neonat wrote:

Minor suggestions.

Hard

00:28:327 - add a note (you can hear in the background) no..
00:33:635 - add a note (I think it would be nicer rather than just starting when the vocals do) ^
00:39:058 (6,1) - try this rhythm? (emphasizes 00:39:289 -) better but i have another way..fix now~

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Love the song I love it too

Zhengster wrote:

Hello! This is M4M from your queue. I hope you find my mod helpful, but i'm a newbie mapper and still learning D: Take these as suggestions~

[Easy]
01:03:520 (1)- I think the heart shape could be improved how..i think it's good enough now :/

[Normal]
00:27:289 - add note nop..it'll be harder
00:35:366 - ^
01:00:520 - ^
01:03:520 (1) - Heart shape could be improved same as easy :/

[Hard]
00:02:135 (4,5) - Consider switching these two to fit better with the music hmm..it's fine i think
00:10:442 (7,8) - move to the next white tick ..? I can't understand your mean =A=
0:26:597 (10)- NC, remove NC from 00:26:827 (1) change nc before like now..i think no to change again ><
01:08:654 - add note no..

Goodluck on your maapppp

tony8128 wrote:

Sorry for the late mod
The music is great~ And I like your mapping style

[SB]
The first picture seems to be appearing suddenly from pitch black. Consider changing to some fade-in effect.

[Easy]
01:10:227 (2) - This clap seems a bit strange... Change it to whistle and remove the whistle on the end seems better.
01:03:520 (1) - You can try this: First make a symmetry pattern of a heart with lower grid level, without considering the length. Then use "Scale by..." in the "Edit" menu to adjust its length, using the largest possible number. The shape will look better that way.

Btw, b/178353 in this map on Nogard diff, at 03:27:404 there is a good example of heart-shaped slider. You can take that as a reference.

[Normal]
00:02:366 (3) - The clap on the end is a bit inconsistent to the music... How about changing to whistle?
00:07:212 (5) - ^
00:14:597 (5) - ^
01:03:520 (1) - Same as Easy


[Hard]
OD 6? Maybe +1 would be better... (I SSed on the first try)
Flows are great.

00:10:904 (10) - Move the whistle to the beginning (optional)
00:14:135 (5) - Add a clap here
00:14:597 (8) - Remove this clap (optional)
00:18:289 (3) - Add a whistle on the beginning
01:10:227 (4) - Maybe adding a whistle sounds better...

Frostmourne wrote:

ok

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General
sorry for inconvenience
for the only 1st offset (751) , change it to 756(+5) since it's a bit early , don't need to touch the other offsets
don't forget to resnap all green lines, preview time,SB and notes
I'm sorry for inconvenience really ;_;

Easy
00:54:981 (1) - remove this NC and add NC here instead 00:56:135 (5) - , it makes sense better since it follows the phrase in the song

Normal
00:32:366 (1) - add clap for the head of this slider too , as you hear , it sounds the exactly same as the tail of this slider so it will work correspondingly better too
00:33:058 (2) - this finish is weird , you shouldn't let the pre-part (a part before the kiai) be the more important part than kiai part
you should emphasis the kiai part best , so what I suggest is you should lower volume this note to 30% or lower than this
so the finish at 00:33:981 (1) - will stand out and fit the song perfectly

Hard
I find AR7 play better , the thing is the way you map , you didn't put jumps everywhere + the song itself is quite calm. so AR7 fits the song much better
00:32:139 (1) - this new combo is weird , when players play on this part, they might feel a bit astonished (at least to me) so I suggest you remove NC here
and keep long combo like you did in other points in this diff
00:51:524 (5) - without this whistle sounds much better because it doubles with 00:51:293 (3) - and it feels strange
01:01:447 (7) - finish?
01:02:139 (1) - ^
as I heard from the music, and this is the very end of the song so adding them will fit better

let me know when you have fixed this

no kudosu (you gave me for the timing fixes before)

Loneight wrote:

Hi~
Request from PM but sorry for late.

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• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. for SB, it is weird that sb1.jpg suddenly appear on 00:00:751 - , try to use fade to get it slowly appear ok

[Easy]

1. Useless green line:
   00:33:520 -
   
   
2. 00:00:751 (1) - re finish at start, because music should start at a quite sound, add nothing would be better for music, don't you feel weird because of the finish?>~< nop:/
3. 00:08:135 (1) - same as ^, there also add nothing would be better, finish is too weird for there :/
4. 00:21:981 (4) - I think there flow isn't comfortable, try to ctrl+j, ctrl+h, ctrl+g and move to x:168 y:288, would be much smoother. If you change, remember to fix 00:22:904 (1) - distance
5. 00:54:981 (1,2) - swap NC, I feel there vocal is same as 00:40:443 (4,5,1) - , but NC is different.
6. 01:03:520 (1) - slidertick is too loud for there, why don't you make there like Hard? try to reduce volume because there is quite place
7. 01:09:404 (1) - unsnapped slider (end)

nice diff !~

[Normal]

1. Useless green line:
   01:03:058 -
   01:03:174 -
   
   
2. 00:00:751 (1) - same as Easy, also 00:08:135 (1) - :/
3. 00:29:827 (2) - add clap to make 00:28:443 (5,1,2) - have a hierarchical sense
4. 00:33:058 (2) - this finish is too weird for music, try to use Drum-clap, I think would be very suitable xD
5. 00:40:212 (1,4) - swap NC, why don't you make NC like Easy? I think NC should on 00:41:366 (4) - because have stress or make 00:41:366 (4,5) - length same as 00:43:212 (1,2,3) - . also 00:54:981 (1,3) - like there (I also think it is still readable)
6. 00:59:827 (3,1) - swap NC, I think there vocal like 00:45:058 (1,4) - 's part
7. 01:03:520 (1) - same as Easy

good diff :3!

[Hard]

1. AR is not suitable for this diff, it feels faster a bit. try to -1, would be much better for the diff ok
   
   
2. 00:18:981 (1,3) - swap NC, stress is on 00:19:212 (3) -
3. 00:26:597 (10,1) - same as ^, because I feel stress is on 00:26:597 (10) -
4. 00:31:904 (6,1) - I think 00:32:135 (1) -'s start dosen't follow anything with music, only could follow approachcircle to hit, and weird rhythm for me, try this rhythm want to keep ;w;
5. 00:33:058 (4) - same as Normal
6. 00:33:751 (1,3) - swap NC, because 00:33:981 (3) - have a stress or kiai time's start-time
7. 00:51:289 (3) - re whistle, because too many soft-finish sound make noisy , and 00:51:981 (7) - add whistle at start to make a new rhythm with 00:51:058 (2,3,5) -
8. 00:58:674 - add a note, I think would be better for rhythm or more readable
9. 01:07:904 (3) - I feel weird on 01:08:154 - , can't hear anything to follow, try this

smooth SV for this diff ~ good ! only AR is a bit fast

good luck for rank~! lulu >w<!
star~

Frostmourne wrote:

Recheck
Offset 67904 (01:07:904 (3) - this note in Hard) change to 67909 , please resnap all notes in between 01:07:909 to 01:09:409 interval as well
(also snap something before 67909 such as 01:07:217 (2) - in Easy diff too

Easy
01:01:217 (2) - shorten this slider end at 01:01:448 (1/2 back) because there is no music supporting at the next 1/2 beat
also it's not too hard for the beginner I believe

Normal
00:56:602 (4) - NC
00:57:986 (1) - remove NC
00:59:832 (5) - NC
01:02:140 (1) - remove NC
^ these are for better look and you can see that it makes sense more than before (the new NC will follow the new phrase accordingly)

no kd

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Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:21:294 (3) - I would shorten this by half a beat to match the piano and preserve the 1 beat between clicks. Otherwise, you would have to change 4 so that it is not half a beat's distance from this end nop

[Normal]
looks good

[Hard]
00:10:332 (7) - why the random note in the middle? Nothing in the music calls for it. oh..dele
00:14:486 (7) - ^ ^
00:27:409 (5,8) - ^ having random extra notes in your song isn't usually a good mapping practice. no dele this >_<