[Easy]
your distance is very inconsistent. you general use 0,8 but at the begin you use 0,9 and 1,14 ..i recommend to use 1,0 or 0,9 but 0,8 is too less imo
00:05:209 (2) - make it go to the next white tick because its better to play. i also recomend to place it somewhere else but not there because the overlap with (3) looks ugly imo.
00:07:209 (4) - let it go to the next white tick
->i tried this here
http://puu.sh/1GijO00:08:709 (1) - if you did ^ (4) will overlap with (1) so rotate (1) by 25° (selection centre)
suggestions for ds=1,000:11:709 (2) - move to 484;184 because the distance is inconsistent here
00:14:209 (2) - move to 388;136 to fix distance)
00:16:209 (4) - move to 232;24
00:16:709 (1) - 164;176
00:17:209 (2) - 184;76
00:29:709 (1,3) - 24;84
00:33:709 (1) - 376;132
00:35:709 (3) - 288;172
00:36:709 (4) - 288;164
00:37:709 (1) - 336;288
00:38:209 (2) - 308;192
00:40:709 (3) - 241;275
00:41:709 (1) - 432;212
00:42:709 (2) - 332;212
00:43:709 (3) - 232;212 to make it in oe line with the slider and stacking it on (1)
suggestions for ds=1,0(00:49:709 (1) - 60;152)
00:50:209 (2) - 156;120
00:51:209 (3) - 308;128
00:51:709 (4) - 308;192
00:52:709 (5) -468;356
00:53:709 (1) - 492;156 the "jump" to (2) makes no sense
suggestions for ds=1,000:55:209 (3) - 224;176
00:55:709 (4) - 148;240
00:56:709 (5) - 24;212
00:59:208 (2) - 304;132
00:59:708 (3) - 384;192
01:01:708 (1) - 236;328
01:03:208 (2) - 232;228
01:03:708 (3) - 232;128
01:05:208 (4) - 332;128
01:05:708 (1) - 408;64
01:07:208 (2) - 444;232
01:07:708 (3) - 344;232
01:09:708 (1) - 284;212
01:11:208 (2) - 204;207
01:11:708 (3) - 124;212
01:13:708 (1,2) - 256;64 and 256;264
01:19:708 (2,3) - 136;236 and 340;332
[Normal]
cs +1. so small circles in normal = not okay
00:04:709 (1,2,3) - general you use ds=0,9 but here 1,1
00:08:709 (1) - why it is so close to (3)?
00:12:959 (2) - 356;196 to fic distance
00:15:458 (3) - weird to play because it starts on the red tick. i prefer to move it back to the white tick to 192;96 and remove (2) adnd longer it to 00:16:209
00:32:959 (2,3) - this spacing makes no sense
00:34:126 (2) - move it on the white tick and move to 368;268
00:35:209 (3) - 228;316
00:36:959 (2) - 360;92 so it mirrored to (1)
00:42:709 (6) - 224;160 to make a square and fix distance
00:43:709 (1,2,3) - move them to 44;184
00:48:709 (2,3) - make them to a slider. atm its impossible to read
00:51:209 (2) - it should be 472;184
00:53:209 (4) - 268;128
00:55:208 (2) - 288;224
00:57:208 (4) - 264;80
01:02:958 (2) - 308;268
01:04:958 (2,3) - move them to 476;192
01:07:708 (1,2,3) - recommend to make instead two sliders because its easier to play
01:10:083 (2) - it should be 292;64
01:13:708 (1,2,3) - move them to 132;184
01:17:708 (1,2) - 64;148 and 256;236 so its mirrored
[KoiSuru]
ar +1 because it a hard. also ar6 it doesnt fit with the slider-velocity
00:52:709 (6) - the double-repeat is very surprising
01:01:708 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - is that copied :O?