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Chronotakular

AnreFM wrote:

M4M from your queue~

okay let's go

[General]
BPM 116.0 Alright, you guys convinced me. I will update the BPM across all charts.
pffset 6295
this is what fits actually
01:02:111 - Kiai start here Doesn't seem like a huge deal, so I won't move. For now.

[Easy]
nooooooo you MUST use a constant distance on easy. Use the distance snap tool here. Recommended 0.8 or 1.0
as of the distance then, i will not mod the placement as you may change it majorly :'' Makes sense. I don't know why I neglected to distance snap after the last mod, where someone said to not use straight sliders.
00:04:956 (1) - try to not use blue tick on easy as it may confuse beginners. move this to 00:04:015 Good catch. I'll move this back a bit.
00:08:317 (1) - overlaps aren't exactly good. try using another pattern that fits or at least don't overlap :o Yeah, a lot of this chart is going to have to be redone, so I'll make sure to avoid these.
00:44:525 - how about slider here till 00:45:042 - ? Hmm. I'd hate to break the beat in half like that for an easy chart, but I'll consider it. This chart will have to be redone with a different distance snapping anyways.
01:01:594 - uhh why just circles here? the play will be really boring. Try using sliders or repeats here :) Okay, I'll try to mix it up here for the remake.

Map has been remade, with all changes above incorporated.

[Normal]
00:09:353 (1,2) - make them symmetry Done.
00:12:455 (1) - avoid overlap and make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897127 Did something a little different here, to fit the distance snapping.
00:15:560 - feels weird if you start it on blue tick like that. add a note here Good catch. Done.
00:40:128 (4,5) - might be too hard for normal. try to tone this down Ah. This was unintentional. Fixed.
00:45:560 (1,2,3) - make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897129 Okay.
01:29:008 (5) - uhh use simpler shapes here Alright.

[Hard]
00:16:852 (6) - make it like this [url]osu.ppy.sh/ss/897136[/url] Done.
00:18:922 (5) - this one isn't looked too good there. try moving to x152 y136 Hmm. Okay. I think I fixed.
00:18:922 (5) - NC Done.
00:21:766 (4) - remove clap on repeat. clap on tail instead Also unintentional. Good catch.
00:30:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - lol no need to do it all on same place like that. use better pattern here :o Uh. Okay. This has been changed.

[Insane]
wahhhh why do you use all stream here? Not really necessary for so :(. Umm I'm sorry but it seems this map needed at least 80% remapped :( Try to use many pattern beside streams. It doesn't really played well. Look at people's ranked maps for reference :D Uh. Hmm. I don't think it plays bad, to be honest. However, you're not the first person to say this. I actually really like the way it plays now, but I'll think about a remake. I'm going to leave as is until I get some ideas, and if some other mods might it, I'll leave as is.


uhh I think that's all. Sorry for the short mod, but i can't mod this map maximally because of many unrankable issues:( I'm assuming you've mentioned all "unrankable" issues here.
If you still have question, you can always ask me via pm or chat :)
Good Luck!!
Thanks for your mod! I'll see what I can do about the insane and easy charts!
AnreFM
Glad to help you :)

If you want, I can make a Hard or Hard+ GD :D
zorefire
From modding queue
[Easy]
00:48:145 - add note here
00:54:352 - add note here
01:01:593 - why did you change the speed it's too fast for a beginner map use the same speed as before
[Normal]
01:06:249 (3) - new combo
01:07:284 (2) - revert combo
01:13:491 (4) - revert combo
01:14:525 (1) - new combo
01:17:369 (1) - new combo not needed
01:29:007 - spinner would be good here
01:31:076 - if you use spinner end it here
[Hard]
Map is good so I will check combo.
00:07:025 (1) - revert combo
00:08:060 (8) - new combo
00:09:093 (4) - revert combo
00:10:127 (1) - new combo
00:11:162 (4) - revert combo
00:15:041 (6) - revert combo
00:16:593 (1) - new combo
00:17:369 (1) - revert combo
00:18:403 (1) - revert combo
[Insane]
Is fine
Sleepy Tori
[general]
check your letterbox in breaks option
umm, you should put the epilepsy warning on because this map is pretty flashy.


easy
almost all of your objects are unsnapped. snap them by moving them slightly in place on the timeline above.
im not going to list out each one because there are just too many e.e.

no particular combo problema or placement problems

normal
again. you need to snap your objects when it needs to be.

00:24:870 (2) - this slider shape is kinda weird, try changing it
00:45:560 (1,2,3) - these sliders sound very off, especially the last one.
01:17:886 (2) - the end of this slider sounds off, try extending it by a little bit

[pachanagi taiko]
perfect. i love it XD

hard
snap your objects.

00:29:007 (1) - remove NC
00:29:524 (2) - NC
00:45:560 (6) - sounds very off, please snap this
00:47:370 (3) - ^ (there also may be a problem with the size of this slider so you may need to extend it after snapping)
00:51:508 (9) - ewww this slider sounds very off ^
00:55:646 (7) - ^

[pachanagi-no-okami]
(doesn't this translate to "Pachangi the Wolf" lol XD)

yet another perfect taiko :)

insane
snap your objects please
00:45:560 (7) - this slider should end 00:45:817 - here and this is terrible overlapping. please move the slider next to the 00:46:076 (8) - instead
00:47:110 (3) - this slider is off, snap and extend please
00:49:438 (1) - not only is this too fast, it's also off ,extend this
00:53:577 (1) - snap and extend, it sounds off
00:55:645 (7) - ^

and im done, hope this helped
Topic Starter
Chronotakular
Alright. So. I'd figured I'd write about this here, and search for a forum about this bug, starting now.

This chart is completely glitched. Every time I try to snap a beat, all the notes go wacky. The slider velocity either goes to 3000, or it goes to 0.2

What makes this even worse, saving the song does ABSOLUTELY NOTHING, except if a note has been deleted, those changes are saved.

So, I'm thinking what I have to do at this point, is delete all the notes from the song, and completely replace them manually, when all the notes have been deleted. So, if this is the case, I would expect a few days before I can reward kudos and apply the changes you guys have suggested.

Sorry about this. >:(
Topic Starter
Chronotakular
The glitch has been fixed! As for the feedback...

zorefire wrote:

From modding queue
[Easy]
00:48:145 - add note here
00:54:352 - add note here Sliders end here. I don't see a need for this.
01:01:593 - why did you change the speed it's too fast for a beginner map use the same speed as before I never changed the slider speed. This must have been glitched related. It's still pretty slow. I promise.
[Normal]
01:06:249 (3) - new combo
01:07:284 (2) - revert combo
01:13:491 (4) - revert combo
01:14:525 (1) - new combo
01:17:369 (1) - new combo not needed
01:29:007 - spinner would be good here
01:31:076 - if you use spinner end it here

Implemented all of these.
[Hard]
Map is good so I will check combo.
00:07:025 (1) - revert combo
00:08:060 (8) - new combo
00:09:093 (4) - revert combo
00:10:127 (1) - new combo
00:11:162 (4) - revert combo
00:15:041 (6) - revert combo
00:16:593 (1) - new combo
00:17:369 (1) - revert combo
00:18:403 (1) - revert combo

Implemented all of these.
[Insane]
Is fine
Yahoo! :D
Thanks for your mod! :lol:
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

snlrocks wrote:

[general]
check your letterbox in breaks option This was already checked when I went to go add this, so I'm assuming this was also glitch related.
umm, you should put the epilepsy warning on because this map is pretty flashy. Done.


easy
almost all of your objects are unsnapped. snap them by moving them slightly in place on the timeline above.
im not going to list out each one because there are just too many e.e. I literally went through hell and back to fix the beats on this chart. I took me an upwards of 5 hours to fix this glitch across all charts. Well. It's done now.

no particular combo problema or placement problems
Yay!

normal
again. you need to snap your objects when it needs to be.

00:24:870 (2) - this slider shape is kinda weird, try changing it Good call. Slightly reworked.
00:45:560 (1,2,3) - these sliders sound very off, especially the last one. I don't see the problem, but regardless, changed.
01:17:886 (2) - the end of this slider sounds off, try extending it by a little bit Again, don't see the issue, but I still changed.

[pachanagi taiko]
perfect. i love it XD Good work, Pacha!

hard
snap your objects.

00:29:007 (1) - remove NC Done.
00:29:524 (2) - NC Done.
00:45:560 (6) - sounds very off, please snap this
00:47:370 (3) - ^ (there also may be a problem with the size of this slider so you may need to extend it after snapping)
00:51:508 (9) - ewww this slider sounds very off ^
00:55:646 (7) - ^

The last 4 mods I assume were dealing with the glitchy of beat of the chart. I couldn't find what you were talking about to save my life.

[pachanagi-no-okami]
(doesn't this translate to "Pachangi the Wolf" lol XD) It sounds strange to someone who hasn't played the game, but those who have played it know exactly what it is referring to. ;)

yet another perfect taiko :) Pacha's on a roll!

insane
snap your objects please
00:45:560 (7) - this slider should end 00:45:817 - here and this is terrible overlapping. please move the slider next to the 00:46:076 (8) - instead Ah, that slider being too long was not intended. Good catch.
00:47:110 (3) - this slider is off, snap and extend please
00:49:438 (1) - not only is this too fast, it's also off ,extend this
00:53:577 (1) - snap and extend, it sounds off
00:55:645 (7) - ^

Everything else you stated here was stuff mapped to lyrics, which I'm guessing you didn't like. I didn't do exactly what you said, but I've reworked everything you mentioned in one way or another, so it closely matches the beat.

and im done, hope this helped
It did! Thank you for your mod! :)
LexiaLovesU
HELLO FROM LEXIA'S NYANYA MODDING QUEUE >W<
LEXIA HERE AND MOD IS STARTING
:)

[Easy]
at 00:35:735(3) move middle point in slider to x:144 y:32
at 00:45:046(3) use distant space on 3
at 01:21:770 - 01:28:494(2,3,1,2,3,1,2,) distant space this all (this is for beginners)
at 01:29:011(3) turn that to a spinner
nice easy :)
[Normal]
at 00:04:959(1) start the slider at 00:05:218
at 00:10:390(2) mirror (1)
at 00:11:425(3) mirror (1)
at 00:12:459(1) blanket (3)
at 00:19:701(2,3) move 2 to x:266 y:175 then move 3 to x:366 y:169
at 00:40:649(5) mirror 4
at 00:44:528(4) mirror 3
at 00:51:770(6) move (6) back to 00:51:511 then add a circle at 00:52:287
in all of kiai mirror all of your 1/1 sliders off your first 1/1 slider at 01:02:115
thats all
[Hard]
00:32:906 pls make that slider pretty
01:01:727 add note
make all 1/2 sliders in kiai match your first 1/2 slider at 01:02:373
[Insane]
Timing is fine
just you need to work on making prettier sliders and better placement

[Overall]
Great timing
great song
ok placement
meh sliders


thats all bye and good luck getting ranked :)
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

onepiece314 wrote:

HELLO FROM LEXIA'S NYANYA MODDING QUEUE >W<
LEXIA HERE AND MOD IS STARTING
:)

[Easy]
at 00:35:735(3) move middle point in slider to x:144 y:32 Done.
at 00:45:046(3) use distant space on 3 This was distant snapped, using .8 snapping (another mod recommended), so I just re-worked this.
at 01:21:770 - 01:28:494(2,3,1,2,3,1,2,) distant space this all (this is for beginners) Same comment as above.
at 01:29:011(3) turn that to a spinner Done.
nice easy :)
[Normal]
at 00:04:959(1) start the slider at 00:05:218 Okay.
at 00:10:390(2) mirror (1) Done.
at 00:11:425(3) mirror (1) Done.
at 00:12:459(1) blanket (3) Okay.
at 00:19:701(2,3) move 2 to x:266 y:175 then move 3 to x:366 y:169 Looks a lot better here now, thanks!
at 00:40:649(5) mirror 4 Done.
at 00:44:528(4) mirror 3 Okay.
at 00:51:770(6) move (6) back to 00:51:511 then add a circle at 00:52:287 Hmm. Okay.
in all of kiai mirror all of your 1/1 sliders off your first 1/1 slider at 01:02:115 I think I did what you said here?
thats all
[Hard]
00:32:906 pls make that slider pretty I didn't think this slider was ugly, but okay. I made it "pretty".
01:01:727 add note Uhh. I assume you mean the 1/2 beat here, and not the 1/4th beat. Added note on the 1/4th beat.
make all 1/2 sliders in kiai match your first 1/2 slider at 01:02:373 Again, I think I did this correctly.
[Insane]
Timing is fine
just you need to work on making prettier sliders and better placement Pretty vague comments, and that makes certain elements of the chart hard to improve specifically. I'll work on some distance snapping between streams, but it's hard for me to point out what is and isn't an ugly slider.

[Overall]
Great timing
great song
ok placement
meh sliders

Glad to hear it! :D

thats all bye and good luck getting ranked :)
Thanks for your mod! It helped a bunch!
LexiaLovesU
sorry i didnt mean it was ugly i meant it was like kinda odd sorry i should have worded it better
Topic Starter
Chronotakular
It's no problem! They kind of mean the same thing all in all, which is change or move around. I understood what you meant. :D
Yuzeyun
Let TEUTEUWEU Totoro le Pacha answer. Anyway I'll spam him in skype and if by September 3 he hasn't answered, I'll spam him IRL.

GEZ to TLP > Tu me rappelles dès que la map aura reçu une icône Taiko. Entre temps, chope une bonne poignée de mods. Si tu trouves personne, je peux toujours demander à des gars sur #taiko.

[Pachanagi]

Ta Pachanagi on dirait une futsuu on crack, et t'as beaucoup trop concentré ton mapping sur les lyrics, oublie pas que le Taiko c'est un jeu de tambour pour commencer ! (t'auras une baffe à la rentrée si tu corriges rien)
Dans ton kiai essaie d'ajouter plus de notes, histoire que le joueur s'amuse un peu plus et qu'il ressente un peu plus la musique (c'est quand même ASSEZ vide tu me diras)

1. Offset: 40ms BPM: 116,00
2. Offset: 62 115ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
3. Offset: 80 858ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)

Place cette dernière là : 01:20:729

Quelques endroits où tu peux ajouter des notes sans problème et quelques changements
00:02:626 - ajoute un d ici. y'a un piano tu peux pas le louper.
00:13:488 - d
00:18:143 (43,44) - inverse ces deux notes : t'as un snare en 43 (mec tu composes comment peux tu passer à côté) qui est plus important que le lyric après imo. au pire tu peux garder 44 en k, et remplacer par k le 43.
00:18:919 (45,46) - dk, rien ne justifie kd. les paroles impliqueraient dk, et un snare est sur 46.
00:21:246 - d, ou k si t'as une bonne idée de pattern à côté
00:22:281 - ^
00:22:540 (55) - supprime le finish; il est pas vraiment nécessaire.
00:25:384 (62,63,64) - essaie de remplir un peu plus ce passage.
00:27:712 (66,67,68,69) - pareil ici
00:30:298 (69,70,71) - kdk : 70 est plus grave
00:34:177 - d
00:39:091 (92) - pareil que 55
00:37:281 (88,89,90,91,92) - en fait c'est pareil que 00:21:246 - LAWL
00:41:936 (99) - k, et ajoute un d avant, ça rendra beaucoup mieux
00:53:315 (125,126) - inverse ? t'as mis un k à 00:52:281 (123) -, ça rendra le tout bien plus consistent.
01:23:315 (47) - don ? consistence de hauteur
01:29:264 - c'est une note tenue, ajoute un spinner ici et finis le là 01:31:074 -

[Pachanagi no Okami]
T'ES SERIEUX
change ton HP et OD à 5 pour garder une consistance entre les diffs.
Même commentaires que ta futsuu on crack mais là c'est une muzu on crack.
Si je demande d'inverser les sons, c'est souvent pour une consistance avec le tambour.

00:02:626 - même raison que pachanagi
00:14:781 (41,42) - inverse les sons ?
00:18:143 (52,53) - ^
00:18:919 (54,55) - ^
00:19:695 (57,58,59,60,61,62) - je pense pas que ddd kkk soit adéquat ici. ici, ddk k d sonne bien mieux.
00:20:729 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69) - change un peu ? On dirait que t'as pas eu d'idée...
00:24:350 (76) - je te recommande un d à la place.
00:25:126 (78,79,80,81,82) - 80 dégage, et 79 devient un k. consistance avec le tambour.
00:25:902 (81) - optionnellement tu peux changer en d, mais libre à toi.
00:27:453 - ajoute un d, et change 00:27:712 (85,86) - en dkd (ajoute un k entre les deux). devine pourquoi :>
00:30:815 (99) - d simple, pas besoin de faire tout un plat pour une note
00:33:660 (108) - k, pour rester consistent avec le tambour
00:34:695 (111,112) - inverse
00:36:376 (117) - bouge là ici : 00:36:117 - et mets k. consistence yo
00:37:281 (121,122,123,124,125,126) - pas terrible, essaie de trouver mieux
00:44:264 (143,144,145,146,147,148) - fais la même chose que 00:36:376
00:50:212 - ajoute un k, con 6 tens'
00:51:246 (167,168) - inverse
00:52:540 (171,172,173,174,175,176) - quad-double pas très nécessaire. bouge 174 là : 00:53:057 (174) -
01:00:298 (203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211) - ce truc casse l'aspect simple de la map, coupe le.
01:06:764 (229,230) - inverse
01:08:833 (235) - ajoute un k, GEZO 6 DE TENS (oui je suis con)
01:19:177 (273) - y'a rien à redire mis à part le fait que t'aies fait une petite boulette : t'as mis une addition soft par accident. regarde à gauche de l'éditeur, et change le second truc par AUTO.
01:29:134 - pareli que PachanaGUI

chope plus de mods avant de me rappeler sinon tu subiras le courroux de LePivert.
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

_Gezo_ wrote:

Let TEUTEUWEU Totoro le Pacha answer. Anyway I'll spam him in skype and if by September 3 he hasn't answered, I'll spam him IRL.

GEZ to TLP > Tu me rappelles dès que la map aura reçu une icône Taiko. Entre temps, chope une bonne poignée de mods. Si tu trouves personne, je peux toujours demander à des gars sur #taiko.

[Pachanagi]

Ta Pachanagi on dirait une futsuu on crack, et t'as beaucoup trop concentré ton mapping sur les lyrics, oublie pas que le Taiko c'est un jeu de tambour pour commencer ! (t'auras une baffe à la rentrée si tu corriges rien)
Dans ton kiai essaie d'ajouter plus de notes, histoire que le joueur s'amuse un peu plus et qu'il ressente un peu plus la musique (c'est quand même ASSEZ vide tu me diras)

1. Offset: 40ms BPM: 116,00
2. Offset: 62 115ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
3. Offset: 80 858ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)

Place cette dernière là : 01:20:729

Quelques endroits où tu peux ajouter des notes sans problème et quelques changements
00:02:626 - ajoute un d ici. y'a un piano tu peux pas le louper.
00:13:488 - d
00:18:143 (43,44) - inverse ces deux notes : t'as un snare en 43 (mec tu composes comment peux tu passer à côté) qui est plus important que le lyric après imo. au pire tu peux garder 44 en k, et remplacer par k le 43.
00:18:919 (45,46) - dk, rien ne justifie kd. les paroles impliqueraient dk, et un snare est sur 46.
00:21:246 - d, ou k si t'as une bonne idée de pattern à côté
00:22:281 - ^
00:22:540 (55) - supprime le finish; il est pas vraiment nécessaire.
00:25:384 (62,63,64) - essaie de remplir un peu plus ce passage.
00:27:712 (66,67,68,69) - pareil ici
00:30:298 (69,70,71) - kdk : 70 est plus grave
00:34:177 - d
00:39:091 (92) - pareil que 55
00:37:281 (88,89,90,91,92) - en fait c'est pareil que 00:21:246 - LAWL
00:41:936 (99) - k, et ajoute un d avant, ça rendra beaucoup mieux
00:53:315 (125,126) - inverse ? t'as mis un k à 00:52:281 (123) -, ça rendra le tout bien plus consistent.
01:23:315 (47) - don ? consistence de hauteur
01:29:264 - c'est une note tenue, ajoute un spinner ici et finis le là 01:31:074 -

[Pachanagi no Okami]
T'ES SERIEUX
change ton HP et OD à 5 pour garder une consistance entre les diffs.
Même commentaires que ta futsuu on crack mais là c'est une muzu on crack.
Si je demande d'inverser les sons, c'est souvent pour une consistance avec le tambour.

00:02:626 - même raison que pachanagi
00:14:781 (41,42) - inverse les sons ?
00:18:143 (52,53) - ^
00:18:919 (54,55) - ^
00:19:695 (57,58,59,60,61,62) - je pense pas que ddd kkk soit adéquat ici. ici, ddk k d sonne bien mieux.
00:20:729 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69) - change un peu ? On dirait que t'as pas eu d'idée...
00:24:350 (76) - je te recommande un d à la place.
00:25:126 (78,79,80,81,82) - 80 dégage, et 79 devient un k. consistance avec le tambour.
00:25:902 (81) - optionnellement tu peux changer en d, mais libre à toi.
00:27:453 - ajoute un d, et change 00:27:712 (85,86) - en dkd (ajoute un k entre les deux). devine pourquoi :>
00:30:815 (99) - d simple, pas besoin de faire tout un plat pour une note
00:33:660 (108) - k, pour rester consistent avec le tambour
00:34:695 (111,112) - inverse
00:36:376 (117) - bouge là ici : 00:36:117 - et mets k. consistence yo
00:37:281 (121,122,123,124,125,126) - pas terrible, essaie de trouver mieux
00:44:264 (143,144,145,146,147,148) - fais la même chose que 00:36:376
00:50:212 - ajoute un k, con 6 tens'
00:51:246 (167,168) - inverse
00:52:540 (171,172,173,174,175,176) - quad-double pas très nécessaire. bouge 174 là : 00:53:057 (174) -
01:00:298 (203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211) - ce truc casse l'aspect simple de la map, coupe le.
01:06:764 (229,230) - inverse
01:08:833 (235) - ajoute un k, GEZO 6 DE TENS (oui je suis con)
01:19:177 (273) - y'a rien à redire mis à part le fait que t'aies fait une petite boulette : t'as mis une addition soft par accident. regarde à gauche de l'éditeur, et change le second truc par AUTO.
01:29:134 - pareli que PachanaGUI

chope plus de mods avant de me rappeler sinon tu subiras le courroux de LePivert.
Will do! I'll give you some kudos right now though, this looks like an impressive mod!
Yuzeyun
Anyway, since we know each other IRL, I know why he doesn't answer to mods : He recently arrived to a friend's apartment and has a very bad speed (It's near 56k). I hope he answers to my text though, I told him I'd mod.

EDIT : It will take some time before he answers, his work is eating all his time and therefore he can't do anything. Please be patient !
Totoro le Pacha
ARG So much things wrong on my map, arg... (Yes, I'm at work, but nobody seems need me. o/ )

Thanks 4 your mod Gez, I'll work on it tonight !

Mais pour la futsuu on crack, c'est même une simple futsuu, je sais même pas pourquoi la SD atteint les 4 stars. Le BPM équivaut à 58
Tony
hi there. m4m from my queue :P

[Insane]
You need to work alot on the diff's fanciness. Slider shapes and circle/slider patterns are really weird.
Overall flow of this map isn't that bad.
Gonna point out really bad things you should fix.
00:02:761 (1,2) - I'm not hearing any sounds. I think you should increase volume ~
00:03:925 (3) - since there is a jump between this and the previous object I recommend you to start new combo here for a better readability.
00:07:028 (6) - add a new combo here and on each first circle of the streams in that section. You have jumps.
00:12:459 (1) - the vocals suggest a curved slider rather than a shakey one.
00:18:537 (2) - It would sound better on the next white tick instead.
00:24:615 (6) - add a new combo to split the combo pattern
00:27:201 (1) - there's not need for a new combo here.
00:28:494 (1) - ^
00:35:994 (6,7,8,9) - move them down. the spacing between 5 and 6 is too short.
00:38:580 (8,1) - fix spacing between them
01:18:666 (6) - waaat. new combo here.


[Hard]
The overall fanciness of this map is a bit better than [Insane]. I can say I like this more than insane.
Gonna point out some things you should fix.
00:24:615 (5) - look funny. Like I said in insane vocals suggest a curved slider rather than an "edgy" one lol. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905963
01:04:442 (3) - is the drum whistle intentional on the start of the slider. sounded random to me lol
01:14:787 (6) - you missed a calp on repeat :P

[Normal]
Pretty solid normal.
00:45:563 (5) - spilt the combo pattern here adding a new combo

[Easy]
Kinda boring easy. Maybe it's just me Loved the last part of the diff (right after the kiai)
01:02:115 - I'd add a circle here. Starting a kiai section without a note is kinda eww xD

nothing else to add. Loved the hitsounds you used. Didn't like the overall arrangement of the notes. But for a first map it's pretty awesome :P

Good luck with this map. Really enjoyed listening to this song :P
Frostmourne
hihi~ , a mod m4m from my modding queue !

General
- Combo color 4 is completely black, it can distract players at some part of the video for such as 00:15:304 (7,8,9) - 00:12:459 (1,2,3) - in hard that you barely see it.
- Try pressing "g" in your editor 3 times and it will show "Grid Size : Tiny" so that you can create better sliders with this grid. Some of their's shape can be improved.
- comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767. (copied from AIBat, it should be correct)
- You should use the size of 1024x768 for your Background or any recommended resolution.
- You don't have any break and you have a video so I think you should tick LetterboxInBreaks out for every diff.
- Inconsistent tag, you don't really need to use Persona 4 as a tag since it's already on your source.
- Offset for standard diff starts differently from Taiko diffs. Better use the taiko's one for the sake of consistency.

Easy
OD is kind of unforgiving atm. I suggest you not use your AR exceed the OD one , like AR3 with OD3, AR4 with OD4 , especially the easiest diff one like this. So please change this OD to 4 instead.
By the way, AR3 HP3 OD3 should be comfortable and fitting with this diff more than this. I would change to it.
00:06:252 (2) - 00:08:321 (1) - try moving these 2 sliders 1 grid up. Reason is 00:06:252 (2) - will stay apart from 00:04:701 (1) - (This is currently touching another slider which could look unclean(probably). The spacing is fine, don't worry
00:20:218 (3) - Too close from the previous slider (wrong spacing)
00:29:528 (4) - New combo here instead of 00:30:563 (1) - (remove NC at 00:30:563 (1) - )
01:02:115 (x) - I feel you should add a note at this point. The kiai is started here and it has kind of big beat in the music. So I guess add a note here won't ruin the song and also makes this position more fitting.
01:20:735 (1) - There is no reason to silence from this note to 01:27:977 (2) - . I guess they are unrankable. So I suggest you change to something different. 20% of volume for only slider's start instead of this silenced custom hitsound.
looks pretty good already. :)

Normal
AR5 is enough for this diff in my opinion. First off, the map has really low bpm and your map density is kind of light. So AR6 should be AR5 instead for this diff.
00:06:252 (2) - nazi, try moving it right 2 grids and left 2 grids, the pattern would look balance with 00:07:287 (3) - more than the current.
00:11:425 (3) - spacing
00:19:183 (1,2) - spacing (could be done better than the current)
00:20:735 (1) - clap tail
00:24:873 (2,3) - clap both tail for these sliders.
00:24:873 (2,3,4) - any reason as to why you suddenly changed from 1.0 to 0.8 ?
00:32:115 (1,2) - this spacing is wrong. I don't think it's for Normal diff.
00:35:218 (4) - clap tail
00:40:649 (5) - ^
00:45:563 (5) - New combo and beware the spacing with 00:46:856 (6) -
00:52:287 (7) - clap
01:19:701 (6) - New combo here, seeing spacing here, It's fine for you to keep it but it should be new combo here
01:20:477 (2) - spacing with the previous one
01:21:252 (1) - silenced hitsounding like I mentioned in Easy diff.
Beat placements sound good. Just only some spacings and hitsounds that you might have missed.

Hard
OD6 could be fitting for this diff.
00:20:994 (2,3) - spacing
00:23:580 (1) - actually spacing is correct, but you can see that it almost touches 00:23:063 (7) - that doesn't make it look good.
00:24:356 (4,5) - can improve about this , You may just reduce slider's length, and add a note after that.
Your slider actually follows vocal but you can shorten it a bit just to make it not too long like this.
01:12:201 (7,8) - similar to above
01:19:442 (6) - new combo
01:20:735 (1) - silenced notes like I mentioned in Easy diff.

Insane
HP Drain is way too high compare to the song. HP7 could be done better for it.
Let me be honest about it.
00:09:097 (6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really think things like these (5 streams) can work well with this song. This song doesn't provide any beat on such points.
btw, there are some points that you can use these streams as well. Example are 00:27:977 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , 00:58:752 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) -
Something that is on peaked parts, before choruses, or alike. But for normal parts, they shouldn't be overdone like these.
And about 00:02:761 (1,2) - , Silenced hitsounds could be done well if music on certain points sound nothing (which you don't really need to even add notes) I suggest you use your default hitsounds as intended in most of parts in this song. Only Spinner end that I think silenced hitsound is nice and rankable. Silenced note is unrankable.
00:38:580 (8,1) - this spacing is kind of unfitting.
Not really need to point out much. Only stream like 1,2,3,4,5 . You can remove 2 and 4 to make everything not too overmapped. And some sliders can be done better once you use Grid Size : Tiny as I mentioned in General.

Good luck for your map. ! :)
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

Tony wrote:

hi there. m4m from my queue :P

[Insane]
You need to work alot on the diff's fanciness. Slider shapes and circle/slider patterns are really weird.
Overall flow of this map isn't that bad.
Gonna point out really bad things you should fix.
00:02:761 (1,2) - I'm not hearing any sounds. I think you should increase volume ~ Added volume here, it's slightly reduced though.
00:03:925 (3) - since there is a jump between this and the previous object I recommend you to start new combo here for a better readability. Good suggestion. I added this.
00:07:028 (6) - add a new combo here and on each first circle of the streams in that section. You have jumps. Done.
00:12:459 (1) - the vocals suggest a curved slider rather than a shakey one. Aww. I liked that slider. Okay, it's a smooth, curved one now.
00:18:537 (2) - It would sound better on the next white tick instead. It was supposed to line up with the vocals here, but alright. Fixed.
00:24:615 (6) - add a new combo to split the combo pattern This was unintentional. Fixed.
00:27:201 (1) - there's not need for a new combo here. Removed.
00:28:494 (1) - ^ Also removed.
00:35:994 (6,7,8,9) - move them down. the spacing between 5 and 6 is too short. Unintentional after I re-did the sliders on this difficulty. Fixed.
00:38:580 (8,1) - fix spacing between them Done.
01:18:666 (6) - waaat. new combo here. Also unintentional. Fixed.


[Hard]
The overall fanciness of this map is a bit better than [Insane]. I can say I like this more than insane.
Gonna point out some things you should fix.
00:24:615 (5) - look funny. Like I said in insane vocals suggest a curved slider rather than an "edgy" one lol. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905963 For the life of me, I could not get the slider to look like that. I made it pretty close to it, I think.
01:04:442 (3) - is the drum whistle intentional on the start of the slider. sounded random to me lol It was, but now that you pointed this out, I don't like this sound effect here either.
01:14:787 (6) - you missed a calp on repeat :P Good catch. When I remade this note, I think quite possibly I forgot to put the sound back in.

[Normal]
Pretty solid normal.
00:45:563 (5) - spilt the combo pattern here adding a new combo I want to say this is unintentional, but I'm not too sure. Anyways, I fixed it.

[Easy]
Kinda boring easy. Maybe it's just me Loved the last part of the diff (right after the kiai) I think all easy difficulties are boring. (:
01:02:115 - I'd add a circle here. Starting a kiai section without a note is kinda eww xD Kiai time now has many more notes.

nothing else to add. Loved the hitsounds you used. Didn't like the overall arrangement of the notes. But for a first map it's pretty awesome :P

Good luck with this map. Really enjoyed listening to this song :P
Thanks for your mod! It helped a lot!
Totoro le Pacha
HAAAY Gez, j'ai effectué ton mod. Cependant, y'a deux-trois trucs que j'ai soit laissé, soit légèrement modifié. Y compris la partie que t'as trouvé qu'elle dénaturait la facilité de la map. Je trouve que, justement, cette partie correspond très bien à là où elle est. J'y tiens :P

Mais sinon j'ai pris presque tous tes conseils ERMAHGERZ. La map sera updated soon, hésite pas à y rejeter un coup d'oeil

Merci beaucoup, tu m'as beaucoup aidé sur ce coup là ! x']
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

Frostmourne wrote:

hihi~ , a mod m4m from my modding queue !

General
- Combo color 4 is completely black, it can distract players at some part of the video for such as 00:15:304 (7,8,9) - 00:12:459 (1,2,3) - in hard that you barely see it. I tried to avoid moments in the map like that, but you are right. I've lightened this combo color up a bit.
- Try pressing "g" in your editor 3 times and it will show "Grid Size : Tiny" so that you can create better sliders with this grid. Some of their's shape can be improved.Yeah, I figured this out a little bit too late. I'll try to redo some of the weirder looking sliders.
- comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767. (copied from AIBat, it should be correct) Hmm. Interesting. Considering I copied these dimensions off another ranked chart. I'll see what I can do here.
- You should use the size of 1024x768 for your Background or any recommended resolution. I've found a similar image with a 1024x768 resolution. The background has been replaced with it.
- You don't have any break and you have a video so I think you should tick LetterboxInBreaks out for every diff. Well, normal and easy have a short break. But I'll uncheck this for hard and insane.
- Inconsistent tag, you don't really need to use Persona 4 as a tag since it's already on your source.Yes, I removed this pretty recently.
- Offset for standard diff starts differently from Taiko diffs. Better use the taiko's one for the sake of consistency. Alright. Fixed.

Easy
OD is kind of unforgiving atm. I suggest you not use your AR exceed the OD one , like AR3 with OD3, AR4 with OD4 , especially the easiest diff one like this. So please change this OD to 4 instead.
By the way, AR3 HP3 OD3 should be comfortable and fitting with this diff more than this. I would change to it. I did just that.
00:06:252 (2) - 00:08:321 (1) - try moving these 2 sliders 1 grid up. Reason is 00:06:252 (2) - will stay apart from 00:04:701 (1) - (This is currently touching another slider which could look unclean(probably). The spacing is fine, don't worry Done.
00:20:218 (3) - Too close from the previous slider (wrong spacing) You are absolutely correct. Fixed.
00:29:528 (4) - New combo here instead of 00:30:563 (1) - (remove NC at 00:30:563 (1) - ) Fixed.
01:02:115 (x) - I feel you should add a note at this point. The kiai is started here and it has kind of big beat in the music. So I guess add a note here won't ruin the song and also makes this position more fitting. I've redone the kiai section slightly, as well as fixed this.
01:20:735 (1) - There is no reason to silence from this note to 01:27:977 (2) - . I guess they are unrankable. So I suggest you change to something different. 20% of volume for only slider's start instead of this silenced custom hitsound. This, across all difficulties, has been removed. I used quieter hit sounds instead.
looks pretty good already. :)

Normal
AR5 is enough for this diff in my opinion. First off, the map has really low bpm and your map density is kind of light. So AR6 should be AR5 instead for this diff. Alright.
00:06:252 (2) - nazi, try moving it right 2 grids and left 2 grids, the pattern would look balance with 00:07:287 (3) - more than the current. Done.
00:11:425 (3) - spacing This was distance snapped, but okay. I've changed this a bit.
00:19:183 (1,2) - spacing (could be done better than the current) Re-arranged this a bit.
00:20:735 (1) - clap tail Fixed.
00:24:873 (2,3) - clap both tail for these sliders. Fixed.
00:24:873 (2,3,4) - any reason as to why you suddenly changed from 1.0 to 0.8 ? Hmm. Nope. Probably unintentional. I've tried to fix these gaps.
00:32:115 (1,2) - this spacing is wrong. I don't think it's for Normal diff. You're correct. This was unintentional.
00:35:218 (4) - clap tail Fixed.
00:40:649 (5) - ^ Also fixed.
00:45:563 (5) - New combo and beware the spacing with 00:46:856 (6) - Fixed both.
00:52:287 (7) - clap Done.
01:19:701 (6) - New combo here, seeing spacing here, It's fine for you to keep it but it should be new combo here Fixed both.
01:20:477 (2) - spacing with the previous one
01:21:252 (1) - silenced hitsounding like I mentioned in Easy diff.
Beat placements sound good. Just only some spacings and hitsounds that you might have missed.

Hard
OD6 could be fitting for this diff. Alright.
00:20:994 (2,3) - spacing Distance snapping kept throwing this here, so I manually moved it.
00:23:580 (1) - actually spacing is correct, but you can see that it almost touches 00:23:063 (7) - that doesn't make it look good. I see what you are saying. I changed this.
00:24:356 (4,5) - can improve about this , You may just reduce slider's length, and add a note after that. Alright, I have done this.
Your slider actually follows vocal but you can shorten it a bit just to make it not too long like this.
01:12:201 (7,8) - similar to above Also did this.
01:19:442 (6) - new combo Done.
01:20:735 (1) - silenced notes like I mentioned in Easy diff.

Insane
HP Drain is way too high compare to the song. HP7 could be done better for it. Okay.
Let me be honest about it.
00:09:097 (6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really think things like these (5 streams) can work well with this song. This song doesn't provide any beat on such points.
btw, there are some points that you can use these streams as well. Example are 00:27:977 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , 00:58:752 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) -
Something that is on peaked parts, before choruses, or alike. But for normal parts, they shouldn't be overdone like these.

Thanks for being honest about this, instead of saying something like "THIS IS BAD REMAP. LOL" I'll see what I can do here, across this entire difficulty. I really like it as it is right now, and I'm afraid if I change it without the streams, it will be too much like Hard is mapped, currently.

And about 00:02:761 (1,2) - , Silenced hitsounds could be done well if music on certain points sound nothing (which you don't really need to even add notes) I suggest you use your default hitsounds as intended in most of parts in this song. Only Spinner end that I think silenced hitsound is nice and rankable. Silenced note is unrankable. Removed. I just made the hit sounds 30% instead.
00:38:580 (8,1) - this spacing is kind of unfitting. The last mod pointed this out, so yes. This was fixed.
Not really need to point out much. Only stream like 1,2,3,4,5 . You can remove 2 and 4 to make everything not too overmapped. And some sliders can be done better once you use Grid Size : Tiny as I mentioned in General. Going to see if I can come up with anything for Insane, without making it too much like Hard. I'll work on the sliders in this difficulty, in the mean time.

Good luck for your map. ! :)
Thanks for your, very large, mod! I've corrected almost everything. Insane will probably have to be remapped, but I really liked the streams in this map, I guess I'm the only one. D:
CrazyErrorMan
==Normal==
Between 01:02:108 and 01:18:660 is mostly just sliders.
I recommend that you use more circles between them
That is just my opinion.
That's all I've got to say for now.
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

CrazyErrorMan wrote:

==Normal==
Between 01:02:108 and 01:18:660 is mostly just sliders.
I recommend that you use more circles between them I didn't really do this, but I have removed some sliders and replaced with double circles.
That is just my opinion.
That's all I've got to say for now.
Thanks for your mod!
Alarido
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General Things

♥ Easy diff is nice.

[Normal]
* This diff feels need a Hard work on placements and spacing too :s
00:09:350 (1) - Make it like this >> http://puu.sh/3UHh6.jpg
00:10:384 (2) - Move to x:232 y:104
00:11:419 (3) - Move to x:104 y:268 and then make the rotate like below:
00:40:126 (4,5) - NO! It's very confusing to read :( Make them better like >> http://puu.sh/3UHve.jpg
01:05:212 (3,1) - Try avoid these kind of overlaps.

[Hard]
01:26:677 (3) - Make it like >> http://puu.sh/3UHIE.jpg
01:27:453 (4) - Move to x:232 y:184

[Insane]
♥ Nice too.

That's it ^^

Hope to get ranked soon !!!!

Att.
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General Things (:

♥ Easy diff is nice. Good to hear!

[Normal]
* This diff feels need a Hard work on placements and spacing too :s Hmm. Really? I'll consider this. No one else seemed to say anything about this.
00:09:350 (1) - Make it like this >> http://puu.sh/3UHh6.jpg Okay.
00:10:384 (2) - Move to x:232 y:104 Done.
00:11:419 (3) - Move to x:104 y:268 and then make the rotate like below: Okay.
00:40:126 (4,5) - NO! It's very confusing to read :( Make them better like >> http://puu.sh/3UHve.jpg Ew. Yeah this is bad. I don't know why no one said anything about this before. I did what you recommended, and fixed a few notes after to avoid ugly overlaps.
01:05:212 (3,1) - Try avoid these kind of overlaps. Fixed this, and 4 or 5 notes have been moved after this to compensate.

[Hard]
01:26:677 (3) - Make it like >> http://puu.sh/3UHIE.jpg Alright.
01:27:453 (4) - Move to x:232 y:184 I actually moved it too this exact location after the mod before this, before I even read this. Hehe.

[Insane]
♥ Nice too. Wow?! Really?! I just remapped this completely! Good to hear! (:


That's it ^^

Hope to get ranked soon !!!! Me too! I think it will be a few more weeks though! (:

Att.
Thanks for your mod!
Shohei Ohtani
Oh hey it's this map

Overall:
Could someone get me the source for the title? Just to make sure :P

Do you really need an insane? I just decided to skim down the hard diff after modding the insane diff, and I notice that both diffs are VERY similar. They share the same SV and are pretty much follow the same 1/2 pattern (Especially in the chorus). I feel like this might be one of those maps that doesn't need an Insane. Idunno, the insane diff is fine with some working, but it's so similar to the hard diff that I'm contemplating if it should be there at all. (However, I didn't catch it until after I modded insane, so you get a mod for it anyway :P.)

Add Totoro le Pacha to the tags

Insane:
Map itself is kind of linear-esque. Which is apparently common in newer mappers so um yeah.
00:02:108 - Add note here? Mostly because the rhythm that you're mapping starts here
00:03:919 (1) - Weird jump here o-o
00:05:729 (1) - ^. Like I understand it's probably because of the drum hit there but it still seems a bit big? Maybe consider making it a 1.3 jump or something like that? Idunno
00:16:333 (5) - Push in the midpoints. Right now the slider is cramped because they're so far out
00:22:540 (1) - Adjust this to avoid overlap?
00:39:091 (1) - Consider adjusting the placement on this so it flows a bit nicer. Right now my arm is wanting to go to the right of the screen but I'm forced to go down and to the left.
00:52:798 (5) - Have the repeat below the beginning of the slider rather than above it
01:11:160 (3) - Adjust this so it's below the slider rather than above it, for flow reasons
01:14:264 (5) - Adjust it so it's to the right of the slider rather than the left, so it flows better
01:20:729 (1) - Eep! Pretty big jump here for a part that's supposed to be softer

Hard:
00:02:108 - Map this part, since you did it on insane?
00:11:677 (6) - Adjust the sliderpoints until the slider border is hugging (4) (Right now, the end is overlapping the note a little bit)
00:16:850 (2) - I know there's no real way to avoid this without like remapping, so consider having MORE overlap on the sliderslide so it looks intentional
00:25:384 (6) - This note goes in the opposite way that my hand wants it to go. You can re-make (5) or you can adjust the pattern so (6) and stuff after it is on the other side, and then readjust things until you catch up with the rest of the map owo
00:37:540 (3) - This curve is so unnoticable that it just looks like a mistake atm
00:47:367 (3) - It might be better to not have this stack with (1)
00:54:608 (4) - Is this misplaced? try having this in the regular Distance Spacing
01:14:264 (4) - Keep this note's spacing consistent :3
01:24:350 (7) - Adjust this so there isn't overlap

Normal:
00:02:108 - Start here?
00:10:384 (2) - I like how you have the pattern with (3) there. However, consider doing something with (1) too. Since that's the first to come up, (2) looks wrong
00:16:074 (2) - Add clap
00:25:902 (3) - Keep spacing consistent, especially in a normal
00:31:074 (3) - Copy-Paste (2) and make it symmetrical like that instead of doing it manually
00:47:367 (3) - Big jumps like this are frowned upon in normals

Easy:
00:02:108 - Start here?
Kawaii

I'd suggest talking to people about the Hard/Insane thing if you still want to run both or if you just wanna have Hard

Also, bug people about modding the taiko map :P. Take a look in the taiko subforum and look at the "Taiko Modders List." (Make sure to read the rules first tho because otherwise they'll be sad). Especially since Totoro is just starting too, it's important to get a decent amount of mods for taiko too :3.

I see potential with this map. Uguu.
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

CDFA wrote:

Oh hey it's this map Oh yes. This map. It's had it's fair share of problems, for sure. (:

Overall:
Could someone get me the source for the title? Just to make sure :P You mean to like, verify the name? Google-ing the title should do the trick.

Do you really need an insane? I just decided to skim down the hard diff after modding the insane diff, and I notice that both diffs are VERY similar. They share the same SV and are pretty much follow the same 1/2 pattern (Especially in the chorus). I feel like this might be one of those maps that doesn't need an Insane. Idunno, the insane diff is fine with some working, but it's so similar to the hard diff that I'm contemplating if it should be there at all. (However, I didn't catch it until after I modded insane, so you get a mod for it anyway :P.)

You make a really good point here, actually. Since Insane, literally 2 or 3 mods before this one, had multiple streams and was completely different overall. Then, I was told the map didn't really fit the song very well. So, after that, I completely remapped, and now I agree. It really does seem like a Hard difficulty. I think I will actually remove insane and if I can find some other way to change it so it isn't EXACTLY like hard, then I'll remap and add it.

Add Totoro le Pacha to the tags Okay, done.

Insane:
Map itself is kind of linear-esque. Which is apparently common in newer mappers so um yeah.
00:02:108 - Add note here? Mostly because the rhythm that you're mapping starts here
00:03:919 (1) - Weird jump here o-o
00:05:729 (1) - ^. Like I understand it's probably because of the drum hit there but it still seems a bit big? Maybe consider making it a 1.3 jump or something like that? Idunno
00:16:333 (5) - Push in the midpoints. Right now the slider is cramped because they're so far out
00:22:540 (1) - Adjust this to avoid overlap?
00:39:091 (1) - Consider adjusting the placement on this so it flows a bit nicer. Right now my arm is wanting to go to the right of the screen but I'm forced to go down and to the left.
00:52:798 (5) - Have the repeat below the beginning of the slider rather than above it
01:11:160 (3) - Adjust this so it's below the slider rather than above it, for flow reasons
01:14:264 (5) - Adjust it so it's to the right of the slider rather than the left, so it flows better
01:20:729 (1) - Eep! Pretty big jump here for a part that's supposed to be softer

Again, I am removing this difficulty, for now.

Hard:
00:02:108 - Map this part, since you did it on insane? Since Insane was removed, I don't think this matters too much. However, I did this anyways.
00:11:677 (6) - Adjust the sliderpoints until the slider border is hugging (4) (Right now, the end is overlapping the note a little bit) Fixed.
00:16:850 (2) - I know there's no real way to avoid this without like remapping, so consider having MORE overlap on the sliderslide so it looks intentional I actually remapped this and the notes around this, and it didn't screw with the distance spacing. So I guess that worked out.
00:25:384 (6) - This note goes in the opposite way that my hand wants it to go. You can re-make (5) or you can adjust the pattern so (6) and stuff after it is on the other side, and then readjust things until you catch up with the rest of the map owo I bascially vertical flipped this and remapped the notes around it.
00:37:540 (3) - This curve is so unnoticable that it just looks like a mistake atm I honestly think this was a mistake. Heh.
00:47:367 (3) - It might be better to not have this stack with (1) Okay. I moved 3, and then moved the notes after to compensate for the change.
00:54:608 (4) - Is this misplaced? try having this in the regular Distance Spacing Yes, it was. :3
01:14:264 (4) - Keep this note's spacing consistent :3 Done.
01:24:350 (7) - Adjust this so there isn't overlap Fixed.

Normal:
00:02:108 - Start here? Okay.
00:10:384 (2) - I like how you have the pattern with (3) there. However, consider doing something with (1) too. Since that's the first to come up, (2) looks wrong some mods ago, someone said the EXACT oppisite. I reverted the change.
00:16:074 (2) - Add clap Fixed.
00:25:902 (3) - Keep spacing consistent, especially in a normal Done.
00:31:074 (3) - Copy-Paste (2) and make it symmetrical like that instead of doing it manually I did this for most of the map, I don't know why I didn't do that here. O.o
00:47:367 (3) - Big jumps like this are frowned upon in normals I have no clue why this was even here to begin with. I fixed it, though. :D

Easy:
00:02:108 - Start here? Hmm. It's a little bit different from the last 2 difficulties, for the sake of staying on beat, but yeah, started a bit earlier.
Kawaii

I'd suggest talking to people about the Hard/Insane thing if you still want to run both or if you just wanna have Hard :3

Also, bug people about modding the taiko map :P. Take a look in the taiko subforum and look at the "Taiko Modders List." (Make sure to read the rules first tho because otherwise they'll be sad). Especially since Totoro is just starting too, it's important to get a decent amount of mods for taiko too :3. I think there are one or two mods I posted who will be modding Taiko. I will do this at some point soon, though.

I see potential with this map. Uguu.Wahoo!
Thanks for your very large and helpful mod! Good luck with your gig at some point in the future! :D
thzz
Hi~ from my queue

[Easy]
  1. You should try to keep same Distance spacing. Normally, you have to avoid from random spacing in Normal/Easy dif.
  2. 00:03:660 (1) - Make symmetry with Y-axis.
  3. 00:04:695 (2) - ^
  4. 00:06:246 (3,4,1,2,3) - Why are you using different shape? You should integrate all slider's shape by using Ctrl+C/V/G/H/J imo.
  5. 00:12:453 - Symbal is ringing at here, so I think you may add note.
  6. 00:45:557 - ^
  7. 00:57:971 - Begin break from here?
    1. 01:01:591 (1) - Remove finish.
    2. 01:02:108 (2) - Add finish.
[Normal]
  1. Please avoid from random spacing~
  2. 00:12:453 (1) - Add finish on head.
  3. 00:15:557 - You should add note here to keep beat for player imo.
  4. 00:18:660 - ^
  5. 00:45:557 (1) - Add finish on head.
  6. 00:54:867 (4) - Remove finish.
  7. 00:56:936 (2) - ^
  8. 00:57:971 - Begin break from here?
    1. 01:01:591 (1) - Remove finish.
    2. 01:02:108 (2) - Add finish.
  9. 01:10:384 (1) - Add finish on head.
[Hard]
  1. 00:39:091 (7) - How about to stack with 00:38:315 (5) - ?
  2. 00:45:557 (6) - Too near with 00:44:781 (5) - imo. I recomment taking more spacing and move it like this.
  3. 00:53:574 - I think you should put a note here. I suggest like this rhythm.
  4. 01:04:436 (3) - Ctrl+G? Just a suggestion.
  5. 01:20:729 (1) - Keep x0.9 spacing?
[Pachanagi]
  1. 00:02:108 (1) - change to small d. There're not any strong sounds.
  2. 00:23:574 - add a note? to follow vocal.
  3. 00:31:850 - ^
  4. 00:35:988 - ^
  5. 00:40:126 - ^
  6. 00:44:264 - ^
  7. 00:46:850 (122,123,124,125) - ddk--d => dkd--k
  8. 00:50:729 (130,131,132,133) - dkdd => ddkd
    1. 01:29:005 (63) - Remove this.
    2. 01:29:264 (1) - move to 01:29:005 -
[Pachanagi-no-Okami]
  1. 00:02:108 (1) - change to small d. There're not any strong sounds.
  2. 00:20:729 (62) - ^
  3. 00:22:540 (69) - change to small k. The reason is same as avobe.
  4. 00:37:281 (123) - change to small d. unrankable!
  5. 00:39:091 (132) - change to small k.
  6. 01:25:902 (298) - ^
    1. 01:29:005 (306) - Remove this.
    2. 01:29:134 (1) - move to 01:29:005 -
Good Luck~ ;)
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

Cah-m wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

[Easy]
  1. You should try to keep same Distance spacing. Normally, you have to avoid from random spacing in Normal/Easy dif. Okay. I went back and re-did the spacing for most of the chart.
  2. 00:03:660 (1) - Make symmetry with Y-axis. Okay. I did this.
  3. 00:04:695 (2) - ^
  4. 00:06:246 (3,4,1,2,3) - Why are you using different shape? You should integrate all slider's shape by using Ctrl+C/V/G/H/J imo. These are the same shape. Except for one of the notes. The reason that one note is a different shape is because on of the mods thought the same shape was hard to read for an easy difficulty.
  5. 00:12:453 - Symbal is ringing at here, so I think you may add note. Okay.
  6. 00:45:557 - ^
  7. 00:57:971 - Begin break from here? I don't think this really changes too much.
    1. 01:01:591 (1) - Remove finish.
    2. 01:02:108 (2) - Add finish.
I tried this, it just sounds weird and it doesn't fit in my opinion.

[Normal]
  1. Please avoid from random spacing~ The spacing on this map was pretty bad, wasn't it?
  2. 00:12:453 (1) - Add finish on head. Okay.
  3. 00:15:557 - You should add note here to keep beat for player imo. Okay.
  4. 00:18:660 - ^ Okay.
  5. 00:45:557 (1) - Add finish on head. Okay.
  6. 00:54:867 (4) - Remove finish. Done.
  7. 00:56:936 (2) - ^ Done.
  8. 00:57:971 - Begin break from here? Again, I don't think it makes too much of a difference.
    1. 01:01:591 (1) - Remove finish. View Easy's comment.
    2. 01:02:108 (2) - Add finish.
  9. 01:10:384 (1) - Add finish on head.
Okay.

[Hard]
  1. 00:39:091 (7) - How about to stack with 00:38:315 (5) - ? I think this was unintentional.
  2. 00:45:557 (6) - Too near with 00:44:781 (5) - imo. I recomment taking more spacing and move it like this. Okay.
  3. 00:53:574 - I think you should put a note here. I suggest like this rhythm. Okay.
  4. 01:04:436 (3) - Ctrl+G? Just a suggestion. I like this better, actually.
  5. 01:20:729 (1) - Keep x0.9 spacing?
I think that was unintentional.

I messaged Pancha.

[Pachanagi]
  1. 00:02:108 (1) - change to small d. There're not any strong sounds.
  2. 00:23:574 - add a note? to follow vocal.
  3. 00:31:850 - ^
  4. 00:35:988 - ^
  5. 00:40:126 - ^
  6. 00:44:264 - ^
  7. 00:46:850 (122,123,124,125) - ddk--d => dkd--k
  8. 00:50:729 (130,131,132,133) - dkdd => ddkd
    1. 01:29:005 (63) - Remove this.
    2. 01:29:264 (1) - move to 01:29:005 -
[Pachanagi-no-Okami]
  1. 00:02:108 (1) - change to small d. There're not any strong sounds.
  2. 00:20:729 (62) - ^
  3. 00:22:540 (69) - change to small k. The reason is same as avobe.
  4. 00:37:281 (123) - change to small d. unrankable!
  5. 00:39:091 (132) - change to small k.
  6. 01:25:902 (298) - ^
    1. 01:29:005 (306) - Remove this.
    2. 01:29:134 (1) - move to 01:29:005 -
Good Luck~ ;)
Thanks for your mod!
sheela
[General]
The kiai time should end at 01:20:729 I think.
Uncheck the Epilepsy Warning options. There's no flash, pulse or anything.

[Easy]
00:24:350 (1) - Remove new combo and move the new combo to 00:25:384 (2)
00:03:660 (1) - Curve the slider? Like a soft curve not a hard curve (I don't know if it called like this).

[Normal]
00:24:867 (2) - Move the little red square to x:380 y:284?
00:34:177 (3) - New combo?
00:53:833 (3) - Something like 00:24:867 (2)

[Hard]
00:16:850 (2) - The slider is outside of the mapset.
01:02:108 (2) - New combo?

Good Luck!
MFZ
From your modding queue :3

[Easy]
00:19:695 - add a note here
00:57:453 (1) - reNC
01:17:108 (2) - slider would fit the rhythm better

Everything else looks good
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[Normal]
00:15:557 (1,2,3) - I really don't like this overlap, consider moving (1) to x:272 y:372
00:19:695 (1) - reNC
00:43:488 (3) - remove this and put a circle on a previous red tick(00:43:229) and a 1/1 slider on the next red tick(00:43:746)

[]

Can't mod taiko, sorry ><

[Hard]
00:30:815 (1) - reNC
00:32:884 (8) - NC
00:33:919 (1) - reNC
00:58:746 - add a circle here

[]
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

sheela901 wrote:

[General]
The kiai time should end at 01:20:729 I think. I might change this later, but as of right now, it's not a big deal, the change is so small it won't affect the playing of the chart in anyway.
Uncheck the Epilepsy Warning options. There's no flash, pulse or anything. I disagree, the chorus of this video can get really trippy. I'll still consider this though.

[Easy]
00:24:350 (1) - Remove new combo and move the new combo to 00:25:384 (2) Eh. Alright.
00:03:660 (1) - Curve the slider? Like a soft curve not a hard curve (I don't know if it called like this). Okay.

[Normal]
00:24:867 (2) - Move the little red square to x:380 y:284? Okay.
00:34:177 (3) - New combo? Alright.
00:53:833 (3) - Something like 00:24:867 (2) This sounds good on paper, but the earlier slider is too big, and making this shape doesn't translate well. I just made the slider curved instead.

[Hard]
00:16:850 (2) - The slider is outside of the mapset. Just curious, did you play the song or just watch it? It looks bad in the editor, but it's fine if you play it. I'll consider this, but for now I'm going to leave as it is.
01:02:108 (2) - New combo? Eh. I don't think that really fits there too well.

Good Luck!
Thanks for your mod!
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

MFZ wrote:

From your modding queue :3

[Easy]
00:19:695 - add a note here Okay.
00:57:453 (1) - reNC Okay.
01:17:108 (2) - slider would fit the rhythm better You think? Alright. I'll try it out.

Everything else looks good (:
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[Normal]
00:15:557 (1,2,3) - I really don't like this overlap, consider moving (1) to x:272 y:372 Hmm. What you suggested I think makes the map worse. I've re-worked this whole section though, so the overlap doesn't occur.
00:19:695 (1) - reNC Okay.
00:43:488 (3) - remove this and put a circle on a previous red tick(00:43:229) and a 1/1 slider on the next red tick(00:43:746) Interesting suggestion. I think I've applied this as you wanted me to.

[]

Can't mod taiko, sorry >< No problem. (:

[Hard]
00:30:815 (1) - reNC Okay.
00:32:884 (8) - NC Okay.
00:33:919 (1) - reNC Eh. Nah. This is okay.
00:58:746 - add a circle here I feel like adding a circle here would ruin the beat for the few upcoming notes.

[]
Thanks for your mod! Your mod will come within a few days are so. I'm busy this week. School starts soon. ):
Totoro le Pacha

Cah-m wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

[Pachanagi]
  1. 00:02:108 (1) - change to small d. There're not any strong sounds. Done
  2. 00:23:574 - add a note? to follow vocal. Done, but I don't know... I think it makes the map harder.
  3. 00:31:850 - ^ Same
  4. 00:35:988 - ^
  5. 00:40:126 - ^
  6. 00:44:264 - ^
  7. 00:46:850 (122,123,124,125) - ddk--d => dkd--k I think it follows better the vocals the way it already is
  8. 00:50:729 (130,131,132,133) - dkdd => ddkd Done
    1. 01:29:005 (63) - Remove this. Done
    2. 01:29:264 (1) - move to 01:29:005 -
Done

[Pachanagi-no-Okami]
  1. 00:02:108 (1) - change to small d. There're not any strong sounds.
  2. 00:20:729 (62) - ^
  3. 00:22:540 (69) - change to small k. The reason is same as avobe.
  4. 00:37:281 (123) - change to small d. unrankable!
  5. 00:39:091 (132) - change to small k.
  6. 01:25:902 (298) - ^
    1. 01:29:005 (306) - Remove this.
    2. 01:29:134 (1) - move to 01:29:005 -
Done all the mods
Thanks for your very helpful mod ! :]
jtd1
M4M from your queue

General

Your Taiko difficulties have different 'Letterbox in breaks' to your osu! difficulties. I don't actually know whether this makes a difference or not, but AiMod shows it as a problem, so it's probably best to fix it. Go into The Notepad files of the Taiko difficulties and change it from 0 to 1. Save it and then F5 the beatmap list and it should be fixed.

Easy

00:17:115 (1) - Move to x:256 y:280
00:31:595 (3) - Move to x:512 y:60
00:34:690 (2) - Maybe move to y:244 ? Might look a bit better imo
00:36:770 (1) - Change x co-ordinate to x:300
00:42:965 (1) - Change y-co-ordinate to y:204
00:51:250 (2) - Change y co-ordinate to y:348

Normal

00:20:210 (5) - Move to x:328 y:136
00:35:208 (3) - Change y co-ordinate to y:120
00:49:167 (1) - Change x co-ordinate to x:76
00:49:697 (2) - Change x co-ordinate to x:184
00:53:320 (2) - Change y co-ordinate to y:200
00:55:380 (5) - Change y co-ordinate to y:248
00:57:465 (3) - Change x co-ordinate to x:52

Pachanagi and Pachanagi-no-Okami

Check AiMod, says a Kiai isn't snapped and something about slider velocity.
I can't mod Taiko

Hard

00:13:500 (3) - Change x co-ordinate to x:264
00:15:265 (7) - Change y co-ordinate to y:256
00:57:707 (6) - Change x co-ordinate to x:288
00:58:437 (9) - Change y co-ordinate to y:220

That's all from me, good luck with ranking this! :D
pife1
Hi:
Your map is very well
I am sorry but I don't play taiko
The KIAI turn off 01:07:281 and return or turn on 01:10:384

In Hard
00:27:971 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - In my opinion these notes affect the map's flow because all of the map have a circle or two circles and sliders successively but suddenly appear these notes, I advise remove and add a slider repetitive like this


Nice Song :)
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

jtd1 wrote:

M4M from your queue

General

Your Taiko difficulties have different 'Letterbox in breaks' to your osu! difficulties. I don't actually know whether this makes a difference or not, but AiMod shows it as a problem, so it's probably best to fix it. Go into The Notepad files of the Taiko difficulties and change it from 0 to 1. Save it and then F5 the beatmap list and it should be fixed. Taiko should never have letterbox during breaks. So if I were to enable letter box, it would just yell at me for doing that.

Easy

00:17:115 (1) - Move to x:256 y:280 Okay.
00:31:595 (3) - Move to x:512 y:60 Done.
00:34:690 (2) - Maybe move to y:244 ? Might look a bit better imo I agree. Done.
00:36:770 (1) - Change x co-ordinate to x:300 Okay.
00:42:965 (1) - Change y-co-ordinate to y:204 Mmkay.
00:51:250 (2) - Change y co-ordinate to y:348 Alright.

Normal

00:20:210 (5) - Move to x:328 y:136 Done.
00:35:208 (3) - Change y co-ordinate to y:120 Okay.
00:49:167 (1) - Change x co-ordinate to x:76 Alright.
00:49:697 (2) - Change x co-ordinate to x:184 Done.
00:53:320 (2) - Change y co-ordinate to y:200 Done.
00:55:380 (5) - Change y co-ordinate to y:248 Done.
00:57:465 (3) - Change x co-ordinate to x:52 Okay.

Pachanagi and Pachanagi-no-Okami

Check AiMod, says a Kiai isn't snapped and something about slider velocity. AiMod is weird sometimes. I've experimented with all of these errors before. If I were to change Kiai time to snap it, it would be different from the other maps, and if I were to change it on the other maps to make it the same, the Kiai time wouldn't be snapped on the other maps. As for the slider velocity, I have no idea why that error is there. The velocity is 1.4 or 1.6 from what I was looking at.
I can't mod Taiko

Hard

00:13:500 (3) - Change x co-ordinate to x:264 Okay.
00:15:265 (7) - Change y co-ordinate to y:256 Okay.
00:57:707 (6) - Change x co-ordinate to x:288 Okay.
00:58:437 (9) - Change y co-ordinate to y:220 Okay.

That's all from me, good luck with ranking this! :D
Thanks for your mod!
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

pife1 wrote:

Hi:
Your map is very well
I am sorry but I don't play taiko
The KIAI turn off 01:07:281 and return or turn on 01:10:384 Hmmm. This is an interesting suggestion. I'll consider it, but I think this would REALLY break the flow/be weird for the Taiko maps.

In Hard
00:27:971 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - In my opinion these notes affect the map's flow because all of the map have a circle or two circles and sliders successively but suddenly appear these notes, I advise remove and add a slider repetitive like this. It was like this until recently, but someone stated before that triplets would work here, I don't think it really breaks the beat either. Again, I'll consider this, but I'm going to wait for a few more mods suggestions on this.


Nice Song :) Thank you. (:
Thanks for your mod!
Kirin
Easy
00:31:591 (3) Object out of screen at least I think :\
00:40:902 (2) ^
00:44:005 (2) ^

Normal
Nothing wrong c:

Hard
00:16:850 (2) Object out of screen at least I think :\
00:27:712 (1) ^
01:10:643 (3) ^

For the timing i think it's all Ok btw good song :D
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

MasterKirin wrote:

Easy
00:31:591 (3) Object out of screen at least I think :\ Changed all of these notes, so that they aren't out of screen.
00:40:902 (2) ^
00:44:005 (2) ^

Normal
Nothing wrong c:

Hard
00:16:850 (2) Object out of screen at least I think :\ 2 or 3 mods ago, someone told me to move this here, and since I have done so, I've received mods telling me i'ts out of screen, it's not that bad at all if you play the song, but regardless, I've moved this.
00:27:712 (1) ^ There was an easy fix for this circle, just moved it down, and all distance spacing was kept. So I did that.
01:10:643 (3) ^ This one is okay, no need to fix.

For the timing i think it's all Ok btw good song :D
Thanks for your mod! If I can make a suggestion for the future, make sure you play the songs, and not just watch them in the editor. A lot of this is off the screen and this is on the screen can be easily seen if you're playing the song. The editor isn't the best judge for that.
Kirin

Chronotakular wrote:

MasterKirin wrote:

Easy
00:31:591 (3) Object out of screen at least I think :\ Changed all of these notes, so that they aren't out of screen.
00:40:902 (2) ^
00:44:005 (2) ^

Normal
Nothing wrong c:

Hard
00:16:850 (2) Object out of screen at least I think :\ 2 or 3 mods ago, someone told me to move this here, and since I have done so, I've received mods telling me i'ts out of screen, it's not that bad at all if you play the song, but regardless, I've moved this.
00:27:712 (1) ^ There was an easy fix for this circle, just moved it down, and all distance spacing was kept. So I did that.
01:10:643 (3) ^ This one is okay, no need to fix.

For the timing i think it's all Ok btw good song :D
Thanks for your mod! If I can make a suggestion for the future, make sure you play the songs, and not just watch them in the editor. A lot of this is off the screen and this is on the screen can be easily seen if you're playing the song. The editor isn't the best judge for that.
I played the song lel
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

MasterKirin wrote:

I played the song lel
Okay, sorry. "Lel" :P
Awaken
Sorry I can only mod Standard diffs
Don't mind my poor English Orz

[Hard]
some sliders seems not beautiful enough ..
SPOILER
00:24:608 (5) -
00:32:884 (5) -
00:18:919 (1) - maybe stack with 00:17:626 (4) this?
00:39:091 (7) - this slider doesn't blancket well with 00:39:867 (8) -
01:17:626 (5) - maybe it can be better
01:19:695 (2) - this one seems not stack with 01:17:626 (5) they have differences with 0.01
01:26:677 (3) - try ctrl+g . That makes flow better

[Normal]
maybe tickrate 1 is enough
HP-1 OD-1
00:23:833 (1) - maybe ctrl+g?
00:29:264 (4) - this one doesn't stack with 00:28:746 (3)'s end
01:06:246 (1,3) - exchange NC

[Easy]
the blanckets seem few..maybe use more to make it beautiful
00:15:040 (1) - no NC
00:49:177 (3) - I don't think this circle should be overlay

That's all :)
Good Luck~

my map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/113626
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

Awaken wrote:

Sorry I can only mod Standard diffs
Don't mind my poor English Orz

[Hard]
some sliders seems not beautiful enough .. Honestly, both these sliders are long, but they don't really look ugly to me.
SPOILER
00:24:608 (5) -
00:32:884 (5) -
00:18:919 (1) - maybe stack with 00:17:626 (4) this? Okay.
00:39:091 (7) - this slider doesn't blancket well with 00:39:867 (8) - Changed.
01:17:626 (5) - maybe it can be better I changed this note. Made it a little more swirly. Not what you did though, from my point of view, that didn't change anything.
01:19:695 (2) - this one seems not stack with 01:17:626 (5) they have differences with 0.01 Stacked.
01:26:677 (3) - try ctrl+g . That makes flow better It adds a jump, but alright. I added it.

[Normal]
maybe tickrate 1 is enough Tickrate is 2 in other songs, leaving it at 2 for consistency.
HP-1 OD-1 I believe a BAT told me what's what with the difficulty settings really early on. I'm not going to mess with this.
00:23:833 (1) - maybe ctrl+g? Nah, that spacing would be too intense.
00:29:264 (4) - this one doesn't stack with 00:28:746 (3)'s end You are referring to a note that doesn't exist?
01:06:246 (1,3) - exchange NC Ehhh. I don't think this matters. If it clearly stuck to the beat, I would do it, but I don't think it does, not more than the previous layout of combos anyways.

[Easy]
the blanckets seem few..maybe use more to make it beautiful I'll consider it, although I might need some examples as to where to put them, instead of just randomly placing them.
00:15:040 (1) - no NC Okay.
00:49:177 (3) - I don't think this circle should be overlay Alright. Moved slightly.

That's all :)
Good Luck~

my map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/113626
I'm assuming you wanted a Mod4Mod, even though you didn't post on the queue or send me a message that you wanted your map modded. The only thing you did was post a link at the end of this post. Regardless, thanks for your mod!
Awaken

Chronotakular wrote:

Awaken wrote:

Sorry I can only mod Standard diffs
Don't mind my poor English Orz

[Hard]
some sliders seems not beautiful enough .. Honestly, both these sliders are long, but they don't really look ugly to me.
SPOILER
00:24:608 (5) -
00:32:884 (5) -
00:18:919 (1) - maybe stack with 00:17:626 (4) this? Okay.
00:39:091 (7) - this slider doesn't blancket well with 00:39:867 (8) - Changed.
01:17:626 (5) - maybe it can be better I changed this note. Made it a little more swirly. Not what you did though, from my point of view, that didn't change anything.
01:19:695 (2) - this one seems not stack with 01:17:626 (5) they have differences with 0.01 Stacked.
01:26:677 (3) - try ctrl+g . That makes flow better It adds a jump, but alright. I added it.

[Normal]
maybe tickrate 1 is enough Tickrate is 2 in other songs, leaving it at 2 for consistency.
HP-1 OD-1 I believe a BAT told me what's what with the difficulty settings really early on. I'm not going to mess with this.
00:23:833 (1) - maybe ctrl+g? Nah, that spacing would be too intense.
00:29:264 (4) - this one doesn't stack with 00:28:746 (3)'s end You are referring to a note that doesn't exist?
01:06:246 (1,3) - exchange NC Ehhh. I don't think this matters. If it clearly stuck to the beat, I would do it, but I don't think it does, not more than the previous layout of combos anyways.

[Easy]
the blanckets seem few..maybe use more to make it beautiful I'll consider it, although I might need some examples as to where to put them, instead of just randomly placing them.
00:15:040 (1) - no NC Okay.
00:49:177 (3) - I don't think this circle should be overlay Alright. Moved slightly.

That's all :)
Good Luck~

my map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/113626
I'm assuming you wanted a Mod4Mod, even though you didn't post on the queue or send me a message that you wanted your map modded. The only thing you did was post a link at the end of this post. Regardless, thanks for your mod!
umm..ok i'll post in your queue :?
lupcha
Hey, M4M Request here! ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ

General

I have a few suggestions for the volume! ~
  1. 00:06:764 (3) - increase the volume to ~ 60% maybe?
  2. 00:12:453 (1) - decrease the volume to ~ 40% maybe?
  3. 00:29:005 (8) - increase the volume to ~ 50% again?
  4. 00:37:281 (1) - ^ to ~ 60% maybe?
  5. 00:45:557 (6) - decrease the volume to ~ 40% maybe?
  6. 00:57:971 (1) - ^ to 20% maybe?
  7. 01:02:108 (2) - increase the volume to ~ 60% maybe?
  8. 01:09:608 (7) - ^ to ~ 70% maybe?
  9. uhm, I think the kiai time should start and end on the downbeat (or at least the white line), so I would end it at 01:20:729 (1). And the hitsounds in Hard could be applied to the other Diffs as well.

Hard

Hitsounds
  1. 00:06:246 (2) - add a Finish?
  2. 00:10:384 (2) - ^
  3. 00:12:453 (1) - add a Finish (with normal sampleset) at the start?
  4. 00:16:591 (1) - add a Finish at the start?
  5. 00:22:798 (6) - add a Finish?
  6. 00:26:936 (4) - ^
  7. 00:37:281 (1) - maybe remove the whistle here and add a Finish (with normal sampleset)?
  8. 00:43:488 (12) - add a Finish?
  9. 00:57:712 (6) - I would remove the Finish here and add it here 00:57:971 (7) - instead.
  10. 01:02:108 (2) - add a Finish?
  11. 01:04:177 (9) - ^
  12. 01:08:315 (2) - ^
  13. 01:14:522 (5) - add a Finish (with normal sampleset) at the start?
  14. 01:20:729 (1) - add a Finish?
  15. 01:24:867 (1) - ^ at the start?
  1. 00:06:505 (3) - I would change it to something like this. You can hear that the music gets louder at 00:06:764, but with the current (3) it would be at the slider end and because of that it's not really emphasized.
  2. 00:08:315 (2) - I think this rhythm would be more fitting.
  3. 00:10:643 (3) - ^ maybe something like this?
  4. 00:13:488 (3) - move this note a bit to the right so that it's completly stacked with (1)'s slider end.
  5. 00:13:746 (4) - move this slider a little so that it doesn't touch the approach circle from the previous note (nazi =v=).
  6. 00:14:264 (5) - move this slider a little for a better blanket?
  7. 00:15:040 (6) - 00:18:402 (6) a really personal suggestion for the look. I think something like this would just look a bit better.
  8. 00:17:884 (5) - if you don't want to change anything mayor here, I would at least move this slider a little so that it doesn't touch any previous notes (nazi =v=).
  9. 00:21:505 (3) - 00:21:764 (4) try to make a better blanket? (nazi =v=)
  10. 00:25:643 (1) - I would turn these two notes into one slider I think it fits the music more. ~
  11. 00:26:160 (2) - 00:26:677 (3) try to make a better blanket? (nazi =v=)
  12. 00:37:022 (1) - again, a more personal suggestion: maybe remove this note (there's nothing really in the music here) and add a little jump at 00:37:281 (9) to make this part more interesting?
  13. 00:38:574 (5) - 00:39:091 (6) try to make a better blanket? (nazi =v=)
  14. 00:41:160 (4) - 00:43:488 (2) hmm, I think something like this would be more fitting?
  15. 00:52:798 (1) - 00:53:574 (4) idk, I think this is personal, but a normal pattern like this would look better (for me at least)
  16. 00:57:971 (1) - maybe a NC because of the new "part" (and here's the downbeat too)? If yes, then I would remove the other NC at 00:59:005 (1) and add it here 01:00:040 (3).
  17. 01:02:108 (2) - rest of the kiai time: Hmm, the sliders + two notes patterns are fine for the most part, but I think the kiai time could be a bit more "exciting", especially because you don't have an Insane Diff so I think a bit more variety would be more fun! You could also consider to increase the SV maybe a bit in this section (to 1,2x for example), but the current one is fine as well.
  18. 01:03:402 (6) - 01:04:177 (9) maybe add a triplet here?
  19. 01:05:988 (1) - 01:06:246 (2) change the two notes into this?
  20. 01:08:315 (2) - 01:10:126 (1) I think this would be a nice part to increase the DS a bit, maybe to 1x - 1.2x to make it a bit more challenging (and to add some variety)?
  21. 01:09:350 (5) - 01:09:608 (7) add a triplet maybe?
  22. 01:13:488 (2) - 01:13:746 (3) try to make a better blanket? (nazi =v=)
  23. 01:14:522 (5) I think this would be more fitting?

Normal

  1. 00:08:315 (5) - I would try to avoid overlaps like this. I think a blanket would look much better here.
  2. 00:20:729 (1) - ^ move this slider a bit up to avoid touching the previous note?
  3. 00:22:798 (3) - 00:23:833 (1) I think this would sound better.
  4. 00:30:815 (3) - maybe add a note here?
  5. 00:42:453 (2) - 00:43:229 (3) try to make a better blanket? (nazi =v=)

Easy

  1. 00:19:695 (3) - 00:20:212 (4) try to make a better blanket? (nazi =v=) And move it a bit away so that it doesn't touch the previous slider.
  2. Yep, not much to point out here. Nice Diff!

Hope I could help a bit. Good Luck! O(≧∇≦)O
Yuzeyun
I'm addressing to Chrono, Totoro doesn't have internet for now, so don't worry about him being late.
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Totoro le Pacha
Thanks for prevent Chrono Gez, but I'm here, and it seems I have no mods uh
Yuzeyun
HOW COULD I KNOW FUUU
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

lupcha wrote:

Hey, M4M Request here! ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ Holy crap, this mod is huge, for it being this late in the game.

General

I have a few suggestions for the volume! ~
  1. 00:06:764 (3) - increase the volume to ~ 60% maybe?
  2. 00:12:453 (1) - decrease the volume to ~ 40% maybe?
  3. 00:29:005 (8) - increase the volume to ~ 50% again?
  4. 00:37:281 (1) - ^ to ~ 60% maybe?
  5. 00:45:557 (6) - decrease the volume to ~ 40% maybe?
  6. 00:57:971 (1) - ^ to 20% maybe?
  7. 01:02:108 (2) - increase the volume to ~ 60% maybe?
  8. 01:09:608 (7) - ^ to ~ 70% maybe?
  9. uhm, I think the kiai time should start and end on the downbeat (or at least the white line), so I would end it at 01:20:729 (1). And the hitsounds in Hard could be applied to the other Diffs as well.
I applied all of these changes, except I'm a little confused at the Hard hitsounds comment. All of the maps should have the same hit sounds, unless there are mistakes somewhere? OH. I see, the hitsound stuff in Hard you've added. GOT IT. (:

Hard

Hitsounds
  1. 00:06:246 (2) - add a Finish?
  2. 00:10:384 (2) - ^
  3. 00:12:453 (1) - add a Finish (with normal sampleset) at the start?
  4. 00:16:591 (1) - add a Finish at the start?
  5. 00:22:798 (6) - add a Finish?
  6. 00:26:936 (4) - ^ Didn't add this one, sounded weird.
  7. 00:37:281 (1) - maybe remove the whistle here and add a Finish (with normal sampleset)?
  8. 00:43:488 (12) - add a Finish?
  9. 00:57:712 (6) - I would remove the Finish here and add it here 00:57:971 (7) - instead.
  10. 01:02:108 (2) - add a Finish?
  11. 01:04:177 (9) - ^
  12. 01:08:315 (2) - ^
  13. 01:14:522 (5) - add a Finish (with normal sampleset) at the start?
  14. 01:20:729 (1) - add a Finish? Didn't add this one, sounded weird to me.
  15. 01:24:867 (1) - ^ at the start?I've done most of these, but some 1-2 of them sounded really weird to me, so I didn't do those. :P
  1. 00:06:505 (3) - I would change it to something like this. You can hear that the music gets louder at 00:06:764, but with the current (3) it would be at the slider end and because of that it's not really emphasized. I'm honestly confused by this. I see what you are saying, but I don't know how to go about fixing it, even with the image provided.
  2. 00:08:315 (2) - I think this rhythm would be more fitting. Didn't do exactly this, but I did something similar.
  3. 00:10:643 (3) - ^ maybe something like this? Me likey!
  4. 00:13:488 (3) - move this note a bit to the right so that it's completly stacked with (1)'s slider end. Okay.
  5. 00:13:746 (4) - move this slider a little so that it doesn't touch the approach circle from the previous note (nazi =v=). Done.
  6. 00:14:264 (5) - move this slider a little for a better blanket? Okay.
  7. 00:15:040 (6) - 00:18:402 (6) a really personal suggestion for the look. I think something like this would just look a bit better. We'll try it and see!
  8. 00:17:884 (5) - if you don't want to change anything mayor here, I would at least move this slider a little so that it doesn't touch any previous notes (nazi =v=).:3
  9. 00:21:505 (3) - 00:21:764 (4) try to make a better blanket? (nazi =v=) Done.
  10. 00:25:643 (1) - I would turn these two notes into one slider I think it fits the music more. ~Okay.
  11. 00:26:160 (2) - 00:26:677 (3) try to make a better blanket? Okay.(nazi =v=)
  12. 00:37:022 (1) - again, a more personal suggestion: maybe remove this note (there's nothing really in the music here) and add a little jump at 00:37:281 (9) to make this part more interesting?Cool.
  13. 00:38:574 (5) - 00:39:091 (6) try to make a better blanket? (nazi =v=)
  14. 00:41:160 (4) - 00:43:488 (2) hmm, I think something like this would be more fitting?Okeeyy.
  15. 00:52:798 (1) - 00:53:574 (4) idk, I think this is personal, but a normal pattern like this would look better (for me at least)Alright.
  16. 00:57:971 (1) - maybe a NC because of the new "part" (and here's the downbeat too)? If yes, then I would remove the other NC at 00:59:005 (1) and add it here 01:00:040 (3).Alright.
  17. 01:02:108 (2) - rest of the kiai time: Hmm, the sliders + two notes patterns are fine for the most part, but I think the kiai time could be a bit more "exciting", especially because you don't have an Insane Diff so I think a bit more variety would be more fun! You could also consider to increase the SV maybe a bit in this section (to 1,2x for example), but the current one is fine as well.I'll keep this in mind for future and see what I can do.
  18. 01:03:402 (6) - 01:04:177 (9) maybe add a triplet here?How could I say no to a triplet?
  19. 01:05:988 (1) - 01:06:246 (2) change the two notes into this?Alright.
  20. 01:08:315 (2) - 01:10:126 (1) I think this would be a nice part to increase the DS a bit, maybe to 1x - 1.2x to make it a bit more challenging (and to add some variety)? Okay.
  21. 01:09:350 (5) - 01:09:608 (7) add a triplet maybe?Made it a quintuplet, fits nicely, imo.
  22. 01:13:488 (2) - 01:13:746 (3) try to make a better blanket?Okay. (nazi =v=)
  23. 01:14:522 (5) I think this would be more fitting?Alrighty.

Normal

  1. 00:08:315 (5) - I would try to avoid overlaps like this. I think a blanket would look much better here. Okay.
  2. 00:20:729 (1) - ^ move this slider a bit up to avoid touching the previous note?I'll do this, but I know for a fact, someone will yell at me for having it out of the grid.
  3. 00:22:798 (3) - 00:23:833 (1) I think this would sound better.Alright.
  4. 00:30:815 (3) - maybe add a note here? Done.
  5. 00:42:453 (2) - 00:43:229 (3) try to make a better blanket? Mmkay.(nazi =v=)

Easy

  1. 00:19:695 (3) - 00:20:212 (4) try to make a better blanket? (nazi =v=) And move it a bit away so that it doesn't touch the previous slider. Hmm. I didn't do this, because of the giant jump it creates, and I think you should avoid that on easier difficulties.
  2. Yep, not much to point out here. Nice Diff! :D

Hope I could help a bit. Good Luck! O(≧∇≦)O
Thanks for your huge mod! Extremely helpful! Kudos well earned! Thanks sooo much!
Topic Starter
Chronotakular
Also, _Gezo_ and Pacha, you guys make me laugh. :D
Boncho
M4M

Persona 4 FTW :)

Hard

00:45:557 (4) - make this slider longer (til 00:46:074)
00:48:014 - remove the timing section here because you should not put it into the slider, recommend to use it at 00:48:919
00:47:367 (3) - make this slider longer ( until 00:48:919)

Quick summary of the 2 above

before : http://puu.sh/4l7pR.PNG

after : http://puu.sh/4l7rN.PNG


01:07:410 - I would put a note, but its your decision^^

Normal

00:20:729 (1) - add finish
00:45:560 - remove this timing section so the notes must be normal now

Easy

00:21:246 (1) - add finish
00:25:384 (1) - add finish
00:47:108 (2) - make this slider longer ( until 00:48:143)
00:45:557 - remove this timing section so the notes must be normal now
01:10:902 (2) - add finish

Nice map and good Luck! :D
lupcha

Chronotakular wrote:

lupcha wrote:

  1. 00:06:505 (3) - I would change it to something like this. You can hear that the music gets louder at 00:06:764, but with the current (3) it would be at the slider end and because of that it's not really emphasized. I'm honestly confused by this. I see what you are saying, but I don't know how to go about fixing it, even with the image provided.
Thanks for your huge mod! Extremely helpful! Kudos well earned! Thanks sooo much!
Ahh, yay, thank you! ;w;

And uhm, I mean something like this? Just delete the slider, add a note there instead and a shorter slider after that.
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

Bonch0 wrote:

M4M

Persona 4 Wtf :) ;)

Hard

00:45:557 (4) - make this slider longer (til 00:46:074) Yeah, something went weird here when I messed with the timing secitons. Velocity but itself at 1x instead of the .75x it should have been at. This has been fixed.
00:48:014 - remove the timing section here because you should not put it into the slider, recommend to use it at 00:48:919 Okay.
00:47:367 (3) - make this slider longer ( until 00:48:919) Same comment above.

Quick summary of the 2 above

before : http://puu.sh/4l7pR.PNG

after : http://puu.sh/4l7rN.PNG


01:07:410 - I would put a note, but its your decision^^ Normal

00:20:729 (1) - add finish Alright.
00:45:560 - remove this timing section so the notes must be normal now I copied all timing sections after your hard mod, on to the other difficulties, so this should be fixed on Easy and Taiko charts too.

Easy

00:21:246 (1) - add finish Okay.
00:25:384 (1) - add finish Last mod told me to do this, still sounds really weird to me. I'll consider it.
00:47:108 (2) - make this slider longer ( until 00:48:143)
00:45:557 - remove this timing section so the notes must be normal now
01:10:902 (2) - add finish Finish on the note before it, I don't want there to really be two in a row again. It also doesn't sound super great to me, regardless.

Nice map and good Luck! :D
Thanks for your mod!
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

lupcha wrote:

lupcha wrote:

  1. 00:06:505 (3) - I would change it to something like this. You can hear that the music gets louder at 00:06:764, but with the current (3) it would be at the slider end and because of that it's not really emphasized. I'm honestly confused by this. I see what you are saying, but I don't know how to go about fixing it, even with the image provided.
Ahh, yay, thank you! ;w;

And uhm, I mean something like this? Just delete the slider, add a note there instead and a shorter slider after that.
Ah okay. Got it! Thank you sir!
Hinsvar
So uh, hi.

The promised mod is here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

*Put the mod in boxes because... Uh, just see by yourself?

Easy
  1. I'd like to see the rhythm more varied than what it is currently. Most of the time, you only mapped the second and fourth white ticks...
  2. 00:02:108 - 00:03:143 - I think you should make a 2/1 slider here. This part feels weird if unmapped.
  3. 00:06:246 (3) - If you want to give an NC every two stanzas, NC this one instead of 00:08:315 (1). The current NC pattern is incorrect.
  4. 00:10:384 (3) - It will look neater here if this slider is placed like this.
  5. 00:11:936 (1,2) - Swap NC here to follow the stanza.
  6. 00:17:108 (1) - Remove the finish here. There is nothing that indicates the need for one.
  7. 00:20:212 (4,1) - The spacing is inconsistent here.
  8. 00:23:315 (3) - Also remove the finish here; it's unnecessary, according to the song's instruments.
  9. 00:24:350 (4) - Hmm, it feels so awkward to have a slider like this placed on the far left from 00:23:315 (3). This should work better, IMO.
  10. 00:27:453 (1) - Remove the NC here to make the combo pattern consistent, please.
  11. 00:32:626 - Add a clap here so the hitsound pattern can be consistent.
  12. 00:37:798 (2) - Also remove the finish for obvious reasons.
  13. 00:36:764 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Uhm, I'm confused with the combo pattern here. Keep the combo pattern like usual please. The current pattern doesn't reflect the song correctly.
  14. 00:44:005 - No, a finish won't fit here. Remove it and use a whistle and clap instead.
  15. 00:44:005 (2,3,4) - The pattern looks very messy, IMO. Try this instead.
  16. 00:45:557 (4,1) - The finish usage here is correct, but... Swap NC to follow the song (stanza) correctly please.
  17. 00:45:557 - 00:57:453 - Hmm, it's not really fine to change the sliders' speed like this, I guess... But remember to use 1.0x so the spacing will be consistent with the rest of the map if you still insist on doing that.
  18. 00:53:315 (1,2) - Hmm, swap NC here because (1) starts before the tall white tick?
  19. 01:09:867 (1,2) - ^
  20. 01:16:074 (1,2) - ^
  21. 01:20:729 - 01:27:971 - Add a whistle every two beats (white ticks) here to emphasize the instrument? Seriously, this section feels really empty with only claps around.
  22. 01:24:867 - This finish is not necessary since it doesn't correlate with anything in the song at all, so remove?

Normal
  1. 00:02:108 - 00:03:919 - Umm... Just try to map this part. There's no reason to leave this part unmapped.
  2. 00:06:246 (3) - Umm, add NC here because the music's rhythm changes?
  3. 00:09:350 (1,2) - Also, if you want to place an NC every two stanzas, the current combo pattern is wrong, so swap NC please.
  4. 00:12:453 (1) - Not really a suggestion, but I just want to say that the NC here is already correct since it follows the song's rhythm.
  5. 00:14:005 (3) - Clearly needs a clap, don't you think?
  6. 00:19:177 (3) - ^
  7. 00:20:212 (5) - ^
  8. 00:20:729 (1) - This looks neater, IMO. The current pattern seems to be kinda messy.
  9. 00:24:350 (4) - Also clap, maybe? And I recommend you to place this at (60,348); also looks tidier, at least for me.
  10. 00:30:040 (2) - This flows better, I think.
  11. 00:43:746 - Remove the finish here please; it just doesn't fit the song and is too loud.
  12. 00:45:557 - 00:57:453 - Like what I've said, I think it's pretty fine to place a slowdown part, although I'm not too sure... If you still want to make the sliders here slower, though, make sure to use 1.73x as your default distance snapping here so the spacing will be consistent.
  13. 00:48:143 - Hmm, clap?
  14. 00:51:505 (6) - This slider's shape looks kinda random... But it's okay, I guess.
  15. 01:02:108 (2,3,1) - Hmm, I'm afraid this kind of pattern is going to confuse players, since the objects' flow doesn't really connect well. Maybe copy-pasting (2) to (3)'s place, rotating it 180 degrees, and placing it to the right and a bit below (3)'s tail will do, and then move (1) so (3)'s tail will point at it.
  16. 01:05:212 (3,1,2) - Similar problem like the one above.
  17. 01:14:005 (5) - Also forgot a clap?
  18. 01:17:367 (4) - Add a whistle to emphasize the instrument?
  19. 01:18:660 - Umm, remove the clap here? There isn't anything in the song that supports it.
  20. 01:19:695 (1) - Lengthen this to 01:20:212 so the slider will follow the instrument? It sounds far better than following the vocal here. Don't forget to add a clap on the tail if you're really going to do this.
  21. 01:20:471 (2) - A clap doesn't fit here, so I think you should remove it.
  22. 01:21:764 - 01:27:971 - Also add a whistle every two beats here? I mean, I don't see why should you leave those ticks unhitsounded... They just feel so empty.

Hard
  1. 00:02:108 - 00:03:790 - I think you know what do I want to say here.
  2. 00:05:729 - Add a clap to follow the instrument?
  3. 00:05:988 (1,2) - Swap NC to follow the stanza?
  4. 00:06:893 - Umm, this spot is overmapped, just saying. Make 00:06:764 (4) a circle instead?
  5. 00:08:703 - ^
  6. 00:10:384 (2) - Remove the finish here; it doesn't fit at all with the song. (Also did you notice that I didn't complain about 00:08:057 (1,2) and 00:10:126 (1,2)'s combo pattern? It's because they actually works and follows the instrument.)
  7. 00:13:746 (4,5) - Hmm, this flows better here. Try it?
  8. 00:14:264 (5) - NC? Fits with the vocal and instrument.
  9. 00:15:557 (8,9) - (8)'s hitburst overlaps (9)'s repeat temporarily. Still rankable, but it might be confusing. Maybe place (9)'s tail below the head instead in the left of it?
  10. 00:17:367 (3,4) - The spacing is only 0.75x. Just saying, again.
  11. 00:20:988 (2,3) - Uh, this slight jump doesn't represent anything in the song... Just make the spacing consistent here.
  12. 00:22:540 (5,1) - Also swap NC? I don't think I need to say the reason again.
  13. 00:22:798 (6) - Remove finish? I think you know why.
  14. 00:24:608 (5,1) - Yep, try to swap NC?
  15. 00:25:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm, the overall flow here is awkward. Maybe this and this will give you some idea.
  16. 00:27:971 (2,5) - Hmm, add claps here to emphasize the instrument?
  17. 00:28:100 (3,6) - You're also overmapping here, but these ones are still fine I guess. Well, as long as they still flow well with the instrument and vocal, slight overmaps are acceptable.
  18. 00:29:005 (8,1) - NC swap please. I think you know why, again.
  19. 00:30:815 (6,1) - ^ (I won't mention NC swaps again; I think you have understood about how to organize/set the correct combo pattern.)
  20. 00:31:850 (1,2,3,4) - This looks tidier for me. Just make them look well-curved.
  21. 00:36:246 (7) - Add a whistle to emphasize the instrument and vocal?
  22. 00:36:505 (8,1) - The spacing is inconsistent here. Fix it please.
  23. 00:37:540 (2) - Place the slider like this? Looks better for me...
  24. 00:38:574 (5,6) - The spacing here is also inconsistent. Now that we're at it, make it a small jump?
  25. 00:40:126 (1,2) - ^ (But make this one consistent instead.)
  26. 00:41:160 (4,5,6) - No, this just looks messy and confusing because (4) slightly touches 00:40:643 (3), and the flow is also awkward. Try this instead.
  27. 00:42:971 - Definitely need a clap here, don't you think?
  28. 00:43:100 (11) - There isn't anything on the blue ticks here. It isn't following anything in the song. Remove this slider and add a circle at 00:43:229 to follow the vocal.
  29. 00:43:488 (12) - Uh, remove the finish?
  30. 00:44:393 - Add a whistle here to follow the instrument?
  31. 00:44:781 - And remove the whistle here. It doesn't follow anything, whether it be the song or the hitsound's pattern, therefore it's unnecessary.
  32. 00:45:557 - Oh, and this is the perfect place to add a finish, so... add one?
  33. 00:47:367 - ^
  34. 00:49:695 - ^
  35. 00:52:798 (1) - Whistle? (From now on, assume that all hitsound suggestions from me have a reasoning somewhere around the line of "This fits the song/instrument/vocal nicely". It's getting boring to write that line and its varieties.)
  36. 00:53:315 (3) - Clap?
  37. 00:53:574 - Finish?
  38. 00:54:867 - Map this spot? It just feels wrong to leave the instrument here unmapped. Make sure to add a clap too if you mapped it.
  39. 00:55:643 - ^
  40. 00:57:453 - Clap?
  41. 00:59:005 (4,5) - Looks kinda messy for me. Try this maybe?
  42. 01:01:074 (3,4) - More spacing inconsistency...
  43. 01:01:850 (1) - There is nothing here. Nothing at all. This spot is supposed to be empty, so remove it please.
  44. 01:02:108 (2,3) - Make them look like this so the design will look better? (Yep, I already removed 01:01:850 (1) here.)
  45. 01:03:531 (6) - Bad overmap. Please remove this as it doesn't follow anything on the song and it doesn't fit with the rhythm of the objects here.
  46. 01:06:117 - ^
  47. 01:06:376 - ^ (Don't map here and there, basically.)
  48. 01:07:281 (10,11,12) - This will look much better here.
  49. 01:08:574 (3) - Something like this will flow and look much better.
  50. 01:09:221 (5,7) - Overmapped, yeah.
  51. 01:09:350 (6) - Not quite sure here, but try to add a finish to follow the instrument?
  52. 01:10:643 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Umm, I just wanna say that the flow is really weird here. Can't really give a pictured suggestion, but try to use a linear curved flow here instead? This one is really awkward.
  53. 01:15:040 (7,8) - Also more spacing inconsistency.
  54. 01:19:695 - Whistle?
  55. 01:20:729 - 01:27:712 - Like Easy and Normal, try to add some whistles here and there to make this part feels less silent?
  56. 01:24:867 - Remove finish?
  57. 01:25:902 - ^

Okay, that's enough.

This map really needs a lot of work. I hope you noticed that I'm talking about hitsound, NC, and placements mostly. They really need to be improved, although a bit of work on the rhythm might help too.

Well, just get more modders, especially the more patient ones. I'm sure enough I skipped a lot of minor problems on the way so this mod won't get really long.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

Hinsvar wrote:

So uh, hi.

The promised mod is here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset. You were pretty thorough about those hit-sounds on every difficulty, I don't think I have to worry about this.

*Put the mod in boxes because... Uh, just see by yourself? Yikes. Here we go.

Easy
  1. I'd like to see the rhythm more varied than what it is currently. Most of the time, you only mapped the second and fourth white ticks... Okay. I hate to be that guy, but this was varied, then a bunch of mods told me to keep it simple, as it is the easy difficulty, if I recall correctly. Besides, there is some truth to that statement, and I kinda agree.
  2. 00:02:108 - 00:03:143 - I think you should make a 2/1 slider here. This part feels weird if unmapped. Alright.
  3. 00:06:246 (3) - If you want to give an NC every two stanzas, NC this one instead of 00:08:315 (1). The current NC pattern is incorrect. Uh, I think I fixed this?
  4. 00:10:384 (3) - It will look neater here if this slider is placed like this. Okay, I also made sure spacing was .8 afterwards.
  5. 00:11:936 (1,2) - Swap NC here to follow the stanza. Okay.
  6. 00:17:108 (1) - Remove the finish here. There is nothing that indicates the need for one. >.> Alright.
  7. 00:20:212 (4,1) - The spacing is inconsistent here. I didn't think it was. Regardless, I changed it.
  8. 00:23:315 (3) - Also remove the finish here; it's unnecessary, according to the song's instruments. Okay.
  9. 00:24:350 (4) - Hmm, it feels so awkward to have a slider like this placed on the far left from 00:23:315 (3).[/color]This should work better, IMO. Alright. Moved and fixed spacing afterwards.
  10. 00:27:453 (1) - Remove the NC here to make the combo pattern consistent, please. Alright.
  11. 00:32:626 - Add a clap here so the hitsound pattern can be consistent. Okay, dunno how this didn't have a clap to begin with.
  12. 00:37:798 (2) - Also remove the finish for obvious reasons. Yup.
  13. 00:36:764 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Uhm, I'm confused with the combo pattern here. Keep the combo pattern like usual please. The current pattern doesn't reflect the song correctly. Okay, fixed.
  14. 00:44:005 - No, a finish won't fit here. Remove it and use a whistle and clap instead. Alright.
  15. 00:44:005 (2,3,4) - The pattern looks very messy, IMO. Try this instead.
  16. 00:45:557 (4,1) - The finish usage here is correct, but... Swap NC to follow the song (stanza) correctly please.Okay.
  17. 00:45:557 - 00:57:453 - Hmm, it's not really fine to change the sliders' speed like this, I guess... But remember to use 1.0x so the spacing will be consistent with the rest of the map if you still insist on doing that.The song takes a noticeable slow down here. I think it's necessary. So I've upped the distance spacing to 1.0x.
  18. 00:53:315 (1,2) - Hmm, swap NC here because (1) starts before the tall white tick?
  19. 01:09:867 (1,2) - ^
  20. 01:16:074 (1,2) - ^ Swapped all of these.
  21. 01:20:729 - 01:27:971 - Add a whistle every two beats (white ticks) here to emphasize the instrument? Seriously, this section feels really empty with only claps around.Alright.
  22. 01:24:867 - This finish is not necessary since it doesn't correlate with anything in the song at all, so remove?Okay, removed.

Normal
  1. 00:02:108 - 00:03:919 - Umm... Just try to map this part. There's no reason to leave this part unmapped.Now that I think about it, last time I had this map, a few mods told me it played weird. However, we'll try it again, I guess.
  2. 00:06:246 (3) - Umm, add NC here because the music's rhythm changes?Okay.
  3. 00:09:350 (1,2) - Also, if you want to place an NC every two stanzas, the current combo pattern is wrong, so swap NC please.Okay.
  4. 00:12:453 (1) - Not really a suggestion, but I just want to say that the NC here is already correct since it follows the song's rhythm.Looks like I finally did something right. (:
  5. 00:14:005 (3) - Clearly needs a clap, don't you think? Yup. No idea why it didn't have one in the first place.
  6. 00:19:177 (3) - ^
  7. 00:20:212 (5) - ^ Dunno why these didn't have claps. More surprising that I never caught these errors.
  8. 00:20:729 (1) - This looks neater, IMO. The current pattern seems to be kinda messy.Okay. Much better now.
  9. 00:24:350 (4) - Also clap, maybe? And I recommend you to place this at (60,348); also looks tidier, at least for me. Clap added. If those are X and Y coordinates, they take me to the bottom left corner, I don't think that's what you meant.
  10. 00:30:040 (2) - This flows better, I think. I thought this was okay, but I changed.
  11. 00:43:746 - Remove the finish here please; it just doesn't fit the song and is too loud.Okay.
  12. 00:45:557 - 00:57:453 - Like what I've said, I think it's pretty fine to place a slowdown part, although I'm not too sure... If you still want to make the sliders here slower, though, make sure to use 1.73x as your default distance snapping here so the spacing will be consistent.I like the slow down here. So, snapping updated.
  13. 00:48:143 - Hmm, clap? Yup.
  14. 00:51:505 (6) - This slider's shape looks kinda random... But it's okay, I guess. I had to redo this section anyways with different snapping, so this changed a little. Still the same kinda shape though.
  15. 01:02:108 (2,3,1) - Hmm, I'm afraid this kind of pattern is going to confuse players, since the objects' flow doesn't really connect well. Maybe copy-pasting (2) to (3)'s place, rotating it 180 degrees, and placing it to the right and a bit below (3)'s tail will do, and then move (1) so (3)'s tail will point at it. I just re-did this whole thing.
  16. 01:05:212 (3,1,2) - Similar problem like the one above.Above comment.
  17. 01:14:005 (5) - Also forgot a clap? Yup.
  18. 01:17:367 (4) - Add a whistle to emphasize the instrument? Okay.
  19. 01:18:660 - Umm, remove the clap here? There isn't anything in the song that supports it. Eh? There is no clap anywhere near here.
  20. 01:19:695 (1) - Lengthen this to 01:20:212 so the slider will follow the instrument? It sounds far better than following the vocal here. Don't forget to add a clap on the tail if you're really going to do this. Okay. Did both.
  21. 01:20:471 (2) - A clap doesn't fit here, so I think you should remove it. Again, there is no clap here. O.o
  22. 01:21:764 - 01:27:971 - Also add a whistle every two beats here? I mean, I don't see why should you leave those ticks unhitsounded... They just feel so empty.Yup.

Hard
  1. 00:02:108 - 00:03:790 - I think you know what do I want to say here. Again, we'll see how it goes. Not very easy to map, doesn't really have a clear beat.
  2. 00:05:729 - Add a clap to follow the instrument? Yup.
  3. 00:05:988 (1,2) - Swap NC to follow the stanza? Okay.
  4. 00:06:893 - Umm, this spot is overmapped, just saying. Make 00:06:764 (4) a circle instead? Okay.
  5. 00:08:703 - ^ Added 2 circles instead of one, obviously.
  6. 00:10:384 (2) - Remove the finish here; it doesn't fit at all with the song. (Also did you notice that I didn't complain about 00:08:057 (1,2) and 00:10:126 (1,2)'s combo pattern? It's because they actually works and follows the instrument.) Okay. Yes, I get it. Sometimes I do things right.
  7. 00:13:746 (4,5) - Hmm, this flows better here. Try it? Okay, that works.
  8. 00:14:264 (5) - NC? Fits with the vocal and instrument. Yup.
  9. 00:15:557 (8,9) - (8)'s hitburst overlaps (9)'s repeat temporarily. Still rankable, but it might be confusing. Maybe place (9)'s tail below the head instead in the left of it? Re-did slider 9.
  10. 00:17:367 (3,4) - The spacing is only 0.75x. Just saying, again. Again? That's the first time you've mentioned spacing on this difficulty by number like that, I think. Regardless, fixed.
  11. 00:20:988 (2,3) - Uh, this slight jump doesn't represent anything in the song... Just make the spacing consistent here.To be honest, I have no idea why that was there.
  12. 00:22:540 (5,1) - Also swap NC? I don't think I need to say the reason again. >.>
  13. 00:22:798 (6) - Remove finish? I think you know why. Yup.
  14. 00:24:608 (5,1) - Yep, try to swap NC? Okay.
  15. 00:25:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm, the overall flow here is awkward. Maybe this and this will give you some idea. I hope I fixed it. :x
  16. 00:27:971 (2,5) - Hmm, add claps here to emphasize the instrument? Okay. I like it.
  17. 00:28:100 (3,6) - You're also overmapping here, but these ones are still fine I guess. Well, as long as they still flow well with the instrument and vocal, slight overmaps are acceptable. Wasn't like this originally, but I remember specifically, (Yeah, I'll call him out) Frostmourne said the triplets will work here.
  18. 00:29:005 (8,1) - NC swap please. I think you know why, again. :x
  19. 00:30:815 (6,1) - ^ (I won't mention NC swaps again; I think you have understood about how to organize/set the correct combo pattern.) ... ): S-sorry s-senpai... (Hopefully I did these okay.)
  20. 00:31:850 (1,2,3,4) - This looks tidier for me. Just make them look well-curved. OKay, I tried my best.
  21. 00:36:246 (7) - Add a whistle to emphasize the instrument and vocal? Kaykay.
  22. 00:36:505 (8,1) - The spacing is inconsistent here. Fix it please. Fixed.
  23. 00:37:540 (2) - Place the slider like this? Looks better for me... Okay.
  24. 00:38:574 (5,6) - The spacing here is also inconsistent. Now that we're at it, make it a small jump? Spacing fixed and jump added.
  25. 00:40:126 (1,2) - ^ (But make this one consistent instead.) Alright.
  26. 00:41:160 (4,5,6) - No, this just looks messy and confusing because (4) slightly touches 00:40:643 (3), and the flow is also awkward. Try this instead. Alrighty.
  27. 00:42:971 - Definitely need a clap here, don't you think? Yes.
  28. 00:43:100 (11) - There isn't anything on the blue ticks here. It isn't following anything in the song. Remove this slider and add a circle at 00:43:229 to follow the vocal. Okay.
  29. 00:43:488 (12) - Uh, remove the finish? Yup.
  30. 00:44:393 - Add a whistle here to follow the instrument? Okay.
  31. 00:44:781 - And remove the whistle here. It doesn't follow anything, whether it be the song or the hitsound's pattern, therefore it's unnecessary. Alright.
  32. 00:45:557 - Oh, and this is the perfect place to add a finish, so... add one? Coulda sworn there was one here already...
  33. 00:47:367 - ^ Okay.
  34. 00:49:695 - ^ Alright.
  35. 00:52:798 (1) - Whistle? (From now on, assume that all hitsound suggestions from me have a reasoning somewhere around the line of "This fits the song/instrument/vocal nicely". It's getting boring to write that line and its varieties.)
  36. 00:53:315 (3) - Clap? Okay.
  37. 00:53:574 - Finish? Kaykay.
  38. 00:54:867 - Map this spot? It just feels wrong to leave the instrument here unmapped. Make sure to add a clap too if you mapped it. Mapped, although a clap doesn't fit there. I think you may have meant whistle, which I added.
  39. 00:55:643 - ^ Added whistle, not a clap.
  40. 00:57:453 - Clap? Okay.
  41. 00:59:005 (4,5) - Looks kinda messy for me. Try this maybe? I honestly think this is okay.
  42. 01:01:074 (3,4) - More spacing inconsistency... Fixed.
  43. 01:01:850 (1) - There is nothing here. Nothing at all. This spot is supposed to be empty, so remove it please. Removed.
  44. 01:02:108 (2,3) - Make them look like this so the design will look better? (Yep, I already removed 01:01:850 (1) here.) Okay.
  45. 01:03:531 (6) - Bad overmap. Please remove this as it doesn't follow anything on the song and it doesn't fit with the rhythm of the objects here. Okay.
  46. 01:06:117 - ^ Removed.
  47. 01:06:376 - ^ (Don't map here and there, basically.) Removed.
  48. 01:07:281 (10,11,12) - This will look much better here. Okay.
  49. 01:08:574 (3) - Something like this will flow and look much better. Okay.
  50. 01:09:221 (5,7) - Overmapped, yeah. Removed 5, not 7. Since there were triplets before that didn't bug you.
  51. 01:09:350 (6) - Not quite sure here, but try to add a finish to follow the instrument? A finish sounds really weird and off there to me.
  52. 01:10:643 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Umm, I just wanna say that the flow is really weird here. Can't really give a pictured suggestion, but try to use a linear curved flow here instead? This one is really awkward. I did a thing here. It's fixed now.
  53. 01:15:040 (7,8) - Also more spacing inconsistency. -.- fixed.
  54. 01:19:695 - Whistle? Okay.
  55. 01:20:729 - 01:27:712 - Like Easy and Normal, try to add some whistles here and there to make this part feels less silent? Mmkay.
  56. 01:24:867 - Remove finish? yep.
  57. 01:25:902 - ^ Yep.

Okay, that's enough.

This map really needs a lot of work. I hope you noticed that I'm talking about hitsound, NC, and placements mostly. They really need to be improved, although a bit of work on the rhythm might help too.

Well, just get more modders, especially the more patient ones. I'm sure enough I skipped a lot of minor problems on the way so this mod won't get really long.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Well, first off. Thanks for your mod. Extremely huge. Very helpful.

I should say I'm sorry my map frustrated you. Don't try to say it didn't, because it clearly did. A lot, a lot of these mods were reverts. I guess, I'm trusting the people who mod my map too much, and putting a bunch of stupid stuff into my maps. So I need to be more careful about that in the future. Sorry if I ever sound liked a dick in my comments. It's frustrating to me (and you) to spend hours making changes, only to revert them. Again, sorry my map wasn't of outstanding caliber, it is my first map, after all. I'll work on the things you've mentioned, and continue play testing it. Of course, I will still try to get mods, but you've made it very clear I need to be extremely careful about what I am adding/changing.

Thanks again for your mod. :)
Krah
Hi Taiko Mod request by Totowo le procrastinateur


Just a fast check of the std.

General :
00:45:557 - Useless green lines
01:01:691 - Useless green lines
Recheck your green line they aren't properly snapped (it's not a big issue because the kiai is ok)

Easy :
00:35:729 (3) - It would be better if your slider curves bottom instead of curving top.(better flow)
00:45:040 (4,5,1) - Small change in distance spacing. It's not really a problem so do as you want '-'

Normal :
00:03:143 (2,4) - Not perfectly stack



And now it's time for serious things è_é


C'est fun sur toute la première partie de la vidéo en taiko on voit que des jambes '-'


[Pachanagi]

On se fait un peu chier dans le kiai quand même, ça fait vraiment plus futsuu comme partie :s
En général ta muzu est pas très compliquée (bien loin de tes shitty triplets de grave of being), ya pas de longs 1/2 et même pas de 1/4.

- 00:02:884 (3,4) - kd au lieu de dk ?
- 00:16:591 (41) - k, j'aime pas trop comment le pattern sonne et j'ai pas trouvé mieux :s
- 00:27:453 - Ajoute un k et 00:27:712 (73) - devient un d
- 00:34:695 (91,92) - kd
- 00:35:471 (93,94) - dk
- 01:08:057 - Ajoute un k
- 01:08:574 - ^
- 01:15:040 - ^ et 01:15:298 (30) - devient un d
- 01:17:884 (37,38) - Ajoute un k entre les deux mais je te laisse choisir ou (j'arrive pas a me décider en fait ...)
- 01:20:471 (43) - K

[Pachanagi-no-okami]
- 00:02:108 (1) - d, ya pas de raison pour un D la
- 00:20:729 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - Ca sonne bizarrement je trouve. J'ai essayé 2-3trucs mais rien qui me convient. Donc bon ...
- 01:12:841 - Ajoute un d
- 01:20:729 (287) - d pas de nécessité pour un D
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

Krah wrote:

Hi Taiko Mod request by Totowo le procrastinateur lol.


Just a fast check of the std.

General :
00:45:557 - Useless green lines
01:01:691 - Useless green lines
Recheck your green line they aren't properly snapped (it's not a big issue because the kiai is ok) The green lines are for hitsound volume, they aren't useless. They do look like they are in weird spots, but they have a purpose. You are also right, there is one that isn't snapped correctly, but, it's not a big deal.

Easy :
00:35:729 (3) - It would be better if your slider curves bottom instead of curving top.(better flow) Without a specific example, I'm not 100% sure what you are referring too.
00:45:040 (4,5,1) - Small change in distance spacing. It's not really a problem so do as you want '-' The last mod and I talked about this. Since I slowed the slider velocity down and made the beat slower, the distance snapping should be larger here.

Normal :
00:03:143 (2,4) - Not perfectly stack You're right. Fixed.

I'm sure Pacha got an email, but I'll send him a message too, just in case. Thanks for your mod!

And now it's time for serious things è_é


C'est fun sur toute la première partie de la vidéo en taiko on voit que des jambes '-'


[Pachanagi]

On se fait un peu chier dans le kiai quand même, ça fait vraiment plus futsuu comme partie :s
En général ta muzu est pas très compliquée (bien loin de tes shitty triplets de grave of being), ya pas de longs 1/2 et même pas de 1/4.

- 00:02:884 (3,4) - kd au lieu de dk ?
- 00:16:591 (41) - k, j'aime pas trop comment le pattern sonne et j'ai pas trouvé mieux :s
- 00:27:453 - Ajoute un k et 00:27:712 (73) - devient un d
- 00:34:695 (91,92) - kd
- 00:35:471 (93,94) - dk
- 01:08:057 - Ajoute un k
- 01:08:574 - ^
- 01:15:040 - ^ et 01:15:298 (30) - devient un d
- 01:17:884 (37,38) - Ajoute un k entre les deux mais je te laisse choisir ou (j'arrive pas a me décider en fait ...)
- 01:20:471 (43) - K

[Pachanagi-no-okami]
- 00:02:108 (1) - d, ya pas de raison pour un D la
- 00:20:729 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - Ca sonne bizarrement je trouve. J'ai essayé 2-3trucs mais rien qui me convient. Donc bon ...
- 01:12:841 - Ajoute un d
- 01:20:729 (287) - d pas de nécessité pour un D
Totoro le Pacha

Krah wrote:

Hi Taiko Mod request by Totowo le procrastinateur

And now it's time for serious things è_é
Let'sa go

C'est fun sur toute la première partie de la vidéo en taiko on voit que des jambes '-'
Ben j'ai pensé à mettre une image de background à la place de la vidéo, mais la vidéo est jolie, ce serait dommage de ne pas la voir même à moitié ? o/

[Pachanagi]

On se fait un peu chier dans le kiai quand même, ça fait vraiment plus futsuu comme partie :s Ben c'est une futsuu à la base... o/ C'est la Pachanagi-no-Okami qui est une Muzu-Oni low-BPM.
En général ta muzu est pas très compliquée (bien loin de tes shitty triplets de grave of being), ya pas de longs 1/2 et même pas de 1/4.

- 00:02:884 (3,4) - kd au lieu de dk ? Ajouté
- 00:16:591 (41) - k, j'aime pas trop comment le pattern sonne et j'ai pas trouvé mieux :s Le 41 et la 42, le dk, suit bien le rythme des basses comme ça.
- 00:27:453 - Ajoute un k et 00:27:712 (73) - devient un d Mieux comme ça, ajouté : )
- 00:34:695 (91,92) - kd Fixed
- 00:35:471 (93,94) - dk Fixed
- 01:08:057 - Ajoute un k Fixed
- 01:08:574 - ^ Fixed
- 01:15:040 - ^ et 01:15:298 (30) - devient un d Fixed à moitié, car comme la voix monte, j'ai opté pour un dk plutôt qu'un kd
- 01:17:884 (37,38) - Ajoute un k entre les deux mais je te laisse choisir ou (j'arrive pas a me décider en fait ...)
- 01:20:471 (43) - K

[Pachanagi-no-okami]
- 00:02:108 (1) - d, ya pas de raison pour un D la Fixed
- 00:20:729 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - Ca sonne bizarrement je trouve. J'ai essayé 2-3trucs mais rien qui me convient. Donc bon ... J'ai essayé une autre combinaison qui vaut plus le coup je trouve, regarde
- 01:12:841 - Ajoute un d Fixed
- 01:20:729 (287) - d pas de nécessité pour un D
Fixed

Gros merci pour ce beau mod Krah ! J'espère que les maps t'ont plu quand même :D Je frapperai Gezo quand il osera dire du mal de toi. Du genre Mimi Krahkrah. Compte sur moi.
ichivictus
[Easy]
00:18:143 (2) - This slider still has a tick in it and should be removed since it's just a straight slider.
00:21:246 (1) - x:256 y:80
01:02:108 (2,3) - I'd make this a slider

[Normal]
00:21:764 (2) - I think it would look better flipped like this http://i.imgur.com/RgNXlhL.png
00:22:798 (3) - ^ http://i.imgur.com/o4uat8c.png
00:45:557 (1) - Similar flip (rotate 180 and ctrl+g) http://i.imgur.com/T0DS9QK.png

[Hard]
I love this diff :)
01:28:488 (4) - I think it would be better with a circle instead of a slider at that point.


Good job with the hitsounds, I like it. Very nice.
HeatKai
Hi
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

ichivictus wrote:

[Easy]
00:18:143 (2) - This slider still has a tick in it and should be removed since it's just a straight slider. That's interesting. First time I've ever really heard of something like this being a thing. I made this slider curvy to fix this. (Straight sliders are boring anyways)
00:21:246 (1) - x:256 y:80 Moved.
01:02:108 (2,3) - I'd make this a slider Good call.

[Normal]
00:21:764 (2) - I think it would look better flipped like this http://i.imgur.com/RgNXlhL.png Incorporated.
00:22:798 (3) - ^ http://i.imgur.com/o4uat8c.png Only issue I have with this is it creates a nasty overlap with (1) for which I'm sure will upset someone, for now, I'll incorporate it, and we'll see.
00:45:557 (1) - Similar flip (rotate 180 and ctrl+g) http://i.imgur.com/T0DS9QK.png Cool. Looks a lot better now. :3

[Hard]
I love this diff :) <3
01:28:488 (4) - I think it would be better with a circle instead of a slider at that point. Hmm. They both work. They both work so well I can't decide. Really. I'll implement yours for now.


Good job with the hitsounds, I like it. Very nice.(: I made sure I got the permission for these hitsounds before I mapped. They are too lovely.
Thanks for your mod! It simply took me so long to implement because, well, college ):
Sorry about that, also thank you much for the star! Much appreciated! (:
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

HeatKai wrote:

Hi
Hello! :) :)
Totoro le Pacha

HeatKai wrote:

Hi
Teehee, hi mister BAT
KSHR

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT for help.
(http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria)

so the correct Artist should be Hirata Shihoko. no kds plz
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

KSHR wrote:

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT for help.
(http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria)

so the correct Artist should be Hirata Shihoko. no kds plz
I did read this rule. However, there are many, many ranked beatmaps with her name listed as Shihoko Hirata. I can change it, I guess? But I guess my question is why those maps are under that name?
KSHR
that's because most of maps you pointed out was ranked before this rule was made.
however as you can search, there are some maps which was ranked with "first name - surname" format lately. (for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/93135)
I fortunately could find your map and tell you about the incorrect artist this time. but someone normally should confirm whether Artist / Title etc. are romanized correctly before ranking / bubbling or not. (regarding this, I will do my best to find as much as possible.)

anyway good luck ;p
Topic Starter
Chronotakular

KSHR wrote:

that's because most of maps you pointed out was ranked before this rule was made.
however as you can search, there are some maps which was ranked with "first name - surname" format lately. (for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/93135)
I fortunately could find your map and tell you about the incorrect artist this time. but someone normally should confirm whether Artist / Title etc. are romanized correctly before ranking / bubbling or not. (regarding this, I will do my best to find as much as possible.)

anyway good luck ;p
Ah, okay. I just remembering reading in that rule that if you weren't sure, to look up beatmaps of the same artist, and to use that.

I'm sure you noticed, but I did implement the change.

Thanks again!
Coro
Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Pachanagi]
Use default hitsounds. I think that you can use flat 1.0SV as well, so delete the unnecessary timing points.
00:04:695 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - maybe swap around to become dkk kdd since that will fit the drums better

[Pachanagi-no-Okami]
Use default hitsounds. I think that you can use flat 1.0SV as well, so delete the unnecessary timing points.
00:06:246 (16) - d

not bad~
good luck for rank~
Aldwych
Hi! #Mod Req by pacha :

[General]

The video.... I don't want to mod these kind of map anymore. T_T

01:01:721 : I don't understand this timing bar, it's useless on the o!std diff (maybe it's on taiko but you're obligated to have the same timing bar as the taiko mapper).
01:28:876 : Move this timing bar to 01:29:005. And why the SV is x1.10?

[Easy]

00:12:971 : Move it to 440;132 for having a perfect line (visible on the DS of each).
00:14:005 : By this way move the others for Y pos (or try to make this one at 256;69 and the next one (00:15:040) at 72;132)
00:19:695 : Y position (80).
00:32:626 : Is it normal that this object isn't stack with the circle n°2?
01:02:108+ : The kiaï part is a bit "horizontal / vertical" by your line sliders. Try to curve somes?

[Normal]

Please try to make a constant DS, sometimes it's 1,20 and sometimes it's 1.40.

00:25:902 : Copy/paste the previous slider and replace it?
00:49:177+ : I'm feel umconfortable with this jump (yea i know you decrease the SV).
00:53:833 : THe slider position could be confuse for new players.
01:09:350 : Put the same Y position than the previous circle.

[Hard]

Imo, the combo are not regular on this diff dunno why.

[Pachanagi]

00:48:143 : k?
01:01:591 : no D?

That's all i can say. Gl hf for rank. :)
Topic Starter
Chronotakular
Hey-o!

Aldwych wrote:

Hi! #Mod Req by pacha :

[General]

The video.... I don't want to mod these kind of map anymore. T_T Hehe. There is an epilepsy warning on for a reason xD

01:01:721 : I don't understand this timing bar, it's useless on the o!std diff (maybe it's on taiko but you're obligated to have the same timing bar as the taiko mapper). Hmm. I think at some point there was something here, but it was probably removed. So yeah, I'll remove it. It's not doing anything.
01:28:876 : Move this timing bar to 01:29:005. And why the SV is x1.10? I honestly think the position is fine, it's in a strange spot, I'll move it I guess. Velocity is 1.1 because this used to be a slider on all difficulties, and then a lot of people said a spinner should be at the end, and the timing never got changed.

[Easy]

00:12:971 : Move it to 440;132 for having a perfect line (visible on the DS of each). Okay.
00:14:005 : By this way move the others for Y pos (or try to make this one at 256;69 and the next one (00:15:040) at 72;132)Okay.
00:19:695 : Y position (80). Okay.
00:32:626 : Is it normal that this object isn't stack with the circle n°2? Hmm. I'll stack it.
01:02:108+ : The kiaï part is a bit "horizontal / vertical" by your line sliders. Try to curve somes? I think this is okay for an easy difficulty.

[Normal]

Please try to make a constant DS, sometimes it's 1,20 and sometimes it's 1.40. I moved some notes that were bad, but most of the time it's pretty consistent around 1.3, if it's not around 1.3, it's for the sake of making the map pretty, and even then, those parts aren't bad.

00:25:902 : Copy/paste the previous slider and replace it? Nah, but the slider before this was ugly, so I made it look nicer.
00:49:177+ : I'm feel uncomfortable with this jump (yea i know you decrease the SV). Yeah you're right. Kinda awkward. I fixed up a lot of that section.
00:53:833 : THe slider position could be confuse for new players. Hmm. I don't think this is that bad, but I moved it to make it have a clearer read.
01:09:350 : Put the same Y position than the previous circle.Okay. I want to say this was an accident but who knows.

[Hard]

Imo, the combo are not regular on this diff dunno why. Welp, without a solid example or a suggestion, it's hard to change. :x

[Pachanagi]

00:48:143 : k?
01:01:591 : no D?

That's all i can say. Gl hf for rank. :)
Thanks for your mod!
Yuzeyun
Bon...
Totoro, j'ai une bien triste nouvelle.
Tu vas devoir te séparer de tes noms de difficultés. De tels noms ne sont plus autorisés.
Au passage, mets hitnormal et désactive les custom overrides.

[Pachanagi]
00:20:729 (53,54,55,56) - Je te propose de faire dkkd ici, histoire que tu puisses garder ton aspect vocal et aussi mixer avec la percussion.
Si tu acceptes^ tu peux faire kkd sur 00:22:022 (57,58,59) - .
00:25:126 - Ajoute un d ici, et remplace 00:25:384 (67) - par k, et ensuite retire 00:25:902 (70) - . La première note te servira en tant qu'arrêt de la note que tu commences en 00:24:608 (66) - , la seconde c'est parce qu'elle tient la route en drum mais aussi en vocal ! La troisième est parce qu'elle sert pas à grand chose.
00:26:160 (70,71,72) - dkd, histoire de rester consistent avec ^
00:30:298 (80,81,82) - dkd, ça tiendra mieux sur le vocal.
00:42:453 (116) - d, comme tu as mappé sur le vocal, kk passe pas super ici.
00:46:850 (127) - k, ça donnera plus de relief à ton vocal car sur cette note en particulier t'as un synthé qui se joue.
00:48:143 (130) - k ? Je suis assez sceptique de ce point de vue.
01:00:557 (161) - k, donne plus de relief ! Et aussi, ça donnera une certaine consistence : 00:57:971 (153,154,155,156,157,158) - sera le même que 01:00:040 (159,160,161,162,163,164) - .

Au passage, reste constant en SV sur cette diff, de tels trucs ça se voit pas trop sur les difficultés inférieures à Oni.

[Pachanagi no Okami]
Le 1.2x au début est vraiment pas nécessaire, honnêtement.
00:05:729 (14) - Mets un K ? un son lourd et fort est audible alors...
00:10:643 (29,30,31) - Sur ce truc, en fait le mieux c'est kdk car d'abord ça descend et ça remonte à la fin.
00:13:746 (38,39,40) - Ici reste en 1/2 et fais dk. Si tu as envie de garder ton 1/4, ça sera ddk.
Et si tu as appliqué ^, change la note après en d histoire que ça sonne pas bizarre par rapport au vocal
00:20:083 (60) - Je pense pas que cette note soit nécessaire dans le cadre de cette portion, ça casse un peu le flow imo
00:20:729 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - Les k here sont trop nombreux, fais attention ! Aussi, je te recommende de rester autant que tu peux en 1/2, ça sonne assez wtf en l'état.
00:24:608 (78) - k ? Ca donnera plus de flow même si c'est pas 100% vocal.
00:25:126 (79,80,81,82) - dkkd, je pense que niveau vocal tu vois plus ou moins pourquoi.
00:27:453 (86,87,88) - Reste en 1/2 et applique kd. Sinon, kkd si tu désires garder ton 1/4. Ca suit la percu mais aussi le vocal, vu que la dernière note est un d.
00:36:247 (119,120,121,122,123) - Reste en 1/2, je pense pas vraiment qu'un 1/4 soit bon ici, en vocal ça m'a semblé bizarre.
00:37:281 (124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - Pareil que 00:20:729 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - .
00:49:695 (170) - don ? ça rendra mieux sur le flow.
00:52:540 (179,180,181,182,183,184) - Pas très nécessaire ici. Garde ton pattern simple !
00:54:091 (186,187,188) - dkd/dkk, pour avoir un flow drum-vocal plus joli.
01:00:040 (210) - kat ? ça m'a l'air plus haut.

Bon j'ai fini de recheck, j'attends de voir si aabc271 accepte de voir la map.
Topic Starter
Chronotakular
Does this mean Pacha is coming back from the dead? xD
Totoro le Pacha
I am not dead ! x] I just had a lot of work to do, and during the holidays, I can't play osu!. I'll try to mod it during the following days. I promise.
Topic Starter
Chronotakular
Haha. Alright! Take your time. (:
Totoro le Pacha

_Gezo_ wrote:

Bon...
Totoro, j'ai une bien triste nouvelle.
Tu vas devoir te séparer de tes noms de difficultés. De tels noms ne sont plus autorisés. AH MAIS NON ? MAIS NON, ma référence de la mort au jeu... Règles de m....ercredi.
Au passage, mets hitnormal et désactive les custom overrides.

[Pachanagi]
00:20:729 (53,54,55,56) - Je te propose de faire dkkd ici, histoire que tu puisses garder ton aspect vocal et aussi mixer avec la percussion.
Si tu acceptes^ tu peux faire kkd sur 00:22:022 (57,58,59) - .
00:25:126 - Ajoute un d ici, et remplace 00:25:384 (67) - par k, et ensuite retire 00:25:902 (70) - . La première note te servira en tant qu'arrêt de la note que tu commences en 00:24:608 (66) - , la seconde c'est parce qu'elle tient la route en drum mais aussi en vocal ! La troisième est parce qu'elle sert pas à grand chose.
00:26:160 (70,71,72) - dkd, histoire de rester consistent avec ^
00:30:298 (80,81,82) - dkd, ça tiendra mieux sur le vocal.
00:42:453 (116) - d, comme tu as mappé sur le vocal, kk passe pas super ici.
00:46:850 (127) - k, ça donnera plus de relief à ton vocal car sur cette note en particulier t'as un synthé qui se joue.
J'ai appliqué tous les précédents mods
00:48:143 (130) - k ? Je suis assez sceptique de ce point de vue. Je change pas par contre ici, ça suit la vocal, et en même temps la drum derrière
01:00:557 (161) - k, donne plus de relief ! Et aussi, ça donnera une certaine consistence : 00:57:971 (153,154,155,156,157,158) - sera le même que 01:00:040 (159,160,161,162,163,164) - . ... J'applique, mais je suis pas super convaincu, le ddd suivait la vocal, mais bon.

Au passage, reste constant en SV sur cette diff, de tels trucs ça se voit pas trop sur les difficultés inférieures à Oni. Done

[Pachanagi no Okami]
Le 1.2x au début est vraiment pas nécessaire, honnêtement. Done
00:05:729 (14) - Mets un K ? un son lourd et fort est audible alors... Euh ? J'y aurais pas pensé, mais pourquoi pas xD
00:10:643 (29,30,31) - Sur ce truc, en fait le mieux c'est kdk car d'abord ça descend et ça remonte à la fin. Done
00:13:746 (38,39,40) - Ici reste en 1/2 et fais dk. Si tu as envie de garder ton 1/4, ça sera ddk.C'était un précédent mod qui m'a dit de changer, c'était déjà comme ça à l'origine..
Et si tu as appliqué ^, change la note après en d histoire que ça sonne pas bizarre par rapport au vocal
00:20:083 (60) - Je pense pas que cette note soit nécessaire dans le cadre de cette portion, ça casse un peu le flow imo Done
00:20:729 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - Les k here sont trop nombreux, fais attention ! Aussi, je te recommende de rester autant que tu peux en 1/2, ça sonne assez wtf en l'état. Done
00:24:608 (78) - k ? Ca donnera plus de flow même si c'est pas 100% vocal. Modifié à moitié, j'ai changé le passage pour que ça rende mieux
00:25:126 (79,80,81,82) - dkkd, je pense que niveau vocal tu vois plus ou moins pourquoi. Nah, le pitch de la voix reste constant dans le bas, ça rend bien ici
00:27:453 (86,87,88) - Reste en 1/2 et applique kd. Sinon, kkd si tu désires garder ton 1/4. Ca suit la percu mais aussi le vocal, vu que la dernière note est un d. Modifié le passage, t'en penses quoi ?
00:36:247 (119,120,121,122,123) - Reste en 1/2, je pense pas vraiment qu'un 1/4 soit bon ici, en vocal ça m'a semblé bizarre. Done
00:37:281 (124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - Pareil que 00:20:729 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - . Done
00:49:695 (170) - don ? ça rendra mieux sur le flow. Done
00:52:540 (179,180,181,182,183,184) - Pas très nécessaire ici. Garde ton pattern simple ! Ah non, j'l'aime bien cette partie là. ♫
00:54:091 (186,187,188) - dkd/dkk, pour avoir un flow drum-vocal plus joli.
01:00:040 (210) - kat ? ça m'a l'air plus haut.

Bon j'ai fini de recheck, j'attends de voir si aabc271 accepte de voir la map.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/pr8rtoqhzsvia ... suu%5D.osu

https://www.dropbox.com/s/z3auj6sv8skmu ... Oni%5D.osu

Merci pour les mods. Par contre, faudrait regarder ce que ça en résulte, deux-trois passages ne me paraissent toujours pas tip top
Topic Starter
Chronotakular
Are those links for me Pacha to update the map? Or not yet?
Totoro le Pacha
Yes, these are the new .osu files ! :D
Topic Starter
Chronotakular
Cool! I'll update now!
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