1. Hard (4,28 stars, 122 notes)
2. Normal (1,54 stars, 64 notes)

S h i o n wrote:

Hi,dragonxcz.
i still remember Fukuhara Kaori & Yuuki Aoi - Tomodachi
very nice map so don't give up! -we will see later, I don't know if I'll have time to rank it... anyway, Normal diff calls for remap, because it has the same slider velocity as hard, but Easy and Hard are imo fine to rank I'll consult that with MAT/BAT if it's rankable or not, I don't think so but I'll ask him.

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate -1 -okay
00:09:759 (2,3) - kinda random rhythm imo, try this http://puu.sh/1B7RF if you agree, add whistle on (2) - I'm following vocal here.
00:20:959 (3) - you could stack it on end of last note for such situation next time~ -well, I don't think it's important
01:17:359 (2) - doesn't feel like an anti-jump, just put it far away with a normal spacing - okay

hitsounds (all suggestions. feel free to ignore if you don't like them)
00:08:559 (1) - no whistle
00:11:759 (1) - whistle for end
00:13:359 (3) - ^
00:14:959 (1) - ^
00:24:559 (1,2,3,4) - maybe need some whistle as you like
00:42:159 (3) - whistle for repeating point
00:43:759 (1) - whistle on head but not end
00:45:359 (3) - ^
00:46:959 (1) - whistle for 1st and 3rd point
00:47:759 (2) - whistle for 2nd and 3rd point
00:55:759 (6) - clap and keep whistle also -yeah.. I haven't fixed this, because I followed only claps in song and on these place weren't claps, just listen it carefuly
01:08:559 (6) - the same as above ^

_Well, I have own system of hitsounding and this would break its consistency

[Normal]
HP Drain Rate -1 (4 is too high) -okay
00:11:759 (1,2,1,2) - remove nc from them because they're the same pattern
00:17:359 (4,1) - swap nc. makes more sense to the pattern and beat
00:55:759 (3) - clap
00:59:759 (1) - RNC
01:02:159 (2) - NC and 01:02:959 (1) - RNC just like 01:11:759 (4,1) -
01:06:159 (1) - RNC and 01:09:359 (1) - RNC

_I made 1-stanza long NCs, so I kept it like it was for consistency, sorry.
that's all. star~

Royston wrote:

Hello, M4M here!

[General]
Nice relaxing map.
As it's a pretty quiet song, have you consider using a silent (or quieter) sliderslide.wav?
00:48:559 - Finish here?
01:02:959 - ^

[Normal]
Maybe AR-1, since it's such a slow song
00:27:759 (1) - Suggestion: try lowering the volume at the end of this slider, and adding a slider from 00:29:759 to 00:30:559 (lower the volume for the end of this one too) It fits well with the vocals.
01:21:359 - Add circle?
01:18:959 (1) - Add whistle?

[Hard]
00:30:959 (1) - Make this green combo section a little quieter, to fit with the music
00:31:559 (4) - Whistle on slider start?

Nicely crafted map! Have a star

DJPop wrote:

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

• Can't find video anywhere -well, I'll maybe add it later added
• Mute the slider-slide will make the map sounds nicer -I'll change it ^^


~Normal~
Fine

~Hard~
00:17:359 (5,6,7) - spacings should be around 0.6~0.8, current usage makes the map too hard to read -Ok, but I've used 0.4 now, I think it's well-readable now
00:19:159 (1,2) - ^ -ok
00:30:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ -ok
00:47:759 (2) - move left a bit, don't overlap with any sliders -I think it's okay, sorry

1. AR +1 maybe ... 2 is a bit too low for this diff Imo
2. 00:29:759 Add slider here to 00:30:559 with low volume, fits really well
3. 01:15:759 (1,2) - I think they should be curved aswell because you didn't do straight sliders before and the flow is really well
4. 01:18:959 (1) - Maybe it is possible to make a slider instead with very low volume on end until 01:19:759

1. 00:22:159 (2,3,4) - Imo they look better in a perfect line -> Move (4) to x:348 y:112
2. 01:04:559 (3,4,5) - I think they should have more difference in angle, it looks better imo (to show what I mean: http://puu.sh/1EQPR)
3. 01:08:559 (6) - It is possible to add a finish or clap sound here~
4. 01:20:559 (3) - Slider end add whistle?

Tenshichan wrote:

M4M From my queue~

[Normal]

1. AR +1 maybe ... 2 is a bit too low for this diff Imo -Read mods before you - this song is too calm to have high AR
2. 00:29:759 Add slider here to 00:30:559 with low volume, fits really well -okay, but I think that usual volume is okay here
3. 01:15:759 (1,2) - I think they should be curved aswell because you didn't do straight sliders before and the flow is really well -I like this pattern and I don't want to remake it only to have all sliders curved, sorry
4. 01:18:959 (1) - Maybe it is possible to make a slider instead with very low volume on end until 01:19:759 -I don't like this, sorry

[Hard]

1. 00:22:159 (2,3,4) - Imo they look better in a perfect line -> Move (4) to x:348 y:112 -well, I've made it a bit left intentionally, because it continues on left side
2. 01:04:559 (3,4,5) - I think they should have more difference in angle, it looks better imo (to show what I mean: http://puu.sh/1EQPR) -it's not so important, also I think it's about mapper's style, sorry
3. 01:08:559 (6) - It is possible to add a finish or clap sound here~ - in the music is not clap exactly on this place, I know it would be consistent but there are two places where it is without clap because it has only whistle on song, I also talked about this in another mod
4. 01:20:559 (3) - Slider end add whistle? -It would break consistency

Sorry for poor mod ... To me this map is already very very good, I like it

1. 00:20:959 (2,1) - (nazi) the slider doesn't evenly blanket around the circle
2. 00:34:159 (2) - ^ (though it doesn't matter THAT much)
3. 00:35:759 (3,4) - ^ (same)
4. 01:21:359 (2,1) - For a [Normal] diff, this should be closer (about half as much as it is now)

1. 00:12:359 (2,4) - It's mainly your choice but I feel that you should put a whistle on the beginning of these sliders because it shows a syncopated rhythm. But if not because it ruins consistency, you don't have to.
2. 00:25:159 (2,4) - ^
3. 00:30:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream looks pretty ugly IMO, you should evenly space all of the notes (probably like [url=http://puu.sh/1FJ6A]this[url]) and then leave (8) evenly spaced out between (7) and (1). Btw, the spacing suggestion was done on 0.6x)
   
4. Also, lower the volume of this stream only.
5. 00:57:359 (2) - (nazi) move the endpoint of the slider down 1 grid to show a better blanket

chamelepeace710 wrote:

For mod4mod:

Normal

1. 00:20:959 (2,1) - (nazi) the slider doesn't evenly blanket around the circle -fixed a bit
2. 00:34:159 (2) - ^ (though it doesn't matter THAT much) -^
3. 00:35:759 (3,4) - ^ (same) -^
4. 01:21:359 (2,1) - For a [Normal] diff, this should be closer (about half as much as it is now) -I feel it's okay for this BPM

Hard

1. 00:12:359 (2,4) - It's mainly your choice but I feel that you should put a whistle on the beginning of these sliders because it shows a syncopated rhythm. But if not because it ruins consistency, you don't have to. -well.. I hitsound by music or by consistency, it's inconsistent and nothing is in music, so no
2. 00:25:159 (2,4) - ^ -^
3. 00:30:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream looks pretty ugly IMO, you should evenly space all of the notes (probably like [url=http://puu.sh/1FJ6A]this[url]) and then leave (8) evenly spaced out between (7) and (1). Btw, the spacing suggestion was done on 0.6x) -changed a bit
   
4. Also, lower the volume of this stream only. -I don't see any sense here
5. 00:57:359 (2) - (nazi) move the endpoint of the slider down 1 grid to show a better blanket -sorry, nope

Nice job!
I really want to watch this anime sometime in my life......

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi m4m request~

Hard

00:10:159(3) -this note better replace on slider 1/1, it's better follow for vocal -no, because on 00:10:959 is not any sound
00:30:959 - put here volume 50% -okay, not bad idea
00:32:159 - 40% -^
00:32:959 - 30% -^
00:34:159 - 60% It's sounds better bcz music is fades at this place -^
01:09:359 - add finish here -I feel it's unnecessary
01:21:092 - you can add note here, It sounds not bad -I don't like overmapping, sorry
01:24:825 - this slider better make double and start spin here 01:25:492 -uhm... I don't thing it's such nice I wanted to follow vocal just by spinner.


Normal

00:18:959 - make this slider double~ better follow for music -I don't feel it follows music somehow, sorry
00:56:559 - add finish -I think it's so much random and unconsistent
01:24:959 - add note here -well, this note is on red point and I don't like adding note on it on easier diffs, since it's hard do beat accurately for new players, sorry.

It's all for me~ Good luck~

Mythol wrote:

[General]
This map can be much better if you found a custom soft clap and used whistles to emphasize the piano... -I've planned to don't change exactly the clap, because basic is enough similar to songs clap. Also I don't follow piano in this song, only in one part from this map, so I don't want to emphasize something I don't follow.
Shion has great whistle suggestions that you should use -I don't like them, because they breaks consistence. If it wouldn't follow vocals, I'd maybe add it.
Claps are way too loud during kiai, 60% sounds good -I can hear them clearly and they're are imo quiet.

[Normal]
00:17:359 (4) - How about a repeat here and note on 00:19:759 because it feels really empty during the piano part -okay
00:54:692 (2) - I suggest adding repeat on 00:53:359 (1) instead of this, switching to 1/6 suddenly isn't so great -well, but it's not hard to beat it so I'll keep it
01:22:159 (1) - Remove claps from here -okay

[Hard]
00:19:159 (1,2) - This is really uncomfortable to play, try this

You can decide the length of the second slider, but definitely use that 1/4 slider -I didn't change it because I don't think there could be space since her voice is still continuing but I don't really like the second slider, I don't want to make sliders longer than 1/1 and this one doesn't fit, because it ends on nothing.
00:28:959 (2) - Use a 1/2 slider here, there should be a beat on 00:29:359 and the vocal ends here anyways -sorry but I'm following mainly vocal in this map and I don't here anything on 00:29:359 instead of piano which I don't follow.
00:32:559 (7) - Whistle on start -I don't want to break that consistent whistles..
01:22:159 (1) - Remove claps from here -okay

gl~

Curisu wrote:

For m4m in your q

[General]
ti: ここから始まる物語 （TV サイズ） unnecessary? -but it's TV size, so I feel it's necessary.

[Hard]
00:02:159 - (timeline) vol-10 -It will be very quiet, sorry but no
00:16:159 (3,4) - imo they should be merged into one slider according 2 vocal -It's unnecessary I feel it doesn't follow vocal.
00:17:759 (7) - rotate 23° CW(section centre) -it's nosense at all
00:30:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - (overall) vol-8~13 -I don't understand why
00:38:425 (2) - 1st 1/3 rhythm in this diff. little bit hard to read -I feel it's fine to read and since you haven't wrote solution, I don't know what to do with it
00:42:159 (3) - http://puu.sh/1HEeU -if I will do it, it won't follow 00:43:759 (1) and I don't know why to change it
01:08:559 (6) - default whis -why the hell? It will just break consistency

[Normal]
00:30:959 - wide gap +break -okay added a break

Nickname128 wrote:

Normal

00:20:959 (2,1) Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/1MZmj -No, it will break consistency
00:30:959 Delete the break time, i think newbis will think that they can rest -I think it's not such critical break, probably I will consult about this with MAT/BAT

Hard

00:22:959 (4) Overlapp with 00:20:959 (3) -fixed

Well, just a nice song and Map :3
Im sorry if my mod isnt helpful

Gero wrote:

Hi Hi M4M Mod :3

its beautiful the song <3!!

[Normal]

(*) 00:23:759 (3) - could move this note: 172 and 140 to make a nice pattern and fluid -uhm... it will a bit break pattern consistency since I'm almost always using triangle patterns and this is a bit linear triangle..

SPOILER

(*) 00:46:959 (1) - add finish hear much better -breaks consistency and doesn't fit music

[Hard]

(*) 00:13:359 (3) - Add whistle on head -breaks consistency
(*) 00:14:959 (1) - ^ -^
(*) 00:21:359 (1) - ^ -^
(*) 00:19:359 (2) - add whistle at the end -^

Nice Map :3! Good Lucky Wafu :3

Wafu wrote:

Gero wrote:

Hi Hi M4M Mod :3

its beautiful the song <3!!

[Normal]

(*) 00:23:759 (3) - could move this note: 172 and 140 to make a nice pattern and fluid -uhm... it will a bit break pattern consistency since I'm almost always using triangle patterns and this is a bit linear triangle..

SPOILER

(*) 00:46:959 (1) - add finish hear much better -breaks consistency and doesn't fit music

[Hard]

(*) 00:13:359 (3) - Add whistle on head -breaks consistency
(*) 00:14:959 (1) - ^ -^
(*) 00:21:359 (1) - ^ -^
(*) 00:19:359 (2) - add whistle at the end -^

Nice Map :3! Good Lucky Wafu :3

Sorry, but nothing fixed, I won't give you kudosu. You've put everything you can into this mod, but I feel these suggestions are just unnecessary, so sorry.

Okaz Thanks !

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

I tried to mod the song for the M4M. The song is very short so i didn't find a lot of things. If you think my mod isn't enough ignore the M4M.

Normal
I think you can rename it "easy" when it's under 2.5 stars.

00:29:759 (2) - There are a lot of sliders. I think you can split this one into two notes.
00:46:959 (1) - Finish? (Or a whistle as you did for the last spinner).
01:19:759 - I think you can add a slider from here to 01:20:559. (for the piano)

Hard
For a "hard" i think AR7 is better.

01:16:825 - Maybe add a note here and at 01:17:092 when you heard the bass.

By the way, i really like the song. Too bad there are only two difficulties.

Wafu wrote:

I just feel these suggestions just random.

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi, M4M

NORMAL

00:08:559 (1) - i think that the wistle is better on the beginning of the slider, because it is on the same point of the piano.
00:09:759 (2) - the same here.
00:11:759 (1,1) - here too i think the wistle is better on the beginning.
00:16:559 (3) - NC
00:19:759 (1) - remove NC
00:20:959 (2) - NC, remove next
00:26:159 (2) - here too the wistle at the beginning
00:40:159 (4) - move this: x 200 - y 80 and fix the next slider so that it's form is round as the circle before.
00:40:559 (1) - wistle on the beginning
00:42:159 (2) - ^

HARD

00:08:559 (1) - wistle on the beginning
00:10:159 (3) - wistle
00:11:759 (1) - wistle on the beginning and here too 00:13:359 (3) -
01:20:292 (3) - add NC and remove next
00:25:159 (2) - wistle on the ending and here too 00:26:759 (4) -
00:41:359 (2) - remove wistle
00:42:159 (3) - wistle on the first point
01:19:759 (2) - cancel slider and add a note here.
01:20:292 (3) - add wistle at the ending

I think your map is really good! there are not so many things to say, the position of the sliders and notes is good so i tryed to concentrate myself on hitsounds and some NC.
i only hope that it was a bit usefull... maybe i'm not so good at mod but hope i helped... tell me if not :/ . Anyway good luck!

1. I've always used (TV Size) instead of （TV サイズ）, even for the japanese title. Should be fine with （TV サイズ）as well though, so idk.
2. Everything looks fine

1. I'd say AR +1. If anything to have the OD and AR match up. Higher OD than AR tends to be harder than the opposite, so yeah. Well, you could reduce OD, but that sucks
2. Hmm, you could try putting the whistles on the piano instead? 00:08:559 - 00:10:159 - 00:11:759 - 00:13:359 - etc. If you do this, do so for [Hard] as well.
3. 00:30:959 - Not too fond of the break here. You could use repeating sliders to map this part, like this: http://puu.sh/25cUd, or use regular sliders instead of the repeaters to simplify. If you map this part, you should remove 00:33:759 (1). All though it's following vocals nicely, if you map the part prior to this, you're following the piano.
4. 01:02:959 (1) - Line it up with the previous slider. It just irritates me xD
5. 01:15:759 (1) - Finish on sliderhead?
6. 01:18:959 (1) - I would put a whistle here, though it breaks your current whistle pattern, so do whatever

1. 00:17:359 (5) - Move this to 207;268 for a sliiight curve. That straight line is gsekrher. If you feel up to it, do so with other similar "streams".
2. 01:12:559 (1,5) - These look very out of place, as they're the only two S-shape sliders in the whole map. Consider just making them curves.
3. 01:15:759 (1) - Finish on sliderhead?
4. 01:20:292 (3) - Whistle at end if you did so in normal.
5. 01:25:359 (1) - Not sure if you want 60% or 30% volume, since you're using different in each diff Fix whichever one \o\

CXu wrote:

Yo! In-game mod request.
Sorry it took a while. Had a pretty busy week last week

Please take anything I say as a suggestion, and feel free to ignore my mod post~

[General]

1. I've always used (TV Size) instead of （TV サイズ）, even for the japanese title. Should be fine with （TV サイズ）as well though, so idk. -okay
2. Everything looks fine

[Normal]

1. I'd say AR +1. If anything to have the OD and AR match up. Higher OD than AR tends to be harder than the opposite, so yeah. Well, you could reduce OD, but that sucks -okay
2. Hmm, you could try putting the whistles on the piano instead? 00:08:559 - 00:10:159 - 00:11:759 - 00:13:359 - etc. If you do this, do so for [Hard] as well. -I was speaking about this several times and we'll see if MAT/BAT will care about this, because I like following my system
3. 00:30:959 - Not too fond of the break here. You could use repeating sliders to map this part, like this: http://puu.sh/25cUd, or use regular sliders instead of the repeaters to simplify. If you map this part, you should remove 00:33:759 (1). All though it's following vocals nicely, if you map the part prior to this, you're following the piano. -fixed, but I didn't removed last note
4. 01:02:959 (1) - Line it up with the previous slider. It just irritates me xD -okay
5. 01:15:759 (1) - Finish on sliderhead? -I don't think music deserves it there, sorry
6. 01:18:959 (1) - I would put a whistle here, though it breaks your current whistle pattern, so do whatever -it doesn't break my current whistle pattern, sorry

[Hard]

1. 00:17:359 (5) - Move this to 207;268 for a sliiight curve. That straight line is gsekrher. If you feel up to it, do so with other similar "streams". -Uhm.. There are only few of streams and I like to make short streams straight and I prefer to make only shaped sliders so sorry
2. 01:12:559 (1,5) - These look very out of place, as they're the only two S-shape sliders in the whole map. Consider just making them curves. -okay
3. 01:15:759 (1) - Finish on sliderhead? -same as normal
4. 01:20:292 (3) - Whistle at end if you did so in normal. -^
5. 01:25:359 (1) - Not sure if you want 60% or 30% volume, since you're using different in each diff Fix whichever one \o\ -fixed

That's all, good luck!
Stop mapping maps that I can't mod ;_; -sorry, not fixed XD

Nymph wrote:

Hi.


[General]
I searched about this song and found out: http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%95%B0% ... C%E3%82%BC
according to the wiki, the title of this song should be: ここからはじまる物語 (but I think はじ mean 始 in Japanese?) -just confirming this fact from CD's cover and yup, you're right. Fixed.

I think default soft-clap is a bit... hard and loud. maybe try this one? http://puu.sh/28dcW -feels better now, fixed


[Hard]
01:12:559 (7) - try to new combo here to shorten the combos. -yes, I missbroke consistency, fixed


nothing else. Call me when you have any reply.


BTW,I gave kudosu to some modders who did mod but didn't earn one kudosu here. I just think they did work a lot modding although nothing changed they still put enough effort to earn one. Hope you don't mind~! -okay