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Andrea

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Andrea 2013-03-01T19:19:30+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sabato 23 marzo 2013 at 01:21:10

Artist: Nana Takahashi
Title: Hoshizora Monogatari (TV Size)
Source: kissxsis
Tags: Ending osuplayer111 ova
BPM: 120
Filesize: 10363kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4,53 stars, 152 notes)
Normal (2,42 stars, 98 notes)

Download: Nana Takahashi - Hoshizora Monogatari (TV Size)
Download: Nana Takahashi - Hoshizora Monogatari (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 173rd Beatmap.

I hope you will like and enjoy it :3

Special thanks to Vicho for the mp3 and video <3

Mapset:

Hard - Done.
Normal - Done.

Last edited by Andrea 2013-03-23T00:21:22+00:00, edited 20 times in total.

Lally

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Lally 2013-03-01T19:20:49+00:00

*-* wuuuh ♥

TMAstraf

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TMAstraf 2013-03-07T15:14:32+00:00

I looked in this map and its good.
Only what i have to say is that to become more difficultys

Thats all for now! =)

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-03-08T15:41:48+00:00

Moved to Pending ^^

Loooctav

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Loooctav 2013-03-11T11:14:57+00:00

Kiss X Sis :3!

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-03-12T11:49:10+00:00

Thank you for the support guys ^^

Any feedback will be always appreciated.

Makyu

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Makyu 2013-03-13T06:00:11+00:00

Wow, it's imposible to find good wallpapers :c

This is the best stuff that I could find:
http://puu.sh/2gRC6
http://famousmassacre1.deviantart.com/a ... -170605695
http://famousmassacre1.deviantart.com/a ... -170605626
http://famousmassacre1.deviantart.com/a ... -170605049 <- not too good
I dn't know why this anime is hated so mucho

and in sankaku complex only have hentai
http://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/1715248 <- the best think founded there

I think the actual BG is ok >.<

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-03-13T19:43:14+00:00

Thank you for the help, I'll see what to do.

Loooctav

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Loooctav 2013-03-13T23:58:53+00:00

Hueueueueueue

Moway

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Moway 2013-03-15T08:59:55+00:00

Here I am.

[General]

高橋菜々for Artist
星空物語 (TV Size) for title

[Normal]
00:33:300 (6) - maybe NC here and remove from 00:33:800 (1) to put NC on the downbeat.
00:45:300 (1,2) - and 00:47:800 (5,6) - fix these blankets?
01:17:800 (1) - I think I like this just with a white midpoint.
01:20:800 (1) - maybe remove NC here
01:22:300 (2) - add NC here
01:23:300 (1) - remove NC here, reason to do it is just to make the colors pretty (i have to really dig to find stuff to say for this)

[Hard]
00:11:300 (7) - I'd say either NC here and remove NC 00:11:550 (1)
or
00:11:550 (1) - remove NC and add NC00:12:300 (2). The first way you put the NC on the downbeat, the other way you make that symmetrical pattern at the bottom all the same combo color

00:41:300 - it would be nice to have an object here because there's a fairly strong bass beat right there.
00:49:300 (1,2,3) - maybe ctrl+h and ctrl+j this formation and distance snap it in the middle, maybe slightly better flow since you have to come down from the previous formation, and this will make it more different from 00:45:300 (1,2,3).

00:54:550 (5) - maybe NC here and remove 00:55:300 (1) - and add NC 00:57:800 (6).

Reason for this is 00:52:300 (1,2,3,4) is the same as 00:54:550 (5,6,1), so maybe NCing on the repetition might be okay. I don't know.

01:02:800 (4) - maybe NC here, I think this is a completely different formation from the previous part, so I think it merits an NC

as normal, not much to say about your map. Nice and polished, no major mistakes, so this mod is pretty much just a formality. Good luck!

EDIT: 500th post

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-03-15T09:53:07+00:00

Thank you for the mod :3 Fixed everything.

Darksonic

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Darksonic 2013-03-15T16:09:36+00:00

Hai o3o

Normal:

00:17:800 (4): While watching the map I expected a repeat here, maybe do it and delete next note?
00:25:800 (5): What about this to improve the pattern?
00:33:300 (1): Spacing!, move it one grid up, or if you want to keep it in the middle of screen, do something with these sliders.
01:04:300 (6,7): Like this?, makes it a bit nicer.
01:18:800 (2,4): CTRL+J?, flows better.

Hard:

00:42:800 (5): CTRL+G please, flows better with the symmetry. (And I guess it's not a problem to have that jump, but it's up to you)
01:14:300 (3): If I were you I'd make this a bit less curved, because that straight slider overlapping this doesn't seems too well.

That's all I can find, sorry for my poor mod ;_;

Good luck <3

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-03-15T16:21:20+00:00

Everything fixed, thank you for the helpful mod. :3

Loooctav

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Loooctav 2013-03-17T01:23:32+00:00

Hi! Random mod x3
My stomach hurts xD

[General]
Source: Kiss x Sis

[Normal]
~General~
00:43:300 - 00:44:800 low volume so as not to hear both the Whistle

~Hitobjects~
00:07:800 (2) The song is somewhat relaxed, I think the sliders also should be relaxed... I understand?
00:15:800 (1) ^
00:17:800 (4) ^
00:19:800 (2,3,4) That pattern looks weird :/
00:38:800 (3) The song is somewhat relaxed, I think the sliders also should be relaxed...
00:40:800 (1) ^
01:03:800 (5,6)

Screenshot + Code

360,132,63800,2,0,L|360:64,2,60
464,192,64800,1,8,0:0:0:0:

01:17:800 (1) The song is somewhat relaxed, I think the sliders also should be relaxed...

~Hitsounds~
00:10:300 (5) Add Claps In Revers Arrow
00:36:800 (5) Clap at the end of the slider
00:37:300 (1) Whistle in the beginning of the slider

Just Modding easy :3
Good Luck

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-03-17T10:41:02+00:00

Thanks for the mod, fixed some stuff. :3

CXu

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CXu 2013-03-17T20:31:18+00:00

Yo Bakandrea =3=

Random modding because I can \o\

[General]

Pretty sure offset -10.

[Normal]

00:03:300 (1) - Add whistle. (and at 00:05:300 (3) | 00:07:300 (1) | 00:09:300 (3) | 00:10:300 (5)
00:15:300 (5,1) - Swap new combo to keep consistency with 00:19:300 (1,2), as well as beginning on a downbeat. Oh and add normal-hitnormal on (5) to keep consistency with later notes.
Wow I don't really have anything else to say lol.

[Hard]

00:38:800 (4) - Might wanna move this to 344;120 to make a curve motion from (3) to (4). Move endpoint to 208;68 if you do this.
00:41:300 (6,1) - Line this up with 00:40:800 (5) (and of course fix symmetry for 00:42:800 (5).
00:54:550 (1,2,3) - Since this part is quieter, either lower volume here a bit, or replace the normal-hitnormal with whistles. They're pretty loud at the moment.
00:56:550 (4,1) - Imo, swap new combo here, so you have the same combo for the same sequence in the song.

That's all. Good luck!

Best mod 2013.

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-03-18T11:31:46+00:00

Thank you for the helpful mod, CXu. :3

Fixed everything and updated ^^

Loooctav

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Loooctav 2013-03-18T12:38:46+00:00

Star~

riffy

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riffy 2013-03-18T13:03:46+00:00

I can even trade my soul for a cake, y'know

[General]

Your BG seems kinda low quality. I'm pretty sure you can find a better one! It's still kinda low, imo. o3o/
Every single mod I tell people to use slider tick rate 2. It fits with background music, and sounds better.
You can use more tags to help us to find your map! For example put character names in tags o3o/
Are you sure about source? I think you should capitalize some letters :3 KissXsis
Try to map an [Easy] diff. I'm pretty sure, that you need one. This song is short, so, it's better to map [Easy] as well.
Don't silince spinners, 30% volume will work here better, I think.

[Normal]

00:29:790 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. (AiBat, y'know)
00:29:790 (1) - nazi - for some beginners this overlap (hitburst x circle) is a little confusing. If this diff is the easiest diff, then move it some grids down to avoid overlap?
00:38:790 (3,1) - I feel quite confused because vocals stop in the middle of these sliders. try to replace it with 1/1 slider and circle, it will fit here much better, I think.
00:53:790 (3) - try to use 1/1 slider with reverse here,I think it will work here better. It will fit both with music and vocals, so it'll be a bit more enjoyable to play.
01:01:290 (1) - I'm sure that this cicle appears too soon after spinner! This is the easiest diff, remember! (otherwise, you should place a circle at 00:29:290 - to keep consistency and to follow rhythm!)

[Hard]

00:37:040 (7) - for such a calm diff, this slider is too short and might be hard to read. Try to speed up it a bit!
Easier to read, looks better and everyone is happy! See? :3
00:53:290 (1,1) - nazi - those two sliders are kinda boring because they're absolutely the same! Why don't you curve them a bit? So, pattern will be more creative, enjoyable and cute :3 in case of laziness click me

You could give map even better flow, by making sliders perfectly-blanket (01:24:040 (5) - for example) but it's just my opinion and I can't force you to do it.

~~~~~~~~~~
Hope it will help you!

Edit: I'm two mods late, hope my mod isnt too outdated. :<

Last edited by riffy 2013-03-18T13:44:06+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Diasios

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Diasios 2013-03-18T13:11:07+00:00

IRC mod

"o3o"

13:45 xxheroxx: inizio dalla normal
13:45 xxheroxx: 00:03:540 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2jPkz
13:47 xxheroxx: 00:35:790 (4) - questo slider potresti farlo come 00:37:290 (1) - per creare una simmetria e flow migliori
13:48 xxheroxx: 00:57:290 (3) - non cambiare la posizione e capovolgilo verticalmente, aggiungi una ripetizione e sposta il cerchio successivo sopra in modo da creare una pattern a rombo
13:48 xxheroxx: 00:57:290 (3) - non cambiare la posizione e capovolgilo verticalmente, aggiungi una ripetizione e sposta il cerchio successivo sopra in modo da creare una pattern a rombo
13:50 xxheroxx: 01:12:290 (4,1,2,3) - qua il flow è un pò una merda, prova a modificare lo spacing un pò in modo da renderlo più fluido
13:51 xxheroxx: ad esempio http://puu.sh/2jPqW prova a fare qualcosa del genere
13:51 xxheroxx: come vedi scorre meglio
13:52 xxheroxx: that's all per la normal
13:52 Andrea: fixato tutto
13:52 Andrea: tranne l'ultima :v
13:52 xxheroxx: ok
13:56 xxheroxx: comunque 00:18:790 (9,1) -
13:56 xxheroxx: qua non mi piace molto la forma del 1
13:56 xxheroxx: prova a farlo ~
13:58 Andrea: fixed
14:00 xxheroxx: 00:41:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - perchè questa pattern non è simmetrica con quella precedente? cioè nella stessa posizione ma capovolta orizzontalmente?
14:00 Andrea: per fare in modo che non sia monotona
14:01 xxheroxx: hmm ok, una cosa però
14:01 xxheroxx: 00:41:540 (1) - rendilo come quello prima
14:01 xxheroxx: col punto rosso al centro
14:01 xxheroxx: stessa cosa con quello dopo
14:01 Andrea: sempre per farlo diverso :U
14:01 xxheroxx: ah, alright alright
14:04 xxheroxx: 00:52:290 (1,2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/2jPDQ
14:05 Andrea: non me gusta
14:05 xxheroxx: orz ok
14:05 xxheroxx: 01:24:040 (5,6,7,8) - flip orizzontale
14:05 Andrea: :v
14:05 xxheroxx: the end
14:05 Andrea: fixed

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-03-18T13:15:29+00:00

Thanks for the helpful mods, xxheroxx and Bakari. <3

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Chyo-Kun

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Chyo-Kun 2013-03-18T13:25:09+00:00

Andreaaaah

[Normal]

00:47:790 (5) - Qui ci starebbe bene una NC,dato che la voce in sottofondo è un eco della frase di prima. Se fixi questo però,devi spostare 00:49:290 (1) questo NC su 00:49:790 (2) questo slider.
01:25:290 (1) - Questo spinner sarebbe meglio farlo iniziare sul tick precedente (01:25:040 - ) dato che,così com'è,ti sembra che parta un pò in ritardo rispetto alla canzone

[Hard]
00:10:540 (4,5) - Add clap su questi due beat
00:48:290 (4) - NC?
00:52:540 (2) - In tutte le altre triplette uguali a questa hai usato tre beat,qui perchè uno slider? Usare ancora tre beat non mi sembra un problema,e rende il tutto un pà più difficile,che sarebbe buono per una Hard.
00:54:540 (2) - ^
01:08:290 (6) - NC

Non ci sono errori,le cose che ho scritto non sono nemmeno tanto importanti per il rank. Solo piccole cose che ho notato.
La mappa è molto bella,da un mapper come te non ci si può aspettare altro ^^
Buona fortuna!

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-03-18T13:53:34+00:00

Thank you for modding, Chyo-kun.

Nemis

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Nemis 2013-03-18T14:50:49+00:00

[Hard]
00:04:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - Migliora il pentagono
00:37:040 (7) - Credo che sia un 1/16 (sottolineo credo °>° dai un'ascoltata con playback rate 25%)
00:37:540 (1,3) - Renderei questi sliders più aderenti a 00:38:040 (2) -
00:41:540 (1) - Stessa cosa ma con 00:42:040 (2) -
00:42:790 (5) - Stessa cosa ma con 00:42:540 (4) -
00:45:290 (1) - Migliorerei la forma di questo slider

SPOILER

00:46:790 (3) - Stessa cosa di sopra

[Normal]
00:23:290 (1) - Renderei questo slider più aderente con 00:24:290 (2) -
00:25:790 (5) - Renderei questo slider più aderente con 00:25:290 (4) -
00:35:790 (4) - Renderei questo slider più aderente con 00:35:290 (3) -
00:57:290 (3,4) - Anzichè questi due elementi metterei 00:55:790 (1,2) - questi due riflessi orizzontalmente

SPOILER

01:12:790 (1,2,3) - Cambierei questo pattern, non lo trovo molto carino esteticamente