Aoyama Misao - Distance · forum

Reat

Joined May 2011

Reat 2013-04-27T04:31:05+00:00

Hello!

[Xinely's Normal]

00:13:704 (4,5) - move 2 girds down
01:11:719 (5) - (160,90)
01:29:366 (3) - (260,124)
01:50:101 (1) - (168,116)
02:37:748 (3) - How about this? little fix.

SPOILER

03:36:645 (5,6) - move 1 grid left
03:37:748 (1) - I think this circle place (44,344) better.

[HARD]

00:08:962 (4) - (488,152) 더 나을것 같습니다.
00:47:344 (3) - (52,128) 로 옮기고, 슬라이더 모양을 약간 바꿔주는건 어떤가요?

SPOILER

00:49:660 (4) - (256,299) 00:50:984 (3) - 의 끝점과 겹치게 하였습니다.
00:51:756 (5) - 2 그리드 오른쪽으로
01:17:785 (4) - 1 그리드 오른쪽으로
01:19:550 (4,5) - 슬라이더의 끝과 일치하게
02:05:432 (5) - (244,84) 모양과 동선에 더 어울리는것 같습니다.
02:05:542 (6) - (284,96)
02:10:726 (3) - 한 그리드 위
02:12:491 (6,7) - 전 슬라이더의 끝과 일치하게 [대부분 좌표 1의 차이] 매핑 스타일인진 모르겠으나, 일치되어 있는것이 있어 모딩합니다.
02:19:550 (6,7) - ^
03:26:609 (5,6) - ^
03:29:256 (2,3) - ^
03:33:667 (6,7) - ^

[Insane]

00:38:410 (2) - 을 00:37:307 (4) - 과 겹치게 (367,164)
01:22:197 (2,3) - 슬라이더 끝과 일치하게
02:22:197 (2,3) - ^
02:29:256 (2,3) - ^
02:38:520 (3) - 두 그리드 밑으로
02:42:160 (3) - 슬라이더 끝과 일치하게
02:47:344 (3,4) - ^

사소한것만 다 잡아버리는 모딩이네요..
이번 맵도 랭크하시길 바랍니다!

GOOD LUCK

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-04-27T04:56:33+00:00

Reat wrote:
Hello!

[HARD]
00:08:962 (4) - (488,152) 더 나을것 같습니다.
00:47:344 (3) - (52,128) 로 옮기고, 슬라이더 모양을 약간 바꿔주는건 어떤가요?
SPOILER
00:49:660 (4) - (256,299) 00:50:984 (3) - 의 끝점과 겹치게 하였습니다.
00:51:756 (5) - 2 그리드 오른쪽으로
01:17:785 (4) - 1 그리드 오른쪽으로
01:19:550 (4,5) - 슬라이더의 끝과 일치하게
02:05:432 (5) - (244,84) 모양과 동선에 더 어울리는것 같습니다.
02:05:542 (6) - (284,96)
02:10:726 (3) - 한 그리드 위
02:12:491 (6,7) - 전 슬라이더의 끝과 일치하게 [대부분 좌표 1의 차이] 매핑 스타일인진 모르겠으나, 일치되어 있는것이 있어 모딩합니다.
02:19:550 (6,7) - ^
03:26:609 (5,6) - ^
03:29:256 (2,3) - ^
03:33:667 (6,7) - ^
[Insane]
00:38:410 (2) - 을 00:37:307 (4) - 과 겹치게 (367,164)
01:22:197 (2,3) - 슬라이더 끝과 일치하게
02:22:197 (2,3) - ^
02:29:256 (2,3) - ^
02:38:520 (3) - 두 그리드 밑으로
02:42:160 (3) - 슬라이더 끝과 일치하게
02:47:344 (3,4) - ^

사소한것만 다 잡아버리는 모딩이네요..
이번 맵도 랭크하시길 바랍니다!

GOOD LUCK

Thanks for modding~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-04-27T05:54:45+00:00

Reat wrote:
Hello!

[Xinely's Normal]
00:13:704 (4,5) - move 2 girds down done
01:11:719 (5) - (160,90) oh no, remove in 01:11:498 -
01:29:366 (3) - (260,124) done
01:50:101 (1) - (168,116) done
02:37:748 (3) - How about this? little fix. it's okay imo
SPOILER
03:36:645 (5,6) - move 1 grid left done
03:37:748 (1) - I think this circle place (44,344) better. break spacing (1,08x)
GOOD LUCK

Natsu wrote:
Hi from PM request

Xinely Normal:
00:09:513 have to be a new combo he is necesary for consistency with other diffs also i don thing this long repeat slider fit the song is ignoring some important sounds an vocals btw atleast NC is necesary no, every 2 stanza
00:13:263 again here NC for consistency with other diffs also to tell the player the start of 1/2 rhythm here ^
00:34:219 ups this repeat dont fit music i thing you just put it for symetry maybe trhy another rhythm e____e
00:46:572 missing whistle fiting alot with music (finish+whistle) also for consistency with the other diffs gonna be nice if you add /me slaps xinely *slap baka natsu, it's itentional since whistle almost have no different with normal sound*
01:09:513 same as above ^
00:48:337 (3,4,1) - this part look so bored why you dont 00:49:439 flip vertical this i show you with a image i thing better flow for the map:
SPOILER
00:46:572 (1,3) - pattern desu
00:53:189 (4,5,1) - this 3 hits can be confuse taking in consideration this is the easy diff of the map maybe convert (4,5) in a 1/2 slider it's okay imo o3o, will look other opinion
01:00:696 finish in the tail or maybe a whistle? have whistle nyeeh
01:11:278 (3,4,5) - same as 00:53:189 same too hue
01:29:145 flip horizontal this better flow (fix the distance) nu
01:49:660 (4,5,1) - same as 00:53:189 hope you change it cuz all the new palyers gonna play this diff same again :3
02:02:013 remove this i thing is not necesary after the before break feel better starting with vocals in 02:02:454 but in first kiai u not said about that :3
02:04:219 (4,5) - i hate do nazi suggestion but you can improve the blanked fixed, i hope `-`
02:26:278 (4,5,6) - repeat slider better? i thing xinely is mad and wanna make newbies fail YEAH I'M MAD >:3
03:20:542 convert this in a repeat slider so you can fit better the vocals on 03:20:763 and 03:20:984 also spinner should start on 03:21:094 this is highly suggested o3o or you get a slap nu
03:26:498 (4,5) - 1/2 slider fit better with music and ismore easy for newbies aaa, slider all in normal? e_____e
03:31:572 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - plz no xinely stop being mad why you wanna kill newbies in the end of song xD make it easy since new players wanna fc normal diffs so this is the end of the song try to make it easy an clean or they gnna slap you for the eternity :c yeah, fixed

Thanks :3

wa 'w'

[code]osu file format v12

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[Metadata]
Title:Distance ~In Your Love~
TitleUnicode:Distance ~In Your Love~
Artist:Aoyama Misao
ArtistUnicode:青山操
Creator:Gloria Guard
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution SPECIAL mix
Tags:Xinely
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Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-04-27T06:12:00+00:00

Update~

P A N

2,349 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-04-27T07:08:31+00:00

Hi GG ><

[Xinely's Normal]

01:03:337 (2) - move it to 352|144 to a perfect blanket with (1)
01:14:807 (3) - move to 212|148
01:24:513 (2) - move to 336|132 to a perfect blanket with (1)
01:29:366 (3) - move to 252|116
02:05:101 (5) - move center to 48|248 and move tail to 24|196
02:20:101 (1) - move center to 136|188 and move tail down 1 grid
02:37:748 (3) - move the forth point to 480|308
02:42:160 - maybe add note here >_>
03:09:513 (3) - maybe move to 320|144
03:12:601 (3) - move to 208|228
03:17:454 (5) - copy from (3) Ctrl+H Ctrl+G I think it's better http://puu.sh/2HVuf.jpg
03:24:954 (2) - move to 336|136
03:32:454 (5) - what about NC here

[Hard]

00:14:807 (1) - move to 312|336
00:33:337 (3) - down 1 grid
00:45:579 - what about add note here
00:50:984 (3) - move to 212|256 to be a traingle
00:54:403 - add note here?
01:14:366 (4) - left 1 grid and move center up 1 grid
01:50:101 (1) - move tail to 280|272
01:58:484 (2) - right 4 grid
02:08:479 - I think add note here is better.
02:24:954 (4) - move center to 496|308

[Insane]

00:37:087 (3) - right 1 grid
00:54:954 (5) - move tail left 1 grid
01:02:895 (2) - move tail right 2 grid
01:14:145 (3) - left 1 grid down 1 grid
01:14:807 (5) - right 2 grid
01:32:013 (4,5,6,1) - move them left 1 grid
02:09:954 (2) - left 1 grid
02:14:145 (3) - left 3 grid
02:14:366 (4) - move tail left 1 grid
03:34:660 (2) - left 2 grid

Nice song nice map ><
Good Luck for rank

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-04-27T07:41:18+00:00

P A N wrote:
Hi GG ><

[Hard]

00:14:807 (1) - move to 312|336
00:33:337 (3) - down 1 grid
00:45:579 - what about add note here
00:50:984 (3) - move to 212|256 to be a traingle
00:54:403 - add note here?
01:14:366 (4) - left 1 grid and move center up 1 grid
01:50:101 (1) - move tail to 280|272
01:58:484 (2) - right 4 grid
02:08:479 - I think add note here is better.
02:24:954 (4) - move center to 496|308

[Insane]

00:37:087 (3) - right 1 grid
00:54:954 (5) - move tail left 1 grid
01:02:895 (2) - move tail right 2 grid
01:14:145 (3) - left 1 grid down 1 grid
01:14:807 (5) - right 2 grid
01:32:013 (4,5,6,1) - move them left 1 grid
02:09:954 (2) - left 1 grid
02:14:145 (3) - left 3 grid
02:14:366 (4) - move tail left 1 grid
03:34:660 (2) - left 2 grid

Nice song nice map ><
Good Luck for rank

Thanks for modding~

ritsu-tanaika

468 posts

Joined September 2012

ritsu-tanaika 2013-04-27T12:13:47+00:00

Hello~ I'll try my best to mod!

GENERAL: try to make the audio or hitsounds a little louder. the chorus can go up to 60-80%

XINELY'S NORMAL:

01:02:013 (5) - This should be a new combo because there is too much time apart from previous note

02:02:013 (4) - The same applies for this note ^

02:41:278 (3) - A circle should be added, which make s02:42:160 (4) -

HARD:

00:44:587 (4) - Maybe a circle note before the slider? If you follow, the slider should be shortened

01:07:087 (2,3,4) - The pattern is quite hard to follow. Perhaps try to make the 2 closer to the centre

02:35:101 (3) - Just a suggestion, maybe make the circle underneath the slider?

03:07:528 (1) - From this section, try to make the audio louder, maybe 40-50%?

03:37:307 (4,5,1) - Consider changing to a triple hit as a final

Sorry, but I am not good at mapping insane difficulties. only hard is my limit

Anyways, hope I helped!

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-04-27T13:03:48+00:00

ritsu-tanaika wrote:
Hello~ I'll try my best to mod!

HARD:

00:44:587 (4) - Maybe a circle note before the slider? If you follow, the slider should be shortened

01:07:087 (2,3,4) - The pattern is quite hard to follow. Perhaps try to make the 2 closer to the centre

02:35:101 (3) - Just a suggestion, maybe make the circle underneath the slider?

03:07:528 (1) - From this section, try to make the audio louder, maybe 40-50%?

03:37:307 (4,5,1) - Consider changing to a triple hit as a final

Sorry, but I am not good at mapping insane difficulties. only hard is my limit

Anyways, hope I helped!

Thanks for modding

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-04-27T13:11:36+00:00

fix all in ritsu's mod
EDIT: lazy add post count again

Andrea wrote:
~Xinely's Normal~
Reduce OD and AR by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings, also because they're too high. done

00:30:689 (1) - I'd completely remove this slider and let start the map again on the next one. it's okay imo
01:10:395 (2,3,4) - These sliders could be stacked together if you disable the grid snap. try fix this
03:16:572 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing, please make sure to fix it correctly with distance snap. eh? okay changed

Thanks 4 mod all

Nyan >w<

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62234
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Distance ~In Your Love~
TitleUnicode:Distance ~In Your Love~
Artist:Aoyama Misao
ArtistUnicode:青山操
Creator:Gloria Guard
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution SPECIAL mix
Tags:Xinely
BeatmapID:245111
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272,244,58484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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404,312,66425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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196,308,162160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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468,248,163484,6,0,P|488:208|472:140,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,200,165689,2,0,P|80:240|32:268,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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348,240,189072,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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132,296,191719,2,0,P|172:320|240:324,1,100
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228,40,193925,2,0,P|182:51|131:96,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Last edited by Xinely 2013-04-27T13:54:52+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-04-27T13:14:41+00:00

update

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-04-27T13:42:57+00:00

~Xinely's Normal~

Reduce OD and AR by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings, also because they're too high.

00:30:689 (1) - I'd completely remove this slider and let start the map again on the next one.
01:10:395 (2,3,4) - These sliders could be stacked together if you disable the grid snap.
03:16:572 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing, please make sure to fix it correctly with distance snap.

~Hard~

Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

00:43:042 (1,2) - Try to avoid the small overlap between these two sliders, it doesn't look so good.
02:07:748 (1,2) - I don't know why but this stack confused me during playing, I'd prefer if you place (2) somewhere else.

~Insane~

00:41:719 (3,4) - Try to avoid the small overlap between these two sliders, it doesn't look so good.
01:04:219 (1,2,3,4,5) - These jumps feels really random for me, space them normally instead.
01:16:351 (6,7,1) - Inconsistent spacing, please make sure to fix it correctly with distance snap.
02:25:395 (1,2,3,4,5) - These jumps feels really random for me, space them normally instead.
03:17:675 (4,5,6,1) - Try to avoid the small overlap between these two sliders, it doesn't look so good.

ritsu-tanaika

468 posts

Joined September 2012

ritsu-tanaika 2013-04-27T13:43:25+00:00

is the same person allowed to mod twice? once before and after update

Gloria Guard

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Gloria Guard 2013-04-27T13:46:16+00:00

ritsu-tanaika wrote:
is the same person allowed to mod twice? once before and after update

I don't have a valid reason that you suggested
And it is not a big problem

ritsu-tanaika

468 posts

Joined September 2012

ritsu-tanaika 2013-04-27T13:50:34+00:00

thanks, i just dont want to make mistake here

Gloria Guard

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Gloria Guard 2013-04-27T14:01:33+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~Hard~
Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
Hp 6 increase
00:43:042 (1,2) - Try to avoid the small overlap between these two sliders, it doesn't look so good. nice! fix
02:07:748 (1,2) - I don't know why but this stack confused me during playing, I'd prefer if you place (2) somewhere else.nice fix

~Insane~
00:41:719 (3,4) - Try to avoid the small overlap between these two sliders, it doesn't look so good. fix
01:04:219 (1,2,3,4,5) - These jumps feels really random for me, space them normally instead. This is intended However, the direction of modified
01:16:351 (6,7,1) - Inconsistent spacing, please make sure to fix it correctly with distance snap. nice ~ fix
02:25:395 (1,2,3,4,5) - These jumps feels really random for me, space them normally instead. fix
03:17:675 (4,5,6,1) - Try to avoid the small overlap between these two sliders, it doesn't look so good.Good

Thanks for modding!

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-04-28T03:45:00+00:00

summoned via ingame pm

Modding Guide:

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It'll be better if you followed this
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General

add "ddr" to the tags? some people might be lazy to wrote "dancedance revolution" in search tab imo

Xinely's Normal

00:13:704 (4,5)- : not quite bad, but I prefer to arrange them like this:
SPOILER
00:41:278 (3)- : ctrl+j this would be better
01:24:513 (2)- : move this to x344 y132
01:54:513 (3)- : put this to x204 y332
01:57:160 (1)- : finish would fit
02:05:101 (5)- : put this to x84 y272 to make better blanketing with previous slider
02:07:748 (4)- : the flow is broken I suppose, ctrl+h this
02:12:160 (6)- : copy and paste previous slider? this slider is more curved than previous and next sliders
02:20:101 (1)- : x104 y160
02:27:160 (1)- : ctrl+j this
02:37:748 (3)- : 3rd slider point x396 y308 4th slider point to x468 y312
02:42:160 (4)- : x188 y320
02:44:807 (3)- : add finish on head
02:45:689 (5)- : copy 3's slider and paste it here and ctrl+< it
03:19:219 (2)- : move this to x240 y316 and last slider point 1 grid up
03:33:116 (6)- : this rhythm isn't fit imo, drag this into 03:33:337 and shorten it. I know you want to follow vocal here, so after that add circle on 03:33:998 here

Hard

00:54:292 (2,3)- : you followed vocal at previous part, so why at here didn't follow vocal? I suggest to add circle on 00:54:403 here
02:27:050 (x)- : add circle here? it follow vocal better

Insane

01:14:366 (4)- : put this to x144 y344 to make better jump with previous also made the same distances between 2's slider head
02:26:278 (5,6)- : flip them? like this perhaps
SPOILER

that's all from me, good luck ;3

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-04-28T04:10:31+00:00

- t e n n y a - wrote:
summoned via ingame pm

General
add "ddr" to the tags? some people might be lazy to wrote "dancedance revolution" in search tab imo
ok add
Hard
00:54:292 (2,3)- : you followed vocal at previous part, so why at here didn't follow vocal? I suggest to add circle on 00:54:403 hereok
02:27:050 (x)- : add circle here? it follow vocal betterok
Insane
01:14:366 (4)- : put this to x144 y344 to make better jump with previous also made the same distances between 2's slider head[/color]
02:26:278 (5,6)- : flip them? like this perhaps no
SPOILER

Thanks for modding~!

that's all from me, good luck ;3

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-04-28T05:19:01+00:00

- t e n n y a - wrote:
summoned via ingame pm

Modding Guide:
Unrankable
You Need to Change/Add This
It'll be better if you followed this
Suggestions
Xinely's Normal
00:13:704 (4,5)- : not quite bad, but I prefer to arrange them like this:
SPOILER
done
00:41:278 (3)- : ctrl+j this would be better itentional ~
01:24:513 (2)- : move this to x344 y132 done
01:54:513 (3)- : put this to x204 y332 nice fix
01:57:160 (1)- : finish would fit
02:05:101 (5)- : put this to x84 y272 to make better blanketing with previous slider done
02:07:748 (4)- : the flow is broken I suppose, ctrl+h this itentional
02:12:160 (6)- : copy and paste previous slider? this slider is more curved than previous and next sliders done
02:20:101 (1)- : x104 y160 kk
02:27:160 (1)- : ctrl+j this no i guess
02:37:748 (3)- : 3rd slider point x396 y308 4th slider point to x468 y312 fixed but 4 point changed with my own
02:42:160 (4)- : x188 y320 k
02:44:807 (3)- : add finish on head yes
02:45:689 (5)- : copy 3's slider and paste it here and ctrl+< it uumm
03:19:219 (2)- : move this to x240 y316 and last slider point 1 grid up fix with my own
03:33:116 (6)- : this rhythm isn't fit imo, drag this into 03:33:337 and shorten it. I know you want to follow vocal here, so after that add circle on 03:33:998 here i guess, fix
that's all from me, good luck ;3

Thanks 4 mod nya :3

fix

osu file format v12

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Title:Distance ~In Your Love~
TitleUnicode:Distance ~In Your Love~
Artist:Aoyama Misao
ArtistUnicode:青山操
Creator:Gloria Guard
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution SPECIAL mix
Tags:Xinely dancedance revolution
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nanda2009

925 posts

Joined October 2009

nanda2009 2013-04-28T09:54:34+00:00

Hi.

[General]

Many part of the map's hitsounds are unhearable... For example 00:14:807 (1)'s finish. Increase the volume.
I suggest you to use default hitsound. Since it's more hearable and quite nice when used with this song. imo.
[Tags : Xinely dancedance revolution] change tag 'dancedance' to 'dance'. So we can search this map using 'dance dance revolution". Also, add 'ddr'

[Xinely's Normal]

00:30:689 (1) - instead of a long slider. How about something like this
SPOILER
00:34:219 (3,4) - I prefer this, more readable for beginner :
SPOILER
00:41:278 (3) - same as 00:24:219 (3). if you do this, add a note at 00:42:601
00:55:616 (4) - for better flow, move this so it will look like this :
SPOILER
01:14:807 (3) - I prefer something like this, again, it's more readable :
SPOILER
01:25:837 (4) - ^
01:18:116 (3) - quite same as 00:55:616 (4)
01:32:454 - 01:46:572 - this part is notrly good for break time imo. fill it.
02:32:454 (1,2,3,4) - rather than using clap on slider tick. I prefer something like this, so the clap will be used on each slider's tail :
SPOILER
02:43:484 (1,2) - how about something like this :
SPOILER
03:04:219 (1) - extend this to 03:07:748
03:17:234 (4) - same as 00:55:616 (4)

[Insane]

00:44:366 (4,1) - delete (1) and make (4) repeated once
00:45:689 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - a bit overmapped. change it to something like this :
SPOILER
01:00:248 (6,7,8,9,1) - move it to right so all of the notes are inside the grid and viewable on all resolutions.
01:32:454 - 01:46:572 - this part is notrly good for break time imo. fill it.
01:53:631 (1) - blocked by 01:52:969 (5). move it to (168,136) so it'll be viewable. delete (2). and make this slider repeated once
02:22:197 (2,3) - not stacked to (1), to make it more neat ( :> ), stack it.
03:36:866 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - a bit overmapped. change it to something like this :
SPOILER

too much random jumps. imo.

[Hard] is quite good. nicely mapped. so no mod for that diff.

GL.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-04-28T10:44:49+00:00

fix little

EDIT: @Roxas : fix in normal
Thanks :3

EDIT again : @nattap : no fix but i fix with my own

fix

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Distance.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62234
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7748,46572,170101
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Distance ~In Your Love~
TitleUnicode:Distance ~In Your Love~
Artist:Aoyama Misao
ArtistUnicode:青山操
Creator:Gloria Guard
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution SPECIAL mix
Tags:Xinely dancedance revolution
BeatmapID:245111
BeatmapSetID:89930

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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180,100,124219,2,0,P|145:129|119:176,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,272,125101,2,0,P|44:240|23:195,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,104,125984,5,2,0:0:0:0:
136,32,126425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,60,126866,2,0,L|324:120,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,127748,2,0,P|196:248|120:252,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,128,129513,5,6,0:0:0:0:
404,68,129954,2,0,P|416:120|392:184,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,212,130616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,130837,2,0,P|339:301|277:329,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,316,131719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,252,132160,2,0,P|79:222|50:161,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,104,133042,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,60,133484,2,0,P|256:48|328:60,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,96,134145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,144,134366,2,0,P|264:156|192:144,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,64,135248,2,0,B|104:96|104:152|104:152|104:200|48:228,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,324,136572,5,6,0:0:0:0:
164,328,137013,2,0,P|208:336|280:320,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,296,137675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,260,137895,2,0,P|376:234|416:172,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,100,138778,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,64,139219,2,0,P|240:96|176:108,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,160,140101,6,0,P|140:192|204:204,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,288,140984,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,296,141425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,256,141645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,208,141866,2,0,P|420:144|420:52,2,150,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,184,143631,6,0,P|276:136|228:104,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,144513,2,0,P|121:189|127:236,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,312,145395,2,0,P|240:304|284:272,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,146278,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,224,146498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,184,146719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,84,147160,6,0,P|376:88|312:68,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,104,148042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,144,148484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,196,148925,2,0,P|113:263|238:294,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,112,151131,2,0,P|221:144|275:212,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,152454,5,6,0:0:0:0:
356,328,152895,2,0,P|424:336|484:224,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,136,154219,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,84,154660,2,0,P|336:76|276:188,1,200
296,276,155984,6,0,L|192:312,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,212,156866,2,0,L|280:176,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,276,157748,2,0,B|360:276|360:276|396:308|468:308|500:264,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,196,159072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,132,159513,6,0,P|324:88|276:56,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,160395,2,0,P|225:135|168:132,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,224,161278,2,0,P|163:226|112:251,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,320,162160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,324,162601,2,0,P|336:332|400:312,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,256,163484,6,0,P|480:216|464:148,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,132,164366,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,160,164807,2,0,P|239:139|172:156,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,176,165469,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,165689,2,0,P|72:248|24:276,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,166572,12,4,170101,0:0:0:0:
256,192,184109,12,0,185984,0:0:0:0:
84,216,187748,6,0,P|148:272|276:284,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,240,189072,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,148,189513,2,0,P|244:92|116:80,1,200
84,92,190616,2,0,L|36:124,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,216,191278,5,0,0:0:0:0:
132,296,191719,2,0,P|172:320|240:324,1,100
196,232,192601,2,0,P|241:220|292:175,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,92,193484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,40,193925,2,0,P|182:51|131:96,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,168,194807,6,0,P|72:216|92:276,1,100
184,264,195689,2,0,P|200:216|180:156,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,148,196572,2,0,P|276:101|292:53,1,100
340,40,197234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,52,197454,2,0,P|399:98|383:146,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,244,198337,6,0,P|376:296|320:316,1,100
240,316,199219,2,0,P|186:335|136:316,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,260,200101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,200,200542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,200984,12,4,203631,0:0:0:0:
256,196,204513,5,2,0:0:0:0:
340,140,204954,2,0,P|344:88|308:36,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,104,205837,2,0,P|235:156|271:208,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,232,206498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,268,206719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,268,207160,5,2,0:0:0:0:
500,200,207601,2,0,P|496:148|460:92,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,104,208263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,112,208484,2,0,P|328:132|264:140,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,76,209366,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,144,209807,2,0,P|148:192|196:232,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,296,210689,5,4,0:0:0:0:
340,252,211131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,192,211572,2,0,P|432:144|416:80,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,96,212234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,112,212454,2,0,P|280:136|228:144,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,180,213337,2,0,P|89:181|40:200,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,248,213998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,292,214219,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,320,214660,2,0,P|224:336|276:316,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,228,215542,2,0,P|281:205|303:154,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,100,216425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,136,216645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,172,216866,2,0,L|76:248,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,312,217748,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Last edited by Xinely 2013-04-28T11:39:51+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Roxas

osu! Alumni

1,354 posts

Joined August 2011

Roxas 2013-04-28T10:46:14+00:00

Hi, M4M

[General]

Change BG, use this http://puu.sh/2IFlc.jpg
Why do you have 3 same sliderslide? o_o
00:33:778 - 00:35:542 - 00:37:307 - In parts like these where there's that sound like a soft-whistle use the standard soft-whistle (apart when you use another hitsound like here 00:56:719 (6) - in the normal) if you want :3

[Xinely's Normal]
01:58:925 (3) - Move in 236|196

For the rest is ok °w°

[Hard]
00:45:469 (2) - Move in 476|156
00:54:292 (2,3,4,5) - It's better if you use 1.0x distance
01:49:881 (5,1) - Remove antijump
01:53:410 (4,1) - ^
02:26:498 (4) - Curve like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/726971
02:49:881 (6) - Move in 144|308

[Insane]
00:10:616 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/2IG0d.jpg
01:00:689 - Drum-finish
01:01:351 - ^

For the rest is ok :3 Good luck!

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-04-28T10:58:38+00:00

nanda2009 wrote:
Hi.

[General]

Many part of the map's hitsounds are unhearable... For example 00:14:807 (1)'s finish. Increase the volume.
I suggest you to use default hitsound. Since it's more hearable and quite nice when used with this song. imo.
[Tags : Xinely dancedance revolution] change tag 'dancedance' to 'dance'. So we can search this map using 'dance dance revolution". Also, add 'ddr'
ok

[Insane]

00:44:366 (4,1) - delete (1) and make (4) repeated once ok
00:45:689 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - a bit overmapped. change it to something like this :
SPOILER
i don't understand.. No
01:00:248 (6,7,8,9,1) - move it to right so all of the notes are inside the grid and viewable on all resolutions. No
01:32:454 - 01:46:572 - this part is notrly good for break time imo. fill it. No
01:53:631 (1) - blocked by 01:52:969 (5). move it to (168,136) so it'll be viewable. delete (2). and make this slider repeated once not big problem.. No
02:22:197 (2,3) - not stacked to (1), to make it more neat ( :> ), stack it. nice ok
03:36:866 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - a bit overmapped. change it to something like this :
SPOILER
same.. No

too much random jumps. imo.

[Hard] is quite good. nicely mapped. so no mod for that diff.

GL.

Thanks for modding

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-04-28T10:59:53+00:00

Roxas wrote:
Hi, M4M

[General]

Change BG, use this http://puu.sh/2IFlc.jpg
Why do you have 3 same sliderslide? o_o
00:33:778 - 00:35:542 - 00:37:307 - In parts like these where there's that sound like a soft-whistle use the standard soft-whistle (apart when you use another hitsound like here 00:56:719 (6) - in the normal) if you want :3
ok

[Hard]
00:45:469 (2) - Move in 476|156 ok
00:54:292 (2,3,4,5) - It's better if you use 1.0x distance No
01:49:881 (5,1) - Remove antijump No
01:53:410 (4,1) - ^ ^
02:26:498 (4) - Curve like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/726971 No
02:49:881 (6) - Move in 144|308 ok

[Insane]
00:10:616 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/2IG0d.jpg ok
01:00:689 - Drum-finish ok
01:01:351 - ^ ok

For the rest is ok :3 Good luck!

Thanks for modding~

nattap_old

121 posts

Joined April 2012

nattap_old 2013-04-28T11:35:00+00:00

Hi

[Normal]
00:13:263 (3) - this note don't have any supporting music or lyrics (lyrics actually come at 00:13:373)
02:43:484 (1,2) - beat seems weird I suggest http://puu.sh/2IGYW.jpg
03:32:454 (5) - curve up ?

[Hard]
01:08:410 (4) - too far. Only that note have far distance compared with others nearby.
01:47:895 (4,5) and 01:49:660 (4,5) - suggest to be the same distance

[Insane]
It's ok

you've made me Impressed with your map

Good luck

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-04-28T11:41:00+00:00

nattap wrote:
Hi

[Hard]
01:08:410 (4) - too far. Only that note have far distance compared with others nearby. No
01:47:895 (4,5) and 01:49:660 (4,5) - suggest to be the same distance No

[Insane]
It's ok

you've made me Impressed with your map
Good luck

Thanks for modding~!

Broccoly

1,359 posts

Joined May 2012

Broccoly 2013-05-01T04:33:36+00:00

인게임리퀫 :3

인센 irc

01:34 Broccoly: 맵이 참 깔끔하시네요 ㄷ
01:34 Broccoly: 군더더기없는
01:34 Gloria Guard: 그런가여 'ㅈ'
01:34 Gloria Guard: 그런말을 들으니 다행인..
01:35 Broccoly: 네 전체적으로 잘 정리됬다는 느낌이 드네염
01:35 Gloria Guard: lol
01:35 Broccoly: 00:32:454 (1) - 음 저라면 빨간점이랑 아래 하얀점 사이에 하얀점 추가해서 약간 더 자연스럽게 보이게 만들텐데
01:36 Broccoly: 온리 suggestionㅋ
01:36 Gloria Guard: 잠시만영
01:36 Gloria Guard: 밑부분을 둥글게?
01:36 Broccoly: 네 왼쪽으루 약간
01:36 Gloria Guard: 음
01:36 Gloria Guard: 그것은 좋은제안이네여
01:36 Gloria Guard: fix
01:36 Broccoly: 근데 이건 슬라이더 스타일 문제라
01:36 Broccoly: 올ㅋ 굿굿
01:37 Broccoly: 01:02:454 (1,2) - 
01:37 Broccoly: 키아이 시작이고 보컬이 급 높아지니
01:37 Broccoly: 점프를 추천
01:37 Broccoly: 01:13:042 (1,2) - 이런 점프용
01:37 Gloria Guard: nice~
01:38 Gloria Guard: 하지만 저는
01:38 Gloria Guard: 3,4,5번을 blanket 하는게 더이뻐보여서
01:38 Gloria Guard: 디스턴스만 늘릴게요
01:38 Broccoly: oki~
01:39 Broccoly: 01:32:454 (1) - 
01:39 Broccoly: 이거슬..
01:39 Broccoly: 중앙 좀 위쪽으로 옮겨보시는건 어떤가요
01:39 Broccoly: 3번 머리 좀 위로해서
01:40 Gloria Guard: 음
01:40 Broccoly: 지금은 키아이 끝내는 맛이 좀 덜하네요
01:40 Gloria Guard: 그러면
01:40 Gloria Guard: 3번을 2번이랑 blanket하고
01:40 Gloria Guard: 4,5,6번을 조금위로올린다음에
01:40 Gloria Guard: 1번을 중앙쪽으로 옮겨볼게요
01:40 Broccoly: 굿아이디어
01:41 Gloria Guard: fix~
01:42 Broccoly: 01:54:072 (2) - 이거슬 4번이랑 blanket 되도록..?
01:42 Gloria Guard: 파란색 4번노트?
01:42 Gloria Guard: 뒤에있는거
01:42 Broccoly: 그 하양 4번이욤
01:42 Gloria Guard: 하얀 4번
01:43 Gloria Guard: 음
01:43 Broccoly: 커서 움직임이 좀더 재밌어진다고 봐염
01:43 Gloria Guard: 근데 제생각에는 그것도 좋지만
01:43 Gloria Guard: 뒤에 파란색 5번노트에다가 스택을하고
01:43 Gloria Guard: 7번슬라 머리에 blanket 한다음에
01:44 Gloria Guard: 그다음에 3~4번을 을 밑으로하고서
01:44 Gloria Guard: 모양을 삼각형으로 하는게 더좋다고 생각하는데
01:45 Broccoly: 오 그것도 좋네요 
01:45 Broccoly: 근데 좀 답답한 느낌이 들지 않을까요?
01:45 Gloria Guard: 스택한게 좀 많아서?
01:45 Broccoly: 01:50:984 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - 이쪽부근은 시원시원하게 넘어오는데
01:45 Broccoly: 음..
01:45 Gloria Guard: 그러면 첫번째 제안하신걸로 할게여
01:46 Gloria Guard: 너무 뭉쳐져있는것도 좀그러니..
01:46 Broccoly: 넵:D
01:46 Broccoly: 아
01:46 Broccoly: 방금 그것도 좋네요 지금보니
01:46 Broccoly: 4에서 5로 넘어갈때
01:46 Broccoly: 보컬도 갑자기 뛰어오르니
01:46 Gloria Guard: 음
01:46 Broccoly: 뭉쳤다 피는것도 좋을듯
01:46 Gloria Guard: 근데 첫번재 제안하신거
01:47 Broccoly: 네
01:47 Gloria Guard: 약간 이해안되는데 예시를 보여주실수있나여
01:47 Broccoly: 넵 잠시
01:47 Broccoly: 대충 http://puu.sh/2JWan.jpg 이런식으루
01:48 Broccoly: 2번을 쏙
01:48 Gloria Guard: 좋네영 저것도
01:49 Gloria Guard: fix~
01:49 Broccoly: :3 
01:49 Broccoly: 이건 좀 나지인데..
01:50 Broccoly: 02:13:484 (2,4) - 퍼펙 블랭캣뜨
01:50 Gloria Guard: 이런나지는 좋아해서 괜찮아여
01:50 Gloria Guard: fix
01:50 Gloria Guard: 그리드모딩을 조금싫어하는것뿐..
01:50 Broccoly: 그건 저두요 ㅋㅋ
01:51 Broccoly: 02:29:587 (4) - 이거슬
01:51 Broccoly: 5번 꼬리에 스택?
01:52 Gloria Guard: nice
01:52 Gloria Guard: 비트들어보니 알맞네요
01:52 Broccoly: 굿굳
01:54 Broccoly: 음..03:18:337 (1) -  이걸 좀더 예쁘게?
01:54 Gloria Guard: blanket할게여
01:55 Broccoly: 넵 아니면 그 중간에 볼록하게 나온거슬
01:55 Broccoly: 슬라이더 중앙으로 옮겨서
01:55 Broccoly: 비트 잡아주는 역할을 시켜줘도 좋을듯요
01:56 Gloria Guard: 넴
01:56 Broccoly: 끗!
01:56 Gloria Guard: 허..
01:57 Gloria Guard: 정말 끝인가영
01:57 Broccoly: ㅠ제 능력의 한계
01:57 Broccoly: 더이상은 안보이네요
01:58 Broccoly: 아
01:58 Gloria Guard: owo?
01:58 Broccoly: 음 이것도 나지인데
01:58 Broccoly: 03:23:631 (1,2,5) - 요 슬라이더들
01:58 Broccoly: 블랭캣사이 갭을 서로 비슷하게 맞춰주는것도 좋을듯
01:59 Broccoly: 아
01:59 Broccoly: 2,5,보라1 번 슬라이더
01:59 Gloria Guard: 선말하는건가여
01:59 Broccoly: 2에서 5로 넘어갈때 갭이랑 5에서 1로 넘어갈때랑
02:00 Broccoly: 음 뭐라하지 그 슬라이더 사이 틈새간격이요
02:00 Gloria Guard: mehh....
02:00 Broccoly: ㅋㅋ
02:00 Gloria Guard: 틈새간격이라..
02:00 Gloria Guard: 저건 약간 멘붕패턴이라고해서..
02:00 Gloria Guard: 저만의 스타일 패턴..
02:00 Broccoly: ㅋㅋㅋ
02:00 Gloria Guard: 저건 노첸지할게연
02:00 Broccoly: 올라잇
02:01 Broccoly: 노말하드는 낼 학교갔다와서 해보께염
02:01 Broccoly: glgl
02:01 Gloria Guard: 넴

[Hard]
00:07:748 (1,2,3) - 이런식으로 커브좀 주는게 어떨까요?

00:14:807 (1) - 요걸 빼고 스피너를 하얀틱에 놔도 좋을것 같네요
01:00:689 (1) - 이부분 드럼소리에 맞춰 매핑해보시는건 어떨까요? 인센처럼 스트림 말고 리핏 슬라이더로 구현하면 꽤 재밌어질것 같네요. 저라면 이렇게 해볼듯요

(물론 리핏 슬라이더는 보라 1번 머리에 좀 겹쳐놔야겠죵)
01:18:337 (1,2,3) - 맨처음꺼랑 쎄임~ (커브)
01:30:248 (6) - 리핏 빼고 스피너를 흰틱에?
01:49:881 (5) - 이걸 4번이랑 스택하는게 나은듯 하네요. 1번은 새로 마디가 시작하는거니 살짝 4,5번으로 뭉쳤다가 펴주는것.
01:53:410 (4) - ^ same (콤보 색깔도 정확하게 나뉘어지니 더 조흔듯함미다)
02:00:800 (1) - 음 만약 앞쪽에 스피너 빼고 매핑하셨으면 이번엔 이렇게 스피너 한번 써주는것도 좋을듯 하네요. 만약 앞에서 스피너 킵하셨으면 이쪽 매핑해주시는게 좋을듯
02:07:748 (1,2) - 2번 딜리트하시구 1번을 1/3 리핏슬라이더로 보컬에 맞추시는걸 추천!
02:20:984 (4,5) - 요런식으로 좀더 부드럽게?

02:21:866 (1) - 꼬리를 블루틱에서 끝내면 보컬이랑 더 잘 맞을듯 하네요
02:26:940 (5) - 3번서클이랑 스택? 약간 1번으로 점프가 될지도 모르겠는데.. 이게 더 재밌네요 저는..ㅋㅋ
02:30:689 (7,1) - ^same (스피너 흰틱시작)
03:07:528 (1,2) - NC제거? 그냥 흰색이나 파란색으로 합쳐도 될것 같네요.

[Xinely's Normal]
00:12:601 (2,3,4) - recommend changing the rhythm like this

<-maybe like this
(use 1/3 repeat slider for 3)

01:25:837 (4) - very much off with the music. Shorten it so that it can end at 01:25:837 // and add a circle at 01:25:837
01:54:513 (3) - make this symmetrical with 1? be sure to place 2 right in the y-axis. (looks better)
02:03:337 (2,3,4) - 3 should be right in the middle. I guess this is a mistake?
02:09:513 (1,2) - (nazi) perfect blanket
02:15:248 (5) - remove red dot and just use white dot. It looks smoother
02:23:631 (1,2,3) - form a better triangle. Copy 1 and rotate it 120 and 240 degrees each for 2 and 3
02:37:748 (3) - add a white dot between the first white dot and the red dot. make an upper curve; looks much smoother
03:33:337 (6,7,1) - make 6's tail, 7, and 1 linear

That's about it! Hope this helps

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-05-01T07:50:32+00:00

Broccoly wrote:

인게임리퀫 :3

인센 irc

01:34 Broccoly: 맵이 참 깔끔하시네요 ㄷ
01:34 Broccoly: 군더더기없는
01:34 Gloria Guard: 그런가여 'ㅈ'
01:34 Gloria Guard: 그런말을 들으니 다행인..
01:35 Broccoly: 네 전체적으로 잘 정리됬다는 느낌이 드네염
01:35 Gloria Guard: lol
01:35 Broccoly: 00:32:454 (1) - 음 저라면 빨간점이랑 아래 하얀점 사이에 하얀점 추가해서 약간 더 자연스럽게 보이게 만들텐데
01:36 Broccoly: 온리 suggestionㅋ
01:36 Gloria Guard: 잠시만영
01:36 Gloria Guard: 밑부분을 둥글게?
01:36 Broccoly: 네 왼쪽으루 약간
01:36 Gloria Guard: 음
01:36 Gloria Guard: 그것은 좋은제안이네여
01:36 Gloria Guard: fix
01:36 Broccoly: 근데 이건 슬라이더 스타일 문제라
01:36 Broccoly: 올ㅋ 굿굿
01:37 Broccoly: 01:02:454 (1,2) - 
01:37 Broccoly: 키아이 시작이고 보컬이 급 높아지니
01:37 Broccoly: 점프를 추천
01:37 Broccoly: 01:13:042 (1,2) - 이런 점프용
01:37 Gloria Guard: nice~
01:38 Gloria Guard: 하지만 저는
01:38 Gloria Guard: 3,4,5번을 blanket 하는게 더이뻐보여서
01:38 Gloria Guard: 디스턴스만 늘릴게요
01:38 Broccoly: oki~
01:39 Broccoly: 01:32:454 (1) - 
01:39 Broccoly: 이거슬..
01:39 Broccoly: 중앙 좀 위쪽으로 옮겨보시는건 어떤가요
01:39 Broccoly: 3번 머리 좀 위로해서
01:40 Gloria Guard: 음
01:40 Broccoly: 지금은 키아이 끝내는 맛이 좀 덜하네요
01:40 Gloria Guard: 그러면
01:40 Gloria Guard: 3번을 2번이랑 blanket하고
01:40 Gloria Guard: 4,5,6번을 조금위로올린다음에
01:40 Gloria Guard: 1번을 중앙쪽으로 옮겨볼게요
01:40 Broccoly: 굿아이디어
01:41 Gloria Guard: fix~
01:42 Broccoly: 01:54:072 (2) - 이거슬 4번이랑 blanket 되도록..?
01:42 Gloria Guard: 파란색 4번노트?
01:42 Gloria Guard: 뒤에있는거
01:42 Broccoly: 그 하양 4번이욤
01:42 Gloria Guard: 하얀 4번
01:43 Gloria Guard: 음
01:43 Broccoly: 커서 움직임이 좀더 재밌어진다고 봐염
01:43 Gloria Guard: 근데 제생각에는 그것도 좋지만
01:43 Gloria Guard: 뒤에 파란색 5번노트에다가 스택을하고
01:43 Gloria Guard: 7번슬라 머리에 blanket 한다음에
01:44 Gloria Guard: 그다음에 3~4번을 을 밑으로하고서
01:44 Gloria Guard: 모양을 삼각형으로 하는게 더좋다고 생각하는데
01:45 Broccoly: 오 그것도 좋네요 
01:45 Broccoly: 근데 좀 답답한 느낌이 들지 않을까요?
01:45 Gloria Guard: 스택한게 좀 많아서?
01:45 Broccoly: 01:50:984 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - 이쪽부근은 시원시원하게 넘어오는데
01:45 Broccoly: 음..
01:45 Gloria Guard: 그러면 첫번째 제안하신걸로 할게여
01:46 Gloria Guard: 너무 뭉쳐져있는것도 좀그러니..
01:46 Broccoly: 넵:D
01:46 Broccoly: 아
01:46 Broccoly: 방금 그것도 좋네요 지금보니
01:46 Broccoly: 4에서 5로 넘어갈때
01:46 Broccoly: 보컬도 갑자기 뛰어오르니
01:46 Gloria Guard: 음
01:46 Broccoly: 뭉쳤다 피는것도 좋을듯
01:46 Gloria Guard: 근데 첫번재 제안하신거
01:47 Broccoly: 네
01:47 Gloria Guard: 약간 이해안되는데 예시를 보여주실수있나여
01:47 Broccoly: 넵 잠시
01:47 Broccoly: 대충 http://puu.sh/2JWan.jpg 이런식으루
01:48 Broccoly: 2번을 쏙
01:48 Gloria Guard: 좋네영 저것도
01:49 Gloria Guard: fix~
01:49 Broccoly: :3 
01:49 Broccoly: 이건 좀 나지인데..
01:50 Broccoly: 02:13:484 (2,4) - 퍼펙 블랭캣뜨
01:50 Gloria Guard: 이런나지는 좋아해서 괜찮아여
01:50 Gloria Guard: fix
01:50 Gloria Guard: 그리드모딩을 조금싫어하는것뿐..
01:50 Broccoly: 그건 저두요 ㅋㅋ
01:51 Broccoly: 02:29:587 (4) - 이거슬
01:51 Broccoly: 5번 꼬리에 스택?
01:52 Gloria Guard: nice
01:52 Gloria Guard: 비트들어보니 알맞네요
01:52 Broccoly: 굿굳
01:54 Broccoly: 음..03:18:337 (1) -  이걸 좀더 예쁘게?
01:54 Gloria Guard: blanket할게여
01:55 Broccoly: 넵 아니면 그 중간에 볼록하게 나온거슬
01:55 Broccoly: 슬라이더 중앙으로 옮겨서
01:55 Broccoly: 비트 잡아주는 역할을 시켜줘도 좋을듯요
01:56 Gloria Guard: 넴
01:56 Broccoly: 끗!
01:56 Gloria Guard: 허..
01:57 Gloria Guard: 정말 끝인가영
01:57 Broccoly: ㅠ제 능력의 한계
01:57 Broccoly: 더이상은 안보이네요
01:58 Broccoly: 아
01:58 Gloria Guard: owo?
01:58 Broccoly: 음 이것도 나지인데
01:58 Broccoly: 03:23:631 (1,2,5) - 요 슬라이더들
01:58 Broccoly: 블랭캣사이 갭을 서로 비슷하게 맞춰주는것도 좋을듯
01:59 Broccoly: 아
01:59 Broccoly: 2,5,보라1 번 슬라이더
01:59 Gloria Guard: 선말하는건가여
01:59 Broccoly: 2에서 5로 넘어갈때 갭이랑 5에서 1로 넘어갈때랑
02:00 Broccoly: 음 뭐라하지 그 슬라이더 사이 틈새간격이요
02:00 Gloria Guard: mehh....
02:00 Broccoly: ㅋㅋ
02:00 Gloria Guard: 틈새간격이라..
02:00 Gloria Guard: 저건 약간 멘붕패턴이라고해서..
02:00 Gloria Guard: 저만의 스타일 패턴..
02:00 Broccoly: ㅋㅋㅋ
02:00 Gloria Guard: 저건 노첸지할게연
02:00 Broccoly: 올라잇
02:01 Broccoly: 노말하드는 낼 학교갔다와서 해보께염
02:01 Broccoly: glgl
02:01 Gloria Guard: 넴

[Hard]
00:07:748 (1,2,3) - 이런식으로 커브좀 주는게 어떨까요?

00:14:807 (1) - 요걸 빼고 스피너를 하얀틱에 놔도 좋을것 같네요
01:00:689 (1) - 이부분 드럼소리에 맞춰 매핑해보시는건 어떨까요? 인센처럼 스트림 말고 리핏 슬라이더로 구현하면 꽤 재밌어질것 같네요. 저라면 이렇게 해볼듯요

(물론 리핏 슬라이더는 보라 1번 머리에 좀 겹쳐놔야겠죵)
01:18:337 (1,2,3) - 맨처음꺼랑 쎄임~ (커브)
01:30:248 (6) - 리핏 빼고 스피너를 흰틱에?
01:49:881 (5) - 이걸 4번이랑 스택하는게 나은듯 하네요. 1번은 새로 마디가 시작하는거니 살짝 4,5번으로 뭉쳤다가 펴주는것.
01:53:410 (4) - ^ same (콤보 색깔도 정확하게 나뉘어지니 더 조흔듯함미다)
02:00:800 (1) - 음 만약 앞쪽에 스피너 빼고 매핑하셨으면 이번엔 이렇게 스피너 한번 써주는것도 좋을듯 하네요. 만약 앞에서 스피너 킵하셨으면 이쪽 매핑해주시는게 좋을듯
02:07:748 (1,2) - 2번 딜리트하시구 1번을 1/3 리핏슬라이더로 보컬에 맞추시는걸 추천!
02:20:984 (4,5) - 요런식으로 좀더 부드럽게?

02:21:866 (1) - 꼬리를 블루틱에서 끝내면 보컬이랑 더 잘 맞을듯 하네요
02:26:940 (5) - 3번서클이랑 스택? 약간 1번으로 점프가 될지도 모르겠는데.. 이게 더 재밌네요 저는..ㅋㅋ
02:30:689 (7,1) - ^same (스피너 흰틱시작)
03:07:528 (1,2) - NC제거? 그냥 흰색이나 파란색으로 합쳐도 될것 같네요.

Thanks for modding

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-05-02T12:37:02+00:00

fix some ~
sorry i forget which one i fix ._.

fix

osu file format v12

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Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-05-02T12:43:08+00:00

Update

meiikyuu

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

meiikyuu 2013-05-03T03:41:51+00:00

hi ~

Xinely's Normal

01:29:366 (3) - move to x:260 y:124
02:09:513 (1) - move to x:324 y:116 , make sure adjust previous note
02:17:013 (2,3,4) - i think smoother curve with these notes look better
SPOILER

Hard

02:25:837 (2) - i think you should ctrl+ G and point same direction as 1, flows better to me

Insane

01:32:454 (1) - plays better imo if you move further~..try move to x:256 y:88
03:07:748 (1) - whistle at head! ~

sorry, could not find much x.x will try harder next time.. good map

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-05-03T05:45:49+00:00

fix all ~
thanks mei ~

fix

osu file format v12

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Title:Distance ~In Your Love~
TitleUnicode:Distance ~In Your Love~
Artist:Aoyama Misao
ArtistUnicode:青山操
Creator:Gloria Guard
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution SPECIAL mix
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• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• Some of your SB images are way too big, resize them. (for full-screen images the maximum size is 800x600, for tall images is 640x1440 and for wide scrolling images is 1920x480)
• I don't really like the font you used for the lyrics, it doesn't really fit with the song imo.
• 00:07:748, 01:02:454, 02:02:454, 03:23:631 - You barely notice these pulses while playing, increase the size a bit more. (also consider to increase the brightness and contrast of "r.png" a bit)
• 03:07:528 - Uhh why all these squares? If I were you I'd do something different, for example a snow effect would be nice. (look the SB on this map to understand what I mean)

Xinely's Normal

• HP Drain Rate: 4
• Overall Difficulty: 4
• 00:55:837 (5,6,1) - I don't like flow here, try this:
SPOILER
• 01:07:748 (5) - Make a ~ for a better flow.
SPOILER
• 02:09:954 (2,3,4) - Flow here can be improved a lot, look:
SPOILER
• 02:17:013 (2,3,4) - ^

Hard

• 00:44:587 (4) - Start this slider 1/2 later and add a circle at 00:44:587.

Insane seems fine.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-05-07T08:20:07+00:00

fix all (fix as i can do it)
thanks xxheroxx

fix

osu file format v12

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PreviewTime: 62234
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1
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[Metadata]
Title:Distance ~In Your Love~
TitleUnicode:Distance ~In Your Love~
Artist:Aoyama Misao
ArtistUnicode:青山操
Creator:Gloria Guard
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution SPECIAL mix
Tags:Xinely ddr Setsurei
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Setsurei

1,149 posts

Joined May 2012

Setsurei 2013-05-10T10:22:03+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
General

• Some of your SB images are way too big, resize them. (for full-screen images the maximum size is 800x600, for tall images is 640x1440 and for wide scrolling images is 1920x480)
• I don't really like the font you used for the lyrics, it doesn't really fit with the song imo.
• 00:07:748, 01:02:454, 02:02:454, 03:23:631 - You barely notice these pulses while playing, increase the size a bit more. (also consider to increase the brightness and contrast of "r.png" a bit)
• 03:07:528 - Uhh why all these squares? If I were you I'd do something different, for example a snow effect would be nice. (look the SB on this map to understand what I mean)

Re-size SB images
Change the font - Gloria Guard's font
Pulsing - larger scaling, brightness +30 points & contrast + 30 points
Checkered black and white squares not changed

chat log

2013-05-10 02:16 Setsurei: btw the square one, what do you want to change it with?
2013-05-10 02:17 Setsurei: the section where black white checkered square
2013-05-10 02:17 Gloria Guard: hmm
2013-05-10 02:17 Setsurei: firstly I use that because I haven't know anything about the SB pictures (it was before you give me the pics)
2013-05-10 02:18 Gloria Guard: ah
2013-05-10 02:18 Gloria Guard: it's ok
2013-05-10 02:19 Gloria Guard: i'm fine it 
2013-05-10 02:19 Setsurei: oh ok :D
2013-05-10 02:19 Gloria Guard: no change please XD
2013-05-10 02:19 Gloria Guard: really nice effect lol
2013-05-10 02:19 Setsurei: lol

re-download after Gloria Guard updating the beatmap
thanks for mod the SB

@ Gloria Guard : this is the new SB files

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-05-10T17:15:31+00:00

Setsurei wrote:
xxheroxx wrote:
General

• Some of your SB images are way too big, resize them. (for full-screen images the maximum size is 800x600, for tall images is 640x1440 and for wide scrolling images is 1920x480)
• I don't really like the font you used for the lyrics, it doesn't really fit with the song imo.
• 00:07:748, 01:02:454, 02:02:454, 03:23:631 - You barely notice these pulses while playing, increase the size a bit more. (also consider to increase the brightness and contrast of "r.png" a bit)
• 03:07:528 - Uhh why all these squares? If I were you I'd do something different, for example a snow effect would be nice. (look the SB on this map to understand what I mean)
Re-size SB images
Change the font - Gloria Guard's font
Pulsing - larger scaling, brightness +30 points & contrast + 30 points
Checkered black and white squares not changed
chat log
2013-05-10 02:16 Setsurei: btw the square one, what do you want to change it with?
2013-05-10 02:17 Setsurei: the section where black white checkered square
2013-05-10 02:17 Gloria Guard: hmm
2013-05-10 02:17 Setsurei: firstly I use that because I haven't know anything about the SB pictures (it was before you give me the pics)
2013-05-10 02:18 Gloria Guard: ah
2013-05-10 02:18 Gloria Guard: it's ok
2013-05-10 02:19 Gloria Guard: i'm fine it 
2013-05-10 02:19 Setsurei: oh ok :D
2013-05-10 02:19 Gloria Guard: no change please XD
2013-05-10 02:19 Gloria Guard: really nice effect lol
2013-05-10 02:19 Setsurei: lol
re-download after Gloria Guard updating the beatmap
thanks for mod the SB

@ Gloria Guard : this is the new SB files

ok re add all fix thank you!

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-05-10T19:56:10+00:00

Update !!

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-05-14T05:36:46+00:00

hi

General
- Change Hard's Source to Osu! Banchou

- Maybe turn on Epilepsy warning to be safe since there's pulsing in the SB. (though more opinions on this would be nice too)

- Delete "Setsurei" from tags. SB makers aren't tagged.

Xinely's Normal
00:13:263 (3) - this is supposed to be on the next blue tick https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755156
00:33:778 (2) - Hitsounds on downbeats such as this would sound nice in this section, maybe default soft whistle?
01:25:837 (4) - sounds weird that the reverse is on a less-emphasized part, a simple rhythm like 01:04:219 (4,5) - is fine ^^
01:53:631 (1,2,3) - good opportunity for symmetry http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755164

Hard
00:14:807 (1) - Finish!
00:35:873 - Add note, the vocals seem pretty clear here
Nice~!

Insane
00:07:748 (3) - Create a stack before it for a nice introduction~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755200
00:14:807 (1) - Finish
00:32:454 (1) - Finish on head like Hard
01:16:572 (1,2,5) - an idea for a pinwheel pattern lol http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755210 (look at note placement only, ignore everything else) Not really important though lol
01:53:631 (1) - Finish on head, i hear cymbals in the bg music
02:00:028 (6,7,8) - why not make a stream here to match the music? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755212 some challenge wouldn't hurt =v=
02:44:807 (1) - Finish on head?
02:50:101 (1) - Delete NC, i didn't see the point especially when the stream is transitioning to a break (i can accept 03:37:748 (1) - as a cool finale though xD)

Lovely map!! <3

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-05-14T05:51:15+00:00

fix expect blue tick. i think it's hard for newbie
thanks sakuya

@GG : if you remove setsurei from tags, remove in my diff too

fix

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Distance.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62234
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1

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Title:Distance ~in your love~
TitleUnicode:Distance ~in your love~
Artist:Aoyama Misao
ArtistUnicode:青山操
Creator:Gloria Guard
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:Osu! Banchou
Tags:Xinely ddr Setsurei datio giken
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Gloria Guard

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Gloria Guard 2013-05-14T05:52:45+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
hi

General
- Change Hard's Source to Osu! Banchou

- Maybe turn on Epilepsy warning to be safe since there's pulsing in the SB. (though more opinions on this would be nice too)

- Delete "Setsurei" from tags. SB makers aren't tagged.

Hard
00:14:807 (1) - Finish!
00:35:873 - Add note, the vocals seem pretty clear here
Nice~!

Insane
00:07:748 (3) - Create a stack before it for a nice introduction~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755200
00:14:807 (1) - Finish
00:32:454 (1) - Finish on head like Hard
01:16:572 (1,2,5) - an idea for a pinwheel pattern lol http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755210 (look at note placement only, ignore everything else) Not really important though lol
01:53:631 (1) - Finish on head, i hear cymbals in the bg music
02:00:028 (6,7,8) - why not make a stream here to match the music? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755212 some challenge wouldn't hurt =v=
02:44:807 (1) - Finish on head?
02:50:101 (1) - Delete NC, i didn't see the point especially when the stream is transitioning to a break (i can accept 03:37:748 (1) - as a cool finale though xD)

Lovely map!! <3

Good job you recommand beat and pattern ! all fix thanks for modding~!

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General

Xinely's Normal

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Insane

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General

Hard

Insane

- t e n n y a - wrote:

Xinely's Normal

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