rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

Mod from my queue:

[Light]

1. 00:33:657 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - It's weird. In the first part you followed the piano and the suddendly you stop following it. It's confusing, expecially for begginner player. And right after the spinner you start following the piano again. I rearranged the pattern a bit so it follows the piano.
2. 01:25:323 (1,2) - Move 2 a little bit lower in order to avoid the tiny overlapping. Fixed. Had to increase spacing to 2x
3. 02:10:490 (1,2,1,2,1) - These combo are weird. I don't hear in the music why do you se these. Besides you already have combo of length 6~7 in this diff so it can't be to avoid aving a long combo. I suggest you remove them. The NCs are an aesthetic detail are based on the sliderstreams in Hyper and stream gradients in Another. Will keep them as is.
4. 02:14:657 (1) - Hyper and Another finished 1/2 beat earlier. Be consistent throughout your diff. whoops, fixed

[Hyper]

1. 00:56:990 - There is a note here. Ok, added a slider, but I do worry that it might be a bit complex for the average Hard player to read. Oh well, that'll be changed later if need be.
2. 00:57:157 - ^ ^
3. It's weird how in this kiai time sometimes you follow the piano and sometimes you don't. It was confusing when i played it and i think you should recheck this part. The thought behind it was to make simple patterns that would be decently easy to connect to the music, because the track is so horribly complex at this point, with tons of drums and noises in the background. I don't really get how I'm supposed to change it, because the difficulty of the map will increase by way more than it's supposed to if I try to map it accurately. Give me a couple suggestions, and I'll look into it, but I can't see anything to change right now.
4. 01:08:991 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Of all the ranked diff with this kind of pattern i've played not once had these NC. So i recommand to delete it. (But i think you can keep the last one on the final note) It's a gradient matching the 1/2s in Light and stream gradients in Another. I consulted a couple high-standing members about this when I first created, and they said it was fine, so these will stay.
5. 01:17:658 (1) - Remove NC. sure
6. 01:19:658 (1) - Move it to x=196 y=176 for center it better. Because it's currntly closer to 3 than 4. It was never meant to be structured in the first place, but you've got a point so I changed it.
7. 01:37:658 (1) - Move the end point 2 grid up for a better blanket. Fixed
8. 01:41:574 (2) - It should be a 1/4-beat long slider like 01:41:324 (1) if you listen carefully. Fair enough
9. 01:51:991 (1,1,1,1,1) - Same as 01:08:991. same as 01:08:991
10. 01:56:323 - Add a note? ok
11. 02:03:991 (1,1,1) - Same as 01:08:991.

same as 01:08:991

[Another]

1. 00:37:824 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I'm pretty sure thid kind of NC is unrankable. If you doubt ask a BAT but i've never seen this in any diff. as already stated, the people I've asked said it's fine, it's just for looks, and it's consistent with the other diffs. Will stay.
2. 00:48:658 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - ^ ^
3. 01:09:324 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This, you can! Even if i'd suggest you to remove half of the NC. It's the same thing
4. 01:20:491 (7) - Move it to x=364 y=156 to make a parallelogram with 01:19:991 (4,5,6). Hm, that makes more sense. Changed.
5. 01:28:158 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Again, these NC aren't really necessary and i don't remember sing this kind of NC anywhere. same answer
6. 01:31:158 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - ..... ^
7. 02:03:991 (1,1,1,1,1) - ..... ^

Well, i had trouble playing it because sometimes it's hard seeing what you're following in the song and your NC are kinda weird sometimes. But the diff are still well mapped so i give you a star. ^^
But i suggest you should make your diff test by other people and ask them if at some point they had trouble understanding what the notes/sliders are following.

xChippy wrote:

M4M from my queue~

[General]
err I noticed something, AiMod doesn't mention it but the notes are a littleee unsnapped, Try moving a note slightly and you'll see it. Seems like a 1ms offset error, It should be fixed now.
I find it a little lacking on hitsounds >< D:
[Another]
00:31:241 (2,4) - Why these claps? imo you should remove these claps they don't fit, since you dont have it in similiar parts too. removed these, and removed any inconsistencies between part after break and copypasta @ 1:30
00:41:324 (7) - Add whistle head and tail hm, ok
00:43:324 (1) - Add whistle done
If you follow the piano you should add here a note too 00:45:698 listen carefully and you'll hear it :3 btw I recommend this rythm --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854884 if you follow what I said. i can't hear anything from the piano, left unchanged

[Hyper]
00:07:824 (3) - Center it (2 grids left) alright
00:20:490 Add reverse ---> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854905 pause put in on purpose to give the player a bit of a break
01:08:658 (3) - 406|240 flows better imo and makes the triangle also look better redid it a little, now the triangles are spot on

[Light]
as this is the easiest difficulty I recommend a consistent spacing mostly everything is consistent except for certain structured patterns with i can expect from the player to follow - at least it seems so from the playtesting
Firstly check the Aimod for some spacing issues, there are more spacing issues which the Aimod doesn't mention pls check them
01:06:157 (1,2,3,4,5) - Since you are following the piano here I suggest to add a note here: 01:08:490 seems ok, it's the end of the chorus after all
02:14:323 (2) - Should be a finish imo agreed

Goodluck~ thanks

Tur00 wrote:

A mod from my queue c:

[Light]

00:11:990 - NC ok
00:33:657 - NC
00:34:823 - if you do ^ , NC here
00:35:657 (1) - ^ if you do , too here
00:35:990 - and NC too if you do all ^ all applied
00:52:823 (3,5) - Try to move (3) or (5) , that overlap is so weird in a "easy - normal" diff. because the sliderend is stacked under the circle and not over, it's perfectly readable and I can't find a better way to structure the pattern
01:25:323 (1,2,3) - try to use only a distance snap in "easy-normal" diffs . well after a bunch of people telling me to fix it i guess i should
01:48:823 (1) - NC i don't agree
02:11:157 (1) - ^ the gradient combos are a consistent throughout all the diffs, i'd rather keep them as is
02:11:823 (1) - ^ ^
02:12:323 (2) - if you do this ^ , NC ^
02:13:657 (1) - NC ^


[Hyper]

AR = -1 not sure on this, changed now but won't hesitate to change back if someone disagrees

01:09:324 (1,1,1,1,1) - NC the gradients are staying
01:52:324 (1,1,1,1) - ^ ^
01:55:658 (6) - ^ ok
01:56:491 (1) - if you do ^ , NC here sure
02:00:324 (1) - NC i'd rather separate these
02:04:657 (1,1,1) - NC ^

Good Luck

Sey wrote:

Hi. Mod from my queue.

[Light]

1. Really cool map, I hope to see this ranked soon. You really have a very neat and clean mapping style and most patterns make sense and fit well to the rhythm. Thanks for the great confidence boost I try as hard as I can.
2. 00:31:823 (4) - We may consider giving this slider a single combo because it is shorter and more remarkable than the others. You did something similar here if you don't know what I mean: 00:50:157 (1,1) understandable - did this.
3. 00:35:990 (2) - If we listen close to the rhythm here the New Combo fits better here than at 00:35:657 (1) - . changed
4. 00:55:990 (1,2,3) - To keep a better flow on this part you might think of changing the position a bit here because 1 and 2 should guide into the middle of the slider to make this part looking cleaner. Here a suggestion to solve this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/859345. If you think of doing this you might also not forget about the notes after this section to keep the 1,20 circle snap. I moved (1) and slider (6) from the previous section so it looks like the pattern you did, except rotated slightly - I liked my angled symmetry o:
5. 00:59:323 (6,7) - The flow might be nicer here if you change the slope of 00:59:323 (6) - It is strange that the circle doesn't appear in front of the slider though that's much better to play, like here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/859333 ok, fixed
6. 01:34:157 (1) - If you listen to the rhythm here carefully that slider might have a reverse arrow at 01:34:323 - . This is a bit more unexpected for the player because you always seemed to hold on your symmetry. I think I'll leave this as is so I don't break the consistency - it's supposed to be simple after all
7. 02:14:323 (2) - NC can be made here to make the ending drums more remarkable. i'll leave these like they are, as i want to keep these drums as related to each other as possible

[Hyper]

1. Same as above, the difficulty plays pretty well. I make you some suggestions what could look a bit nicer.
2. 00:11:323 (5,6) - Look the spacing here. At the beginning of the song try to keep a constant 1,10/1,15 distance as you did on the rest of it. Also you can make this part more symmetrical. Maybe you might also think of making it a bit different cos the reverse arrows are not well readable since both sliders stack each other vehemently. ok, changed them and now they should be perfect
3. 00:21:990 (4) - That's a bit nazi but if you round it a bit more it has a better symmetry to 00:21:657 (3) - like here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/859416 nitpicky, but still changed
4. 00:22:323 (5,6,7) - and 01:36:990 (5,6,7) - Ok excluding that this section is a whole copy&paste I suggest you to make this more proportional to the slider which comes after those sections. That makes the section more structured. Like here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/859422 good point, changed this
5. 02:14:323 (2) - Same as in the Light difficulty. A new combo could be suitable here. same reasoning as Light

Mh. That's probably one of the smallest mods I've ever made but the difficulty is really cool and it was quite difficult for me to find something really inevitable to change here. If you didn't like my mod there's no need to KDS it. Take a star instead. thanks again

YunoFanatic wrote:

Light
00:37:323 extend the spnner to 00:38:990 hmmp its pretty amazing that i have listening to this music and find a problem atleast 30 sec minimum other maps i will see an problem within 10 sec pretty impressive though but then 00:38:657 sounds so empty D:
00:51:157 this slider is a bit lost in timing its okay to be on lost but not too much move it in here 00:50:990 agreed to this. it makes it more straightforward which is good for an easy!
-so dam good cant find major problem >w< \:D/

Hyper
Dam it no major problems as you see i deal with major problems and minor it looks cool right now YOU MUST GET AN BAT ! \:D/

Another
okay! im done you win im the worst mapper your the greatest !! dam it you dont need mor request right now ... right now you need to get this ranked! \:D/


i perform more than easy and insane normal makes me just crazy! \:D/

Leorda wrote:

Hi there sup

[General]
* Your current easier diff are way too hard for beginner because there are lots of tricky pattern and 1/2 timings.... Consider to make an easier diff? Never gotten this suggestion before - I'll ask around a bit, but I'm not sure if I could represent the map properly with a simpler difficulty than Light already is. It's definitely a valid concern, so I'll at the very least look into it.


[Light]
01:08:990 (1) - Do not use too much repeating slider, because beginners will confuse about when the slider is end good point, changed.
01:25:823 (2) - Move to X:224 and Y:48 for better flow. Your current placement is linear-flow pattern and off-path that makes break the flow that by itself makes the jump to (3) or the next combo too big. i changed it into something looking like what you suggested, but rotated a bit so the spacing is consistent


[Hyper]
00:34:323 (3,4) - Reverse this selection for creates a circular flow? Your current one makes break the flow.... alright
01:08:990 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - These combo spam are useless.... it doesn't make sense it's for looks, not functionality... but is it really so ugly looking that people feel the need to point it out? I'll consider changing it if someone else tells me to at this point, but i'd rather keep it since it's similar to Light's ending and every stream in Another.
01:51:990 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^ ^


[Another]
00:23:823 (8,1) - Swap new combo for preventing of long combos applied all NCs
00:34:323 (7) - New combo for preventing of long combos
00:55:657 - Add note here for following bass?
01:38:823 (11) - New combo for preventing of long combos that becomes inconsistent with the first part, since this is a copypasta portion, but added NC to 01:38:490 (1)
02:05:323 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat) they're all snapped to 1/12 for attempted accuracy. i agree it's questionable, but i don't have a good alternative, so until someone gives me advice on what to do, i don't want to change it
02:09:532 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
02:13:115 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)


I was hesistate to bubble this due the easier diff is too hard for beginner.... maybe, let's see what other's said it's a shame it hasn't been brought up until now, but i'll do what i can about it

Liiraye wrote:

Alloo, m4m!

My honest suggestion about your easy is that it's too hard. You should make it a normal and increase the difficulty of the map a bit, and maybe add a few more notes! noted, i'll see what i can do

These are mainly suggestions, but some of them are imporant!

Hyper
00:44:823 (1) I felt like this should have more distance spaced a bit more. i can afford the increase
01:01:323 (3) This slider sounds much better if it ends at the red tick and then another slider after it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/876323 applied. played nicely
01:17:657 this pause feels a bit weird, you could map something nice there instead. Example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/876332 it's consistent with Another. it feels weird because the break is a bit abrupt, but it's the best spot for it considering the calm(er) part in the music is very long
01:26:657 (1) distance here feels very awkward i think it was accidentally moved in some way - thanks for pointing it out! fixed
01:35:490 (2) I'd like to see a repeat here and then flowing into the next combo somewhat like this maybe? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/876338 plays well, applied here and on its flipped counterpart 00:20:823 (2)
01:48:823 (1) also a liiiittle bit more distance on this combo ok
02:06:240 (2) this slider is timed wrong, it ends here 02:06:532 and you can fix the slider by using 1/16 beat snap divisor. you mean 1/12 right? in any case fixed, i forgot to fix it when i retimed the map and snapped everything to 1/4
02:08:490 (4,1) add and extra repeat on combo 4 and move combo 1 a 1/4 tick forward like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/876354 that's not accurate as well as starting the slider on a blue tick - keeping my setup

Another
00:37:990 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) This stream would be better off being slides since the sound isn't really stream material. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/876366 This sounds good (you could change it to your style ofc). Try to keep the SV the same until the last slider nr 3 where you change it to 0.75%
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/876365 how the rest of it looks as I did it i disagree, i think the part is good for a stream
00:55:157 (8,9) It feels weird that you follow the piano on the notes before and then make these drum sounds and then keep on the piano. It would sound much better if you started combo 9 from 00:55:323 and made a long slider that ends at 00:55:657 the switching is for variety's sake so i can get jumps in without worrying about the accuracy of the drums. i really like how this part plays, so i don't want to change to this version
01:02:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) this stream feels like it's timed wrong a recheck of the music does indeed show that it's supposed to start half a beat earlier - fixed.
02:00:657 (1) shorten this by 2 repeats sure

Overall, very fun map! Can't wait to see it ranked.

Maddy wrote:

Maddy's Mod
(S) ~ Suggestion
(C) ~ Something you should change
(A) ~ Important \ Unrankable

General
C ~ 02:18:990 - You should use the same spinner pattern on all diffs, even on Beginners, they are just spinners. Check Dizco's diff for appropriate spinners uhh... not sure what you mean here. the spinner on Beginner was slightly inconsistent(started on white tick instead of red), so changed that

Beginner
C ~ HP+1 because wtf 0 sure, difficulty settings were done on a whim anyway
C ~ 01:54:157 - I highly suggest to remove this note, since its unexpected. You never used 1/2 before alright although i can't find a better way to make the beats sound correct - i guess it's fine though
S ~ 02:02:823 - Maybe add a slider here ; ends on 02:03:323 that's a good solution, thanks
S ~ 02:03:990 - What about http://puu.sh/3Pk8R.jpg ? eh, i don't like that
S ~ 02:12:323 - Add a beat here? sure

Light
C ~ 00:18:990 (3) - I think this is offscreen, try to move the patterns lower alright, it should be ok now
S ~ 01:18:990 (2) - It will be more appropriate if the slider ended on the red tick can't really see how, i also like this pattern D:
C ~ 02:06:490 - Remove this beat, since the piano is pretty chaotic and doesnt follow the 1/4 measure there's a drum backbeat that this follows, and sounds nice with the piano, kept as is
S ~ 02:12:990 - Make a slider that ends on 02:13:323 sounds neat, did this

Dizco's Advanced leaving it to dizco

Hyper
S ~ HP-1 AR+1 alright, i guess it's only fair because of the frequent 1/4s and few 1/8s
C ~ 00:15:907 (1) - Start the spinner on white tick it's mapped to the "breathing" sound in the background, which starts on the blue tick
C ~ 02:01:990 - Since you mapped all the drums in the song, don't skip this one and 02:02:157 ok, it should be more accurate now

Another
S ~ Damn HP too high, do -2 i want to keep the players more on their toes, since this is a pretty non-stop song i think a higher pressure should be put on them as well as requiring a better performance. i feel the drain is reasonable here, left unchanged
C ~ 00:09:157 - Why do you skip this piano in the highest diff? good point, added note
C ~ 00:15:907 - Check hyper check hyper
C ~ 00:47:657 - Stream starts here indeed it does, fixed
C ~ 01:48:157 - Add beats here 01:48:323 - 01:48:657 - i feel a little bad for removing one of the very few small breathing spots from the player, but i added a slider and a circle and it flows well so why not
C ~ 01:51:657 - Stream starts here fixed
C ~ 02:10:990 - It's 1/8 i feel what i already have plays better

CDFA wrote:

Recheck request! Sorry it took so long to get to! ;AAAA;

Insane:
00:30:323 (6,7) - I know it looks ok pattern wise but with (5) being the way it is, it's breaks the flow having to completely change directions so quick, especially with the next note being a jump and all hmm, changed somewhat so it's a bit easier on the eyes
01:47:323 (1,2,3) - This bugs me a little bit seeing as the main accentation I hear is more of like this, but I'm made to press in a 1/2 pattern the start of (2) is mapped to a piano note in the background, which is a bit of an "excuse" but i think it flows great with the previous pattern which is the only reason i don't want to change it
01:52:907 (1,2,3,1,2) - I don't get these combocolors since these seem to be just regular 16th notes rather than a triplet pattern fair point, changed into a 4-2-2-1 pattern instead - keeping the gradient though :V

Hyper:
00:51:157 (1) - Seems like a bit of an odd jump considering most of the map hasn't had much jumps and there's nothing in the music calling for a significant change like that originally meant to split the patterns, sort of, but it's a good point and i'll change it to 1.3x instead which is much easier to play
00:55:407 (2) - Is there any way to move this to avoid overlap? moved (2) a bit, no overlap
01:09:323 (1,1,1,1) - Why all of these new combos? aesthetics with consistency
01:52:323 (1,1,1) - ^

Advanced:
00:17:323 (1) - Bit of an odd looking slider, especially since it's isolated from everything else. For the style of this map, or the style that's been established so far, a long slider doesn't seem really fitting changed into a couple sliders and stuff
00:35:990 (5) - Seems like an odd jump considering that there's no real thing here except for a drumbeat yeah, it's the result of me forgetting to move the circle after the blanket - fixed
01:21:323 (1) - Stylistically it's not fitting, as I said for the first long slider. It's also long enough to the point where I don't immmediately register that it's part of a pattern. Like if you don't wanna change it, it isn't huge, just a bit concerning i'd rather not change this, i think it's fitting considering it's like a spinner at the end of a break, gameplay-wise

Light:
Fine yay

Easy:
00:24:990 (3,4) - I'm a bit confused on what to say about this. In a flow sense, (3) should be below (2), but flipping (2) would cause the pattern previously to break. So like you can try adjusting (3), but if it doesn't work, don't worry about it i'm no longer sure what you mean, i think i moved around a bunch of things here prior to your mod and never uploaded it, and i was met with a weirdly stacked wave slider and some other stuff. i think it plays ok now though
00:36:323 (3) - The distance spacing is so low that (3) is REALLY confusing on where it lands compared to (2). I know it's spaced correctly, but consider having a slider or something in the blank space to make it easier to play fair point, added a 1/1 slider to 00:35:990
02:10:823 (1,1) - Why these NCs here? just for the sake of looks, it's more or less consistent with Light so keeping

Sorry it took so long ;A;. Ima star to make up for the wait. really not necessary but... thanks so much anyway ><

kossc wrote:

Beginner diff

00:53:490 - Maybe place a single here. did that, i'm slightly worried it might be a bit complex though
00:55:323 (1) - Not quite sure how but i think that could be done another way to match the song better. yeah, i moved the slider one 1/2 earlier so it starts with the piano - i think i accidentally moved it some time ago
01:00:990 (2,3,4) - It seems to me that those three are a little early. (If its the piano you're supposed to follow) they follow the upbeats of the drums, the piano is close to this but it's too wonky to map an Easy to
01:54:323 (1) - Ending of this slider made no sense to me. Maybe replace it with a single? Or maybe a really short slider to hit both piano sounds? i don't have a lot of options here, i can't map effectively to the piano because that'd be too complex, so i stuck to the drum upbeats a bit. i can't put beats before the ones i have, as to allow the player a break between the spinner and the next object

That's all I got for now. ^^ And bear with me, I did this just half awake so i might have missed the point of some of those. xD
And I have no clue if this will even work since I've never done this before. ^^ you raised valid points and i found them meaningful. congrats, you've deserved a kudosu for doing what i requested.

1. 01:02:657 (1) - Just don't like the shape of this slider so much uguu... Maybe it looks better if you do it as here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928369. Not 100% like that but it would be cool if it surrounds (4) a bit.
2. 01:55:990 (4) - could have a similar shape as 01:54:323 (2) - maybe?
3. 02:03:990 (2,3) - This part could be mapped far more interesting to create a better ending feeling. For example you can make two sliders. The first one from 02:03:990 - to 02:04:323 - , the second one from 02:04:657 - to 02:04:990 - . But don't make it too difficult cos it's still a Beginner diff.
4. 02:10:157 (3,1,2,1,2,1) - Wow I find it very risky only using the 1/2 sections here. Highly suggest you to use 1/1's here instead because the rhythm sounds pretty off here with the drum voices in the background. I wouldn't do that in a Beginner difficulty at least.
5. I really don't know what else to mod here ._. This difficulty is far more than just perfect.

Sey wrote:

Light

1. 01:02:657 (1) - Just don't like the shape of this slider so much uguu... Maybe it looks better if you do it as here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928369. Not 100% like that but it would be cool if it surrounds (4) a bit. changed it to a blanket for (4), but made it a long s-like shape.
2. 01:55:990 (4) - could have a similar shape as 01:54:323 (2) - maybe? good point, changed it so that it looks like the shapes in Beginner(but not aligned the same, sadly)
3. 02:03:990 (2,3) - This part could be mapped far more interesting to create a better ending feeling. For example you can make two sliders. The first one from 02:03:990 - to 02:04:323 - , the second one from 02:04:657 - to 02:04:990 - . But don't make it too difficult cos it's still a Beginner diff. i did this - somewhat iffy on the placements, but i tried several solutions and i liked this the best so ehh
4. 02:10:157 (3,1,2,1,2,1) - Wow I find it very risky only using the 1/2 sections here. Highly suggest you to use 1/1's here instead because the rhythm sounds pretty off here with the drum voices in the background. I wouldn't do that in a Beginner difficulty at least. this is made to sound like the piano in the background, but done inituitively in 1/2 beats instead of a perfect fit - as well as putting a slightly higher strain on the player, because of difficulty progression. it should be ok
5. I really don't know what else to mod here ._. This difficulty is far more than just perfect.

._. Sorry but I checked the other diffs and found absolutely nothing. No KDS please, this was just a slight recheck. Do me the favor and find a BAT for this, please. i'll do so immediately. thanks a lot, again. e: http://puu.sh/42ZzM.jpg is it happening?

Itachi_Uchiha wrote:

Beginner

1. 00:17:323 (1) - These Sliders look wether straight nor curvy / Try to make a noticable shape ok
    
2. 00:18:657 (2) - ^
    
3. 00:25:323 (4) - I give you a quick tutorial how to make a S Slider - The Startpoint and Endpoint should be on the same high - The 2 Middlepoints should be the same space away from Start/End - For Example | Startpoint - First Middlepoint 7 grids up/down and 10 grids right/left | The same with the other Middlepoint and the Endpoint | BUT the 2 Middlepoints should not be directly above each other | After that you can rotate the Slider how much you want | Here is an example for your Slider - slider.png i swear, this slider gets exponentially more retarded the more i look at it. slider made into a more curvy shape
    
4. 00:26:657 (1,2) - I would suggest to adjust it like this to avoid an overlap with the S Slider - adjustment.png the (4) slider was moved slightly, no more overlap now
    
5. 00:27:657 (3) - I would suggest to make it like this. This way you get a Burst on the new Slider together with the Piano. Also you can start a New COmbo there - replacement.png reversed circle and slider, but removed the repeat and made it a 2/1 length instead
    
6. 00:31:157 (4) - This one is a tiny little bit too low - Get to Grid:Tiny and adjust it one osupixel, actually, but yes
    
7. 00:31:157 (4) - Also there is an Clap on this one, which, in my opinion, doesn´t sound right - You may want to change it? changed to whistle
    
8. 00:32:823 (1) - The New Combo there doesn´t fit - You may want to change it? i kept this for emphasis on the finish beat. it's been done like this in most other diffs
    
9. 00:44:823 (1,1) - So it does on these 2 this is a reference to Light's system for this part
    
10. 01:27:990 (1) - Blank this with the previous (2) for a better flow i assume you mean "stack", but done
     
11. 01:45:323 (2) - This one single sharp/curved Slider comes out of nothing - Try to make it to a straight/curved one too i'd like to keep it, it's subtly blanketed around the next (2) - it also doesn't feel out of place. i'll consider it if others think it's wrong, though
     
12. 02:10:823 (1,1) - Here again - Delete the New Combos this is one of the combo color gradients present in other parts of the mapset - it's an aesthetical, unifyingl feature and i'm not going to remove it until i get an actual reason for it, sorry
     
13. 02:13:657 (1) - Here too ^
     
14. 02:14:490 (1) - Start the Spinner here - 02:14:990 (1) - And let it End here - 02:18:657 (1) - So that New Players have more time to react that there is a Spinner i think it should be alright, it's four seconds long and does not require more than a 160-170 average spin to 300

Light

1. 00:22:990 (1,3) - These 2 End/Start way out of the grid - Try to put them more up
    
2. 00:50:990 (1) - I would suggest that you start that Slider on the red tick - That way it starts with the Piano which is the main instrument you mapped on in this Part good point
    
3. 01:02:657 (1) - It would be too awesome if you could add a note in the upper Space in the Slider seems to work out nicely, did that
    
4. 01:10:656 (1) - No need to New Combo there emphasis on the finish is a valid reason imo
    
5. 02:14:490 (1) - Same as in Beginner same reason

Disco's Advanced

1. Are all these Inherited Points needed? well, it's his hitsounding style and i don't really think i should mess much with that
    
2. The Placing and blanking is stunning - I would recommend AR=8 so that you can better play the hidden notes under some sliders AR8 is total overkill considering Hyper is quite a bit harder and that one uses AR8 - put AR7 instead because of a suggestion by Maddy earlier

Hyper

1. AR+1 would be perfect on the map^^ AR9? are you suuuure that's a good idea, because i'm not
    
2. 00:15:907 (1) - Why is this SPinner starting on a blue? Move it to the white and adjust the size it's mapped to the breathing sound which starts on the blue tick
    
3. 00:41:323 (3) - Make the Middlepoints a bit more up/down so that the Slider don`t have these sharp curves slight change
    
4. 00:43:323 (1,2) - Spacing is incorrect - Adjust it please yeah i screwed up the snapping somehow, it should be ok now
    
5. 00:51:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make it a 6 Point Tornado so that the (6) is not on the same place as (1) for better flow i disagree, i like the full circling better
    
6. 01:08:990 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - All these New Combos D: dem gradients explained in Beginner
    
7. 01:17:323 (1,1) - Here too
    
8. 01:51:990 (1,1,1,1,1) - Again >.<
    
9. 02:03:990 (1,1,1) - Ahh I´m in New Combo Land xD :D

Another

1. 00:15:990 (1) - Here too - Why on the blue? mapped to breathing sound
    
2. Not much to say here - The diff is good - Except some New Combos - These New Combos are on the same places as I mentioned them in the other diffs - Just look over it again and adjust them^^ i think i denied all the NC suggestions with explanations, so i find every instance fitting here