1. Easy (1,71 stars, 189 notes)
2. Normal (3,52 stars, 249 notes)
3. y (4,86 stars, 449 notes)

Ayu wrote:

sexo

[Luanny] wrote:

Ayu wrote:

sexo

aheuhauehe

DJ Angel wrote:

n é estupro se ela gosa

[Luanny] wrote:

nouk so pro

>Easy
>B

1. 00:08:952 I would rotate this by -9° (selections centre)+fixspacing / fits better to the previous slider imo
2. 00:34:921 (5) sliderhead: A normal-clap would fit better at this place than a drum-finish
3. 01:27:082 (2) maybe something like this?: http://puu.sh/2goXA
4. 01:31:743 (3) sliderhead: same like at 00:34:921 ?
5. 03:03:190 this would fit great imo: http://puu.sh/2gp3d
6. Its hard to find anything wrong in this Diff

1. 00:52:678 this would fit better to the vocals: http://puu.sh/2gp8v
2. 02:47:209 (1) put it to x:107 y:321 ,so it is a perfect blanket +fixspacing
3. 03:02:080 maybe add a note (if it doesn't destroy the pattern)

1. 00:18:052 (1,2,3) put everything one grid down? (3) touches the previous slider /isn't a big thing, just a little detail i saw)
2. 00:34:033 (1) slider-end: In every of the other difficulties there is a drum-finish. Why not in Easy, too?
3. 00:34:921 (3) slider-head: same^
4. 00:48:239 (1,1,...) xD maybe this is too easy
5. 02:35:445 xD

1. Disable letterboxes? They kinda hurt your BG, imo.
2. Try Slider Tick Rate 2, it fits here the way better (a specially with kiai pats!)

1. Can you place one more break somewhere? It feels like this diff is too tiring for beginners! :<
2. 00:38:029 - we can hear "we belooong" starts here, and it feels kinda confusing to have vocals started in the middle of a slider. :<
   
   re-arranged pattern, see if you will like my rhythm!

   I don't put code because you can put sliders much better than me, this screenshot is just an example of rhythm!
   
3. 00:40:248 - hitsound-nazi - try to use clap hitsound here? You know, use custom slidertick.wav to itsound this slidertick.it will look like this
   Note: similar suggestion for 00:42:468 - i don't like that vocals start at the end of this slider, it feels confusing. Try to have some fun with hitsounds, or end slider 1/1 earlier and place a circle at 00:42:468.
4. 00:48:239 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Uh.. Huh, I guess you know what to do here, right? This pattern is totally unacceptable for any diff [Easy]!
5. 01:01:556 (3,1) - nazi - inconsistent spacing here, try to keep it consistent! otherwise, it may confuse beginners
6. 01:46:836 (1) - nazi - overlapped with HP-bar, not a big problem but will confuse some beginnes. :< I recommend you to fix it.
7. 02:35:445 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,1) - What a nice stream! I guess you should place NC somewhere, to keep numbers under +16 Uh.. Huh, I guess you know what to do here, right? This pattern is totally unacceptable for any diff [Easy]!
8. 03:08:517 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -nazi - something here feels TOTALLY wrong. Short combo>one-slider-combo>7 objects long combo / your comboing feel inconsistent here! :<

1. This AR feels good during slow parts, but during kiais it feels slow. Try to use AR5 here! It feels ok during slow parts and PERFECTLY fits with kiais!
2. It's a good idea to reduce spacing during calm parts of the song! Patterns will look neater and easier to read!
3. 00:27:818 (5,1) - nazi - with low AR (1)'s start will be overlapped. It's ok, but this pattern could be better, imo. simple triangle-flow
4. 00:38:251 (5,6) - nazi - this pattern probably will be mistakenly read as 1/2 jump. I'd recommend you to use easier flow here. The song is calm, and easy flow will fit here! symmetrical flow which is easier to read and still looks ok.
5. 00:49:792 (5,1) - to make triplets easier to read, unstack them! With low AR triplets are kinda painful for players, so unstacking them would be a great idea!
   Note: obviously, you should do the same thing with 00:56:673 (5,6,1) - and other triplets
6. 01:43:728 (1,2,3,4,5) - this one may be too hard to read due to slow AR.
7. 01:48:612 (3) - try to use /1/1 slider> circle/ here, instead? i feel like 01:49:499 - should be separated!
   
   an example of cute rhythm

   
   alternative pattern (
   
8. 01:55:714 (4,1) - ULTRA-NAZI - try to stack those two! Because.. well, because it gives better flow somehow.
9. 02:45:433 (3,4,1) - nazi - try to use blanket sliders here? I'm pretty sure that it will improve your flow A LOT. an example of blanket-sliders flow

1. 01:03:332 (3) - try to stack it with (1)'s start? I feel like jumpy pattern should go on here!
   
   I really think it will improve your flow A LOT

   
2. 01:46:836 (1,2,3) - nazi - this combo feels the way shorter than others, Are you sure that your comboing here is consistent? I feel like something is missing here. :<
3. 01:49:943 - clap should be placed at 01:49:943 (you can do it if you add custom slider tick,, y'know). so, revome clap from 01:49:499 (5) 's reverse since it doesn't fits here at all :<

GamerX4life wrote:

Hii
I'm a bad modder,but here's my mod as requested:
(only suggestions)

[y]

1. 00:34:921 (5) sliderhead: A normal-clap would fit better at this place than a drum-finish i'm making the same silly thing as I did for love song, aka creating drum lines :p I like it that way now
2. 01:31:743 (3) sliderhead: same like at 00:34:921 ? same~
3. 03:03:190 this would fit great imo: http://puu.sh/2gp3d it indeed fits great but somehoe I like this 1/2 and the whole pattern itself
4. Its hard to find anything wrong in this Diff

[Normal]

1. 00:52:678 this would fit better to the vocals: http://puu.sh/2gp8v yup
2. 02:47:209 (1) put it to x:107 y:321 ,so it is a perfect blanket +fixspacing almost perfect blanket, yeah. fixed and made it perfect!
3. 03:02:080 maybe add a note (if it doesn't destroy the pattern)yeah it will destroy the pattern :c

Nice map!
Hope it helps and Good Luck!
inverness is so cool <- indeed

-Bakari- wrote:

'cause [y] diffs are cool
'cause inv is cool
and 'cause I like this song

inv is so damn cool
[General]

1. Disable letterboxes? They kinda hurt your BG, imo. sure
2. Try Slider Tick Rate 2, it fits here the way better (a specially with kiai pats!) sounds overmapped D: and I'm a slidertick2 hater

[Normal]

1. This AR feels good during slow parts, but during kiais it feels slow. Try to use AR5 here! It feels ok during slow parts and PERFECTLY fits with kiais! yup!
2. It's a good idea to reduce spacing during calm parts of the song! Patterns will look neater and easier to read! this spacing was on purpose :< I like it, plus it gives a nice spread between normal~hard
3. 00:27:818 (5,1) - nazi - with low AR (1)'s start will be overlapped. It's ok, but this pattern could be better, imo. simple triangle-flow well, I think it is fixed now that I changed the AR, at least seems to be
4. 00:38:251 (5,6) - nazi - this pattern probably will be mistakenly read as 1/2 jump. I'd recommend you to use easier flow here. The song is calm, and easy flow will fit here! symmetrical flow which is easier to read and still looks ok. it totally breaks the next pattern but I fixed it in another way http://puu.sh/2gtIp
5. 00:49:792 (5,1) - to make triplets easier to read, unstack them! With low AR triplets are kinda painful for players, so unstacking them would be a great idea! I personally dislike the ideia.. it looks kinds ugly but I may change it later if I receive more feedback on this. The noob player I asked to test didn't even notice the stacks
   Note: obviously, you should do the same thing with 00:56:673 (5,6,1) - and other triplets
6. 01:43:728 (1,2,3,4,5) - this one may be too hard to read due to slow AR. fixed with new AR \o/
7. 01:48:612 (3) - try to use /1/1 slider> circle/ here, instead? i feel like 01:49:499 - should be separated!
   
   an example of cute rhythm

   
   alternative pattern (
   
   using the second idea
8. 01:55:714 (4,1) - ULTRA-NAZI - try to stack those two! Because.. well, because it gives better flow somehow. fixed
9. 02:45:433 (3,4,1) - nazi - try to use blanket sliders here? I'm pretty sure that it will improve your flow A LOT. an example of blanket-sliders flowsecond slider already fixed, and I don't want to change the shape of the first

[y]

1. 01:03:332 (3) - try to stack it with (1)'s start? I feel like jumpy pattern should go on here! feels weird with the next stack
   
   I really think it will improve your flow A LOT

   
2. 01:46:836 (1,2,3) - nazi - this combo feels the way shorter than others, Are you sure that your comboing here is consistent? I feel like something is missing here. :< fixed for bd
3. 01:49:943 - clap should be placed at 01:49:943 (you can do it if you add custom slider tick,, y'know). so, revome clap from 01:49:499 (5) 's reverse since it doesn't fits here at all :< it accidentally sounded cool with the vocals when I was doing the hitsounds so I kept / will keep it aheuaheuae

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Lovely diffs, neat patterns. What else can I say? Star! ~

GamerX4life wrote:

[y]

1. 00:08:952 I would rotate this by -9° (selections centre)+fixspacing / fits better to the previous slider imo done
2. 01:27:082 (2) maybe something like this?: http://puu.sh/2goXA no, flows bad imo

[Easy]

1. 00:18:052 (1,2,3) put everything one grid down? (3) touches the previous slider /isn't a big thing, just a little detail i saw) done
2. 00:34:033 (1) slider-end: In every of the other difficulties there is a drum-finish. Why not in Easy, too? done
3. 00:34:921 (3) slider-head: same^ done
4. 00:48:239 (1,1,...) xD maybe this is too easy yeah, I know, it's a really calm part and I don't want to overmap it, I tried making as playable as possible but anything harder would be overmapped :/
5. 02:35:445 xD same

-Bakari- wrote:

[Easy]

1. Can you place one more break somewhere? It feels like this diff is too tiring for beginners! :< breaks should always be consistent between all diffs.
2. 00:38:029 - we can hear "we belooong" starts here, and it feels kinda confusing to have vocals started in the middle of a slider. :< no, because I simply don't think "easy" should be always constant 1/1.
3. 00:40:248 - hitsound-nazi - try to use clap hitsound here? You know, use custom slidertick.wav to itsound this slidertick.it will look like this I don't think it's really necessary.. lol
   Note: similar suggestion for 00:42:468 - i don't like that vocals start at the end of this slider, it feels confusing. Try to have some fun with hitsounds, or end slider 1/1 earlier and place a circle at 00:42:468. same as before, 1/1 everytime is simply boring.
4. 00:48:239 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Uh.. Huh, I guess you know what to do here, right? This pattern is totally unacceptable for any diff [Easy]! I know it's too easy, but I can't do anything, I tried my best >:
5. 01:01:556 (3,1) - nazi - inconsistent spacing here, try to keep it consistent! otherwise, it may confuse beginners this is just symmetry lol
6. 01:46:836 (1) - nazi - overlapped with HP-bar, not a big problem but will confuse some beginnes. :< I recommend you to fix it. NO.
7. 02:35:445 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,1) - What a nice stream! I guess you should place NC somewhere, to keep numbers under +16 added a new combo, thank you!
8. 03:08:517 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -nazi - something here feels TOTALLY wrong. Short combo>one-slider-combo>7 objects long combo / your comboing feel inconsistent here! :< fixed

Erylex wrote:

it m4m from chat.
My noob mod

For mapset:

Change timing to 132 BPM nope, the current bpm is right
For "Normal":
Change speed fo this slider 00:55:341 (3) - to 0.75 x o.o
Remove Note - 00:56:451 (1) - why
Put NC - 00:56:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why
03:09:183 (1,2) - change to 03:09:405 (1,2) - & pass to http://puu.sh/2iAcQ ???
03:08:961 (5) - add circle wot

The end

My mod so baaad.
Good luck

1. Bitrate 160 kBit/s, this is rankable, but I guess 192 kBit/s would be preferred
2. Background is 1365*768, the right resolution is 1366*768. I doubt anyone will care about that one pixel, but fix if you want
3. If Inverness is or will be involved in this mapset, add him in tags

1. 00:18:940 (3,4) - the flow would be better if you made 4 curvy
2. 00:34:921 (3) - I really recommend not to start the kiai with a slider end, because a slider end always is "weaker" than a circle or a slider start. Therefore, shorten the slider and add a circle at 00:35:809 -
3. 00:39:360 (1,2) - I don't like these. (2) seems to be only used this way so it's parallel to (1), but not because it fits the music. I believe shortening it and shaping it differently would improve this
4. 00:48:239 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - lol
5. 00:51:790 (3) - Make this a Slider like (1) and (2)?
6. 00:57:117 (1) - make this slider symmetrical
7. 00:58:893 (3) - I don't really think this long slider fits
8. 01:00:668 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this bothers me.. first the spacing is too low for 01:01:556 (3,1) - And I kinda dislike this symmetrical pattern.
   After checking Hitsounds I now get what is off here. By skipping 01:02:000 - you left out a clap, making this feel empty, so add something there
9. 01:09:547 (1,2) - One slider instead?
10. 01:11:766 (1,2,3) - the first time I think the flow is off. Ctrl + H (3)? Ofc that would mean rearranging the part afterwards
11. 01:14:874 (1,2,3) - make (1) and (3) blanket (2)? If not, move (2) a bit down&right so it doesn't look like it's supposed to be a blanket
12. 01:37:070 (5) - rotate this by about 30° anti-clockwise and move it up for flow
13. 01:39:733 (1,2) - Again, I don't approve of these long sliders, at least not in the Kiai, you are skipping beats with them
14. 01:50:387 (1,2) - rotate by 45~55°? Also again, slider length
15. 02:35:445 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - whee
16. 02:45:877 (2) - stack on previous (4)?
17. 02:46:321 (3) - curve and move a few grids right
18. 02:48:984 (3) - moving this a bit to the right and rotating it clockwise wouldn't hurt I think
19. 03:06:741 (3) - slider length doesn't fit again
20. 03:08:517 (1,2) - click me
    
    Hitsounds:
    
21. 00:24:267 (3) - is this whistle intentional?
22. 00:48:239 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Áll whistle + clap please to emphasize the song
23. 01:13:986 (3) - the whistle seems a little out of place
24. 01:35:738 - add a custom clap-like slider tick so you can keep the clap pattern here
25. 02:07:256 (1) - finish on start?

1. Spacing 1.10 seems a bit high for me. Also, maybe CS 3 fits better?
2. 00:09:174 (3,4) - flows badly, rotate 3 a bit?
3. 00:19:162 (4) - Okay, I get this is because of the vocals, but the slider still seems confusing, especially since you didn't do this earlier
4. 00:23:379 (4,5) - make those curvy, having them straight lines looks bad
5. 00:27:818 (5,6,1) - I wouldn't do it this way. you could move (1) further to the left and use a triangle like pattern here
6. 00:35:809 (1) - I don't think edgy sliders like that fit the music, but I guess that's subjective
7. 00:47:351 (2) - I can't explain it, but I think this one should be curvy
8. 00:49:127 (4) - ^
9. 00:52:678 (5) - kinda unexpected
10. 01:05:108 (3) - dislike this slider shape. Maybe something like the ones in Easy, these snake sliders
11. 01:10:435 (4) - Ctrl + G for flow?
12. 01:14:874 (1,4) - (4)'s hitburst partially covers (1), this looks a bit messy
13. 01:39:289 (1,2,3) - I'd like to have these sliders to be perfectly symmetrical
14. 01:45:060 (5) - rotate this by at least 45° and rearrange (6)
15. 01:50:387 (1) - usually used for blankets, this slider shape doesn't really make sense here
16. 02:07:256 (1,2) - Don't stack these, the slider has an unexpected rhythm, beginners might panic and fail the circle
17. 02:10:364 (5) - click me, also, yes I changed the skin to check the thing with the hitbursts previously
18. 02:29:452 (1) - move this so that it blankets (5)'s end, maybe change the shape/rotate a tiny bit so you can keep the symmetry afterwards
19. 02:45:433 (3) - sorry, but this shape doesn't seem to fit at all
20. 03:04:522 (3,2) - no overlap here please
21. 03:08:961 - why didn't you place a circle here?
    
    Hitsounds:
22. Your whistles in the beginning seem kinda random =/
23. 00:22:935 (3) - remove whistle
24. 00:31:370 (4) - ^ on sliderend
25. 00:56:895 (6) - seems intentional, but I dislike still
26. 01:21:533 (6) - remove whistle
27. 02:07:256 (1) - finish?
28. 02:19:465 (2) - whistle seems out of place
29. 02:20:574 (4) - add whistle
30. 02:21:905 (5) - remove whistle
31. You need a pattern for these whistles D:
32. 03:09:183 (1) - remove clap

1. 00:46:241 (2,3) - meh flow
2. 00:58:005 (3,4) - raise spacing a bit?
3. 01:01:334 (2,3) - this jump is a little unexpected
4. 01:49:055 (2,3) - I would make this spacing consistent with the the spacing of (1) and (2)
5. 01:59:266 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - naaaah. Too unexpected. Lower spacing by first 3 circles so the player understands what's going on
6. 02:37:443 (3,4) - curvy?
7. This is really amazing
   
   Hitsounds:
   
8. 02:07:256 (1) - finish, as also suggested for the other diffs?

Zarerion wrote:

Hi there

[General]

1. Bitrate 160 kBit/s, this is rankable, but I guess 192 kBit/s would be preferred < Blame BD /runs
2. Background is 1365*768, the right resolution is 1366*768. I doubt anyone will care about that one pixel, but fix if you want > fffff one pixel
3. If Inverness is or will be involved in this mapset, add him in tags < I'm waiting for him D:

[Normal]

1. Spacing 1.10 seems a bit high for me. Also, maybe CS 3 fits better? nope, I like it now
2. 00:09:174 (3,4) - flows badly, rotate 3 a bit? ok
3. 00:19:162 (4) - Okay, I get this is because of the vocals, but the slider still seems confusing, especially since you didn't do this earlier I think it is ok D: and the map is just starting..
4. 00:23:379 (4,5) - make those curvy, having them straight lines looks bad I like them
5. 00:27:818 (5,6,1) - I wouldn't do it this way. you could move (1) further to the left and use a triangle like pattern here ok
6. 00:35:809 (1) - I don't think edgy sliders like that fit the music, but I guess that's subjective I like it D:
7. 00:47:351 (2) - I can't explain it, but I think this one should be curvy nah
8. 00:49:127 (4) - ^ ^
9. 00:52:678 (5) - kinda unexpected fixed
10. 01:05:108 (3) - dislike this slider shape. Maybe something like the ones in Easy, these snake sliders nah
11. 01:10:435 (4) - Ctrl + G for flow? tringles > all
12. 01:14:874 (1,4) - (4)'s hitburst partially covers (1), this looks a bit messy I don't have much to do here
13. 01:39:289 (1,2,3) - I'd like to have these sliders to be perfectly symmetrical ok
14. 01:45:060 (5) - rotate this by at least 45° and rearrange (6) ok
15. 01:50:387 (1) - usually used for blankets, this slider shape doesn't really make sense here but I like it
16. 02:07:256 (1,2) - Don't stack these, the slider has an unexpected rhythm, beginners might panic and fail the circle it's the same lol, it's 1/2 anyways
17. 02:10:364 (5) - click me, also, yes I changed the skin to check the thing with the hitbursts previously ok
18. 02:29:452 (1) - move this so that it blankets (5)'s end, maybe change the shape/rotate a tiny bit so you can keep the symmetry afterwards nah
19. 02:45:433 (3) - sorry, but this shape doesn't seem to fit at all i like it
20. 03:04:522 (3,2) - no overlap here please what to do then
21. 03:08:961 - why didn't you place a circle here? to change the rhythm a bit
    
    Hitsounds:
22. Your whistles in the beginning seem kinda random =/
23. 00:22:935 (3) - remove whistle
24. 00:31:370 (4) - ^ on sliderend
25. 00:56:895 (6) - seems intentional, but I dislike still
26. 01:21:533 (6) - remove whistle
27. 02:07:256 (1) - finish?
28. 02:19:465 (2) - whistle seems out of place
29. 02:20:574 (4) - add whistle
30. 02:21:905 (5) - remove whistle
31. You need a pattern for these whistles D:
32. 03:09:183 (1) - remove clap

fixed some
[y]
Not much to do here, let's see..

1. 00:46:241 (2,3) - meh flow it's perfect o.o
2. 01:01:334 (2,3) - this jump is a little unexpected I disagree, it's just a little spacing change
3. 01:59:266 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - naaaah. Too unexpected. Lower spacing by first 3 circles so the player understands what's going on nah
4. 02:37:443 (3,4) - curvy? it's BD's part but 1 vote for no
5. This is really amazing
   
   Hitsounds:
   
6. 02:07:256 (1) - finish, as also suggested for the other diffs? the song does it itself and finish is too loud

I'm honestly sorry for this bad mod, but y diff really has no flaws. Awesome flow. Take a star.

Erylex wrote:

00:14:057 (4) - Add note no.. doesn't make sense with the rhythm i'm using
01:13:542 (3) - add note plays badly..

Zarerion wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:18:940 (3,4) - the flow would be better if you made 4 curvy done
2. 00:34:921 (3) - I really recommend not to start the kiai with a slider end, because a slider end always is "weaker" than a circle or a slider start. Therefore, shorten the slider and add a circle at 00:35:809 - imho in this case it fits, since it's like a crescendo (or whatever people call this) there, the slider simply follows that.
3. 00:39:360 (1,2) - I don't like these. (2) seems to be only used this way so it's parallel to (1), but not because it fits the music. I believe shortening it and shaping it differently would improve this done
4. 00:48:239 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - lol uaehaue
5. 00:51:790 (3) - Make this a Slider like (1) and (2)? nah
6. 00:57:117 (1) - make this slider symmetrical meh...
7. 00:58:893 (3) - I don't really think this long slider fits follows the guitar
8. 01:00:668 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this bothers me.. first the spacing is too low for 01:01:556 (3,1) - And I kinda dislike this symmetrical pattern. i like it asfdasfdads but ok, added a note
   After checking Hitsounds I now get what is off here. By skipping 01:02:000 - you left out a clap, making this feel empty, so add something there
9. 01:09:547 (1,2) - One slider instead? follows background instruments..
10. 01:11:766 (1,2,3) - the first time I think the flow is off. Ctrl + H (3)? Ofc that would mean rearranging the part afterwards done
11. 01:14:874 (1,2,3) - make (1) and (3) blanket (2)? If not, move (2) a bit down&right so it doesn't look like it's supposed to be a blanket R.I.P. spacing, but done
12. 01:37:070 (5) - rotate this by about 30° anti-clockwise and move it up for flow done
13. 01:39:733 (1,2) - Again, I don't approve of these long sliders, at least not in the Kiai, you are skipping beats with them meh, they play fine
14. 01:50:387 (1,2) - rotate by 45~55°? Also again, slider length i'm okay with how it is
15. 02:45:877 (2) - stack on previous (4)? done
16. 02:46:321 (3) - curve and move a few grids right nah
17. 02:48:984 (3) - moving this a bit to the right and rotating it clockwise wouldn't hurt I think it's just a mirrored copy of (1), imo it fits with the pattern
18. 03:06:741 (3) - slider length doesn't fit again mehhhhhhhhhhh
19. 03:08:517 (1,2) - click me done
    
    Hitsounds:
    
20. 00:24:267 (3) - is this whistle intentional? sounds too empty without it imo
21. 01:13:986 (3) - the whistle seems a little out of place removed
22. 01:35:738 - add a custom clap-like slider tick so you can keep the clap pattern here mehhhhhhhhhhhh
23. 02:07:256 (1) - finish on start? nah

• [y]

1. 00:58:005 (3,4) - raise spacing a bit? what why
2. 02:37:443 (3,4) - curvy? nah
3. This is really amazing ikr