1. Another (4.89 stars, 689 notes)
2. Beginner (1.94 stars, 120 notes)
3. Hyper (4.98 stars, 334 notes)
4. Standard (3.56 stars, 162 notes)
5. TK'S Muzukashii (4.75 stars, 555 notes)
6. TK'S Oni (4.89 stars, 902 notes)

1. mp3のビットレートが何故か32kbpsになってます。実際聞いた感じではそこまで低いことはまずありませんが、ルールに正確に従って行くならば、mp3は128~192kbpsのいずれかに設定する必要があります。曲の長さも13分と表記されている当たり、このmp3の表記にはなんらかの不具合があると思います。

1. 00:01:992 (2) - これは一体どこの音を拾っているのでしょうか？
   裏の音を拾っているならば00:01:992 - 00:02:164 - 00:02:335 - 00:02:507 - の4箇所を意識する必要がありますし、他の楽器の強音を意識した場合は00:02:164 - を拾う必要があります。
   多分前者の方に合わせているのだと思いますが、このパートがいずれも中途半端で、どちらの音を拾ったものかが分からず、ほとんど勘で書いているので、どこを優先して音取りしているのかを考えて、そちらで判断して採用してください。
   ただ後者の音取りをするとかなり複雑になり、Easy Normalとしては分かりにくい音取りになる可能性が高いという点には注意してください。
   
   1. 前者
      
      
      1. 00:01:992 (2) - 3/2 slider + reverse
   2. 後者
      
      
      1. 00:02:164 (2) - circle
      2. 00:02:507 (3) - 3/2 slider
2. 00:04:735 (2) - ^
3. 00:06:792 (1,2,3,4) - なぜここの部分の音取りが他の部分と異なっているのでしょうか？
   ここには大きな変化もなくそれより前のパートと何も変わっていないように感じました。
   実際00:07:135 - などにも音があり、それらと異なる音取りをするメリットはほとんど無いように感じます。
4. 00:09:535 (1,2) - 言いたいこと自体は上に同じ。
5. 00:13:135 - なぜここの音のようにoff beat上にある音を拾わないのでしょうか？
   downbeatのみの音を拾うことそのものは条件付きで良いと思いますが、この曲/譜面の場合音付けがそれにフィットするような設計になっているので、このようなポイントを拾わないことは理にかなっておらず、難易度下方修正としても決して良い音取りだとは思いません。
   裏の音を取るのでなければ、また別の解釈もできますが、特にここにはそういった要素もないのでnoteを置くことを強く推します。またoffbeatが難易度上不安ならば、そこから3/2スライダーを使い、次のサークルと統合させることで難易度を下げることもできます。
6. 00:14:507 - ^
7. 00:15:878 - ^
8. 00:17:078 (5) - 00:17:249 に関して ^
9. 00:18:449 (2,3) - ^ ここで裏の音に変わっていますが、この中途半端なタイミングでの変化追加は多くの人が不自然に感じるはずです。
10. 00:21:192 (2,3) - ^
11. 00:28:735 (1) - 始点と終点で拾っている音が異なっており、それに違和感を感じました。始点に合わせていくならば00:29:592 - でスライダーが終わり、終点に合わせるならばon beatの00:29:078 - の音もしっかり拾う必要性があります。
    PS. この後をずっと見て行くとon beat基準にしたほうが修正が楽なのはありますが、Normalとの難易度差が埋まってしまい、難易度バランス的に良くないというのはあります。
    前者の案を採用したならば00:50:678 - まで全てそれで統一させる必要があります。
12. 00:30:107 (2) - ^
    (1)の始点基準ならば00:29:935 - からスタートで00:30:792 か00:31:135 - に終点、後者なら00:30:449 - をリズムとして優先させ拾っていく必要があります。
13. 00:31:478 (1,2,3,4) - ここからbreakまで取っている音が変わってませんか・・・？
14. 01:01:649 (1,2,3) - (1)のパターンで揃えたい所。そして01:12:621 - 付近までそれを継続させたい。
    ここで長いスライダーを緩く使っていくことでEasyでありながらこの譜面の難易度にバラつきを生じさせることが出来、いいアクセントとなると思います。
    もちろん後者(2,3)のパターンで揃えてしまっても構いませんが、好みで言えば(1)でいきたいです
15. 01:12:621 (1,2) - (3)の音取りの感じで行くと
    
    
    1. 01:12:621 (1) - 1/1 slider
    2. 01:13:478 (2) - circle
    こうなるのでは・・・・？音のとり方次第ではまた(2)が変わってきますが・・・
    後ろの音拾っていくとすると00:28:735 - のdownbeatのパターンのようになります
16. 01:15:364 (1,2) - ^
17. 01:18:107 (1) - ^
18. 01:20:849 (1,2) - ^
19. 01:25:307 - この後の静かな部分を考慮してここで音を拾いたい。01:24:964 を1/1スライダーにするのはどうだろう。
20. 01:27:707 (3) - 01:28:392 に終わりを移動。
    01:28:392 - で上のと同じように静かになって雰囲気変わるので、その直前でスライダーを終わらせて、はっきり区別をさせたいところ。
21. 01:33:192 (2) - ^ 加えて、この場合リバースを追加するのがいいかもしれません。
22. 01:45:535 (3,1) - NC(NewCombo)入れ替え・・・？
23. 01:46:221 (1,2) - (nazi) サークルを下側へ移動。この重なりがうるさい人はしつこく指摘してきます。

1. この譜面は全体的に各オブジェクト間の距離が広く、Normalとしてはこの難易度バランスに難があるように感じました。
   配置に関しては距離をもっと詰めてリマップを視野に入れる必要があります。
   このスライダー速度ならDS設定はは0.7~0.8程度がベターで、ちょっと難しく難易度設計をしたとしても0.9あたりがNormalとしての限界だと思います。
   BPMは決して低くないので、今のあなたの考え方で行くとかなり抑えたくらいが丁度よくなると思います。
   かなり大雑把な指摘ですがこれは避けて通れない道です。現段階ではこれ以上言えることはありません。
2. 00:08:335 - add note here.
   この後の(1)のほうが音が強いので、この2箇所のどちらか一方だけを拾うならばこの拾い方は良いと思いますが、00:02:849 (4) のように音の小さい方もフォローしているので、ここにもある小さい音を拾うのがベターです。
   一貫性抜きにしてもここは置いておきたいところです。
3. 00:13:135 - add clap
   00:12:278 - の音の拾い方、音の付け方を考慮すると、後ろで同じ音が鳴っているそこにclapを入れない理由はないように思えました。
   この後のbreakまで見てもこれと同じようなポイントがあるので、そちらで確認して修正してください。
4. 00:39:707 (1,2,3,4) - この後からずっと音のとり方が変わっているのでは？
   
   
   1. 00:39:707 (1) - cricle
   2. 00:40:049 (2) - 3/2 slider
   3. 00:40:907 (3) - 1/1 slider
   4. 00:41:421 (4) - cricle
   5. 00:41:764 (5) - ^
5. 00:42:449 (1,2) - ^ 上の(1,2,3)参考に修正
6. 00:45:192 (1,2,3) - ^ 全体を参考に修正
7. 00:47:935 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 01:11:249 (1,1) - スピナー直後のサークルは初心者がコンボブレイクを起こす可能性があります。
   特にスピナーが合っているようにも感じず、代わりに長いスライダーを使うのがベストだと思います。
9. 01:24:964 (5) - 01:25:478 まで延長。今の状態だと終わるのが少し早いイメージ。
10. 01:27:707 (5) - ^
11. 01:30:449 (3) - ^
12. 01:33:192 (5) - ^
13. 01:34:564 (1) - リバースの位置が中途半端でどこの音も拾えていないように感じました。
    4/1の2回リバースにして強拍に合わせたほうが曲とも合うと思います。
    ちなみにそれが嫌ならばリバースを使わずにとても長いスライダーを使うことになります。
14. 01:42:792 (1) - これもリバースが何も拾えていないのが問題です。
    今の拾い方だとリバースを削除しただの長いスライダーに変更するのがベストです。
15. 01:51:535 (3) - リバースを削除し以下の提案
    
    
    1. 01:51:535 (3) - 1/1 slider
    2. 01:52:221 (4) - 5/2
    3. 01:53:421 (5) - circle

1. AR+1?
   サークルが何度も続いているような箇所があり、今現在の設定ではそれらが見にくく感じやすくなると思います。
2. 00:03:878 - 後ろで00:03:535 - と同じ音が鳴っているようなのでここにもnote置きたい。
3. 00:08:507 (6,7) - このジャンプが強引すぎるように思えます。
   
   
   こういうのはどうでしょう？
4. 00:09:878 (2,3) - このoverlapは外観的な意味で悪く思えました。
   
   
   (2)コピペ+X,Y軸反転 x224 y200
   ^提案
5. 01:37:135 (8,1) - Hardにおいてこれは視認性が悪くコンボブレイクを起こしやすいポイントで、修正も安易な場所なので修正を推します。
   
   
   あまり1/4の3連打の一部としての使用は好きではありませんが、これならば視認性を向上させることが出来ます。
6. 01:45:535 (1) - 画面外に触れているスライダー
   少し上に移動させて画面内に全てが収まるように調節してください。

1. 00:06:792 (1,2,3) - 前のパターンに対して大きく飛び過ぎです。ここに曲調的大きな変化はなく、これが単に不必要に大きなジャンプを加えているだけのように感じました。
   
   
   下方修正してバランスを保つ方が私は良いと思います。
2. 00:08:507 (6,7) - ^
   
   
   00:07:992 (5,6,7,8) - 含めての修正案
3. 01:03:021 - ここの音を拾っていないのにはなにか理由が？
4. 01:05:764 - ^
5. 01:08:507 - ^
6. 01:15:107 (2) - overmapped
   ピアノの反響した音を拾うのは実際理にかなっておらず、これが音を余分に取っているように感じられました。
7. ルールに違反した点はなし

[Seraphin] wrote:

New modder, orz.
Can't mod taiko, sorry

Red - unrankable
Blue - try to fix
Green - my suggestions
Pink - very minor things that bother me

Beginner
00:42:792 (1,2,3,4) - the circle-slider-cirle-slider thing here feels a little bit harder than the rest of the beatmapdone
00:47:935 (1,2) - hard for beginners to make this jump --- the slider does not end near the start of the next slider, and when I was a beginner this was very confusing, even though there is plenty of time to make it from (1) to (2). Suggestion: something to the effect of http://puu.sh/3m17u.jpgfixed
02:18:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A little hard for easy, two singles with a short slider than another 2 singles -- remove 2,5?I don't think Easy diff needs only easy point.
Standard
02:07:478 (1,2) - add repeat on 1, remove 2 - feels way too hard of a jump for normal, even if it complies with distance snap. Also doesn't feel right with the beatmap.So hard? I feel your suggestion makes this harder.(

SPOILER

)
Hyper
00:09:878 (2,3) - Make the sliders overlap less, kind of like this http://puu.sh/3m1NH.jpgdone
01:03:707 (1) - Curve like http://puu.sh/3m1Zp.jpg. Does not match the feel of the beatmap.done
01:15:364 (1) - Curve like aboveI don't think this doesn't match.
Another
Nothing I can see.

Probably missed some read: a lot of things in, sorry.

Wakia wrote:

Hi,#Modreq
気に入らないModは無視してください。

SPOILER

General
個人的にはKIAI TIMEのスタートを01:59:249からの方が好きです。今のままの方が盛り上がりに重なっていると思うので・・・

Standard

00:39:707 (1) - 1拍子目ですがホイッスルがありませんdone
00:47:249 (5) - 8拍子目のホイッスルがありませんdone
00:50:678 (7) - 休憩前にフィニッシュサウンドを入れてみてはどうでしょう？done

01:11:249 (2) - 01:22:735 (5)の間はヒットサウンドをSoftCustum1にしてみるのはどうでしょうか全てのDiffにてNormalで統一してあり、また曲に反しているようには感じられません


Hyper

00:17:764 (1,2) - あまり整っていないスペーシングに見えますfixed
00:30:792 (10) - これ以降の個所では8拍子目と1拍子目にホイッスルが入っていますが、ここだけ7拍子目にホイッスルなので違和感がありますfixed
00:34:735 (3,5) - ここはもう少し間隔を離した方が見た目的には良くなりそうですfixed
00:44:507 (7) - 個人的には今までのヒットサウンドと同じように8拍子目にホイッスルを入れられるスライダーに変更したほうがよく聞こえますdone
00:49:992 (10) - 休憩前にフィニッシュサウンドを入れてみてはどうでしょう？done

01:07:307 (1) - もう少し綺麗なスペーシングにした方がいいですdone
01:57:878 (1,2,3,4) - 音量をだんだん小さく、もしくはだんだん大きくして盛り上げるアクセントにしてみると面白いかもしれませんdone

KIAI TIMEの中の1拍子目にフィニッシュサウンドを入れると少し迫力が増すと思います。考えてみます


Another

00:06:107 (8) - ホイッスルを入れた方が最初のリズムと合いますdone
00:07:992 (5,6,8) - ^done
00:11:249 (5,10) - リズムとしては5にホイッスル追加、10を削除done
00:12:792 (2,3,4,5,6) - もう少し綺麗なスペーシングにした方がいいですfixed
00:22:907 (5) - ここのクラップは入れない方がいいか次の1コンボ目に回すべきですdone
00:33:535 (9) - 1つ目のホイッスル削除done

02:12:192 (5) - ここは同じリズムを刻めるよう、クラップを入れられるスライダー又はサークルにしたほうがいいと思いますdone


非常にヒットサウンドも多く、この譜面に掛けた時間や気持ちが伝わってきます。
しかし、00:50:678 (1) - 01:00:107 (1)
これほど長く音に途切れの無いストリームは僕がプレーした記憶のあるRankedMapにはありません。別にこの程度の長さのストリームならいくらでもあるので大丈夫だと思いますが、考えてみます
難易度は上がっていますが、曲を楽しむという観点で見るとここまで長いのは微妙な気もします。
個人的には譜面の間に音の切れ目を入れることでリズムが今以上に取り易くなります。
(例えば00:51:707 (7,8)のどちらか、または8のみを単発サークルにする等)

それと、この途切れの無いストリームの中でDSが2を超えるのはかなり厳しいです。
ここ以外の細かいスペーシングにも多少問題はあるように感じましたが、まずはここを直すべきだと思います。

難易度も全体的に高く、ヒットサウンドも曲も
綺麗ですから、もっとスムーズに曲に乗れるような譜面になれば…
今以上に面白くなりそうで、高いポテンシャルを秘めた曲と譜面だな感じました。

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hai, random mod (i was just looking for maps, and i got this map lol)
I can't mod taiko, sorry TKS

[General]
You can add "Ein Neuer Heiliger Krieg" to tags.No one search this words.IMO

[Beginner]All done!!

00:12:278 (1) - more above, i know that is auto-fixed when you play it but it's better to put this slider more above.
00:18:449 (2) - move this slider to : 00:18:621, if you did it, shorten the slider on 00:19:135, better rhythm and feeling for a beginner
00:19:821 (3) - ^ (move & shorten)
00:21:192 (2) - ^ (move & shorten), you should do this to give time to the beginner, it's seems a bit overmapped for an easy diff
00:36:964 (1) - i don't really like long straight slider, it's boring, you can add a second point to make a little curve like this :

SPOILER

00:49:307 (2,3) - this can be more cute :

SPOILER

01:05:764 (3) - You can do this, more cute :

SPOILER

02:21:192 (1) - i prefer using soft hitsound for this spinner

01:34:564 (1) - awh god...


[Standard]All done!

OD+1 or 2OD+1
Your diff is really hard for newbie players.

01:05:249 (6,7) - a bit lower, it is stacked on the scorebar, you can also flip horizontally with 01:06:621 (8)
01:29:764 (2) - more above, you know why.
01:40:049 (1) - nice but the part around the circle is not well round. i arranged it :
after the red point : first x320 y28, second x372 y-4, third x444 y-4, fourth x480 y44, 5th x484 y96, 6th x476 y128, 7th x464 y160, 8th x440 y184, 9th x408 y184, 10th x380 y192, red point x360 y200

02:00:621 (3) - better blanket : second point x260 y292, tail x164 y232

Well, solid diff, but maybe has things that i didn't find.

[Hyper]All done!

AR8 ? make sure that the diff is mapped for playing with AR8. (jumps etc.)fixed

00:01:992 (4) - for a better blanket : x448 y336
00:35:249 (4) - put this circle elsewhere, i doesn't fit imo.
00:38:678 (6) - Blanket :

SPOILER

00:46:907 (6,7) - i suggest you this :

SPOILER

[:spoilerbox]
don't forget to hitsound the tail.

01:03:707 (1) - move this slider to 01:03:878 and shorten by one 1/2 tick
01:38:678 (1) - you know what i will say... awh you can make a lighting slider like this :
[spoilerbox]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/832004

[Another]Alomost done without one

OD8 please, OD7 is borrrriiiing D:

00:25:992 (1,2,3,4,5) - i prefer using soft hitsounds.
00:55:135 (5) - if you space, NC here.
00:55:478 (9) - ^
01:03:021 - add a note.
01:05:764 - ^
01:08:507 - ^
01:08:678 - ^ no, it doesn't match the rhythm I follow.
01:24:792 (5,6) - closer, (5) is stacked on the scorebar.
01:29:078 (1,2) - i suggest you to put these notes further, more jump.
02:04:221 (1,1,1) - don't spam with NC here, just one is useful.
02:20:678 (6) - NC


Not bad, i like it, i like the music too x).
Good Luck ~

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

[General]
Maybe when is kiai time, put the volume at 70%?Good! done

[Beginner]
Lol. Weird sliders like 01:34:564 (1) No change need
00:01:307 (1) - It came in my head. This?I think this is hard for Beginners.

SPOILER

01:13:992 (3) - At the end, whistlenone
01:16:735 (3) - ^^
01:19:478 (2) - Whistle^
01:22:907 (4) - At the end, whistle^
01:30:449 (2) - ^^
01:34:221 (3) - Whistle^
02:03:364 (3) - At the end, whistle^

[Standard]
00:06:792 (3) - Try this?DS is not 1.0

SPOILER

00:28:735 (1) - Copy 00:29:249 (2) and Ctrl+H and Ctrl+Jdone

SPOILER

01:11:249 (2) - Change the slider?No, but I remenber this mod.
01:18:107 (5) - Make the same slider as 01:19:478 (7) and flip. done
If so, 01:18:107 (5,6,7) change position something like that?none. It doesn't follow DS

SPOILER

02:14:678 (4) - At the end, whistlewhy here? none

[Another]
00:11:935 (10) - x:180 y:252184,256? done
00:12:107 (11) - x: 296 y:224done

Good Luck and star!

• [TK'S Muzukashii]

1. 00:11:249 (35) - add a don here because it sounds too empty ><
2. 00:43:821 (142) - this note is not needed because there is no sound here in the music, move it to 00:43:992
3. 00:49:307 (166) - same for this one, move it to 00:49:478
4. 02:06:621 (448) - move to 02:06:449
5. 02:17:592 (505) - kat fits better here imo ><
6. 02:26:678 (553) - add Finish
   
   [TK'S Oni]
7. 00:24:964 (116) - change this to kat because the piano in this part has a higher pitch than the others
8. 00:32:335 (173) - change to kat, the violin has high pitch
9. 00:35:249 (194) - ^
10. 01:28:221 (460) - change this to a don and then change 01:28:392 (461) to kat because i think d k d k fits this part better ><
11. 01:32:678 (486) - change to don and change 01:33:021 (488) to kat (?) sounds better in my opinion
12. 01:34:564 (500) - add Finish here because the beat here is strong
13. 01:35:849 - add don here to get a ddk so that it sound more continuous :3
14. 01:47:421 (597) - kat fits better here
15. 01:48:621 (607) - ^
16. 02:26:164 (895) - the kat here sounds kinda weird, how about changing it to a don so that you can get a kdddkkkkd? :3

Jerry wrote:

Taiko mod requested via forum PM~

Most of these are just suggestions, you can choose to ignore some of them if you like.

• [TK'S Muzukashii]

1. 00:11:249 (35) - add a don here because it sounds too empty >< - fixed.
2. 00:43:821 (142) - this note is not needed because there is no sound here in the music, move it to 00:43:992 - nope. fit the bass drum.
3. 00:49:307 (166) - same for this one, move it to 00:49:478 - ^
4. 02:06:621 (448) - move to 02:06:449 - fixed. nice!! ;w;
5. 02:17:592 (505) - kat fits better here imo >< - fixed.
6. 02:26:678 (553) - add Finish - fixed.
   
   [TK'S Oni]
7. 00:24:964 (116) - change this to kat because the piano in this part has a higher pitch than the others - fixed.
8. 00:32:335 (173) - change to kat, the violin has high pitch - fixed.
9. 00:35:249 (194) - ^ - fixed.
10. 01:28:221 (460) - change this to a don and then change 01:28:392 (461) to kat because i think d k d k fits this part better >< - fixed.
11. 01:32:678 (486) - change to don and change 01:33:021 (488) to kat (?) sounds better in my opinion - nope.
12. 01:34:564 (500) - add Finish here because the beat here is strong - fixed.
13. 01:35:849 - add don here to get a ddk so that it sound more continuous :3 - fixed.
14. 01:47:421 (597) - kat fits better here - hm.. but fit the bass drum..
15. 01:48:621 (607) - ^ - nope.
16. 02:26:164 (895) - the kat here sounds kinda weird, how about changing it to a don so that you can get a kdddkkkkd? :3- could be. but probably no problem ._.

Epic song and map, had fun modding this =w=
Good luck!

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hi~ Urushi38 TKSalt~. From PM.
I'm a moding beginner for Taiko mode .
I am glad if it becomes helpful.
意見として出します。気にいらない部分は無言スルーでokです。
I begin mod for suggestions.

[General]

• 
  None.
  d=don(Red note)
  D=Big don (Finish)
  k=katsu(Blue note)
  K=Big katsu(Finish)

[Muzukashii]

1. 01:35:592 - add notes? - アクセントのつもりだったのかわからないけどここだけ無いのは不自然でしたね…
2. 01:34:564 (321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332) -
   01:35:592 - の間が気になりました。もしここの間を作るならその後(01:36:278 (329,330,331,332,333,334) -)もnoteを減らすと個人的にはいいと思います。あと、01:36:449 - にノーツが欲しかったですね。 - 確かに抑揚は欲しかったのですがMuzukashiiだとちょっと退屈になりすぎちゃうのでそのままにしてます… ._.
   01:35:592 - add d
   01:36:792 - move →01:36:449 - - fixed.
   └------------------------------------------------------
3. 02:09:364 (463) - remove - fixed.
4. 02:20:078 - add notes ただ、ここの連打がddkになってしまうので、addすると前後のdかkを変える必要が出るかな? - それっぽく修正しました！.

[Oni]

1. 00:32:335 (173) - k - fixed. same as Jarry's mod
2. 00:37:821 (211) - k - fixed.
3. 00:45:021 - add notes? - nope.
4. 00:50:507 - add notes - nope. これらのパートはまだ休む場所があっても良い気がします…！
5. 01:27:192 (455) - ,01:32:678 (486) - try to change d? - 最初作った時、kkdkにしようか悩んでたのですが 01:27:878 のノートに合わせて今の形が無難だと判断しました。
6. 01:35:849 - add d - fixed. same as Jarry's mod
7. 01:35:678 - if add 01:35:849 - and, you want.. add ? - そのままで！
8. 01:36:107 - add d - ここも気持ち休ませてるパートなのでそのままにします！
9. Either
   01:38:592 - addk
   01:39:107 - remove *I think better. - 悩みましたがこちらにします
   └---------------------------------------
10. 01:44:078 - try to change k? - nope.
11. 01:47:335 - add k - なんとなくバスドラだけに合わせたいのでそのままで！
12. 01:47:678 -remeve or move →01:47:849 - - ここもそのままで！
13. 01:50:592 - add d - 試しに置いてみます！nice
14. 01:52:307 -k ? - nope.
    

以上です。実際にやってみて両難易度とも楽しい譜面でした！
I thank you for reading it through
I wish you good luck
これからも頑張ってください～

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

Newbie mod
Good Map and Goog song :3
If you think this is a poor mod , just don't give kds
Some diff is pass because they are great
From #modreqs

[Standard]
00:29:935 (4) - Try to make like this(!?)done
http://puu.sh/3sv4s.jpg
00:35:421 (3) - ^None. You may feel strange about this partly fix, but I don't think that we put notes on all sounds
00:38:164 (4) - ^^
00:46:392 (4) - ^^
00:49:135 (5) - ^done

[Hyper]
00:13:135 (2,4,6,8) - NC

[Another]
01:28:392 (1,2,3,4) - More Straight?fixed
01:40:049 (1,2,3,4) - No SymmetryNone. I can't find any issues
01:59:764 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Can more like a star(!?)fixed

DEAncientNaga wrote:

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Nicely mapped

Feels like almost the whole song should be KIAI time lol (just kidding)
Toggle off Letterbox during break, feels better :3Looks good!

[Easy]
00:31:821 - Add something here, maybe a slider or 2 circledone

[Normal]
00:43:821 - Add circlenone. I don't feel it's good.

[Hyper]
>.o)b

[Another]
>.o)b

Not much to mod, it's quite nice for me

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Hyper and Anotherは別の人がmodしてくれるので少々お待ちを~~・・・。
たくさんの形のスライダーがあってとても面白くよく練られて作られてると思いますが
細かなミス(DS)で汚く見えてしまう部分が多々ありました。good luckです

Satellite wrote:

[General]
白いカラーはkiaitimeでの発光が凄く眩しく感じます。変更してはどうでしょう？薔薇なので赤にしてみました
ヒットサウンド控え目と書いてありますが、Rankまで持っていくのであればもっと入れていったほうがいいと思います。rankには十分な量があると思います
Taiko tagはいらないそうですが、removeしてみてはどうですか？確かなソースはありません よく考えたらmode検索で十分ですね。removed

[Beginner]all done
OD+1 (OD1は低いと思います。)
00:08:849 (3) - 最低難易度ではnoteが被らないほうが好ましいと思います。
00:20:849 (1) - DSは統一するべきです。(ほかにも 00:35:592 (2) - こことかあるのですべて統一してください。最低難易度では全て揃えるべきです)
00:31:821 (2,3) - 音取りでは好ましいかもしれませんが、最低難易度なのでたたき辛いと感じました。以下をお試しください

00:43:478 (2,3) - どこの音を拾っているのかわかりませんでした。このようにしてみるのはどうでしょうか？

00:45:878 (2,3) - メロディをフォローするのであればこちらの音取りのほうが好ましいと思います。


[Standard]Almost done without one
この難易度も非常にDSの乱れが目立ちました。整えてくださいおそらくは01:01:649 (1) - (9)の事かと思われますが、リズムは明確であり、曲に沿っていると自負しております
01:11:249 (2) - 前のスライダーに被っているので汚く見えました
01:46:221 (2) - フォローするのであればもっと１を綺麗に囲むべきだと思います
まだまだ汚いけどこんな感じ？Beautiful!

SPOILER

よろしければcode"２だけの"をお使いください(上記SSの)

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Hyper and Anotherは別の人がmodしてくれるので少々お待ちを~~・・・。
たくさんの形のスライダーがあってとても面白くよく練られて作られてると思いますが
細かなミス(DS)で汚く見えてしまう部分が多々ありました。good luckです

1. HitColorが順番的に赤➩濃赤になるので一つColorをたすかどちらかを変えてみてはどうでしょうか。
   薔薇をイメージしているのなら緑とかでもいいと思います。

1. 00:40:907 (4,5,6) - DSを狭くすると連打はしやすいとおもうのですがこういったところがみにくくなってしまうので(5,6)の流れをFollowしてあげると良いと思います。
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:05:764 (1) - MODのHardRockを付けた際に大きくスコアのところにはみ出てしまうので移動したほうがいいと思います
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:51:535 (1) - Backの音と合ってないと思います。単調ではありますがこのような音取りはどうでしょうか
   
4. 02:10:564 (2) - Ctrl+g?
   
   

1. 00:19:135 (5) - NC
2. 00:27:364 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - NCの区切りで音量に変化をつけてみてはどうでしょうか
3. 01:37:649 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 綺麗な六芒星にできるとより良くなると思います。
   綺麗な三角形を作りCtrl+c,v,j
4. 02:04:907 (2,3,4,5,6) - ここのDSは一定にしたほうがいいと思います。
5. 02:18:278 (4) - NC

litoluna wrote:

hi~
[General]

1. HitColorが順番的に赤➩濃赤になるので一つColorをたすかどちらかを変えてみてはどうでしょうか。緑を追加してみました
   薔薇をイメージしているのなら緑とかでもいいと思います。

::idea::
[Hyper]

1. 00:40:907 (4,5,6) - DSを狭くすると連打はしやすいとおもうのですがこういったところがみにくくなってしまうので(5,6)の流れをFollowしてあげると良いと思います。fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:05:764 (1) - MODのHardRockを付けた際に大きくスコアのところにはみ出てしまうので移動したほうがいいと思いますfixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:51:535 (1) - Backの音と合ってないと思います。単調ではありますがこのような音取りはどうでしょうかdone
   
4. 02:10:564 (2) - Ctrl+g?done

[Another]

1. 00:19:135 (5) - NCfixed
2. 00:27:364 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - NCの区切りで音量に変化をつけてみてはどうでしょうかdone
3. 01:37:649 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 綺麗な六芒星にできるとより良くなると思います。fixed
   綺麗な三角形を作りCtrl+c,v,j
4. 02:04:907 (2,3,4,5,6) - ここのDSは一定にしたほうがいいと思います。done
5. 02:18:278 (4) - NC

fixed

Good Luckです！

1. Your kiai is a little bit short. Why not starting it at 01:59:249? The song isn't less intense than in your current kiai.

1. 00:08:849 (3) - Whistle on the head?
2. 00:16:392 (4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part is weird to play. The song is more intense than the start of the song but there are less notes and sliders. Besides the rythm is different but the song is nearly the same as before.
3. 00:47:935 (1) - Curve it in order to avoid the overlap and have a blanket.
4. 01:09:878 (2) - Move it to x=32 y=308?
5. 01:40:049 (1,2) - Try avoiding the overlap.....
6. 01:53:078 (1) - I find it weird when your spinner is shorter than some of your sliders....
7. 02:10:221 (1) - Same as 00:47:935 (1).
8. 02:16:735 (2,3) - They are stuck to each other but the other notes aren't so you should use a little bit higher spacing right here.

1. 00:16:392 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe you could do somthing like this:
   
   
2. 00:29:764 (3,4) - Move 3 to x=396 y=228 and 4 to x=340 y=284 in order to avoid the overlap and have a nice blanket. ^^
3. 01:07:135 (1,2) - Maybe something like this:
   
   
   In this case you can stretch out the DS a little bit.
4. 01:21:878 (3) - Make symetrical to the tail of 01:20:849 (1)?
5. 01:33:878 (1) - This lonely combo doesn't have any purpose.
6. 01:42:449 (1) - ^
7. 01:46:049 (1,2) - A x5.21 Jump in a NORMAL!!!!!!! There is a problem somewhere......
8. 01:50:164 (1,1,1) - These NC don't have any purpose.
9. 02:17:078 (2,1) - This overlap is pointless. Try avoiding it.

1. 00:05:249 (6) - Move it to x=52 y=64.
2. 00:11:421 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Maybe you could use a NC for making it easier to read.
3. 00:26:764 (4) - CTRL+G if we follow the logic of upside/down/upside/down etc... (Then CTRL+G also on 00:27:021 (5))
4. 00:31:478 (1,2) - gives a better flow imo.
5. 00:37:821 (4,5,6) - All these overlapping doesn't look really good....
6. 00:41:078 (8) - NC?
7. 00:49:821 (12,13) - I find this jump a little bit exagerated.....
8. 00:49:478 (9) - NC? (When your combo goes to 14 without any stream maybe you should look for a NC....)
9. 01:22:735 (7,8) - It' hard to see that they are 1/4 beat apart while playing.....

1. 00:45:707 (3,4,5) - Avoid the pointless overlap. You can do something like this for example:
   
   
   For example.
2. 01:05:764 (1) - Remove NC.
3. 01:22:735 (6,1) - Guess....

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

Mod from my queue:

[Général]

1. Your kiai is a little bit short. Why not starting it at 01:59:249? The song isn't less intense than in your current kiai.

[Beginner]

1. 00:08:849 (3) - Whistle on the head?done
2. 00:16:392 (4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part is weird to play. The song is more intense than the start of the song but there are less notes and sliders. Besides the rythm is different but the song is nearly the same as before. Intense is not more notes.
3. 00:47:935 (1) - Curve it in order to avoid the overlap and have a blanket.done
4. 01:09:878 (2) - Move it to x=32 y=308?done
5. 01:40:049 (1,2) - Try avoiding the overlap.....I had tried, but I couldn't get good anything. And this isn't problem of playing, doesn't make so ugly. IMO
6. 01:53:078 (1) - I find it weird when your spinner is shorter than some of your sliders....this spinner is fine. Only some slider are bit longer.
7. 02:10:221 (1) - Same as 00:47:935 (1).done
8. 02:16:735 (2,3) - They are stuck to each other but the other notes aren't so you should use a little bit higher spacing right here.foxed

[Standard]

1. 00:16:392 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe you could do somthing like this:done
   
   
2. 00:29:764 (3,4) - Move 3 to x=396 y=228 and 4 to x=340 y=284 in order to avoid the overlap and have a nice blanket. ^^done
3. 01:07:135 (1,2) - Maybe something like this:done
   
   
   In this case you can stretch out the DS a little bit.
4. 01:21:878 (3) - Make symetrical to the tail of 01:20:849 (1)?done
5. 01:33:878 (1) - This lonely combo doesn't have any purpose.done
6. 01:42:449 (1) - ^done
7. 01:46:049 (1,2) - A x5.21 Jump in a NORMAL!!!!!!! There is a problem somewhere......done
8. 01:50:164 (1,1,1) - These NC don't have any purpose.done
9. 02:17:078 (2,1) - This overlap is pointless. Try avoiding it.done

[Another]

1. 00:05:249 (6) - Move it to x=52 y=64.done
2. 00:11:421 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Maybe you could use a NC for making it easier to read.done
3. 00:26:764 (4) - CTRL+G if we follow the logic of upside/down/upside/down etc... (Then CTRL+G also on 00:27:021 (5))done
4. 00:31:478 (1,2) - gives a better flow imo.none
5. 00:37:821 (4,5,6) - All these overlapping doesn't look really good....done
6. 00:41:078 (8) - NC?done
7. 00:49:821 (12,13) - I find this jump a little bit exagerated.....none
8. 00:49:478 (9) - NC? (When your combo goes to 14 without any stream maybe you should look for a NC....)done
9. 01:22:735 (7,8) - It' hard to see that they are 1/4 beat apart while playing.....none

[Hyper]

1. 00:45:707 (3,4,5) - Avoid the pointless overlap. You can do something like this for example:done
   
   
   For example.
2. 01:05:764 (1) - Remove NC.done
3. 01:22:735 (6,1) - Guess....done

I can clearly see at your mapping style that you enjoyed way more to do the Another diff than the others XD
Anyway, ~Good Luck~

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Flower wrote:

Hi~

[General]
if possible, I recommend you changing the whistle to soft or some special one like this: http://puu.sh/3yAPt.wav
lack of hitsounds in the kiai of most easier diffs. please think of some cool sound pattern.ok, I'll try.

[Another]About Done
00:04:907 (4,5) - Highly recommend that you ctrl+G, as the jump feels more "dynamic".
00:07:478 (4) - reverse arrow partially overlapped. please consider this.
00:07:649 - add whistle? it represents a rising atmosphere
00:09:192 - ^
00:10:392 - ^
00:17:507 - add a note? sounds more intense
00:29:078 (2) - missing soft clap?
00:29:249 - add whistle? the 3/2 whistle pattern sounds more regular
00:30:792 - add soft clap?
00:34:564 (2) - ^
00:34:735 - add whistle?
00:40:049 - add soft clap?
00:42:792 (2) - ^
00:45:535 - ^
00:48:278 (2) - ^
00:49:992 (5) - not sure. extend by 1/4? plays cooler
00:52:478 (4) - it should be at 00:52:649 - imo.none
01:13:992 (5) - try moving 1/2 earlier. if so, also move 01:16:735 (5) - 01:19:478 (5) - 01:22:221 (5) -
01:56:849 (4) - move 1/4 later? it sounds better.
02:04:049 (1,2,3,4) - looks quite like 1/4 stream, especially as after the 1/4 slider. try this:

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[Hyper]About Done
00:07:649 - 00:10:392 - add whistle? same as Another
00:41:764 (7) - increase spacing imo. not so goodlooking
01:37:307 - try removing the whistle. if so, also add whistle to 01:37:478 - 01:37:992 - 01:38:507 - . I look for new hitsound. I consider after that
(then adjust some other hitsound pattern lol)
01:42:792 (2,4) - 4's reverse arrow is overlapped. make some rotation.
01:46:907 (3) - space more

[Standard]All done!
cool sliders...
00:34:221 (1) - rotate this so that the following 3 won't overlap it's tail
00:40:564 (2,3,4) - tiny spacing inconsistency
00:45:707 (2,3,4) - ^
01:04:392 (5) - NC? 8 notes in a combo seems too long as a normal level.
01:20:849 (4) - ^
01:53:764 (1) - finish
01:56:507 - better add a break here
02:19:821 (2) - simply copy 1? current pattern looks not so good just like a toilet lid

[Beginner]All done!
00:07:478 (2,3,1) - tiny spacing inconsistency
00:28:735 (1,2,3) - ^
00:32:849 (4,5,1) - ^
01:05:764 (3) - try this?really cool

SPOILER

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01:53:078 (1) - finish
02:18:449 (1,2,3) - tiny spacing inconsistency

Good luck~

Flower wrote:

Hi~

[TK'S Oni]
00:06:107 (26) - change to d? responds better to the previous bars. if so, do the same to 00:08:849 (40) - - fixed.
01:01:821 - 01:04:564 - add k? sounds cooler imo - nope. its a little unnatural ;_;
01:13:992 (400) - move 1/2 early? if so, do the same to 01:16:735 (408) - 01:19:478 (418) - 01:22:221 (426) - good...but i want to fit the bassdrum :3
02:12:364 (789) - k?
02:17:849 (837) - ^ - really good as a change of accent. fixed these and the peripheral.

[TK'S Muzukashii]
01:52:907 (406) - k?
02:04:221 (441) - ^
02:08:507 (459,460) - k d, imo - all no change ;_; but fixed some sounds.

Good luck~

ts8zs wrote:

M4M:3

Standard as gift :3
Another
00:04:906 (4,5) - I don't think this is a good idea:3 swap it.done
00:42:964 (3,5) - swap:3[done
01:11:935 (7) - NC?done
01:13:649 (4) - move to 01:13:478 - fixed
01:16:392 (4) - move to 01:16:221 - Why do you did this:3^ maybe, I look up to every suggestion.
01:19:135 (4) - ...^
...etc
01:46:307 (5) - moveto 256,328none
Extra: 01:27:535 (6) - wow http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/859117 2points can make a smooth 180° :3lol
Hyper
00:13:135 (1) - note?slider
Standard(I think this is simmilar with Normal:3)
01:34:564 (1) - So this is more like Easy:3tried
02:21:192 (1) - End at 02:23:764 -done
Beginner:3
02:21:192 (1) - End at 02:23:764 -done

ts8zs wrote:

M4M:3
Taiko
Oni
00:26:507 (126,127,128,129,130,131) - kk dd k d
00:29:764 (156) - k
00:52:392 (310) - del?
01:11:935 (385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393) - kdkdddkdd
01:32:849 (486,487) - dk - fixed.
01:58:649 (679) - k?
02:01:821 (705,706,707) - kkd?
02:15:021 (810,811,812,813,814,815,816,817,818) - kkddkkkkd - fixed.
02:25:392 - d
>02:23:935 (873,874,875,876,877,878,879,880,881,882,883,884,885,886,887,888,889,890,891) - ddddkkkkddkkdkdkkdk
02:26:421 (899) - d - fixed.
(Fogotten updated:P Will Edit latter)
Muzu
00:29:764 (83) - k
00:33:535 (98,99,100) - dkk
00:35:078 (104,105,106) - dkk
00:39:021 (120,121,122) - ddk
00:59:935 (200,201,202) - kK?
01:17:764 (251) - d - fixed.
01:19:478 (257,258) - kd
01:23:421 - k
01:31:307 - d?

Helios_Zul wrote:

Hello ! Mod From My Queue

Nice Instrumental Like It !

Beginner

00:33:535(5) Change It Like This?done

00:39:707(1,2) ^done

01:50:164(3) Move To x:256 y:328done
01:50:678(4) Move Down 1 grid1grid up looks better
01:51:535(1) Make It Like This (Looks More Better)none

Standard

00:01:307(1,2) Make It Like Thisdone

00:04:735(2) Move To x:68 y:364done
00:05:249(3) Move To x:112 y:184done
00:36:278(4) Make It Stack With Behind Slider Like Thistoo hard

00:42:964(2) Move To x:388 y:304done
00:44:507(4) Move To x:20 y:260 Then 00:44:849(5) Move To x:148 y:176 (so it looks Neat)I don't think so...
00:46:392(4) Move Middle Point Of Slider To x:500 y:224none
01:13:307(2) Make It Straight Linenone

Another

01:54:449(5) Move To x:192 y:52done
Well I'm Not Good On Modding Insane Maybe Other modder will help you

That's All I Can Found.
Good Luck And GO RANKED!

HelloSCV wrote:

here's your ticket

General

1. try offset 1298(-9)

Beginnre

nothing :/

Standard

01:39:192 (1) - delete NCdone
01:46:221 (2) - touching HP bar end litle bit imodone
01:50:164 (1) - delete NCdone

Hyper

00:03:364 (8) - wjistle on startfixed
00:27:364 (1) - decrease spinner's length by 00:28:392 - here? plays and hears betterdone
01:36:278 (2) - little bit off-screen, please fix thisfixed
01:40:049 (1,2,3) - try to avoid stack? maybe triangle pattern works none

Another

00:08:849 (8,9) - reverse this rhythm?none
00:30:792 (6) - maybe DS mistake?fixed
00:42:964 (3) - add whistle 00:43:135 (5) - delete whistle
00:49:821 (4,5) - i don't recommend such as these things, it nearly looks like 1/2 beat so i suggest to reduce DS little ( oh yes other parts have similar pattern like here but those are quite nice )done
01:25:821 (1,2) - hmm maybe soft sampleset?fixed

Good luck~

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue
normal mod

Sorry for late

General
Nice rhythm,so much better than me
clap is strange...hitsound is abit weak in beginner and standardsome added

Beginner
01:31:812 (1,2) - I think they should have same shape..I don't think sharp, but make more strange

Standard
I think you should keep adding whistle in kiai but not stop at02:15:698done
01:31:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - a bit hard for beginners imodone

Another
00:36:955 (1,2) - I think you should shorten their spacing，It is hard to readdone
00:06:783 (1,2) - a bit sudden big spacing..done
00:11:926 remove NCdone
01:45:183 (7) - NC? sudden 1/8none

Hyper
00:12:269 - 00:22:898 I think so many NC is unnecessary because of Sparse rhythm ,add NC every 2 long white line
and same suggestion about similar patternsnone
01:40:555 (4) - NC heredone
02:20:669 add whistle here?done

good luck!

gideon5504 wrote:

Hi~ From modding queue: t/139620/start=0

Easy:
~00:09:526 (1) - Put this slightly down for better flow.done
~00:41:069 (3) - ^none
~01:09:869 (2) - ^none
~01:34:555 (1,1,2,1,2) - Those sliders 0.o I am fine with it, but I dunno if beginners can follow that 0.oBeginners in my head can pass this
~02:23:926 (1) - I don't think double spinners are for beginners.Follow song, enough long, so They can pass 300 without knowledge about this.IMO

Standard:
~01:03:012 (1) - Remove NC.done
~01:03:869 (2) - NC here instead.done
~01:05:240 (2) - ^done
~01:23:583 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps too far away for Normal diff.Distance snap them closer.done
~01:31:812 (1,2,3,4) - ^done
~01:34:555 (1) - -1 reverse arrow for Normal.this is readable
~01:38:840 (1) - Snap it to the down beat before.none
~01:39:183 - Add a circle.already there...
~01:39:698 (2) - Snap to downbeat. After those, it'll look like this --> http://puu.sh/3Dmej.jpgnone
~01:42:440 (2) - Distance snap it by 1x and move to X:488 Y:332none
~01:45:526 (1) - ^and move to X:0 Y:148none

Another:
~00:18:012 (1) - Remove this note, it's unnecessary.not unnecessary
~00:20:755 (2) - ^^
~01:23:069 (8) - Stack it on top of slider 7's head?no. too hard.
~01:45:869 (2,3) - Playing with triplets going that direction is quite uncomfortable, try to make it flow like this 01:48:955 (3,4,5)none
~01:53:669 (6,1) - Make it a triplet instead?none
~02:07:640 (2) - Remove this note and move the slider to 02:07:640none
~02:07:983 (4) - ^Move slider to 02:07:983^
~02:16:983 (6,1) - Confusing No Problem.IMO

Hyper:
~00:33:526 (7) - Stack this perfectly on slider 6's end.done
~I think this diff is fine. :3

That's all from me ^^ Good luck!

1. 00:08:840 (3,1) - you can blanket it, i think this overlap looks not pretty
2. 02:12:955 (1,2,3) - blanket it better
3. 00:43:298 (2) - i think its a little hard even its a slider x.x
4. 00:46:555 (3) - same as ^

1. 00:05:240 (3,2,3) - blanket it better
2. 01:18:783 (2,3) - same as ^
3. 01:20:840 (1,2) - same as ^
4. 01:50:155 (3) - lol

:!: Not end of this mod, tomorrow i will mod other diffs.
Take a break

1. 00:04:040 (1,2) - blanket it better
2. 00:05:240 (4,5) - same as ^
3. 00:07:983 (5,7) - same as ^
4. 00:19:469 (1,2,3) - same as ^ blanket it pretty
5. 00:42:440 (1,2) - blanket it better
6. 00:43:469 (4,5) - same as ^
7. 00:44:498 (7,2) - same as ^
8. 00:45:355 (2,3,4) - same as ^
9. 01:27:012 (3,4) - same as ^
10. 01:30:783 (1,1) - same as ^
11. 01:45:526 (1) - end's dot left a grid
12. 01:45:526 (1,2) - blanket it better

1. 00:09:526 (1) - end's dot right a grid
2. 00:13:298 (6,1) - blanket it better
3. 00:19:812 (6,1) - same as ^
4. 00:36:955 (1,2) - same as ^
5. 00:45:698 (3) - end's dot right a grid
6. 00:49:812 (4,6) - blanket it maybe will looks more pretty
7. 01:09:526 (6,1) - blanket it better
8. 01:25:469 - add a note
9. 01:27:012 (5,6,7) - blanket it better
10. 01:30:955 - add a note

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, Here is my mod. From Queue.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
✔ Okay.
-------------------------------------------------
-Beginner-

1. 00:08:840 (3,1) - you can blanket it, i think this overlap looks not prettydone
2. 02:12:955 (1,2,3) - blanket it betternone
3. 00:43:298 (2) - i think its a little hard even its a slider x.xdone
4. 00:46:555 (3) - same as ^none

-------------------------------------------------
-Standard-

1. 00:05:240 (3,2,3) - blanket it betterdone
2. 01:18:783 (2,3) - same as ^done
3. 01:20:840 (1,2) - same as ^done
4. 01:50:155 (3) - lol

-------------------------------------------------
:!: Not end of this mod, tomorrow i will mod other diffs.
Take a break
edit :
Ok, here are other diff's mod

-Hyper-

1. 00:04:040 (1,2) - blanket it betternone
2. 00:05:240 (4,5) - same as ^none
3. 00:07:983 (5,7) - same as ^none
4. 00:19:469 (1,2,3) - same as ^ blanket it prettynone
5. 00:42:440 (1,2) - blanket it betternone
6. 00:43:469 (4,5) - same as ^done
7. 00:44:498 (7,2) - same as ^none
8. 00:45:355 (2,3,4) - same as ^none
9. 01:27:012 (3,4) - same as ^none
10. 01:30:783 (1,1) - same as ^none
11. 01:45:526 (1) - end's dot left a griddone
12. 01:45:526 (1,2) - blanket it betterdone

-------------------------------------------------
-Another-

1. 00:09:526 (1) - end's dot right a griddone
2. 00:13:298 (6,1) - blanket it betternone
3. 00:19:812 (6,1) - same as ^done
4. 00:36:955 (1,2) - same as ^done
5. 00:45:698 (3) - end's dot right a griddone
6. 00:49:812 (4,6) - blanket it maybe will looks more prettydone
7. 01:09:526 (6,1) - blanket it betterdone
8. 01:25:469 - add a notenone
9. 01:27:012 (5,6,7) - blanket it betterdone
10. 01:30:955 - add a notenone

-------------------------------------------------
End of this mod,
Nice song !
頑張ってねぇ ~

Text shown in red means unrankable stuff (you must fix it)

1. 00:07:469 (4) - A simple carb curve slider looks good

Text shown in red means unrankable stuff (you must fix it)

1. 01:07:298 (1) - Move it to x:492 y:156
2. 01:47:583 (5) - Slider like this is ugly
3. 02:19:983 (2) - 1/8 beat doesn't exist in this song, better replace with 1/4 repeating slider

1. 00:49:126 (8) - Change it to 1/4 repeating slider, cuz 1/8 beat doesn't exist
2. 00:58:040 (1,2,3,1) - Make these more smooth please

alvinheriadi wrote:

Text shown in red means unrankable stuff (you must fix it)

[Standard]

1. 00:07:469 (4) - A simple carb curve slider looks gooddone

Text shown in red means unrankable stuff (you must fix it)

[Hyper]
AR 7 PleaseI don't think so...

1. 01:07:298 (1) - Move it to x:492 y:156It break DS.none
2. 01:47:583 (5) - Slider like this is uglyfixed
3. 02:19:983 (2) - 1/8 beat doesn't exist in this song, better replace with 1/4 repeating slidernone. This is 1/8 beat.

[Another]

1. 00:49:126 (8) - Change it to 1/4 repeating slider, cuz 1/8 beat doesn't existnone
2. 00:58:040 (1,2,3,1) - Make these more smooth pleasenone

MMzz wrote:

Taiko mod requested by TKSalt.

[Oni]
HP and OD 6? 5 is really easy. - agree to it, because this song have simple rhythm.
00:50:669 (304) - Finisher?
01:22:383 (424,425,426,427) - Resnap to 1/6. Must have gotten messed up if you resnapped all notes. - im baka mapper ;_;
01:33:355 (489,490,491,492) - ^
01:44:069 (568) - k? I can hear a really soft snare here, it also makes the pattern a bit more fun too.
01:47:412 (595) - k? Just to break up the long string of d notes, they feel really weird to play in this section because there is a lot happening.
01:48:440 (604) - ^
01:49:555 - add a note here? You can hear the triplet easily in the music, why not map it.
02:19:983 (853,854,855,856) - Resnap to 1/6.
- all fixed. yay

[Muzukashii]
OD 5 HP 5.
00:28:726 (79) - Finisher?
00:50:669 (173) - ^
01:34:555 (322) - ^
01:59:240 (420) - ^
- all fixed again.

Nice map as always TKS! Things in red need to be changed then I can give the seal of approval for these taiko diffs.

1. Airtistは"メアリー"では？　よく知っているわけではないので間違ってたらすみません

1. 00:40:383 (2,3) - Easy-diffでこういう重なりは避けた方が良いと思います
2. 01:04:383 (2) - 終わりが01:05:240の方がバックの音とマッチするかなと
3. 01:08:498 (1,2) - ここも重なりを避けた方が良いです
4. 01:33:183 (2) - 01:34:555 (1) - ときちんと重ねた方がきれいです
   

   436,94,93183,2,0,P|360:63|273:83,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:42:783 (2) - end at 01:44:840

1. 01:42:783 (1) - end at 01:45:183
2. 01:51:526 (2) - 終わりは01:52:040が良いと思います。が、normalにしてはちょっと難しくなるのでremapしないのであればそのままの方がいいかも
3. 02:15:698 (1) - 折り返した後重ならないようにsliderを作ることをお勧めします

1. 01:51:183 (6,1) -　not stack
2. 02:20:498- add a note

1. 00:22:212 (2,3) - この重なりは避けるべき
2. 01:09:526 (6,7) - 逆の配置の方が好きです
3. 01:22:726 (7,8) - この重なりは避けるべき
4. 01:37:640 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Good！

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
こんにちは～

[General]

1. Airtistは"メアリー"では？　よく知っているわけではないので間違ってたらすみません確認したところゲルテナ展覧会はチーム名でした。訂正します

[Beginner]

1. 00:40:383 (2,3) - Easy-diffでこういう重なりは避けた方が良いと思いますdone
2. 01:04:383 (2) - 終わりが01:05:240の方がバックの音とマッチするかなとdone
3. 01:08:498 (1,2) - ここも重なりを避けた方が良いです
4. 01:33:183 (2) - 01:34:555 (1) - ときちんと重ねた方がきれいです完全に重ねてしまうかは悩んでいるので保留します
   

   436,94,93183,2,0,P|360:63|273:83,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:42:783 (2) - end at 01:44:840done

[Normal]

1. 01:42:783 (1) - end at 01:45:183done
2. 01:51:526 (2) - 終わりは01:52:040が良いと思います。が、normalにしてはちょっと難しくなるのでremapしないのであればそのままの方がいいかもnone
3. 02:15:698 (1) - 折り返した後重ならないようにsliderを作ることをお勧めしますdone

[Hyper]

1. 01:51:183 (6,1) -　not stack
2. 02:20:498- add a noteここに拾ってる音はありません

[Another]

1. 00:22:212 (2,3) - この重なりは避けるべきdone
2. 01:09:526 (6,7) - 逆の配置の方が好きですdone
3. 01:22:726 (7,8) - この重なりは避けるべきdone
4. 01:37:640 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Good！

TaikoはOKもらったようでおめでとうございます。standardの方も頑張ってください
～Good Luck～

fanzhen0019 wrote:

Hi :3 From my queue

General

• Just curious about your .mp3 file... It's 32kpbs and the length is 13min. But it finially stops at 2min37.Idk if this is ok.. [/color]I tried to make new mp3. I hope this works well...

Consider add a silenced normal-sliderslide2.wav?Sounds cool! Added!

Beginner

Hitsounds

1. 00:09:183 - Whsitle?done

Arrangement & Design

• lol love these sliders

1. 01:46:212 (2,4) - Touched x.xdone
2. 02:04:726 (1) - done
   

Standard

Hitsounds

• Fine.

Arrangement & Design

• Unsnapped green line at: 00:12:369 - snap to 00:12:440

1. 00:06:783 (3) - New combo? Remove this newcombo 00:08:326 (1) - done
2. 00:09:526 (3) - And add new combo heredone
3. 01:19:469 (3,1) - As you did I think you can stack them again.
4. 01:24:269 (2) - Move right 2 grid will not hurt.(grid lv4)done
5. 02:07:126 (4,1) - Move 4 1grid up and 1 1grid down.(grid lv4)done
   
   AWESOME SLIDERS

Hyper

Hitsounds

1. 00:03:698 - Whistledone
2. 00:06:440 - Whistledone
   

Arrangement & Design

1. 01:28:383 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest use a bigger spacing. I get confused when I try the map first time.This really like a 1/4 distance.done☆
2. 02:07:126 (4) - Move to x144 y336done

Another

Hitsounds

• Uh, I realized it isn't you missed them.. But I recommend you add whistle as I said in Hyper. I think they should be there at the same point of Hyper
  Stream part's hitsounds are epic

1. 02:16:212 - and 02:16:726 - Add whistle sounds better.done

Arrangement & Design

1. 00:42:955 (3,4,5) - Plays weird. It looks like a flow-breaker.. If you dont want to change it , I think change this(00:43:298 (6) - ) is better.done
   Like this:
   
2. 01:28:383 (1,2,3,4) - Again, Same as I said in Hyper. Bigger the distance plz
   Also this: 02:04:040 (1,2,3,4) - both done
3. 01:37:298 (1,2) - Try this.done
   
4. 01:42:955 (1,2) - Plays bad.My suggestion:done
   

AWESOME job!
Star! Good luck~

zorefire wrote:

From modding queue
[Beginner]
00:43:298 (2) - I think this could go on the previous white tick sounds better to meI don't think so. It doesn't follow music.
[Standard]
Good to go.
[Hyper]
Very well mapped I think there is no further mods needed on this diff
[Another]
Another is suppose to be harder than Hyper >w<
that all i have to say for this
i think higher approach rate should do itYou should know that this is bug. And AR10 is too fast to play.

P.S - sorry for poor mod that's all I could find

1. 00:22:383 (2) - try this rhythm?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:50:155 (3) - is this rhythm to hard for beginner?my opinion:move note to x296 y364 and 01:49:983 (3) - ,change new combo
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 01:06:955 (1) - add a note and new combo
2. 01:51:526 (2) - make this slider longer?
   
   SPOILER

   plz don't care about the shape >< i don't know how to place them
   
3. 02:08:840 (3) - sounds uncomfortable
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 01:17:926 (2) - change the hitsound?
2. 01:18:955 (5) - too long distance?
3. 02:07:383 (5) - add a note?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 01:14:840 (7) - try use short slider?add green lines,turn vol. to 20%
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:04:983 (3) - strange note,move this note to another place??
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:23:926 (1) - is it too easy for a end of Another diff? turn the last spinner into stream or sliders

woshiguabi wrote:

hi
from my modding queue
i'm a new modder,this is my second mod,and i can't mod taiko diff,sorryQAQ
;w;my english is poor,can i use img to express my ideas?if u don't understand,plz PM me in game

[Beginner]

1. 00:22:383 (2) - try this rhythm?done
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:50:155 (3) - is this rhythm to hard for beginner?my opinion:move note to x296 y364 and 01:49:983 (3) - ,change new combonone.This Does't match song.
   
   SPOILER

   

[Standard]

1. 01:06:955 (1) - add a note and new combonone. It's hard.
2. 01:51:526 (2) - make this slider longer?done!
   
   SPOILER

   plz don't care about the shape >< i don't know how to place themdone
   
3. 02:08:840 (3) - sounds uncomfortable none.This Does't match song.
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hyper]

1. 01:17:926 (2) - change the hitsound?none.
2. 01:18:955 (5) - too long distance?none. Sliders are easy to play, so I think this is fine.
3. 02:07:383 (5) - add a note?ofc, there are some sounds. But I don't take them in Hyper diff.
   
   SPOILER

   

[Another]

1. 01:14:840 (7) - try use short slider?add green lines,turn vol. to 20%none. I don't think so.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:04:983 (3) - strange note,move this note to another place??fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:23:926 (1) - is it too easy for a end of Another diff? turn the last spinner into stream or slidersnone. Spinner matches the song, And I like these spinner end. lol

Because of webpage closed unexpectedly I had to rewrite this mod once more

I love this music very much!

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,0
Combo2 : 119,187,255
Combo3 : 192,192,192
Combo4 : 128,255,128

Example

Example

14:31 Sephibro: the overlapped streams are hardly readable
14:31 BounceBabe: i know
14:31 BounceBabe: thats a big problem
14:32 BounceBabe: its not  easy to read which leads to missunderstood patterns

BounceBabe wrote:

You should change these things on every difficultie:

Combo colours:looks great! done!
You have a bright blue-white background, and then you have colours like green and (red)brown in your combo colours. This doesn't fit very good. The BG is very bright as well, not having 1 bit of darker colour in it. I'd suggest using colours like:
- Yellow, Magenta, Skyblue, Grey
- I made a collection of these, maybe you like them:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,0
Combo2 : 119,187,255
Combo3 : 192,192,192
Combo4 : 128,255,128

Consistancy:
One Another and Hyper you have a lot of inconsistancy going, you should try improving it so the gameplay gets better and its more enjoyable when you actually are able to read what you play!

Easy

00:11:926 - Add a circle to improve the transition from slider to slider. It is better to keep the "rythm" consistant, so beginners don't get confused. Its always good to put slider/circles on white ticks, so they have a consistant clicking. For a beginner, they expect it to be that way.done
00:15:012 (3) - This overlap is fine. Though, i'd say i wouldnt advise you to use this in a Easy difficutlie. Beginner start to learn how to play, the basics. These are pattern which should appear on Hard.done
00:15:012 (3,4) - If you think about it, when you move with you hand right when the pervious slider is ending upwards, you should keep playing this way. Its a little blocky, if you play to the side, and then up again. Might be a little uncomfy for newbies.
00:18:612 (2) - For a beginner, it is harder to play 1/2 than 1/1. It is not too hard, but its also not very easy to read for them. If i may suggest another pattern which goes better that way in playment.none. You said, this is not too hard. and this has clearly rhythm. so newbie player can play this easily too.IMO
Starting at 00:18:440 - Now you have 2 sliders each starting at a white tick, so its easier to play and doesnt confuse much.

Example

00:43:298 (2) - Your consistancy is bad here; you had 1/1 and then you go 1/2. Its not wrong, it'd just confuse new players. Why not moving it 1/2 beat ahead to 00:43:469 -done
- Imo, this would also fit the violin better!
01:24:955 (3,1) - I don't agree with this pattern. For a beginner, as already said, you should go flowy and not making such "back"-going sliders/circles. It isn't good for beginners to move the mouse (most of the time they use mouse) this way as well.done
01:33:183 (2,1) - This overlap is really really disturbingdone
- First because it overlaps
- Second it should be so clustered
Beginners would might missclick it!
01:50:155 (3,4) - This pattern is a little harder to read again. You have this more sooth part mapped slowly, and then you have this 1/2 pattern. It might confuse! Try making 1 slider going from 01:50:155 - to 01:50:669 - and then start the next slider at 01:51:183 - . You will see it flows better, isnt too hard and more readable, and your consistancy is also better!not as you write, but done

Kiai part is a perfect 1/1 part!

The beginner difficultie is pretty well mapped, just i don't really agree with the 1/2 1/1 changes, which might confuse.

Normal

- The spacing on this difficultie is a little high; its 1,3x when you already have such a fast BPM you should make the spacing so high.

00:01:983 (3) - Curve this slider towards 00:02:840 (4) - so the transition and gameplay is better.done
00:19:126 (1,2,3) - An advise. Its not really an issue nor a suggestion. You shouldn't have such a circle pattern when its played like something else. Maybe they expect a 1/1 slider row which is shaped into a circle and play it this way. I'd change it but you don't have to. I'd would just be a little confusing i guess.umm, none, but I remember this is harder placement.
01:04:383 (2,1) - Spacing here is completely wrong and should be consistant since its no harder diff yet.I know this spacing is wrong. but this rhythm is really clear. So I think "Standard player" can pass this.
01:27:698 (5,1) - , 01:30:440 (3,1) - , 01:13:983 (3,1) - , 01:16:726 (4,1) - I don't suggest having this stacked, even though there is a big tming zone between it, they might missclick it and read it wrong.^
01:53:412 (4) - Move this circle lower, so the player doesnt need to go up and click it on a wrong or unusual place. Spacing is correct ofc, but i dont advise to have it like this. It's pretty much not comfy to play.done
- Same here with this slider 02:18:440 (1) - fixed

It's a good diff, though i find still some things what could be improved more. Next time you should use such big spacing.

Hard+

00:10:383 (3,4) - This stack is unneeded and not good to play imo. You had from the start to this point no stack, and this stack breaks this consistancy. Also, i tried it and it would play alot better if you unstack it.done
00:15:869 (1,2) - The spacing change here destroys your flow and consistancy, it also doesn't fit very well. Consider making normal spacing.done
00:17:583 (2,1) - Spacing change at this part is unexpected tbh. You have these stack stop patterns, and then suggenly a spacing change as jump. I'd keep it normal spacing here and let if flow in later how its here 00:18:098 (2) - done
00:15:869 (1,2) - Just a little note:
- You have consistant pattern following the exact same melody in the song then you have 00:17:755 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - a melody change.
-> This can lead to confusements as well! Please consider NOT using this the next time.
00:35:412 (5,6) - Jump is unexpected and not fitting. You always break your consistancy with these jumps, when you have a good flow. Why dont you make the stream going upwards to the next slider 00:36:269 (10) - done
01:04:298 (2) - Circle should be here, there is no sound to it, right? Why this overmapping.done
01:09:698 (7) - This circle is disturbing. I played it as 01:09:526 (6,1) - not 01:09:526 (6,7,1) - . I actually didnt expect a circle here. Also, you follow the drums, 01:09:698 - here is nonedone
01:18:612 (3) - ^done
01:26:069 (3,4) - Overmapped part again, this tripple isnt in the melody you follow or anything. You should remove these two circles. Also you have a silent part, soothing and silent. Not streamydone
01:37:126 (8,1) - This little annoying slider 01:37:126 (8) - is ruining the pattern you was after. You tried to make a "tripple" slider continuing with the long slider. As in you have 01:37:126 - 01:37:212 - 01:37:298 - . But, when you play this little slider and wanting to click the longer one in the way you put them, you missclick this.
- Why not making 2 circles? instead of 2circles, other kick sliders.
01:37:640 (2) - Move this circle onto 01:37:983 (4) - stack it! It gives a better flow and playment.＾
02:18:612 (2,3) - Dont symmetricly spacing change them. done
- First it doesn't fit to the consistancy
- Second it doesn't flow as good

Difficultie is well mapped, but it needs more improvment in flow and consistancy.

Extra

Improvments highly suggested on: Consistancy, Flow and Overmapping!

Consistancy of Spacing and (or) flow:
00:06:783 (1,2,3) - Spacing isn't the same, not consistant, which looks and plays not good.done
00:09:526 (1,2) - Spacing isnt the same as 00:10:040 (3,4) - , you should improve thisdone
00:16:383 (1,2) - and 00:16:726 (2,3) - done
00:20:498 (1,2) - done
00:22:212 (2,3) - It doesn't play well and it's hard to read due to the consistant rythm and then change.none. it doesn't break.
00:33:183 (5,6,7) - Doesn't play well and it destroys your consistancynone, this works fine.
00:36:269 (4) - Try stacking this with 00:36:612 (6) - to make a nice jump and to improve the flow. It'd also only just play better.done
00:36:955 (1,2) - First you have a spacing change here, and then you stack 00:37:298 (2,3) - this. That's a no-go. Either keep it consistant or you imrprove the stacking as in, unstack. You might think, you have to stream it too.I can't understand what's wrong with this placement. This "Stop and go" flow is very fun for me.
00:49:726 (3,4) - Think about it; you have this consistant stream, spacing and timing wise, then 00:49:812 (4,5) - the spacing change which is completely nonsense and also timing wise the same but spacing wise incorrect. You should keep it consistantAs you know,slider to slider jump is easier than circle to circle and circle to slider jump. so I think this fine to play and readable with AR9
00:52:040 (1,2) - Why this jump? There is no need for it and also it doesnt fit one bit. It only destroys the playment and consistancy.fixed
00:52:726 (1,2) - They are stacked onto each other, why? You have a stream, you can't play this well, when it's stacked.doneand why I stacked them is These two are not clear sound as the later. Yes, I felt two are different from later. So I stacked them.
00:54:098 (1,2) - I understand the red short sliders, your choice, but why this. It's a new pattern and you shouldnt follow your previous one only because its "the same". It is not readable enough so play it good.none, it's not "same". Please hear music carefully. there is a
- 00:50:755 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - At this part
-> You should ONLY, if you really want to keep and make them, make them kind of jumps on white ticks. It is not readable enough to play it well and it destroys the streaming and gameplay.
01:36:098 (1,2,3,4) - These are way to annoying to play and hard to read. Consider making sliders!done
01:36:783 (6,7) - You have the same spacing like 01:37:126 (7,1) - here, why? The timings are completely different and should be spacing wise, the same.
- Same on these: 01:38:498 (8,1) - 01:39:869 (6,1) - 01:41:583 (1,2,3) - ( look at this 01:41:755 (2,3,4) - , the spacing is almost the same, but timewise not)done
01:46:040 (4,5,6) - Ok now this is really incorret and not good to play and too hard to read so you can actually play this.done
01:47:240 (2,3,4,5) - ^done
01:56:155 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^fixed
02:01:640 (8,9,1) -, 02:01:983 (1,2,3) Spacing is similar but you still have this 1/4 to 1/2 though and not keeping the spacing you should.done
02:03:869 (3,1) - Spacing towards this 02:04:040 (1,2) - doesnt make sense, you have this big spacing change and then again.done
02:05:926 (8) - Place this 02:05:755 (7,1) - between them, so you have a better transition. Also, towards your consistancy, it would confuse less.done
02:06:098 (1,2,3) - Spacing is almost the same again, you should improve it. done
02:07:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - ^ This is just so unreadable, really.some fixed
02:12:098 (4,5) - You didn't have this before, why do you suddenly make such a change. Its also hard to play, and during the hectic gameplay, you might not make this.done
02:17:069 (1,2) - This spacing change is just so weird and incorrect towards your actuall spacing. You have this constant jump spacing change spacing and then an antijump which is in the middle of this part so nonsense. Stack it or make normal spacing.done
- 02:17:069 (1,2,3) - Also, these are just so inconsistant, you really have to improve this. done

Overmapping:
I most of the time only here a constant 1/1 melody, not streams.

00:20:755 (2) - 00:20:755 (2,4,5) - , 00:43:040 (4) - 00:46:469 (2) - , 01:43:298 - doneThese should be existent
01:56:155 (1,2,3,4,1) - 01:58:898 (1) - ( It's a consistant stream and the melody doesn't change) These should be existentnone.I don't thisk this is overmapped. I follow back-drums. and there are these rhythm.
- First for the reason its doesnt fit the music
- Second, it doesnt play well
- Third, you overmap the song
- Fourth, there is no sound to map to when you had it consistant
02:19:812 - The correct rythm actually is:remove 02:20:240 (4). I feel this is best way.

Example

Read the "testplayers opinions" in my queue, to get more opinions about Hyper , Another and the Taiko difficutlies!

IRC - One of my testplayers agrees with me about the fact, the streams being unreadable sometimes:

14:31 Sephibro: the overlapped streams are hardly readable
14:31 BounceBabe: i know
14:31 BounceBabe: thats a big problem
14:32 BounceBabe: its not  easy to read which leads to missunderstood patterns

You need to improve a lot in spacing consistancy on this difficultie. It's a complete mess sometimes and they are nonsense and really hard to read. The map overall has great flow and potential in becoming a good map. Good luck with improving!

• 00:04:726 (2) - opposite slider. it look like better ~
  00:17:069 (5,1) - i think this rhythm is hard for beginner ;w;
  00:31:812 (2,3) - ^
  01:04:383 (2,3) - blanket
  01:16:726 (3) - add more bent
  01:22:898 (4) - opposite slider.
  01:34:555 (1) - wow O_o , nice slider ! i like it >w<
  02:04:726 (1,2) - makes to same slider shape
  02:08:155 (2,3) - blanket
  
  [Standard]
  
  • Umm.. i think SV and DS is too big ;w;
    00:04:040 (1) - opposite slider.
    00:13:126 (2) - please curve further
    00:40:555 (2,3) - i think this rhythm is hard for beginner
    00:45:698 (2,3,4) - ^
    01:50:155 (3) - consider putting in other place
    
    [Hyper]
    
    • 00:05:240 (4) - opposite slider.
      00:07:126 (3,4) - blanket
      00:11:926 (7) - opposite slider.
      00:13:126 (1,2,1,2) - it seems more interesting if avoid overlapping
      00:32:669 (5) - opposite slider.
      01:21:183 (2,3) - blanket
      01:22:726 (6,1) - ^
      01:28:383 (1,2,3,4,1) - i like it ~ :3
      01:46:898 (3) - NC
      02:04:726 (1) - opposite slider.
      02:08:669 (1,2) - blanket
      
      [Another]
      
      • funny nice ! :3

-Srui- wrote:

Hi ~ :3

You wrote a lot of "opposite slider", but I like shape flows. So most of them were refused."blanket" too.

[Beginner]

• 00:04:726 (2) - opposite slider. it look like better ~none
  00:17:069 (5,1) - i think this rhythm is hard for beginner ;w;none
  00:31:812 (2,3) - ^none
  01:04:383 (2,3) - blanketnone
  01:16:726 (3) - add more bentdone
  01:22:898 (4) - opposite slider.none
  01:34:555 (1) - wow O_o , nice slider ! i like it >w<thanks
  02:04:726 (1,2) - makes to same slider shapedone
  02:08:155 (2,3) - blanketdone
  
  [Standard]
  
  • Umm.. i think SV and DS is too big ;w;
    00:04:040 (1) - opposite slider.none
    00:13:126 (2) - please curve furthertried
    00:40:555 (2,3) - i think this rhythm is hard for beginnernone
    00:45:698 (2,3,4) - ^none
    01:50:155 (3) - consider putting in other place none, unfortunately, This is best place I can.
    
    [Hyper]
    
    • 00:05:240 (4) - opposite slider.none
      00:07:126 (3,4) - blanketnone
      00:11:926 (7) - opposite slider.none
      00:13:126 (1,2,1,2) - it seems more interesting if avoid overlappingnone
      00:32:669 (5) - opposite slider.none
      01:21:183 (2,3) - blanketnone
      01:22:726 (6,1) - ^none
      01:28:383 (1,2,3,4,1) - i like it ~ :3
      01:46:898 (3) - NCdone
      02:04:726 (1) - opposite slider.none
      02:08:669 (1,2) - blanketnone
      
      [Another]
      
      • funny nice ! :3

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hello.

I think that the real artist is 8284. just look at this page
It is displayed 8284 (Mary), it's like "orangentle (Papyrus)" if you know it...

Consider adding 8284 to tags or change the artist's name.

No kd for this post please.

fanzhen0019 wrote:

ohhhh find a bat rank it !!!!

Urushi38 wrote:

BAT is nowhere haha.

1. 00:15:050 (1) - It feels a bit scrunched in play, I recommend to move it upwards and make 1.0 spacing to 00:15:564 (2).
   
   Example

   
2. 01:00:136 (6) - Try adding a NC here, seems to fit your patterns and will accent this break nicely.
   
3. 01:20:364 (1) - How about remove the repeat from here. Seems to follow the song nicer.
   
4. 01:36:393 (2) - This slider misses the music a bit. I suggest move it to 01:36:307 and add a repeat. Then move the 01:36:307 (2) closer to the 1 so there is more distance to 01:36:650 (3).
   
   Example

   
5. 01:45:436 - Hmm why did you make this hit 5% volume? I think it's best to raise the volume to avoid inaudible hitsound troubles.
   
6. 01:47:707 (4) - That rhythm is a bit strange to read. I'd suggest to delete this slider and put triplet at 01:47:793 instead.
   
   Example

   
   01:46:936 (1) to 01:48:478 (1)
   Here's an example placement:
   
7. 01:52:764 (2) - It's easy to mistake for 1/4 imo. I suggest move 01:52:764 (2,3) a bit upwards and stack the tails of 01:52:936 (3,5). It reads better imo. Try it and see if you like it.
   
   Example

   
8. 02:07:507 (1) - Move to (172,52) for your square pattern with 02:07:678 (2,3,4,5,6).
   
9. 02:09:650 (10) - Try deleting this and placing the triplet at 02:09:393 in a line pattern with 02:08:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6). Follows music more nicely imo. Here is an example of what I mean:
   
   Example

   
10. 02:16:250 (5,6,7) - It would read nicer if you made more spacing to the 6. I suggest unstack 5-7 and move them a bit up.
    
    Example

    
11. 02:20:707 (5) - Try adding a NC here and see if you like it. I like the last three hits to be one combo.
    
12. 02:21:221 - Since the music is so loud, I don't really like silencing these spinners. In the easier diffs you don't silence them. I recommend 60% volume for the first spinner, then at 02:23:964 you could add a green line and increase volume. It will fit the song nicely.

1. 01:00:478 (2,3) - Since you're only following the piano/strings in this section, I think it would be better to delete these two notes.
   
2. 01:04:421 (2) - To me it's nicer to extend this slider by 1/2.
   
3. 01:13:336 (2,3) - I'd move them up two grids to avoid overlap with 01:12:650 (1). The overlap feels unintentional.
   
4. 01:18:136 to 01:22:250 - I'd suggest to make each hit that isn't on a white line a soft hit. For example, soft hits at 01:18:307 - 01:18:564 - 01:18:650 - 01:18:993 - 01:19:336 and so on. It will sound nicer with the music.
   
5. 01:18:478 (2,3) - Would be nicer to simplify this to a 1/2 slider imo. The 1/4 rhythm here is a bit surprising for the player in this slow section.
   
   Example

   
6. 01:30:821 (6) - Try replacing with 1/2 slider instead to better follow the music. Then stack 01:31:336 (1,2) on then end of it.
   
   Example

   
   01:29:964 (4) to 01:31:850 (1)
7. 01:40:078 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Really difficult to read with AR 8 imo. I suggest delete 01:40:678 (2) and NC on 01:40:764 (3) instead. Then unstack the triplet.
   
   Example

   
8. 02:21:221 - Same as Extra. Give the spinners some volume might be nicer.

1. 00:05:793 (1) - Remove NC if you'd like consistency with 00:11:278 (3).
   
2. 00:12:307 to 00:23:278 - Some claps in this section are default soft claps because you didn't change to Normal addition. If it's intentional that's fine, just wanted to mention. In the other diffs you use Normal sample set here.
   
3. 01:03:050 (1) - Remove NC, it feels really extra here and messy.
   
4. 01:05:793 (1) - ^ Same I'd suggest remove NC.
   
5. 01:12:993 (1) - How about move it a bit upwards (244,44) for more curved flow and fix spacing on 01:13:336 (2,3).
   
   Example

   
6. 01:22:250 (4) - Try changing to a 1/2 slider instead since the music is really active at 01:22:421 and it will make 01:22:764 (5) nicer to read.
   
   Example

   
7. 01:24:993 (3) - The 3 has very conflicting flow with 01:23:621 (1,2,3). Try using a curve and making a blanket with 2 instead. Here's and example:
   
   Example

   
8. 01:27:736 (5) - Add a repeat and make the end a soft hit with a whistle on it.
   
9. 01:52:250 (3) - Move up and right a few grids (332,60) to complete circle pattern with 01:51:564 (2). Right now it's a bit off.
   
10. 02:23:964 - If you do so in the other diffs, try increasing volume for the spinner. Use the same volumes in each diff though.

1. 00:04:764 (2) - Whistle on the end is nice.
   
2. 00:07:507 (2) - Too many whistles here, I suggest remove the whistle from the repeat to follow your pattern better.
   
3. 00:10:764 (2) - Whistle on head is nice.
   
4. 00:11:621 (3) - How about whistle on head and end.
   
5. 00:31:850 (2,3) - Confusing rhythm, try not to use small sliders like 2 in a Beginner diff. I suggest delete the 3 and extend the 2 to 00:32:536 like this:
   
   Example

   
6. 00:42:821 (1,2,3) - Again really confusing rhythm for a Beginner diff. I suggest delete 00:43:336 (2) and use slider at 00:43:507 instead. Try to avoid switching to 1/2 unless you have to.
   
   Example

   
   00:41:107 (3) to 00:45:221 (1)
7. 01:42:821 (2) - Try to even out the middle area a bit. Move the circled point to (388,112).
   
   Example

   
8. 02:23:964 - If you do in other diffs, make the last spinner a louder volume.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Urushi38 wrote:

BAT is now/here haha.

Hi.

[Another]All done!

1. 00:15:050 (1) - It feels a bit scrunched in play, I recommend to move it upwards and make 1.0 spacing to 00:15:564 (2).
   
   Example

   
2. 01:00:136 (6) - Try adding a NC here, seems to fit your patterns and will accent this break nicely.
   
3. 01:20:364 (1) - How about remove the repeat from here. Seems to follow the song nicer.
   
4. 01:36:393 (2) - This slider misses the music a bit. I suggest move it to 01:36:307 and add a repeat. Then move the 01:36:307 (2) closer to the 1 so there is more distance to 01:36:650 (3).
   
   Example

   
5. 01:45:436 - Hmm why did you make this hit 5% volume? I think it's best to raise the volume to avoid inaudible hitsound troubles.
   
6. 01:47:707 (4) - That rhythm is a bit strange to read. I'd suggest to delete this slider and put triplet at 01:47:793 instead.
   
   Example

   
   01:46:936 (1) to 01:48:478 (1)
   Here's an example placement:
   
7. 01:52:764 (2) - It's easy to mistake for 1/4 imo. I suggest move 01:52:764 (2,3) a bit upwards and stack the tails of 01:52:936 (3,5). It reads better imo. Try it and see if you like it.
   
   Example

   
8. 02:07:507 (1) - Move to (172,52) for your square pattern with 02:07:678 (2,3,4,5,6).
   
9. 02:09:650 (10) - Try deleting this and placing the triplet at 02:09:393 in a line pattern with 02:08:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6). Follows music more nicely imo. Here is an example of what I mean:
   
   Example

   
10. 02:16:250 (5,6,7) - It would read nicer if you made more spacing to the 6. I suggest unstack 5-7 and move them a bit up.
    
    Example

    
11. 02:20:707 (5) - Try adding a NC here and see if you like it. I like the last three hits to be one combo.
    
12. 02:21:221 - Since the music is so loud, I don't really like silencing these spinners. In the easier diffs you don't silence them. I recommend 60% volume for the first spinner, then at 02:23:964 you could add a green line and increase volume. It will fit the song nicely.

[Hyper]Almost done!

1. 01:00:478 (2,3) - Since you're only following the piano/strings in this section, I think it would be better to delete these two notes.
   
2. 01:04:421 (2) - To me it's nicer to extend this slider by 1/2.
   
3. 01:13:336 (2,3) - I'd move them up two grids to avoid overlap with 01:12:650 (1). The overlap feels unintentional.
   
4. 01:18:136 to 01:22:250 - I'd suggest to make each hit that isn't on a white line a soft hit. For example, soft hits at 01:18:307 - 01:18:564 - 01:18:650 - 01:18:993 - 01:19:336 and so on. It will sound nicer with the music.01:21:736 (3) - only this head was rejected. I feel It's better to play
   
5. 01:18:478 (2,3) - Would be nicer to simplify this to a 1/2 slider imo. The 1/4 rhythm here is a bit surprising for the player in this slow section.
   
   Example

   
6. 01:30:821 (6) - Try replacing with 1/2 slider instead to better follow the music. Then stack 01:31:336 (1,2) on then end of it.
   
   Example

   
   01:29:964 (4) to 01:31:850 (1)
7. 01:40:078 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Really difficult to read with AR 8 imo. I suggest delete 01:40:678 (2) and NC on 01:40:764 (3) instead. Then unstack the triplet.
   
   Example

   
8. 02:21:221 - Same as Extra. Give the spinners some volume might be nicer.

[Standard]Almost done!

1. 00:05:793 (1) - Remove NC if you'd like consistency with 00:11:278 (3).
   
2. 00:12:307 to 00:23:278 - Some claps in this section are default soft claps because you didn't change to Normal addition. If it's intentional that's fine, just wanted to mention. In the other diffs you use Normal sample set here.
   
3. 01:03:050 (1) - Remove NC, it feels really extra here and messy.
   
4. 01:05:793 (1) - ^ Same I'd suggest remove NC.
   
5. 01:12:993 (1) - How about move it a bit upwards (244,44) for more curved flow and fix spacing on 01:13:336 (2,3).
   
   Example

   
6. 01:22:250 (4) - Try changing to a 1/2 slider instead since the music is really active at 01:22:421 and it will make 01:22:764 (5) nicer to read.
   
   Example

   
7. 01:24:993 (3) - The 3 has very conflicting flow with 01:23:621 (1,2,3). Try using a curve and making a blanket with 2 instead. Here's and example:
   
   Example

   
8. 01:27:736 (5) - Add a repeat and make the end a soft hit with a whistle on it.
   
9. 01:52:250 (3) - Move up and right a few grids (332,60) to complete circle pattern with 01:51:564 (2). Right now it's a bit off.Umm, I prefer mine. It looks really circle.
   
10. 02:23:964 - If you do so in the other diffs, try increasing volume for the spinner. Use the same volumes in each diff though.

[Beginner]All done!

1. 00:04:764 (2) - Whistle on the end is nice.
   
2. 00:07:507 (2) - Too many whistles here, I suggest remove the whistle from the repeat to follow your pattern better.
   
3. 00:10:764 (2) - Whistle on head is nice.
   
4. 00:11:621 (3) - How about whistle on head and end.
   
5. 00:31:850 (2,3) - Confusing rhythm, try not to use small sliders like 2 in a Beginner diff. I suggest delete the 3 and extend the 2 to 00:32:536 like this:
   
   Example

   
6. 00:42:821 (1,2,3) - Again really confusing rhythm for a Beginner diff. I suggest delete 00:43:336 (2) and use slider at 00:43:507 instead. Try to avoid switching to 1/2 unless you have to.
   
   Example

   
   00:41:107 (3) to 00:45:221 (1)
7. 01:42:821 (2) - Try to even out the middle area a bit. Move the circled point to (388,112).I tried my best
   
   Example

   
8. 02:23:964 - If you do in other diffs, make the last spinner a louder volume.

Awesome map.

Check these and call me back.

1. 01:20:364 (1) - You forgot to make the head and tail soft hits and add soft whistles.
   
2. 01:36:650 (3) - Try to make more spacing to the 3 it will read nicer, try around (4,180).
   
3. 01:47:793 (4,5) - Please unstack the 5 or stack them both on the 6. It's very awkward to read the way you placed it because of autostacking. How about like this?
   
   Example

   

1. 01:00:136 (1) - On second thought I feel it's better to delete this slider and start play at 01:00:993.
   
2. 01:12:650 (1) - Remove soft addition from head so we have Normal finish?

1. 01:01:678 (1,2,1,2) - Why finish on ends of these? I suggest remove all finishes and just place on heads of 01:01:678 (1,1).
   
2. 01:11:278 (4) - Finish on the end instead of clap?

1. 01:04:421 (2) - Finish on head. Remove finish from end.
   
2. 01:05:793 (3) - Remove finish from head.
   
3. 01:12:650 (1) - Replace clap with finish is nice.
   
4. 02:15:736 - After this point, all of your whistles are Soft instead of Normal whistles, is this on purpose? If not, make sure to remove the soft addition.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey. Really sorry for taking so long.

No KD for this.

[Another]

1. 01:20:364 (1) - You forgot to make the head and tail soft hits and add soft whistles.done
   
2. 01:36:650 (3) - Try to make more spacing to the 3 it will read nicer, try around (4,180).done in another pattern
   
3. 01:47:793 (4,5) - Please unstack the 5 or stack them both on the 6. It's very awkward to read the way you placed it because of autostacking. How about like this?done
   
   Example

   

[Hyper]

1. 01:00:136 (1) - On second thought I feel it's better to delete this slider and start play at 01:00:993.umm, I think this is really nice as sign of starting.
   
2. 01:12:650 (1) - Remove soft addition from head so we have Normal finish?[done/list]
   
   [Standard]
   
   1. 01:01:678 (1,2,1,2) - Why finish on ends of these? I suggest remove all finishes and just place on heads of 01:01:678 (1,1).done
      
   2. 01:11:278 (4) - Finish on the end instead of clap?done
   [Beginner]
   
   1. 01:04:421 (2) - Finish on head. Remove finish from end.done
      
   2. 01:05:793 (3) - Remove finish from head.done
      
   3. 01:12:650 (1) - Replace clap with finish is nice.done
      
   4. 02:15:736 - After this point, all of your whistles are Soft instead of Normal whistles, is this on purpose? If not, make sure to remove the soft addition.
      I thought soft whistle fits better in this diff. (Excuse me, I can't tell well in English...)

Let me know when you're finished.