Banana here from my queue
[General]
background is 1366*768, ok now?
soft whistle is a bit loud to me under 45%-55% volume part
[y]
00:07:398 (1) - start at corner is not needed, x:160 y:168 is suggested
00:44:687 (3,5) - it is possible to make this two triangle patterns better
00:50:236 (2) - x:336 y:240?
01:05:108 (3) - x:16 y:292 and 01:05:773 (4) x:104 y:84
01:12:876 (1) - move the second last slider point two grid left
01:16:427 (1) - curved too much and near the next slider's tail
01:17:981 (5) - curved too much again
01:39:733 (1) - curve downside?
01:57:046 (4) - it is a bit abrupt to use a 60° angle through vocal "together", ctrl+g?
02:01:929 - drag the break to here?
02:11:251 (6) - 1/4 early, here is no sound in the music
02:23:681 (5) - stack here plays not that well imo, consider repeat the previous silder
02:31:894 (3,4) - curve more and make a fan pattern with (1)?
02:35:667 (4,5) - nc with pink and white combo color? it's about to be kiai, and the beat pattern is relatively hard
02:40:994 (3) -
just suggestion03:02:302 (3) - near to (1), move left
03:04:078 (3,4) - this circle need more work imo
03:16:285 (2) - x:256 y:208?
[Normal]
00:57:783 (2) - close spacing
01:50:609 - consider move the red slider point to where the slider ball is at this time
02:01:929 - drag the break to here?
02:07:256 (1,4) - share same center? like
this02:24:791 (5) - consider avoid using silder-circle-slider stack, looks bad during game play
03:08:073 (4) - rotate-9°?
[Easy]
00:28:706 (1,2) - move these two note to avoid (2) to the bottom, for overall balance. same issues on other note on the edge, including the last circle
02:01:929 - drag the break to here?
Good Luck~