Miya wrote:

There is nothing wrong with your timing. But some you need to fix some metadata.

Artist name should be : ChouCho
Tittle song should be : Sora to Kimi no Message
Source name should be : Suisei no Gargantia

And yeah, your bg seems like strecthed from 4:3 to become 16:9. It realy doesnt look good. Please change it. ><

1. Add "Heanday" to tags. It's one of your two GD mappers.

2. AIBat v3.1 wrote:

   Kiai
   Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
   
   - [Easy] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:497, ends on 01:03:112
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:04:266, ends on 01:19:266
   
   - [Heanday's Hard] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:497, ends on 01:03:343
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:04:266, ends on 01:19:266
   
   - [Insane] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:497, ends on 01:03:112
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:04:266, ends on 01:19:266
   
   - [yanlu's Normal] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:497, ends on 01:03:112
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:04:266, ends on 01:19:266

3. Audio Lead in is too short imo. Increase it to 1000ms in all diffs.

1. First play I had an unsually high unstable rate (350). tbh i only had it that high with a Insane DT. When i enter editor, i saw the problem, you're using too much red/blue ticks, try to use only withe ticks in easy diff.
2. 00:11:189 (3,4,5) - I understand that you want to follow vocals, but this part becames too tricky and hard begginers. Make the (3) slider to finish at
3. 00:11:650 - (the slider should be a 1/1 that way) drag the (4) note to 00:12:112 - and delete (5). Don't forget to fix spacing here.
4. 00:23:650 (1,3) - Both sliders should end in withe ticks, not in the blue ticks. Fix this.
5. 00:31:497 (1,1,2) - Don't place notes too close to a spinner. Delete the spinner and put a slider instead.
6. 00:56:189 (1,2) - Sounds good but too hard for easy. Delete the short slider and place a note instead
7. 00:59:650 (1,2,5,6) - Again. too hard. Delete the note and avoid this kind of note spam.
8. 01:05:650 (2,3) - Same here ^
9. 01:28:727 - Add a %5 volume green time line here.

1. First play 1x100 and 1xmiss. Only 2 notes. One stack and one that's in a blue tick. Also, high unstable rate due to notes in red ticks.
2. 00:04:727 (5) - Stacked notes are more confusing when they are under the slider. Try stacking it with 00:05:189 (1) - or move it to (1)'s position and stack (1) with 00:05:650 (2) -
3. 00:17:189 (3) - it overlaps with 00:18:112 (1) - Fix it.
4. 00:23:650 (1) - ugly overlap with 00:21:804 (4) - Fix it.
5. 00:37:497 (4,1) - Reverse arrow hidden due to (4)'s hitburst. Unrankable. Fix it.
6. 00:43:035 (2,3) - It follows vocals yeah, but the part its odd while playing. Why don't delet (3) and drag the (2) slider a little forward?
7. 01:25:958 (4) - Overlaps with 01:24:573 (1) - fix it.

1. First play Not much to say, nice diff. Those 2x100 were random,
2. AR -1: AR8 in a hard is too excesive. please use AR7.
3. 00:38:650 (3,5,7) - Move them to x:280 y:152 for good alignment with 00:38:881 (4) -
4. 00:39:804 (6,1) - Move them to x:280 y:48. Same reason as above.
5. 00:50:420 (3) - Not good stacked. Disable grid snapping and stack it properly.
6. 00:57:343 (5,2) - Same as above
7. 00:59:650 (5,2) - Same as above
8. 01:21:140 - This break is pretty unnecesary imo. Map this part.

1. First play Too many 100 (specially at the end) and a slider break. I had a hard time reading it (i'm sleepy orz, it's 5 am here) and the high AR you used didn't helped at all. overall it's well mapped
2. AR-1 Use AR9 for such a low song is crazy. Please use AR8.
3. Resnap this notes:
   01:07:727 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end)
   01:09:573 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Zeroarg wrote:

Hi~

wow you're lucky, i wasn't too lazy so i mod.

Mod from my queue

[General]

1. Add "Heanday" to tags. It's one of your two GD mappers. fixed

2. AIBat v3.1 wrote:

   Kiai
   Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
   
   - [Easy] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:497, ends on 01:03:112
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:04:266, ends on 01:19:266
   
   - [Heanday's Hard] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:497, ends on 01:03:343 fixed
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:04:266, ends on 01:19:266
   
   - [Insane] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:497, ends on 01:03:112
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:04:266, ends on 01:19:266
   
   - [yanlu's Normal] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:497, ends on 01:03:112
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:04:266, ends on 01:19:266

3. Audio Lead in is too short imo. Increase it to 1000ms in all diffs. Fixed

[Easy]

1. First play I had an unsually high unstable rate (350). tbh i only had it that high with a Insane DT. When i enter editor, i saw the problem, you're using too much red/blue ticks, try to use only withe ticks in easy diff. well i changed some placement
2. 00:11:189 (3,4,5) - I understand that you want to follow vocals, but this part becames too tricky and hard begginers. Make the (3) slider to finish at
3. 00:11:650 - (the slider should be a 1/1 that way) drag the (4) note to 00:12:112 - and delete (5). Don't forget to fix spacing here. Fixed
4. 00:23:650 (1,3) - Both sliders should end in withe ticks, not in the blue ticks. Fix this. Ops it was a mistake
5. 00:31:497 (1,1,2) - Don't place notes too close to a spinner. Delete the spinner and put a slider instead. Fixed
6. 00:56:189 (1,2) - Sounds good but too hard for easy. Delete the short slider and place a note instead Fixed
7. 00:59:650 (1,2,5,6) - Again. too hard. Delete the note and avoid this kind of note spam. Fixed
8. 01:05:650 (2,3) - Same here ^ Fixed
9. 01:28:727 - Add a %5 volume green time line here. Fixed

[Insane]

1. First play Too many 100 (specially at the end) and a slider break. I had a hard time reading it (i'm sleepy orz, it's 5 am here) and the high AR you used didn't helped at all. overall it's well mapped
2. AR-1 Use AR9 for such a low song is crazy. Please use AR8. Fixed
3. Resnap this notes: Fixed
   01:07:727 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end)
   01:09:573 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Easier diff aren't very good while harder diffs are better. Good luck with this. bye o3o

Zeroarg wrote:

1. 01:28:727 - Add a %5 volume green time line here.

Zeroarg wrote:

Hi~

[yanlu's Normal]

1. First play 1x100 and 1xmiss. Only 2 notes. One stack and one that's in a blue tick. Also, high unstable rate due to notes in red ticks.
2. 00:04:727 (5) - Stacked notes are more confusing when they are under the slider. Try stacking it with 00:05:189 (1) - or move it to (1)'s position and stack (1) with 00:05:650 (2) - keep it .i think it's fine
3. 00:17:189 (3) - it overlaps with 00:18:112 (1) - Fix it. no
4. 00:23:650 (1) - ugly overlap with 00:21:804 (4) - Fix it. no.it's fine
5. 00:37:497 (4,1) - Reverse arrow hidden due to (4)'s hitburst. Unrankable. Fix it. nah.i test it by ppy's skin.it can be readable .-.
6. 00:43:035 (2,3) - It follows vocals yeah, but the part its odd while playing. Why don't delet (3) and drag the (2) slider a little forward? nah
7. 01:25:958 (4) - Overlaps with 01:24:573 (1) - fix it. okay..fixed

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Sora to Kimi no Message.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1004
PreviewTime: 49035
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Sora to Kimi no Message (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:空とキミのメッセージ (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ChouCho
Creator:-Umi-
Version:yanlu's Normal
Source:Suisei no Gargantia
Tags:Yanlu Ending Heanday
BeatmapID:254484
BeatmapSetID:92378

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.15
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Suisei no Gargantia.jpg",0,0
Video,-321,"suisei.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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yanlu wrote:

Zeroarg wrote:

Hi~

[yanlu's Normal]
[*]00:23:650 (1) - ugly overlap with 00:21:804 (4) - Fix it. no.it's fine Just saying, it looks really bad imo, but it's up to you http://puu.sh/37Xvn.png
[*]00:37:497 (4,1) - Reverse arrow hidden due to (4)'s hitburst. Unrankable. Fix it. nah.i test it by ppy's skin.it can be readable .-. It's technically readable but it doesn't match with ranking criteria. Also the time that you have to see it is less than what it should be. http://puu.sh/37Xv0.png

thanks for mod!

• 
  AR9 seems too much for a slowbpm Insane, reduce to 8?

1. 00:27:112 (1,2) - This look a bit confusing if they are stacked on the notes before, move on another part?
2. 00:49:727 (2) - NC?
3. 01:06:573 (6,7) - They aren't stacked perfectly
4. 01:26:650 (1) - Make it start on 01:26:304 -

1. 00:34:727 (4) - 1 grid right then 1 grid right? :3
2. 00:40:727 (2,3) - Spacing between them should be 1,30, shouldn't it?
3. 00:44:650 (5,6) - Space them like notes before
4. 01:26:420 (1) - Same as Insane

1. 00:09:112 (1,2) - I suggest to start this pattern starting on the right of the slider before instead on the left, it flows much better. (Example: 00:09:112 (1) - on x:452 y:340 and so on)
   Nothing else to say.

1. 01:19:266 (7) - No slowdown on Easy diffs! Noob players won't understand that and they'll break the combo easily!
   Rest seems fine.

Leader wrote:

Hi, from my Modding Queue

[Insane]

• 
  AR9 seems too much for a slowbpm Insane, reduce to 8?

1. 00:27:112 (1,2) - This look a bit confusing if they are stacked on the notes before, move on another part?
2. 00:49:727 (2) - NC?
3. 01:06:573 (6,7) - They aren't stacked perfectly
4. 01:26:650 (1) - Make it start on 01:26:304 -

[Easy]

1. 01:19:266 (7) - No slowdown on Easy diffs! Noob players won't understand that and they'll break the combo easily!
   Rest seems fine.

Good luck :3

Kitagami wrote:

Hello! Thank you for requesting on ShiroiYume and Kitagami's Modding Queue~!

It's been quite a long time since my last mod. Sorry if I'm a bit nazi on this You wasn't xD

Unrankable issue
Highly suggested
Just suggestion
Imo = in my opinion

General

1. The hitsounds pattern seems too different on each difficult. Why not create a single pattern and use it on all diffs? I think they're free to use Hitsounds they want, It's their diff after all :3

AIBat

1. Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn. Please change Insane's Lead-in to 1004, same as the other difficulties Fixed
2. Not sure if this issue is really unrankable, but better fix it (?). Inconsistency in Tags. Easy's "ending" tag is on lowercase while on the other difficulties it is on uppercase (minor thing, but AIBait pointed it out xD). I don't know if I explained it right, so here's what I mean Fixed
   
   1. [Easy] : Yanlu ending Heanday
   2. [Heanday's Hard] : Yanlu Ending Heanday

Easy

1. 00:01:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe get these symmetrical? They are not symmetrical at the moment because they are not aligned with X and Y axis.
   
   Like this

   
2. 00:05:189 (2,4) - Even if you get these propely aligned with the Y axis, the still wouldn't be symmetrical. If we rotate 00:05:189 (2) horizontaly (CTRL+H, just to check), we can see that it isn't overlapping 00:06:573 (4) perfectly.
   
   Like this

   
   
   
3. 00:21:343 (2) - Get it to the centre to make symmetry?
4. 00:21:804 (3) - This is not symmetrical to 00:19:958 (1)
5. 00:27:343 (5) - New Combo here, instead of on 00:27:804 (1) ? To be consistent with what you did on 00:23:650 (1) and 00:12:573 (1)
6. 00:27:804 (1,2) - I don't think it's good for them to be touching like this. Move 00:28:727 (2) in a way that it has a spacing of 1.2x to the next note?
   
   Like this

   
7. 00:40:266 - Hmm, it seems like this inheriting point here isn't changing anything. Maybe delete it?
8. 00:45:804 (2) - How about adding Finish here? It fits the song, imo.
9. 00:46:727 - ^
10. 00:47:650 (4) - ^
11. 00:47:650 (4) - ^
12. 00:48:573 - Maybe Clap? To follow the background drum that starts here.
13. 00:49:497 - Maybe increase the volume here to 50% since this is Kiai Time, the "epic" or "stronger" part of the song?
14. 01:04:266 - ^
15. 00:51:804 (4) - Missing Clap here
16. 00:52:266 (1,2,3) - And again, symmetry. After aligning these with the X axis properly, check with CTRL+H if 00:52:266 (1,3) are overlapping perfectly. I checked here and it's not.
17. 00:55:958 (1) - New Combo here instead of on 00:56:420 (2)? To follow vocal?
18. 01:04:266 - Maybe Finish? To follow the background "plate" sound.
19. 01:07:035 (3,2) - Maybe get these in a way they are not touching?
20. 01:19:266 (7) - Since this is a long slider, a New Combo here fits imo, making it become a single note combo.
21. 01:24:112 (5) - Maybe Clap instead of Finish here? Seems unfit imo.
22. 01:28:727 - This inheriting point is not changing anything since the one on 01:26:650 do the same thing as this one, so I think you can delete it?

Nice diff, just be careful with the symmetry~!
95% fixed :3

Insane

1. 01:00:343 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I guess this was suposed to be a symmetry pattern? If so, please align it properly with Y axis Fixed
2. 01:17:881 (1,2,3,4) - I think it would be okay to add some notes between these ones, since it's Insane diff Fixed
3. 00:54:343 (4) - Maybe make the spacing here 1.2x? To be consistent this one 00:52:497 (1) - ? no change
4. 01:06:112 (5,6,7) - Maybe turn this slider into some other direction? Because it looks a bit weird to play since there's another note on the same direction here 01:05:189 (3)i think it's funny to back on the same note, so i keep like that ^^

Nice map, nice song!

If I wasn't clear on my mod, you can PM me and I'll try to explain

I hope I was of some help! Good luck~!

Xinely wrote:

ohai ~_~

[General]
remove letterbox, no break in this diff (in all diff) Fixed
audio lead in change to 1000? it's funny audio lead in 1004 lol isn't it ;D but fixed >.<

[Easy]
00:21:804 (3) - 348,244
00:38:420 (2) - whistle in reverse arrow? it's fit with vocal
00:43:035 (3) - ^
00:57:804 (3) - ^
01:02:420 (4) - NC?
01:03:343 (5) - 380,232 . 01:03:804 (6) - 460,140 . i think better flow than before
01:15:112 (1) - 308,100 really better , if yes 01:15:573 (2) - 208,36
01:17:881 (4) - NC?
01:19:266 (1) - 368,236 please
01:24:573 (6) - NC for consistency
01:24:112 (5) - remove clap? kinda odd to me same as after it follox the drum ^^
01:24:573 (6) - clap in arrow? follow drum
all fixed the rest

[Insane]
00:03:343 (1,2,3,4) - actually if you place like 00:01:497 (1,2,3,4) - 's pattern, better flow and it will be great (click all, ctrl+j and ctrl+G) No change i prefer my actually pattern
00:34:497 - use S:C3 finish?
00:41:881 - ^
00:46:035 - increase volume until 50% in here, due vocal
00:56:650 (3,7) - should be NC due different SV (0,75x)
01:00:343 (3) - NC too, same as above
01:03:958 (6) - remove? , actually 01:03:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1/6 stream use 1,2 spacing is crazy. better if 0,7 or 0,8 change spacing into 0,8 but i didn't remove 01:03:958 (6) -
01:19:266 (7) - it's better if use 0,6x spacing too same as previous into 0,7 better :3
the rest all fixed

that's all i guess
Good Luck ~_~

Oyatsu wrote:

Haha, As I said, I will mod soon and this is time I make that.
[General]
I think you need use newcombo sensibly because although vocal changes but If it doesn't too need, use NC will be waste ^^. I will mod newcombo, don't worry
[Isane]
00:52:497 (1,2) - Repeat us. Although maybe you made as vocal but still have a little wrong about rhythm after repeat of (2) let see. Should (2)-(1), not (1)-(2), Like: http://puu.sh/3d0hu.jpg i prefer as it's now
00:01:497 (1) - Add finish, Here is a strong rhythm (a big tick) finish on the first note ? nothing happen
00:05:189 (4,1) - Nc should be (4), Let see be 1 big tick and big rhythm. Vocal NC isn't sensible fixed
00:07:727 (6,7) - Delete (2), Make repeat of (6). It is nice! it doesn't fit with the music >.<
00:09:804 (2,3) - A normal pattern. But I think a circle hidden under tail of slider usually be 1/4 rhythm. Of you is 1/2. hm... ? I'm not sure no problem for this
00:11:881 (7,1) - Should NC at (7), maybe you think you are correct but lett se, vocal sings from (7) to (2) although at (10 maybe a strong rhythm but As me will better about vocal. you used instrument i follow 2 beat on these notes 00:12:343 (1,2) - so no change
00:14:650 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Again pattern about click mouse move left right many times will make player to feel bored good luck mouse player
00:26:650 (9,1) - vocal sings from (9) to (1), if you use 2 circles, maybe diffirent with vocal and not sensible i'll keep like that
00:41:304 - Add circle i didn't add any triplet in my map so just one, don't really want
00:49:035 (1) - NC
00:56:189 (1,2,1) - let hear careful, "ka..ta...ra" Not diffirent about vocal. Why NC at 00:56:650 (1) - ? as you said after NC when the SV change ^^
00:58:958 (1,2,3) - ^ Not NC at 00:59:881 (1) - fixed
01:19:266 (7) - When you change a slowly speed. Should NC to player can understand next rhythm be slow. Should NC fixed
01:26:189 (6) - Really This is place you start spin? Right but you want add and really it is spin ( a newcombo). SHould NC fixed

1. Audio Lead-In: in hard, change into 1000 for consistent
2. LetterboxInBreaks: disable this in hard too

1. AR +1, the current looks like laggy during gameplay
2. 00:04:727 (1) - remove new combo and add in the next note instead?
3. 00:23:189 (4) - move 2 grid left so that make spacing consistent between (3) & (1)
4. 00:34:497 (2,4) - I think put this on long white tick are more fit instead in red. since the guitar sound is more easier to follow in here. also, shorter the slider into white tick if you do this
5. 01:03:343 (2) - add clap in here too for follow the drum in music
6. 01:16:035 (3) - add clap in reverse
7. 01:19:266 (1) - this slider was decreasing the speed. seems trap in here :v for more easier just add a spinner in here
8. 01:25:958 (2) - add clap in beginning
9. 01:26:650 (1) - end this at 01:28:727 - the music sounds end in there

1. 00:25:497 (3) - I think add clap in reverse sounds more fit instead in the end
2. 00:47:650 (1) - dunno why imo this spinner is weird in here. change into some notes?
3. 01:00:112 (2) - add whistle in the end? the sound like 01:01:266 (4) -
4. 01:15:112 (3) - add finish for follow cymbal in music?
5. 01:16:035 (3,5) - ^ but in beginning
6. 01:25:958 (4) - ^ in the end

1. 00:05:420 (2) - move the last point into x:168 y:32, and 2nd point x:156 y:64 so that look same with (3)
2. 00:09:112 (2,3,4) - these notes seems forcing with vocal. maybe put it in white tick is more follow vocal and comfortable. change rhythm like this -> http://puu.sh/3e5Fc.jpg
3. 00:12:804 (2) - this too.. maybe ctrl + g with (1) is more fit with music
4. 00:19:727 (4) - move this 2 grid up for symmetry with (3)
5. 00:27:804 (4,6,7) - why the no clap in here ;-; add for consistent (for slider (7) in the end)
6. 00:29:881 (3,4,5,6) - I think more look better if blanketing (3) in slider (1) and change some position in here -> http://puu.sh/3e5Xd.jpg http://puu.sh/3e60j.jpg
   

   344,180,29881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   320,256,30112,2,0,P|320:292|300:352,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   244,284,30804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   180,332,31035,1,4,0:0:0:0:

7. 00:31:958 (1,1,1) - no need new combo in here, since the spacing same
8. 00:41:420 (5) - just use same spacing so that look tidier during gameplay.. or add new combo
9. 00:47:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is a bit confusing since 00:47:881 (1,3) - stack in 00:48:920 (5) - and (5) is 1/4 slider. try to change pattern like this -> http://puu.sh/3e6fI.jpg
10. 00:49:497 (1,3) - add clap in the end for consistent and follow drum
11. 00:52:727 (2) - ^
12. 00:55:727 (5) - add whistle, cuz sounds like 00:53:650 (4) - 's reverse
13. 01:00:112 (2) - add finish in reverse for cymbal. just like (3)'s end thought
14. 01:02:420 (6) - add new combo for change vocal and pattern
15. 01:02:881 (7) - move the last point 1 grid left so that look symmetry with 01:02:420 -
16. 01:03:343 (3) - add clap for drum and move 1 grid left for symmetry triangle
17. 01:15:804 (5) - add clap again
18. 01:24:112 (1,1) - remove this new combo, add in 01:25:035 (2) - , and remove again at 01:26:189 (1) -
19. um..imo this diff need more improving. especially in rhythm and pattern. ganbatte~

1. 00:06:804 (5) - add whistle in the end? make couple with (6) like 00:05:420 (2,3) - xD
2. 00:07:727 (7) - straight this like (6) so that looks more symmetry
3. 00:16:035 (1) - move 1 grid right so that align with (6) etc.
4. 00:25:727 (5,6,7,8,9) - eto.. these circle seems boring and I guess make combo same with pattern 00:20:189 (1) - (7) more better. so, try this code?
   

   288,220,25727,2,0,P|329:233|373:221,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   281,145,26189,2,0,P|293:101|280:60,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   288,220,26650,2,0,P|332:204|352:168,1,90

5. 00:43:727 (5) - add finish in beginning just like you did at 00:41:420 (2) - 's end?
6. 01:00:343 (1,3,5) - add finish in beginning too, just make this more fit with music
7. 01:03:343 (8) - add clap for drum sound in here
8. 01:03:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make these stream more curve o3o
9. 01:11:650 (2) - add finish
10. 01:13:266 (4) - finish sound in beginning sounds too loud. maybe, decrease volume or more better remove it
11. 01:15:112 (4,6,8) - same as 01:00:343 (1,3,5) -
12. 01:17:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the circles not fit with music.. maybe change like this -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/809191
13. 01:24:573 (4) - add finish

Yasora wrote:

/'-')/\('-'\

General

1. Audio Lead-In: in hard, change into 1000 for consistent Fixed
2. LetterboxInBreaks: disable this in hard too Fixed

Easy

1. AR +1, the current looks like laggy during gameplay
2. 00:04:727 (1) - remove new combo and add in the next note instead?
3. 00:23:189 (4) - move 2 grid left so that make spacing consistent between (3) & (1)
4. 00:34:497 (2,4) - I think put this on long white tick are more fit instead in red. since the guitar sound is more easier to follow in here. also, shorter the slider into white tick if you do this I prefer like it's now
5. 01:03:343 (2) - add clap in here too for follow the drum in music
6. 01:16:035 (3) - add clap in reverse
7. 01:19:266 (1) - this slider was decreasing the speed. seems trap in here :v for more easier just add a spinner in here No change, but i'll keep in mind if i have other reflexion :3
8. 01:25:958 (2) - add clap in beginning
9. 01:26:650 (1) - end this at 01:28:727 - the music sounds end in there No change the music sounds end later
   Fixed the rest !

Insane

1. 00:06:804 (5) - add whistle in the end? make couple with (6) like 00:05:420 (2,3) - xD It was a mistake there 00:05:420 (2,3) - so no change >.<
2. 00:07:727 (7) - straight this like (6) so that looks more symmetry It was already like that for me
3. 00:16:035 (1) - move 1 grid right so that align with (6) etc.
4. 00:25:727 (5,6,7,8,9) - eto.. these circle seems boring and I guess make combo same with pattern 00:20:189 (1) - (7) more better. so, try this code? Nice idea
   

   288,220,25727,2,0,P|329:233|373:221,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   281,145,26189,2,0,P|293:101|280:60,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   288,220,26650,2,0,P|332:204|352:168,1,90

5. 00:43:727 (5) - add finish in beginning just like you did at 00:41:420 (2) - 's end?
6. 01:00:343 (1,3,5) - add finish in beginning too, just make this more fit with music
7. 01:03:343 (8) - add clap for drum sound in here
8. 01:03:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make these stream more curve o3o
9. 01:11:650 (2) - add finish
10. 01:13:266 (4) - finish sound in beginning sounds too loud. maybe, decrease volume or more better remove it
11. 01:15:112 (4,6,8) - same as 01:00:343 (1,3,5) -
12. 01:17:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the circles not fit with music.. maybe change like this -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/809191
13. 01:24:573 (4) - add finish
    Fixed all the rest >3</

that's all~

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

Yohiaayyy! IRC Mod

Meeehhhp

01:37 InC0nceNtrateD: yohay
01:37 -Umi-: oha !
01:37 InC0nceNtrateD: hum?^^
01:37 -Umi-: hum hum ? '-'
01:37 InC0nceNtrateD: hmmmm.... may we do ur mod in chat?
01:38 -Umi-: oh ! yeah why not x)
01:38 InC0nceNtrateD: nice
01:38 InC0nceNtrateD: okay then.. I 've got my first thing
01:38 -Umi-: so just easy and insane ?
01:38 InC0nceNtrateD: what you want, I can do all four if you want
01:38 InC0nceNtrateD: We'
01:39 -Umi-: but the other are not from me x)
01:39 InC0nceNtrateD: It is your decision^^
01:39 -Umi-: well so just easy and insane i prefer x)
01:39 InC0nceNtrateD: allright
01:39 InC0nceNtrateD: then lets begin
01:39 *-Umi- listen
01:40 InC0nceNtrateD: 01:21:617 (1) - and 00:21:804 (3) - these two are the same I see, but made not neat
01:40 InC0nceNtrateD: to create the curve, you need only one waypoint , not two
01:40 -Umi-: ah yeah i know this xD
01:40 InC0nceNtrateD: then change it
01:40 -Umi-: but isn't unrankable
01:41 -Umi-: so not really need to change it right ?
01:41 InC0nceNtrateD: your dont have to, but I can tell you if a BAT looks at your map, he'll tell you to change it
01:41 -Umi-: well i'll change it x)
01:42 InC0nceNtrateD: u know to get ur map ranked it is not enough for it just to be rankable, it also has to have a nice gameplay, well chosen kiai times, good mapped kiais and things
01:43 InC0nceNtrateD: and uhm I think the 00:21:804 (3) - Slider should lead towards the 4, in Easy diff it should be this way
01:43 -Umi-: i know i know i already have one map ranked '-'
01:43 InC0nceNtrateD: nice
01:44 -Umi-: well fixed
01:44 InC0nceNtrateD: allright
01:45 InC0nceNtrateD: 00:57:804 (3) - you could bring this on the height where the previous slider ends, looks a bit better for me ^^
01:46 -Umi-: I don't really like >.<
01:46 InC0nceNtrateD: not? okay
01:46 -Umi-: hehe ^^
01:46 InC0nceNtrateD: then uhhm, i know its kinda much but 01:15:112 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part, on the red lines, is strange
01:46 -Umi-: follow the voice
01:47 InC0nceNtrateD: then ure missing 01:15:804 -
01:47 InC0nceNtrateD: add anote there
01:48 -Umi-: i think if i add a note here it could be to hard to understand for new players
01:48 -Umi-: because 1 2 3 have the same spacing
01:48 InC0nceNtrateD: then do a slider from 01:15:573 (2) -
01:48 InC0nceNtrateD: towards three
01:48 -Umi-: i'll give a try
01:49 -Umi-: yeah good like that
01:50 InC0nceNtrateD: cool and one last option, i like the silent spinner in the end, just alternative you could do a barely hearable end, like Whistle sound and 15% volume
01:50 InC0nceNtrateD: sounds not bad to me^^
01:51 -Umi-: start at ?
01:51 -Umi-: don't really understand what you mean
01:51 InC0nceNtrateD: the final spinner
01:51 -Umi-: yeah ?
01:51 InC0nceNtrateD: If you make the end of the spinner with 15% volume and add a Whistle sound to it
01:51 -Umi-: oh ok wait
01:52 -Umi-: well it's the end of the song so add a withsle here it's a bit strange for me :/
01:52 -Umi-: 5% i prefer ^^
01:53 InC0nceNtrateD: allright^^ just alternativ i found it not bad so i just mentioned it
01:53 InC0nceNtrateD: okay then we come to insane
01:53 -Umi-: yeah don't worry :3
01:53 InC0nceNtrateD: allright uhhm
01:53 InC0nceNtrateD: do you want perfect stacking in insane?^^
01:54 -Umi-: hum well i don't really care but why not xD
01:54 InC0nceNtrateD: because, i am like seeing if the stacking is perfect up to 1 pixel
01:54 -Umi-: well so no xD
01:54 InC0nceNtrateD: 00:10:497 (3) - the correct X would be 299, not 298^^
01:54 -Umi-: too many things i think ahah
01:54 InC0nceNtrateD: its easy to fix
01:55 InC0nceNtrateD: just delete the old note, go to the timeline right after the note you wanna stack to, create a button and let it snap automatically to the note u wanna stack to by placing it nearby, then move it on the timeline
01:55 -Umi-: hum ok
01:56 -Umi-: i did ^^
01:56 InC0nceNtrateD: ^^
01:56 InC0nceNtrateD: then stack this to it as well : 00:10:958 (5) - ^^
01:56 -Umi-: already do /3
01:56 -Umi-: :3
01:57 InC0nceNtrateD: 00:26:189 (6,7,1,2) - just asking, why not mappping lyrics here? :<
01:58 InC0nceNtrateD: 00:46:035 (4) - NC here
01:58 -Umi-: is already mapping lyrics before some mod, so i changed it ^^
01:58 -Umi-: it was*
01:58 -Umi-: fixed^^
01:58 InC0nceNtrateD: ah okay, i'd liked the lyrics more^^
01:58 -Umi-: yeah me too but sometime no x)
01:59 -Umi-: Nc here so ?
01:59 -Umi-: t00:47:881 (4) -
01:59 InC0nceNtrateD: I am actually not sure
01:59 InC0nceNtrateD: but yeah i guess
01:59 -Umi-: ok
01:59 InC0nceNtrateD: shes goin on with the rythm from beginning so
01:59 InC0nceNtrateD: i guess yea
02:00 -Umi-: fixed
02:01 InC0nceNtrateD: 01:01:958 (4) - this is not stacked perfectly to the slider end :3
02:01 InC0nceNtrateD: I hate my eyes for seeing such things .-.
02:01 -Umi-: ah yeah xD
02:01 -Umi-: it's ok now '-'
02:02 InC0nceNtrateD: 01:03:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I think you can do this stream directly to the button, i mean like adding notes to it
02:02 InC0nceNtrateD: yeah would be awesome
02:02 InC0nceNtrateD: imo^^
02:03 -Umi-: the mean finish the stream ?
02:03 -Umi-: 01:04:150 -
02:03 -Umi-: here ?
02:03 InC0nceNtrateD: nah
02:03 -Umi-: ah so what ? x)
02:03 InC0nceNtrateD: the last button shall be 1/8 away, i guess its an 1/8 stream
02:03 -Umi-: ah yeah ;;;
02:03 InC0nceNtrateD: if not it shall be away 1/streamsnap
02:03 InC0nceNtrateD: ^^
02:04 -Umi-: I was on 1/4 ..
02:04 -Umi-: so here ?
02:04 -Umi-: 01:04:189 -
02:04 InC0nceNtrateD: 01:04:208 - is it at my screen oO
02:04 InC0nceNtrateD: the yellow line
02:04 InC0nceNtrateD: before the white one in 1/8
02:05 InC0nceNtrateD: because its an 1/8 stream xD
02:05 -Umi-: it's 1:6 stream
02:05 -Umi-: 1/6*
02:05 InC0nceNtrateD: lawl
02:05 -Umi-: x)
02:05 InC0nceNtrateD: my osu is trolling me hard
02:05 -Umi-: xD
02:05 InC0nceNtrateD: damn ur right xD my bad sorry ._.'
02:05 -Umi-: ahah np
02:05 InC0nceNtrateD: 01:04:189 - is the ending then^^
02:06 InC0nceNtrateD: 01:08:420 (4,5) - not perfectly stacked to the sliderend^^
02:07 -Umi-: fixed
02:08 InC0nceNtrateD: 01:10:266 (4,5) - same here
02:08 InC0nceNtrateD: damn one pixel again
02:08 -Umi-: fixed again xD
02:09 InC0nceNtrateD: and here 01:24:573 (4) -
02:09 -Umi-: >.<
02:10 -Umi-: goood
02:10 InC0nceNtrateD: ^^ well i guess i cannot find more things, let me just look over it one more time
02:10 -Umi-: okay
02:10 InC0nceNtrateD: yeah here
02:10 InC0nceNtrateD: 00:08:189 (8,1) - It would be nice for the Ahhhh in the lyrics if you do a slider instead the buttons
02:11 -Umi-: ²yeah you're right
02:11 -Umi-: i'll try
02:12 InC0nceNtrateD: so?
02:13 -Umi-: i did it
02:13 InC0nceNtrateD: yoheeeeee D
02:13 -Umi-: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/809774
02:13 -Umi-: nice idea :3
02:13 InC0nceNtrateD: yep looks cool
02:13 InC0nceNtrateD: thanks^^
02:13 -Umi-: i like now
02:14 InC0nceNtrateD: ^v^
02:14 InC0nceNtrateD: allright then were done
02:14 -Umi-: Well thank u very much for mod >3<
02:14 InC0nceNtrateD: hehe no problem nice song btw and i like the bg D

Oyatsu wrote:

Hello, Mod again about Easy/Normal. Sorry for relay. Don't forget M4M: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/97986.
[Easy]
00:01:497 (1) - Add finsih better about htisound Fixed
00:12:573 (1,2) - (2) should be the same as (1). Copy (1) and paste (2) ,Ctrl+< (3 times) Fixed
00:19:958 (1) - Finish Fixed
00:34:497 (2,4) - Add whistle at head each slider. Better hitsound Fixed
00:38:420 (2) - forget whistle No change
00:51:343 (3) - 2 grid down-right, nicer No change
01:17:881 (1,2,3) - maybe I think it isn't good (just no good, not bad). Can you make as usually? I don't see, the problem no change >.<
01:19:266 (1) - Add whistle silence slider so, no change
01:24:573 (1) - Finish instead of whistle no change, it's same as the previous slider
----------------------------------------------------------
Anyway and anything. Osu! need more Choucho!! Haha, Let try to have ranked. Don't give kudosu if no, I will denied. Thanks you ^^

1. 01:14:420 (5,1) - New combo should go on (5) since the music actually changes there.
2. 01:18:804 (3,1) - Even though there's a slowdown here and new combo, the spacing is wrong. Please fix it and make it consistent.

1. 00:04:727 (5) - Never place a circle under a slider on a Normal difficulty, it's way too confusing for beginners to read.
2. 00:38:420 (1) - I'm not sure if the repeat arrow could be covered by the previous hitburst with default skin, check it out.

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 00:14:881 (5) - I think this slider would flow much better if you place it under the end of (2).
2. 00:21:804 (6) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
3. 00:43:497 (2,3) - This jump feels really random, I don't like it.
4. 01:06:343 (6,7,8) - Another spacing I don't really like much, trying making it better looking? Also for a better flow.
5. 01:14:650 (2,3) - Spacing, they're too close each other.

1. HP Drain feels too high for such a slow song, decrease it by 1 tick at least.

1. 00:16:035 (1) - This single combo here feels random, I'd remove it.
2. 00:47:881 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing consistent in this pattern, it doesn't look good right now.
3. 00:56:650 (1) - This single combo here feels random, I'd remove it.
4. 01:06:112 (5) - This slider is hard to see, since the previous one completely covers it, I suggest you to move it somewhere else.

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~

1. 01:14:420 (5,1) - New combo should go on (5) since the music actually changes there.
2. 01:18:804 (3,1) - Even though there's a slowdown here and new combo, the spacing is wrong. Please fix it and make it consistent.

~Insane~

1. HP Drain feels too high for such a slow song, decrease it by 1 tick at least.

1. 00:16:035 (1) - This single combo here feels random, I'd remove it.
2. 00:47:881 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing consistent in this pattern, it doesn't look good right now.
3. 00:56:650 (1) - This single combo here feels random, I'd remove it.
4. 01:06:112 (5) - This slider is hard to see, since the previous one completely covers it, I suggest you to move it somewhere else.

1. 00:01:497 (1,2,3,4) - Décale tout de 2 cran sur la droite? Pour avoir une symétrie bien centée.
2. 00:05:189 (1,2,3) - Décale tout de deux crans sur la gauche? Pour la même raison.
3. 00:19:958 (1,2,3) - Un cran sur la gauche. Toujours pour la même raison.
4. 00:23:189 (4) - Je croyais que t'étais accro aux blanquet! X=376 y=76.
5. 00:23:650 (1) - Bouge le point du milier un cran vers le bas et le dernier point de deux crans sur la gauche pour une meilleur blanket.
6. 00:25:497 (3) - Fait le même genre de transformation mais en mirroir... Enfin, tu me comprends.
7. 00:29:650 (4) - Un cran vers le bas. Meilleur blanket.
8. 00:46:266 (3) - Bouge le à x=264 y=248 pour avoir 00:43:035 (3,1,2,3) parallèlogramme.
9. 00:47:650 (4,5) - Ils sont pas à la même hauteur.
10. 00:49:035 (5,1) - Pas le même abscisse.
11. 00:50:881 (2,3,4) - Tu peux toujours pas t'empecher de faire autant de lignes droites.
12. 00:59:650 (1,2,3,1) - Bouge les tous d'1/2 temps vers la droite? C'est assez bizarre tu as une note assez importante entre chacun de tes sliders. A vrai dire si tu fait ce que je t'ai dit tu peux mettre des finishs à la fin de chaque slider à la place de clap.
13. 01:04:266 (1,3) - Empile-les? Techniuement si les blanket étaient parfaite ils devraient déja être empilés.
14. 01:13:497 (4) - Bouge-le à x=240 y=200 pour faire triangle avec 01:12:573 (2,3).

1. 00:10:727 (4) - Move it to x=48 y=312 for a better blanket.
2. 00:18:112 (1) - Move it to x=236 y=24 for a better pentagon.
3. 00:56:189 (5,1) - Not symmetrical.
4. 01:01:266 (4,1) - This overlapping isn't very good. Try to do a better one.
5. 01:25:958 (4) - Finish at the end?

1. 00:02:881 (2,3,4,5,6) - C'est pas le plus joli pattern qui soit avec 5 notes. Pourquoi pas autre chose comme une étoile (par exemple, mais il en existe plein d'autres différents).
2. 00:11:420 (4) - Bouge-le à x=140 y=160 pour un parfait parallèlogramme.
3. 00:09:112 (2) - x=120 y=176?
4. 00:12:573 (1) - x=284 y=272?
5. 00:20:881 (3) - x=332 y=160?
6. 00:27:112 (2) - Un cran plus haut pour une mailleur blanket?
7. 00:51:804 (7) - Bouge-le à x=124 y=236 pour un parallèlogramme 00:51:112 (4,5,6,7).
8. 00:54:343 (1,2,3,4) - Niveau musique c'est la mêm chose que 00:52:727 (2,3,4). Tu devrais donc avoir .
9. 00:57:112 (3) - x=276 y=68 pour une meilleur blanket.
10. 00:58:727 (3,4,5,1,2) - Refait le parallélogramme de sorte que 2 coïncide avec 3.
11. 01:02:420 (1) - Légèrement penché.
12. 01:06:573 (7) - Bouge-le à x=348 y=20 pour un parfait parallèlogramme.
13. 01:16:035 (6) - C'est quoi cette forme !?!?

1. 00:01:497 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A part Blue Dragon PERSONNE N'AIME LES CARRES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mise à part je te conseille d'utiliser Compose>Create Polygon Circle pour les faires parcequ'aucun n'est un parfait carré XD.
2. 00:15:112 (7,8,9,10,11) - Alors là tu as une quasi symétrie. Pourquoi ne pas en faire une parfaite?
3. 00:26:650 (7) - La logique voudrait qu'on ait ça:
   
   
   Bon, je l'ai pas super bien réussi mais tu comprends l'idée.
4. 00:45:112 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 2 choses: Premièrement ils sont pas tous exactement dans la même direction. Essaye de superposer les groupes de 3 et tu verras. Deuxièmement pourquoi ne pas faire un peu plus original que ça en faisant par exemple ça:
   
   
   Ou encore mieux ça:
   
   
   Puisque la musique est de plus en plus intense. (x0.6,x1.2 et x1.8 pour le DS)
5. 01:04:266 (1,2,3,4) - C'est pas un très bon carré. 2 et 3 pas à la même hauteur, pareil pour 1 et 4 etc....
6. 01:07:266 (1,2,3) - Pas à la même hauteur.
7. 01:09:112 (1,2,3) - Ah, ben là tu l'as bien fait.
8. 01:15:112 (4) - x=252 y=344 pour un parfait parallélogramme.
9. 01:25:266 (2,4) - Pas le même abscisse.
10. 01:25:035 (1,3,5) - Devine......
11. 01:26:189 (1) - Elle fait un peu bizarre cette note. Sinon une alternative pour la fin c'est ça:
    
    
    (Ouais, j'aime ce pattern)
    Et si tu fait ça utilise bien Compose>Create Polygon Circle!

rezoons wrote:

Salut à tous ^^

Ici votre moddeur préféré pour un M4M: Nice joke !

Et en cadeau un bien gros nazi mod comme je les aime. Let's Go! STOPU!

[Easy]

1. 00:01:497 (1,2,3,4) - Décale tout de 2 cran sur la droite? Pour avoir une symétrie bien centée.
2. 00:05:189 (1,2,3) - Décale tout de deux crans sur la gauche? Pour la même raison.
3. 00:19:958 (1,2,3) - Un cran sur la gauche. Toujours pour la même raison.
4. 00:23:189 (4) - Je croyais que t'étais accro aux blanquet! X=376 y=76. je me relache un peu des fois
5. 00:23:650 (1) - Bouge le point du milier un cran vers le bas et le dernier point de deux crans sur la gauche pour une meilleur blanket.
6. 00:25:497 (3) - Fait le même genre de transformation mais en mirroir... Enfin, tu me comprends.
7. 00:29:650 (4) - Un cran vers le bas. Meilleur blanket.
8. 00:46:266 (3) - Bouge le à x=264 y=248 pour avoir 00:43:035 (3,1,2,3) parallèlogramme.
9. 00:47:650 (4,5) - Ils sont pas à la même hauteur.
10. 00:49:035 (5,1) - Pas le même abscisse. ça sera quoi aprés ? pas le meme diametre ? >3<
11. 00:50:881 (2,3,4) - Tu peux toujours pas t'empecher de faire autant de lignes droites.
12. 00:59:650 (1,2,3,1) - Bouge les tous d'1/2 temps vers la droite? C'est assez bizarre tu as une note assez importante entre chacun de tes sliders. A vrai dire si tu fait ce que je t'ai dit tu peux mettre des finishs à la fin de chaque slider à la place de clap.
13. 01:04:266 (1,3) - Empile-les? Techniuement si les blanket étaient parfaite ils devraient déja être empilés.
14. 01:13:497 (4) - Bouge-le à x=240 y=200 pour faire triangle avec 01:12:573 (2,3).
    ALL CLEAR, ALL FIXED

[Insane]

1. 00:01:497 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A part Blue Dragon PERSONNE N'AIME LES CARRES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mise à part je te conseille d'utiliser Compose>Create Polygon Circle pour les faires parcequ'aucun n'est un parfait carré XD. Alors la BIG BIG flem je trouve ça trés bien comme c'est, t'es trop pointilleux >3<
2. 00:15:112 (7,8,9,10,11) - Alors là tu as une quasi symétrie. Pourquoi ne pas en faire une parfaite? rien n'est parfait mais j'ai fixed :3
3. 00:26:650 (7) - La logique voudrait qu'on ait ça:
   
   
   Bon, je l'ai pas super bien réussi mais tu comprends l'idée. ouais je vais suivre ta logique
4. 00:45:112 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 2 choses: Premièrement ils sont pas tous exactement dans la même direction. Essaye de superposer les groupes de 3 et tu verras. Deuxièmement pourquoi ne pas faire un peu plus original que ça en faisant par exemple ça:
   
   
   Ou encore mieux ça: tu sais que t'es malin toi ?
   
   
   Puisque la musique est de plus en plus intense. (x0.6,x1.2 et x1.8 pour le DS)
5. 01:04:266 (1,2,3,4) - C'est pas un très bon carré. 2 et 3 pas à la même hauteur, pareil pour 1 et 4 etc....
6. 01:07:266 (1,2,3) - Pas à la même hauteur.
7. 01:09:112 (1,2,3) - Ah, ben là tu l'as bien fait. \o/
8. 01:15:112 (4) - x=252 y=344 pour un parfait parallélogramme.
9. 01:25:266 (2,4) - Pas le même abscisse.
10. 01:25:035 (1,3,5) - Devine...... mais de quoi tu parle ? moi je vois rien du tout "joke"
11. 01:26:189 (1) - Elle fait un peu bizarre cette note. Sinon une alternative pour la fin c'est ça:
    
    
    (Ouais, j'aime ce pattern)
    Et si tu fait ça utilise bien Compose>Create Polygon Circle! fais mais sans l'aide de ton machin !
    
    Mise à part mes comment useless, tout fixé sauf le premier truc

Mon opinon: j'en veux pas. La Easy est cool mais tu mets encore un peu trop de ligne droite à mon gout XD. J'adore la Normal et c'est ma diff préférée du mapset mais c'est bête, vu que je parle Français ils comprendra pas le compliment.
Sinon pour la Hard et la Insane ben... euh... Je préfère largement ce que tu m'avais montré sur le chat la dernière fois. Franchement c'est peut-être parce que vous avez plus d'expérience mais je préférais largement ce que vous aviez fait sur cet autre map.Peut-être prenez le temps de reregarder votre map avec un œil nouveau et plus expérimenté et de voir s'il n'y a pas certaines choses que vous voudriez changé. Franchement je trouve que ces diffs ont du potentiel mais qui manque à être exploité. Surtout quand je vois les magnifiques diff de votre nouvelle map.

Mais bon, je vous met quand même un étoile d'encouragement! "une" et ce n'est qu'une faute parmis tant d'autres

Non, j'en met 2! Parce que je suis un grand malade! (Et que j'en ai 30 en réserve accessoirement XD) t'abuse T'aurai pu mettre x10 >.<, mais merci :3 hehe

Ça sera quoi après ? pas le même diamètre ? >3<

"une" et ce n'est qu'une faute parmis tant d'autres

mais sans l'aide de ton machin !

T'aurai pu mettre Etoilex10

Arusha Shuna wrote:

General
-I don't know if it's just me but BPM is a tiny bit slow. Noticable when entering kiai section (try 25%/50% speed, the objects hits a little bit late) try to change the BPM to 130.03 or ask an expert. Fixed, it fixed better
-Use lowercase letters on tags fixed
-Tick rate = 1, fits better with the drums no change, i prefer 2
Easy
01:19:266 (1) - spacing issue, keep it evenly spaced with the previous combo. Beginner players can be easily confused with this spacing fixed

Insane
01:03:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this stream is kinda.. unfitting. I know it follows the instru,ent in the background but still... Change into 1/4 stream fit better

good luck with the map!

Non alors la, non, Lol, chacun a sa façon d'entendre la music, si on peux l'exprime sans que dans les mod on nous disent 24848 x 259544 = 489498494894. J'trouvz sa fine

Kin wrote:

Bonsoir
M4M~

Easy :

00:20:877 - ~ 00:29:644 - dans cette parti les whistles me semblent bien fort, réduis les HS à genre 30% ? le volume me dérange pas
00:59:638 (1,2) - la diff n'as que très peu de 1/2, joué celui la m'as semblé un peu zarb sur une izi, meme si ça suit, disons que ce 1/2 est différent des autres, vu qu'il faut "single tap" (par contre ceux la ne me dérange pas 01:14:404 (1,2,3,4) - car ils sont je dirais moins compliqué à faire pour une izi) supprimé
01:02:637 (1,2) - évite les jumps en izi D: Ops c'était pas voulu ça xD


Insane :
Si tu veux des jolie square parfait, tu peux check le square en prennant 2 note du square, puis les superposé de manière à voir si le square est parfait, comme ça http://puu.sh/3iQUK.jpg (par exemple içi le square n'est pas parfait) ou sinon tu fais ctrl+shift+d (en mettant beat snap en 1/2), tu met 4 points pour un square, puis après t'as juste à choisir le DS et l'angle j'ai fais avec ctrl+shift+d

00:08:880 (2,1) - ce jump perso je l'aime pas trop, je trouve qu'il suit pas trop la musique <_< déplacé
00:48:563 (2,3) - c'est hyper nazi, mais test quelque chose comme ça ? http://puu.sh/3iR6J.jpg c'était presque pareil '-', j'ai a peine modif
00:51:793 (6) - add clap fixed
01:08:405 (4) - ^ fixed
01:10:251 (4) - ^ fixed
01:14:634 (2,4) - fais en sorte que le cerle, et le début du slider soit snappé sur la meme colonne ? soit move le slider vers x240 en gardant le DS fixed

well c'est tout ce que je peux dire \o
good luck ~

1. offset - 15? I'm not sure
2. "ArtistUnicode" should be "ちょうちょ"
3. PreviewTime set to 00:49:371 - sounds better

1. 00:02:881 (2) - move to (432,196)
2. 00:09:341 (1,2) - too close. try to move 2 up a little
3. 00:16:724 (1) - add whistle? sounds better
4. 00:31:490 (1) - add finish and turn volume to 15%
5. 00:54:100 (3) - move to (148,304)
6. 00:55:485 (4) - move to (376,188) to keep horizontal with 00:53:639 (2) -
7. 00:59:638 - add a circle?
8. 01:19:249 (1) - using changed SV is not recommended in Easy diff
9. 01:22:710 (4,5) - too far
10. 01:28:247 - 01:28:708 - 0.75x is useless in spinner I think

1. 00:32:874 (4) - add whistle
2. 00:42:103 (1) - Remove new combo
3. 00:43:026 (2) - New combo
4. 00:44:872 (5) - New combo
5. 00:45:564 (1) - Remove new combo

1. 00:09:341 (3,1) - These notes aren't in a complete stack
2. 00:23:415 (5,1) - jump here
3. 00:49:486 (1,3) - These notes aren't in a complete stack
4. 00:56:408 (2,4) - These notes aren't in a complete stack
5. 01:07:482 (2,3) - ._. personally I don't like this pattern
6. 01:10:482 (5,7) - These notes aren't in a complete stack
7. 01:17:172 (3) - move to (280,148) to keep vertical with 00:53:639 (2) -

1. 00:40:257 - This green time point is useless. Delete it
2. 00:09:802 (2,4) - These notes aren't in a complete stack
3. 00:49:025 (3,2) - These notes aren't in a complete stack
4. 01:00:330 (1) - Add finish on the first circle
5. 01:24:555 (4) - add finish and turn volume to 25%

Weiren wrote:

Hi
for M4M

[General]

1. offset - 15? I'm not sure No change
2. "ArtistUnicode" should be "ちょうちょ" Fixed
3. PreviewTime set to 00:49:371 - sounds better Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:02:881 (2) - move to (432,196) it break my symmetry with 00:04:727 (4) - so no change
2. 00:09:341 (1,2) - too close. try to move 2 up a little HUm it doesn't change nothing, so no change
3. 00:16:724 (1) - add whistle? sounds better no change
4. 00:31:490 (1) - add finish and turn volume to 15% Fixed
5. 00:54:100 (3) - move to (148,304) it break my symmetry with 00:52:255 (1) - so no chnage
6. 00:55:485 (4) - move to (376,188) to keep horizontal with 00:53:639 (2) - fixed
7. 00:59:638 - add a circle? it was already like that before, but could be hard to understand for new player
8. 01:19:249 (1) - using changed SV is not recommended in Easy diff **Not recommended but not forbiden and I think this change of SV is not hard to understand
9. 01:22:710 (4,5) - too far Fixed
10. 01:28:247 - 01:28:708 - 0.75x is useless in spinner I thinkFixed

[Insane]

1. 00:40:257 - This green time point is useless. Delete it Fixed
2. 00:09:802 (2,4) - These notes aren't in a complete stack Fixed
3. 00:49:025 (3,2) - These notes aren't in a complete stack i tried to do the best i can
4. 01:00:330 (1) - Add finish on the first circle Fixed
5. 01:24:555 (4) - add finish and turn volume to 25% Fixed the finish not the volume
   
   Good luck
   ----------
   EasyModder 1.4.2
   Program By Weiren

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

[General]
Red: Must fix
Blue: Suggestion only


[Easy]
01:02:637 (1,2) - make them a slider,better with a repeat I prefer as it's now :/
01:24:555 (1) - finish in slider head Fixed

[Insane]
HP drain -1 No change
01:00:330 (1) - change 1/2 slider and 01:00:791 - add circle Fixed good suggestion :3
01:01:253 (3) - ^ ,and 01:01:714 - add circle ^
01:24:555 (4) - default finish? default you mean normal default ? but no change


good luck

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Inconsistence Preview Time on Easy, you should fix it.
[Easy]
Placement
00:09:341(1,2) like this? current looks a bit ugly.

SPOILER

01:10:251(3) 1 grid down better and it is put center between (1) and (2)
01:22:248(3,5) stack better.
Rhythm
00:16:724(1) start at 00:16:378 better to follow the vocal I prefer stay on 1/2 so i moved on after ticks
00:31:490(1) start at 00:31:144 ^
01:10:712(1) too long and weird for me, maybe separete like this?

SPOILER

01:26:632(1) start at 01:26:286 ^


Fixed the rest

[Insane]
Mapping to vocals is one thing; however, this is an Insane diff. You should not have so much space in your timeline. especially, KIAI TIME.

SPOILER

SPOILER

Placement
00:01:497(1,2,3,4,1,...) Keep this
since this song is calm and relax, I don't expect such as rotationally jumping.
00:05:188(1) spacing changed suddenly, maybe it will cause confused.
00:25:261(6,7,8,9)make beautiful like this?

SPOILER

00:29:414(4) Ctrl+G better
00:47:871(1,2) I suppose it is better to make a jump at 00:48:833 since vocal has changed loudly. don't really understand what you mean

SPOILER

Rhythm
In KIAI TIME, I don't know why you used some slow-down slider,just weird and it's not effective works.
Hit Sonud
00:51:793(6) add clap
01:10:251(4) add clap at head

Fixed the rest

need some work.good luck with star.

KevinKang wrote:

good song and map!!! thx >.<
i love it
[insane]
01:19:249 (1) - i get a 50 on it~make a longer distance between the previous note maybe better i'll keep it in ming and change it later maybe :3