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asd123iii
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年11月4日 at 下午 04:30:28

Artist: xi
Title: Sedap Malam
Tags: 100sec records parousia
BPM: 75
Filesize: 7208kb
Play Time: 04:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy - 7Key (1.19 stars, 560 notes)
  2. Normal - 7Key (2.2 stars, 1030 notes)
Download: xi - Sedap Malam
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3rd Beatmap,1st ranked Beatmap.
All 7Key mapset Non Hitsound ver.-> here

Try to understand every note,not just play with reaction.

mapset:
Easy - done by me
Normal - done by me
Sorarei
[General]
- you must have Hard and Insane diff (3 - 4.5 stars and 5 or more stars diff maps)
- Add Hitsound
- i think timing not perfect, ask other for timing



[Easy]
00:08:301 (8301|5) - move to 0
00:16:301 (16301|2,16301|5) - move to end left
00:29:241 (29241|3) - Triple not suggest at easy move end hold note to this time 00:30:052 -
00:36:642 (36642|6,36642|0,37242|2,37242|0,37842|5,37842|0) - Ctrl + H
00:49:442 (49442|6,49442|0,50042|2,50042|0,50642|5,50642|0) - ^
01:07:142 - Add note
01:32:696 - about triple, you can do this http://puu.sh/4FqK7.png or this http://puu.sh/4FqKS.png
01:43:796 (103796|5) - move to 3
03:33:481 - whoah Quadruple, remove them to double
if you want to make triple it shoud be at end of chorus (i don't know how to explain)

[Normal]
00:08:301 (8301|5) - move to 0
00:30:242 (30242|6) - remove
00:31:442 (31442|0) - move to 2
00:36:642 (36642|6) - move to 3
00:37:842 (37842|6) - move to 4
00:49:442 (49442|4,49442|6,49442|0,50042|0,50042|2,50242|4,50642|0,50642|6,50642|5) - Ctrl + H
01:31:196 - Quadruple not suggested http://puu.sh/4FrdG.png
02:42:053 (162053|0,163653|0) - i think end hold and start note is stuck , fix it

*xi should remake title to 'malam romantis' not 'sedap malam'
*Sedap malam i don't know what mean that title for this song*
Nice pattern and song, i dislike the title
ExPew
dat title song........ =w= xi must be indonesian/malaysian lolol

that title 'sedap' refer for food,music ( delicious )

Reikosaka wrote:

*xi should remake title to 'malam romantis' not 'sedap malam'
*Sedap malam i don't know what mean that title for this song*
Nice pattern and song, i dislike the title
i guess it should be Good Night or Romantic Night xD

can i join?
Topic Starter
asd123iii

ExPew wrote:

dat title song........ =w= xi must be indonesian/malaysian lolol

Reikosaka wrote:

*xi should remake title to 'malam romantis' not 'sedap malam'
*Sedap malam i don't know what mean that title for this song*
Nice pattern and song, i dislike the title
i guess it should be Good Night or Romantic Night xD

can i join?
GD? welcome :D
ExPew
i hope you're not in hurry....

first thing.... please double your bpm (dont kudo)
Sorarei

ExPew wrote:

i hope you're not in hurry....

first thing.... please double your bpm (dont kudo)
its already original BPM
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Reikosaka wrote:

[General]
- you must have Hard and Insane diff (3 - 4.5 stars and 5 or more stars diff maps)
Ranking Criteria don't have this rule.
And it's difficult to map Hard or Insane diff for this relax song ;)

- Add Hitsound no plan for that :(
- i think timing not perfect, ask other for timing I'll do that.


[Easy]
00:08:301 (8301|5) - move to 0fixed
00:16:301 (16301|2,16301|5) - move to end leftfixed
00:29:241 (29241|3) - Triple not suggest at easy move end hold note to this time 00:30:052 - not fix.
00:36:642 (36642|6,36642|0,37242|2,37242|0,37842|5,37842|0) - Ctrl + Hfixed
00:49:442 (49442|6,49442|0,50042|2,50042|0,50642|5,50642|0) - ^fixed
01:07:142 - Add noteadd at 5th column
01:32:696 - about triple, you can do this http://puu.sh/4FqK7.png or this http://puu.sh/4FqKS.pngnot fix.
01:43:796 (103796|5) - move to 3 not fix.
03:33:481 - whoah Quadruple, remove them to double
if you want to make triple it shoud be at end of chorus (i don't know how to explain)fixed

[Normal]
00:08:301 (8301|5) - move to 0fixed
00:30:242 (30242|6) - removefixed
00:31:442 (31442|0) - move to 2fixed
00:36:642 (36642|6) - move to 3fixed
00:37:842 (37842|6) - move to 4fixed
00:49:442 (49442|4,49442|6,49442|0,50042|0,50042|2,50242|4,50642|0,50642|6,50642|5) - Ctrl + Hfixed
01:31:196 - Quadruple not suggested http://puu.sh/4FrdG.pngchanged
02:42:053 (162053|0,163653|0) - i think end hold and start note is stuck , fix it changed

*xi should remake title to 'malam romantis' not 'sedap malam'
This song is from album "Parousia" track 11. Source here
*Sedap malam i don't know what mean that title for this song*
"Sedap malam" means tuberose in Indonesian.
Nice pattern and song, i dislike the title I shouldn't change original title
Thanks for your mod :)
Topic Starter
asd123iii

ExPew wrote:

i hope you're not in hurry.... Not hurry at all :D

first thing.... please double your bpm (dont kudo)
double... :o
Topic Starter
asd123iii
I forget say that
I set +1 or -1 BPM that can let white line on time in game
Sorarei
*just my opinion
ExPew
after few mins mapped.......i cant make it more harder......maybe this song too calm.......
Topic Starter
asd123iii

ExPew wrote:

after few mins mapped.......i cant make it more harder......maybe this song too calm.......
so relax~ haha
u can upload your GD if u want.

2 normal maps...I think that's OK.
or u can map 4,5 or 6 even 8 keys :D
Bruce
Mod by request :D

Easy
HP7
00:29:241 (29241|3) - 是不是从00:29:444 - 开始比较好呢
01:05:742 (65742|1) - move to 7
01:59:307 - 加一个Note
02:36:907 - 加一个Note
03:02:053 - 加一个Note

Normal
HP8
00:29:242 (29242|3) - 和Easy一样
01:15:796 (75796|5) - move to 2
01:19:196 (79196|5) - Remove
01:31:796 - 加一个Note
01:45:596 (105596|1,105646|0) - 对换一下?(说不清楚的感觉)
01:59:707 (119707|2,119707|1,119907|4,119907|2) - 不太懂
02:07:307 - 加一个Note
03:17:481 - 再加一个Note吧
04:04:777 (244777|4,244892|6) - 对换一下?

很棒的歌 加油 :D

对了 如果不介意的话能不能也mod一下我的Chameleon 谢谢
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Simple_Star wrote:

Mod by request :D

Easy
HP7 OK,if it's so hard to pass,i'll set it back.
00:29:241 (29241|3) - 是不是从00:29:444 - 开始比较好呢 怪怪的
01:05:742 (65742|1) - move to 7 fixed
01:59:307 - 加一个Note not fix
02:36:907 - 加一个Note fixed
03:02:053 - 加一个Note not fix

Normal
HP8 OK,if it's so hard to pass,i'll set it back.
00:29:242 (29242|3) - 和Easy一样 同easy
01:15:796 (75796|5) - move to 2 fixed
01:19:196 (79196|5) - Remove 不是有鋼琴聲?
01:31:796 - 加一个Note 加在中間
01:45:596 (105596|1,105646|0) - 对换一下?(说不清楚的感觉) 換個方式
01:59:707 (119707|2,119707|1,119907|4,119907|2) - 不太懂 長條=提琴,單顆=鋼琴 夾在一起變得有點難分辨嗎?
02:07:307 - 加一个Note fixed
03:17:481 - 再加一个Note吧 fixed
04:04:777 (244777|4,244892|6) - 对换一下? OK

很棒的歌 加油 :D 感謝<(_ _)>

对了 如果不介意的话能不能也mod一下我的Chameleon 谢谢
哈哈 我再看看 :D
Thanks for your mod :D
Spy
Hello,mod by request !
本來說要考試完才mod
趁現在有時間先補好了
不過大概看了一下,note擺放上沒什麼問題
就是少了I難度


PS:順序:1、2、3、4、5、6、7


[Easy]
01:51:707 (111707|4) - Remove
01:58:007 (118007|4) - Move to 01:57:907
02:46:453 (166453|2) - Remove
02:52:753 (172753|3) - Move to 02:52:653
03:06:938 - 其實我覺得這裡可以拉個長條
03:12:281 (192281|2) - Remove

[Normal]
00:09:301 (9301|2,9501|0,9701|2) - 其實可以試試2、3、4
00:09:901 (9901|4,9901|0) - 可以擺成中指位
00:29:242 (29242|3) - 從00:29:343開始
01:39:996 - Add a note
01:45:646 (105646|6) - 感覺這個音沒必要特別去抓
01:48:107 - 加Note
01:58:007 (118007|2) - 移到01:57:907
02:11:357 (131357|4) - 感覺也沒必要去抓
02:21:707 - Add a note
02:38:560 (158560|2) - 同前面那些一樣的意思
02:49:453 (169453|2) - Move to 02:49:253
02:52:753 (172753|2) - Move to 02:52:653
03:02:253 (182253|1) - 感覺移到03:02:103還好些
03:06:134 (186134|0) - 同前
03:06:134 (186134|0) - Add a note
03:31:931 (211931|0) - 同前
03:37:481 (217481|6,218281|4,219081|2) - Ctrl+H

Nice song :D
加油~
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Spy wrote:

Hello,mod by request !
本來說要考試完才mod
趁現在有時間先補好了
不過大概看了一下,note擺放上沒什麼問題
就是少了I難度Hard都做不來了;w;


PS:順序:1、2、3、4、5、6、7


[Easy]
01:51:707 (111707|4) - Remove fixed
01:58:007 (118007|4) - Move to 01:57:907 fixed
02:46:453 (166453|2) - Remove fixed
02:52:753 (172753|3) - Move to 02:52:653 fixed
03:06:938 - 其實我覺得這裡可以拉個長條 not fix
03:12:281 (192281|2) - Remove fixed

[Normal]
00:09:301 (9301|2,9501|0,9701|2) - 其實可以試試2、3、4 兩個兩個同音 其中一組改中指位
00:09:901 (9901|4,9901|0) - 可以擺成中指位 fixed
00:29:242 (29242|3) - 從00:29:343開始 fixed
01:39:996 - Add a note fixed
01:45:646 (105646|6) - 感覺這個音沒必要特別去抓 not fix
01:48:107 - 加Note 01:47:707 (107707|5,107907|5) - 這兩個是鋼琴不是鼓點
01:58:007 (118007|2) - 移到01:57:907 fixed
02:11:357 (131357|4) - 感覺也沒必要去抓 not fix
02:21:707 - Add a note not fix
02:38:560 (158560|2) - 同前面那些一樣的意思 not fix
02:49:453 (169453|2) - Move to 02:49:253 這是鋼琴不是鼓點[
02:52:753 (172753|2) - Move to 02:52:653 fixed
03:02:253 (182253|1) - 感覺移到03:02:103還好些 not fix
03:06:134 (186134|0) - 同前 not fix
03:06:134 (186134|0) - Add a note ???????? 你貼錯了?
03:31:931 (211931|0) - 同前 not fix
03:37:481 (217481|6,218281|4,219081|2) - Ctrl+H fixed

Nice song :D
加油~
我只有前面一段有鼓點而已 後面只有鋼琴跟提琴
裝飾音什麼的我是不會砍的XDDD


Thanks
ResucecaT
總體:

由於密度太低而做成的難度不科學
由其是NM,那真的是NM?0w0

另外...真多的變速w
你太強了我的話不會選這種www

EZ:
....0w0EZ無力MOD啊~

NM:
01:06:742 (66742|4,66742|1,66942|1,66942|4) -
便不要放在同行吧w

01:30:796 (90796|4,90796|3,90896|2,90996|1,91096|0,91196|4,91196|3) -
真的有5個鋼琴音?我倒是只聽出了4個w

02:35:307 (155307|1,155307|0) -
強力重音,多放一顆?w

02:07:307
故意抓少的w反正怎麼看也不NM了還是抓回來吧w

另外的小東西
01:27:196 (87196|0,87596|3,87596|1,87796|2,87862|4,87929|5,87996|6,87996|3) -
在01:27:396處應該有一NOTE
在01:27:696處應該有一和上面同音的NOTE(?

01:33:996 (93996|1,94196|2,94262|3,94329|4,94396|5,94396|6,94396|1) - ^
奇特的在01:33:796處竟然和之前不同的我完全聽不出來NOTE

01:40:396 (100396|2,100596|3,100662|4,100729|5,100796|6,100796|2) - ^
這次在01:40:196總算是有了....

三處的NOTE好像有那麼一點點的不同
所以注意的說的不一定正確
留意

暫時這樣吧
我被人拉去出門了;w;


Conclusion:
改成HDwwwww
Topic Starter
asd123iii
I'll update tomorrow.

ResucecaT wrote:

總體:

由於密度太低而做成的難度不科學
由其是NM,那真的是NM?0w0 就是NM 哈哈

另外...真多的變速w
你太強了我的話不會選這種www
在聽這首歌的時候覺得這用mania打一定很有感覺
不管怎樣都要弄出來>w<


EZ:
....0w0EZ無力MOD啊~ 咦?

NM:
01:06:742 (66742|4,66742|1,66942|1,66942|4) -
便不要放在同行吧w 同音沒理由放在別行吧

01:30:796 (90796|4,90796|3,90896|2,90996|1,91096|0,91196|4,91196|3) -
真的有5個鋼琴音?我倒是只聽出了4個w 沒錯! 是四個 我聽錯了

02:35:307 (155307|1,155307|0) -
強力重音,多放一顆?w fixed

02:07:307
故意抓少的w反正怎麼看也不NM了還是抓回來吧w not fix

另外的小東西
01:27:196 (87196|0,87596|3,87596|1,87796|2,87862|4,87929|5,87996|6,87996|3) -
在01:27:396處應該有一NOTE
在01:27:696處應該有一和上面同音的NOTE(?
總共加了一個note


01:33:996 (93996|1,94196|2,94262|3,94329|4,94396|5,94396|6,94396|1) - ^
奇特的在01:33:796處竟然和之前不同的我完全聽不出來NOTE
這裡沒有

01:40:396 (100396|2,100596|3,100662|4,100729|5,100796|6,100796|2) - ^
這次在01:40:196總算是有了.... fixed

三處的NOTE好像有那麼一點點的不同
所以注意的說的不一定正確
留意

暫時這樣吧
我被人拉去出門了;w;


Conclusion:
改成HDwwwww
這個也才兩個音軌+一點鼓點而已
改HD.....
Thank you~

@Simple_Star:我把03:17:481 (197481|4) - 砍掉了 感覺前面三個重加最後一個輕比較好
ResucecaT
NM:
01:06:742 (66742|4,66742|1,66942|1,66942|4) -
便不要放在同行吧w 同音沒理由放在別行吧
其實呢,我是聽別的不同音的鋼琴去了...
這樣考慮的話便把一顆放在1st吧w?
ResucecaT

ResucecaT wrote:

NM:
01:06:742 (66742|4,66742|1,66942|1,66942|4) -
便不要放在同行吧w 同音沒理由放在別行吧
其實呢,我是聽別的不同音的鋼琴去了...
這樣考慮的話便把一顆放在1st吧w?
01:57:707 (117707|4,117907|2,118307|0) -
請務必開50%多聽一次,個人以為,像
01:56:107 (116107|4,116107|3,116373|6,116373|5,116640|5,116640|4,116907|4,116907|5,116907|3) -
的節奏好會點

02:07:307
故意抓少的w反正怎麼看也不NM了還是抓回來吧w not fix
其實是02:37:307 ;w;

這個也才兩個音軌+一點鼓點而已
改HD....----->3鍵押,小階段,條帶點, 更甚的還有4鍵,NM?
最少也得NM+...


03:59:281
之後一部分的都不準;w;建議開25%會清楚點
尤其是04:02:642 (242642|2,242642|4) -
ExPew
i guess i give up /.\ cant more longer anymore ( less idea note) sorry

and today i going to hospital bcoz my diseases
Topic Starter
asd123iii

ResucecaT wrote:

ResucecaT wrote:

NM:
01:06:742 (66742|4,66742|1,66942|1,66942|4) -
便不要放在同行吧w 同音沒理由放在別行吧
其實呢,我是聽別的不同音的鋼琴去了...
這樣考慮的話便把一顆放在1st吧w?
依然是同音 強弱不同而已

01:57:707 (117707|4,117907|2,118307|0) -
請務必開50%多聽一次,個人以為,像
01:56:107 (116107|4,116107|3,116373|6,116373|5,116640|5,116640|4,116907|4,116907|5,116907|3) -
的節奏好會點

我本來放這裡 被mod掉了 你又改回來= = 已改

02:07:307
故意抓少的w反正怎麼看也不NM了還是抓回來吧w not fix
其實是02:37:307 ;w;

這個音太弱 不抓

這個也才兩個音軌+一點鼓點而已
改HD....----->3鍵押,小階段,條帶點, 更甚的還有4鍵,NM?
最少也得NM+...


不管改成什麼 還是兩個難度 我沒有要多做了

03:59:281
之後一部分的都不準;w;建議開25%會清楚點
尤其是04:02:642 (242642|2,242642|4) -

調好了 這首的Timing好難 :cry:
Topic Starter
asd123iii

ExPew wrote:

i guess i give up /.\ cant more longer anymore ( less idea note) sorry

and today i going to hospital bcoz my diseases
That's OK
Hope you get better soon :D
ResucecaT

asd123iii wrote:

ResucecaT wrote:

依然是同音 強弱不同而已
0w0

01:57:707 (117707|4,117907|2,118307|0) -
請務必開50%多聽一次,個人以為,像
01:56:107 (116107|4,116107|3,116373|6,116373|5,116640|5,116640|4,116907|4,116907|5,116907|3) -
的節奏好會點

我本來放這裡 被mod掉了 你又改回來= = 已改
0w00w0

02:07:307
故意抓少的w反正怎麼看也不NM了還是抓回來吧w not fix
其實是02:37:307 ;w;

這個音太弱 不抓
0w0

這個也才兩個音軌+一點鼓點而已
改HD....----->3鍵押,小階段,條帶點, 更甚的還有4鍵,NM?
最少也得NM+...


不管改成什麼 還是兩個難度 我沒有要多做了
;w;

03:59:281
之後一部分的都不準;w;建議開25%會清楚點
尤其是04:02:642 (242642|2,242642|4) -

調好了 這首的Timing好難 :cry:
;w;加油

暫時先這樣吧
為什麼不做hd呢..
另外,你用的是耳機嗎?我感覺我和你聽的有點不同;w;
Topic Starter
asd123iii

ResucecaT wrote:

暫時先這樣吧
為什麼不做hd呢..
另外,你用的是耳機嗎?我感覺我和你聽的有點不同;w;
耳機無誤~
HD真的做不來呀 :cry:
你要做的話給你GD :D
ResucecaT

asd123iii wrote:

ResucecaT wrote:

暫時先這樣吧
為什麼不做hd呢..
另外,你用的是耳機嗎?我感覺我和你聽的有點不同;w;
耳機無誤~
HD真的做不來呀 :cry:
你要做的話給你GD :D
;w;看看時間;w;
我怕HD變IN了
captin1
Timing Check Requested~

This one was pretty tricky, but I think I got it. You don't have to do the two at the end haha, they're pretty optional
Remember to go through and check all of your notes, this timing goes with the big beats and drum track, so the melody seems to be pretty offbeat.

SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
3513,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
22713,833.333333333333,4,2,0,30,1,0
26036,895.522388059701,4,2,0,30,1,0
28722,779.220779220779,4,2,0,30,1,0
30273,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
52673,821.917808219178,4,2,0,30,1,0
55960,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
65560,810.810810810811,4,2,0,30,1,0
68803,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
105603,845.070422535211,4,2,0,30,1,0
107285,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
119285,845.070422535211,4,2,0,30,1,0
120130,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
158530,833.333333333333,4,2,0,30,1,0
160184,937.5,4,2,0,30,1,0
162059,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
174059,845.070422535211,4,2,0,30,1,0
174904,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
186104,882.352941176471,4,2,0,30,1,0
187868,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
199868,833.333333333333,4,2,0,30,1,0
200701,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
235901,827.586206896552,4,2,0,30,1,0
241694,999.999999999997,4,2,0,30,1,0
243687,1153.84615384615,4,2,0,30,1,0

Good luck!
Topic Starter
asd123iii

captin1 wrote:

Timing Check Requested~

This one was pretty tricky, but I think I got it. You don't have to do the two at the end haha, they're pretty optional
Remember to go through and check all of your notes, this timing goes with the big beats and drum track, so the melody seems to be pretty offbeat.

SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
3513,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
22713,833.333333333333,4,2,0,30,1,0
26036,895.522388059701,4,2,0,30,1,0
28722,779.220779220779,4,2,0,30,1,0
30273,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
52673,821.917808219178,4,2,0,30,1,0
55960,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
65560,810.810810810811,4,2,0,30,1,0
68803,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
105603,845.070422535211,4,2,0,30,1,0
107285,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
119285,845.070422535211,4,2,0,30,1,0
120130,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
158530,833.333333333333,4,2,0,30,1,0
160184,937.5,4,2,0,30,1,0
162059,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
174059,845.070422535211,4,2,0,30,1,0
174904,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
186104,882.352941176471,4,2,0,30,1,0
187868,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
199868,833.333333333333,4,2,0,30,1,0
200701,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
235901,827.586206896552,4,2,0,30,1,0
241694,999.999999999997,4,2,0,30,1,0
243687,1153.84615384615,4,2,0,30,1,0

Good luck!
Perfect Timing!!!
Thank you :3
Spy
貼錯的部分應該是
03:29:501,可以再加一個Note

另外我個人傾向01:46:659當Preview point的

這首我也算蠻喜歡的,很好聽的一首歌
加油 !
no kud :D
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Spy wrote:

貼錯的部分應該是
03:29:501,可以再加一個Note

另外我個人傾向01:46:659當Preview point的

這首我也算蠻喜歡的,很好聽的一首歌
加油 !
no kud :D
感謝 :D

All Fixed~
Davteezy
Just a quick glance at this map. You might want to change the hitsound to something smoother and minimal. The drum hitsound it too brash for this piano-dominate piece. Also try to convert piano notes to LN so the chart doesn't go flat and dull. Feels like it could be great LN wall practice. Good luck
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Davteezy wrote:

Just a quick glance at this map.
You might want to change the hitsound to something smoother and minimal.
The drum hitsound it too brash for this piano-dominate piece.
Also try to convert piano notes to LN so the chart doesn't go flat and dull.
Feels like it could be great LN wall practice.
Good luck

I know no hitsound is the best for this map,and I try to reduce that.
But the rule is 30% and must be heard... :o

LN wall? This song is relax. Not so good for disgusting LN wall :(
c36098651
[Normal]

01:30:803 假如第4鍵道是對鼓聲的話 加1個NOTE在這裡
01:33:403 ^
01:34:403之後類似的鼓聲你好像就忽視了........

有些白線像02:21:730 02:42:859 02:44:459等有鼓音 但你可能因為是normal而沒放

03:55:301 這裡也有個小小的音
zwc7086
For Random Mod

Easy
00:24:327 (24327|5) - 可以移到4th
01:06:978 (66978|5) - 移到左手吧
02:32:130 - 加一个Note

Normal
01:41:603 (101603|4) - 我觉得这里两个Notes比较好
01:41:803 (101803|6,101803|2) - 这里去掉1个
01:54:485 - 加一个Note

很安静的歌 祝武运昌隆早日rank :P
Topic Starter
asd123iii

zwc7086 wrote:

For Random Mod

Easy
00:24:327 (24327|5) - 可以移到4th Fixed
01:06:978 (66978|5) - 移到左手吧 not fix
02:32:130 - 加一个NoteFixed

Normal
01:41:603 (101603|4) - 我觉得这里两个Notes比较好Fixed
01:41:803 (101803|6,101803|2) - 这里去掉1个Fixed
01:54:485 - 加一个Notenot fix

很安静的歌 祝武运昌隆早日rank :P
感謝:3
richardfeder
asd桑wwww
SPOILER
Normal
0123456
是不是考虑做一个HD?把所有的音都map上其实可以填很满w
其实我个人感觉你这个NM已经有一点HD的味道了w
这里的面条对于NM来说很有挑战性
00:05:113 (5113|6) - 挪到4
00:05:163 (5163|6) - add
其实是两个音

00:08:313 (8313|0) - ^

00:09:913 (9913|1) - 挪到0

00:11:513 (11513|6) - 同前

00:13:113 (13113|4) - ^

00:14:713 (14713|2) - ^
后面同样的就不写了w

00:22:713 (22713|1,22713|5) - ,00:22:313 (22313|4) - 全部左移一格

如果要做2个layer的话:
00:30:231 (30231|6) - add
00:31:442 (31442|5) - 挪到0
1个layer(只有piano):
00:30:842 (30842|0,31442|5) - 去掉
说实话这里其实是单音加和弦,只有钢琴的话是3-1-1-3,加了鼓点就变成4-2-1-4...这个看取舍吧,我觉得NM和弦当双音也没问题就是了wwww

00:34:242 (34242|6,35042|4,35842|2) - 同前

00:57:360 (57360|1,57360|4) - 挪到4和6
00:57:560 (57560|2,57560|5) - 1和3

01:00:560 (60560|1,60560|4,60760|5,60760|2) - ^
后面的就不写了w

01:06:776 (66776|1) - 挪到0

01:14:003 (74003|6,74403|1,74403|5) - 跟前面一样是两个音

01:21:403 (81403|1) - add

01:20:603 (80603|5) - add这其实是双音

01:23:003 (83003|4) - 挪到2

01:31:203 (91203|0) - add

01:32:003 (92003|1) - 挪到2

01:32:203 (92203|2) - 挪到1

01:39:203 (99203|4) - 去掉,这里只map琴的话就不要多余的了
01:39:203 (99203|3) - 挪到2
01:39:003 (99003|3) - add,漏了XD

01:39:603 (99603|2) - add
01:39:803 (99803|3) - add
01:40:203 (100203|4) - 挪到6

01:44:203 (104203|0,104403|1) - 无音

01:55:285 (115285|5) - 是双音,加一个note

02:03:730 (123730|3) - ^建议02:03:330 (123330|5) - 挪到6,然后02:03:730 (123730|5) - 加

02:05:230 (125230|6,125463|5,125996|5,126263|2) - 都是双音...建议重新排一下 :o (这里和之前的面条排的有点难了)

02:07:330 (127330|3) - 只map钢琴的话就去掉吧

02:10:130 (130130|3,130330|4) - ^只留这两个,其他的都无音

02:34:730 (154730|0) - add

03:37:501 (217501|0,218301|2,219101|4) - 同前

还是面条偏难,比如03:04:304 (184304|4,184304|5,184504|3,184504|2,184504|5,184504|6) - 右手以及03:07:206 (187206|5,187206|6,187427|5,187427|6,187648|4,187648|5) - 是不是重新考虑一下面条的用法?XD
我找不到原谱面所以不一定准w
只是参考意见w
加油! ;)
Topic Starter
asd123iii

richardfeder wrote:

asd桑wwww
SPOILER
Normal
0123456
是不是考虑做一个HD?把所有的音都map上其实可以填很满w
其实我个人感觉你这个NM已经有一点HD的味道了w
这里的面条对于NM来说很有挑战性
00:05:113 (5113|6) - 挪到4Fixed
00:05:163 (5163|6) - addNot Fix 這是裝飾音 我不下
其实是两个音

00:08:313 (8313|0) - ^Not Fix

00:09:913 (9913|1) - 挪到0 Not Fix 與 00:09:913 (9913|1) - 同音

00:11:513 (11513|6) - 同前Not Fix

00:13:113 (13113|4) - ^Not Fix

00:14:713 (14713|2) - ^Not Fix
后面同样的就不写了w

00:22:713 (22713|1,22713|5) - ,00:22:313 (22313|4) - 全部左移一格

如果要做2个layer的话:
00:30:231 (30231|6) - add
00:31:442 (31442|5) - 挪到0
1个layer(只有piano):
00:30:842 (30842|0,31442|5) - 去掉
说实话这里其实是单音加和弦,只有钢琴的话是3-1-1-3,加了鼓点就变成4-2-1-4...这个看取舍吧,我觉得NM和弦当双音也没问题就是了wwww改成3-2-1-3

00:34:242 (34242|6,35042|4,35842|2) - 同前

00:57:360 (57360|1,57360|4) - 挪到4和6
00:57:560 (57560|2,57560|5) - 1和3

01:00:560 (60560|1,60560|4,60760|5,60760|2) - ^
后面的就不写了w Fixed

01:06:776 (66776|1) - 挪到0Not Fix

01:14:003 (74003|6,74403|1,74403|5) - 跟前面一样是两个音Not Fix

01:21:403 (81403|1) - addFixed

01:20:603 (80603|5) - add这其实是双音Not Fix

01:23:003 (83003|4) - 挪到2Not Fix

01:31:203 (91203|0) - add前面移動了下

01:32:003 (92003|1) - 挪到2ok

01:32:203 (92203|2) - 挪到1ok

01:39:203 (99203|4) - 去掉,这里只map琴的话就不要多余的了Fixed
01:39:203 (99203|3) - 挪到2Fixed讓鼓點在中間
01:39:003 (99003|3) - add,漏了XDFixed

01:39:603 (99603|2) - addFixed
01:39:803 (99803|3) - addNot Fix
01:40:203 (100203|4) - 挪到6Not Fix

01:44:203 (104203|0,104403|1) - 无音打起來很順手耶;w;

01:55:285 (115285|5) - 是双音,加一个noteFixed

02:03:730 (123730|3) - ^建议02:03:330 (123330|5) - 挪到6,然后02:03:730 (123730|5) - 加前面Fixed

02:05:230 (125230|6,125463|5,125996|5,126263|2) - 都是双音...建议重新排一下 :o (这里和之前的面条排的有点难了)
這裡我想弄出強~弱~強~弱的音


02:07:330 (127330|3) - 只map钢琴的话就去掉吧ok

02:10:130 (130130|3,130330|4) - ^只留这两个,其他的都无音 這裡好順手不想改;w;

02:34:730 (154730|0) - addNot Fix

03:37:501 (217501|0,218301|2,219101|4) - 同前Not Fix

还是面条偏难,比如03:04:304 (184304|4,184304|5,184504|3,184504|2,184504|5,184504|6) - 右手以及03:07:206 (187206|5,187206|6,187427|5,187427|6,187648|4,187648|5) - 是不是重新考虑一下面条的用法?XD
Not Fix 並不會很難 一定的練習之後就能打過(包括我)
我找不到原谱面所以不一定准w
只是参考意见w
加油! ;)
感謝Mod :)
Topic Starter
asd123iii

c36098651 wrote:

[Normal]

01:30:803 假如第4鍵道是對鼓聲的話 加1個NOTE在這裡 changed
01:33:403 ^ 這裡沒抓鼓點
01:34:403之後類似的鼓聲你好像就忽視了........ 嗯 只有一小段有;w;

有些白線像02:21:730 02:42:859 02:44:459等有鼓音 但你可能因為是normal而沒放

03:55:301 這裡也有個小小的音
Thanks~
17VA
long beatmap

anyway, start mod

puush link : suggestion

[Easy]

use double notes at kiai part (just strong beats)

01:24:003 (84003|3,84203|2,84403|1,84603|2) - move +1 columns

01:51:285 (111285|1) - here http://puu.sh/4TC1Z.png

03:12:668 (192668|4) - http://puu.sh/4TC7U.png

[Normal]

01:56:885 (116885|5) - move 2

01:58:485 (118485|5) - move 3

01:59:496 (119496|2) - http://puu.sh/4TCeT.jpg

02:10:530 - add

02:54:270 (174270|5) - http://puu.sh/4TCka.png
Topic Starter
asd123iii

17VA wrote:

long beatmap

anyway, start mod

puush link : suggestion

[Easy]

use double notes at kiai part (just strong beats) add some

01:24:003 (84003|3,84203|2,84403|1,84603|2) - move +1 columns fixed

01:51:285 (111285|1) - here http://puu.sh/4TC1Z.png fixed

03:12:668 (192668|4) - http://puu.sh/4TC7U.png fixed

[Normal]

01:56:885 (116885|5) - move 2 fixed

01:58:485 (118485|5) - move 3 fixed

01:59:496 (119496|2) - http://puu.sh/4TCeT.jpg not fix

02:10:530 - add not fix

02:54:270 (174270|5) - http://puu.sh/4TCka.pngnot fix
Thank you :)
Topic Starter
asd123iii
I need mod for my pattern. :)


For modder:

You can suggest me any about my pattern.

If you think some place affect you playing this map.

I will see that again even I say "not fix" before.

Thanks. :D

Edit:@17VA your mod i will hold and see. If one more mod about that part,I'll change that.
PROGUY
Hi there! I'll mod this map as requested. :)

[Easy]
00:57:360 (57360|0) Move to 5th column (PR match).
00:57:560 (57560|1) Move to 1st column.
01:00:560 (60560|0) Move to 5th column.
01:03:760 (63760|0) ^
01:06:978 (66978|5) Move to 7th column.
01:07:181 (67181|4) Move to 4th column.
01:07:992 Add note in 2nd or 3rd column.
01:39:203 (99203|4) Move to 2nd or 4th column.
01:40:003 (100003|4,100403|0) Delete these notes.
02:02:130 (122130|1) Move to 4th column.
02:04:930 (124930|4,125196|0,125730|0) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1065026
02:31:330 (151330|3) Long note end should be at 02:32:130.
03:22:901 (202901|0) Move to any column that the right hand uses (4th to 7th).
03:43:501 (223501|2,223901|6,224301|1,224701|5,225101|0,225501|4,225901|1) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1065031

[Normal]
00:22:313 (22313|4) Move to 2nd column.
01:06:978 (66978|4) Move to 6th or 7th column.
01:46:659 (106659|6,106870|6) Move to 4th column.
01:47:081 (107081|5) Move to 7th column.
01:59:496 (119496|2,119707|2,119918|2) This part looks like a Hard. Delete these notes.
02:54:270 (174270|6,174481|6,174692|1) ^
04:04:768 (244768|6,244840|5,244912|4) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1065038

Hope this helps! Good luck! A beautiful song indeed! :)

Edit: Also, here's a star!
Nazalion
lol sedap malam ...

it seems indonesian languange ..

btw good luck ;)
Topic Starter
asd123iii

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there! I'll mod this map as requested. :)

[Easy]
00:57:360 (57360|0) Move to 5th column (PR match).
00:57:560 (57560|1) Move to 1st column.
01:00:560 (60560|0) Move to 5th column.
01:03:760 (63760|0) ^
01:06:978 (66978|5) Move to 7th column.
01:07:181 (67181|4) Move to 4th column.
01:07:992 Add note in 2nd or 3rd column. add at 2nd column
01:39:203 (99203|4) Move to 2nd or 4th column. move to 2nd column
01:40:003 (100003|4,100403|0) Delete these notes.
02:02:130 (122130|1) Move to 4th column.
02:04:930 (124930|4,125196|0,125730|0) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1065026
02:31:330 (151330|3) Long note end should be at 02:32:130.
03:22:901 (202901|0) Move to any column that the right hand uses (4th to 7th).move to 7th column
03:43:501 (223501|2,223901|6,224301|1,224701|5,225101|0,225501|4,225901|1) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1065031

[Normal]
00:22:313 (22313|4) Move to 2nd column.
01:06:978 (66978|4) Move to 6th or 7th column. move to 7th column
01:46:659 (106659|6,106870|6) Move to 4th column.
01:47:081 (107081|5) Move to 7th column.
01:59:496 (119496|2,119707|2,119918|2) This part looks like a Hard. Delete these notes.remake this part
02:54:270 (174270|6,174481|6,174692|1) ^remake this part
04:04:768 (244768|6,244840|5,244912|4) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1065038

Hope this helps! Good luck! A beautiful song indeed! :)

Edit: Also, here's a star!
All Fixed

Thanks you PROGUY. It's a great help for me. :D
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Nazalion wrote:

lol sedap malam ...

it seems indonesian languange ..

btw good luck ;)
Yeah,it's Indonesian.
xxbidiao
总体上来说,因为谱面很简单,所以也没太多问题。。

Normal:

条子部分 感觉你谱的有些不一致。条子要么整段都拖,要么就整段不拖,太不一致会让人感觉很奇怪的~

00:08:313 (8313|0) - 这里可以考虑做成一个滑音? 就是做成个微型楼梯有2个Note这样。
00:11:513 (11513|6) - ^之后还有很多处,反正已经三秒一组音符了,这样的pattern会突出音乐的滑音部分,也许不错?
00:31:442 (31442|2) - 移动到1? 这样能体现出鼓点。
00:43:042 (43042|4) - 6
01:40:803 (100803|2) - 这之后倒突然没条子了,很奇怪。。。在其他的音符上也没发现明显的排布改变,让人感觉只是简单的少了个条。。
01:48:885 (108885|1) - ^
02:21:930 (141930|0,142530|3,143730|4) - 建议这三个条干脆去掉好了(或者换成点),做个彻底的休息段子。(这段音乐也正好是高潮后的休息段)
02:30:130 (150130|0,152130|6,153730|5,155330|4,156930|3) - ^
Topic Starter
asd123iii

xxbidiao wrote:

总体上来说,因为谱面很简单,所以也没太多问题。。

Normal:

条子部分 感觉你谱的有些不一致。条子要么整段都拖,要么就整段不拖,太不一致会让人感觉很奇怪的~

00:08:313 (8313|0) - 这里可以考虑做成一个滑音? 就是做成个微型楼梯有2个Note这样。
00:11:513 (11513|6) - ^之后还有很多处,反正已经三秒一组音符了,这样的pattern会突出音乐的滑音部分,也许不错?
關於這段 因為30%的hitsound實在是有點大聲 放兩個會把音蓋掉 :o
00:31:442 (31442|2) - 移动到1? 这样能体现出鼓点。
00:43:042 (43042|4) - 6
01:40:803 (100803|2) - 这之后倒突然没条子了,很奇怪。。。在其他的音符上也没发现明显的排布改变,让人感觉只是简单的少了个条。。
01:48:885 (108885|1) - ^
02:21:930 (141930|0,142530|3,143730|4) - 建议这三个条干脆去掉好了(或者换成点),做个彻底的休息段子。(这段音乐也正好是高潮后的休息段)
02:30:130 (150130|0,152130|6,153730|5,155330|4,156930|3) - ^
除了上述,其他全部Fixed

感謝上將 :D

Edit:@BAT如果前後段可以改成5%我就用裝飾音(10/29)
Spy

asd123iii wrote:

xxbidiao wrote:

总体上来说,因为谱面很简单,所以也没太多问题。。

Normal:

条子部分 感觉你谱的有些不一致。条子要么整段都拖,要么就整段不拖,太不一致会让人感觉很奇怪的~

00:08:313 (8313|0) - 这里可以考虑做成一个滑音? 就是做成个微型楼梯有2个Note这样。
00:11:513 (11513|6) - ^之后还有很多处,反正已经三秒一组音符了,这样的pattern会突出音乐的滑音部分,也许不错?
關於這段 因為30%的hitsound實在是有點大聲 放兩個會把音蓋掉 :o
00:31:442 (31442|2) - 移动到1? 这样能体现出鼓点。
00:43:042 (43042|4) - 6
01:40:803 (100803|2) - 这之后倒突然没条子了,很奇怪。。。在其他的音符上也没发现明显的排布改变,让人感觉只是简单的少了个条。。
01:48:885 (108885|1) - ^
02:21:930 (141930|0,142530|3,143730|4) - 建议这三个条干脆去掉好了(或者换成点),做个彻底的休息段子。(这段音乐也正好是高潮后的休息段)
02:30:130 (150130|0,152130|6,153730|5,155330|4,156930|3) - ^
除了上述,其他全部Fixed

感謝上將 :D

Edit:@BAT如果前後段可以改成5%我就用裝飾音
多插幾條線來改某些段落的Volume應該是沒問題的吧 ?
雖然不太懂沒改是不是因為只能改成5%呈現的原因 :(
不過很喜歡這首,預祝早日Rank~
Topic Starter
asd123iii
加了綠線也加了裝飾音 :)

10/30 Edit:All Fixed and Uploaded.

11/01 Fix:remove all hitsound and uploaded.
ljqandylee
谱面没什么问题~

HP建议调低,本来就是一首很放松的曲子而且只有EZ和NM,HP不用设得那么高的XD

然后Easy的Volume一样调到30%,100%太吵了……

另外还有个技巧是edit里Ctrl+A全选所有note,然后点菜单栏Compose里最下面一个Auto volume balance,这样就不会因为某一个时间点有2个以上note而导致按键音变响了,当然这个还是看mapper取舍了~

No kudosu XD
Topic Starter
asd123iii

ljqandylee wrote:

谱面没什么问题~

HP建议调低,本来就是一首很放松的曲子而且只有EZ和NM,HP不用设得那么高的XD

然后Easy的Volume一样调到30%,100%太吵了……

另外还有个技巧是edit里Ctrl+A全选所有note,然后点菜单栏Compose里最下面一个Auto volume balance,这样就不会因为某一个时间点有2个以上note而导致按键音变响了,当然这个还是看mapper取舍了~

No kudosu XD
這是我的失誤 本來就弄好了
ALL Fixed


Easy HP->6
Normal HP->7
ljqandylee
Nice. Bubbled 8-)
Topic Starter
asd123iii

ljqandylee wrote:

Nice. Bubbled 8-)
Thanks :3
Spy
哇,泡了,留名
17VA
yeyyyy
ExPew
yesyes
kanpakyin
Some suggestion before ranking.

column:
0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[Normal]
  1. 00:37:442 (37442|4) - Remove this note as there is no instrument there.
  2. 00:43:842 (43842|4) - ^
  3. 00:50:242 (50242|2) - ^
  4. 01:41:203 - Add a note here to follow the base? (column 1)
  5. 01:42:803 - ^ (column 1)
  6. 01:45:673 (105673|6) - This note is wrongly snapped. This should be snapped to 01:45:655 - (1/16 yellow tick)
  7. 01:47:685 (107685|5) - Remove this note and then add a note at 01:48:085 -
  8. 01:54:485 - ^
  9. 01:56:085 (116085|4,116085|3,116351|6,116351|5,116618|5,116618|4,116885|1,116885|4) - These 1/3 notes sound quite weird. I would rather place them in 1/4 if I were you.
  10. 01:59:707 (119707|0,119918|1) - Remove 01:59:918 (119918|1) - and then move 01:59:707 (119707|0) - to 01:59:813 - (1/8 snap)
  11. 02:36:130 - Add a note at column 6 or 4?
  12. 03:03:704 (183704|3,183704|2,184004|3,184004|4,184304|5,184304|4) - These 1/3 notes sound quite weird. I would rather place them in 1/4 if I were you.
Topic Starter
asd123iii

kanpakyin wrote:

Some suggestion before ranking.

column:
0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[Normal]
  1. 00:37:442 (37442|4) - Remove this note as there is no instrument there.
  2. 00:43:842 (43842|4) - ^
  3. 00:50:242 (50242|2) - ^
    Not fix this part
    1.There is a piano sound.
    2.This part need to separate with easy diff.
  4. 01:41:203 - Add a note here to follow the base? (column 1) Not Fix,I want to avoid so many drum note here.
  5. 01:42:803 - ^ (column 1)^
  6. 01:45:673 (105673|6) - This note is wrongly snapped. This should be snapped to 01:45:655 - (1/16 yellow tick)
    Fixed
  7. 01:47:685 (107685|5) - Remove this note and then add a note at 01:48:085 - All piano here. Not Fix
  8. 01:54:485 - ^^
  9. 01:56:085 (116085|4,116085|3,116351|6,116351|5,116618|5,116618|4,116885|1,116885|4) - These 1/3 notes sound quite weird. I would rather place them in 1/4 if I were you.
    Move to right place,follow the piano.(Include Easy diff)
  10. 01:59:707 (119707|0,119918|1) - Remove 01:59:918 (119918|1) - and then move 01:59:707 (119707|0) - to 01:59:813 - (1/8 snap)Not Fix,follow the piano.
  11. 02:36:130 - Add a note at column 6 or 4?Chorus Piano before and after this note,here is a single piano voice.
  12. 03:03:704 (183704|3,183704|2,184004|3,184004|4,184304|5,184304|4) - These 1/3 notes sound quite weird. I would rather place them in 1/4 if I were you.Not Fix,follow the piano.
雖然理念有點不一樣,不過還是感謝KPY桑幫我看圖 :)

Go Rank~~
kanpakyin
Ranked!

(ノ・ω・)ノ
Stefan
Couldn't believe that xi makes good music. Well I was wrong. :P

Nice Map, grats!
ExPew
best xi song....as a good night song ( sleep ) ZZzz..

congrats asd
Faust
Source ought to be fixed.
17VA
Ccoonnggrraattzz rraannkkeedd!!
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Faust wrote:

Source ought to be fixed.
I just reference with this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/87876

Use same source will easier to find this map.
Faust
If a predecessor makes a mistake, you shouldn't make a repeat of it.

That said, that map you just referenced should have had that fixed a long time ago.

I don't want to sound like I'm shoving this down your throat, but this issue isnt a big deal though it should be rectified.
Just ask any BAT for help, and it will be a seamless process.
Sorarei
congratulation :)
Rukaru
congratulation. :D

sedap malam. lol
Spy
什麼,詩圖居然Rank了
恭喜!!
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Faust wrote:

If a predecessor makes a mistake, you shouldn't make a repeat of it.

That said, that map you just referenced should have had that fixed a long time ago.

I don't want to sound like I'm shoving this down your throat, but this issue isnt a big deal though it should be rectified.
Just ask any BAT for help, and it will be a seamless process.
Ok.
but what source/tag should i change?
or just remove the source?
Faust

asd123iii wrote:

Faust wrote:

If a predecessor makes a mistake, you shouldn't make a repeat of it.

That said, that map you just referenced should have had that fixed a long time ago.

I don't want to sound like I'm shoving this down your throat, but this issue isnt a big deal though it should be rectified.
Just ask any BAT for help, and it will be a seamless process.
Ok.
but what source/tag should i change?
or just remove the source?
Just move the album name under tags and that should be fine.
And maybe add in a few more words to make it easier for general searching like 'piano' perhaps.
Gon

ExPew wrote:

dat title song........ =w= xi must be indonesian/malaysian lolol

that title 'sedap' refer for food,music ( delicious )

Reikosaka wrote:

*xi should remake title to 'malam romantis' not 'sedap malam'
*Sedap malam i don't know what mean that title for this song*
Nice pattern and song, i dislike the title
i guess it should be Good Night or Romantic Night xD

can i join?
sedap malam is some sort of flower apparently
http://id.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sedap_malam

also grats on rank!
Sorarei
And thats related to this song , finally i know
PyaKura
Gratz! More and more ranked mania maps huh.
Handy420
nice song :DDDDDD such a peaceful song
Handy420
nice song :DDDDDD such a peaceful song
Kyouren
Gratzz!! asd123iii!! For first ranked map!!^^
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