[General]
You've got something weird going on in the intro for the storyboard from 00:06:739 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/658488Use tick rate 1 please. The changes between the swing section and the normal section just sound horrible with rate 2. That or silence the offbeat ticks during the 1/3 section since you have tick sounds all over the place.
Go through your difficulties and make sure the kiai green line sections are snapped correctly please.
[Normal]
02:55:687 (1,1) - Please don't new combo spam
Really nice Normal. Good work.
[Hard]
00:09:897 (1) - The end of this slider is snapped incorrectly
02:06:345 (3,4,1) - This was... unexpected. Especially with that kind of spacing. I really don't recommend you do this as it sticks out against the mapping of the 2 minutes prior. That or at least use spacing like at 02:12:266 (1,2,3) -
02:53:713 (2,1) - I was kind of expecting this to have the weird overlap like at 02:50:950 (1,2) -
03:35:456 (2,1) - Wow, bad place for an anti-jump. Use normal spacing here please.
[Insane]
01:38:318 (1) - Please make these combos longer.
02:14:634 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is a little off. Maybe try ctrl + g on the 2 and 3? If you do this, be careful fixing the hitsounds afterward.
02:15:424 (5,6) - This snapping just feels wrong in context of the rest of this kiai section.
02:17:792 (1,2) - I found if you ctrl + g these individually, the flow is much much better. Don't forget to fix the hitsounds. You might want to reposition the stream too.
Something that bugged me about the map in general was the 1/4 spacing. It seemed mostly random or dependant upon the patterns rather than any sort of musical cue when it came to when you used larger spacing as opposed to distance snapping. it made for kind of a frustrating play compared to the relatively smooth play of the Normal and Hard.
[Muzukashii]
HP drain felt a little low. I got full health at 50% of the song. Maybe raise it a bit?
Maybe raise the volume a little bit during the louder parts of the song? The taiko sounds start to blend in a little too much.
[Oni]
Remove the ・from the end of the unicode title
03:09:108 (1) - Using a spinner here feels wrong. It's just a lot of noise over a part that has zero sound from the band beyond the sustained chord. That's not a good representation of the music.