1. Ayu (4,88 stars, 340 notes)
2. Nemis (3,16 stars, 206 notes)

[Luanny] wrote:

stop being a lazy bitch and make an insane for it.

ryuu wrote:

hi :3
i just like song and u (both of u) ;w; aww >///<

[General]

add nemis imagine dragons continued silence ep (<-- album) cover in tags
ur bg in 1024x768 if u want :о

[Ayu]

your style reminds me niva :о

00:50:443 (2) - 3rd point on x:184, y:264 moved first point instead, otherwise it would break the blanket
01:09:332 (4) - 3rd point on x:204, y:128 Moved 2nd & 3rd, without grid snap to fix blanket instead hurr
01:12:887 (4) - 3rd point on x:164, y:136 This one seems alright to me
01:14:665 (8) - 3rd point on x:440, y:134 Fixed blanket by moving it a little instead
01:18:221 (2) - 3rd point on x:180, y:216 Fixed blanket by moving it a little instead
01:57:332 (4) - 1-2 grid down Moved 1 grid down
02:29:332 (2) - 3rd point on x:400, y:100 ehh what
03:14:665 (8) - clap? y
03:14:776 (1) - finish? y
03:41:665 (1,1) - make the volume quieter :о downed volume to 30%

cool song and mapset!
simple and cute :3
good luck ~ Thaaaanks ryuu <3

Ayu wrote:

[Luanny] wrote:

stop being a lazy bitch and make an insane for it.

hypocrite

cheesiest wrote:

stop being a lazy bitch and make an insane for it.

mod:

hehe

14:02 Ayu: cheesiest
14:02 Ayu: can you
14:02 Ayu: mod my map
14:02 Ayu: plzzzzzz
14:02 cheesiest: idk can i?!?!!?
14:02 cheesiest: ?!??!? maybe
14:02 cheesiest: ;~:
14:02 *Ayu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/262555 Lindsey Stirling and Pentatonix - Radioactive]
14:02 cheesiest: quick irc mod\
14:02 cheesiest: fuck u
14:02 Ayu: wot
14:02 Ayu: why
14:02 cheesiest: dling
14:03 *cheesiest is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/261703 Lindsey Stirling and Pentatonix - Radioactive [Ayu]]
14:03 cheesiest: ur map only
14:03 cheesiest: nig
14:03 Ayu: nig ok
14:03 Ayu: post though
14:03 Ayu: for kd n shiz
14:03 cheesiest: yes
14:03 cheesiest: ofc duh
14:03 cheesiest: why else am i modding
14:04 cheesiest: jk :3c i love you
14:04 Ayu: :3c
14:04 Ayu: also lol elly and snb
14:04 Ayu: need popcorn
14:04 Ayu: im enjoying this
14:04 cheesiest: omg ayu wtf
14:05 cheesiest: im gonna have to flame you on some shit
14:05 Ayu: ok
14:05 Ayu: what is it
14:05 cheesiest: ok look
14:05 cheesiest: 00:33:776 (3,4,5) -
14:05 Ayu: WAIT
14:05 cheesiest: slider end of 3
14:05 *cheesiest is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/261703 Lindsey Stirling and Pentatonix - Radioactive [Ayu]]
14:05 cheesiest: SLDIER END OF 4
14:05 cheesiest: 3
14:05 cheesiest: imean
14:05 Ayu: yes
14:05 Ayu: sup
14:05 cheesiest: and slider start of 4
14:05 cheesiest: and slider start of 5
14:05 cheesiest: make a triangle omg
14:05 Ayu: yes
14:05 cheesiest: i guess not because inconsistant spacing
14:06 Ayu: its triangle
14:06 cheesiest: almost a triangle
14:06 cheesiest: use 1x ds makes like so simple and easy
14:06 Ayu: i made triangle now
14:06 Ayu: rly nice find
14:06 cheesiest: again
14:06 cheesiest: 00:40:665 (1,2,3) -
14:06 cheesiest: LOL
14:06 cheesiest: start of 1
14:06 cheesiest: end of 2
14:06 cheesiest: start of 3
14:07 cheesiest: because you have 1x spacing from end of 2 to start of 3
14:07 Ayu: man they weren't even supposed to be real triangles though
14:07 cheesiest: but they make u look so nice and structured
14:07 cheesiest: and srsbsns mapping skillz
14:08 Ayu: fixed
14:08 cheesiest: 00:42:443 (5,6,7) - line this shit up
14:08 cheesiest: or something
14:08 Ayu: no
14:08 cheesiest: kk
14:08 Ayu: k stop nazi now
14:08 cheesiest: 00:47:110 (1,2) - reverse/!?!?
14:08 cheesiest: actually no lol
14:08 Ayu: no
14:09 cheesiest: 00:56:887 (5) - this could be good on tick of 00:55:776 (2) -
14:09 cheesiest: but w/e :-)
14:09 Ayu: wat
14:09 Ayu: no wtf are you high
14:10 cheesiest: perhaps
14:10 cheesiest: omg the way i did it is genius
14:11 cheesiest: haha wtf am i doing http://puu.sh/3eUQH.png
14:11 Ayu: LOL
14:12 cheesiest: radioactive patterns omg
14:12 cheesiest: all i mod is nazi ogm
14:13 Ayu: omg
14:13 Ayu: map 2 perfect
14:13 cheesiest: no
14:13 cheesiest: 02:00:665 (4) -
14:13 Ayu: brb getting BAT
14:13 cheesiest: move to 192, 368
14:13 cheesiest: and then it makes a nice quadrilateral shape :-)
14:13 Ayu: lel
14:13 cheesiest: kk or nn??!?
14:14 Ayu: fixd
14:14 Ayu: cuz i luv u
14:14 Ayu: so this pattern
14:14 Ayu: is dedicated to u
14:14 cheesiest: yes put me in tags
14:14 cheesiest: you copied patterns
14:14 Ayu: lel
14:14 cheesiest: like gladi
14:14 Ayu: no
14:14 cheesiest: for radioactive
14:14 cheesiest: and some parts
14:14 Ayu: I just did triangles
14:14 cheesiest: yes u did
14:14 cheesiest: :!!:!:!
14:14 Ayu: gladi told me
14:14 Ayu: to
14:14 cheesiest: LOL
14:14 Ayu: increase spacing
14:15 cheesiest: 03:02:221 (1,2,3,4) - bad way of doing it
14:15 cheesiest: 03:02:665 (3,4,5) - and then you didn't continue the pattern
14:15 Ayu: no
14:15 Ayu: es LC flow
14:15 cheesiest: u did
14:15 cheesiest: it wrong stillanyways
14:15 cheesiest: amg
14:15 Ayu: no
14:15 Ayu: its good
14:15 Ayu: this way
14:15 Ayu: even RLC
14:15 cheesiest: 4 should be same spacing to 1
14:15 cheesiest: and 2
14:15 Ayu: mentioned this pattern
14:15 Ayu: saying it was good flow
14:16 Ayu: no
14:16 Ayu: wtf
14:16 Ayu: u dont get the pattern
14:16 cheesiest: 4 should be equidistant to 2 and 1
14:16 cheesiest: nigga~ u asked me 2 mod map but w/e :3c
14:16 Ayu: it is wtf
14:16 Ayu: no dont stop
14:16 cheesiest: :3c
14:16 Ayu: they're equally spaced
14:16 cheesiest: ignore the 5
14:16 cheesiest: http://puu.sh/3eV5c.png
14:17 cheesiest: i mean
14:17 cheesiest: like
14:17 Ayu: oh that
14:17 cheesiest: make 1 2 and 4 equilateral
14:17 cheesiest: and then fix 5 lel
14:17 cheesiest: 03:03:110 (5) -
14:17 cheesiest: or move
14:17 cheesiest: 03:02:221 (1,2,3,4) -
14:17 cheesiest: up
14:18 Ayu: fixd
14:18 Ayu: help
14:18 Ayu: ok
14:18 Ayu: ty
14:19 cheesiest: np :3c
14:19 cheesiest: ok done let me check other stuff
14:20 cheesiest: letterbox on breaks looks ugly
14:20 cheesiest: put sb
14:20 cheesiest: kd plz
14:20 Ayu: put sb
14:20 Ayu: wat
14:20 cheesiest: what
14:20 cheesiest: that part was joke
14:20 cheesiest: about letterbox
14:21 cheesiest: ok i guess that is good
14:21 cheesiest: good map
14:21 Ayu: letterbox
14:21 Ayu: o
14:21 Ayu: i actually removed them
14:21 Ayu: disabled
14:21 Ayu: remove
14:21 Ayu: same shit
14:21 cheesiest: lel
14:21 *cheesiest is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/262555 Lindsey Stirling and Pentatonix - Radioactive [Nemis]]
14:21 cheesiest: nemis
14:22 Ayu: lel
14:22 cheesiest: are you ranking
14:22 cheesiest: w/ just those diffs
14:22 Ayu: yes
14:22 cheesiest: kk gl
14:23 cheesiest: i wonder if some mappers notice that
14:23 cheesiest: offbeats and onbeats can be scaled
14:24 cheesiest: like some people seem to ignore that 1/1 level has its own onbeats and offbeats
14:24 cheesiest: and end up like ending sldiers on big white ticks
14:24 cheesiest: gladi needs to rank
14:24 *cheesiest is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/237478 Imagine Dragons - Radioactive]
14:24 cheesiest: amg
14:25 Ayu: ya ikr
14:25 Ayu: also post log get kd
14:25 Ayu: etc
14:25 cheesiest: oh almost forgot

376,144,63999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,88,64443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,40,64887,6,0,L|200:32,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,68,66221,1,0,0:0:0:0:

ARE YOU SERIOUS about the kiais? this is a copy from the first kiai lol. Seriously, map it decently.
all of my lol.

Nemis wrote:

ARE YOU SERIOUS about the kiais? this is a copy from the first kiai lol. Seriously, map it decently.
all of my lol.

Ayu wanted a difficulty, I said him to give me more time but he wanted it asap, so I needed to copy-paste kiais and another part.

Nemis wrote:

@all: Applied almost all, thanks! I'll probably remap some parts a bit in the next update. For the breaks I'll talk with Ayu :3

Kyshiro wrote:

Copy pasting whole parts just to finish it fast is simply called being lazy, even if Ayu said he wanted it asap, asap doesn't mean right now. A mapset should have the highest quality possible, having the same things over and over by copying whole parts kills this.

Kyshiro wrote:

In other words, all the previous mods did not count for your diff since you'll be remapping it? I sure hope you're remapping it but next time just map the whole thing without copying in the first place.

Gabe wrote:

if you think your map is decent enought to be ranked, fucking poke me.

1. 00:51:110 (3) - It would be better if you make similar and opposite (2), like by moving middle and end sliderpoint up
2. 01:04:887 (1,2,3,4,5) - You should move this pattern a bit to the left in my opinion, as a 1024x768 player it's frustating to play that right in the corner.
3. 01:24:665 (1) - Try to move down a bit
4. 01:33:110 - Not necessary but a 1/2 slider wouldn't hurt here.
5. 02:03:999 (1,2,1) - You should space as you did before imo, gives a better effect to the gameplay
6. 02:12:887 (3) - What about making it linear? Fits better imo.
7. 03:30:443 (4,5,1) - Kinda nazi, is it intentional or are they supposed to be on the same diagonal line?
8. 03:43:332 (1) - Shouldn't it start on the red tick?

1. 01:24:443 (4) - Così dritto è un po' bruttino secondo me
2. 03:27:998 (2) - Qualche grid più in giù?

1. Are you sure that you want to keep KIAI playing during that Spinner on 03:41:554 - ? It feels pretty weird to have KIAI while spining, also I feel like the song already calmed down while the Spinner plays
   
   
2. Gap between the two diffs is pretty high, in fact; the SV change from 0,80 to 1,80 is not acceptable. Nemis' diff should be considered to be an Easy, so you should make a difficulty between Nemis' and your diff.

1. 00:32:887 (1) - Sounds a bit empty, using a whistle would be cool but then again it would be a bit lonely if you only use it once. So either just leave it or try to add some whistles to the downbeats, hue.
2. 00:44:887 (2) - You can try to place that on the middle of the grid, just for a neater look.
3. 00:45:332 (3) - I understand why this Slider looks like it looks, but it looks a bit untidy to me. Try to move the second wavepoint away from the other one.
4. 00:48:443 (2) - You should try not to let the Sliders end on heavy beats, you could try to replace it with 2 circles.
5. 01:04:887 (1) - Add a finish to the start, it will be consistent with the one on 01:01:332 -
6. 01:07:554 (4) - Remove the clap on the end; the song doesn't really call for an emphasize here, and it breaks consistency.
7. 01:08:443 (1) - Eh, I don't think you did that on purpose, but remove the whistle from the Sliderbody and add it on the parts of it only? Sounds way better to me.
8. 01:11:999 (1) - Not a big deal here aswell, but remove the whistle from the body? Sounds way too noisy.
9. 01:15:110 (6) - Same as 01:07:554 (4) -
10. 01:22:221 (4) - Same as above
11. 01:27:999 (3) - I don't know if you did that on purpose, but anyways, this is a good chance to improve the blanket with 4.
12. 01:51:110 (1) - Whistle seems to work well here, since you can try to show that a new part starts again.
13. 02:02:221 (1,2) - Try a whistle on 1 and 2's end, it will follow the melody becoming higher in a pretty cool way.
14. 02:08:887 (1) - Same as 01:04:887 (1) -
15. 02:12:443 (1) - Same as 01:08:443 (1) - but you have it on the body aswell, so I'd say just add the whistles on the Slider parts for the one I mentioned before.
16. 02:19:554 (1) - Try to add either a whistle or a finish to the start, the beat feels too heavy to be empty.
17. 02:26:665 (1) - Same here
18. 03:09:332 (1) - You can delete all the timing points which are during the Spinner, they are unused.
19. 03:16:443 (1) - I feel as if this Slider looks a bit wry, hue, try to align the wavepoints and move the end a bit up. Or just try to make the shape smoother all in all.
20. 03:19:999 (1) - Same as 01:04:887 (1) -
21. 03:30:665 (1) - Same as 02:19:554 (1) -
22. 03:37:776 (1) - And same as above.

1. 01:43:999 (1) - Try to shape it the same way as 5? Just an idea, but it could work well.
2. 03:41:332 (5) - Try to place this circle somewhere else, it's not well readable on that Slider's end. Besides that, it will be easily to just move somewhere else.

LunarSakuya wrote:

Congrats