This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年11月10日 at 20:39:34

Artist: koutaq
Title: Tabetai Hito ga Iru
Source: Touhou
Tags: rumia youmayakou Sensitive Heart SCARLET DESTINY 妖魔夜行 zun
BPM: 130
Filesize: 4193kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (2.81 stars, 155 notes)
2. Lunatic (3.49 stars, 238 notes)
3. Normal (1.73 stars, 92 notes)

Download: koutaq - Tabetai Hito ga Iru
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~ instrumental map ~
「あなたは食べてもいい人類？」

hi from #modreqs
[Easy]
1) 00:09:323 (1,2) - Use distance spacing - 1.4x
2) 00:16:702 (1,2) - ^
3) 00:20:392 (1,2) - ^
4) 00:24:081 (1,2) - ^
5) 00:25:926 (3,4) - ^
6) 00:25:926 (3) - delete this note
7) 00:39:761 (2,3) - Use distance spacing - 1.4x
8) 00:43:451 (2,3) - ^
9) 00:45:757 (1,2) - ^
10) 01:09:738 (3,4,5) - stream in easy? it's imposible
11) 01:23:113 (1,2,3,4) - jump in easy? fix this
[Normal]
1) 00:49:907 (1) - remove combo
2) 00:51:291 (2) - new combo
[Ex]
all map is nice )

~~ Good luck ~~

vlad969632 wrote:

hi from #modreqs
[Easy]
1) 00:09:323 (1,2) - Use distance spacing - 1.4x
no, sorry
at Easy-diff, I want to uniform DS as soon as possible
2) 00:16:702 (1,2) - ^
3) 00:20:392 (1,2) - ^
4) 00:24:081 (1,2) - ^
5) 00:25:926 (3,4) - ^
6) 00:25:926 (3) - delete this note
??
it is slider, isn't it?
7) 00:39:761 (2,3) - Use distance spacing - 1.4x
8) 00:43:451 (2,3) - ^
9) 00:45:757 (1,2) - ^
10) 01:09:738 (3,4,5) - stream in easy? it's imposible
Hold, Let me think...
it's not so hard, I think.....
11) 01:23:113 (1,2,3,4) - jump in easy? fix this
Hold
a little boring if DS is 1.2x at this part
[Normal]
1) 00:49:907 (1) - remove combo
2) 00:51:291 (2) - new combo
no, sorry
I intend to unform to 00:57:286 (1,2,3) -
[Ex]
all map is nice ) thx~

~~ Good luck ~~

Thank you for modding!
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Hello, from popner and Azure's modding

beautiful song

[General]
Your Normal is too hard
Your map diffs should be "Insane / Hard / Normal" or "Hard / Normal" or "Hard / Normal / Easy"
So, you have some choices to choose:

1. change your Normal as Hard (CS have to -1 and fix some DS) and change your Easy as Normal (make it little harder, 3~3.5 stars)
2. delete your Easy and make your EX diffs easier (CS-1 and fix some DS)
3. make your EX diffs and Normal easier

And I think your skin is unrankable...but keep it now until your map need bubble, BATs will tell you

send me form-pm when you decide and ready to mod

Azure wrote:

Hello, from popner and Azure's modding

beautiful song

[General]
Your Normal is too hard
Your map diffs should be "Insane / Hard / Normal" or "Hard / Normal" or "Hard / Normal / Easy"
So, you have some choices to choose:

1. change your Normal as Hard (CS have to -1 and fix some DS) and change your Easy as Normal (make it little harder, 3~3.5 stars)
2. delete your Easy and make your EX diffs easier (CS-1 and fix some DS)
3. make your EX diffs and Normal easier
I'll choose 1.
I'll remap easy and normal diff to incorporate your suggestion
And I think your skin is unrankable...but keep it now until your map need bubble, BATs will tell you
Oh, it's so sad...
I make oneself available for fix of skinning
send me form-pm when you decide and ready to mod

Thank you for General-mod!
I wrote my reply by use of red
When I finish remapping, I will send you PM

Hey there RandomEffect M4M? :3

• GENERAL
  00:31:460 - How about an extra kiai starburst here? It fits well with the song since the downbeat is really clear from the song part behind it
  00:46:218 - I really think kiai should start here. Besides it is the stanza(big white tick), the current one is too suddenly for the song imo
  01:34:181 - End the fading sound here and crop mp3 from this part. Too long blank lol

• Normal
  00:31:460 (1) - Adjust the curve on this turn so that it will make the encircling on 00:32:844 (2) - looks better if the turn is cleaner
  00:48:985 (6) - Make the curve cleaner and make it encircle the 00:49:907 (1) - better
  00:57:286 (1) - Make the turn more visible and avoid overlaps with the lines. Might be confusing for beginners
  01:06:510 (3) - Repeat -1? May be confusing for beginners to see the kick
  01:10:661 (6) - NC. Avoid long combos on easy

• Hard
  00:09:323 (1,3) - Make the turn cleaner for better looks
  00:13:013 (5) - Stack with 00:11:168 (3) - looked better
  00:13:013 (5) - NC for different rhythm and avoid long combos on normal(6-7)
  00:26:272 (7) - NC
  01:08:816 (3,4,5) - Uhh unstacked triplet is a bit hard, this one is actually fit more for insane try stacking this
  01:10:660 (3,4,5) - ^

• EX
  00:42:413 (9) - I don't think this note really necessary, nothing here
  01:00:053 (9) - better if you NC at this point to avoid long combos on the stream and looked better too

yeah actually you've fixed your biggest issue of diffs on your remap. It was your difficulty name, It is the right decision to change it
all good already, just make the sliders more cleaner and it should be fine~
Good Luck

come back as your PM

[General]
well... I think your rythm is OK,so try to make more variations on the arrangement

[Normal]

1. CS-1, AR-1

[Hard]

1. 00:11:168 (3) ctrl+G
2. 00:16:702 (1) ^
3. 00:28:463 (2) move to x52, y228
4. 01:08:816 (3,4,5) change to this http://puu.sh/3F17E.jpg will be better, because this is in a Hard diff
5. 01:10:660 (3,4,5) ^

[Ex]

1. 00:03:789 (2,3) change slider's order on here
2. 00:14:858 NC
3. 00:16:587 (9,1) DS
4. 00:26:848 (4,5,6) closer will be better here

try to find more mods and good luck !

AnreFM wrote:

Hey there RandomEffect M4M? :3

• GENERAL
  00:31:460 - How about an extra kiai starburst here? It fits well with the song since the downbeat is really clear from the song part behind it
  KEEP
  because Kiai-Time become too long
  00:46:218 - I really think kiai should start here. Besides it is the stanza(big white tick), the current one is too suddenly for the song imo
  You're right, fix!
  01:34:181 - End the fading sound here and crop mp3 from this part. Too long blank lol OK, I'll try to change

• Normal
  00:31:460 (1) - Adjust the curve on this turn so that it will make the encircling on 00:32:844 (2) - looks better if the turn is cleaner Fix
  00:48:985 (6) - Make the curve cleaner and make it encircle the 00:49:907 (1) - better Fix
  00:57:286 (1) - Make the turn more visible and avoid overlaps with the lines. Might be confusing for beginners Fix
  01:06:510 (3) - Repeat -1? May be confusing for beginners to see the kick Fix
  01:10:661 (6) - NC. Avoid long combos on easy
  Fix

• Hard
  00:09:323 (1,3) - Make the turn cleaner for better looks Fix
  00:13:013 (5) - Stack with 00:11:168 (3) - looked better Nice Idea!
  00:13:013 (5) - NC for different rhythm and avoid long combos on normal(6-7) KEEP
  00:26:272 (7) - NC fix
  01:08:816 (3,4,5) - Uhh unstacked triplet is a bit hard, this one is actually fit more for insane try stacking this
  01:10:660 (3,4,5) - ^
  Take Azure's suggestion

• EX
  00:42:413 (9) - I don't think this note really necessary, nothing here
  nope
  it fit main melody. After spinner become a little hard, but for Insane-diff it's no problem, I think
  01:00:053 (9) - better if you NC at this point to avoid long combos on the stream and looked better too
  That's so fine!!!
  it looks so good, thanks~

yeah actually you've fixed your biggest issue of diffs on your remap. It was your difficulty name, It is the right decision to change it
all good already, just make the sliders more cleaner and it should be fine~
Good Luck

Thank you for modding!
I wrote my reply by use of red

Azure wrote:

come back as your PM

[General]
well... I think your rythm is OK,so try to make more variations on the arrangement
OK, I'll try!

[Normal]

1. CS-1, AR-1 All Change

[Hard]

1. 00:11:168 (3) ctrl+G OK
2. 00:16:702 (1) ^ ^
3. 00:28:463 (2) move to x52, y228 avoiding stack is OK, but let me think the place
4. 01:08:816 (3,4,5) change to this http://puu.sh/3F17E.jpg will be better, because this is in a Hard diff
5. 01:10:660 (3,4,5) ^
   OK, fix

[Ex]

1. 00:03:789 (2,3) change slider's order on here
   KEEP
   I want to keep their symmetrical formation
2. 00:14:858 NC fix
3. 00:16:587 (9,1) DS fix
4. 00:26:848 (4,5,6) closer will be better here fix

try to find more mods and good luck !

Thank you for re-modding
it is a great help to me!
I wrote my reply by use of red

Hi From M4M
Easy:
how about ar4?
00:36:442 (2) - it's diffcult set the note on blue line for this diff.try to combine with 00:36:788 (3) - to slide
01:00:539 (3,4) - don't stack them
01:00:539 (3,4,1,2,3) - I think they are the same color and 01:02:844 (4,5,6) - are another color
Hard:
00:22:145 (4,5) - chang it to slider?
00:31:484 (1) - add finish
01:00:539 (4) - move to 388,216?
EX:
00:16:726 (1) - try to close with the 00:16:265 (2,3,4,5) -
00:38:748 (10) - I think this note can be deleted
00:43:821 (1) - the note isn't on 00:43:936 so try to move more far
01:11:146 (5) - don't stack with 01:10:914 (4) -

That's all
Good Luck

sjoy wrote:

Hi From M4M
Easy:
how about ar4? OK, change
00:36:442 (2) - it's diffcult set the note on blue line for this diff.try to combine with 00:36:788 (3) - to slide fix
01:00:539 (3,4) - don't stack them fix
01:00:539 (3,4,1,2,3) - I think they are the same color and 01:02:844 (4,5,6) - are another color fix
Hard:
00:22:145 (4,5) - chang it to slider? fix
00:31:484 (1) - add finish fix
01:00:539 (4) - move to 388,216? avoid stack by moving 01:00:308 (3) -
EX:
00:16:726 (1) - try to close with the 00:16:265 (2,3,4,5) - fix
00:38:748 (10) - I think this note can be deleted no, sorry
00:43:821 (1) - the note isn't on 00:43:936 so try to move more far
nope
No problem according to DS
01:11:146 (5) - don't stack with 01:10:914 (4) -
fix
That was hard to see

That's all
Good Luck

Thank you for M4M request
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Hello!

From M4M.


Good Luck

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

1. uh, "maybe" the rankable is easy-normal-hard-insane.. consecutive difficult. where is normal?...
   .............You know understand? (poor english;)
   No problem, I think
   According to Ranking Criteria, 4 kinds of mapset don't necessarily need for ranked

Easy

1. 00:41:630 (4,5) - maybe........ it's too hard for beginner?.. i don't know. two choice. or skip
   1.move slider, ex) 01:02:844 (1,2)
   2.remove slider, 00:41:630 00:42:091 add note.
   OK, I choose suggestion-1.
2. 01:25:904 (4) - move y-68. fix

Hard

1. 00:22:145 (4) - remove. and 00:22:260 - add note. fix
2. 01:00:769 - add note. no, sorry
3. 01:13:913 (4,5) - overlap. remap in order to avoid overlap
4. 01:15:758 ~ 01:22:675 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/892017 how about you? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/98234 << It looks like your map. found it.
   KEEP
   I think it is better to be notthng in this part

Ex

1. 00:14:420 (4) -maybe move (256,292)? it's too far fix
2. nice stream. it's pretty. thanks~
3. 01:15:758 ~ 01:22:675 - i said. ↑KEEP

Good Luck

Thank you for modding.
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Ello! xD Random mod:


These are just small suggestions. Nice story board, looking forward to seeing this map ranked ~!
Hope this helps!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello! xD Random mod:

[Easy]
01:07:456 (4,5,1) - I can picture the slider at 01:04:689 (1) being used here as well, jsut to give a small relief for new players. Having a lot of hit circles in a row can be pressuring imo. Still looks good as it is though.
KEEP
I understand your suggestion. but at this part, the slider like 01:07:456 (4,5,1) - isn't suitable, I think

[Hard]
00:12:575 - NC fix
00:18:571 - ^ fix
00:22:260 - ^ fix
00:41:630 - ^ nope

[Insane]
00:29:639 - NC fix
00:41:630 - ^ nope
01:30:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to arrange these hit circles more neatly Remap!

These are just small suggestions. Nice story board, looking forward to seeing this map ranked ~! Thanks~
Hope this helps!

Thank you for modding!
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Hi m4m \o/

General

Ex

Hard

Easy

That's! Sorry for the short mod... There's really nothing much I say to help you improve, it's already such a nice mapset . The hitsounds are just personal preference, so consider them only if you want to. Thanks again for you mod. Good luck!

Form queue

[Ex]
00:38:402 (9,10,1) - http://puu.sh/43Y9O.jpg
00:42:322 (8,9,1) - http://puu.sh/43YbI.jpg

[Hard]
00:29:409 (1) - start at 00:29:639 - & end at 00:31:023 -

[Easy]
Nice but i think this can be a Normal

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hi m4m \o/

General

1. In my opinion, utilising a more percussion clap hitsound during kiai time would suit very nicely. OK, I'll consider

Ex

1. 00:16:265 (2,3,4,5,1) - This would look and play better if it was a nicer curve. Maybe bring (5) down a little. fix
2. 00:18:571 (2) - Add a whistle or a clap from the drum sample set here. add whistle
3. 00:23:067 - Add note? You're right! I forgot...
4. 00:30:562 (6) - Also add a clap on this with the finish to accentuate this note even more. A large bass custom hitsound would be nice. nope
5. 01:30:516 (5) - Add clap. nope

Hard

1. Same comments about hitsounds
2. 00:34:021 - Add note. nope
3. 00:51:084 - ^ fix

Easy

1. Nice

That's! Sorry for the short mod... There's really nothing much I say to help you improve, it's already such a nice mapset . The hitsounds are just personal preference, so consider them only if you want to. Thanks again for you mod. Good luck!
Thanks for M4M! it's a great help to me!

Thank you for modding!
I wrote my reply by use of red

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

Form queue

[Ex]
00:38:402 (9,10,1) - http://puu.sh/43Y9O.jpg fix
00:42:322 (8,9,1) - http://puu.sh/43YbI.jpg kEEP

[Hard]
00:29:409 (1) - start at 00:29:639 - & end at 00:31:023 - fix

[Easy]
Nice but i think this can be a Normal rename~

Thank you for modding!
I wrote my reply by use of red

Hi,this is a new modder to try to give some suggestions. If yo have some commands with my mods plz point it out so that I can also learn from it as well ._.

let's start (｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ

Ex
00:23:067 (7,8) - I prefer a short slide for this but not teo single notes
00:26:065 (2) - this note I think should be a little ouside from the tail of slide, which is like this
00:30:100 (3,4,5,6) - I think this should be move downward a littltebit like
00:34:943 (8,9) - I think the normal way is to move this two on the head of 00:35:173 (1) - ,but if this is ur style just ignore
00:59:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ...i am not quite sure this should be in same color,cuz 01:00:077 (1,2) - is a jump and it should be in a new combo
01:30:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - strange shape, why not make it a pentagon?

hard
00:27:795 (1,2,3) - just a suggestio ,change to this
no more problem ;w; just good

normal
01:07:456 (4,5) - how about change to a slide like 01:06:534 (3) -
this one is also perfect

very soft song, and kawai skin (｡･ω･｡)

Mei wrote:

Hi,this is a new modder to try to give some suggestions. If yo have some commands with my mods plz point it out so that I can also learn from it as well ._.

let's start (｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ

Ex
00:23:067 (7,8) - I prefer a short slide for this but not teo single notes
fix
restore to single note
00:26:065 (2) - this note I think should be a little ouside from the tail of slide, which is like this no sorry

example

00:30:100 (3,4,5,6) - I think this should be move downward a littltebit like fix! it looks good~

eample

00:34:943 (8,9) - I think the normal way is to move this two on the head of 00:35:173 (1) - ,but if this is ur style just ignore
I agree
move 00:35:173 (1) -
00:59:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ...i am not quite sure this should be in same color,cuz 01:00:077 (1,2) - is a jump and it should be in a new combo
KEEP
is this mean remove NC of 01:00:077 (1) - ? I want to prioritize viewability
01:30:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - strange shape, why not make it a pentagon?
KEEP
I want to distinguish 01:30:054 (1,2,3,4) - from 01:30:516 (5) -

hard
00:27:795 (1,2,3) - just a suggestio ,change to this fix! it looks good~

example

no more problem ;w; just good

normal
01:07:456 (4,5) - how about change to a slide like 01:06:534 (3) -
Nice Idea!
it's more enjoyable~
this one is also perfect

very soft song, and kawai skin (｡･ω･｡) thanks!

Thank you for M4M!
red is my reply

Hi~ M4M req from my queue
Sorry for terrible late, some accidents were happened IRL

[General]

1. BPM:130.000
2. Offset:96

最初の方が少し合わないように感じると思いますが、それはメロディーの音色が立ち上がりの遅いものであるためだと思います。

[Normal]

1. 00:36:096 (2) - 少し右に移動？ 独自スキンを使っていることもあり、00:34:251 (4) - の判定と重なって見づらいので。
2. 00:38:863 (1) - 末尾にadd whistle? ずっとUpbeatにwhistleが続いているので。2連続で使う分には00:35:173 (1,2) - で行っているので問題ないと思います。
3. 01:23:137 (1,2,3,4) - 今までの流れからすると少し遠すぎる気が、1.20xの方が無難じゃないかなと。
4. 01:26:826 (1) - 01:30:516 - まで延ばした方が？　Upbeatで終わってしまうことに違和感、Exで行っているようにDownbeatで終わらせた方が解決感があると思います。

[Hard]

1. 00:37:018 (5) - (192,284)に移動して、00:36:788 (4) - にblanketを作って見た方がキレイ？
2. 00:41:630 (6,7) - 真上に置くよりは、少しズラしてあげた方が好きです。こういう風に正三角形を作ってみるとかどうでしょう。
   
   image

   
3. 00:46:703 (4) - 真下に向かうスライダーだと00:47:164 (5) - と被るので、このくらいの角度にしてみるとか？
   
   image

   
4. 00:48:548 (2) - 下に置かずに上に置いた方が00:49:009 (3) - への流れが自然になる気がしました。（画像は一例）
   
   image

   
5. 01:03:306 (3) - こういう角度の方が、01:03:767 (4) - に向かいやすいかなぁと。
   
   image

   
6. 01:13:913 (4) - add NC?
7. 01:30:516 - add note. 01:30:054 (8) - を1/1スライダーにしても良いと思います。理由はNormalと同じ。

[Ex]

1. 00:16:265 (2,3,4,5,1) - このカーブが少しガタついて見えるので、もう少し整えられるかなと。もしくは反抗する流れを作ってみるのも一手だと思います。
   
   image

   
2. 01:12:501 (3) - add whistle
3. 01:12:732 (4) - remove whistle

以上です、Good luck~

Cah-m wrote:

Hi~ M4M req from my queue
Sorry for terrible late, some accidents were happened IRL

[General]

1. BPM:130.000
2. Offset:96

最初の方が少し合わないように感じると思いますが、それはメロディーの音色が立ち上がりの遅いものであるためだと思います。
fix
最初に違和感ありますが慣れるとこんなものなのかも

[Normal]

1. 00:36:096 (2) - 少し右に移動？ 独自スキンを使っていることもあり、00:34:251 (4) - の判定と重なって見づらいので。
   OK
   特に300gが完全にかぶりますね。スキンのアイコンも大きすぎるかもしれませんね
2. 00:38:863 (1) - 末尾にadd whistle? ずっとUpbeatにwhistleが続いているので。2連続で使う分には00:35:173 (1,2) - で行っているので問題ないと思います。
   It's my mistake
3. 01:23:137 (1,2,3,4) - 今までの流れからすると少し遠すぎる気が、1.20xの方が無難じゃないかなと。
   no, sorry
   他のdiffもそうですが最後のpartはDS広げています。低難易度ではあんまりよくないことですけど、1/1rhythmなので難しくはないんじゃないかと
4. 01:26:826 (1) - 01:30:516 - まで延ばした方が？　Upbeatで終わってしまうことに違和感、Exで行っているようにDownbeatで終わらせた方が解決感があると思います。fix

[Hard]

1. 00:37:018 (5) - (192,284)に移動して、00:36:788 (4) - にblanketを作って見た方がキレイ？fix
2. 00:41:630 (6,7) - 真上に置くよりは、少しズラしてあげた方が好きです。こういう風に正三角形を作ってみるとかどうでしょう。That's fine!
   
   image

   
3. 00:46:703 (4) - 真下に向かうスライダーだと00:47:164 (5) - と被るので、このくらいの角度にしてみるとか？
   fix
   次のスライダーのRに対し垂直になる角度にしてみました～
   
   image

   
4. 00:48:548 (2) - 下に置かずに上に置いた方が00:49:009 (3) - への流れが自然になる気がしました。（画像は一例）　fix
   
   image

   
5. 01:03:306 (3) - こういう角度の方が、01:03:767 (4) - に向かいやすいかなぁと。
   fix　
   looks もgood！
   
   image

   
6. 01:13:913 (4) - add NC?　fix
7. 01:30:516 - add note. 01:30:054 (8) - を1/1スライダーにしても良いと思います。理由はNormalと同じ。
   OK
   1/1sliderいれました

[Ex]

1. 00:16:265 (2,3,4,5,1) - このカーブが少しガタついて見えるので、もう少し整えられるかなと。もしくは反抗する流れを作ってみるのも一手だと思います。
   NIceIdea~
   逆カーブにしました。playしてもこっちの方が面白いので
   
   image

   
2. 01:12:501 (3) - add whistle　I mistake...
3. 01:12:732 (4) - remove whistle ^

以上です、Good luck~

Thank you for M4M
red: my reply
Timing check助かりました～
直す手間がかなりあるので違和感はあったのですが無視してました
が、せっかく指摘もらったので頑張って直しますね

Hi~
M4M request ;w;

日本語が下手ですが、これは勉強のために。。。大丈夫かな。。。

approachcircle.pngのサイズは、必ず128x128で

[Ex]
この譜面が、Exより、Lunaticという名前にリネームしたほうがいいと思います
普通難度順はeasy->Normal->Hard->Lunatic->Extraの順番だから
それに、Extraくらい難しいではないと思います

00:17:172 (2) - 少し下に移動して（132, 97）

00:46:249 (3) - kiaiがスタート時、NCが必要です（ranking criteriaによって）

01:00:096 (1) - 少し右へ（370，173）

00:54:211 (3,4) - (3)と(4)を交換すると、流れが良くなると思います

[Hard]
00:18:557 (1,2) - (1)と(2)を交換するのほうがいいかもｗ　一番長い白線のそばのふたつ白線はとても重要だと思います
00:46:249 (3) - NC - Exと同じ
00:59:172 (1,2,3,4) - ここのリズムはちょっと変
　　(2)は(192,312)に、remove（3）そして01:00:788 - add note どう？

[Normal]
00:46:249 (2) - NC

Sorry for the short mod ...orz I think this mapset is fine enough.. and whenever you are free, can you give a simple mod to this? Thank you in advance :3

The song is nice and I like the Ex diff xD

epocsodielaK wrote:

Hi~
M4M request ;w;

日本語が下手ですが、これは勉強のために。。。大丈夫かな。。。

approachcircle.pngのサイズは、必ず128x128で
Oh, it's a serious mistake. Fix it!

[Ex]
この譜面が、Exより、Lunaticという名前にリネームしたほうがいいと思います
普通難度順はeasy->Normal->Hard->Lunatic->Extraの順番だから
それに、Extraくらい難しいではないと思います
no, sorry
diff-nameのExは、"Extra"ではなく、"Exルーミア"からとっています。よってこのままで
（東方くわしいですね。fine~）

00:17:172 (2) - 少し下に移動して（132, 97）　fix

00:46:249 (3) - kiaiがスタート時、NCが必要です（ranking criteriaによって）
Really?
見つけられなかったのでどこに書いてあるか教えてくれるとうれしいです

01:00:096 (1) - 少し右へ（370，173）　fix

00:54:211 (3,4) - (3)と(4)を交換すると、流れが良くなると思います
Helpful suggetion
DSをそろえるため、交換するのは(2)と(3)にします

[Hard]
00:18:557 (1,2) - (1)と(2)を交換するのほうがいいかもｗ　一番長い白線のそばのふたつ白線はとても重要だと思います fix
00:46:249 (3) - NC - Exと同じ
00:59:172 (1,2,3,4) - ここのリズムはちょっと変
　　(2)は(192,312)に、remove（3）そして01:00:788 - add note どう？
Remap!

[Normal]
00:46:249 (2) - NC fix

Sorry for the short mod ...orz I think this mapset is fine enough.. and whenever you are free, can you give a simple mod to this? Thank you in advance :3

The song is nice and I like the Ex diff xD thanks~

Thank you for M4M!
Green: my reply
日本語お上手ですね
replyも一部日本語で書きました。意味のわからないところがあればPMくださいね

Sorry but actually i didn't find relative rules ;w;

I've just been told by other experienced modders 2 months ago,

maybe this rule is out of date /.\

I'm not sure

epocsodielaK wrote:

Sorry but actually i didn't find relative rules ;w;

I've just been told by other experienced modders 2 months ago,

maybe this rule is out of date /.\

I'm not sure

I see
I cotton to your studious attitude~

Hey there, M4M just as I promised. Website kept going down so it delayed me on finishing this earlier but lets see here:

[Normal]

1. 00:51:326 (2,3,4) - for some reason I can imagine a "few" people would get confused on this. Maybe it's just me but I didn't get confused on this part on the first run. Just saying, maybe that's why people say this can be a normal? I'll say keep it
2. Same for 01:08:403 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - maybe that's why they said it can be a normal cause of intensity of clicking. Keep it because I think it creates a nice point of climax in this kind of level.
   
   Can honestly say this difficulty is done and checked out very well. I can consider this as a Normal difficulty yes.
   Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Easy ~ Normal
   
   Results

   Did three tries:
   1st and 2nd:
   
   3rd( with mods (I'm bad with mods hahah)):
   

[Hard]

1. 00:41:634 (6,7) - A Suggestion (you can accept it or leave it as it is):
   
   
2. Doesn't seem to be a problem but just want to point out: move 00:46:249 (3) - to x:251 y:56. Reason that I say this is because the second point of that slider doesn't completely cover the 00:47:172 (5) - just by x: 1. Again, not really an issue I believe.
3. 01:03:326 (3) - Move this to x:127 y:142 ( You intended to make this part and the next part linear and distance snap of 1.4 or around it yes? If not then you can skip this and the box below.
   
   If you did intended to make that part linear

   1. 01:03:788 (4) - Shift + Alt downward
   2. 01:04:249 (1,2) - Shift + Alt to the right
   Pretty sure you won't agree with this but yeah (A Suggestion) :
4. 01:06:096 (1) - Remove NC
5. 01:06:557 (1) - Add NC
6. 01:08:634 (1) - Remove NC
7. 01:08:865 (2) - Add NC
8. 01:10:249 (1) - Remove NC
9. 01:10:711 (3) - Add NC
   
   Smooth gameplay indeed, some parts can be quite challenging I believe such as doing the triplet circle notes( as in the distance snap of those) and 00:52:711 (3,4,5) - but hey, it's a Hard difficulty and I shouldn't complain about that,but I'm actually not. Again, smooth gameplay!
   Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Hard
   Okay, since I tried out this beatmap once I woke up I probably was too drowsy to stay full focus on during gameplay sorry.
   
   Results

   Did two tries:
   1st:
   
   2nd(After fully analyzing the difficulty without mods):
   

Okay this is what I found so far, sorry if this isn't helpful or not enough but I hope it did help. As for Ex difficulty I'll come back to this thread again and mod it tomorrow carefully analyzing it and try to make it the best! hahah I'll try! Since the website was having crashes and troubles at the time I was doing this, it cut time for me to doing Ex difficulty today. Expect to see me posting it tomorrow around nighttime (Eastern Time) fully done.
❀ Good Luck~❀ ^ ^
You can ✉ me on osu if you have any comments or questions about this

Okay, back again to finish with my modding for the Ex difficulty, I can say that there weren't much mistakes that I've found. Though it was pretty tough for me to figure out the pace I had to move for the triplet circles and the streams due to the distance snap but that's just me, keep it for now, but lets see here:

[Ex]

1. 01:01:019 (1) - Remove NC
2. 01:01:941 (4,5,6,7,8) - Bit of re-positioning (Suggestion)
   

   184,112,61941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   232,80,62056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   288,68,62172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   344,80,62287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   388,112,62403,2,0,P|405:148|393:184,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   Before

   
   After

   
3. 01:04:249 (1) - Remove NC
4. 01:04:710 (2) - Add NC

Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Insane
Test Play
I've done reasonable amount of tries on this difficulty (5-6 tries?)
Either doing it single tapping, alternate tapping or both. Reason is because I wanted to see which is better. Here was my results:


Gosh I wanted to write more about this difficulty but I honestly don't see much mistakes in this difficulty. Can't complain about the triplets and the streams because they can be playable. Just me not being able to know the speed of it and it's a Insane difficulty yes. So overall I guess you can say these are just suggestions rather than minor mistakes. I hoped my mod helped and again wish you good luck on this!

M4M from your queue

My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/96436

[General]
Nicely mapped!
Just some suggestions

[Normal]
00:13:019 (2) - Make this blanket with the first
00:24:096 (1) - 斜めのsliderがストレートよりいいとおもう (my japanese is not good and lazy to type XD)
00:43:480 (2) - これも、たとえば

00:51:788 (3,4) - Too close, can make (4) a little down
01:15:788 - Break starts here
01:23:172 (1,2,3,4) - Make a shape, triangle or diamond is better

[Hard]
00:24:788 (2) - Stack perfectly, hold shift (or toggle Gird Snap) and move left by just a little
00:55:249 (4) - This too, try to stack perfectly if possible
01:13:249 (2) - ^
01:15:788 - Break starts here

[Insane]
00:10:711 (2) - Off grid and move to left for just a little
00:12:556 (4) - Off grid and move to right for just a little
00:13:942 (3) - ^ Move left a little
00:20:864 (2) - ^ Move up and left a little
00:55:480 (1) - Stack perfectly with 00:54:557 (5) -
00:59:403 (3) - Stack with tail of 00:58:711 (4) - ?
00:59:403 (3) - This and 00:59:865 (7) - is not on the same line, make it a regular diamond, ignore if you rotated it from a square
01:05:633 (6) - Stack with 01:06:672 (3) - ? you can keep, this is extra suggestion
01:15:788 - Break starts here

AllStar12 wrote:

Hey there, M4M just as I promised. Website kept going down so it delayed me on finishing this earlier but lets see here:

[Normal]

1. 00:51:326 (2,3,4) - for some reason I can imagine a "few" people would get confused on this. Maybe it's just me but I didn't get confused on this part on the first run. Just saying, maybe that's why people say this can be a normal? I'll say keep it
2. Same for 01:08:403 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - maybe that's why they said it can be a normal cause of intensity of clicking. Keep it because I think it creates a nice point of climax in this kind of level.
   
   Can honestly say this difficulty is done and checked out very well. I can consider this as a Normal difficulty yes.
   You're right
   this diff is a litte difficult for beginner player by resoun of the kind of above your comment. so I changed the diff-name form "easy" to "normal"
   Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Easy ~ Normal
   
   Results

   Did three tries:
   1st and 2nd:
   
   3rd( with mods (I'm bad with mods hahah)):
   

[Hard]

1. 00:41:634 (6,7) - A Suggestion (you can accept it or leave it as it is):
   fix
   that's smoother cursor moving!
   
   
2. Doesn't seem to be a problem but just want to point out: move 00:46:249 (3) - to x:251 y:56. Reason that I say this is because the second point of that slider doesn't completely cover the 00:47:172 (5) - just by x: 1. Again, not really an issue I believe. fix
3. 01:03:326 (3) - Move this to x:127 y:142 ( You intended to make this part and the next part linear and distance snap of 1.4 or around it yes? If not then you can skip this and the box below.
   no sorry
   I intend to uniform DS
   
   If you did intended to make that part linear

   1. 01:03:788 (4) - Shift + Alt downward
   2. 01:04:249 (1,2) - Shift + Alt to the right
   Pretty sure you won't agree with this but yeah (A Suggestion) :
4. 01:06:096 (1) - Remove NC OK
5. 01:06:557 (1) - Add NC OK
6. 01:08:634 (1) - Remove NC no
7. 01:08:865 (2) - Add NC no
8. 01:10:249 (1) - Remove NC no
9. 01:10:711 (3) - Add NC no
   
   Smooth gameplay indeed, some parts can be quite challenging I believe such as doing the triplet circle notes( as in the distance snap of those) and 00:52:711 (3,4,5) - but hey, it's a Hard difficulty and I shouldn't complain about that,but I'm actually not. Again, smooth gameplay!
   Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Hard
   Okay, since I tried out this beatmap once I woke up I probably was too drowsy to stay full focus on during gameplay sorry.
   
   Results

   Did two tries:
   1st:
   
   2nd(After fully analyzing the difficulty without mods):
   

[Ex]

1. 01:01:019 (1) - Remove NC why?
2. 01:01:941 (4,5,6,7,8) - Bit of re-positioning (Suggestion) mmm... KEEP
   

   184,112,61941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   232,80,62056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   288,68,62172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   344,80,62287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   388,112,62403,2,0,P|405:148|393:184,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   Before

   
   After

   
3. 01:04:249 (1) - Remove NC fix
4. 01:04:710 (2) - Add NC fix

Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Insane
Test Play
I've done reasonable amount of tries on this difficulty (5-6 tries?)
Either doing it single tapping, alternate tapping or both. Reason is because I wanted to see which is better. Here was my results:

Results

You can tell which part I kept getting wrong on

Gosh I wanted to write more about this difficulty but I honestly don't see much mistakes in this difficulty. Can't complain about the triplets and the streams because they can be playable. Just me not being able to know the speed of it and it's a Insane difficulty yes. So overall I guess you can say these are just suggestions rather than minor mistakes. I hoped my mod helped and again wish you good luck on this!

Thank you for modding and test play!
red is my reply
the vocaloid skin you use is so cute

Rakuen wrote:

M4M from your queue

My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/96436

[General]
Nicely mapped!
Just some suggestions

[Normal]
00:13:019 (2) - Make this blanket with the first no
00:24:096 (1) - 斜めのsliderがストレートよりいいとおもう (my japanese is not good and lazy to type XD)
KEEP
ここはspaceが狭いので変えません
00:43:480 (2) - これも、たとえば　
fix
ここは気に入ったので変えました！

00:51:788 (3,4) - Too close, can make (4) a little down
no, sorry
I intend to uniform DS
01:15:788 - Break starts here fix
01:23:172 (1,2,3,4) - Make a shape, triangle or diamond is better
Change
I choose triangle

[Hard]
00:24:788 (2) - Stack perfectly, hold shift (or toggle Gird Snap) and move left by just a little fix
00:55:249 (4) - This too, try to stack perfectly if possible fix
01:13:249 (2) - ^ fix
01:15:788 - Break starts here fix

[Insane]
00:10:711 (2) - Off grid and move to left for just a little All fix your stack suggestion!
00:12:556 (4) - Off grid and move to right for just a little
00:13:942 (3) - ^ Move left a little
00:20:864 (2) - ^ Move up and left a little
00:55:480 (1) - Stack perfectly with 00:54:557 (5) -
00:59:403 (3) - Stack with tail of 00:58:711 (4) - ?
00:59:403 (3) - This and 00:59:865 (7) - is not on the same line, make it a regular diamond, ignore if you rotated it from a square
Let me think...
I made this pattern by use of hold shift
01:05:633 (6) - Stack with 01:06:672 (3) - ? you can keep, this is extra suggestion
KEEP
There is little point in it, imo
01:15:788 - Break starts here fix

Thank you for M4M!
red is my reply

Hi~ from m4m
ありがとう～XD

[General]
説明文?に「Artist:Sensitive Heart」「Album:Scarlet Destiny」も入れるといいかも？

[Insane]
CS-1すれば万人受けするとは思いますが、今のままのほうがらしい難しさがあって好きです:D
00:20:403 (1) - add finish
00:27:789 (1) - ^
00:27:789 (1) - ^
00:28:481 (3)から00:28:711 (4)が少し入りにくいかなと感じたのでこんなのとか
00:34:249 (6) - Ctrl＋Gしてこんなのとか
00:36:326 (4,5) - 前後の(3)(5)(6)が均等に並ぶこんな感じもいいかもです
00:37:943 (8) - ここはスタックさせないで離したほうがもっと面白いかもです。こんな感じとか？
00:45:788 (1)or00:46:020 (2)にadd whistle　どちらも入れると変だけどどっちかに入れるといい感じ？試してみて気に入ったほうにどうぞ！
00:53:635 (1) - add finish
00:59:403 (3) - add whistle?
00:59:864 (7) - ^
Whistle2つは試してみて気に入ったらどうぞ～
01:00:558 (3) - finish削除　始端にadd whistle
01:01:019 (1) - add finish
01:01:480 (3) - ここのスライダーはリズムがあわないかなと思うのでこのようにしたらどうでしょうか
01:05:171 (3,4) - Ctrl＋G
01:08:402 (1) - add finish
01:14:634 (4,5) - note2つでこういうのも面白いかもしれません（形が雑でごめんなさい）

[Hard]
finishはinsaneとほぼ同様です
00:25:942 (5) - スライダーでこんなのとか
00:28:711 (3) - Ctrl＋Jの形でスタックさせたほうがスムーズに入れるかも
01:01:019 (1) - 音楽の伸びてる所にスライダーをあわせてこんなとかどうですか
01:23:172 (1) からのところすごく好きです　XD
01:26:865 (1)と01:27:788 (3)を逆にしてもいいかもです

[Normal]
Distance spacingが1.2なのが少し気になりました。
最低難易度なのでできたら1.0のほうがいいと思います。
こちらもfinish音はinsane diffとほぼ同様です。
00:01:942 - 00:08:865　ここまでなにもないですがスライダーを入れるべきかと思います
00:36:096 (2) - 斜めじゃなく縦にまっすぐのがいいかも？
00:46:249 (1) - add finish

配置がとても勉強になりました！
音楽もskinも素敵でしたｗ
good luck!

Pandiar wrote:

Hi~ from m4m
ありがとう～XD

[General]
説明文?に「Artist:Sensitive Heart」「Album:Scarlet Destiny」も入れるといいかも？
KEEP
Tagsには入っているので
[Insane]
CS-1すれば万人受けするとは思いますが、今のままのほうがらしい難しさがあって好きです:D KEEP
00:20:403 (1) - add finish no
00:27:789 (1) - ^
00:27:789 (1) - ^
00:28:481 (3)から00:28:711 (4)が少し入りにくいかなと感じたのでこんなのとか
Remap
提案を参考にsliderを調整し、stackのやり方も一部変えました

SPOILER

00:34:249 (6) - Ctrl＋Gしてこんなのとか
fix
たたきやすくていい感じ

SPOILER

00:36:326 (4,5) - 前後の(3)(5)(6)が均等に並ぶこんな感じもいいかもです
fix
DSが変わるのでわかりにくいかと思ったのですが、むしろわかりやすくなったかも

SPOILER

00:37:943 (8) - ここはスタックさせないで離したほうがもっと面白いかもです。こんな感じとか？
Remap
rhythmが良いのでこっちに変更。配置はさらにいじりました

SPOILER

00:45:788 (1)or00:46:020 (2)にadd whistle　どちらも入れると変だけどどっちかに入れるといい感じ？試してみて気に入ったほうにどうぞ！
fix
(1)にしました～
00:53:635 (1) - add finish fix
00:59:403 (3) - add whistle?
00:59:864 (7) - ^
Whistle2つは試してみて気に入ったらどうぞ～ prefer it!
01:00:558 (3) - finish削除　始端にadd whistle fix
01:01:019 (1) - add finish fix
01:01:480 (3) - ここのスライダーはリズムがあわないかなと思うのでこのようにしたらどうでしょうか KEEP

SPOILER

01:05:171 (3,4) - Ctrl＋G KEEP
DSがだんだん広がってちょっとたたきにくいので
01:08:402 (1) - add finish fix
01:14:634 (4,5) - note2つでこういうのも面白いかもしれません（形が雑でごめんなさい） KEEP

SPOILER

[Hard]
finishはinsaneとほぼ同様です
00:25:942 (5) - スライダーでこんなのとか
Remap
note×2はsliderに変えました。DSをそろえるために配置は少し変えました

SPOILER

00:28:711 (3) - Ctrl＋Jの形でスタックさせたほうがスムーズに入れるかも fix
01:01:019 (1) - 音楽の伸びてる所にスライダーをあわせてこんなとかどうですか fix

SPOILER

01:23:172 (1) からのところすごく好きです　XD XD
01:26:865 (1)と01:27:788 (3)を逆にしてもいいかもです
mmm... KEEP
迷ったのですが左回りを維持した方がよさそうなのでこのままで

[Normal]
Distance spacingが1.2なのが少し気になりました。
最低難易度なのでできたら1.0のほうがいいと思います。
KEEP
Normalとして扱うつもりなのでこのままで
こちらもfinish音はinsane diffとほぼ同様です。
00:01:942 - 00:08:865　ここまでなにもないですがスライダーを入れるべきかと思います Let me think...
00:36:096 (2) - 斜めじゃなく縦にまっすぐのがいいかも？ fix
00:46:249 (1) - add finish

配置がとても勉強になりました！
音楽もskinも素敵でしたｗ
good luck!

Thank you for modding!
Red: my reply
hit-sound苦手なのでとても助かりました！

Hello, M4M Req. I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.

[General]

None.

[Normal]

00:22:249 (3) -Hold to "shift" x:133 y:47 ?
00:59:172 (2) - Cancel the slider medium's whistle sound?


[Hard]
00:05:634 (2,3) - End + whistle?
00:10:711 (2,4) - +whistle
00:36:096 (2) - Can cover the 00:34:249 (5) - slider head.
00:48:096 (1) - Blanket the 00:47:865 (6) - ?
00:51:788 (1) - Can cover the 00:51:096 (2) .
00:53:634 (1) - DS 1.3x? Not 1.4x?
00:54:096 (2) - Blanket the 00:53:634 (1)
00:54:557 (3) - Blanket the 00:53:634 (1) 's slider end.
00:56:403 (3) - Try blanket 00:55:942 (2) 's slider end.
00:59:172 (1) - You can cover the 00:57:326 (1) slider head feel good.
01:03:788 (4) - You can cover the 01:01:942 (3) slider head feel good.

[Ex] HP+1?

00:10:711 (2,4) - whistle?
00:13:480 (2,4) - ^
00:17:634 (4) - You can copy 00:16:711 (1) 's slider to do symmetric.
00:30:095 (3,4,5) - DS suggest narrow?
01:05:171 (3,4) - ctrl+g?
01:05:633 (5) - cover the 01:06:672 (3) .


[Other]

1.If you have any mod questions, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Can you help me my map for a mod? Thanks!

smallboat wrote:

Hello, M4M Req. I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.

[General]

None.

[Normal]

00:22:249 (3) -Hold to "shift" x:133 y:47 ?
OK
00:59:172 (2) - Cancel the slider medium's whistle sound?
no, sorry
it's on purpose


[Hard]
00:05:634 (2,3) - End + whistle?
unnecessary
in this part(selected S:C2), normal-hitsound is same as whistle
00:10:711 (2,4) - +whistle
00:36:096 (2) - Can cover the 00:34:249 (5) - slider head.
KEEP
because of long time between them, it doesn't seem worthwhile to stack
00:48:096 (1) - Blanket the 00:47:865 (6) - ?
KEEP
I intend smoother cursor moving to the next slider
00:51:788 (1) - Can cover the 00:51:096 (2) .
KEEP
I intend to uniform 00:51:788 (1,2,3) - to the straight slider (45 degree)
00:53:634 (1) - DS 1.3x? Not 1.4x? I mistaked 1.4x is correct
00:54:096 (2) - Blanket the 00:53:634 (1) fix
00:54:557 (3) - Blanket the 00:53:634 (1) 's slider end. fix
00:56:403 (3) - Try blanket 00:55:942 (2) 's slider end. no. previously, blanket 00:57:326 (1) -
00:59:172 (1) - You can cover the 00:57:326 (1) slider head feel good. fix
01:03:788 (4) - You can cover the 01:01:942 (3) slider head feel good. no

[Ex] HP+1? KEEP

00:10:711 (2,4) - whistle?
00:13:480 (2,4) - ^
00:17:634 (4) - You can copy 00:16:711 (1) 's slider to do symmetric.
no
slider's length is defferent
00:30:095 (3,4,5) - DS suggest narrow? Good suggetion!
01:05:171 (3,4) - ctrl+g? no. it is smoother cursor moving, imo
01:05:633 (5) - cover the 01:06:672 (3) . no


[Other]

1.If you have any mod questions, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Can you help me my map for a mod? Thanks!

Thank you for modding!
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Hi, from M4M!

NORMAL

00:36:096 (2) - Rotate right 45 degrees

00:46:249 (1) - No need to NC

00:51:788 (3,4,5,6) - This square pattern looks a little confusing when its too close to 00:51:326 (2) -

Consider moving the square a few units lower

01:10:249 (1) - Add a finish hitsound


HARD

00:40:480 (4,5) - Bettter if these notes were stacked above the the tail end of 00:38:865 (1) -

00:47:865 (6) - I wouldnt suggest stacking this, maybe move to X:428 Y:208?

Pattern is really good for this one so not many mods needed

Ex

00:31:019 - Add a note here to maintain rhythm flow

00:38:865 (1) - Move to X:272 Y:136, not so good if stack with 00:38:750 (11) -

00:42:557 (10) - Add this note here, and slider start at 00:42:672

01:05:171 (3,4) - Swap locations with each other? So 3 on the left, 4 on the right

01:06:557 (1) - NC this to show new pattern

Pretty good mapping skills in general! Good luck, and I hope I helped!

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Hi, from M4M!

NORMAL

00:36:096 (2) - Rotate right 45 degrees OK

00:46:249 (1) - No need to NC KEEP

00:51:788 (3,4,5,6) - This square pattern looks a little confusing when its too close to 00:51:326 (2) -
Consider moving the square a few units lower
Remap
rotate 00:51:326 (2) - 90-degree

01:10:249 (1) - Add a finish hitsound That's fine! good sense~


HARD

00:40:480 (4,5) - Bettter if these notes were stacked above the the tail end of 00:38:865 (1) - fix

00:47:865 (6) - I wouldnt suggest stacking this, maybe move to X:428 Y:208?
I agree
and remap in the way of not stack
Pattern is really good for this one so not many mods needed XD

Ex

00:31:019 - Add a note here to maintain rhythm flow
KEEP
I intend to add a little rest
00:38:865 (1) - Move to X:272 Y:136, not so good if stack with 00:38:750 (11) -
OK
but DS makes a little small
00:42:557 (10) - Add this note here, and slider start at 00:42:672 no, sorry

01:05:171 (3,4) - Swap locations with each other? So 3 on the left, 4 on the right
OK, fix
several modders indicated the same
01:06:557 (1) - NC this to show new pattern fix

Pretty good mapping skills in general! Good luck, and I hope I helped!

Thank you for modding!
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M4M

[Ex]
I think a higher slider velocity would fit better the song, it's what I feel. I guess is late for that, but you could keep in mind for next time.
00:13:019 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest you to follow the music better in this combo. Like this http://puu.sh/4OBgL.jpg
00:18:903 (4) - this would sound better if you shorten and it by 1/4, starting it at 00:19:019 - and adding a single note at 00:18:903 -
00:26:289 (3) - same
00:36:326 (4) - I think would be nicer if you remove this note, sounds better to me.
00:42:557 - make a triplet adding a note here, and move the spinner 1/4 beat later (the spinner's start doesn't have sounds, so it feels like is missing something there)
01:01:480 (3) - shorten by 1/4 and add a reverse, sounds good
01:03:327 (3) - same, actually these combo doesn't follow the music very well
01:30:556 (1) - I don't see the point of that change in spacing, nothing in the music is calling for it

[Hard]
00:51:096 (2) - remove this note, if you do fix the spacing
there are some parts that I would of follow the music more, but I guess is fine

Good luck!~

Lissette wrote:

M4M

[Ex]
I think a higher slider velocity would fit better the song, it's what I feel. I guess is late for that, but you could keep in mind for next time. Let me think...
00:13:019 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest you to follow the music better in this combo. Like this http://puu.sh/4OBgL.jpg
OK
additional to your suggetion, add a note at 00:14:403
00:18:903 (4) - this would sound better if you shorten and it by 1/4, starting it at 00:19:019 - and adding a single note at 00:18:903 - fix
00:26:289 (3) - same
KEEP
Considering following pattern, I want not to change
00:36:326 (4) - I think would be nicer if you remove this note, sounds better to me. fix and make DS larger
00:42:557 - make a triplet adding a note here, and move the spinner 1/4 beat later (the spinner's start doesn't have sounds, so it feels like is missing something there)
fix
I got the same indicaton at the latest modding
01:01:480 (3) - shorten by 1/4 and add a reverse, sounds good KEEP
01:03:327 (3) - same, actually these combo doesn't follow the music very well KEEP
01:30:556 (1) - I don't see the point of that change in spacing, nothing in the music is calling for it
Remap
change for regular pentagon

[Hard]
00:51:096 (2) - remove this note, if you do fix the spacing fix
there are some parts that I would of follow the music more, but I guess is fine

Good luck!~

Thank you for modding!
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Random mod (いつもmodしてもらっているので…）
[General]
fine.
[Normal]
Placement
00:55:480(3,4,5) 外から大回りさせるように配置したほうが流れが自然だと思います
Rhythm
00:01:942~ ここが空白なんですが、やはりちゃんと作った方がいいです。古い譜面だとよくあるんですが、今それやると手抜きに見られることがあります…
00:09:326(1) 最低難易度なのでBPMが変わるということでなければ、基本スライダーの速度は一定にするべきです。
Hit Sonud
00:44:403(3) 始点にfinish追加？Exにはついていたので
[Hard]
Placement
00:24:788(2) 次の(4)はスタックさせていないのに、ここだけスタックさせるのもどうかなと思うので離してみては？　e.g.)
00:46:249(3) KIAI始点なのでNC
[Ex]
Placement
00:10:711(2,4) ここのスタックは流れを止める漢字がしてやや窮屈だと思います、前のパート同様に離して配置したいです　e.g.)
00:46:249(3) KIAIの始点なのでNC
01:06:096(1) ここだけフっと出てきたようにNCがあるのも何か微妙なので消してみては
Rhythm
00:19:942(8) ここは単発よりも1/2スライダーで、00:20:172のドラム音をフォローしてみては？単発で止まってしまうのもやや流れが悪いと思いました
00:25:711(1) ここはスライダーよりも単発の方が曲にあっているように思います、00:25:711 00:25:942 それぞれの音がはっきり聞こえ、かつ手前の赤線から長い白線にかかるスライダーはあまり見ません。
01:01:480(3) 単発3つに置き換えたほうが曲をフォローしています、前の部分でもそうなっていたので。逆に後ろの(4)~(8)ストリームはややovermapな感があるので削除してみては？

Good Luck!

kajiyatta wrote:

Random mod (いつもmodしてもらっているので…） thank you! お役に立ててるとよいのですが・・・
[General]
fine.
[Normal]
Placement
00:55:480(3,4,5) 外から大回りさせるように配置したほうが流れが自然だと思います No: ５へのつながりが不自然なので

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:01:942~ ここが空白なんですが、やはりちゃんと作った方がいいです。古い譜面だとよくあるんですが、今それやると手抜きに見られることがあります…
Let me think...
noteを増やすと不自然ですし、簡単な配置だと非常にboringなのでこのままに
00:09:326(1) 最低難易度なのでBPMが変わるということでなければ、基本スライダーの速度は一定にするべきです。
KEEP
SVを戻すとsliderが長すぎてえらいことになるためこのままに
Hit Sonud
00:44:403(3) 始点にfinish追加？Exにはついていたので fix
[Hard]
Placement
00:24:788(2) 次の(4)はスタックさせていないのに、ここだけスタックさせるのもどうかなと思うので離してみては？　e.g.) fix

SPOILER

00:46:249(3) KIAI始点なのでNC OK
[Ex]
Placement
00:10:711(2,4) ここのスタックは流れを止める漢字がしてやや窮屈だと思います、前のパート同様に離して配置したいです　e.g.) fix

SPOILER

00:46:249(3) KIAIの始点なのでNC OK
01:06:096(1) ここだけフっと出てきたようにNCがあるのも何か微妙なので消してみては fix
Rhythm
00:19:942(8) ここは単発よりも1/2スライダーで、00:20:172のドラム音をフォローしてみては？単発で止まってしまうのもやや流れが悪いと思いました fix

SPOILER

00:25:711(1) ここはスライダーよりも単発の方が曲にあっているように思います、00:25:711 00:25:942 それぞれの音がはっきり聞こえ、かつ手前の赤線から長い白線にかかるスライダーはあまり見ません。 fix
01:01:480(3) 単発3つに置き換えたほうが曲をフォローしています、前の部分でもそうなっていたので。逆に後ろの(4)~(8)ストリームはややovermapな感があるので削除してみては？
mmm..., KEEP
同じ配置ばかりだと飽きるのでこのままに。同じことを指摘されたときは変えます

Good Luck!

Thank you for modding!
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Hello! From your queue!


Nothing much to say, your mapset is well made!
Good luck for ranking!

HI~ RandomEffect

Pagno wrote:

Hello! From your queue!

[General]
It would be cool if you added a kiai time at the last note of each difficulty ( 01:30:557 ), just for an instant!
Nice Idea! : I'll try it

[Normal]
00:41:634 (4,5) - In my opinion, things like these are quite hard for a normal, consider replacing them with two hitcircles instead
OK: but I chose Natsu's suggetion
00:51:326 (2) - Something like this? fine! fix~



01:00:557 (1,2) - Maybe put a single ½ slider instead like all the next ones
Reconsider
I delteted 01:00:788 (2) - in order to be easier
[Hard]
AR7 maybe? OK

00:25:942 (5,1) - In my opinion, it would be 'more playable' if you made it like this: KEEP


00:32:403 (2) - Add reverse arrow and fix
00:33:096 (3) - delete this fix

00:38:865 (1,2) - The distance between those two makes it hard understand the rythm, consider fixing it KEEP

01:08:865 (3,4,5) - I am unsure about those, in my opinion a hard should not have triplets at all, especially if not stacked, maybe place a reverse slider instead like the previous ones KEEP: for hard-diff, it can be allowed, imo
01:10:711 (3,4,5) - ^

[Ex]
Slider Tick Rate 2? mmm.. KEEP

00:21:326 (4,5) - I think that it would be more playable if you put a hitcircle even on the red tick between those two notes
OK: move "5" on the red line
00:42:557 (1) - Place this nearer the other two fix

Nothing much to say, your mapset is well made!
Good luck for ranking!

Thank you for modding!
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Natsu wrote:

HI~ RandomEffect

General:

1. Im not sure but aimod say this:
   
   
   Skin Dimensions

   Skin Dimensions comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 650x650).
   hit0.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 250x250).
   hit50.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 250x250).
   hit100.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 250x250).
   hit100k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 312x312).
   hit300.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 312x312).
   hit300k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 250x250).
   hit300g.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 250x250).
2. Unused Image Files
   hit100g.png
   
   It's a great help to me!
   my god! I didn't notice at all since my AI-mod doesn't tell me that. that's a fatal mistake for ranked

EX:

1. 00:05:634 I know you want to keep the 1 solo colour but maybe you want to add NC there to follow your combo patterns betters feel free to ignore both are fines Considering, but KEEP
2. 00:01:942 - whistle or soft finish empathize very well with the music imo try and check if is good for you
3. 00:05:634 (3) - same as above
4. 00:09:326 ^
5. missing alot of whistles in this finish maybe you can add some of them cuz they realy sound cool
   fix: add whistle in common whth ohter diffs
6. 00:13:942 (4) - move this one a little more down to add more distance with previous (3) actually after the jump pattern 00:13:711 (3,4) - the spacing there feel bad for play imo OK
7. 00:14:865 part like this and others need hitsounds imo no
8. 00:16:250 (2,3,4,5) - this get overlaped by previous sider and dont play good and dont look good try another way on this fix
9. 00:18:788 mm why you ignore the music here? it will play better if you do a little stream there wil follow the music better imo
   no: I cannot hear the sound like stream
10. 00:22:019 what about to add circle and make a triplet it will play alot better (Also add NC ther following your stanzas pattern if not add it here 00:22:134)
    no: but adding NC is done
11. 00:24:097 (1,2) - really nazi stack this perfect. fix
12. 00:26:865 (5,6,7) - reduce the distance here to 1.0? actually is kinda hard to play D: OK
13. 00:30:442 need to be a circle here to represent the music better fix
14. 00:36:326 why ignoring the music here?
15. 00:36:557 same as above also this downbeat got a stronger sound than 00:36:442 (4) - (Is better to map the triplet imo
    OK: I make triplet
16. 00:35:172 (1) - missing finish here I guess you was using it on symilar parts no: not use finish on similar part?
17. 00:39:557 move this one a little down so it dont touch the previous slider? OK: I used Distance Snap, but your suggetion is better
18. 00:42:557 this need finish also dont you think this 1/4 jump is kinda hard to notice? is the first time you was using this kind of jumps in this diff is better for me if you use a properly distance fix: unifrom DS (finish is not added)
19. 00:46:712 (2,3,4) - same as 00:26:865 KEEP: I want to make the same triplet as after part
20. 00:48:558 (2,3,4) - ^
21. 00:54:557 (5,1) - yeah nazi like hittler lol but stack this perfect you mean not good? but I don't have other good idea
22. 00:58:249 (3,4) - try to move it them a little so it dont touch themselves
    no
    I intend to uniform DS

Hard:

1. 00:01:942 (1,2) - add whistle on the head of this sliders fix
2. 00:07:480 (3,1) - same as above fix: but "3" is no
3. 00:13:019 (1) - add finish or whistle sound really cool and less monotonous OK: add whistle
4. 00:16:249 (3) - you forget to add clap here? cuz it empathize with music really nice OK
5. 00:29:634 this really need a circle here to follow better the music and start the spinner in 00:29:749 KEEP
6. 00:49:942 (1) - this overlap with 00:51:788 (1) - try to move it a little to avoid it? fix
7. 00:56:403 (3,4) - turn off gridsnap and stack this perfect yeah im nazi owo ?? : is it not stack correctly?
8. 01:28:249 (4,5,6,7) - just feeling the 2.10 jumps are to much for a hard but maybe just me
   You have a point there
   I reduce DS a little

Normal:

1. 00:09:326 (1,2) - same here whistles in the head sound really cool Fine!
2. 00:31:480 (1,2) - Fix the distance here I mistaked...
3. 00:42:096 (5) - this two are kinda hard for a normal under 3.0 try thgis better: fix
   http://puu.sh/52EGz.jpg
4. 00:51:326 (2,3) - Is better If you do a 1/1 slider here Change: but I chose Pagno's suggetion
5. 01:00:557 (1,2,3,4) - make this rhythm simple plz actually is too hard for newbies take in consideration you dont have a easy diff here
   OK
   I delteted 01:00:788 (2) - in order to be easier
6. 01:08:403 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - maybe make this more easy imo Remap

GL RandomEffect hope this help you (will mod normal later need to do some

Thank you for modding!
Your skinning indication is great helpful
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your lucky won ~
hi from queue ~







I love this instrumen :3
Ganbatte ne ~

I'm winner? Lucky me!

Xinely wrote:

your lucky won ~
hi from queue ~

• 
  General
  gray combo colour seems not really fit with this BG, try colour like http://puu.sh/57tno.png ?
  
  i change only combo 1, here is the code if you want

  Combo1 : 216,1,28

  no, sorry
  combo1 and combo2 come to be so similar
  
  oh yeah, for SB. size of 1024x768 (in base_a1.jpg) is not allowed because rules from Ranking Criteria, you should make it become 640x480 or 800x600 for rankable
  It's a great help to me!
  wow, I didn't know it... I intened not to roughen the picture used SB. but the rule is so, I'll fix it (my other pending maps have the same problem )

• 
  Normal
  00:09:326 - SV changes is not recommended for Easy/Normal diff D: , i think you can use 1,00 SV with make slider art, it will be nice >w<
  OK, I fix it and remap
  there was the same indication in previous modding. so I've decided to change
  00:19:480 (4) - aaa you can make flow better here if you make a curve here. maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077616 for blanket too with (3)? fix
  00:45:788 (1) - no need to keep NC ~ OK
  00:52:711 (4) - i know it will be make break consistency hitsound but add whistle in this circle because flute sound? it's really fit ;-;
  Oh, nice suggetion~
  adding your suggetion, I also add whisle at 00:51:788
  01:00:557 (1,2) - swap NC because stanza? fix
  01:03:788 (3) - move to 148,124 for same flow with 01:01:942 (4) - , for spacing of 01:04:711 (1) - you can move it to 44,300 :3
  fix and remap a little
  I'll use the symmetric slider about 01:01:942 (3) -
  01:23:172 (1) - volume 5% is not fit in this time because piano sound not really low as 5%, try 15 or 20% instead
  incease a little
  01:23:172 (1,2,3,4) - why spacing increase here, it's unrankable D:
  OK, fix
  when no change of spacing, I felt boring. but certainly, it is not good for normal-diff

• 
  Hard
  00:17:403 (2) - i know you did a blanket here but flow will be better if you move it to 144,264 fix
  00:20:403 - aaa add whistle? sound similar like 00:13:019 - and you should add whistle for every downbeat (long white tick) except when finish on downbeat,it's fine because background music
  Let me think...
  according to your suggetion, whistle is too many, imo. but I'll add a few whistles at downbeat
  00:41:634 (6) - move to 164,116 for avoid bad overlapping. also for make nice jump, trust me >w< trust you!
  00:53:172 (5) - try this http://puu.sh/57uDM.jpg for better flow? Nice!
  01:04:249 (1,3) - swap NC for stanza KEEP
  01:06:096 (6) - move it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077673 for avoid almost overlap and for better visual fix and Remap
  01:23:172 (1) - same as Normal ~
  01:23:634 (2,3) - ctrl+G this, for low sound like this, keep consistency for each pattern better ~
  OK
  I change all for anti-clockwise pattern
  01:30:096 - increase volume 10% OK

• 
  Insane
  flute have 1/8 sound here, start from 00:07:365 - and have sound 00:07:422 - . also in 00:14:749 - and 00:14:807 - too and etc, i'm sure you know where where and where since a lot here lol . idk you will add circle/slider in that map but just saying here ~
  KEEP
  when add theis1/8 beat, I feel not good
  00:19:596 - add note for follow piano? no: I intend to follow drum sound
  00:31:019 - add circle with drum sound? lol fix
  00:53:056 (6) - i think you should keep this spacing, use 1,4 instead 1,5 fix
  01:00:558 (3,3) - try to avoid overlapping here fix
  01:03:327 (3,4,5) - try to make its little far, it will be neat for visual https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077731 fix
  01:12:557 (3,5) - NC because increase of spacings
  Fine!
  become easy-to-understand~
  01:23:172 - same as Normal ~

I love this instrumen :3
Ganbatte ne ~

Thank you for modding!
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sorry to ignore your first rule, Gomen ne...
my favorite fruit is apple!

NORMAL

00:33:326 (3) - x 92 y 248

Other than that, all good :3

HARD

All fine

INSANE

00:13:365 (2,3) - I would flip these two since it'll flow better

00:46:249 (1) - One grid square right. I'm serious

00:50:980 (2,3) - Found these unnecessary

00:55:480 (1) - Bad flow

01:23:172 (1) until 01:29:633 (7) - You just put the notes in random spots I'll guess. Try do something fancier like increase DS with each note

Sorry for bad mod. Good map though the song ain't my type. Stars anyways~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

yurunneram wrote:

NORMAL

00:33:326 (3) - x 92 y 248:arrow: fix: blanket correctly, OK!

Other than that, all good :3

HARD

All fine XD

INSANE

00:13:365 (2,3) - I would flip these two since it'll flow better
no
Considering DS, current condition is better, imo

00:46:249 (1) - One grid square right. I'm serious fix

00:50:980 (2,3) - Found these unnecessary no

00:55:480 (1) - Bad flow KEEP: I have no other idea

01:23:172 (1) until 01:29:633 (7) - You just put the notes in random spots I'll guess. Try do something fancier like increase DS with each note
Let me think...
if changing DS, it becomes very chaos map. I think again if I come up with any good idea
Sorry for bad mod. Good map though the song ain't my type. Stars anyways~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

hank you for modding and star!!
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(」・ω・) hi~

結構前のフォームでのmod requestありがとうございます。　遅くなりました。

[General]

●一つ気になったことがありまして、一定のリズムでwhistleを刻むよりも、clapで刻んだほうが音が撮りやすいと思います。この曲は、一様drumかわかりませんけど、一定のリズムで　”うんたんうんたん”　と鳴らしている部分が多いので、　whistleよりもclapでやったほうがいいと思います。00:16:711～01:12:096のあいだですかね。 強くおすすめします。　 hitsoundをお探しの場合はこちらを　http://puu.sh/5c2Eq.zip
こちらにclapの音たくさんあります。　あと、スライダーのあいだでは tickに音を付ける手段をとったほうがいいと思います。 slidersldeに音を付ける手段がありますがあまりおすすめはできません。　音が少し変になるからです。　最後に、whistleの音は　この曲の主な音に付けるのがいいと思います。　リズムを刻むように。
もちろん、clapの音っていうのは　手拍子（デフォルト）みたいなのですよ。
説明不足かもしれない

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[Normal]

●OD+1してもいいと思います。 低BPMで、そんな難しい連打とか要求してこない曲なので、ODが１くらい上がっても、そんな影響がないように思えます。
●00:01:942~00:09:326 - この部分を作成してもいいかと思います。　せっかく、音がありますので　ぜひ置くことをおすすめします。
●00:09:326 (1) - 終点にwhistleを追加。　いい感じだと思います。 そこまで騒がしくないので、つけてもいいと思います。
●00:11:172 (2) - 始点、終点にwhistleを追加。上と同じ理由ですが、もし上のwhistleを追加しなかった場合、始点だけでも付けるのもありかと思います。
●00:13:019 (3) - 終点にwhistleを追加。　^

[Hard]

●00:01:942 (1) - 終点にwhistleをついか。 いい感じだと思います。 そこまで騒がしくないので、つけてもいいと思います。
●00:07:480 (3) - 始点、終点にwhistleをついか。^
●00:10:711 (2) - whistleを追加。^
●00:12:557 (4) - ^ ^
●00:11:172 (3) - 始点にwhistleを追加。 ^
●00:14:865 (2) - ^ ^

[Ex]

●Normal, Hard といって、　Exというのは名前的にどうかなーって思います。　多分、ExってExtraのことだと思うんですが、　Extraは　Insaneの上にあるような感じがしますので、Hardの次の難易度がExっていうのはおかしいのではないかと思いました。 　
●00:03:788 (2) - 始点、終点にwhistleを追加。他diffと同じ理由。
●00:07:480 (4) - ^ ^
●00:10:711 (2) - whistleを追加。 ^
●00:11:172 (3) - 始点にwhistleを追加。 ^
●00:12:557 (4) - whistleを追加。 ^
●00:13:711 (3) - ^ ^
●00:13:942 (4) - 始点にwhistleと追加。 ^
●00:14:865 (1) - ^ ^
●00:44:403 (3) - Add new combo.　音が変わっているので。
●01:06:557 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 全部選択して、　x:145 y:113に移動。　そうすると、01:05:633 (5)が01:06:672 (2)と重なって綺麗になります。
画像 : http://puu.sh/5c3oC.jpg
●01:23:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 何の形をとって、おいているのかわかりますけど、　このままじゃあまり綺麗ではありません。
Ctrl+Shift+Dの機能を使って、綺麗に図形を置くことをおすすめします。


以上です。　同じことばっかで申し訳ない。 good luck~