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Aoyama Misao - Distance

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Gloria Guard
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Suggestion.
You should fix this.
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General

  • Some of your SB images are way too big, resize them. (for full-screen images the maximum size is 800x600, for tall images is 640x1440 and for wide scrolling images is 1920x480)
    I don't really like the font you used for the lyrics, it doesn't really fit with the song imo.
    00:07:748, 01:02:454, 02:02:454, 03:23:631 - You barely notice these pulses while playing, increase the size a bit more. (also consider to increase the brightness and contrast of "r.png" a bit)
    03:07:528 - Uhh why all these squares? If I were you I'd do something different, for example a snow effect would be nice. (look the SB on this map to understand what I mean)

Xinely's Normal

  • HP Drain Rate: 4
    Overall Difficulty: 4
    00:55:837 (5,6,1) - I don't like flow here, try this:
    01:07:748 (5) - Make a ~ for a better flow.
    02:09:954 (2,3,4) - Flow here can be improved a lot, look:
    02:17:013 (2,3,4) - ^

Hard

  • 00:44:587 (4) - Start this slider 1/2 later and add a circle at 00:44:587.

Insane seems fine.
Xinely
fix all (fix as i can do it)
thanks xxheroxx :)

fix
osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: Distance.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62234
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7748,46572,170101
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Distance ~In Your Love~
TitleUnicode:Distance ~In Your Love~
Artist:Aoyama Misao
ArtistUnicode:青山操
Creator:Gloria Guard
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution SPECIAL mix
Tags:Xinely ddr Setsurei
BeatmapID:245111
BeatmapSetID:89930

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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Setsurei

xxheroxx wrote:

General

  • Some of your SB images are way too big, resize them. (for full-screen images the maximum size is 800x600, for tall images is 640x1440 and for wide scrolling images is 1920x480)
    I don't really like the font you used for the lyrics, it doesn't really fit with the song imo.
    00:07:748, 01:02:454, 02:02:454, 03:23:631 - You barely notice these pulses while playing, increase the size a bit more. (also consider to increase the brightness and contrast of "r.png" a bit)
    03:07:528 - Uhh why all these squares? If I were you I'd do something different, for example a snow effect would be nice. (look the SB on this map to understand what I mean)
Re-size SB images
Change the font - Gloria Guard's font
Pulsing - larger scaling, brightness +30 points & contrast + 30 points
Checkered black and white squares not changed
chat log
2013-05-10 02:16 Setsurei: btw the square one, what do you want to change it with?
2013-05-10 02:17 Setsurei: the section where black white checkered square
2013-05-10 02:17 Gloria Guard: hmm
2013-05-10 02:17 Setsurei: firstly I use that because I haven't know anything about the SB pictures (it was before you give me the pics)
2013-05-10 02:18 Gloria Guard: ah
2013-05-10 02:18 Gloria Guard: it's ok
2013-05-10 02:19 Gloria Guard: i'm fine it
2013-05-10 02:19 Setsurei: oh ok :D
2013-05-10 02:19 Gloria Guard: no change please XD
2013-05-10 02:19 Gloria Guard: really nice effect lol
2013-05-10 02:19 Setsurei: lol
re-download after Gloria Guard updating the beatmap
thanks for mod the SB :D

@ Gloria Guard : this is the new SB files
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard

Setsurei wrote:

xxheroxx wrote:

General

  • Some of your SB images are way too big, resize them. (for full-screen images the maximum size is 800x600, for tall images is 640x1440 and for wide scrolling images is 1920x480)
    I don't really like the font you used for the lyrics, it doesn't really fit with the song imo.
    00:07:748, 01:02:454, 02:02:454, 03:23:631 - You barely notice these pulses while playing, increase the size a bit more. (also consider to increase the brightness and contrast of "r.png" a bit)
    03:07:528 - Uhh why all these squares? If I were you I'd do something different, for example a snow effect would be nice. (look the SB on this map to understand what I mean)
Re-size SB images
Change the font - Gloria Guard's font
Pulsing - larger scaling, brightness +30 points & contrast + 30 points
Checkered black and white squares not changed
chat log
2013-05-10 02:16 Setsurei: btw the square one, what do you want to change it with?
2013-05-10 02:17 Setsurei: the section where black white checkered square
2013-05-10 02:17 Gloria Guard: hmm
2013-05-10 02:17 Setsurei: firstly I use that because I haven't know anything about the SB pictures (it was before you give me the pics)
2013-05-10 02:18 Gloria Guard: ah
2013-05-10 02:18 Gloria Guard: it's ok
2013-05-10 02:19 Gloria Guard: i'm fine it
2013-05-10 02:19 Setsurei: oh ok :D
2013-05-10 02:19 Gloria Guard: no change please XD
2013-05-10 02:19 Gloria Guard: really nice effect lol
2013-05-10 02:19 Setsurei: lol
re-download after Gloria Guard updating the beatmap
thanks for mod the SB :D

@ Gloria Guard : this is the new SB files




ok re add :) all fix thank you!
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard
Update !!
LunarSakuya
hi

General
- Change Hard's Source to Osu! Banchou

- Maybe turn on Epilepsy warning to be safe since there's pulsing in the SB. (though more opinions on this would be nice too)

- Delete "Setsurei" from tags. SB makers aren't tagged.

Xinely's Normal
00:13:263 (3) - this is supposed to be on the next blue tick https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755156
00:33:778 (2) - Hitsounds on downbeats such as this would sound nice in this section, maybe default soft whistle?
01:25:837 (4) - sounds weird that the reverse is on a less-emphasized part, a simple rhythm like 01:04:219 (4,5) - is fine ^^
01:53:631 (1,2,3) - good opportunity for symmetry http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755164

Hard
00:14:807 (1) - Finish!
00:35:873 - Add note, the vocals seem pretty clear here
Nice~!

Insane
00:07:748 (3) - Create a stack before it for a nice introduction~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755200
00:14:807 (1) - Finish
00:32:454 (1) - Finish on head like Hard
01:16:572 (1,2,5) - an idea for a pinwheel pattern lol http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755210 (look at note placement only, ignore everything else) Not really important though lol
01:53:631 (1) - Finish on head, i hear cymbals in the bg music
02:00:028 (6,7,8) - why not make a stream here to match the music? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755212 some challenge wouldn't hurt =v=
02:44:807 (1) - Finish on head?
02:50:101 (1) - Delete NC, i didn't see the point especially when the stream is transitioning to a break (i can accept 03:37:748 (1) - as a cool finale though xD)

Lovely map!! <3
Xinely
fix expect blue tick. i think it's hard for newbie
thanks sakuya

@GG : if you remove setsurei from tags, remove in my diff too
fix
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Distance.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62234
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Metadata]
Title:Distance ~in your love~
TitleUnicode:Distance ~in your love~
Artist:Aoyama Misao
ArtistUnicode:青山操
Creator:Gloria Guard
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:Osu! Banchou
Tags:Xinely ddr Setsurei datio giken
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Topic Starter
Gloria Guard

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi

General
- Change Hard's Source to Osu! Banchou

- Maybe turn on Epilepsy warning to be safe since there's pulsing in the SB. (though more opinions on this would be nice too)

- Delete "Setsurei" from tags. SB makers aren't tagged.

Hard
00:14:807 (1) - Finish!
00:35:873 - Add note, the vocals seem pretty clear here
Nice~!

Insane
00:07:748 (3) - Create a stack before it for a nice introduction~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755200
00:14:807 (1) - Finish
00:32:454 (1) - Finish on head like Hard
01:16:572 (1,2,5) - an idea for a pinwheel pattern lol http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755210 (look at note placement only, ignore everything else) Not really important though lol
01:53:631 (1) - Finish on head, i hear cymbals in the bg music
02:00:028 (6,7,8) - why not make a stream here to match the music? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755212 some challenge wouldn't hurt =v=
02:44:807 (1) - Finish on head?
02:50:101 (1) - Delete NC, i didn't see the point especially when the stream is transitioning to a break (i can accept 03:37:748 (1) - as a cool finale though xD)

Lovely map!! <3



Good job you recommand beat and pattern ! all fix thanks for modding~!
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard
Setsurei No change.

Update!
orioncomet
[General]
- Remove "Aoyama Misao - Distance ~In Your Love~ (Gloria Guard).osb" :P
- Yes, I'd like to suggest you to check the Epilepsy warning as well~

[Xinely's Normal]
00:34:219 (3) - Whistle at the middle of slider is a bit off here, I'd like to suggest you to remove it.
00:41:278 (3) - ^
01:07:748 (5) - ^ (especially something like this, there's already whistle hitsound at 1/2 before)
01:14:807 (3) - ^ (easier to notice here, it's a bit too loud too)
01:21:866 (3) - ^
02:07:748 (4) - ^
02:21:866 (5) - ^



Good work, you can call me back.
Xinely
all applied , ty orion ~

@GG : if you add epilepsy warning, add in my diff too

~w~
osu file format v12

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PreviewTime: 62234
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Title:Distance
TitleUnicode:Distance
Artist:Aoyama Misao
ArtistUnicode:青山操
Creator:Gloria Guard
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:Osu! Banchou
Tags:Xinely ddr datio giken
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168,128,64219,2,0,L|88:192,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,268,65101,2,0,L|232:204,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,256,65984,5,2,0:0:0:0:
404,312,66425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,228,66866,2,0,P|476:172|456:120,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,112,67528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,92,67748,2,0,B|328:68|280:108|228:68,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,188,69513,6,0,P|384:216|324:252,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,168,70395,2,0,P|247:186|177:187,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,156,71278,1,2,0:0:0:0:
159,90,71719,2,0,L|179:187,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,288,72601,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,320,73042,6,0,P|336:300|376:244,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,224,73925,2,0,P|304:184|310:116,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,164,74807,2,0,P|220:115|160:11,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,216,76572,6,0,P|137:266|165:305,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,256,77454,2,0,P|284:294|328:314,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,296,78116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,248,78337,2,0,P|355:209|311:189,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,180,79219,2,0,P|164:192|96:172,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,112,80542,5,8,0:0:0:0:
372,56,80984,2,0,P|416:80|448:140,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,168,81866,2,0,P|292:208|208:208,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,112,83631,6,0,P|416:64|364:36,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,132,84513,2,0,P|368:180|420:208,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,252,85395,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,292,85837,2,0,P|360:336|312:356,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,272,86719,2,0,P|308:228|356:208,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,196,87601,5,8,0:0:0:0:
396,108,88042,2,0,P|311:91|235:164,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,180,89366,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89807,12,4,92454,0:0:0:0:
168,88,106572,6,0,P|252:52|352:92,1,200,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,168,107895,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,248,108337,2,0,P|268:284|168:244,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,184,109660,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,148,109881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,116,110101,6,0,P|208:84|232:28,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,36,110984,2,0,P|349:78|389:110,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,144,111645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,188,111866,2,0,P|412:228|348:243,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,284,113189,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,328,113631,6,0,P|340:344|288:324,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,316,114292,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,328,114513,2,0,P|152:344|104:324,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,252,115395,2,0,P|40:204|71:141,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,132,116057,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,144,116278,2,0,P|180:176|249:191,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,156,117160,5,4,0:0:0:0:
316,256,117601,2,0,P|360:272|417:259,2,100,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,196,118925,2,0,P|152:160|70:218,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,252,122013,5,8,0:0:0:0:
240,200,122454,6,0,P|280:236|344:256,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,168,123337,2,0,P|332:132|268:112,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,100,123998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,100,124219,2,0,P|153:129|127:176,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,268,125101,2,0,P|44:236|23:191,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,104,125984,5,2,0:0:0:0:
136,32,126425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,60,126866,2,0,L|324:120,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,127748,2,0,P|196:248|120:252,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,116,129513,5,6,0:0:0:0:
408,68,129954,2,0,P|420:120|396:184,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,208,130616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,248,130837,2,0,P|315:259|263:248,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,316,131719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,252,132160,2,0,P|79:222|50:161,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,104,133042,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,60,133484,2,0,P|256:48|328:60,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,96,134145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,144,134366,2,0,P|264:156|192:144,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,64,135248,2,0,B|104:96|104:152|104:152|104:200|48:228,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,324,136572,5,6,0:0:0:0:
164,328,137013,2,0,P|212:340|280:320,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,284,137675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,236,137895,2,0,P|344:224|412:244,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,136,138778,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,80,139219,2,0,P|272:112|208:124,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,168,140101,6,0,P|168:200|232:212,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,308,140984,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,296,141425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,256,141645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,212,141866,2,0,P|428:148|428:56,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,143631,6,0,P|284:136|236:104,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,140,144513,2,0,P|129:185|135:232,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,312,145395,2,0,P|240:304|284:272,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,146278,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,224,146498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,184,146719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,84,147160,6,0,P|376:88|312:68,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,104,148042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,148,148484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,196,148925,2,0,P|113:263|238:294,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,112,151131,2,0,P|221:144|275:212,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,152454,5,6,0:0:0:0:
356,328,152895,2,0,P|424:336|484:224,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,136,154219,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,84,154660,2,0,P|336:76|276:188,1,200
296,276,155984,6,0,L|192:312,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,212,156866,2,0,L|280:176,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,276,157748,2,0,B|360:276|360:276|396:308|468:308|500:264,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,196,159072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,132,159513,6,0,P|324:88|276:56,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,160395,2,0,P|225:135|168:132,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,224,161278,2,0,P|163:226|112:251,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,320,162160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,324,162601,2,0,P|336:332|400:312,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,256,163484,6,0,P|480:216|464:148,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,132,164366,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,160,164807,2,0,P|239:139|172:156,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,176,165469,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,165689,2,0,P|72:248|24:276,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,166572,12,4,170101,0:0:0:0:
256,192,184109,12,0,185984,0:0:0:0:
84,216,187748,6,0,P|148:272|276:284,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,240,189072,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,148,189513,2,0,P|244:92|116:80,1,200
84,92,190616,2,0,L|36:124,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,216,191278,5,0,0:0:0:0:
132,296,191719,2,0,P|172:320|240:324,1,100
196,232,192601,2,0,P|241:220|292:175,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,92,193484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,40,193925,2,0,P|182:51|131:96,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,168,194807,6,0,P|72:216|92:276,1,100
184,264,195689,2,0,P|200:216|180:156,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,148,196572,2,0,P|276:101|292:53,1,100
340,40,197234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,52,197454,2,0,P|399:98|383:146,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,244,198337,6,0,P|376:296|320:316,1,100
240,316,199219,2,0,P|186:335|136:316,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,260,200101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,200,200542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,200984,12,4,203631,0:0:0:0:
256,196,204513,5,2,0:0:0:0:
340,140,204954,2,0,P|344:88|308:36,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,104,205837,2,0,P|235:156|271:208,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,232,206498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,268,206719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,268,207160,5,2,0:0:0:0:
500,200,207601,2,0,P|496:148|460:92,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,104,208263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,112,208484,2,0,P|328:132|264:140,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,76,209366,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,144,209807,2,0,P|148:192|196:232,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,296,210689,5,4,0:0:0:0:
340,252,211131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,192,211572,2,0,P|432:144|416:80,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,96,212234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,112,212454,2,0,P|280:136|228:144,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,180,213337,2,0,P|89:181|40:200,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,248,213998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,292,214219,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,324,214660,2,0,P|220:340|272:320,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,228,215542,2,0,P|281:205|303:154,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,100,216425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,136,216645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,172,216866,2,0,L|76:248,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,312,217748,5,4,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard
Remove osb and xinely check and fix

Update ~
orioncomet
Bubbled, good luck~ :D
Setsurei

orioncomet wrote:

Bubbled, good luck~ :D
gogo rank GG \o/
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard
Thank you :D
10nya
<3
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ Gloria Guard

Xinely's Normal

03:04:109 (1) - The spinner
Can you try?

Hard
01:07:307 (3) - Seems to be a little obscured

02:07:748 (6) -
Can you try?

02:27:050 (6) - add Circle

02:44:697 (7) - ^

03:12:601 (3) - Seems to be a little obscured

Insane

Good Map !!

+ Star
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ Gloria Guard

Xinely's Normal

03:04:109 (1) - The spinner
Can you try? Good job there.

Hard
01:07:307 (3) - Seems to be a little obscured i don't understand. it's fine beat you do not know the intent. X_X

02:07:748 (6) -
Can you try? No

02:27:050 (6) - add Circle why? it's lyrics beat

02:44:697 (7) - ^ ^

03:12:601 (3) - Seems to be a little obscured same no fix

Insane

Good Map !!

+ Star



Thank you :D
orioncomet
Talked to mapper right after I seen mod post and he did a self popped over minor thing, rebubbled.
popner
There is a diff gap between N&H. Imo there are too many triples in Hard, including some difficult triples like 01:07:748 (1,2,3). So you should consider to remove some of them.

[Hard]
01:17:013 (2,3) - make them symmetric?
02:02:234 (1,2) - they are too close to previous spinner end. You can just delete them.
[Insane]
02:29:587 (4,5) - for this, I will suggest this rhythm:

There are two reasons. First, 02:28:925 (1,2,3) - you use 1/4 stack notes at the slider end, so 02:30:028 (5) will be easily read as 1/4 stack note too. Second, it fits the music well, and add some variety to your rhythm.

Each single difficulty is good tho.
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard

popner wrote:

There is a diff gap between N&H. Imo there are too many triples in Hard, including some difficult triples like 01:07:748 (1,2,3). So you should consider to remove some of them. I agree. so hard diff this part only remove note.

[Hard]
01:17:013 (2,3) - make them symmetric? yes.
02:02:234 (1,2) - they are too close to previous spinner end. You can just delete them. ok
[Insane]
02:29:587 (4,5) - for this, I will suggest this rhythm:

There are two reasons. First, 02:28:925 (1,2,3) - you use 1/4 stack notes at the slider end, so 02:30:028 (5) will be easily read as 1/4 stack note too. Second, it fits the music well, and add some variety to your rhythm. hmm..I change to a different rhythm

Each single difficulty is good tho.


Thanks for modding :3
popner
00:10:395 (5,6,7) - delete the 2rd note
00:54:292 (2,3,4) - delete the 2rd note
01:03:667 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
01:10:726 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
01:14:807 (1,2,3) - delete the 2rd note
01:17:785 (4,5) - change to a 3/4 slider
01:24:844 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
02:03:667 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
02:05:432 (5,6) - change to a 3/4 slider
02:10:726 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
02:15:138 (2,3) - change to a 3/4 slider
02:17:785 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
02:24:844 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
02:43:814 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
03:24:844 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
03:31:903 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
03:37:307 (4,5,1) - delete the 2rd note

I think they are triples that are unnecessary.
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard

popner wrote:

00:10:395 (5,6,7) - delete the 2rd note
00:54:292 (2,3,4) - delete the 2rd note
01:03:667 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
01:10:726 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
01:14:807 (1,2,3) - delete the 2rd note
01:17:785 (4,5) - change to a 3/4 slider
01:24:844 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
02:03:667 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
02:05:432 (5,6) - change to a 3/4 slider
02:10:726 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
02:15:138 (2,3) - change to a 3/4 slider
02:17:785 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
02:24:844 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
02:43:814 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
03:24:844 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
03:31:903 (3,4) - change to a 3/4 slider
03:37:307 (4,5,1) - delete the 2rd note

I think they are triples that are unnecessary.



all fix thank you :3
Scorpiour
since orion has no time to recheck it, checked and rebubbled with her agree
popner
[Hard]
00:10:395 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - I think the triples here are still difficult..You can delete 00:10:837 (7) (follow vocal, better to me) or delete 00:10:726 (6) (follow drum)

Call me back later.
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard

popner wrote:

[Hard]
00:10:395 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - I think the triples here are still difficult..You can delete 00:10:837 (7) (follow vocal, better to me) or delete 00:10:726 (6) (follow drum)

Call me back later.


allright

fixed again :3 update !
popner
Ranked!
Loooctav
Gratz~
Freya
Congratz~ o3o
Flask
Gratz GG~ *boom*
THS
congratz~ o/
10nya
yeeey <3
Oyatsu
Congratz! Glugu~ :D
S o r d a
gratz!
Dark_Ai
omedeto :3 ~
MineC24
축하해여~ :)
meiikyuu
grats ^^
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard
Thanksssssss! everyone ~
Sonnyc
랭크다 랭크!!
69653863
Source: Osu! Banchou

wat
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard

inverness wrote:

Source: Osu! Banchou

wat

well :3

but : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/92524
69653863
o I thought it was from BanchoBot or something

grats anyway
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard

inverness wrote:

o I thought it was from BanchoBot or something

grats anyway

haha lol thanks~
Sonnyc
Btw, why epilepsy warning..
Setsurei

Sonnyc wrote:

Btw, why epilepsy warning..
because of the scaling - pulse
Sonnyc
Well, i thought epilepsy was necessary for flash lightenings or other stronger stuffs,,
scanter
축축 ~
LunarSakuya
Yes finally xD congrats!
Sry again I couldn't recheck orz
Topic Starter
Gloria Guard

LunarSakuya wrote:

Yes finally xD congrats!
Sry again I couldn't recheck orz

lol No problem, thanks Sakuya >w</
P A N
hehe congratz GG
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