zwc7086 wrote:

For Random Mod

Easy
00:24:327 (24327|5) - 可以移到4th Fixed
01:06:978 (66978|5) - 移到左手吧 not fix
02:32:130 - 加一个NoteFixed

Normal
01:41:603 (101603|4) - 我觉得这里两个Notes比较好Fixed
01:41:803 (101803|6,101803|2) - 这里去掉1个Fixed
01:54:485 - 加一个Notenot fix

很安静的歌 祝武运昌隆早日rank

richardfeder wrote:

asd桑wwww

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是不是考虑做一个HD?把所有的音都map上其实可以填很满w
其实我个人感觉你这个NM已经有一点HD的味道了w
这里的面条对于NM来说很有挑战性
00:05:113 (5113|6) - 挪到4Fixed
00:05:163 (5163|6) - addNot Fix 這是裝飾音 我不下
其实是两个音

00:08:313 (8313|0) - ^Not Fix

00:09:913 (9913|1) - 挪到0 Not Fix 與 00:09:913 (9913|1) - 同音

00:11:513 (11513|6) - 同前Not Fix

00:13:113 (13113|4) - ^Not Fix

00:14:713 (14713|2) - ^Not Fix
后面同样的就不写了w

00:22:713 (22713|1,22713|5) - ，00:22:313 (22313|4) - 全部左移一格

如果要做2个layer的话：
00:30:231 (30231|6) - add
00:31:442 (31442|5) - 挪到0
1个layer（只有piano）：
00:30:842 (30842|0,31442|5) - 去掉
说实话这里其实是单音加和弦，只有钢琴的话是3-1-1-3，加了鼓点就变成4-2-1-4...这个看取舍吧，我觉得NM和弦当双音也没问题就是了wwww改成3-2-1-3

00:34:242 (34242|6,35042|4,35842|2) - 同前

00:57:360 (57360|1,57360|4) - 挪到4和6
00:57:560 (57560|2,57560|5) - 1和3

01:00:560 (60560|1,60560|4,60760|5,60760|2) - ^
后面的就不写了w Fixed

01:06:776 (66776|1) - 挪到0Not Fix

01:14:003 (74003|6,74403|1,74403|5) - 跟前面一样是两个音Not Fix

01:21:403 (81403|1) - addFixed

01:20:603 (80603|5) - add这其实是双音Not Fix

01:23:003 (83003|4) - 挪到2Not Fix

01:31:203 (91203|0) - add前面移動了下

01:32:003 (92003|1) - 挪到2ok

01:32:203 (92203|2) - 挪到1ok

01:39:203 (99203|4) - 去掉，这里只map琴的话就不要多余的了Fixed
01:39:203 (99203|3) - 挪到2Fixed讓鼓點在中間
01:39:003 (99003|3) - add，漏了XDFixed

01:39:603 (99603|2) - addFixed
01:39:803 (99803|3) - addNot Fix
01:40:203 (100203|4) - 挪到6Not Fix

01:44:203 (104203|0,104403|1) - 无音打起來很順手耶;w;

01:55:285 (115285|5) - 是双音，加一个noteFixed

02:03:730 (123730|3) - ^建议02:03:330 (123330|5) - 挪到6，然后02:03:730 (123730|5) - 加前面Fixed

02:05:230 (125230|6,125463|5,125996|5,126263|2) - 都是双音...建议重新排一下 （这里和之前的面条排的有点难了）
這裡我想弄出強~弱~強~弱的音


02:07:330 (127330|3) - 只map钢琴的话就去掉吧ok

02:10:130 (130130|3,130330|4) - ^只留这两个，其他的都无音 這裡好順手不想改;w;

02:34:730 (154730|0) - addNot Fix

03:37:501 (217501|0,218301|2,219101|4) - 同前Not Fix

还是面条偏难，比如03:04:304 (184304|4,184304|5,184504|3,184504|2,184504|5,184504|6) - 右手以及03:07:206 (187206|5,187206|6,187427|5,187427|6,187648|4,187648|5) - 是不是重新考虑一下面条的用法？XD
Not Fix 並不會很難 一定的練習之後就能打過(包括我)

我找不到原谱面所以不一定准w
只是参考意见w
加油！

感謝Mod

c36098651 wrote:

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01:30:803 假如第4鍵道是對鼓聲的話 加1個NOTE在這裡 changed
01:33:403 ^ 這裡沒抓鼓點
01:34:403之後類似的鼓聲你好像就忽視了........ 嗯 只有一小段有;w;

有些白線像02:21:730 02:42:859 02:44:459等有鼓音 但你可能因為是normal而沒放

03:55:301 這裡也有個小小的音

17VA wrote:

long beatmap

anyway, start mod

puush link : suggestion

[Easy]

use double notes at kiai part (just strong beats) add some

01:24:003 (84003|3,84203|2,84403|1,84603|2) - move +1 columns fixed

01:51:285 (111285|1) - here http://puu.sh/4TC1Z.png fixed

03:12:668 (192668|4) - http://puu.sh/4TC7U.png fixed

[Normal]

01:56:885 (116885|5) - move 2 fixed

01:58:485 (118485|5) - move 3 fixed

01:59:496 (119496|2) - http://puu.sh/4TCeT.jpg not fix

02:10:530 - add not fix

02:54:270 (174270|5) - http://puu.sh/4TCka.pngnot fix

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there! I'll mod this map as requested.

[Easy]
00:57:360 (57360|0) Move to 5th column (PR match).
00:57:560 (57560|1) Move to 1st column.
01:00:560 (60560|0) Move to 5th column.
01:03:760 (63760|0) ^
01:06:978 (66978|5) Move to 7th column.
01:07:181 (67181|4) Move to 4th column.
01:07:992 Add note in 2nd or 3rd column. add at 2nd column
01:39:203 (99203|4) Move to 2nd or 4th column. move to 2nd column
01:40:003 (100003|4,100403|0) Delete these notes.
02:02:130 (122130|1) Move to 4th column.
02:04:930 (124930|4,125196|0,125730|0) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1065026
02:31:330 (151330|3) Long note end should be at 02:32:130.
03:22:901 (202901|0) Move to any column that the right hand uses (4th to 7th).move to 7th column
03:43:501 (223501|2,223901|6,224301|1,224701|5,225101|0,225501|4,225901|1) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1065031

[Normal]
00:22:313 (22313|4) Move to 2nd column.
01:06:978 (66978|4) Move to 6th or 7th column. move to 7th column
01:46:659 (106659|6,106870|6) Move to 4th column.
01:47:081 (107081|5) Move to 7th column.
01:59:496 (119496|2,119707|2,119918|2) This part looks like a Hard. Delete these notes.remake this part
02:54:270 (174270|6,174481|6,174692|1) ^remake this part
04:04:768 (244768|6,244840|5,244912|4) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1065038

Hope this helps! Good luck! A beautiful song indeed!

Edit: Also, here's a star!

Nazalion wrote:

lol sedap malam ...

it seems indonesian languange ..

btw good luck

xxbidiao wrote:

总体上来说，因为谱面很简单，所以也没太多问题。。

Normal：

条子部分 感觉你谱的有些不一致。条子要么整段都拖，要么就整段不拖，太不一致会让人感觉很奇怪的~

00:08:313 (8313|0) - 这里可以考虑做成一个滑音？ 就是做成个微型楼梯有2个Note这样。
00:11:513 (11513|6) - ^之后还有很多处，反正已经三秒一组音符了，这样的pattern会突出音乐的滑音部分，也许不错？
關於這段 因為30%的hitsound實在是有點大聲 放兩個會把音蓋掉
00:31:442 (31442|2) - 移动到1？ 这样能体现出鼓点。
00:43:042 (43042|4) - 6
01:40:803 (100803|2) - 这之后倒突然没条子了，很奇怪。。。在其他的音符上也没发现明显的排布改变，让人感觉只是简单的少了个条。。
01:48:885 (108885|1) - ^
02:21:930 (141930|0,142530|3,143730|4) - 建议这三个条干脆去掉好了（或者换成点），做个彻底的休息段子。（这段音乐也正好是高潮后的休息段）
02:30:130 (150130|0,152130|6,153730|5,155330|4,156930|3) - ^

asd123iii wrote:

xxbidiao wrote:

总体上来说，因为谱面很简单，所以也没太多问题。。

Normal：

条子部分 感觉你谱的有些不一致。条子要么整段都拖，要么就整段不拖，太不一致会让人感觉很奇怪的~

00:08:313 (8313|0) - 这里可以考虑做成一个滑音？ 就是做成个微型楼梯有2个Note这样。
00:11:513 (11513|6) - ^之后还有很多处，反正已经三秒一组音符了，这样的pattern会突出音乐的滑音部分，也许不错？
關於這段 因為30%的hitsound實在是有點大聲 放兩個會把音蓋掉
00:31:442 (31442|2) - 移动到1？ 这样能体现出鼓点。
00:43:042 (43042|4) - 6
01:40:803 (100803|2) - 这之后倒突然没条子了，很奇怪。。。在其他的音符上也没发现明显的排布改变，让人感觉只是简单的少了个条。。
01:48:885 (108885|1) - ^
02:21:930 (141930|0,142530|3,143730|4) - 建议这三个条干脆去掉好了（或者换成点），做个彻底的休息段子。（这段音乐也正好是高潮后的休息段）
02:30:130 (150130|0,152130|6,153730|5,155330|4,156930|3) - ^

除了上述，其他全部Fixed

感謝上將

Edit:@BAT如果前後段可以改成5%我就用裝飾音

ljqandylee wrote:

谱面没什么问题~

HP建议调低，本来就是一首很放松的曲子而且只有EZ和NM，HP不用设得那么高的XD

然后Easy的Volume一样调到30%，100%太吵了……

另外还有个技巧是edit里Ctrl+A全选所有note，然后点菜单栏Compose里最下面一个Auto volume balance，这样就不会因为某一个时间点有2个以上note而导致按键音变响了，当然这个还是看mapper取舍了~

No kudosu XD

ljqandylee wrote:

Nice. Bubbled

kanpakyin wrote:

Some suggestion before ranking.

column:
0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[Normal]

1. 00:37:442 (37442|4) - Remove this note as there is no instrument there.
2. 00:43:842 (43842|4) - ^
3. 00:50:242 (50242|2) - ^
   Not fix this part
   1.There is a piano sound.
   2.This part need to separate with easy diff.
4. 01:41:203 - Add a note here to follow the base? (column 1) Not Fix,I want to avoid so many drum note here.
5. 01:42:803 - ^ (column 1)^
6. 01:45:673 (105673|6) - This note is wrongly snapped. This should be snapped to 01:45:655 - (1/16 yellow tick)
   Fixed
7. 01:47:685 (107685|5) - Remove this note and then add a note at 01:48:085 - All piano here. Not Fix
8. 01:54:485 - ^^
9. 01:56:085 (116085|4,116085|3,116351|6,116351|5,116618|5,116618|4,116885|1,116885|4) - These 1/3 notes sound quite weird. I would rather place them in 1/4 if I were you.
   Move to right place,follow the piano.(Include Easy diff)
10. 01:59:707 (119707|0,119918|1) - Remove 01:59:918 (119918|1) - and then move 01:59:707 (119707|0) - to 01:59:813 - (1/8 snap)Not Fix,follow the piano.
11. 02:36:130 - Add a note at column 6 or 4?Chorus Piano before and after this note,here is a single piano voice.
12. 03:03:704 (183704|3,183704|2,184004|3,184004|4,184304|5,184304|4) - These 1/3 notes sound quite weird. I would rather place them in 1/4 if I were you.Not Fix,follow the piano.

Faust wrote:

Source ought to be fixed.

Faust wrote:

If a predecessor makes a mistake, you shouldn't make a repeat of it.

That said, that map you just referenced should have had that fixed a long time ago.

I don't want to sound like I'm shoving this down your throat, but this issue isnt a big deal though it should be rectified.
Just ask any BAT for help, and it will be a seamless process.

asd123iii wrote:

Faust wrote:

If a predecessor makes a mistake, you shouldn't make a repeat of it.

That said, that map you just referenced should have had that fixed a long time ago.

I don't want to sound like I'm shoving this down your throat, but this issue isnt a big deal though it should be rectified.
Just ask any BAT for help, and it will be a seamless process.

Ok.
but what source/tag should i change?
or just remove the source?

ExPew wrote:

dat title song........ =w= xi must be indonesian/malaysian lolol

that title 'sedap' refer for food,music ( delicious )

Reikosaka wrote:

*xi should remake title to 'malam romantis' not 'sedap malam'
*Sedap malam i don't know what mean that title for this song*
Nice pattern and song, i dislike the title

i guess it should be Good Night or Romantic Night xD

can i join?

kanpakyin wrote:

this will back soon.

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