LunarSakuya
LunarSakuya wrote:
_(:3 」I love you ∠)_ _(┐Me too「ε:)_
General
looks fine
relaxing
00:11:307 (1) - Finish on head, there's some emphasis in the bg music _(┐Fixed with Normal finish「ε:)_
00:33:807 (1) - Soft Finish for similar reason ^ _(┐Same here「ε:)_
00:59:588 (6) - Try stacking on the head of (2) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631431 _(┐Okay「ε:)_
01:31:932 (5) - NC?, kinda like 00:24:432 (1,2) - _(┐Okay「ε:)_
don't mind
00:09:314 (6) - Delete note, I don't really hear anything specific this is following _(:3 」Actually there's a hit-hat∠)_
00:19:041 (3) - NC, kinda "introducing" the new stanza? _(┐Okay「ε:)_
00:26:072 (1) - Delete NC, put NC on next note _(┐Okay「ε:)_
00:53:494 (3,4) - This overlap stood out to me compared to the rest of the map, maybe something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631437 _(┐Okay「ε:)_
01:03:807 (3) - NC _(┐Okay「ε:)_
01:06:619 (5,6) - Make these touch each other like the other similar rhythms in this diff (ex: 01:43:650 (2,3) - ); you could tack the end of (5) under the head of (3) _(:3 」hmm...worrying about the overlap (01:05:447 (1,2,3) - )∠)_
01:33:807 (3) - NC _(┐Okay「ε:)_
01:36:150 (2,3) - Decrease distance for similar reason earlier _(:3 」Since I'm keeping the previous one, I'll do it here as well.∠)_
01:41:072 (1) - Delete NC, NC on next note _(┐Okay「ε:)_
01:41:775 (2,3) - Touch _(:3 」Nyan!∠)_
please be lazy
00:17:869 (1) - if you want, center this within the square _(:3 」huehue∠)_
00:18:338 (1) - Delete NC, it didn't have this in [don't mind] _(┐Okay, mistake「ε:)_
00:19:744 (1) - Delete NC _(┐Okay, mistakeagain!!!「ε:)_
00:29:119 (4) - Move this back to the blue tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631447 to match the rhythm better; then you could put a note or extend the slider to the red tick _(:3 」hmm...added a triple instead, intended to follow the drum here 00:29:119 - ∠)_
00:30:525 (2,3,4,5) - This rhythm is more fitting imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631448 _(:3 」Similar to above, tried another rhythm pattern but failed. ∠)_
00:33:807 (2) - Soft finish on head _(┐Okay「ε:)_
00:53:025 (2) - Felt awkward to play at first, maybe rotate like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631450 _(:3 」hmm..that breaks the flow quite much∠)_
01:01:228 (1) - Delete NC, didn't catch the point of this _(┐Okay「ε:)_
01:14:939 - Add note here, will be nice with the bg music imo; maybe a pattern like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631452 _(┐Okay「ε:)_
hnnnngggg _(┐Uguuuuuuuuuu「ε:)_
Thank you >w</