Satou Hiromi - Call to me, Call for you · forum

Gamu

Elite Mapper

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2013-06-17T06:13:56+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年9月16日 at 11:58:15

Artist: Satou Hiromi
Title: Call to me, Call for you
Source: LOVELYxCATION2
Tags: hibiki works game visual novel opening hentai eroge umi -umi- guy iyasine
BPM: 138
Filesize: 18310kb
Play Time: 02:30
Difficulties Available:

Guy's Normal (4.1 stars, 210 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 470 notes)
iyasine's Hard (4.83 stars, 364 notes)
Umi's Easy (1.97 stars, 134 notes)

Download: Satou Hiromi - Call to me, Call for you
Download: Satou Hiromi - Call to me, Call for you (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 11th Ranked map.

Easy: -Umi-
Normal: Guy
Hard: iyasine
Insane: -Gamu-

Last edited by Gamu 2019-11-02T04:14:59+00:00, edited 82 times in total.

scanter

2,390 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-06-17T19:04:59+00:00

:O 2013 best eroge song

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2013-06-19T13:32:51+00:00

scanter wrote:
:O 2013 best eroge song

wow

very nice song :3

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-07-05T03:26:15+00:00

And finished ! >3<

Hope you'll like it :3

-Umi-'sy

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mp3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 93857
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Call to me, Call for you
TitleUnicode:Call to me, Call for you
Artist:Satou Hiromi
ArtistUnicode:佐藤ひろ美
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:-Umi-'sy
Source:LOVELYxCATION2
Tags:hibiki works game opening hentai eroge
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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btw if you can add this soft-hitwhistle ( http://puu.sh/3vmYF/32ecc9c632.rar ) in the SC.3 or create a SC.6 with silence slider and the whistle plz, as you want

but just tell me if you create a SC.6 because i need change :3

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-07-05T07:50:27+00:00

＼( 'ω')／ウオアアアアアアアアアアアア！

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,147 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2013-07-09T08:49:26+00:00

IRC mod with Gamu-chan on the insane diff yesterday ><

SPOILER

2013-07-08 00:47 Byakugan249: Gamu-chan!
2013-07-08 00:47 Byakugan249: i testplayed the map for you :3
2013-07-08 00:47 -Gamu-: wow
2013-07-08 00:47 Byakugan249: a few things were bothering me though when i played it D:
2013-07-08 00:49 Byakugan249: 00:01:683 (1) - >< is it possible to move this up by 1/4 for conssitency with the other 2 notes?
2013-07-08 00:50 Byakugan249: consistency*
2013-07-08 00:51 Byakugan249: i find it more flowy if you do that as well IMO
2013-07-08 00:52 -Gamu-: 00:01:683 (1) - I extended to blue line next this. 
2013-07-08 00:53 -Gamu-: How's this?
2013-07-08 00:53 Byakugan249: ahh--whoops
2013-07-08 00:53 Byakugan249: that's what i meant to say ><
2013-07-08 00:53 Byakugan249: i mean extend it by 1/4
2013-07-08 00:55 Byakugan249: 00:09:944 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - if you want, you can add that custom beat hitsound to emphasize the beats in the BGM if you know what i'm talking about
2013-07-08 00:55 Byakugan249: iirc, Mafia's maps should have them
2013-07-08 00:56 Byakugan249: also timing points to make it more effective
2013-07-08 00:56 Byakugan249: just a suggestion
2013-07-08 00:57 -Gamu-: ok
2013-07-08 00:58 -Gamu-: I was just simply forgot lol
2013-07-08 00:58 Byakugan249: ahh haha
2013-07-08 00:58 Byakugan249: 00:35:270 (3) - consider removing this note because i find it flow breaking and unfitting to the song IMO
2013-07-08 00:59 -Gamu-: hmm...i see. it is fix
2013-07-08 00:59 Byakugan249: 00:37:118 (4,5,6) - how about increasing the spacing in these notes just like how the BGM gets louder
2013-07-08 01:00 Byakugan249: ?
2013-07-08 01:00 Byakugan249: (4,5) are fine
2013-07-08 01:00 Byakugan249: (6) should be spaced out IMO
2013-07-08 01:04 -Gamu-: ok. i will try~
2013-07-08 01:04 Byakugan249: 00:37:770 (1,2) - i think it'd flow a lot smoother if (2) is removed, and ending a slider at 00:38:096, followed by a circle beside it. if you do this, then you should replace the triplet for a 1/2 slider for a smoother transition in this combo
2013-07-08 01:05 Byakugan249: 00:38:640 (4,5,6) - 
2013-07-08 01:08 -Gamu-: ok
2013-07-08 01:10 Byakugan249: 00:45:379 (3,4,5) - this pattern breaks consistency with 00:52:335 (4,5) - so i say that you make the pattern look like that for consistency?
2013-07-08 01:10 Byakugan249: up to you
2013-07-08 01:12 -Gamu-: that's right. I'll change it
2013-07-08 01:13 Byakugan249: 00:57:988 (5) - make this a NC. this might cause players to hit this note too early D:
2013-07-08 01:14 -Gamu-: ok ok~
2013-07-08 01:15 Byakugan249: 01:33:857 (1) - 
2013-07-08 01:15 Byakugan249: same as my 1st suggestion
2013-07-08 01:15 -Gamu-: roger
2013-07-08 01:16 Byakugan249: i thought of Yui when you said roger D:
2013-07-08 01:16 Byakugan249: from K-on
2013-07-08 01:16 -Gamu-: lol
2013-07-08 01:17 -Gamu-: While I happy, I said, "roger"
2013-07-08 01:17 Byakugan249: ahh :D
2013-07-08 01:17 Byakugan249: 02:08:205 (3) - the finish is intentional right?
2013-07-08 01:18 -Gamu-: Obviously, Strange. I change it. 
2013-07-08 01:18 Byakugan249: to a whistle?
2013-07-08 01:18 -Gamu-: yeah
2013-07-08 01:19 Byakugan249: ahh good
2013-07-08 01:20 Byakugan249: 02:09:509 (6) - how about a jump on this since it fits with the BGM? do Ctrl+> to see
2013-07-08 01:20 -Gamu-: -Indeed..
2013-07-08 01:21 -Gamu-: ok~
2013-07-08 01:21 Byakugan249: and that's it :3
2013-07-08 01:22 Byakugan249: i'll post in a few days
2013-07-08 01:22 -Gamu-: thank you for modding ><//

regenz

1,277 posts

Joined November 2009

regenz 2013-07-15T15:00:54+00:00

[General]

If you can change all colors same as hard diff it's better. it's not blend with video. and can see note very very clearly.

[easy]

can you increase hitsound volume for this diff? ( at start until 00:44:727 (1) - ) it's too quiet for me.

00:37:770 (2) - add finish at head of slider.
01:17:009 (1) - i think this spinner start at 01:16:466 is better.
01:22:988 (5) - same case as above
01:49:075 it's better if you leave this beat blank. ( 01:49:075 (1) - just remove this return and put the note 1 beat forward )
02:01:901 (2) - while leave the break after this note . it's better to map and match the other diff.

[normal]

00:12:553 (4) - is the drum hitsound here is intention or mistake? I don't think it's good.
00:36:683 (5) - delete this note sound better for me.
01:33:857 (1) - i think whistle only start of slider is enough.
02:00:379 (2,3) - i think 1/4 in normal diff is too much . even bpm is slow. ( there are few slider after this that land 1/4 before next note )
02:01:248 (4) - i think spinner here is fit more slider.

[hard]

00:41:248 (1) - whistle at head of slider sound good for me.
00:42:988 (1) - ^
00:43:640 (2) - whistle
02:16:901 this section is too quiet for me use 60 percent is better.

[insane]

00:23:205 (4,5) - can reduce the jump of this note?
00:41:248 (7) - miss whistle at head of slider here?
00:43:640 (2) - ^
01:33:423 (4) - add whistle here sound very good.
01:56:683 (3) - spam whistle at red line here is very good. plz continue spam it until 02:02:118 (3) -

This is very good work. IMO sorry can't help much.

scanter

2,390 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-07-16T00:48:32+00:00

Red = Unrankable or you should fix somethings.
Green = Just chat or General things
Blue = Please consider it. your pattern or something seems to really strange. high level suggestion.

General

iyasine's Hard diff is conflicted combo colour. I recommend to coincidence with other diffs.
Where is -Umi- on your tag? lol
Change diff name -Umi-'sy to -Umi-'s Easy looks more better in order to consistency.
Guy's Normal hasn't video. you should add video on this diff.

-Umi-'sy

00:19:944 (1) - How about this rhythm? following vocals much better in this song.

SPOILER

This is code ~

156,216,19944,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,120,20379,6,0,P|126:77|152:23,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,88,21248,2,0,P|276:88|324:120,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:23:857 - Add finish. you can hear it.
00:34:292 (4,1) - Reverse NC. it is your consistent pattern.
00:37:770 - Add finish.
00:37:770 (2) - Add NC.
01:17:009 (1) - This spinner will alarm to Easy players. how about put this to at least red-tick? like this.
SPOILER
01:23:966 (1) - Same opinion as 01:17:009 (1)
01:26:031 (1) - Reduce 1 repeat and move to 01:26:466 this point. this too hard to play for Easy players. like this.
SPOILER
01:41:683 (1,2) - Reverse NC. sound was changed since 01:42:118 (2) here.
01:44:292 (1) - NC is really not needed.
01:50:379 (1) - ^

Guy's Normal

00:12:553 - Change finish to clap? it is a little strange about hitsounds consistency.
00:26:901 (5,6) - How about change slider one? it is a little hard to play for players.
SPOILER
01:07:335 (3) - How about this rhythm? it will be more fit about following vocals. look at number 3,4
SPOILER
01:28:205 (4,5,6) - Following vocals much better lol. how about following same rhythm 01:26:466 (1,2,3) this? look at number from 4 to 6
SPOILER
01:33:857 (1) - Delete whistle everywhere. all about sound was muted except vocals, so I don't recommend whistle sound.

iyasine's Hard

00:01:783 - There is same timing point. you should delete this one.
00:01:783 - And this is unsnapped timing point. snap to 00:01:792 this point.
00:06:248 (3,4,1) - How about this rhythm? it will be more better about following vocals.
SPOILER
00:08:205 (5,1) - Reverse NC for consistency.
00:16:031 (3) - If you want perfect stack, move to x:329, y:253.
00:29:944 (4) - Add NC for ready to rhythm change?
00:57:553 (1) - Add whistle? looks good about sound changes IMO.
01:07:335 (1) - How about this rhythm? it will become more funny.
SPOILER
01:11:031 (2,3) - I recommend Ctrl + G. actually, this is not good flow, because before flow was anti-clockwise.
01:12:553 (1,2,3) - Why not follow vocals >< every parts of like this was followed vocals. like 01:19:509 (1,2,3) this.
01:48:422 (1) - How about this? because, 01:48:422 this and 01:48:531 this point has a drum sound. in my opinion, 2 circles are better here.
SPOILER
This is code if you want hitsound lol
```
168,128,108422,5,8,0:0:0:0:
168,128,108531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,128,108640,2,0,L|192:92,4,35,4|4|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:49:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - I have an idea about hitsound lol if you want, check it plz
SPOILER
01:49:509 - Add clap
01:49:944 (2) - Change to drum finish
01:50:379 - Change to drum clap
01:50:596 - Change to auto clap.

Insane

00:06:357 (5,1) - Change this to 3/4 slider one? seems to better for following vocals. like this.
SPOILER

00:22:988 (3,4) - Distance gap looks strange. how about put like this?

SPOILER

268,272,22770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,344,22988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,23205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,336,23422,1,8,0:0:0:0:

00:41:248 - Add whistle
00:43:966 (3) - Delete this? I can't catch any sound.
01:00:379 - Delete finish sound. it is not matched this point.

01:03:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - this jump breaks flow IMO. how about put like this?

SPOILER

This is code if you confuse placement lol

20,256,73857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,168,74075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,68,74292,6,0,P|168:96|216:92,1,90
240,76,74618,2,0,L|256:120,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,74944,2,0,P|309:237|278:200,1,90
352,152,75379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,320,75596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,264,75814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,72,76031,6,0,P|368:72|412:92,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,48,76357,2,0,P|431:66|463:103,1,90

01:49:075 (1) - A little ugly slider shapes. Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. players might can beat this too hard. I recommend makes more gentle shapes.
02:05:162 - Add 1 circle here? to ignore strong beat (like your drum hitsound) is not good idea.

That's all

GL anyway ~

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-07-16T03:40:21+00:00

scanter wrote:
-Umi-'sy
00:19:944 (1) - How about this rhythm? following vocals much better in this song.
SPOILER
This is code ~
156,216,19944,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,120,20379,6,0,P|126:77|152:23,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,88,21248,2,0,P|276:88|324:120,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:23:857 - Add finish. you can hear it.
00:34:292 (4,1) - Reverse NC. it is your consistent pattern.
00:37:770 - Add finish.
00:37:770 (2) - Add NC.
01:17:009 (1) - This spinner will alarm to Easy players. how about put this to at least red-tick? like this. other way
SPOILER
01:23:966 (1) - Same opinion as 01:17:009 (1) other way
01:26:031 (1) - Reduce 1 repeat and move to 01:26:466 this point. this too hard to play for Easy players. like this.
SPOILER

01:41:683 (1,2) - Reverse NC. sound was changed since 01:42:118 (2) here.
01:44:292 (1) - NC is really not needed.
01:50:379 (1) - ^
fixed the rest :3

regenz wrote:
[easy]

can you increase hitsound volume for this diff? ( at start until 00:44:727 (1) - ) it's too quiet for me. not for me

00:37:770 (2) - add finish at head of slider. fixed
01:17:009 (1) - i think this spinner start at 01:16:466 is better. other way
01:22:988 (5) - same case as above other way
01:49:075 it's better if you leave this beat blank. ( 01:49:075 (1) - just remove this return and put the note 1 beat forward ) no i prefer how it's now
02:01:901 (2) - while leave the break after this note . it's better to map and match the other diff. no but i'll keep in mind and maybe change later ^^

Thx regenz and scanter for mod

here my diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mp3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 93857
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Call to me, Call for you
TitleUnicode:Call to me, Call for you
Artist:Satou Hiromi
ArtistUnicode:佐藤ひろ美
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:-Umi-'sy
Source:LOVELYxCATION2
Tags:hibiki works game opening hentai eroge umi guy iyasine
BeatmapID:271517
BeatmapSetID:99312

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Hinata.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
2,123187,128504
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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50162,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
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51031,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
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54075,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
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93205,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
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98205,-100,4,2,4,70,0,1
98422,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
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107770,-100,4,2,4,70,0,1
107988,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
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113857,-100,4,2,4,70,0,1
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144292,-100,4,2,3,30,0,0
149944,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
150379,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 98,98,255
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 162,162,255
Combo4 : 0,64,128

[HitObjects]
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144,176,56901,6,8,P|152:128|248:80,1,150,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,80,57988,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,200,58640,5,4,0:0:0:0:
176,276,59075,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,352,59509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,360,59944,2,0,P|384:288|316:180,2,200,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,276,62118,6,0,L|160:276,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,188,62988,2,0,L|264:188,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,100,63857,2,0,L|180:100,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,100,64509,2,0,P|68:136|52:208,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,200,65596,5,4,0:0:0:0:
252,200,66031,2,0,P|308:164|308:116,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,160,66901,2,0,P|404:216|432:260,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,320,67770,2,0,P|296:292|224:304,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,236,69075,6,0,P|320:196|240:196,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,304,70814,2,0,P|276:327|173:298,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,234,71901,1,4,0:0:0:0:
336,109,72553,6,0,P|388:137|448:137,2,100,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,49,73857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,109,74292,2,0,P|124:137|64:137,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,169,75596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,261,76031,2,0,P|264:273|324:249,1,100
256,192,76683,12,8,79075,0:0:0:0:
256,136,79509,6,0,L|256:32,2,100,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,188,80814,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,244,81248,2,0,L|256:344,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,188,82553,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,144,82988,2,0,B|448:192|448:192|428:240,1,100
256,192,83640,12,0,86031,0:0:0:0:
170,255,86466,6,0,P|159:213|200:184,1,100
288,140,87335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,100,87770,6,0,P|420:70|408:27,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,140,89075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,196,89509,5,8,0:0:0:0:
286,260,89944,2,0,B|258:304|174:302|154:258,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,188,91683,6,0,B|200:128|268:96,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,92,92335,2,0,P|380:120|400:228,1,200
256,180,93857,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,268,94292,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,268,94727,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,180,95162,6,0,P|304:168|384:200,2,100,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,220,96466,2,0,P|116:232|64:220,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,136,97770,2,0,B|200:108|248:172|248:172|300:168,2,200
164,220,99944,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,264,100379,2,0,L|372:252,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,324,101683,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,276,102118,6,0,P|128:232|176:220,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,156,102988,2,0,P|168:136|216:152,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,232,104292,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,276,104727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,232,105162,1,8,0:0:0:0:
391,153,105596,6,0,P|311:133|296:136,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,232,106901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,308,107335,2,0,B|364:336|304:336|304:336|216:336,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,232,109075,6,0,L|216:232,2,100,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,148,110379,2,0,L|280:148,1,100,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,48,111248,2,0,P|204:72|180:120,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,204,112118,2,0,P|159:235|103:259,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,156,113422,6,0,P|24:196|20:316,2,200
160,228,115596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,168,116031,6,0,P|276:140|332:132,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,232,116901,2,0,P|364:280|424:300,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,132,118205,6,0,B|280:80|236:116|188:164|128:108,2,200,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,208,120379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,308,120814,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,368,121248,6,0,P|244:388|196:368,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,368,121901,2,0,P|108:300|160:152,1,250,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,188,129944,6,0,P|296:188|352:212,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,304,130814,2,0,P|452:288|472:260,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,188,131683,2,0,P|440:112|468:72,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,60,132553,2,0,P|308:128|272:140,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,44,133857,6,0,P|204:96|252:216,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,244,135162,2,0,P|208:296|240:300,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,300,135814,2,0,P|320:256|428:232,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,148,136901,6,0,P|496:188|504:240,2,100,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,100,138205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,148,138640,2,0,P|240:188|232:240,2,100,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,212,139944,2,0,B|301:235|356:300,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,256,140814,6,0,B|496:216|536:160|494:82|437:146,1,200
345,138,142118,2,0,B|297:83|250:156|290:212|338:252,2,200,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,40,144292,6,0,P|269:49|223:95,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,167,145162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,257,145596,2,0,P|267:284|321:293,2,100,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,186,146901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,88,147335,6,0,P|236:64|336:92,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,148640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,272,149075,2,0,P|344:276|380:252,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,256,149727,2,0,P|412:135|307:64,1,250,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-07-16T11:10:22+00:00

regenz wrote:
[hard]

00:41:248 (1) - whistle at head of slider sound good for me. fixed
00:42:988 (1) - ^ ^
00:43:640 (2) - whistle fixed
02:16:901 this section is too quiet for me use 60 percent is better. fixed

iyasine's Hard

00:01:783 - There is same timing point. you should delete this one. fixed
00:01:783 - And this is unsnapped timing point. snap to 00:01:792 this point. remove green line !
00:06:248 (3,4,1) - How about this rhythm? it will be more better about following vocals.sorry...keep it
SPOILER
00:08:205 (5,1) - Reverse NC for consistency. ok
00:16:031 (3) - If you want perfect stack, move to x:329, y:253. ok
00:29:944 (4) - Add NC for ready to rhythm change? nice!
00:57:553 (1) - Add whistle? looks good about sound changes IMO. keep it
01:07:335 (1) - How about this rhythm? it will become more funny. sorry...keep it
SPOILER
01:11:031 (2,3) - I recommend Ctrl + G. actually, this is not good flow, because before flow was anti-clockwise. nice!
01:12:553 (1,2,3) - Why not follow vocals >< every parts of like this was followed vocals. like 01:19:509 (1,2,3) this. mistake>< nice! fixed!
01:48:422 (1) - How about this? because, 01:48:422 this and 01:48:531 this point has a drum sound. in my opinion, 2 circles are better here.very nice!!
SPOILER
This is code if you want hitsound lol
```
168,128,108422,5,8,0:0:0:0:
168,128,108531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,128,108640,2,0,L|192:92,4,35,4|4|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:49:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - I have an idea about hitsound lol if you want, check it plz
SPOILER
01:49:509 - Add clap sorry...keep it
01:49:944 (2) - Change to drum finish ^
01:50:379 - Change to drum clap nice!
01:50:596 - Change to auto clap. keep it

[/quote]
Thanks for modding~ regenz & scanter!
http://puu.sh/3Ebpo

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,686 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2013-07-16T14:25:34+00:00

request by iyasine

[-Umi-'s Easy]
00:35:596 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

00:49:509 (2) - ^

I like this. try it :3

01:07:770 (4) - Move x:356 y:328 os better.

SPOILER

01:16:031 (5) - ugly slider more centre.

01:16:683 (1) - I think spinner immediately after more need break time. spinner end 01:18:640 - here?
01:23:640 (1) - ^
01:29:075 (2,1,2) - ugly distancesnap.

[Guy's Normal]
tickにもhitsoundをいれませんか？
00:09:292 (4) - まっすぐ直線に配置よりこちらの形のほうが叩きやすそう？

00:23:857 (1) - 4からの流れが少し悪いように見えます。直線なら直線で綺麗に整え歪ませるのであれば少し曲げてはどうでしょう
01:45:596 (6,1) - 歌詞の「ゆうき」の「き」が伸びてるので以下の音取りを試してみてはどうでしょう

01:49:509 (1) - 頭にclap追加してもいいかも。パターンでもそうだし、強い押しにもなりそうでfitしてそう。
02:01:248 (4) - 頭にfinish?

[iyasine's Hard]
00:12:335 (2) - １つのスライダーよりこのように分けたほうがフィットしているように思えました。

01:03:205 (6) - 次の1をフォローしてるかもしれませんが、ココはCtrl+Jの形のほうがフィットすると思います。
01:18:096 - これまでのパターンならここも音を拾うべき？ add note or　直前のスライダーを伸ばす？
01:43:857 (1) - 提案はしないけど、メロディを拾って欲しいところ。

[Insane]
00:49:075 (3) - もう少し綺麗に次の4を囲って欲しいところ
00:52:988 (6) - insaneだからDSとかあまりきにせず3をもっと綺麗に囲めばいいと思う
00:54:727 (5,6,1) - こういった流れはどうかな～・・・

SPOILER

01:12:988 (3) - remove noteして間隔を整えるのはどうでしょう
01:32:770 (1,2,3,4) - 徐々に広がるより、徐々に狭くなるほうがココの音にはあってるような。
01:55:162 (3) - 流れ的にはCtrl+Gのほうがすきかな。

以上です!! good luck and nice map! star~

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2013-07-16T17:35:33+00:00

regenz wrote:
[General]

If you can change all colors same as hard diff it's better. it's not blend with video. and can see note very very clearly. I forgot it lol. fix~

[insane]

00:23:205 (4,5) - can reduce the jump of this note? Do not want to reduce ;;
00:41:248 (7) - miss whistle at head of slider here? yep
00:43:640 (2) - ^ ^
01:33:423 (4) - add whistle here sound very good. good :3
01:56:683 (3) - spam whistle at red line here is very good. plz continue spam it until 02:02:118 (3) - sorry. I don't think so.

This is very good work. IMO sorry can't help much.

scanter wrote:
Red = Unrankable or you should fix somethings.
Green = Just chat or General things
Blue = Please consider it. your pattern or something seems to really strange. high level suggestion.

General
iyasine's Hard diff is conflicted combo colour. I recommend to coincidence with other diffs. fix~
Where is -Umi- on your tag? lol Don't need >< "umi" only~
Change diff name -Umi-'sy to -Umi-'s Easy looks more better in order to consistency. fix~
Guy's Normal hasn't video. you should add video on this diff.fix~
Insane
00:06:357 (5,1) - Change this to 3/4 slider one? seems to better for following vocals. like this. hmm.. good idea. But, I prefer this.
SPOILER
00:22:988 (3,4) - Distance gap looks strange. how about put like this? ok~
SPOILER
268,272,22770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,344,22988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,23205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,336,23422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
00:41:248 - Add whistle ok
00:43:966 (3) - Delete this? I can't catch any sound. ok
01:00:379 - Delete finish sound. it is not matched this point. ^
01:03:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - this jump breaks flow IMO. how about put like this? [color=#FF0000]nice:3[/color]
SPOILER
This is code if you confuse placement lol
20,256,73857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,168,74075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,68,74292,6,0,P|168:96|216:92,1,90
240,76,74618,2,0,L|256:120,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,74944,2,0,P|309:237|278:200,1,90
352,152,75379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,320,75596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,264,75814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,72,76031,6,0,P|368:72|412:92,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,48,76357,2,0,P|431:66|463:103,1,90
01:49:075 (1) - A little ugly slider shapes. Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. players might can beat this too hard. I recommend makes more gentle shapes. ok ok
02:05:162 - Add 1 circle here? to ignore strong beat (like your drum hitsound) is not good idea. hmm....i got it. add~
That's all GL anyway ~

Satellite wrote:

[Insane]
00:49:075 (3) - もう少し綺麗に次の4を囲って欲しいところ　がんばった・・・これがげんｋ（ｒｙ
00:52:988 (6) - insaneだからDSとかあまりきにせず3をもっと綺麗に囲めばいいと思う　たしかに・・
00:54:727 (5,6,1) - こういった流れはどうかな～・・・　いいね！
SPOILER
01:12:988 (3) - remove noteして間隔を整えるのはどうでしょう　やめときます
01:32:770 (1,2,3,4) - 徐々に広がるより、徐々に狭くなるほうがココの音にはあってるような。狭くするのはあんま・・ってかんじ自分は
01:55:162 (3) - 流れ的にはCtrl+Gのほうがすきかな。 ok

以上です!! good luck and nice map! star~

thank you for modding ><///

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-07-18T11:28:54+00:00

[iyasine's Hard]
00:12:335 (2) - １つのスライダーよりこのように分けたほうがフィットしているように思えました。fixed

01:03:205 (6) - 次の1をフォローしてるかもしれませんが、ココはCtrl+Jの形のほうがフィットすると思います。nice!
01:18:096 - これまでのパターンならここも音を拾うべき？ add note or　直前のスライダーを伸ばす？nice!
01:43:857 (1) - 提案はしないけど、メロディを拾って欲しいところ。01:36:901 (1) - ここと合わせてるので！すいません！

さてらいとさんmodと☆ありがと～

http://puu.sh/3FOq3

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-07-18T17:24:32+00:00

Satellite wrote:

request by iyasine

[-Umi-'s Easy]
00:35:596 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. prefer how it's now but i'll keep in mind :3

00:49:509 (2) - ^ ^

I like this. try it :3 where ?

01:07:770 (4) - Move x:356 y:328 os better. fixed
SPOILER
01:16:031 (5) - ugly slider more centre. fixed

01:16:683 (1) - I think spinner immediately after more need break time. spinner end 01:18:640 - here? fixed
01:23:640 (1) - ^ fixed
01:29:075 (2,1,2) - ugly distancesnap. fixed

ありがとう satelliteさん

Here my diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mp3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 93857
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Call to me, Call for you
TitleUnicode:Call to me, Call for you
Artist:Satou Hiromi
ArtistUnicode:佐藤ひろ美
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:-Umi-'s Easy
Source:LOVELYxCATION2
Tags:hibiki works game opening hentai eroge umi guy iyasine
BeatmapID:271517
BeatmapSetID:99312

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Hinata.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
2,123187,128504
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2013-07-20T06:03:56+00:00

As your request via in-game PM

[General]

For Hard diff - add code below to change the same combo color with the other diffs, or it looks really weird...

[Colours]
Combo1 : 98,98,255
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 162,162,255
Combo4 : 0,64,128

just add it to where is under [TimingPoints] like the other diffs.

[Easy]

00:22:118 (3,1) - do them like this for a nice blanket, please ! here is the code↓

244,176,22118,2,0,B|252:268|192:320|76:308|56:200,1,300,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:09:075 (1) - move slider's second point to (348,208); move third point to (272,200) for a better blanket with 01:07:770 (4).

01:16:031 (5) - add finish on the slider's head since there is a symbal need to be emphasized.
oh, and you forgot to add clap on the end lol.

01:22:988 (5) - same as above lol

01:23:640 (1) - add clap like you did for 01:16:683 (1).

01:26:466 (1) - the slider's head really need a finish sound here.

01:27:770 (1) - ...it just looks ... sexy (? pretty ugly. adjust the points on it like this would look much better.

01:32:335 (2) - no need to silence, do not ignore that drum, please ! lol add clap to slider's end and remove the green line here.

01:42:988 (2) - move the last point of the slider to (212,140) for a better blanket with the end of 01:42:118 (1).

01:49:075 (1) - quite strange slience apply. as the vocal sounds very strong, using 40% volume with non-hitsound makes much sense.

02:13:857 (1) - move it to (260,40) and adjust its third point (240,216). and then move 02:15:162 (2) to (144,256). see how they look.

02:16:901 (1) - second point → (488,188) ; third point (496,248) for a perfect blanket.

02:19:944 (4) - no... it looks ugly actually orz (you can ask some people about this if you don't blieve =.=). simply adjusting the slider's points to make the slider like this is much better.

02:16:901 (1) - overmapped. Obviously there is no beat at 02:17:335 (the beat is at 02:17:227). so at least make it silent like you did before otherwise it sound weird. It is necessary for me.

02:18:640 (3) - and so is 02:19:075.

02:24:292 (1) - third point to (220,92) for a better blanket with 02:22:118 (2).

[Normal]

would be appreciated if you add slidertick sound for your diff.

01:33:857 (1) - I must say the hitsounds here don't fit the music at all ... orz they need to be removed. otherwise you can do something like -umi- did for his/her Easy, it feels much better exactly.

02:00:379 (2,3) - it is fine if use two sliders connect 1/4 beat. But slider → note is hard (hard to get 300) and complex for a low level diff. I suggest extend 02:00:379 (2) to 02:00:814 and add a circle at 02:01:031.

02:01:248 (3) - reduce 02:01:248 (3) to 02:02:118 by using "Edit/Scale by..." and add a circle at 02:02:553. 02:02:118 is a symbal there so I feel it should not be ignored though.

02:22:118 (3) - overmapped. Obviously there is no beat at 02:22:553. At least make the volume as 5% otherwise it sound weird. It is necessary for me. and the whistle should be removed btw.

Hitsounds sound too empty, why didn't you use some default soft whistles to make hitsounds more abundant ?

[Hard]

just a note : 5% volume (silence) for the END of slider is not unrankable.

00:06:466 (1) - overmapped. Obviously there is no beat at 00:06:683. At least make the volume as 5% otherwise it sound weird. It is necessary for me.

00:08:640 (2,3) - these should be removed since they follow nothing. extend 00:08:205 (1) to 00:09:075.

00:10:162 - 5% volume

00:11:031 - ^

00:26:466 (2) - (1.4x DS)move it to (220,196) then you can see the spacing among 00:25:379 (6,1,2) is consistent, it looks prettier.
and adjust 00:26:901 (3) to (380,236) for fixing the wrong spacing after you do what I wrote above.

some points which need 5% volume

02:19:727 - 5% volume

02:20:596 - ^

02:21:031 - ^

02:22:553 - ^

02:24:944 - ^

02:26:683 - ^

02:27:553 - ^

02:28:314 - ^

02:29:509 - 5% volume and remove whistle, it doesn't follow anything here.

[Insane]

00:01:683 (1,1,1) - I remember we have discussed the rhythm like this before, and I'm sure it is a kind of overmap since there are no beat at 00:02:009、00:02:444、00:02:879. At least make their volume as 5% otherwise they sound weird. It is necessary for me.

some points which need 5% volume

00:05:379 - 5% volume

00:06:683 - ^

00:08:640 - ^

00:16:357 - ^

00:16:792 - ^

01:34:183 - ^

01:34:618 - ^

01:35:053 - ^

02:17:988 - ^

02:19:727 - ^

02:24:944 - ^

02:26:683 - ^

02:27:988 - ^

02:28:422 - ^

02:29:509 - ^

00:12:335 (3) - I can't get why the spacing between 00:12:009 (2,3) is so close, it is time for jump ! ctrl + g for 00:12:009 (2) 「recommended !」or move 00:12:335 (3) a bit right to increase the spacing.

00:15:162 (1) - It's a little hard to see because of the vedio. I would say changing combo color to grey is better for reading.

00:25:379 (5) - move to (376,68) for more enjoyable and prettier pattern.

00:54:944 (6) - move it to (332,64) to make (5)→(6)→(1) consistency spacing. It would look prettier.

01:07:988 (2,3) - I feel the spacing between them doesn't make sense and plays a bit awkward because of suddenly large jump. So how about remaking 01:07:988 (2) like this to reduse the spacing a bit ? the flow between 01:07:988 (2,3) seems better, too.
btw, notice that 01:07:988 (2)'s tail should be stacked perfectly with 01:09:075 (1) for a clean pattern.

01:14:618 (2) - move the second point of the slider to (276,120) for a better flow between 01:14:618 (2,3). also 01:14:618 (2,3,4) would become prettier after you did this.

01:55:162 (3) - I feel much better if you ctrl + g for it. not only the flow between 01:54:944 (2,3) but also the flow between 01:55:162 (3,4,5) are better than now.

02:11:248 (4,5,1) - I really don't like the jump because the degree 02:11:248 (4,5,1) is too slight, it plays uncomfortable though... I would suggest move 02:11:466 (5) to (368,76) for a better solution. But I should say it is still not good for me because of the slight degree. since I can't find any way to increase the degree so I can just suggest what I suggested before ...

02:19:944 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - just saying, I personally really hate this kind of overlap which is 1/1 beats after a stream. it plays awkward IMO...

good luck on ranking it, gamu-san \^^/

btw

scanter wrote:
:O 2013 best eroge song

How about this ?

Last edited by DarknessAngel 2013-07-21T02:42:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-07-20T14:51:48+00:00

DarknessAngel wrote:
As your request via in-game PM

[General]

For Hard diff - add code below to change the same combo color with the other diffs, or it looks really weird...
[Colours]
Combo1 : 98,98,255
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 162,162,255
Combo4 : 0,64,128
just add it to where is under [TimingPoints] like the other diffs.

[Easy]

00:22:118 (3,1) - do them like this for a nice blanket, please ! here is the code↓
244,176,22118,2,0,B|252:268|192:320|76:308|56:200,1,300,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:09:075 (1) - move slider's second point to (348,208); move third point to (272,200) for a better blanket with 01:07:770 (4).

01:16:031 (5) - add finish on the slider's head since there is a symbal need to be emphasized.
oh, and you forgot to add clap on the end lol.

01:22:988 (5) - same as above lol

01:23:640 (1) - add clap like you did for 01:16:683 (1).

01:26:466 (1) - the slider's head really need a finish sound here.

01:27:770 (1) - ...it just looks ... sexy (? pretty ugly. adjust the points on it like this would look much better.

01:32:335 (2) - no need to silence, do not ignore that drum, please ! lol add clap to slider's end and remove the green line here. no i like this silence >.<

01:42:988 (2) - move the last point of the slider to (212,140) for a better blanket with the end of 01:42:118 (1).

01:49:075 (1) - quite strange slience apply. as the vocal sounds very strong, using 40% volume with non-hitsound makes much sense. same as above

02:13:857 (1) - move it to (260,40) and adjust its third point (240,216). and then move 02:15:162 (2) to (144,256). see how they look.

02:16:901 (1) - second point → (488,188) ; third point (496,248) for a perfect blanket.

02:19:944 (4) - no... it looks ugly actually orz (you can ask some people about this if you don't blieve =.=). simply adjusting the slider's points to make the slider like this is much better.

02:16:901 (1) - overmapped. Obviously there is no beat at 02:17:335 (the beat is at 02:17:227). so at least make it silent like you did before otherwise it sound weird. It is necessary for me.

02:18:640 (3) - and so is 02:19:075.

02:24:292 (1) - third point to (220,92) for a better blanket with 02:22:118 (2).

Fixed the rest

thx for mod :3

Here my diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mp3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 93857
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Call to me, Call for you
TitleUnicode:Call to me, Call for you
Artist:Satou Hiromi
ArtistUnicode:佐藤ひろ美
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:-Umi-'s Easy
Source:LOVELYxCATION2
Tags:hibiki works game opening hentai eroge umi guy iyasine
BeatmapID:271517
BeatmapSetID:99312

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Hinata.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
2,123187,128504
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-07-21T06:54:41+00:00

Thank you for modding :3

http://puu.sh/3HWNP.zip

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-07-21T11:00:21+00:00

All fixed ! Thanks for modding D.N Angel

http://puu.sh/3I31g

-Neipezi

2,263 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2013-07-21T13:52:48+00:00

Guma san nice song^3^

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2013-07-22T09:06:27+00:00

from in-game

[Easy]
01:26:466 (1) - forget clap?
01:27:770 (1) - remove NC?

[Normal]
00:01:683 (1) - This shape looks fit with next 1
00:06:901 (2) - end at 00:07:553 sounds better
00:12:553 (4) - drums here don't change.just set the hitsound like previous notes
00:25:596 (3,4) - I personally don't suggest putting 1/4 time-distance notes in normal diff
01:17:770 (1) - seems no need to add NC here?
02:01:248 (3) - the end in music is not clap.drum-hitfinish is better here

[Hard]
01:41:031 (3,1,2,3) - if you test here.you'll see how SL works
02:28:096 (3) - in fact,there is no sound on the end of the slider
totally neat diff but I don't like the way you put 3/4

[Insane]
00:01:683 (1,1,1) - use1/2 and silent 3 sliders' end.that will sound much better
00:03:640 (2) - る starts at 00:03:748..
00:36:683 (2,3,4,5,6) - the same distance is better
00:51:466 (9,10,1) - make them straight fits better here
01:16:031 (1,2,3) - seems a little ugly..try another way?
01:34:727 (1) - add sliderbody whistle

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-07-22T11:53:13+00:00

All fixed ! thanks for modding~ No_Gu

http://puu.sh/3IQPD

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-07-22T12:24:13+00:00

Fixed both thx for mod o/

Here my diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mp3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 93857
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Call to me, Call for you
TitleUnicode:Call to me, Call for you
Artist:Satou Hiromi
ArtistUnicode:佐藤ひろ美
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:-Umi-'s Easy
Source:LOVELYxCATION2
Tags:hibiki works game opening hentai eroge umi guy iyasine
BeatmapID:271517
BeatmapSetID:99312

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
2,123187,128504
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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ZLOdeuka-

1,442 posts

Joined June 2009

ZLOdeuka- 2013-08-08T15:12:13+00:00

Hello~ mod4mod [ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/106407 ]

[-Umi-'s Easy]

very easy and well played.

00:26:466 (1) - remove new combo. I think it is better to move it here 00:27:335 (2) . white tick and I think is more suitable to the music

01:27:770 (1) 01:31:683 (1) - remove new comob

01:44:292 (3) - place it at the end of the slide 01:42:118 (1)

[Guy's Normal]

this complexity is difficult to pass. Music is the same, but first there is a transition 00:02:988 (1,2) then 00:25:596 (3,4) . very awkward combination. it confuses players. it is better to do one thing

01:44:509 (4) - http://puu.sh/3WSx3.jpg maybe this will sound better

01:49:075 (1,1) - ^ http://puu.sh/3WSAs.jpg

[iyasine's Hard]

00:13:422 (1,2) - it is better if they do not touch each other

00:29:944 (1) - remove new combo

00:34:075 (x) - add circle

in your place I would have looked again the balance of the new combo. I think it is not as usual but I'm afraid to offer you my rasstonovki because I do not know whether it is better.

I like the diff

[Insane]

00:04:509 (1) - remove new combo

01:33:205 (3,4) - spacing . 3 combo pick up a little higher.

00:08:205 (1) - remove new combo and 00:09:292 (2) - new combo

I have nothing more to add. I think all well

omg, it is so cool to play.

BG all the girls are great ... D:

Godd luck!!

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-08-09T20:07:36+00:00

All fixed ! Thanks for modding~ ZLOdeuka

http://puu.sh/3XTNZ

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2013-08-10T21:52:52+00:00

DarknessAngel wrote:
As your request via in-game PM

good luck on ranking it, gamu-san \^^/

btw

scanter wrote:
:O 2013 best eroge song
How about this ?

wow nice song <33

thank you for everyone ;3

Sephibro

315 posts

Joined November 2012

Sephibro 2013-08-11T17:15:19+00:00

hi! m4m on Vocaloid Eight - Crazy Night

[Insane]
hp, cs, ar and od are ok

00:01:683 (1,1,1) - i hate this kind of rhythm pattern, so i'll propose a possible fix each time i find one. http://puu.sh/3Zpe7.jpg
00:03:314 (1,2) - these two are almost unplayable because they start on a blue tick, possible fix: http://puu.sh/3ZoPS.jpg
00:16:031 (1,1) - http://puu.sh/3Zprm.jpg and whistle on each head
00:53:748 (2) - it's cool here
01:16:031 (1,1,1) - they should be closer maybe, only 1/4 time between each
01:19:835 (2) - 01:21:575 (2) - starting sliders on blue ticks is like talking with wrong accent
01:33:857 (1,1,1) - http://puu.sh/3ZpNb.jpg

[Hard]
HP Drain and OD are too low, increase by at least one

00:33:857 (4,5,1) - same pattern as 00:30:162 (5,6,7) - 00:37:553 (5,6,1) etc. I suggest not to overlap 4 and 5 on the slider

very good diff btw

[Normal]
hp cs ar od are ok

00:05:814 (1) - i don't like this slider starting on a red tick, i would put a circle on the previous white tick
01:26:248 - circle here
01:27:988 - ^

[Easy]
i don't think there's anything to change here, very good hitsounds too

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-08-12T08:34:56+00:00

[Hard]
HP Drain and OD are too low, increase by at least one OD+1

00:33:857 (4,5,1) - same pattern as 00:30:162 (5,6,7) - 00:37:553 (5,6,1) etc. I suggest not to overlap 4 and 5 on the slider sorry...keep it

very good diff btw

Thanks for modding~ Sephibro

http://puu.sh/401ab

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-08-12T09:44:18+00:00

Some change in my diff :3

Here

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mp3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 93857
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Call to me, Call for you
TitleUnicode:Call to me, Call for you
Artist:Satou Hiromi
ArtistUnicode:佐藤ひろ美
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:-Umi-'s Easy
Source:LOVELYxCATION2
Tags:hibiki works game opening hentai eroge umi guy iyasine
BeatmapID:271517
BeatmapSetID:99312

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Thx modders o/

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,464 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2013-08-14T03:07:20+00:00

Hey Gamu~ from in-game :>

[General]

Shouldn't you add -Umi- into your tags, since it can be searched in-game?
SPOILER

[Insane]

00:01:683 (1,1,1) - This placement might be a bit crowded. How about increase their spacing gradually, just like how the music goes? It will be much better and nicer for the placement! You can take a look at the example picture if you accept this~
SPOILER
00:03:748 (2) - This should be placed at 1/8 line (00:03:694 - ). By listening the music here about 5 times, I'm sure that the vocal appears at that 1/8 line. You should move this to there, and end it as same as where it ends now.
00:22:988 (3,4,5) - Change these notes to a regular triangle? cuz I have obsessive-compulsive disorderIf you accept that, you can move (2) into this triangle's center :p
00:36:683 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Ugly patterns ;_; Change them to a hexagon by using "create polygon circles"?
00:49:944 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can make a jump between them, just like how you did in 00:56:901 (1,2,3,4) -. Both patterns follows the same vocal, which is kinda high pitch. Jump might be fun, right?
01:07:118 (6,1) - Don't you think this jump is too far? Well, just saying, cuz I'm noob at osu!
01:12:879 (2,3,4) - This stream might be a bit weird since it follows vocals and that clap sound at the same time. The players might be confused since most of players will listen to the music and beat those objects. To solve this problem, I'll suggest you to change these three notes to a 1/2 slider, and add a S:C4 green lines at 01:12:988 -, where the clap sound appears. That's the way more better, imo!
01:16:031 (1,1,1) - Those nces are unnecessary, because it isn't hard to read. Remove them.
01:48:640 (4,5) - Jump pls. Try to move (5) to x:336, y:352 to make a regular jump between (4,1).
01:51:575 (3) - ;_; That slider.
The patterns during kiai time are just <3

[iyasine's Hard]

00:51:031 (7,1) - Not sure of this, but are you making a jump here? If yes, you should increase the spacing between more a bit. Players won't think it's a jump if the spacing is too small, they'll think "isn't the rhythm here changing?" and just beating it in a wrong way.
01:11:466 (4) - I can hear a quiet finish sound in the music, how about add a finish to emphasize it?
I love this diff very much. Nice job iyasine-chan!

[Guy's Normal]

01:52:118 (6) - Change to a 1/2 slider to follow the vocal at 01:52:335 - ?

[-Umi-'s Easy]

00:19:944 - / 00:20:814 - / 00:21:683 - / 00:32:118 - Where are the claps?
01:22:988 (5) - Add a finish at the begin of the slider, and add a clap at the end of the slider.
02:01:248 (1) - oops. Might be a bit dangerous, so please move it some girds up.
SPOILER
Except those hitsounds, others are just nice and clean.

Good luck gamu san =w=!

Startrick

361 posts

Joined June 2013

Startrick 2013-08-14T03:17:50+00:00

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Last edited by Startrick 2017-12-27T02:52:58+00:00, edited 7 times in total.

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-08-14T04:51:04+00:00

Flask wrote:
Hey Gamu~ from in-game :>

[-Umi-'s Easy]
00:19:944 - / 00:20:814 - / 00:21:683 - / 00:32:118 - Where are the claps?
01:22:988 (5) - Add a finish at the begin of the slider, and add a clap at the end of the slider.
02:01:248 (1) - oops. Might be a bit dangerous, so please move it some girds up.
SPOILER
Except those hitsounds, others are just nice and clean.
All fixed

Startrick wrote:
as per your request...

[-Umi-'s Easy]
00:02:988 (1) - 1 grid right
00:31:683 (2) -
SPOILER
365,276,31683,2,0,B|434:275|442:323,2,100
very slight modified...
01:16:031 (5) -
SPOILER

more tidy?
01:20:814 (2,4) - how about 1 grid down?
01:26:466 (1,2,3,4,1) -
SPOILER
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how about this?
01:29:944 (2) -
SPOILER
292,264,89944,2,0,B|264:308|180:306|160:262,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
very slight modified...
01:31:683 (1) - second slider point 2 grid right?
01:37:770 (3) - 1 grid up and right
01:58:205 (1) -
SPOILER
328,132,118205,6,0,B|284:80|240:116|192:164|132:108,2,200,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
very slight modified...
Almost fixed

Thx for mod

diff

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 93857
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

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Title:Call to me, Call for you
TitleUnicode:Call to me, Call for you
Artist:Satou Hiromi
ArtistUnicode:佐藤ひろ美
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:-Umi-'s Easy
Source:LOVELYxCATION2
Tags:hibiki works game opening hentai eroge umi guy iyasine
BeatmapID:271517
BeatmapSetID:99312

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
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312,268,94727,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,180,95162,6,0,P|308:168|388:200,2,100,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,220,96466,2,0,P|120:232|68:220,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,132,97770,2,0,B|208:104|256:168|256:168|308:164,2,200
168,220,99944,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,264,100379,2,0,L|376:252,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,324,101683,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,276,102118,6,0,P|132:232|180:220,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,133,102988,2,0,P|173:121|235:145,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,220,104292,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,264,104727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,105162,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,132,105596,6,0,P|336:120|276:145,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,218,106901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,308,107335,2,0,B|368:336|308:336|308:336|220:336,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,232,109075,6,0,L|220:232,2,100,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,148,110379,2,0,L|284:148,1,100,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,48,111248,2,0,P|208:72|184:120,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,204,112118,2,0,P|163:235|107:259,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,156,113422,6,0,P|28:196|24:316,2,200
164,228,115596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,168,116031,6,0,P|280:140|336:132,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,232,116901,2,0,P|368:280|428:300,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,132,118205,6,0,B|284:80|240:116|192:164|132:108,2,200,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,208,120379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,308,120814,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,336,121248,6,0,P|227:343|187:327,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,316,121901,2,0,P|96:248|148:100,1,250,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,188,129944,6,0,P|296:188|352:212,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,304,130814,2,0,P|452:288|472:260,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,188,131683,2,0,P|440:112|468:72,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,60,132553,2,0,P|308:128|272:140,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,40,133857,6,0,P|208:92|240:216,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,244,135162,2,0,P|208:296|240:300,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,300,135814,2,0,P|320:256|428:232,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,148,136901,6,0,P|488:188|496:248,2,100,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,100,138205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,148,138640,2,0,P|240:188|232:240,2,100,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,212,139944,2,0,P|346:275|386:324,1,100
448,256,140814,6,0,B|496:216|536:160|494:82|437:146,1,200
345,138,142118,2,0,B|297:83|250:156|290:212|338:252,2,200,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,40,144292,6,0,P|271:46|222:94,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,167,145162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,257,145596,2,0,P|267:284|321:293,2,100,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,186,146901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,88,147335,6,0,P|236:64|336:92,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,148640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,272,149075,2,0,P|344:276|380:252,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,256,149727,2,0,P|412:135|307:64,1,250,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-08-14T11:10:52+00:00

Flask wrote:
[iyasine's Hard]

00:51:031 (7,1) - Not sure of this, but are you making a jump here? If yes, you should increase the spacing between more a bit. Players won't think it's a jump if the spacing is too small, they'll think "isn't the rhythm here changing?" and just beating it in a wrong way.ok~.Distance x1.8
01:11:466 (4) - I can hear a quiet finish sound in the music, how about add a finish to emphasize it?fixed.add finish(Audio volume -10%)
I love this diff very much. Nice job iyasine-chan! Thanks

Startrick wrote:
[iyasine's Hard]
00:29:944 (4) - x:348 y:164? nice!
00:30:162 (5,6,7) - x:412 y:88? ok!
02:22:988 (3) - fixed

SPOILER

88,218,142988,2,0,P|66:234|42:243,2,52.5000020027161,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

how about this?

Thanks for modding~ Flask . Startrick

http://puu.sh/41NfM

Gamu

Elite Mapper

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Topic Starter

Gamu 2013-08-15T22:57:49+00:00

Sephibro wrote:
hi! m4m on Vocaloid Eight - Crazy Night

[Insane]
hp, cs, ar and od are ok

00:01:683 (1,1,1) - i hate this kind of rhythm pattern, so i'll propose a possible fix each time i find one. http://puu.sh/3Zpe7.jpg sorry, i prefer this..
00:03:314 (1,2) - these two are almost unplayable because they start on a blue tick, possible fix: http://puu.sh/3ZoPS.jpg ^
00:16:031 (1,1) - http://puu.sh/3Zprm.jpg and whistle on each head ok
00:53:748 (2) - it's cool here :3
01:16:031 (1,1,1) - they should be closer maybe, only 1/4 time between each I will change :3
01:19:835 (2) - 01:21:575 (2) - starting sliders on blue ticks is like talking with wrong accent no problem ><
01:33:857 (1,1,1) - http://puu.sh/3ZpNb.jpg same as 00:01:683(1,1,1)

Flask wrote:
Hey Gamu~ from in-game :>

[General]
Shouldn't you add -Umi- into your tags, since it can be searched in-game? ok!
SPOILER
[Insane]
00:01:683 (1,1,1) - This placement might be a bit crowded. How about increase their spacing gradually, just like how the music goes? It will be much better and nicer for the placement! You can take a look at the example picture if you accept this~ ok! fix~
SPOILER
00:03:748 (2) - This should be placed at 1/8 line (00:03:694 - ). By listening the music here about 5 times, I'm sure that the vocal appears at that 1/8 line. You should move this to there, and end it as same as where it ends now. But 1/8 is hard. I do not want too much...orz
00:22:988 (3,4,5) - Change these notes to a regular triangle? cuz I have obsessive-compulsive disorderIf you accept that, you can move (2) into this triangle's center :p ok~
00:36:683 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Ugly patterns ;_; Change them to a hexagon by using "create polygon circles"? clean the look~
00:49:944 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can make a jump between them, just like how you did in 00:56:901 (1,2,3,4) -. Both patterns follows the same vocal, which is kinda high pitch. Jump might be fun, right? ok~
01:07:118 (6,1) - Don't you think this jump is too far? Well, just saying, cuz I'm noob at osu! ok ok :3 fix~
01:12:879 (2,3,4) - This stream might be a bit weird since it follows vocals and that clap sound at the same time. The players might be confused since most of players will listen to the music and beat those objects. To solve this problem, I'll suggest you to change these three notes to a 1/2 slider, and add a S:C4 green lines at 01:12:988 -, where the clap sound appears. That's the way more better, imo! I see. i fixe it~
01:16:031 (1,1,1) - Those nces are unnecessary, because it isn't hard to read. Remove them. I will change :3
01:48:640 (4,5) - Jump pls. Try to move (5) to x:336, y:352 to make a regular jump between (4,1). ok
01:51:575 (3) - ;_; That slider. ;w;
The patterns during kiai time are just <3
Good luck gamu san =w=!

Startrick wrote:
as per your request...

[Insane]
00:02:118 (1,1,1) - remove nc? no! need!
00:16:466 (1) - ^ ^
00:31:683 (4) - 1 grid down? hmm... i don't think so
01:16:357 (1,1) - remove nc? need~
02:29:727 (1) - 1 grid up? i don't think so.

sorry i'm very poor...
you can ignore all that...

nice map~ good luck!

thank you for modding ><//

Guy

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Guy 2013-08-16T02:29:49+00:00

http://puu.sh/43eRK.zip

遅れました o.o

Thank you

Gamu

Elite Mapper

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Topic Starter

Gamu 2013-08-16T04:07:45+00:00

ok! all diff updated :3

ありがとう_(:3 ⌒ﾞ)_

RikiH_

1,149 posts

Joined February 2011

RikiH_ 2013-08-16T10:11:24+00:00

Here is my m4m

Black=Suggestion
Blue=Should fix
Red=Unrankable/High suggestion

General

Fine

-Umi-'s Easy

00:30:814 (1,2) - These sliders look ugly, I'd make a normal curve...
00:39:509 (3) - Please attention, this is really, really, really close to the edge of the screen (1/2 pixels) I suggest to move the whole pattern 1/2 grids up (I mean this pattern: 00:37:770 (1,2,3,) )
01:16:683 (1) - This is too near to the previous sliders and newbie players can't play it properly, start it in 01:16:901 -
01:23:640 (1) - Same, let it start in 01:23:857 -
01:58:205 (1) - This is not symmetrical...

Guy's Normal

01:44:727 (5,6,7) - I think this pattern can be improved,,, Try to make it symmetrical
01:55:814 (6) - Clap here?

iyasine's Hard

00:04:509 (4) - It sounds way better if you end this 1/4 earlier, maybe with a whistle on it, so you can emphasize that bell in the song (I suggest to use the soft-whistle3)
00:05:814 (2,3,4) - These are completely off... Especially these 00:06:248 (3,4) - Unfortunately I'm not a timing expert and I don't know how to fix them, try to ask someone more expert than me in timing... (I suggest Charles445)

Insane

00:01:683 (1,1) - Same problem as Hard diff... Thee sliders are totally off...
00:05:814 (3,4,5) - ^ Sorry if I don't know how to help, I feel so useless

___________________________

The rest is fine, I think your map is ready for a bubble, ask a BAT

Gamu

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Topic Starter

Gamu 2013-08-16T11:45:56+00:00

RikiH_ wrote:
Here is my m4m

Black=Suggestion
Blue=Should fix
Red=Unrankable/High suggestion

Insane

00:01:683 (1,1) - Same problem as Hard diff... Thee sliders are totally off... no problem >< It does not become completely silent.
00:05:814 (3,4,5) - ^ Sorry if I don't know how to help, I feel so useless 　^

___________________________

The rest is fine, I think your map is ready for a bubble, ask a BAT I'm looking for a BAT!

thank you for modding ></

Konei

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Joined March 2012

Konei 2013-08-16T17:37:59+00:00

Yooo, from the QAT thread ~

[General]

You could consider to add "visual novel vn" to tags.

[-Umi-'s Easy]

00:42:988 (2) - Maybe you'd like to blanket this with 1 to fit your previous patterns, it seems more logical this way.
00:58:640 (1,3) - Center those two on the grid? Gives a more clean look, move 2 accordingly if you do this of course.
01:04:509 (4) - Using 1/2 rhythm doesn't fit the song here at all, seeing as this still is a quite part and following the vocals here is unreasonable due to them being as weak as always, so you should rather shorten this by 1/2 and move this 1/2 later.
01:10:814 (2) - Cymbals and guitar are not heard on the end, in fact I'd replace the finish by a whistle to give the following finish more emphasis.
01:16:031 (5) - Here should be a NC, otherwise your NC pattern is inconsistent.
01:22:988 (5) - Same here.
01:29:944 (2) - Would be better to make this Slider symmetrical, just redo it.
01:32:335 (2) - Here, 1/2 is a good idea due to the vocals, but I'd recommend to add either a whistle or a finish to the start, to show the music turning louder.
01:49:075 (1) - Well yea, this is not acceptable. The start is not hearable in game. Also newbies will be confused way more than pro players will be but either way, if you dont want this sound to be heard (because there is nothing in the music) just remove the repeat and move the Slider 1/1 later, it will also improve gameplay since it is better to start Slider on heavy beats.
02:15:814 (3) - This doesnt make much sense, following the vocal on an Easy is kinda wry since you wont be able to follow it consistently, you should shorten this by 1/2 and move it the same amount back, this way you'll also catch the cymbal on 02:16:031 -
02:26:901 (4) - Looks a bit untidy, just optional, but you could reconsider placement here.

[Guy's Normal]

I would prefer if you'd switch to tick rate 2 so Sliders like 00:18:640 - will have the costum tick.
00:28:205 (2) - Using 1/2 rhyhtm here is unfiting and sounds forced, I'd replace the Slider by a single note.
00:35:162 (2) - Same here.
00:38:422 (2) - Consider to remove this note in order to get the 1/2 rhyhtm under control, it's far too much at the moment.
02:28:205 (2,3) - Flows a bit wry at the moment and doesn't really represent the soft melody here well in my opinion, how about removing three and adding a repeat to two?
Quite a nice Normal, tho 1/2 rhythm is really challenging a bit as the 1/4 Sliders are, hue.

[iyasine's Hard]

Recommending tick rate 2 for the same reasons as on Normal.
You should try to add a Spinner somewhere to have a varying score.
00:04:509 (4) - Ending this on the blue tick doesnt follow anything, really nothing, shortening it by 1/4 would follow the piano on the downbeat so I'd rather do this.
00:04:944 (1) - Try a whistle at the start, it will emphasize the high vocal and the piano.
00:06:466 (1) - Same here to follow the piano.
00:14:292 - I'd love if you could tone down that Slidertick sound, it's too loud compared to the normal hitsounds.
00:21:575 (4) - Why does this start on the blue tick? Doesn't make much sense at all so I'd move it 1/4 later.
00:28:531 (4) - Here aswell, if you remove this Slider, you'll hear that it plays on nothing.
00:31:140 (2) - Here again.
00:32:879 (2) - And again, I won't mention this anymore, but I highly advise you to change them all as they don't follow the song correctly, also you should not use this kind of overmapping on a Hard diff.
00:44:183 (2) - I don't find this stack pretty good to play, in fact it is confusing and flowing odd, you could start the kick Slider here to avoid this.
01:25:922 (4) - Same thing here.
01:33:857 (1,2,3) - Consider adding whistles to those three, her vocal is rather high and strong here so it would not be wrong to emphasize it, leaving it empty sounds odd here.
01:51:031 (1) - This sounds rhythmical wry, why did you end it on the blue tick? There is no reason even the opposite because the drum is playing on that white tick. I'd rather shorten this by 1/4 to follow the drums than following nothing.
02:02:444 (4) - Same as on the other points.

[Insane]

Same things about Spinner and Slidertick rate as on Hard.
00:06:357 (5) - This note is badly overmapped, seeing that the part is calm and the music doesnt call for an emphasis you should just remove it.
00:28:531 (4) - I don't hear any sound on the blue tick here, also the rhythm sounds more accurat to the song by removing it.
00:35:922 (6) - Same here.
00:51:466 (8,9,1) - How about increasing spacing for this triple? It feels weird having the same spacing here as you jumped on the previous part aswell.
01:09:075 (1) - Try a whistle at the start to emphasize the heave piano note here?
01:25:488 - Here should be a note according to the violine (or whatever this is) in the background.
01:38:640 (1) - Add a whistle to the start? It feels a bit empty at the moment, especially since the music became stronger.
01:50:596 (3) - In fact, I'd prefer having a note on 3's start and a Sliderstart or note on the end since the strong sound on the downbeat would be better if it was clickable, you see that?
02:19:509 (2) - Ehh, looks a bit bad due to the touching of those 2 Sliders, could you either think of another pattern or space them out so they won't touch?

That's it, actually a really good mapset, but I'd like to get this overdone 1/4 rhythm out of the Hard.
Also this silenced Sliderstart on Easy needs to be fixed.

Good luck then :>

Gamu

Elite Mapper

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Topic Starter

Gamu 2013-08-17T05:26:58+00:00

Konei wrote:

Yooo, from the QAT thread ~ hi~ :3

[General]

You could consider to add "visual novel vn" to tags. added~ But, "vn" is unnecessary. I think so
[Insane]

Same things about Spinner and Slidertick rate as on Hard. There is no change of the slider tick.. I do not like too much..orz And, spinner does not add. Indeed, the fact that you said right thing. I could not find the place to add.
00:06:357 (5) - This note is badly overmapped, seeing that the part is calm and the music doesnt call for an emphasis you should just remove it. I see. removed~
00:28:531 (4) - I don't hear any sound on the blue tick here, also the rhythm sounds more accurat to the song by removing it. ok.
00:35:922 (6) - Same here. ^
00:51:466 (8,9,1) - How about increasing spacing for this triple? It feels weird having the same spacing here as you jumped on the previous part aswell. ^
01:09:075 (1) - Try a whistle at the start to emphasize the heave piano note here?　no. I feel strange...The sound strange.
01:25:488 - Here should be a note according to the violine (or whatever this is) in the background.　ok
01:38:640 (1) - Add a whistle to the start? It feels a bit empty at the moment, especially since the music became stronger. Same as 01:09:075
01:50:596 (3) - In fact, I'd prefer having a note on 3's start and a Sliderstart or note on the end since the strong sound on the downbeat would be better if it was clickable, you see that?　no. i don't think so. I think it is now is a better
02:19:509 (2) - Ehh, looks a bit bad due to the touching of those 2 Sliders, could you either think of another pattern or space them out so they won't touch?　ok. i fix it

That's it, actually a really good mapset, but I'd like to get this overdone 1/4 rhythm out of the Hard.
Also this silenced Sliderstart on Easy needs to be fixed.

Good luck then :>

thank you for modding ></

EDIT: were updated > Normal and Insane

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-08-17T09:15:11+00:00

M4M
[General]
fine
[Easy]
do check "Letterbox" since there is Breat Time ?
Placement
00:39:509(3) move some grids up better, this bottom of slider looks uneasy to play for newbie.
00:55:162(4,1) swap NC better to keep consisntently.
01:33:857(1,2,3) nazi, put on central better

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
01:32:335(2) add finish at head
[Normal]
Placement
00:30:596(5)少し窮屈なので、もう少し広げてみては
01:49:075(1) 速さが変わるわけでもないので、ここのNCは削除？NC連続で使うのもNormalではどうかなと思うので
Rhythm
Hit Sonud
02:16:901~ ここからのwhistleがやや妙なので、曲に合わせてつけまくってもいいと思います
[Hard]
Placement
01:00:814(2,3) (4)以降少し打ちにくいと思うので、こんな感じなど

SPOILER

Rhythm
01:07:988(2)この”止め”は少し不自然かと思います、01:08:205ではドラム音も付いてるので間を空かせずに配置した方が良いです
Hit Sonud
02:16:901(1)　Insaneと同じ
[Insane]
Placement
00:07:118(3) もう少し上にすると、重ならずに上手く囲めると思います

SPOILER

00:15:162(8,1) NC入れ替え。白線からNCというのは分かるんですが、スタックしてて分かり辛く、ジャンプでNC始めた方がわかりやすいと思います
01:32:335(4)　やや流れが悪いので、配置を少し変えてみては　e.g)

SPOILER

01:45:596(1) Ctrl+G?
Rhythm
00:37:662 バックのドラム音強いのでnote欲しいです
Hit Sonud
02:16:901(1) 始点finishはやや強いのでwhistleで十分だと思います。リバースと終点の部分にもwhistleつけていいと思います、そこだけないのも少し妙なので。同様の場面同じ

Nice map~

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-08-17T10:08:17+00:00

iyasine's Hard

00:04:509 (4) - It sounds way better if you end this 1/4 earlier, maybe with a whistle on it, so you can emphasize that bell in the song (I suggest to use the soft-whistle3) fixed
00:05:814 (2,3,4) - These are completely off... Especially these 00:06:248 (3,4) - Unfortunately I'm not a timing expert and I don't know how to fix them, try to ask someone more expert than me in timing... (I suggest Charles445)fixed

[iyasine's Hard]

Recommending tick rate 2 for the same reasons as on Normal. keep it
You should try to add a Spinner somewhere to have a varying score. fixed
00:04:509 (4) - Ending this on the blue tick doesnt follow anything, really nothing, shortening it by 1/4 would follow the piano on the downbeat so I'd rather do this.fixed
00:04:944 (1) - Try a whistle at the start, it will emphasize the high vocal and the piano.nice!
00:06:466 (1) - Same here to follow the piano.fixed
00:14:292 - I'd love if you could tone down that Slidertick sound, it's too loud compared to the normal hitsounds.ok,Volume40%
00:21:575 (4) - Why does this start on the blue tick? Doesn't make much sense at all so I'd move it 1/4 later.hmm...It has united with vocal
00:28:531 (4) - Here aswell, if you remove this Slider, you'll hear that it plays on nothing.^
00:31:140 (2) - Here again.It has united with synthesizer
00:32:879 (2) - And again, I won't mention this anymore, but I highly advise you to change them all as they don't follow the song correctly, also you should not use this kind of overmapping on a Hard diff.^
00:44:183 (2) - I don't find this stack pretty good to play, in fact it is confusing and flowing odd, you could start the kick Slider here to avoid this.sorry...keep it.I like this form
01:25:922 (4) - Same thing here.^
01:33:857 (1,2,3) - Consider adding whistles to those three, her vocal is rather high and strong here so it would not be wrong to emphasize it, leaving it empty sounds odd here.nice!
01:51:031 (1) - This sounds rhythmical wry, why did you end it on the blue tick? There is no reason even the opposite because the drum is playing on that white tick. I'd rather shorten this by 1/4 to follow the drums than following nothing.fixed
02:02:444 (4) - Same as on the other points.keep it

To かじやったさん
全部なおしました！

Thank you modders

http://puu.sh/43RR2

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2013-08-17T10:46:31+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M

[Insane]
Placement
00:07:118(3) もう少し上にすると、重ならずに上手く囲めると思います 1 gridあげました。　これ以上あげるとドレインバーに引っかかりそうで怖いｗ
SPOILER
00:15:162(8,1) NC入れ替え。白線からNCというのは分かるんですが、スタックしてて分かり辛く、ジャンプでNC始めた方がわかりやすいと思います　急にジャンプ結構大きくいれているので、連打のところから色をつけることにしました。
01:32:335(4)　やや流れが悪いので、配置を少し変えてみては　e.g)　次の（１）への流れを大事にするようにまっすぐスライダーを配置したので、変えることをちょっとできないっす。ごめんなさいね
SPOILER
01:45:596(1) Ctrl+G?　個人的にこのままかな。
Rhythm
00:37:662 バックのドラム音強いのでnote欲しいです　綺麗におくことができなかったので、このままで。
Hit Sonud
02:16:901(1) 始点finishはやや強いのでwhistleで十分だと思います。リバースと終点の部分にもwhistleつけていいと思います、そこだけないのも少し妙なので。同様の場面同じ　結構whistleの音つけてますので、騒がしくなるので、これ以上の追加はやめときます。　finishの部分はwhistleに変えました。

Nice map~

modありがとうございますー：３

私もできるだけ早くmodするので、お待ちくださいな

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Haya 2013-08-17T16:05:08+00:00

Alright let's go! ~

[General]
01:33:816 - Put a new Timing Point here since it doesn't quite follow the lyrics as it is now.
01:35:162 - Don't forget to put another one here.

[-Umi-'s Easy]
00:02:988 (1,2) - Why aren't these perfectly symmetric?

00:08:205 (2) - Please use the same slider as 00:06:466 (1) -
00:21:248 (2) - Use the same slider as 00:20:379 (1) - since the blanket doesn't look good with the 00:22:118 (3) -
00:28:205 (3) - Move the tail 2 grids down to make the blanket look better.
01:33:857 (1,2,3) - How about making all of these symmetrical?

SPOILER

Also how about switching (3) and (2) to increase the flow?
02:18:640 (3,4) - I think doing a small blanket would look better.

SPOILER

02:20:814 (1,2) - Interesting sliders lol

[Guy's Normal]
Clear!

[iyasine's Hard]
00:03:422 - Add a note here?
00:36:901 (3) - Why is the spacing increased here?
00:44:183 (4,5) - How about doing it like this?

SPOILER

01:03:857 (1,2,3) - Would be cool if it'd be symmetric
01:43:857 (1) - Move the slider tail 2 grids to the left.
01:49:401 - Add a note here?

[Insane]
00:03:314 (1,2) - Putting them like this fits more imo

SPOILER

00:22:988 (3,5) - Do them symmetric
00:28:531 - Add a note here.
00:30:162 - to 00:30:814 - Would be fitting for a stream

SPOILER

00:39:509 (1) - Please make this blanket better!
01:21:466 - Add a note here?
01:59:509 (1) - Reverse this please. It's just a small flow killer right now.

Nice mapset - Good luck!

Momochikun

1,944 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2013-08-17T17:19:32+00:00

Hey ~
the Team asked me to recheck this..

[Insane]
00:02:553 (1) - Middle point 144 292 for perfect blanket
00:03:314 (1) - Suggest extend this slider into the red tick for the vocal
00:11:683 (1,2) - The hit at blue tick sound weird IMO, better to just add a note 00:12:118
00:28:640 (4) - Make this curved as (3) to make it flow better ?
00:44:183 (4) - Add finish (additions : drum) here to emphasizing the music
00:55:162 (1) - Middle point 216 188 for perfect blanket
01:07:335 (1) - Finish sounds too loud, change to whistle
01:50:596 (4) - Make this slider just like (1) ? it will make more good pattern
01:33:423 (4) - Increase the volume ? it sounds like fail to hit instead of a whistle

[Iyasine Hard]
00:13:422 (1,2) - Blanket this maybe ?
00:46:466 (1) - Add more curved for better flow
01:43:857 (1) - Middle point 248 148 for perfect blanket

[Guy Normal]
00:09:292 (4) - Replace the whistle to the reverse point ? it sounds better
00:33:422 (4) - 268 276 ? better flow for me since this slider is curved
01:49:075 (1) - This NC doesn't make sense IMo,, better delete it
01:59:509 (1) - 1-2 grid down for better flow

[Umi Easy]
01:29:944 (2) - Make this a bit better ?
01:49:075 (1) - Start of slider is 10% sounds o_o
i can't really mod easy diff orz

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2013-08-17T17:46:04+00:00

Gomene I'm late ><
well M4M from my queue~
Really nice map \(^.^)/ just a few suggestions~
[Insane]
00:29:075 (1,2) - You might want to fix this blanket o-o atm it looks really off >~<
00:36:031 (1,5) - Stack (5) with (1)'s end o-o?
00:50:922 (6) - A miss stack here =w=/
02:28:640 (6) - Whistle at head
02:29:727 (1) - Maybe center this o-o?

[iyasine]
00:14:075 (2) - I don't know if it matters but this slider touches the hp bar o-o
00:16:031 (3) - For this slider you can add S:C1 Whistle on head and end, try it sounds nice imo :3
01:31:248 (4) - add clap at head
01:51:031 (1) - Remove NC and add NC ---> 01:50:814 (5) -
02:28:422 (4) - Whistle at end

[Guy]
01:19:509 (1) - Move the end point a little to the right for a better blanket
01:41:901 (6) - You could add a clap here
01:45:596 (7,1) - Switch NC's o-o?

[Umi]
Ya =w=/
01:39:944 (4) - NC
02:19:944 (4) - Whistle at the end here
02:29:727 (1) - NC this o-o?

Ganbatte :3/!
Srry short mod ><

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-08-17T18:07:50+00:00

Uhuhuh too many mods >.< i'll back tomorrow in the night and check them !

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-08-18T02:40:54+00:00

http://puu.sh/44rqs.zip

Thank you

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-08-18T11:26:05+00:00

Haya wrote :
[iyasine's Hard]
00:03:422 - Add a note here? keep it

00:36:901 (3) - Why is the spacing increased here? I would like to jump here in case of my feeling!!
00:44:183 (4,5) - How about doing it like this? hmm...keep it

SPOILER

01:03:857 (1,2,3) - Would be cool if it'd be symmetric nice!
01:43:857 (1) - Move the slider tail 2 grids to the left. fixed
01:49:401 - Add a note here? keep it

Momochikun wrote :
[Iyasine Hard]
00:13:422 (1,2) - Blanket this maybe ? fixed
00:46:466 (1) - Add more curved for better flow nice!
01:43:857 (1) - Middle point 248 148 for perfect blanket fixed

xChippy wrote :
[iyasine]
00:14:075 (2) - I don't know if it matters but this slider touches the hp bar o-o nice! fixed
00:16:031 (3) - For this slider you can add S:C1 Whistle on head and end, try it sounds nice imo :3 Very nice!!
01:31:248 (4) - add clap at head fixed
01:51:031 (1) - Remove NC and add NC ---> 01:50:814 (5) - nice!
02:28:422 (4) - Whistle at end fixed

Thank you modders !
http://puu.sh/44H8V

Itachi_Uchiha

188 posts

Joined December 2011

Itachi_Uchiha 2013-08-18T12:07:11+00:00

no kd please

Hey -Gamu-,

after we rechecked your map many times we came to the conclusion that we are going to give you some general advice until the map is in a better state of quality.
It is like this, because in our opinion your map looks like a toothpick without the spiky sides you know? In order to get a better quality, you need a few more mods, but we're sure you can handle this. Let me give you some example to make things easier for you, what you should focus on!
There are so many blanketing errors I`ve seen in my first check and many unpretty Sliders

Easy -

00:30:814 (1,2) - Here you could use a other shape of slider cause these small sliders actually don´t look fine
01:02:988 (2,1) - Here you could try to stack the 2 and 1 for example for massiv flow

Normal -

00:23:857 (1) - All these Sliders have such an unnoticable curve. I would usggest to make them wether straight or curvy

Hard -

00:04:944 (1) - Here you have a really silly looking Slider. Try to avoid such an unnoticiable sharp turn
00:55:162 (1,2) - Tis overlap there does not look good

Insane -

00:03:314 (1) - Uhm yeah... who`s supposed to get that with 300? You can´t make a note on a blue and then with this spacing... no one will catch it correctly

00:21:248 (2,1) - This overlap does not look good
00:36:683 (2,3,4,5,6) - This curve just don´t look right

Konei and Momochikun have already modded your map and after you got some more mods, and you think your map is in a better state, dont hesitate to ask us for another opinion!

Until then, good luck, you're on a good way.

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-08-18T17:20:47+00:00

Itachi_Uchiha wrote :
Hard -

00:04:944 (1) - Here you have a really silly looking Slider. Try to avoid such an unnoticiable sharp turn fixed
00:55:162 (1,2) - Tis overlap there does not look good hmm...I think that there is no problem in particular,sorry keep it

thanks for modding~ Itachi_Uchiha

http://puu.sh/44Sj2

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-08-18T19:55:46+00:00

ok i'm back sorry for delay,

thx modders fixed a lot

http://puu.sh/44YZH/8489efccda.rar

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2013-08-20T01:30:35+00:00

Haya wrote:
Alright let's go! ~

[General]
01:33:816 - Put a new Timing Point here since it doesn't quite follow the lyrics as it is now. no. i don't think so..
01:35:162 - Don't forget to put another one here. ^

[Insane]
00:03:314 (1,2) - Putting them like this fits more imo る starts at 00:03:748.. Vocal's from here.
SPOILER
00:22:988 (3,5) - Do them symmetric　3,4,5 - Create a triangle.
00:28:531 - Add a note here.　no. i don't thin so.
00:30:162 - to 00:30:814 - Would be fitting for a stream I will keep, now
SPOILER
00:39:509 (1) - Please make this blanket better! I fix it.
01:21:466 - Add a note here? no.
01:59:509 (1) - Reverse this please. It's just a small flow killer right now. uh..I prefer this

Nice mapset - Good luck!

Momochikun wrote:
Hey ~
the Team asked me to recheck this..

[Insane]
00:02:553 (1) - Middle point 144 292 for perfect blanket ok.
00:03:314 (1) - Suggest extend this slider into the red tick for the vocal る starts at 00:03:748.. Vocal's from here.
00:11:683 (1,2) - The hit at blue tick sound weird IMO, better to just add a note 00:12:118 sorry no change
00:28:640 (4) - Make this curved as (3) to make it flow better ? hmm...no. i don't think so.
00:44:183 (4) - Add finish (additions : drum) here to emphasizing the music hmm..added clap :3
00:55:162 (1) - Middle point 216 188 for perfect blanket ok
01:07:335 (1) - Finish sounds too loud, change to whistle ^
01:50:596 (4) - Make this slider just like (1) ? it will make more good pattern ^
01:33:423 (4) - Increase the volume ? it sounds like fail to hit instead of a whistle ^ +10% :3

xChippy wrote:
Gomene I'm late ><
well M4M from my queue~
Really nice map \(^.^)/ just a few suggestions~
[Insane]
00:29:075 (1,2) - You might want to fix this blanket o-o atm it looks really off >~< ok~
00:36:031 (1,5) - Stack (5) with (1)'s end o-o? ^
00:50:922 (6) - A miss stack here =w=/ ah.. thanks ><
02:28:640 (6) - Whistle at head ok
02:29:727 (1) - Maybe center this o-o? ^

Ganbatte :3/!
Srry short mod ><

Itachi_Uchiha wrote:

no kd pleaseah.. I was overlooked.. sorry

Hey -Gamu-,

after we rechecked your map many times we came to the conclusion that we are going to give you some general advice until the map is in a better state of quality.
It is like this, because in our opinion your map looks like a toothpick without the spiky sides you know? In order to get a better quality, you need a few more mods, but we're sure you can handle this. Let me give you some example to make things easier for you, what you should focus on! thank you for advice xD
There are so many blanketing errors I`ve seen in my first check and many unpretty Sliders I'm not good at good sliders. be made clean orz. Therefore, I will check all.

Insane -

00:03:314 (1) - Uhm yeah... who`s supposed to get that with 300? You can´t make a note on a blue and then with this spacing... no one will catch it correctly　It would be hard to grasp the rhythm certainly. Therefore, I have added a new combo.

00:21:248 (2,1) - This overlap does not look good　no. I prefer this.
00:36:683 (2,3,4,5,6) - This curve just don´t look right ~~hmm...I do not know a great placement..orz~~ok. i will change.

Konei and Momochikun have already modded your map and after you got some more mods, and you think your map is in a better state, dont hesitate to ask us for another opinion!

Until then, good luck, you're on a good way.

thank you for modding ><////

All diff updated :3

Itachi_Uchiha

188 posts

Joined December 2011

Itachi_Uchiha 2013-08-21T15:11:18+00:00

It´s Recheck time

And no KD please

-Umi-'s Easy

00:16:466 (3) - A note would fit perfectly there^^ (don´t forget to raise the volume on the previous inherited (60% should do it))
00:30:814 (1) - This Slider and the following look a bit... uh... try to make them to a real curve too
00:46:901 (3) - Move the second point in this Slider to 353|296 and the reverse point to 291|324 for better blanket
01:06:031 (2,3,4) - You used different curve-angles in these 3 sliders - would look better if they are the same^^
01:26:466 (1,3) - These really sharp curves doesn´t look good - Try to make them a bit more "straight"
01:47:335 (3) - Here you can make a real curve too^^
01:49:075 (1) - This would be better if its a single note and then a Slider

01:58:205 (1) - Code for the improved Slider

324,144,118205,6,0,B|284:112|168:176|128:144,2,200,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Solid Easy^^

Guy's Normal

00:01:683 (1) - This Curve is very unnoticable - Try to make it wether Straight or Curvy^^
01:57:770 (3) - WHy you used THAT many slider points :O
wut
Other than that the Diff looks solid - except these straight curves... try to make them more curvy or really straight^^

iyasine's Hard

Nothing to say here - Just these straight curves again^^

Insane

00:03:314 (1) - Make it like this - much better to play
Adjustment
(And dpn´t forget to adjust the spacing between the slider and the previous note correctly)
00:53:422 (1,2,3) - This just looks incorrect - try to adjust them better
00:20:379 (7,1) - Try to avoid such long pause stacks

Overall the map has improved but there are still many points that have to be changed - Try to put your jumps in a reasonable pattern - Try to avoid long pause stacking - Try to avoid big overlaps (expect they are looking really good like 00:16:466 (1,1)

The Map has improved a bit, but we think it´s not ready yet. Please try to work more on it with using the suggestions above.
We recheck it on our own once we think it´s time to recheck it

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-08-21T21:38:41+00:00

Itachi_Uchiha wrote:

It´s Recheck time And no KD please
-Umi-'s Easy
00:16:466 (3) - A note would fit perfectly there^^ (don´t forget to raise the volume on the previous inherited (60% should do it)) Fixed

00:30:814 (1) - This Slider and the following look a bit... uh... try to make them to a real curve too Fixed

00:46:901 (3) - Move the second point in this Slider to 353|296 and the reverse point to 291|324 for better blanket Other way

01:06:031 (2,3,4) - You used different curve-angles in these 3 sliders - would look better if they are the same^^ Fixed

01:26:466 (1,3) - These really sharp curves doesn´t look good - Try to make them a bit more "straight" Fixed

01:47:335 (3) - Here you can make a real curve too^^ Fixed

01:49:075 (1) - This would be better if its a single note and then a Slider I prefer how it's now
01:58:205 (1) - Code for the improved Slider Fixed, thx :3
324,144,118205,6,0,B|284:112|168:176|128:144,2,200,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Solid Easy^^

thx for mod o/

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YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,147 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2013-08-23T08:11:17+00:00

Gamu-chan here's the m4m request you want. don't give me kd since i already got it for the testplay last month.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
there are 2 images that are the same, so be sure to delete one of them because a duplicate is really unnecessary if there's 4 diffs.

[-Umi-'s Easy]
00:11:248 - you should add a circle here because this is where the song starts to pick up. the 1st 4 notes in the last combo represents as a introduction whereas this part is where it starts to pick up here. if you say that it's too hard, it's not because the SV is slow enough for beginners to react to this pattern so it'll be more fun and more readable during gameplay.
00:12:988 - ^
00:14:727 - ^
00:20:379 (1) - i suggest that you replace this for 2 circles because i feel that this slider breaks the flow when following the vocals and BGM during gameplay IMO.
00:25:162 (3) - this repeat slider bothers me the most because it doesn't follow the music correctly and it feels really awkward to follow this during gameplay, so for this once, replace this for a circle followed by a 1/1 slider to follow the music correctly during gameplay.
00:30:814 (1,2) - you're aiming for an NC and a finish here as they're both missing on (5), as well as a clap at the end for consistency, so be sure to add that so that it makes sense during gameplay, as well as the next note as it doesn't have a clap at the repeat arrow, so add that as well for consistency.
00:42:988 (2) - try adding a drum clap at the end since i heard a similar drum at the BGM at this note if you listen carefully.
00:49:509 (2) - i don't like how this slider starts and how it ends because it doesn't follow the vocals properly, so for this one, you should replace this for a circle, followed by a 3/1 slider to follow the vocals properly. remember to fix the timing points if you do this.
01:05:596 (1) - you're missing a finish here, so be sure to add it to show emphasis in the cymbals during gameplay.
01:10:814 (2) - same as 00:42:988.
01:27:770 (3) - same as 01:05:596, but this time, it's claps at the beginning and the end of this slider.
01:53:422 (1) - remove the NC in this note because you're breaking consistency with 01:37:770 (3) - since this is where the vocals change--the middle of the slider that is.
01:50:379 (2) - same as 00:42:988, but this time, i suggest that you switch the hitsounds. same reason.
02:03:422 - i think you really need to add notes here and get rid of the break because it doesn't look fun anymore and it feels as if the flow suddenly stopped during gameplay.
02:16:031 (3) - same as 01:05:596.
02:25:596 (3) - same as 01:05:596, but this time, it's whistles. i can hear the dinging sound in the BGM.
02:29:075 (3,4) - this pattern can be played with the right notes and easier pattern, so for this one, remove (4) and extend (3) by 1/2, then add a repeat as it'll be a lot easier to follow in the vocals during gameplay.
try to work on your rhythm selections because some of them seem off and unfitting to follow for me, also look over your hitsounding. i may have missed a few as i modded this.

[Guy's Normal]
00:04:944 (4) - personally, i think it'd be a lot easier if you follow the BGM instead of the vocals, so you should delete this note because of that.
00:19:509 (4) - try something like a perfect stack on (2). maybe that might increase the transition and make the diff more fun to play during gameplay IMO.
00:27:335 (1) - remove the finish because you don't have it at 00:20:379 (1) - . if you wanna keep it however, then i suggest replacing it for a whistle, but make sure to add a whistle at that slider as well for consistency.
00:59:509 (2,3) - perhaps you can remove (3) and add a repeat on (2) to make the pattern look a lot easier to follow during gameplay?
01:38:422 - perhaps you can add a circle here to keep the flow steady in the vocals?
01:43:640 - ^
01:46:466 (2) - i think you can make this slider look like (1) to make it look like a wavy and curvy pattern, which makes it fun to follow during gameplay IMO.
02:11:683 (3) - mm~ a circle at the 1/1 tick would seem more fitting to follow compared to a 1/2 slider IMO.
at the last part--try to reduce the number of whistles because they sound too distracting to follow for players during gameplay.

[iyasine's Hard]
00:04:944 (1) - i find that whistle at the beginning unnecessary, so i suggest that you remove it because of that, as well as it's too distracting IMO.
00:19:944 (3) - i think you can replace this for a triplet(3 1/4 notes) to follow the BGM nicely during gameplay instead of this 1/2 slider. i find it really uncomfortable to follow during gameplay IMO, or you can do 2 circles as it makes more sense to follow like at 00:33:857 (4,5) - .
00:26:901 (3) - ^
00:33:857 (4,5) - i see a possible variation pattern here, so how about adding 2 more notes like you did on 00:40:814 (4,5,6,7) - for consistency?
02:06:031 (3) - same as 00:19:944.
not bad. your variations can use a bit of work, but that's not a big problem.

[Insane]
00:54:727 (5,6) - separate this to a possible triangular so that it'd be consistent in the jump from (4) during gameplay.
this insane has improved greatly since the last time i checked it. gj :3.

and that's all i got. GL and don't give up on the rank

.

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-08-23T08:41:11+00:00

Thank you Byakugan :3

All fixed my diff~

http://puu.sh/48LAK.zip

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-08-23T13:45:20+00:00

All fixed!! Thanks for modding~ Byakugan

http://puu.sh/48ToB

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-08-23T14:47:07+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
Gamu-chan here's the m4m request you want. don't give me kd since i already got it for the testplay last month.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[-Umi-'s Easy]
00:11:248 - you should add a circle here because this is where the song starts to pick up. the 1st 4 notes in the last combo represents as a introduction whereas this part is where it starts to pick up here. if you say that it's too hard, it's not because the SV is slow enough for beginners to react to this pattern so it'll be more fun and more readable during gameplay. Fixed
00:12:988 - ^ ^
00:14:727 - ^ ^
00:20:379 (1) - i suggest that you replace this for 2 circles because i feel that this slider breaks the flow when following the vocals and BGM during gameplay IMO. Slider fit better imo
00:25:162 (3) - this repeat slider bothers me the most because it doesn't follow the music correctly and it feels really awkward to follow this during gameplay, so for this once, replace this for a circle followed by a 1/1 slider to follow the music correctly during gameplay. I don't see any problem with this reverse
00:30:814 (1,2) - you're aiming for an NC and a finish here as they're both missing on (5), as well as a clap at the end for consistency, so be sure to add that so that it makes sense during gameplay, as well as the next note as it doesn't have a clap at the repeat arrow, so add that as well for consistency. Fixed
00:42:988 (2) - try adding a drum clap at the end since i heard a similar drum at the BGM at this note if you listen carefully. Fixed
00:49:509 (2) - i don't like how this slider starts and how it ends because it doesn't follow the vocals properly, so for this one, you should replace this for a circle, followed by a 3/1 slider to follow the vocals properly. remember to fix the timing points if you do this. Fixed
01:05:596 (1) - you're missing a finish here, so be sure to add it to show emphasis in the cymbals during gameplay. Fixed
01:10:814 (2) - same as 00:42:988. Fixed
01:27:770 (3) - same as 01:05:596, but this time, it's claps at the beginning and the end of this slider. Fixed
01:53:422 (1) - remove the NC in this note because you're breaking consistency with 01:37:770 (3) - since this is where the vocals change--the middle of the slider that is. Fixed
01:50:379 (2) - same as 00:42:988, but this time, i suggest that you switch the hitsounds. same reason. Fixed
02:03:422 - i think you really need to add notes here and get rid of the break because it doesn't look fun anymore and it feels as if the flow suddenly stopped during gameplay. I want keep this break, it's kinda fun imo, and break is always welcome in easy diff
02:16:031 (3) - same as 01:05:596. Fixed
02:25:596 (3) - same as 01:05:596, but this time, it's whistles. i can hear the dinging sound in the BGM. Fixed
02:29:075 (3,4) - this pattern can be played with the right notes and easier pattern, so for this one, remove (4) and extend (3) by 1/2, then add a repeat as it'll be a lot easier to follow in the vocals during gameplay. I want keep the end at 02:30:814 - so no change
try to work on your rhythm selections because some of them seem off and unfitting to follow for me, also look over your hitsounding. i may have missed a few as i modded this. I rechecked my hitsounds it should be okay now

and that's all i got. GL and don't give up on the rank .

thx for mod o/

diff

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ArtistUnicode:佐藤ひろ美
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Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2013-08-23T17:15:10+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
Gamu-chan here's the m4m request you want. don't give me kd since i already got it for the testplay last month.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
there are 2 images that are the same, so be sure to delete one of them because a duplicate is really unnecessary if there's 4 diffs.
eh..There is no same image. I don't know where to find the same image.

[Insane]
00:54:727 (5,6) - separate this to a possible triangular so that it'd be consistent in the jump from (4) during gameplay.
ok. I will change a placement.
this insane has improved greatly since the last time i checked it. gj :3.
Thank you!

and that's all i got. GL and don't give up on the rank .

yeah. thank you byaku~ xD

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-09-15T13:43:35+00:00

~General~

Only Easy difficulty has a different kiai from the others, make it consistent perhaps? Would be cool.

~-Umi-'s Easy~

00:15:162 (1,2,1) - The spacing here shouldn't be so large but like the previous pattern, since this part is still calm like the beginning.
01:53:422 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.

~Guy's Normal~

01:38:205 (6,7) - I think it would be easier to play and more comfortable if you change these two circles into a single slider.
02:12:988 (6,7,1) - This is the only 3-notes stack you've used on this difficulty and I somehow dislike it, I'd suggest you to space these normally.

~iyasine's Hard~

00:28:205 (3) - The sliderend is completely silenced, this is unrankable, make sure to add some volume in there.
00:32:553 (1) - ^
00:37:770 (1) - ^
00:39:509 (1) - ^
02:19:509 (2) - ^
02:20:379 (1,2) - ^
02:22:118 (1) - ^
02:24:727 (2) - ^
02:26:466 (2) - ^
02:27:335 (1) - ^
02:28:096 (3) - ^
02:29:075 (5) - ^

~Insane~

00:01:683 (1,1,1) - Same as Hard, please don't silence the sliderends because it's unrankable.
00:16:031 (1,1) - ^
01:09:727 (2,3,4) - This small curve on this stream looks kind of weird, I'd make it straight instead.
01:33:857 (1,1,1) - Again, same issue about silenced sliderends.
02:17:770 (2) - ^
02:19:509 (2) - ^
02:24:727 (2) - ^
02:26:466 (2) - ^
02:29:075 (1) - ^

The map is pretty nice, the only problem are all of these silenced sliderends, I hope you will fix all of them, they're really weird to play as well.

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-09-15T14:13:03+00:00

All fixed ! Thanks for modding~ Andrea !
http://puu.sh/4rVOV

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-09-15T14:24:43+00:00

all fixed, thx for mod andrea o/

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Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Gamu 2013-09-15T14:38:26+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~Guy's Normal~
01:38:205 (6,7) - I think it would be easier to play and more comfortable if you change these two circles into a single slider.
02:12:988 (6,7,1) - This is the only 3-notes stack you've used on this difficulty and I somehow dislike it, I'd suggest you to space these normally.
~Insane~
00:01:683 (1,1,1) - Same as Hard, please don't silence the sliderends because it's unrankable.
00:16:031 (1,1) - ^
01:09:727 (2,3,4) - This small curve on this stream looks kind of weird, I'd make it straight instead.
01:33:857 (1,1,1) - Again, same issue about silenced sliderends.
02:17:770 (2) - ^
02:19:509 (2) - ^
02:24:727 (2) - ^
02:26:466 (2) - ^
02:29:075 (1) - ^
The map is pretty nice, the only problem are all of these silenced sliderends, I hope you will fix all of them, they're really weird to play as well.

all fixed :3

thank you for modding >w<

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-09-15T14:48:54+00:00

Recheck time.

~iyasine's Hard~

00:09:944 (1) - This sliderend is still completely silenced.
00:10:814 (3) - ^

That's all, I guess.

iyasine

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Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-09-15T14:55:01+00:00

green line ( Volume 5% ) Delete :3

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-09-15T15:02:39+00:00

Okay, everything is ready and good to go!

Bubbled~

Oyatsu

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Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-09-15T15:30:04+00:00

Umi, you really need mainly name GD. Some map your GD is Umi's xxx. But this is -Umi-'s xxx
Hope you can fix all into Umi's xxx. Need choose a mainly to everyone undertstand

Umi

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Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-09-15T15:46:37+00:00

yeah i noticed it few day ago, I think that isn't a big problem for this time but we can change if BAT want, anyways from now it will be "Umi's xxxxx" ^^

Gamu

Elite Mapper

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Topic Starter

Gamu 2013-09-15T15:57:30+00:00

When the next BAT came, will change~ > Easy diff name

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2013-09-15T21:10:29+00:00