44:369 (3) - This should be facing up
01:14:767 (1,2,3,4) - Make them symmetry on center line
01:19:535 (3) - Make this same shape with 01:20:330 (4) - and blanket
01:23:906 (1) - Blanket this with 01:22:714 (3) -
01:24:303 (2) - Reduce 1 reverse
01:28:475 (3) - The difficulty raised suddenly cuz of red ticks
01:31:058 (1) - ^
01:57:879 (4,5,6) - Hard patterns
02:02:648 (2) - Don't stick the reverse arrow to 02:03:244 (3) -
03:00:860 (3) - Blanket with 03:01:257 (4) -
03:13:177 (1) - Remove NC (new combo)
03:13:972 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too many circles

[156's Hard]
He changed name from bubble156 to Last Bubble, please make a change in your diff
00:17:548 (1) - Make this blanket with 00:17:350 (3) - (move it to middle sight of circle)
00:17:946 (2,3,4) - Have to arrange this more
00:20:727 (1,2) - Not a good note for me
00:33:442 (1) - There should be some DS (distance snap) here for better flow
00:35:032 (1) - ^
00:36:621 (1) - The flow is misdirected
00:38:210 (1) - DS and remove NC (new combo)
00:47:747 (1) - DS
00:49:336 (1) - ^
00:49:932 (1) - Remove NC
00:50:727 (1) -
00:53:111 (2) - Best not to touch the sliders
00:53:906 (4) - ^
00:54:700 (2) - ^

[Insane]
Approach rate: -1 (Note timing distance is not that close, there's less jumps)
Overall difficulty: -1
01:05:032 (4) - Not readable
01:07:615 (5,6,7,8) - Please make them same distance like 01:07:217 (3,4) -
01:14:568 (1) - This jump is too sudden and too big
01:23:111 (5) - Ctrl+G
01:23:707 (7) - Ctrl+G
01:30:860 (1) - Remove NC
01:41:985 (1,2,3) - The distance is same but 01:41:985 (1,2) - is not same which 01:42:383 (3) - should be placed further
01:43:177 (5) - Not readable
01:45:959 (5,6,7) - Make them close, you didnt have that big jumps before
01:47:747 (5,6) - Flow stopped and 01:47:946 (6) - is hidden
01:48:740 (3) - Not rankable for now
01:52:019 (1) - ^ This too, cuz of sudden slider speed change
01:53:906 (1,2,3,4) - Place these further between each other
01:57:780 (7) - Make this DS same with 01:58:277 (9) -
01:59:270 (1) - Jump too sudden and squeezed with 01:58:873 (3) -
02:17:946 (3) - Flow breaker
02:30:264 (1) - Press Ctrl+H a few times and you'll see the difference, make it balanced
02:40:197 (3,4,5) - Too many notes stacked behind

Hope it helps.

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello~ (M4M)

[Easy]
00:29:469 (4) - move to x:488 y:120 (be symmetrical with (3)
00:31:058 (3) - your slider's end seems strange. like this?

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00:35:032 (3) - move your slider start to x:328 y:236
02:03:641 (2) - x:280 y:124 looks better in my opinion

[Normal]
wow really nice diff

[156's Hard]
again a really nice diff

[Insane]
01:30:860 (1) - remove the NC
02:33:442 (4) - add finish at slider start
02:34:237 (5) - finish
03:21:919 (1) - whistle
03:22:515 (1) - ^
03:23:310 (3) - ^
03:24:502 (6) - remove slider end whistle
03:24:701 (7) - whistle
03:25:098 (1) - whistle at slider start
03:25:694 (1) - ^

wow nice map. gonna favorite this Have a star (╯°□°）╯︵

zorefire wrote:

From modding queue
[Easy]
00:30:661 (2) -Would look nice like this. Fixed.

01:18:740 (2,3) - I dont know about this sounds delayed.
02:42:184 (2) - sounds off.
[Normal]
00:22:515 (3) - looks sloppy. Fixed.

[Hard]

[Insane]

Good luck ranking. Good map hard to find people.

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Last Bubble's Hard]

1. 00:32:449 (3,4) - Move them left a bit, they are too close to 00:33:442 (1) -
2. 00:33:442 (1) - ^If you change this, consider to make 00:33:442 (1) - it stack on 00:32:250 (2) -
3. 00:35:032 (1) - ^Let slider's end stack on 00:34:634 (3) -
4. 00:43:575 (2) - 00:44:370 (1) - Add finish on here?
5. 01:02:051 (1,2,3,4) - For the regular, make a square like 01:03:641 (1,2,3,4) - ?
6. 01:16:356 (1,2) - Move down a bit to make 01:16:157 (4,1,2) - them a triangle.
7. 01:50:329 (2) - Add finish?
8. 02:02:449 (1,2) - Maybe slider's middle should be normal whistle o.o?
9. 02:16:754 (x) - I recommend you add a note and stack on 02:16:356 (4) - because here is a downbeat.
10. 02:32:647 (1) - Try use a 3/2 slider and a note here, follow the vocal here will be more fit imo.
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11. 02:40:693 (1) - End on 02:42:581 because here has a loud clap sound, and add some notes betweem 02:40:693 (1,1) - like 01:07:615 (1,2,3,4) -
12. 03:12:581 (2) - Too much reverses here, it's easily to break combo.

Evil_Twilight wrote:

From my Queue

[General]

1. Check tags on every diffs, make sure they are identical.
2. You should find another clap sound instead, this clap is unapparent imo. I'll change custom sound

[Insane]

• Hmmm...in fact, i can only heard finish and whistle sound in this map.
  Try to use more sound to make the map better.

1. 00:12:383 (1) - Add a spin and clap start from here to 00:13:972, it's fit the music.
2. 00:15:164 (5) - Seems like a random sound here. o.o Fixed.
3. 00:24:303 (2) - ^ Fixed.
4. 00:30:860 (5) - ^ Fixed.
5. 00:38:012 (4,1,2,3,4) - Maka a star here?
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   I'll change it later
6. 00:48:343 (5) - Maybe a ''2'' will looks better. lol
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   Fixed.
7. 00:51:522 (x) - Add a note here, make 00:51:720 (1,2,3) - these have a feel of stopping because the rhythm is changed from 1/2 to 1/1. Fixed.
8. 01:02:052 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I prefer to follow the vocal in this part, use 1/2 and 3/4 slider on here.
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9. 01:13:873 (8) - This overlap is not very good, try other pattern? Fixed.
10. 01:31:853 (6) - Change it to a note and 1/2 slier to link 01:31:853 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - them together. Fixed.
11. 01:48:442 (2) - Move up a bit to make 01:48:144 (1,2,3) - them a triangle. Fixed.
12. 02:20:330 (2) - Move left a bit let 02:19:734 (1) - blacket it. Fixed.
13. 02:23:012 (x) - Add a note to make triple hit? I heard a sound here. Fixed.
14. 02:38:807 (6) - Add NC because you changed slider to note. Fixed.
15. 02:55:595 (3) - Change it to 3/4 slider? here is a long sound. Fixed.
16. 03:14:767 (1) - One more reverse. Fixed.
17. 03:26:290 (2) - Move to x:256 y:288 to make a triangle and make them symmetrical. Fixed.

[Normal]

• AR+1, AR5 is not fits in this SV. Fixed.

1. 00:25:098 (3) - Copy-paste 00:23:906 (1) - ?
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   Fixed.
2. 00:26:290 (x) - 00:26:687 (x) - Add two notes on here to link 00:27:085 (1) - Fixed.
3. 00:28:277 (2) - Move down a bit let 00:27:085 (1) - blanket it. Fixed.
4. 01:05:230 (1) - End on 02:42:581 because here has a loud clap sound. Fixed.
5. 01:27:879 (2,3,4) - There are three downbeats on red line, try to change some rhythm? Fixed.
6. 02:15:760 (6) - Add a note here. Fixed.
7. 03:03:244 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as before, downbeats is changed form white line to red line.

[Easy]

1. 01:05:230 (1) - End on 01:07:217 because here has a loud clap sound. Fixed.
2. 02:13:574 (6) - Move to 02:13:376 (6) - ? There has a downbeat.
3. 02:15:562 (8) - Remove this, I think here no need to add a note. Fixed.
4. 02:42:184 (2) - Same as before, a downbeat on here.

This map's defect only hitsound and some patterns.
As I said, use more sound to make the map better.

Anyway, good luck