1. Hard (4,92 stars, 866 notes)
2. Normal (2,81 stars, 406 notes)

1. 00:40:392 (3) - Maybe a littl curved end for having a small blanket like this:
   
2. 01:12:321 (5,2) - Try to stack them, maybe.
3. 01:20:464 (2,3) - Maybe curved 3 a little bit to do a blanket with the begining of 2 in addition of the one with the begining of 3.
4. 01:32:892 (3) - I think you can put an arrow on this one and it will match the music.
5. 01:36:750 (1) - You have a very long slider. Why not put an original shape, something less plain.... Or a spinner. XD
6. 01:46:392 (6,1) - The overlapping doesn't look very good imo.
7. 01:53:892 (1) - Same as 01:36:750 (1)
8. 02:33:321 (3) - ^ etc...... same suggest for all it's copy-paste and the other as long.
9. 02:35:892 (1,2) - Maybe put 2 1/2 beat long slider and the second with an arrow starting at 02:35:678
   
10. 03:27:750 (5,2) - stack?
11. 04:25:178 (4) - x=196 y=100 do a better blanket imo.
12. 04:32:035 (1) - NC? Otherwise the combo is a little but long.
13. 04:51:321 (1,2,1) - If you want to keep the symmetry try something like this:
    
    Or it's CTRL+H version ^^
14. 04:53:464 (2) - Rotate it 180° to do a blanket with 04:52:178 (1).
15. 05:06:320 (2) - According to the AImod it's end isn't snapped.
16. 06:23:035 (4) - Maybe you should finish with a symmetrical slider since there are a lot of symmetry in your map.

1. 00:31:178 (4) - Move the second point to x=396 y=292 for a better vlanket.
2. 01:21:535 (1) - Move it to x=164 y=140 for a better overlapping.
3. 01:53:250 (1,1) - Stack them properly?
4. 02:09:321 (1,2,3,4) - 3 are in one direction and 1 in the opposite. Maybe make 2-2 it would be better imo.
5. 03:04:178 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think you could do better with these five notes because currently they seems a little bit randomly placed.
6. 03:42:964 (2,3) - I think CTRL+G plays better.
7. 03:50:035 (1) - Remove NC?
8. 04:10:178 - Add a note? It fits better imo.
9. 04:10:607 - ^
10. 04:36:321 (1) - Remove NC?
11. 04:51:428 (3) - Move it to x=136 y=324.
12. 04:57:964 (4) - Move it to x=76 y=256.
13. 05:15:536 (5) - I think you need a 1/4-beat-long slider here too.
14. 06:06:321 (2) - Move it to x=348 y=72 for a better blanket.

hi~ from your queue
try M4M

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good luck~~

1. I'd increase hitsound volume by 5 ~ 10 % per section as it sounds q bit quiet for some parts.
   
   
2. Collab isn't needed in tags as you have Collaboration.
   
   
3. Correct song title should be" Sono Tobira no Mokou ni"

1. 01:36:750 (1) - Clap the end? It feels like the same sound as on the start.
2. 01:39:321 (2,3) - Try to clap those two aswell, it gives a cool emphasize in my opinion.
3. 01:51:321 (3) - Whistle on the end? Sounds very well with the piano.
4. 02:08:464 (2) - Whistle on the end? Feels better with the downbeat.
5. 02:11:035 (1) - And whislte on the start here, it follow the piano/whatever high sound here lol.
6. 02:14:464 (1) - Same here.
7. 02:15:321 (3) - Whistle the end?
8. 02:17:892 (1) - Whistle on the head?
9. 02:19:607 (2) - Same as above.
10. 02:21:321 (1) - Whistle?
11. 02:25:178 (2) - Whistle? It will be consistent with 02:21:750 (2) -
12. 02:30:750 (3) - Whistle on the start? The vocal sounds high.
13. 02:33:321 (3) - Whistle on the start to emphasize the vocal?
14. 02:57:321 (1) - Whistle on the start? Emphasizes the downbeat very well.
15. 03:00:750 (1) - Same here.
16. 03:33:321 (3) - Whistle on the end? Follows the piano.
17. 03:38:464 (1) - Whislte? Follows the piano.
18. 03:41:036 (5) - Whistle on the start? Follows perfectly with the whistles on 3.
19. 03:41:893 (1) - Whistle on the start and end to follow the piano?
20. 03:44:464 (3) - Same
21. 03:52:178 (1) - Add a clap on the end to keep consistency.
22. 03:54:750 (2,3) - 3 is not placed that well imo, try to move 2 and 3 up to stack 3 with 1's end.
23. 04:33:321 (5) - End should really have a whistle, did you miss it?
24. 04:35:035 (6) - Try to whislte the start here aswell.
25. 04:41:036 (3) - Whistle on the end? Sounds very well.
26. 04:57:321 (5) - Whistle the start and the end?
27. 05:16:178 (1) - Try CTRL + J and G, looks smoother in my opinion.
28. 05:57:750 (7) - Whistle on the start and end?
29. 06:23:035 (4) - Try a whistle or a finish on the start, the start feels to heavy to make it having a simple clap.
    

1. 01:50:464 (1) - Whistle on the start?
2. 01:53:250 (1) - NC feels odd and unfiting, remove it?
3. 02:10:607 (4) - Spacing is much too huge, so that it comes unexpected, please reduce the jump a bit.
4. 02:27:750 (7) - Missing a clap?
5. 02:27:964 (8) - Whistle would fit to the ones before, try it.
6. 03:01:392 (2) - Increase the spacing a bit? Feels weird considering 1 ending on a blue tick.
7. 03:29:035 (4) - This shape looks more wry than good D: Could you adjust it a bit?
8. 04:17:035 (2) - Meh, I think this is unnecesarry orz extend it by 1/4 and delete the circle? It doesn't fit into the map's style.
9. 04:27:750 (5) - Ctrl + G? Flows much smoother imo.
10. 04:29:892 (5) - Start NC here instead of 1?
11. 04:42:750 (8) - Whistle the start or the end?
12. 05:31:607 (1) - Really a nice shape :3
13. 06:24:321 (3) - Add a whistle?

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

---->xxheroxx
Tell me what you want me to change, and i will try to change it (oT-T)尸

xxheroxx wrote:

I like how the collab turned out, I'm just a bit worried about alacat and cRyo's parts, you guys made a lot of jumps and your parts are harder than ours, it would be better to keep the same level of difficulty.

1. The hitsounds in this map are a bit too weak imo. I suggest increase all sample volume by 1 dB with audio editing tools.
2. reduce Hard's OD to 6? since it's Hard diff

1. 01:36:750 (1) - the shape is weird. why not try something cool?
   
   not best one, but something a bit cooler

   
2. 02:22:178 (3) - make more symmetrical
   
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3. 02:59:035 (2) - Try this:
   
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4. 03:52:178 (1) - same as above. also, copy-pasting on this slider is lazy imo.
5. 05:14:463 (2) - same as 02:59:035 (2) -
6. 05:55:392 (2) - move upwards by 1 grid or two to make it look more dynamic

1. 02:41:892 (3) - not recommend hiding note under the slider end. slightly move away by a grid.
2. 06:08:892 (7) - move to somewhere else? I don't like the stack here

1. 00:44:035 (2,3,4) - move to x:128 y:264 to keep the flow
2. 02:07:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - this jump breaks flow. try moving 02:08:249 (4) - to x:88,y:200 and 02:08:464 (5) - ctrl+G
3. 02:17:892 (1) - I suggest shorten by 1/4 and add note at 02:18:750 - . if you think it overmapping then ignorethis.
4. 05:11:464 (5,6) - make them parallel, like
   
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5. 05:59:035 (1) - jump smaller
6. 06:03:750 (1,2,3) - Don't think the jump is necessary here. Also, I think the NC here is messy.
7. 06:03:535 (5,8,9) - move to x:252 y:188, as blanket better and better spacing (and stacked with 06:03:535 (5) - , though not noticeable)

1. 01:53:892 (1) - reversing arrow overlapped
2. 02:04:178 (1) - too far jump as Hard imo. rotate by 25 degree clock wise, the tail as the center.
3. 04:18:535 (1,2,3) - slightly reduce spacing
4. 04:22:392 (1,2,3,4) - breaking flow imo. also, switch NC of 04:23:035 (4,1) - , then adjust again.
5. 05:51:321 (5) - Ctrl+G
6. 05:57:107 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - reduce spacing? not a pattern that should be in Hard

1. 01:45:535 (2,3,1) - use same spacing?
2. 02:58:821 (5,6,1) - slightly move downwards, because auto-stack makes 5 appear higher than in editor
3. 03:03:321 (2) - suggest slowdown starting at this slider
4. 04:26:892 (2) - not recommended hiding the note directly under the reverse arrow. manual stack.
5. 04:29:892 (5,1) - switch NC
6. 05:31:607 (1) - Move tail to x:344 y:168?
7. 05:37:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - changing to 3 single notes plays better

1. 01:14:464 (6) - reversing arrow overlapped
2. 02:36:321 (1) - move to 02:36:214 - ? background music has sound here
3. 04:39:535 (8) - reduce repeating by 2. making a 1 beat break is not a bad idea.
4. 04:46:178 (6) - slightly move up. auto-stack on 04:46:821 (7) - spoils the spacing
5. 04:51:000 (1,2,3) - messy as Hard diff, imo

1. 01:39:750 (4) - try this:
   
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2. 02:38:357 - add a note?
3. 02:42:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - plays better if you change it to 4 single notes. overmapping imo.

• • 01:31:178 - add a note here maybe?
  • 02:24:321 (1,2) - I think switching these 2 on timeline would match vocals better
  06:23:035 (4) - think it'd be an epic end to add a finish to start, repeat, and end

• • 01:13:607 (2) - the end isn't perfectly stacked on top of 01:12:321 (5)
  • 01:42:107 (3) - how about moving this to the next white tick so it fits vocals better?
  • 01:47:035 (1,2,3,4) - how about this setup? to me, the objects on the red ticks dont' sound so good
  
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  • 02:41:892 (3) - not perfectly stacked on top of 2
  • 04:25:178 (4) - ctrl+G for better flow?
  05:39:107 (3) - the lyric doesn't start til 05:39:321, so I recommend moving the slider to there and end it where it originally ended, shortening the sldier by 1/2

• • 00:41:892 (1,2,3) - I feel like switchign these objects around on timeline would match the beats (and the "oohhh") in the background better :O here's an example:
  
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  • 05:15:321 (4) - why such a big jump? ):

• • 03:45:750 (2,3,4) - make a triangle out of these?
  • 05:51:321 (5) - ctrl + G would improve the circular flow here imo

• • 01:46:607 (2,3,4) - make the spacing equal here?

• • 02:23:892 (8) - just an idea, maybe you can curve the slider so that it blankets 7?
  • 02:29:464 (4) - not perfectly stacked on the tail of 1 D:
  • 03:33:321 (1,2,3,4) - imo, ctrl+G all of these will have a smoother flow, like this: (AR lowered)
  
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• • 01:28:821 (2) - not perfectly stacked on 4
  • 03:59:678 (4) - I think it'd fit vocals better if you replaced this slider with a circle and 1/2 repeating slider

Konei wrote:

On Normal:

01:13:607 (2) - Is this end intended to be stacked with the previous 5? If yes, fix it. While playing you don't notice it so it's not necessary, I don't want to break my spacing consistencies.

Besides this, I think silencing Sliderslide and Slidertick at the same time is unrankable, am I right? Uh... slidertick is not muted and you can hear it while playing.

Konei wrote:

On Normal:

01:13:607 (2) - Is this end intended to be stacked with the previous 5? If yes, fix it.

Besides this, I think silencing Sliderslide and Slidertick at the same time is unrankable, am I right?

Just some things I missed u.u

Irreversible wrote:

Konei wrote:

On Normal:

01:13:607 (2) - Is this end intended to be stacked with the previous 5? If yes, fix it.

Besides this, I think silencing Sliderslide and Slidertick at the same time is unrankable, am I right?

Just some things I missed u.u

no kd for you.. xDDD

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1. Clean

1. 00:53:464 (1,2,3,4) - avoid the stacks can be confuse for newbies imo Iknow about new skin but anyways this is hard for newbies they click all fast orz
2. 03:54:321 add somethink here gonna be really good for rhythm actually feel empty

1. 00:27:750 add somethink here for consistency with the other diff
2. 01:12:321 (5) - try to stack this with 01:13:607 (2) - tail
3. 01:46:392 (6,1) - try another placement actually look really confuse and overlaped imo
4. 05:36:750 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - trhy to make some slider there actually really hard for a newbie

1. 00:41:892 remove NC then add NC here 00:41:678 to be consistent with like xhero did on 00:27:750 (1,2,3) -
2. 00:47:035 add a circle with clap here then start spinner on 00:47:142 gonna be better for hitsounds
3. 00:54:964 whistle on the tail too for consistency with th music and with the one you add on the head
4. 05:11:678 add a circle here feel weird when you play it

1. 04:17:464 stack it under the tail of previous slider
2. 05:52:821 (3,4,5) - keep the 0.50 distance here imo

1. 01:46:607 (2,3,4) - why the distance is not the same? i preffer if you make a perfec triangle here
2. 03:00:750 is better if you finish this on 03:01:178 Or if you add a beat 03:01:178 following vocals
3. 03:01:392 ^
4. 03:02:464 conver this one in a 1/2 slider following vocals? gonna fit better here imo
5. 03:08:035 - 03:08:464 map this parts like you did on symilar place like 03:04:178 (1,2,3,4) -
6. 03:08:035 ^

1. 01:15:750 just saying the most of players dont like this circle hidden under sliders maybe you want to try another placement
2. 02:22:392 (6,7,8) - this pattern gonna look alot better if you stack 7 head with 8 body imo
3. 02:31:607 this gonna follow better vocals if you do a 1/2 slider in there imo
4. 02:33:321 (1,2,3,4,1) - this patter look kinda random and bored to play imo why you dont try some start or triangle patterns on that part gonna be more fun
5. 02:36:214 add somethink here since you map the before 1/4 and i dont understand why you ignore the last with some important beat there
6. 03:30:964 you ignore this but you map the same sound on 03:31:392
7. 04:50:250 add somethink here feel really empty when you play it
8. 04:51:642 again you ignore the strong sound here better add somethink imo

1. 00:29:892 I think you should map this part maybe conver this 00:29:678 in 1/2 slider also if you map that part gonna be good for your clap patter imo
2. 00:30:321 same here is weird how you ignore the vocal in here better map it gonna feel better for gameplay
3. 01:31:178 ^
4. 01:36:750 (1,2,3,4) - gonna be really fun If you add some 1/4 repeats slider or atleast 1/2 slider to fit the music better
5. 04:08:785 (1,2) - why you ignore the 1/4 music in this art I think gonna be better if you map it
6. 05:02:463 (1,2) - convert they 2 in a 1/2 slider since finish a stream with a slider fit better aso is better for gameplay imo
7. 06:24:535 - 06:24:642 - 06:24:750 add circles there the start spinner on 06:24:857 gonna follow better the music

• • No

• • 01:23:035 (1) - kinda nazi but one grid down makes it on the same line with previous slider
  01:25:607 (5) - I think this makes the flow more fluent
  
  02:33:107 (2,3) - I think del 2 and move 3 to 02:33:107 then makes it longer fit the vocal more.
  02:56:892 (3) - try x=324 y=348 makes the previous slider surround the circle, and you don't need to change the following slider since it also fits distance snapping
  03:50:464 (2) - make the end point a little bit right to make a better encircle for 1?
  04:15:750 (1) - try x= 244 y = 104 and makes it like
  
  04:48:321 (1,2,3) - same with previous

• • 01:13:607 (2) - I do think the slider end can stack 01:12:321 (5) - which makes the map more clean and beautiful
  
  01:21:535 (3) - why not curved slider like
  
  03:29:036 (2) - the same with previous
  04:23:892 (3) - make a parallelogram shape with 04:22:607 (4,1,2) - ?
  05:43:821 (6) - try
  

• • 02:20:250 (2) - I think if you can copy a 02:19:607 (1) - and ctrl g makes the map more fun and prettier than current , and somehow it fits the vocal
  like:
  

• I like your part. Very much.

• 01:52:821 (1) - I think ctrl+g seems have a better flow

• 01:35:035 (1) - stack the end of 01:33:321 (1) - maybe?

[ Zzz ] wrote:

CXu

01:45:535 (2,3,1) - Prev 1.10>1.00 Can you try? - Can I try what?

Natsu wrote:

Hi from your Queue

DakeDekaane

1. 01:15:750 just saying the most of players dont like this circle hidden under sliders maybe you want to try another placement /*That stack fits nicely with vocals imo
2. 02:22:392 (6,7,8) - this pattern gonna look alot better if you stack 7 head with 8 body imo /*Made a bit bigger the overlap, but not totally covered.
3. 02:31:607 this gonna follow better vocals if you do a 1/2 slider in there imo /*Joint (2,3) into a slider, I think it fits better.
4. 02:33:321 (1,2,3,4,1) - this patter look kinda random and bored to play imo why you dont try some start or triangle patterns on that part gonna be more fun /*I remapped a bit this part due to previous suggestion, and it was no random :c
5. 02:36:214 add somethink here since you map the before 1/4 and i dont understand why you ignore the last with some important beat there /*I'm following the bassy percusion sounds (idk how it's called orz) so I think it's fine, I tried adding something there but sounds a bit weird to me.
6. 03:30:964 you ignore this but you map the same sound on 03:31:392 /*Added note.
7. 04:50:250 add somethink here feel really empty when you play it /*I think it's ok to have a tiny gap, as the next part builds a bit of tension for the kiai
8. 04:51:642 again you ignore the strong sound here better add somethink imo /*As my previous part.

Well thats all I can suggest here also shooting a star i really like this song and map

alacat wrote:

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