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Tenshichan
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Joined September 2011
Tenshichan
M4M From my queue~

[Easy]

  1. 00:10:118 (2) - 1 grid down
  2. 00:13:870 (2) - 1 grid up
  3. 00:14:808 (1) - 1 grid down
  4. 00:20:905 (4) - Only repeat it once, and add a note at 00:22:312 instead, for better flow
  5. 00:44:355 (5,6) - Make them to a slider; Fits better to the song
  6. 00:49:514 (2,1) - Imo you should give those sliders a slight curve, just straight doesn't look soo good
  7. 00:56:549 (1) - Please fix the spacing here, for aesthetics
  8. 01:07:336 (1,2,3,4) - (4) isn't in the line, and it looks odd, probably fix this pattern that for example (2) is a bit left, but regard the spacing
  9. 01:15:309 (1) - Spacing
  10. 01:26:097 (1) - Move to: x:412 y:300
  11. 01:27:973 (1) - 1 grid down
  12. 01:28:442 (2) - 2 grid down
[Normal]

  1. 00:13:870 (2) - Try better spacing here
  2. 00:27:002 (3,4) - This is better
  3. 00:28:409 (2,3) - Try this?
  4. 01:25:862 (1) - Don't make it repeat, and add a slider from 01:26:566 to 01:26:800
  5. 01:43:450 (4) - Pretty tricky note for a normal diff, maybe change it?
[Hard]

  1. 00:10:118 (1) - Give it a curve, to make it fit to the previous sliders
  2. 00:10:587 (1,2,3,4) - It's users preference, but I would recommend not to stack them
  3. 00:14:339 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  4. 00:16:215 (3) - Doesn't look sexy because of wrong spacing, adjust it a bit
  5. 01:02:881 (6) - Move it under (5)?
  6. 01:29:145 (10) - Not straight please? To fit with the flow of the next slider pattern
  7. 01:31:725 (4) - ^
  8. 01:37:118 (1) - Make it go around (2) more smooth
  9. 01:46:264 (1,2) - Don't know if intended or not, but this spacing is a bit confusing
  10. 01:52:361 (1,2) - Move them in a perfect line with the slider end of (4)?
  11. 01:53:064 (3) - Imo this note should be at 01:52:830
  12. 01:56:113 (5) - This note disappears unter the slider edge, which doesn't make it look so sexy
  13. 01:58:696 - Unsnapped green line
  14. 01:59:396 (2) - Fix spacing, because it looks weird
  15. 02:07:369 (2) - Imo you should move it under the slider end, or to the middle
[Somnambulist]

  1. 00:10:587 - I think this 2 streams would look better if they are not in a straight line, but maybe its just a matter of taste
  2. 00:13:401 (3) - Let it end at 00:13:635, it doesn't sound right imo, or probably add a note sandwiched between those 2 sliders
  3. 00:17:153 (2,3) - I would suggest to arrange this like (4), (5) and (1)
  4. 00:35:796 (2) - Let it begin on the white tick and delete (3)
  5. 00:39:196 (1,2,3,4) - Random note placement; Arrange them better
  6. 00:54:673 (2) - Make it parallel to (1) and (3)
  7. 01:30:318 (3) - Don't make it overlap with (1)
  8. 01:38:760 (2,1) - Random jump, please fix it
  9. 01:47:671 (1) - This slider looks ugly, you can do it better
  10. 02:14:873 (1) - Random placement for the last note, re-arrange it
[Insane]

  1. 00:30:988 (4) - CTRL + G for better flow
  2. 01:02:881 (11) - I don't like this slider and it doesn't really fit to the map, so maybe you should consider to change it
  3. 01:38:291 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern seems a bit off to me
  4. 01:56:348 (1) - If this is supposed to be a heart ... then please make it better xD
nice Insane :)

Good luck with your map! The song is really awesome! :)
+ Star :D
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Irreversible

Tenshichan wrote:

M4M From my queue~

[Easy]

  1. 00:10:118 (2) - 1 grid down
  2. 00:13:870 (2) - 1 grid up
  3. 00:14:808 (1) - 1 grid down
  4. 00:20:905 (4) - Only repeat it once, and add a note at 00:22:312 instead, for better flow
  5. 00:44:355 (5,6) - Make them to a slider; Fits better to the song
  6. 00:49:514 (2,1) - Imo you should give those sliders a slight curve, just straight doesn't look soo good
  7. 00:56:549 (1) - Please fix the spacing here, for aesthetics
  8. 01:07:336 (1,2,3,4) - (4) isn't in the line, and it looks odd, probably fix this pattern that for example (2) is a bit left, but regard the spacing
  9. 01:15:309 (1) - Spacing
  10. 01:26:097 (1) - Move to: x:412 y:300
  11. 01:27:973 (1) - 1 grid down
  12. 01:28:442 (2) - 2 grid down
[Normal]

  1. 00:13:870 (2) - Try better spacing here
  2. 00:27:002 (3,4) - This is better
  3. 00:28:409 (2,3) - Try this?
  4. 01:25:862 (1) - Don't make it repeat, and add a slider from 01:26:566 to 01:26:800
  5. 01:43:450 (4) - Pretty tricky note for a normal diff, maybe change it?
[Hard]

  1. 00:10:118 (1) - Give it a curve, to make it fit to the previous sliders
  2. 00:10:587 (1,2,3,4) - It's users preference, but I would recommend not to stack them
  3. 00:14:339 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  4. 00:16:215 (3) - Doesn't look sexy because of wrong spacing, adjust it a bit
  5. 01:02:881 (6) - Move it under (5)?
  6. 01:29:145 (10) - Not straight please? To fit with the flow of the next slider pattern
  7. 01:31:725 (4) - ^
  8. 01:37:118 (1) - Make it go around (2) more smooth
  9. 01:46:264 (1,2) - Don't know if intended or not, but this spacing is a bit confusing
  10. 01:52:361 (1,2) - Move them in a perfect line with the slider end of (4)?
  11. 01:53:064 (3) - Imo this note should be at 01:52:830
  12. 01:56:113 (5) - This note disappears unter the slider edge, which doesn't make it look so sexy
  13. 01:58:696 - Unsnapped green line
  14. 01:59:396 (2) - Fix spacing, because it looks weird
  15. 02:07:369 (2) - Imo you should move it under the slider end, or to the middle
[Somnambulist]

  1. 00:10:587 - I think this 2 streams would look better if they are not in a straight line, but maybe its just a matter of taste
  2. 00:13:401 (3) - Let it end at 00:13:635, it doesn't sound right imo, or probably add a note sandwiched between those 2 sliders
  3. 00:17:153 (2,3) - I would suggest to arrange this like (4), (5) and (1)
  4. 00:35:796 (2) - Let it begin on the white tick and delete (3)
  5. 00:39:196 (1,2,3,4) - Random note placement; Arrange them better
  6. 00:54:673 (2) - Make it parallel to (1) and (3)
  7. 01:30:318 (3) - Don't make it overlap with (1)
  8. 01:38:760 (2,1) - Random jump, please fix it
  9. 01:47:671 (1) - This slider looks ugly, you can do it better
  10. 02:14:873 (1) - Random placement for the last note, re-arrange it
[Insane]

  1. 00:30:988 (4) - CTRL + G for better flow
  2. 01:02:881 (11) - I don't like this slider and it doesn't really fit to the map, so maybe you should consider to change it
  3. 01:38:291 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern seems a bit off to me
  4. 01:56:348 (1) - If this is supposed to be a heart ... then please make it better xD
nice Insane :)

Good luck with your map! The song is really awesome! :)
+ Star :D
Danke für den Star & den mod :)
Habe das Meiste umgesetzt :D
RLC
Elite Mapper
1,006 posts
Joined August 2011
RLC
hello

Tenshichan wrote:

[Somnambulist]

  1. 00:10:587 - I think this 2 streams would look better if they are not in a straight line, but maybe its just a matter of taste i think i'll leave this, as the lines made by the streams and the next slider fit
  2. 00:13:401 (3) - Let it end at 00:13:635, it doesn't sound right imo, or probably add a note sandwiched between those 2 sliders ok shortened
  3. 00:17:153 (2,3) - I would suggest to arrange this like (4), (5) and (1) i changed 00:19:967 (5,6,1) - , now there's a better rhythm pattern lol
  4. 00:35:796 (2) - Let it begin on the white tick and delete (3) that's the rhythm here though
  5. 00:39:196 (1,2,3,4) - Random note placement; Arrange them better made into parallelogram
  6. 00:54:673 (2) - Make it parallel to (1) and (3) isn't it already? i went and adjusted it a little just to be sure
  7. 01:30:318 (3) - Don't make it overlap with (1) i like that kind of overlap /runs
  8. 01:38:760 (2,1) - Random jump, please fix it oh the reason that jump seemed random was because i forgot to make the other ones jumps... changed now lol
  9. 01:47:671 (1) - This slider looks ugly, you can do it better done
  10. 02:14:873 (1) - Random placement for the last note, re-arrange it
placed under (1)
thank you~
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Moway
Hi, M4M

General

Remove the (Short Ver.) from your title. Ranking rules say that you can't have this.

01:22:345- I think its better for the kiai to begin here, even though the vocal
part begins before the downbeat, the music starts here and that's when the
song should be exciting, not when there is just vocal

Easy

on your easy difficulty, you want to have basically the same distance spacing
between everything. I'd suggest also maybe upping the distance spacing to 1.0
just to spread things out a bit to make them easier to read. With the low SV
this shouldn't be a problem. Just go through the map with distance snap on
and move everything.

00:07:304- unnecessary green line, remove and change the red line volume to 50%
00:17:153(1)- remove NC
00:36:320(1)- finish
00:51:378(1)- whistle on end
01:03:115(3)- NC
01:22:345-01:54:237- your comboing is a bit inconsistent in the kiai. Sometimes
you have it NC on every new measure, sometimes every two measures. Pick one
or the other and stick to it. I'd suggest having a NC every two measures since
you did that in the rest of the song.

Normal

AR+2, with SV 1.4 the approach rate needs to be higher

Things in general seemed cramped on this diff, maybe use distance snap of 1.2 instead of 1.0

00:07:303-00:14:808- you need to add some hitsounds here, I'd suggest using the
standard soft-whistle since you used it as a slidertick on Easy diff
00:07:303- same as easy
00:12:932(1)- remove NC to be consistent with previous combo
00:16:560(5)- NC
00:31:692(5)- NC
00:35:444(3)- NC
00:49:045(6)- NC
00:49:749(1)- remove NC
00:53:266(2,3,4)- these sliders are a bit ugly.maybe try something like this.
http://puu.sh/1uzaf
01:05:460(4)- NC
01:13:902(3,4,1)- This is a bit cramped for my liking. Try this. http://puu.sh/1uzbq
01:20:234(1)- This finish is slightly jarring. Lower the volume of this
01:31:256(1)- remove NC
01:31:725(2)- NC
01:33:366(1,3)- These sliders are kind of ugly as well. What I did at 00:53:266(2,3,4)
can also work here if you like that shape.
01:41:808(1)- remove NC
01:42:746(3)- NC
02:00:803(4)- NC



Hard

00:07:303-00:14:808- you need to add some hitsounds here, I'd suggest using the
standard soft-whistle since you used it as a slidertick on Easy diff
00:10:118(1)- remove NC
00:11:056(6)- NC
00:11:525(1)- remove NC
00:14:339(1)- remove NC
00:14:808(5)- NC
00:27:940(5)- NC
00:29:816(1,2,3,4)- anti jumps don't really fit this part of the song, space
them normally or make them jumps I think.
00:36:382(3,4,5)- use distance snap of 0.7 or 0.8 when you have 1/16th note sections
00:40:368(1)- remove NC
00:41:306(2)- NC
00:42:948(7)- NC
00:54:439(5)- NC
01:06:867(3,4,5,6,7)- distance snap of 0.7 or 0.8
01:15:075(1,4)- try this shape. http://puu.sh/1uzw9
01:16:358(7)- NC
01:34:070(2)- clap
01:46:264(1)- remove NC
01:48:609(5)- NC
01:50:250(4)- remove NC
01:56:448- unsnapped green line


Somnambulist

00:28:878(1)- remove NC
00:49:280(3,4)- make spacing here consistent. The current spacing makes it
look like these circles are played in a different way than they are.
02:07:369-02:14:873- I'd cut this part to stay consistent with the times of
all the other difficulties.

Insane

HP+1, AR-1. I don't think AR9 fits this song really since it's only 128 bpm.
00:26:767(1)- remove NC


incomplete mod, pm me if I forget to come back
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Irreversible
Thanks for the mod, changed most of it ~
Last edited by Irreversible , edited 1 time in total.
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
Well sorry for delay lol..
But please don't push it next time >.< Really difficult for me if I'm busy



[General]

  1. Inconsistency in tags. Normal has tags, other diffs don't. You will have to fix it

  2. Inconsistency in preview time for your guest diff. Fix it.

  3. I highly suggest you to use a silent Sliderslide, it sounds noisy during gameplay. Use one like http://puu.sh/1w2el

[Easy]

  1. In general, this diff lacks of hitsounds. You could add whistles on pretty many good places or just use costume hitsounds if you want to. But like this it's too empty and odd to hear.
  2. Actually, Distance snap is strange. 8,5 is low. A bit too low. Like this it actually gets more boring for beginners, as 1,0 would be perfectly acceptable for this song. With this DS, nice blankets and symmetric are difficult nearly impossible to work nicely.
  3. 00:14:808 (1,2) - This transition plays odd. Having an angle which is on a fully other direction as circle plays rarely good. Consider changing Slider's angle up
  4. 00:20:905 (4) - Remove whistle from Sliderbody, it sounds noisy and strange on this part
  5. 00:23:719 (1,1,1,1) - Note patterns like this are kinda really random placed. In general I would really recommend to think for a good formation or a neat pattern here.
  6. 00:46:700 (4) - Slidershape looks ugly. This is mainly because you didn't put effort on a symmetric shape nor on a nice waving. Some tweaking with this would be appriciated
  7. 01:00:301 (1,2) - Sliders like this are actually used to blanket each other, but this is not really possible due to your low DS
  8. 01:05:929 (5) - Again, this Slidershape could really use more effort as it looks pretty crumbled at the moment.
    SPOILER
  9. 01:11:557 (1) - Slidershape ugly, needs more effort
  10. 01:13:433 (3) - This one also of course as it is a copy of above one
  11. 01:24:221 (1) - Hm, actually fine, but if you pulled the first red point more down, you'd have a better Slider here
  12. 01:33:601 (1) - Ugly needs more effort
  13. And so on and so on. Well, this needs mainly work on Slidershape. While regular shapes are pretty much fine, more complex shapes are starting to look poor which could be fixed with creating them with more effort. Also like mentioned the DS is too low - while I'm pretty sure 8,5 is unrankable due you can't create it with Editor. Hitsound on start is missing and empty, but rhythm is pretty fine here ~

[Hard]

  1. 00:33:568 (1) - Double repeat plays really odd here. Just changing to 2 Sliders would create a better sulution while you should be aiming to get a nice flow here.
  2. 00:35:444 (1) - Well, now these Slidershapes are the ones you should be improving. While they are not unrankable and such, you can surely create neater ones with 2 Sliderpoints or even using the new Slider tool
  3. 00:41:541 (3) - And these ones aswell, the edges are looking too sharp to create a nice Slider, they should look more like
    SPOILER
  4. 00:49:045 - Listen closely and you will notice that here is a sound. So making 1 a repeating kick Slider would be a sulution more pleasing sulution according to the music
  5. 00:55:846 (9) - Absoultely not fiting the music. Also such Sliders on red ticks play really bad when not following the music, you should remember that.
  6. 01:02:881 (6) - This stack with 5 is much too hard to play for a hard. Confuses really much and the hitburst is not a combination you should be using on a hard difficulty.
  7. 01:11:323 (1,2) - Such small wave Sliders flow bad. Really bad, you should keep complex shapes for longer Sliders.
  8. 01:14:606 (4) - As this is a circle and not a Slider, this is confusing. Really confusing as hitbursts are making the whole pattern confusing enough, I highly suggest unstacking here
  9. 01:37:118 (1) - Add finish on start to keep consistency to previous part and emphasize the strong beat.
  10. 01:38:994 (5) - Remove repeat and focus on white ticks as the music is playing there (and vocal too)
  11. Slider cleaning up is needed here. Also pattern could be neater if you put more effort on them. Currently rhythm and placement looks a bit wry to be honest, but I'm sure this can be fixed with some mods.

Well, for here some general advice :3

Good luck~
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Irreversible
Hey, thanks for the mod :D
I really kinda changed everything on these two Maps, i "remaked" them xD

So i need some new mods :D

Thanks Konei ^^;
Z-Aune
Z-Aune
Hey~

Almost nothing, sorry :' < (And i don't know if it's better or not haha. What ever :3)

Normal

00:49:749 - The beatspacing is too far, even if that's a new combo :3

Hard :

00:55:846 (9) - You should move the slider to x:140; y:36 or something like that.
01:00:301 - New combo
01:29:145 - Remove this new combo
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Irreversible
At least something :D

Thank you :)
RLC
Elite Mapper
1,006 posts
Joined August 2011
RLC
took another look

chatlog
15:40 Irreversible: hey
15:40 Irreversible: can you re-mod my capsule map?
15:40 Irreversible: i think after your post i can ask a mat @@
15:40 RLC: re-mod
15:40 RLC: what do you mean
15:40 Irreversible: like
15:40 Irreversible: check everything again
15:40 Irreversible: you already modded it once
15:40 RLC: b-but
15:40 RLC: if i already modded it once 
15:40 RLC: i really won't be of much use to recheck it
15:40 Irreversible: i made easy normal and hard new
15:40 RLC: the only people that usually recheck are people that bubble / pop bubbles
15:40 Irreversible: and the hitsounds are differnet in insane
15:40 Irreversible: so i changed a lots of thinks
15:41 Irreversible: things*
15:41 Irreversible: @__@
15:41 RLC: ok..
15:41 Irreversible: well you don't have to do it now
15:41 Irreversible: and you would get 2 kudos xD
15:41 RLC: i'll do it in a sec
15:41 RLC: lol
15:41 Irreversible: well..
15:41 Irreversible: but do it good? =D xD
15:41 RLC: wat
15:41 RLC: i do it
15:42 RLC: how to do it bad
15:42 RLC: or do it good i don't know
15:42 RLC: i'll just do it
15:42 Irreversible: dunno
15:42 Irreversible: if you write
15:42 Irreversible: normal : 00:123:19191 - new circle
15:42 Irreversible: thats it
15:42 Irreversible: xD
15:44 RLC: i'll mod it here
15:44 RLC: and then post the log in the thread
15:44 Irreversible: ok
15:44 Irreversible: wait
15:44 Irreversible: if i come online you start
15:44 Irreversible: XD
15:44 RLC: wat
15:44 RLC: wut
15:44 Irreversible: kk
15:44 Irreversible: xF
15:44 Irreversible: xD*ç
15:45 RLC: ok
15:46 RLC: was the Easy remapped
15:46 Irreversible: yeh why?
15:46 RLC: or just the Normal and Hard
15:46 RLC: oh
15:47 RLC: 00:25:126- this part here
15:47 RLC: feels really sparse and pretty boring
15:47 RLC: [Easy]
15:47 RLC: you have a break right after it, so you might as well put some more stuff in it
15:48 Irreversible: uhm
15:49 Irreversible: so i should put more things in it?
15:49 Irreversible: xd
15:49 RLC: that's what i think yeah
15:49 Irreversible: like
15:49 Irreversible: on every white tick?
15:50 RLC: that would be too boring
15:50 RLC: also something i'm noticing
15:51 RLC: by looking through your Easy and Normal is that
15:51 RLC: the difficulty of the rhythm is about the same
15:51 RLC: it's all 1/1 stuff
15:51 RLC: the only main difference
15:51 RLC: is that Normal is spaced more and the SV is higher
15:51 Irreversible: is the kiai time
15:51 Irreversible: xD
15:51 Irreversible: someone said my normal is too hard for a normal.. so i put normal+
15:52 RLC: yeah this is too hard for a Normal indeed
15:52 RLC: you have a lot of 1/2s in there
15:52 RLC: ok wait
15:52 RLC: 00:29:816- to 01:01:708- 
15:53 RLC: your rhythm in [Normal] 
15:53 RLC: is almost entirely 1/1
15:53 RLC: and it's kind of repetitive
15:54 RLC: i'm trying to think of how
15:54 RLC: you could make it more interesting
15:54 Irreversible: ok i made the part in easy with sliders and circles now
15:55 RLC: that's good
15:55 RLC: i'll take another look once you update later
15:56 RLC: oh you already updated
15:56 Irreversible: yeah
15:56 Irreversible: but i have another problem
15:56 Irreversible: i used a different DS at the very begin
15:56 Irreversible: -.- xD
15:57 RLC: lol
15:57 Irreversible: maybe thats ok
15:57 RLC: you should probably keep consistent DS throughout but w/e
15:57 Irreversible: [i bet its not]
15:57 Irreversible: xD
15:57 RLC: 00:28:878 (3)- i would
15:57 RLC: add a repeat to this slider
15:57 Irreversible: @ easy?
15:57 RLC: it feels much better having the break start at 00:29:816- 
15:57 RLC: yeah in easy
15:58 Irreversible: ki
15:58 Irreversible: oki
15:58 Irreversible: made that
15:58 Irreversible: xD
15:58 RLC: ok
15:58 RLC: oh oh oh
15:58 RLC: you know what would make your Easy both more easier and more interesting?
15:58 RLC: removing some notes
15:58 RLC: here, lemme tell you a few
15:58 Irreversible: oki
15:59 RLC: hmm
16:00 RLC: wait first i notice this
16:00 RLC: 01:00:301 (6)- the reverse on this slider
16:00 RLC: may be concealed by the hitburst of 00:58:894 (4)- 
16:00 RLC: and that's unrankable
16:00 RLC: however
16:01 RLC: it MAY happen to be far enough away in time... but to be safe, i would move it so that they're not on top of each other
16:01 Irreversible: no
16:01 Irreversible: its ok i guess
16:02 Irreversible: i just tested
16:02 Irreversible: o.
16:02 Irreversible: o:
16:02 RLC: ok
16:02 RLC: 00:39:899- go to this time
16:02 RLC: i'm going to give yo ua screenshot of my timeline
16:02 RLC: which is positioned at this time
16:03 RLC: http://puu.sh/1NmYi
16:03 RLC: try this rhythm?
16:03 RLC: (the middle of that screenshot is the time i posted, where my line is)
16:04 Irreversible: done
16:04 RLC: ok
16:04 RLC: and do the same thing here:
16:04 RLC: at
16:04 RLC: 00:43:652- 
16:04 RLC: screenshot:
16:04 Irreversible: and tell me if the placing looks shit or smth
16:05 RLC: http://puu.sh/1Nn1h
16:05 RLC: lol first let's take care of the rhythm, that's more important
16:05 Irreversible: kk
16:05 RLC: the placement looks ok
16:05 Irreversible: ehm
16:05 Irreversible: your screenshot
16:05 Irreversible: o,o
16:05 RLC: what about it
16:06 Irreversible: are you sure its 00:43:652?
16:06 Irreversible: xD
16:06 RLC: the middle of my screenshot
16:06 RLC: where my line is
16:06 RLC: is 00:43:652- 
16:06 RLC: not the beginning of the screenshot
16:06 Irreversible: ah
16:06 Irreversible: i didn't get that the slider should be longer
16:06 Irreversible: xD
16:07 RLC: yeah, that's what i'm suggesting
16:07 RLC: the same as the previous suggestion
16:07 Irreversible: uff wait
16:07 Irreversible: oh the one before is longer?
16:07 Irreversible: xD
16:07 RLC: um....
16:07 RLC: let's go back...
16:07 Irreversible: got it now
16:08 Irreversible: no its ok
16:08 RLC: ok
16:08 Irreversible: i got it
16:08 Irreversible: silly me
16:08 RLC: ok
16:08 Irreversible: xDD
16:08 RLC: lolo
16:08 Irreversible: let me place
16:08 RLC: ok
16:08 RLC: does this rhythm sound good to you? if not, you don't have to use it lol
16:09 Irreversible: yepp
16:09 RLC: ok
16:09 RLC: the song actually does the same things again
16:09 RLC: 00:54:204 (3)- if you listen here
16:09 RLC: and stuff
16:10 RLC: whether you change those too is up to you
16:11 Irreversible: kk
16:11 RLC: 01:33:601 (1)- it seems like you want this slider to be wavy
16:11 RLC: but it doesn't really look wavy
16:11 RLC: it looks straight unless you look reallyreally closely lol
16:11 RLC: so make it a bit more wavy i gues :p
16:11 RLC: *guess
16:12 Irreversible: XD
16:12 Irreversible: kk
16:12 Irreversible: also i'm not sure with the hitsounds later [in the other diffs]
16:12 Irreversible: xD
16:13 RLC: hm
16:13 RLC: 01:41:574 (1,2)- i would move these
16:13 RLC: to make the (2) centered
16:14 RLC: since that slider is symmetric in a way that feels like it should be centered
16:14 Irreversible: IT HITS THE HP BAR THEN
16:14 Irreversible: caps
16:14 RLC: then move stuff down
16:14 RLC: lel
16:14 RLC: adjust the stuff around it as necessary
16:15 Irreversible: kk
16:15 Irreversible: xD
16:15 RLC: ok easy looks ok
16:15 Irreversible: yaay
16:16 RLC: this Normal does indeed look hard for a Normal
16:16 RLC: but i'm not sure i like the Normal+ title
16:16 RLC: it's just weird
16:16 RLC: and you don't see that on ranked maps usually
16:16 Irreversible: special things are always good
16:16 Irreversible: xdd
16:17 RLC: nope
16:17 *RLC runs
16:17 RLC: hmm
16:17 RLC: yeah the rhythm here
16:17 RLC: is really similar to the rhythm in easy..
16:17 RLC: hmm
16:18 RLC: at the beginning of this diff
16:18 RLC: you use some 1/2s
16:18 RLC: but in the section following 00:37:320-  you start using entirely 1/1 rhythm and it gets really boring
16:18 RLC: since you already threw in some 1/2s in the beginning, i would suggest throwing in some more to make it less repetitive
16:18 RLC: but not too many, since this diff is already pretty hard
16:18 RLC: for a Normal
16:18 Irreversible: well i don't know
16:19 Irreversible: what we should do:
16:19 Irreversible: put some 1/2's of kiai time
16:19 Irreversible: and put them into the other parts
16:19 Irreversible: xD
16:19 RLC: well
16:19 RLC: 00:37:320- this part is just really really repetitive
16:19 RLC: i would definitely change it somehow
16:19 RLC: adding 1/2s seems like a natural way
16:20 RLC: oh
16:20 RLC: here's an idea
16:20 Irreversible: i just put 1/2's every third time or smth
16:20 Irreversible: xDD
16:20 RLC: ...
16:20 RLC: please have pattern please
16:20 RLC: here try this
16:20 Irreversible: ok ok
16:20 Irreversible: xDD
16:20 RLC: 00:40:368- a note here
16:20 RLC: 00:44:121- here
16:20 RLC: 00:47:873- here
16:21 RLC: do you see the rhythmical pattern i'm getting at?
16:22 Irreversible: ah
16:22 Irreversible: yeah
16:22 RLC: ok
16:23 RLC: 01:06:398- position yourself at this time
16:23 RLC: here's a screenshot:
16:23 RLC: http://puu.sh/1NnuM
16:23 RLC: 01:06:398 (2)- i suggest you change this slider to be like that lol
16:23 RLC: it fits the music more
16:24 Irreversible: ho
16:24 Irreversible: yeah
16:24 Irreversible: even if i liked the other as well
16:24 Irreversible: this is bette
16:24 Irreversible: rXD
16:24 RLC: lolol
16:24 RLC: 01:18:592 (1)- 
16:24 RLC: even though it doesn't make that much of a difference, i'd rather this spinner start at 01:18:592- 
16:25 RLC: it just feels more in time
16:25 RLC: if you get what imean
16:26 RLC: 01:27:738 (1,2,3,4)- this is really hard
16:26 RLC: for a Normal, i think
16:27 Irreversible: hm
16:27 RLC: 01:50:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)- i would DEFINITELY replace parts of this with sliders
16:27 RLC: and stuff 
16:27 Irreversible: someone told me that too
16:27 Irreversible: XD
16:28 RLC: lol
16:28 RLC: 02:01:976 (2,1)- this rhythm on the red ticks
16:28 RLC: is really hard
16:28 RLC: and may throw people off
16:28 RLC: even though it's only two notes
16:29 RLC: i would resist
16:29 RLC: starting stuff on red ticks
16:29 Irreversible: 01:51:657 (6)- i dunno how to place that
16:29 RLC: since it's a bit unintuitive for normal-players lol
16:29 Irreversible: xD
16:29 RLC: hmm
16:29 Irreversible: ah wait
16:29 RLC: lolol
16:29 RLC: i'll check it again after you update later
16:30 RLC: ok i'm going to move on to the [Hard]
16:30 RLC: was the Hard remapped
16:30 Irreversible: yupp
16:30 RLC: ok
16:30 RLC: i'm going to test it on DT
16:30 Irreversible: especially theh itosunds
16:31 Irreversible: hitsounds
16:32 Irreversible: ..
16:32 Irreversible: i wanted a spoilerbox in my submit test
16:32 Irreversible: text
16:32 Irreversible: look what i've done
16:32 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/1NnI1
16:32 Irreversible: xDDD
16:32 RLC: oh this looks nice
16:32 RLC: this Hard, 
16:32 RLC: that is
16:33 RLC: oh
16:33 RLC: to do spoilerbox
16:33 RLC: do [spoilerbox] [/spoilerbox]
16:33 RLC: not [spoiler] [/spoiler]
16:33 RLC: lol
16:33 Irreversible: XD
16:33 RLC: ok this hard looks
16:33 RLC: really good yo
16:33 RLC: just a few things
16:33 RLC: 00:55:142 (8,9)- threw me off a lOT
16:34 RLC: pls change
16:34 Irreversible: xD
16:34 Irreversible: OKAY <.<
16:34 Irreversible: xD
16:34 Irreversible: u really like the hard? lol xD
16:35 RLC: it's pretty nice
16:35 RLC: 01:06:867 (3,4,5,6,7)- 
16:35 RLC: this spacing seems a bit much for a Hard
16:35 RLC: make the stream tighter
16:35 RLC: from 01:30:318-  to 01:32:897- 
16:36 RLC: the rhythm you have with the one-repeat sliders is really weird... i wuold change it
16:36 RLC: i'll come back to this in a second
16:36 Irreversible: oh
16:36 Irreversible: yeah
16:36 Irreversible: i was angry about that since it threw of my hitsounds-strategy
16:36 Irreversible: xDDD
16:36 RLC: 02:00:100- same here
16:36 RLC: also really weird
16:36 RLC: should change
16:37 RLC: at the very end you might as well do this http://puu.sh/1NnR5
16:37 RLC: since you already have 1/4 in this diff
16:38 Irreversible: ok i'll change those weird sliders tomorrow
16:38 RLC: ok
16:38 RLC: oh wow
16:38 RLC: now that i look at the [Insane]
16:39 RLC: i really feel like it should be AR8 and not AR9
16:39 RLC: AR9 is just really too high for this low bpm
16:40 Irreversible: well o,o
16:40 Irreversible: xD
16:43 RLC: i like these new hitsounds
16:43 RLC: sec i'm going to try DTing the Insane with AR8
16:43 Irreversible: at the kiai time
16:43 Irreversible: i took this clap clap combination from your diff
16:43 Irreversible: xD
16:45 RLC: lolol
16:45 RLC: 01:01:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6)- 
16:45 RLC: this spacing is really confusing
16:45 RLC: you've used a number of streams that are spaced like that
16:45 RLC: and yet those are separated by 1/2
16:45 RLC: not 1/4
16:45 RLC: i would just spread them out lol
16:45 Irreversible: well
16:45 Irreversible: if you look
16:45 Irreversible: you can see that its not a stream
16:45 Irreversible: xD
16:46 Irreversible: and its not like that the song is like super fast
16:46 Irreversible: and you fucking can't stop
16:46 Irreversible: omggg miss
16:46 RLC: >doubletime
16:46 Irreversible: ..its .. easy
16:46 Irreversible: xd
16:46 Irreversible: oh
16:46 Irreversible: XD
16:46 RLC: it's just going to piss off a lot of people
16:46 RLC: on DT
16:46 RLC: another reason why the spacing is weird is that
16:46 RLC: 01:01:708 (1,2,3,4,5)- these are really close together
16:46 RLC: and suddenly
16:46 RLC: (6)
16:46 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/1No61
16:46 Irreversible: look at that evil pattern
16:46 Irreversible: 4 is under 2
16:46 Irreversible: Xd
16:46 RLC: where is that
16:47 Irreversible: this what we've talked before
16:47 RLC: i actually find that easier to read than this packed 1/2 lol
16:48 RLC: 01:56:348 (1)- such a fat heart LOL
16:48 RLC: anyway, [Insane] looks solid, as it did before
16:48 RLC: the new hitsounding is nice
16:48 RLC: i'm going to skip my diff because... it's my diff lel
16:49 Irreversible: no you have to modd it
16:49 Irreversible: xD jk
16:49 RLC: lolol
B2IN
B2IN
hi~ Irreversible :3

[General]
tag : i think that 'J-Pop' is not necessary.
[Hard]
00:14:808 (5) - remove whistle. add finish and increase volume to 80%.
00:22:077 (5) - NC 00:22:312 (1) - remove NC
00:55:846 (9) - some weird beat. you could do this instead ?

01:29:614 (1) - add finish on slider start.
01:44:388 (10,1) - arrangement for a more smooth flow ?
[Somnambulist]
00:49:749 (1) - hidden repeat arrow here. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/568361 .
01:37:118 (1) - add finish on slider end. same as 01:22:110 (1).
[Insane]
00:15:042 (1) - remove finish on slider start ? sounds better.
01:25:628 (1,2,3) - you should space 1.0x
01:25:862 (2) - if follow above suggestion, move to x324 y76 will more interested.

gl ~
Irreversible
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Irreversible
Hey :D

Ty for your mod, nearly changed everything (in my diffs)
I think I'll leave J-Pop o.o
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IRC mod

SPOILER
12:33 Irreversible: cirnoo
12:33 Irreversible: wanna mod my map?
12:33 Irreversible: xD
12:34 cirno-: "/np it :)
12:34 cirno-: is it this?
12:34 *cirno- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/185176 capsule - dreamin dreamin]
12:36 cirno-: ... you dissapeared
12:37 Irreversible: nuh
12:37 Irreversible: i'm just doing homework
12:37 Irreversible: and yeah it is
12:37 cirno-: ok
12:37 *cirno- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/180194 capsule - dreamin dreamin [Insane]]
12:37 Irreversible: i hope
12:37 Irreversible: xDD
12:37 cirno-: 00:59:363 (5) - unrankable I think
12:37 Irreversible: i'm just semi afk
12:37 Irreversible: nah
12:37 Irreversible: thats ok
12:37 cirno-: 00:54:204 (7) - few grids lower for flow
12:38 cirno-: 01:21:172 (1) - I like this :)
12:39 Irreversible: yeah thats cool
12:39 Irreversible: and i made this other one
12:39 Irreversible: xD
12:40 cirno-: Some of the jumps felt a little awkward but I think that might be because I play nothing but hard jump maps recently
12:41 *cirno- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/185176 capsule - dreamin dreamin [Somnambulist]]
12:41 cirno-: 00:29:112 (2) -
12:41 cirno-: this should be here 00:27:940 (1) -
12:42 cirno-: 00:29:347 (3,4,5) - then these where 00:28:174 (2) - is
12:44 Irreversible: eh
12:44 Irreversible: yeah i can't help you with that sincei ts a guest diff
12:44 Irreversible: btw do you wanna make /savelog here? for kduso
12:45 cirno-: Sure but I'll do that later, checking all diffs :P I'll post for his diff too.
12:46 *cirno- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/179881 capsule - dreamin dreamin [Hard]]
12:46 cirno-: 01:14:606 (4) - consider default DS
12:47 cirno-: 01:58:224 (7) - same
12:48 cirno-: 02:07:369 (2) - and that too probably more so since it's the last note
12:49 *cirno- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/180043 capsule - dreamin dreamin [Normal+]]
12:50 cirno-: 01:13:902 (3) - this could use a clap on slider end
12:51 *cirno- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/179848 capsule - dreamin dreamin [Easy]]
12:52 cirno-: 00:28:878 (3) - remove clap on the big tick. it doesnt sound good
12:53 cirno-: whistle if you want something there
12:53 cirno-: 01:00:301 (6) - clap slider end
12:54 cirno-: that's all I got

small mod for GD in there too:
00:29:112 (2) - this should be here 00:27:940 (1) -
00:29:347 (3,4,5) - then these where 00:28:174 (2) - is

GL~ star
Irreversible
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Thanks cirno :)

Fixed the things :D!
RLC
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RLC
hi
sorry for absence ;;
http://puu.sh/1Rq9o pretty much all changes made

cirno- wrote:

small mod for GD in there too:
00:29:112 (2) - this should be here 00:27:940 (1) -
00:29:347 (3,4,5) - then these where 00:28:174 (2) - is
i prefer the flow reversal... but I have moved things a little (the second pattern is now a triangle instead of the same pentagon)
wcx19911123
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wcx19911123
from my queue, sorry for the huge delay, I have some download problems this days..

[General]
preview time is different in Somnambulist diff, this need to be fixed
kiai time is not the same in all diffs, it's not a must but it's better to make them the same in all diffs

[Easy]
01:00:301 (6) - hope you can change a direction of the slider, to make the reverse arrow not hide under the circle. though this arrow is kinda visible when playing, this pattern is not friendly to newbies

[Normal+]
this diff's SV is really too high imo..
00:33:099 (6,1) - don't know why you add a jump here, here sounds no difference in the music
00:44:121 (5) - you need to make this circle up a bit, the spacing here is too large
00:49:045 (7,1) - wrong spacing here
01:20:000 - the spinner should end at here or at 01:20:234 - , right?
01:45:326 (2,3,4) - the circles and the head of the slider are not on a line, it'll looks better to put them on a line
01:58:693 - I don't know why you slow down the patterns from here, this is really too suddenly.. and the following sliders, wich has many times repeating, is too hard to read when they end, this's really confusing. especially the patterns like this 02:01:976 - , a circle 1/2 after a reverse slider, this is too hard to know when the slider end and when to click the circle, cuz you used different repeating times on every similar slider.. this part need to remap a bit

[Hard]
I don't know your difficulty setting now, the HP is much higher than OD in this diff, but OD is much higher than HP in Normal+ diff.. this feels strange. I suggest HP+1 on Normal+ and HP-1 on this diff
01:14:606 (4,1) - this anti-jump is kinda hard to read, and don't fit the song well imo, hope you can use normal spacing here
01:32:194 (8,10) - they can stack better
01:51:657 (4,1) - this pattern looks not good imo, putting circle near a single-repeat slider's arrow makes people hard to read the rhyme. put the circle to x:48 y:316 will looks much better
01:58:224 (7,1) - same as 01:14:606 (4,1) - , anti-jump here doesn't fit the song well imo

[Somnambulist]
the slider sounds really odd to me in this diff, why not use the soft-sliderslide.wav?
OD need to +1, it's too low to be set in an Insane diff
00:51:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this streams seems not on a perfect straight line, you can make it better
this diff is interesting, the speed changing is kinda fun. for better to read the speed changing patterns, I suggest you to use a special combo color on every speed-up pattern(white seems nice), and don't use that color on normal parts, it'll be much easier to read the speed change then

[Insane]
HD+1 plz, it's too low for an Insane
00:35:678 (2,3,4) - this spacing is kinda too huge imo, I suggest you to make 00:34:506 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this pentagon bigger, and stack this notes in the middle, would be better to play
00:59:363 (5) - this shape is kinda hard to read, you'd better to make the knot smaller
01:02:646 (5,6) - why not use 1.5x spacing as usual here? this spacing looks really odd
01:42:981 (2,3) - this rhyme sounds not fit the song too much, I suggest add a note at 01:43:215 - , and change 01:43:333 (3) - to a note at 01:43:450 -

that's all, map still need much works now imo
Irreversible
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wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue, sorry for the huge delay, I have some download problems this days..

[General]
preview time is different in Somnambulist diff, this need to be fixed
kiai time is not the same in all diffs, it's not a must but it's better to make them the same in all diffs

[Easy]
01:00:301 (6) - hope you can change a direction of the slider, to make the reverse arrow not hide under the circle. though this arrow is kinda visible when playing, this pattern is not friendly to newbies i don't think that's necessarily, since the slider is fully seen when it appears.. and 4 is already dissappeard then e.e

[Normal+]
this diff's SV is really too high imo.. that's why it's normal+ :)
00:33:099 (6,1) - don't know why you add a jump here, here sounds no difference in the music fixed
00:44:121 (5) - you need to make this circle up a bit, the spacing here is too large fixed
00:49:045 (7,1) - wrong spacing here fixed
01:20:000 - the spinner should end at here or at 01:20:234 - , right? yupp xD
01:45:326 (2,3,4) - the circles and the head of the slider are not on a line, it'll looks better to put them on a line done
01:58:693 - I don't know why you slow down the patterns from here, this is really too suddenly.. and the following sliders, wich has many times repeating, is too hard to read when they end, this's really confusing. especially the patterns like this 02:01:976 - , a circle 1/2 after a reverse slider, this is too hard to know when the slider end and when to click the circle, cuz you used different repeating times on every similar slider.. this part need to remap a bit i changed it :)

[Hard]
I don't know your difficulty setting now, the HP is much higher than OD in this diff, but OD is much higher than HP in Normal+ diff.. this feels strange. I suggest HP+1 on Normal+ and HP-1 on this diff fixed
01:14:606 (4,1) - this anti-jump is kinda hard to read, and don't fit the song well imo, hope you can use normal spacing here fixed
01:32:194 (8,10) - they can stack better fixed
01:51:657 (4,1) - this pattern looks not good imo, putting circle near a single-repeat slider's arrow makes people hard to read the rhyme. put the circle to x:48 y:316 will looks much better fixed
01:58:224 (7,1) - same as 01:14:606 (4,1) - , anti-jump here doesn't fit the song well imo fixed


[Insane]
HD+1 plz, it's too low for an Insane
00:35:678 (2,3,4) - this spacing is kinda too huge imo, I suggest you to make 00:34:506 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this pentagon bigger, and stack this notes in the middle, would be better to play i like it this way.
00:59:363 (5) - this shape is kinda hard to read, you'd better to make the knot smaller i leave it o:
01:02:646 (5,6) - why not use 1.5x spacing as usual here? this spacing looks really odd dunno why, changed
01:42:981 (2,3) - this rhyme sounds not fit the song too much, I suggest add a note at 01:43:215 - , and change 01:43:333 (3) - to a note at 01:43:450 -
that's cool ^^
that's all, map still need much works now imo if you say this, you should bring a lot more suggestions, or at least tell me where the "bad" parts are, so i could change them.

still - thank you ^^
Momochikun
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Momochikun
M4M Time~ :D

Easy
00:07:304 (1) - Whistle
00:10:587 (3) - Whistle
00:13:401 (2) - Whistle
00:14:339 (4) - Whistle
00:18:091 (5) - Remove fin
00:18:560 (1) - Add fin at the tail
01:33:601 (1) - lol ? this tail clap it's for normal. change it
01:44:857 (1) - I think this spinner doesn;t fit the song
01:59:865 (3) - Clap here
02:00:334 (4,5) - Remove clap from the head, add it to the tail

Normal
00:11:056 (1) - Fin here ?
00:44:355 (6) - Remove the clap from the head then add it to 00:44:121 (5)
00:49:983 (2) - Remove fin
00:54:204 (3) - ^

Hard
01:47:905 (4) - ^
01:52:361 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bad rthym. the drum doesn't hit there

Somnambulist
Remove the sound of sliderslide
01:10:619 (7) - ^
01:20:703 (2) - Remove clap
01:31:256 (2) - Remove clap
01:31:256 (2) - Remove clap

Insane
Fine ^^ just reduce the hitsound volume :)

Good Luck~!
DakeDekaane
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DakeDekaane
Hi o/

Consider this a "random" mod :v

[General]

:!: The Preview Time is not the same in all diffs
Easy, Normal+, Hard and Insane
PreviewTime: 81856
Sonambulist
PreviewTime: 82110

[Easy]

00:07:304 (1,2,3,1) - This is aesthetical, these are spaced 1.00x but the rest of the song is spaced 1.20x, not a problem but looked weird to me.
00:20:905 (4) - What about removing a repeat and adding a circle in 00:22:312 ?
00:46:700 (4) - This is a bit curious.
00:56:549 (1) - Make the curve here open in the opposite side, leading the flow to the next circles.
:!: 01:00:301 (6) - The reverse arrow is slightly covered with the hitburst of 00:58:894 (4), correct this please
01:13:433 (3) - Make this a bit inclined to the right /
01:49:547 (2) - No clap in the start of this?

"Nazi", feel free to follow or not
01:05:929 (3) - Move the 2nd node around x:220 y:104 and the red one around x:184 y:128, it gives a nice effect while playing and passing over the tick.
01:24:221 (1) - Move the 1st red around to x:308 y:268 and the 2nd around x:360 y:328
01:28:442 (2) - Move the red node around x:120 y:232

[Normal+]
Name this Normal and increase HP Drain and OD by 1, 3 is too low for both.
00:10:118 (4,5,1) - This flow doesn't look good, it may destroy your symetric pattern, but it'll look better if you make (5) and (1) follow the curve given by (4)

[Hard]
Maybe increase OD by 1.
AR goes up by 1, it makes easier to read the objects, specially jumps and antijumps.
00:10:587 (2,3,4,5,6) - I recommend not stack many circles like this, you can arrange it in a linear way, or decrease stack leniency a bit.
00:14:339 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:52:328 - Add a finish in the end
00:55:846 (9) - Make it a 1/2 beat slider and move it to the large white tick 00:56:080, and add a circle in 00:55:846,
01:31:959 (7,8,9,10) - This back and forth looks a bit weird, try moving (9) around x:264 y:364, keeping (10) stacked
02:00:100 (4,5,6) - Check your claps here.

[Insane]
00:48:576 - Add a circle here.
00:59:363 (5) - This looks good but it completely destroys the flow imo. This shape would be better to play as it doesn't return.

248,72,59363,2,0,B|312:72|312:72|328:92|328:92|328:52|328:52|344:72|344:72|444:72,1,250,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:56:348 (1) - This shape is on purpose?

Nothing to say in RLC's diff, it played nice.

That's all from my part, good luck :3
Irreversible
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Topic Starter
Irreversible
Hey you both! Thanks for the mod. I'll changed nearly everything :D
Too lazy to write what I didn't change, but as i said, i fairly changed all things.
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Yuki-kun
Hi~

Just some small error but can make your map become Unrankable.

+ Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 81856
- [Hard] : 81856
- [Insane] : 81856
- [Normal+] : 81856
- [Somnambulist] : 82110


+ Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:345, ends on 01:52:126

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:110, ends on 01:52:126

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:110, ends on 01:52:126

- [Normal+] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:345, ends on 01:52:126

- [Somnambulist] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:110, ends on 01:52:361

+ In my opinion, you can add more hitsound to make map better. I can see you only use default whistle and clap in some part. That's too boring. Why don't you try to use finish and another custom hitsound? Because it's your feeling after all so i won't mod it here. If you want some suggestion, PM me in-game instead. xD

> My mod <

[Easy]

01:22:110 - Unecessary timing point.


[Hard]

01:56:448 - Green timing here not only unsnapped but also unecessary.

[Normal+]

00:51:390 (2) - finish at end of slider.

[Somnambulist]

[Insane]

Nothing here ATM :3

Well then, good luck :D
qkenan
134 posts
Joined October 2010
qkenan
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
Mod from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

Easy

  1. 00:10:118 (2,3) - Unconsistant DS

Normal

  1. 00:16:684 (1,2,3,4) - Unconsistant DS
  2. 00:23:250 (4) - ^
  3. 00:25:126 (4) - ^
  4. 01:09:212 (1) - Do not suggest to use repeat slider over 1 time in Normal diff

Hard

  1. 01:22:110 Kiai time should start from long while line
    Keep consistent with other diffs (except Guest diff)
  2. 00:35:444 (1) - Align the head and the end
  3. 00:36:382 (3) - ^
  4. 00:36:968 (4,5) - Closer
    emmm. arent you a little lazy to make hard diff ?
    the latter part of this diff doesnt have the quality it ought to do. :(

Somnambulist

  1. 00:35:444 (1,2,3) - Place them closer like one next to another ? Current placing may confuse player.Just suggestion.
  2. 01:02:881 (4,5) - Slider ends at (384,136) seems better.So does the ⑤circle
    Good work

Insane

  1. 01:22:110 Kiai time should start from long while line
    Keep consistent with other diffs (except Guest diff)
  2. 00:22:077 (5,6,1) - Place them closer ?
  3. 00:48:576 (4,1,2,3,4) - Diffilcult to read the pattern.Suggest to place the ①② / ④⑤ farther from ③ or reduce the distance of the two doubles
  4. 00:57:018 (4,5,1,2) - Rotate them so as to make them towards the top ？like “↗↖”
  5. 01:19:530 (5) - Remain the previous ds plz
  6. 01:21:876 (3) - Suggest to place it farther as the sv very fast here
  7. 01:46:029 (4,5,6) - Why the triple placed so far from each other...
    I like this diff. Very nice and fits the music well.Some details can be improved but it's still very awesome.

Good luck with rank ~
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
Hi, M4M!

General

Make sure the kiai starts 01:22:110 - on every diff

Easy

00:22:312 (5,1) - Reverse NC, so it matches the melody
00:24:188 (2) - NC to keep it consistent
00:26:064 (4,1) - Reverse NC
00:27:940 (2) - NC for consistence
01:00:301 (6) - To follow your combo pattern NC here
01:24:221 (1) - Remove NC, it not needed

Normal+

Normal only is fine for the diff

01:22:110 - Combo should start here
02:06:666 (1,2) - Move them opposite the previous pattern so it doesnt go to far up into the Health Bar, also the circle 2 feels wrong when its placed under the slider, move it above it then

Hard

00:19:498 (3,4) - Keep the spacing normal here please
00:27:940 (5,6,7) - ^ it is not consistent
01:32:897 (11,1) - Tiny spacing change fix this
01:43:919 (8,9,10) - ^ keep it consistent
01:48:374 (1,2) - ^

1st Insane

I advise you to use Slider tick rate 2! So the slider speed changes are more readable

00:08:711 (3,1) - The spacing here is also inconsistent, make normal spacng
00:25:712 (5) - Circle is too much, remove it
00:34:037 (1,1) - Combo spam, remove them two
01:45:795 (1) - NC is unnecessary
02:14:873 (1) - ^

2nd Insane

I advise you to use Slider tick rate 2! So the slider speed changes are more readable

00:26:298 (1) - Remove NC, too much
01:21:172 - Sliderspeed change is too sudden, add a SB warning or make it different or just delete it
01:36:649 (1) - Remove NC
01:40:870 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Combo spam, reduce it

GL
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Irreversible

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~

Just some small error but can make your map become Unrankable.

+ Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 81856
- [Hard] : 81856
- [Insane] : 81856
- [Normal+] : 81856
- [Somnambulist] : 82110 thanks, this is confusing @@~


+ Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:345, ends on 01:52:126

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:110, ends on 01:52:126

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:110, ends on 01:52:126

- [Normal+] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:345, ends on 01:52:126

- [Somnambulist] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:110, ends on 01:52:361 fixed
+ In my opinion, you can add more hitsound to make map better. I can see you only use default whistle and clap in some part. That's too boring. Why don't you try to use finish and another custom hitsound? Because it's your feeling after all so i won't mod it here. If you want some suggestion, PM me in-game instead. xD

> My mod <

[Easy]

01:22:110 - Unecessary timing point.


[Hard]

01:56:448 - Green timing here not only unsnapped but also unecessary.

[Normal+]

00:51:390 (2) - finish at end of slider.

[Somnambulist]

[Insane]

Nothing here ATM :3

fixed everything

Well then, good luck :D
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
was just quickly looking over this map and noticed a totally unrankable pattern

on insane
01:20:469 (4,1,2) - this speed up its totally blind, no slider ticks, no visible or musical reason or anything, sorry but this pattern must be deleted and remapped with no speed up. im shocked the mat who posted did not notice such a huge error tbh but yes, it needs changing before this map can go anywhere within the ranking process

also naming a diff normal+ is pointless

just had to post to get it fixed *ninjas out*
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Irreversible

qkenan wrote:

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
Mod from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

Easy

  1. 00:10:118 (2,3) - Unconsistant DS

Normal

  1. 00:16:684 (1,2,3,4) - Unconsistant DS
  2. 00:23:250 (4) - ^
  3. 00:25:126 (4) - ^
  4. 01:09:212 (1) - Do not suggest to use repeat slider over 1 time in Normal diff

Hard

  1. 01:22:110 Kiai time should start from long while line
    Keep consistent with other diffs (except Guest diff)
  2. 00:35:444 (1) - Align the head and the end
  3. 00:36:382 (3) - ^
  4. 00:36:968 (4,5) - Closer
    emmm. arent you a little lazy to make hard diff ?
    the latter part of this diff doesnt have the quality it ought to do. :(

Somnambulist

  1. 00:35:444 (1,2,3) - Place them closer like one next to another ? Current placing may confuse player.Just suggestion.
  2. 01:02:881 (4,5) - Slider ends at (384,136) seems better.So does the ⑤circle
    Good work

Insane

  1. 01:22:110 Kiai time should start from long while line
    Keep consistent with other diffs (except Guest diff)
  2. 00:22:077 (5,6,1) - Place them closer ?
  3. 00:48:576 (4,1,2,3,4) - Diffilcult to read the pattern.Suggest to place the ①② / ④⑤ farther from ③ or reduce the distance of the two doubles
  4. 00:57:018 (4,5,1,2) - Rotate them so as to make them towards the top ？like “↗↖”
  5. 01:19:530 (5) - Remain the previous ds plz
  6. 01:21:876 (3) - Suggest to place it farther as the sv very fast here
  7. 01:46:029 (4,5,6) - Why the triple placed so far from each other...
    I like this diff. Very nice and fits the music well.Some details can be improved but it's still very awesome.

Good luck with rank ~ thanks :D! i nearly changed everything, but i sometimes didn't agree with you. (for example in normal or easy D:) pm me if you wanna know more details.
BounceBabe bei dir habe ich alles rote geändert, und auch das andere~

jericho2442 wrote:

was just quickly looking over this map and noticed a totally unrankable pattern

on insane
01:20:469 (4,1,2) - this speed up its totally blind, no slider ticks, no visible or musical reason or anything, sorry but this pattern must be deleted and remapped with no speed up. im shocked the mat who posted did not notice such a huge error tbh but yes, it needs changing before this map can go anywhere within the ranking process

also naming a diff normal+ is pointless

just had to post to get it fixed *ninjas out* ..changed
RLC
Elite Mapper
1,006 posts
Joined August 2011
RLC

BounceBabe wrote:

I advise you to use Slider tick rate 2! So the slider speed changes are more readable TR2 seems too much for this... I think white colorhaxing will suffice?

00:08:711 (3,1) - The spacing here is also inconsistent, make normal spacng players are naturally carried farther when exiting a slider because of momentum
00:25:712 (5) - Circle is too much, remove it no, there is something in the music there
00:34:037 (1,1) - Combo spam, remove them two the pattern is neater with NC
01:45:795 (1) - NC is unnecessary SV change
changed everything else. thanks everyone!

http://puu.sh/1ZwRX
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
From my queue. You also asked me to take a good look at the hitsounds, so... yeah. This is more of a check for hitsounds over anything.

[General]
  1. The kiai times are slightly inconsistent on the easy difficulty and RLC's difficulty. Make them start on the same spot and end at the same place in each difficulty.
[Easy]
  1. 00:13:870 (2,3,1) - Form a triangle pattern with these like this so that (2) doesn't overlap with (1). It also looks neater.
  2. 00:18:560 (1) - Remove the finish from the end of this slider, but not the clap. It doesn't fit the music.
  3. 00:39:196 (4) - There should be a clap at the end of this slider. Follows your hitsound pattern and it's in the music.
  4. 01:00:301 (1) - ^
  5. 01:03:115 (1) - What happened to all of the claps on this slider..?
There's quite a few odd hitsounds in this difficulty. There's also a few missing claps, which I mentioned above. Overall, this difficulty feels rather bland because it's just constant 1/1 the entire time, and most patterns are really linear.

[Normal]
  1. 00:11:056 (1) - Remove the finish from this. It doesn't fit the song here at all.
  2. 00:11:056 (1,2,3,4,1) - Form a perfect pentagon with these.
  3. 00:40:603 (7) - All of the sliders that look like this are really odd. I suggest changing it.
  4. 01:04:757 (3) - Clap on the reverse of this slider.
The hitsounds in the chorus for this difficulty seem really odd. Why not just put a clap on every other white tick? Also, some patterns seem sloppy and just randomly placed, like the one I mentioned.

[Hard]
  1. The patterns, sliders, and hitsounds in this difficulty are much neater and consistent than the easy and normal. Not many complaints here.
[Insane]
  1. Turn the AR down by 1 tick. AR9 is a bit too much for this difficulty.
  2. 00:48:811 (1,2,3,4) - Please space these closer together. I think it's silly to have 1/4 jumps this large.
  3. 01:04:288 (3) - The reverse arrow of this slider is hard to see because it's practically covered by the hitburst of 01:02:881 (6).
This difficulty flows pretty nicely. I'm still not fond of some patterns (for example, 00:28:878 (3) - reverse this slider. it matches the previous 2 in direction) and some of the hitsounds, though. You have a unique style of hitsounding, though.

[Somnambulist]
  1. I really don't get this difficulty name.
  2. Nothing much to say about this.
Honestly, RLC's difficulty is well made and the best difficulty in this mapset. Perhaps you can use some ideas from his mapping style to help improve your difficulties (especially the hitsound patterns. they're a bit odd). In my opinion, this difficulty needs some work, but you've come a long way since you started mapping.

Good luck! Starred.
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn
Hi~
Mod from my queue~
Nice hitsounds

[Easy]
Good

[Normal]
01:27:504 - Clap?
01:42:512 - ^
02:02:445 - ^
Btw, improve your mapflow.Use more curve sliders!

[Hard]
00:44:590 - Remove the clap
01:47:905 - Add a clap?
02:05:493 - move this clap to 02:05:728 (Clap & finish together)

[Somnambulist]
Nice diff

Delete 00:11:173 (8) and 00:12:111 (6) then make a jump from one stream to another like this:
SPOILER
SPOILER

00:39:665 (3) - Clap
00:45:293 - Clap
00:47:169 - Clap

01:49:195 (3) - Delete and Stack like this to fit the vocal:
SPOILER
01:49:781 (2) - Move to the right to avoid overlap with 01:48:843 (2)
SPOILER

[Insane]
Good..nothing to mod
01:56:348 (1) - I like it

GoGoGo~~Star~
Parachute
317 posts
Joined October 2011
Parachute
He is forcing me to post that IRC mod ._.

SPOILER
19:15 Parachute: 00:33:568 (1) - 00:35:913 (4) - hast du die whistles gelöscht was ich übrigends sehr schlecht finde weil es sich ohne die echt.. ned so toll anhört xD
19:15 Irreversible: du hast gesagt nur auf den roten linien
19:16 Parachute: ja und dann hab ich noch gesagt da und da auch xD
19:16 Irreversible: sind wieder drauf
19:16 Parachute: ok xD
19:16 Parachute: dann warte jetz.
19:16 Parachute: wow.. du hast bei den "additions" voll oft normal.. o-o
19:17 Irreversible: das ist wegen dem background clap
19:17 Irreversible: da würde der s:1 clap nicht passen
19:17 Parachute: doch.. xD
19:17 Irreversible: WHISTLESSS
19:17 Irreversible: xD
19:17 Parachute: ja hallo das isn problem
19:17 Parachute: weil da dann ein "normal" whistle kommt
19:17 Irreversible: ja das kann ich ja wegmachen
19:18 Parachute: o.o...
19:18 Irreversible: und dort wo die background claps sind bleibt sowieso nen clap
19:18 Parachute: ja.. aber... ehm
19:18 Irreversible: das wort clap nervt mich langsam
19:18 Irreversible: XD
19:18 Parachute: ok ich.. ich mach einfach mal .. o_o
19:18 Irreversible: oki
19:19 Parachute: 00:41:072 (12) - also bis da
19:20 Parachute: machst du auf jedem roten strich UND
19:20 Parachute: 00:40:603 (10) - da am anfang ein whistle
19:20 Parachute: hast? xD
19:20 Irreversible: whistle + clap?
19:20 Parachute: ja o.o
19:21 Irreversible: hab
19:21 Parachute: 00:44:824 (6) - dann bis dahin auf jedes rotes und
19:21 Parachute: 00:44:355 (2) - und 00:44:824 (6) - ein whistle o-o
19:23 Parachute: hast?xD
19:36 Irreversible: .
19:36 Irreversible: hallo
19:36 Irreversible: u.u
19:36 Irreversible: dat schock wieder
19:36 Parachute: oh man xDDDD
19:36 Parachute: 00:44:824 (6) - hast alles bis hier?
19:37 Irreversible: denk scho
19:37 Irreversible: ja
19:37 Parachute: 00:52:328 (5) - dann jetz bis da o.o
19:37 Parachute: 00:48:576 (4) - bis hierhin immer am roten balken
19:38 Parachute: 00:48:811 (1) - 00:49:162 (3) - 00:49:749 (6) - da am anfang des sliders
19:38 Parachute: 00:50:218 (1) -
19:38 Parachute: 00:50:452 (2) - da in der mitte
19:38 Parachute: 00:51:390 (1,2) -
19:38 Parachute: 00:51:859 (3,4,5) - bei den slidern immer am slideranfang xD
19:38 Parachute: sag wenn du fertig bist xD
19:40 Irreversible: bin fertig
19:40 Irreversible: können wir beim nächsten part dieses whistle-whistle pattern brauchen? =D
19:41 Parachute: was.. für whistle whistle.. bin eig schon fertig mit dem whistle dings o.o
19:41 Irreversible: ab 00:52
19:41 Parachute: ja was willst du da machen.
19:41 Irreversible: 00:53:032 (2,3) -
19:41 Irreversible: 00:53:970 (6,7) - ( slider anfang)
19:41 Irreversible: und so
19:42 Parachute: x_x
19:42 Irreversible: halt so spannung aufbauen
19:42 Irreversible: das jetzt dann kiai time kommt
19:43 Irreversible: und das es nicht lw wird :D
19:43 Parachute: warte.
19:44 Parachute: also ok..
19:44 Parachute: 00:53:032 (2,3) -
19:44 Parachute: 00:53:970 (6,7) -
19:44 Parachute: 00:54:908 (1) - da anfang und ende und
19:44 Parachute: 00:55:377 (2) - da anfang
19:44 Parachute: 00:55:846 (1) - anfang
19:45 Parachute: 00:56:080 (2) - anfang und ende
19:45 Parachute: 00:56:549 (3) - ende
19:45 Parachute: 00:57:018 (4) - beides
19:45 Parachute: 00:57:487 (5) - ende
19:45 Parachute: 00:57:956 (1) - beides
19:45 Parachute: 00:58:425 (2) - ende
19:45 Parachute: 00:59:129 (4) -
19:45 Parachute: 01:00:067 (1) -
19:45 Parachute: 01:00:536 (3) -
19:45 Parachute: 01:00:770 (4) - beides
19:45 Irreversible: warte bei 00:53:970 (6,7) nur slider anfang odeR?
19:45 Parachute: 01:01:239 (5) - ende
19:46 Parachute: x_x
19:46 Parachute: ehm
19:46 Parachute: so wie dus gesagt hast also denk ich mal ja xD
19:46 Parachute: 01:01:943 (2) -
19:46 Parachute: 01:02:412 (4) -
19:46 Irreversible: 00:53:970 (6,7) hallo ich bin der der im hyperlink schreiben kann @@ XDD op
19:46 Parachute: 01:02:881 (6) - ende
19:46 Parachute: xDDDDDD
19:46 Parachute: 01:04:991 (2) -
19:46 Parachute: 01:05:460 (1) - ende
19:46 Parachute: 01:07:102 (3) -
19:46 Parachute: so.
19:46 Parachute: das machst du jetz mal und sag was nicht passt >_>
19:48 Irreversible: ist das ein test?
19:48 Parachute: warum test.
19:48 Irreversible: ok ich hör mal
19:49 Irreversible: ok also:
19:50 Irreversible: 00:56:080 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - es würde passen mit dem was vorhin ist, aber klingt wie son abspielfehler also wie.. ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-hallo
19:50 Irreversible: dafür ist der nächste part echt gut
19:50 Irreversible: 01:03:584 (1,2,3) - nur find ich die claps ein bisschen plötzlich..
19:51 Parachute: also 56 würd ich auch ändern.. aber die claps.. nich xD
19:51 Parachute: 00:57:018 (4) - und 00:57:956 (1) - am ende weg o.o
19:51 Parachute: aber hört sich auch komisch an.
19:51 Parachute: ich glaub das ganze muss man 1 nach rechts verschieben xD
19:51 Parachute: 00:56:549 (3) - also ab da
19:52 Parachute: hmm passt auch ned iwie o.o
19:52 Parachute: mach mal mom.
19:53 Parachute: 00:59:363 (5) - bis dahin würd ich wieder nur rote striche machen
19:53 Parachute: o.o
19:53 Irreversible: von wo aus?
19:53 Parachute: 00:56:080 (2) - xD
19:54 Irreversible: dort aber einen lassen?
19:54 Parachute: obwohl
19:54 Parachute: ich würd 00:58:894 (3) - machen und00:59:129 (4) - da nich
19:54 Parachute: und ja da lassen xD
19:54 Parachute: wenn du das alles hast
19:54 Parachute: tu mal submitten
19:55 Irreversible: oh ja jetzt ist viel besser
19:55 Irreversible: ghey das wird ja echt was :D
19:55 Parachute: o.o
19:56 Parachute: 00:40:603 (10) - nich dein ernst oder xDDD
19:56 Parachute: 00:51:859 (3) - x_x
19:57 Irreversible: was is da? D:
19:57 Parachute: "normal" whistle..
19:57 Parachute: xD
19:57 Parachute: 01:04:991 (2) - da auch..
19:57 Irreversible: ist normal whistle nich so was sirenen ähnliches?
19:57 Parachute: ja.. xD
19:57 Irreversible: ich hör das gar nicht
19:57 Parachute: o.ô
19:58 Parachute: deswegen.. fandest du die hitsounds bei meiner map vll ned so schlimm XD
19:58 Irreversible: ja bei mir ist es ein soft whistle xDDD
19:58 Parachute: o..o
19:58 Irreversible: weil das normal bedeutet nur das .. es halt s ist anstatt s:1 oder so
19:58 Parachute: ne
19:59 Parachute: da isses n
19:59 Parachute: o_o
19:59 Irreversible: nein das wärs wenn oben n wäre
19:59 Irreversible: es ist aber oben s
19:59 Parachute: nein
19:59 Parachute: du hast normal hitsounds für den circle benutzt
19:59 Parachute: es is das normal whistle o.o
19:59 Irreversible: nein
19:59 Parachute: doch xD
19:59 Irreversible: den template anstatt des customs
19:59 Irreversible: ach is ja egal wenn mans nicht hört
19:59 Irreversible: nächster mat mod: man hörts deine map ist scheisse BYE
19:59 Parachute: ehm man hörts aber o_o
19:59 Irreversible: lol XD
19:59 Parachute: xDDDDD
19:59 Irreversible: ich hörs aber nicht D: XD
20:00 Parachute: ja dann geh auf die 3 circles die ich dir gezeigt hab und dann
20:00 Parachute: 00:40:603 (10) -
20:00 Parachute: da am anfang das klickst du an
20:00 Parachute: dann oben links statt normal machst du "auto"
20:00 Parachute: 00:51:859 (3) - da auch
20:00 Irreversible: also
20:00 Irreversible: bei addtitions?
20:00 Irreversible: additions
20:01 Parachute: 01:04:991 (2) -
20:01 Parachute: ja
20:01 Parachute: additions
20:01 Parachute: machst du auto
20:02 Irreversible: ok
20:02 Irreversible: gemacht
20:02 Parachute: ok xD
20:03 Irreversible: 01:56:348 (1) - DET SIEHT AUS WIEN LOLLYLUTSCHER *Q*
20:03 Irreversible: XDD
20:03 Parachute: o.o....
20:03 Parachute: spinner o-o
20:03 Irreversible: nein, slider
20:03 Irreversible: ;D!
20:03 Irreversible: XDDD
20:04 Parachute: 01:54:237 (1,2,3,4,5) - wieso hast du das verändert
20:04 Irreversible: gelungenes konterwortspiel :3
20:04 Parachute: fand ich vorhin besser o.O
20:04 Irreversible: ehm..
20:04 Parachute: spinner.. nein slider.. was soll das fürn wortspiel sein x
20:04 Parachute: xD
20:04 Irreversible: ja weil es ein slider ist und kein spinner
20:04 Irreversible: (ja ich weiss du meintest ich bin ein spinner)
20:04 Irreversible: XDDD
20:04 Parachute: oh x_x
20:04 Parachute: jetz kapier ichs xD
20:04 Irreversible: er war echt gut
20:04 Irreversible: XDD
20:04 Parachute: xDDDD
20:05 Parachute: warte mal. o.o
20:07 Irreversible: muss kurz 1 runde multi
20:12 Irreversible: und nu?
20:12 Parachute: und nu was ? ^^
20:12 Parachute: kannst wieder?xD
20:12 Irreversible: gehts weiter?
20:12 Parachute: ja xD
20:13 Parachute: bis zum refrain hab ich schonmal alles ô.ô
20:16 Irreversible: ok
20:16 Irreversible: aber der refrain mit den claps fand ich gut
20:16 Irreversible: ausser whistles
20:16 Irreversible: und paar claps
20:16 Parachute: schau ich dann noch xD
20:17 Irreversible: ok
20:17 Irreversible: los
20:17 Parachute: ja mom o_o
20:18 Parachute: 01:07:336 (5) - bis01:22:110 (1) -
20:19 Parachute: soll ich dir jetz alles einzeln aufschreiben.. omg..
20:19 Parachute: 01:07:805 (6) - clap am anfang
20:19 Parachute: 01:08:274 (7) - whistle
20:19 Parachute: 01:08:743 (1) - clap am anfang
20:19 Parachute: 01:09:212 (2) - whistle am anfan
20:19 Parachute: g
20:19 Parachute: 01:09:681 (3) - clap
20:19 Parachute: 01:10:150 (5) - whistle am anfang xD
20:20 Irreversible: also ist das meine version?
20:20 Parachute: 01:10:619 (6) - clap am anfang.
20:20 Parachute: was weiß ich nö hab viele sachen verändert.
20:20 Irreversible: eh..
20:20 Irreversible: sehr schlau
20:20 Irreversible: xD
20:20 Parachute: du hattest noch nichmal so viel hitsounds
20:20 Parachute: wihstles hattest du fast gar keine
20:20 Parachute: also was heißt hier deine version o_o
20:20 Parachute: 01:11:088 (1) - finish und whistle
20:21 Parachute: 01:11:557 (3) - clap am anfang
20:21 Parachute: 01:12:026 (4) - whistle am anfang
20:21 Parachute: und clap am ende
20:21 Irreversible: ach das is ja nich kiai time
20:21 Parachute: 01:12:964 (2) - whistle
20:21 Parachute: ja xDDD
20:21 Parachute: 01:13:433 (4) - clap am anfang
20:21 Parachute: 01:13:902 (5) - whistle am anfang
20:21 Parachute: 01:14:371 (6,7) - clap
20:22 Parachute: 01:14:840 (1) - whistle und finish am anfang
20:22 Parachute: 01:15:309 (2) - clap am anfang
20:22 Parachute: 01:15:778 (3) - whistle am anfang clap am ende
20:22 Parachute: 01:16:716 (1) - whistle
20:22 Parachute: 01:17:185 (3) - clap
20:22 Parachute: 01:17:654 (5) - whistle
20:22 Parachute: 01:18:123 (7) - clap
20:22 Parachute: 01:18:358 (1) - whistle finish am ende
20:23 Parachute: 01:18:827 (2) - whistle am ende
20:23 Parachute: 01:19:530 (5) - whistle
20:23 Irreversible: ohne finish?
20:23 Parachute: 01:19:999 (2) - clap
20:23 Parachute: wo ohne finish?
20:23 Irreversible: 18:827 und 19:530
20:23 Parachute: 01:20:234 (1) - whistle finish am anfang, whistle am ende
20:23 Parachute: ohne finish. nur das was ich dir sag^^
20:23 Parachute: 01:18:358 (1) - nur da am ende ein finish
20:24 Parachute: 01:21:172 (3) - clap am anfang
20:24 Parachute: 01:21:641 (4) - whistle
20:24 Parachute: 01:21:876 (6) - whistle finish
20:24 Parachute: 01:22:110 (1) - finish am ende.. so jetz mach das mal alles und dann o.o
20:24 Parachute: dann sag mir wies is o.ô
20:24 Irreversible: ok
20:24 Irreversible: *O*
20:24 Parachute: xD
20:25 Irreversible: omg viel besser mit clap
20:25 Parachute: xDDD
20:25 Irreversible: 01:18:358 (1,2,3,4,5) -
20:25 Irreversible: für diesen part gern nochmal die hitsounds
20:25 Irreversible: XD
20:25 Parachute: nochmal schreiben? x.x
20:25 Irreversible: sind ja nur 5
20:25 Irreversible: gern
20:25 Irreversible: xD
20:26 Parachute: 01:18:358 (1) - whistle und finish am ende
20:26 Parachute: 01:18:827 (2) - whistle am ende
20:26 Parachute: 01:19:530 (5) - whistle o.o
20:26 Irreversible: das klingt nicht gut
20:26 Parachute: bei mir schon.. xD
20:27 Irreversible: 01:19:296 (3,4) -
20:27 Irreversible: haben die nix?
20:27 Parachute: nö
20:27 Irreversible: o.o
20:27 Parachute: o-o
20:27 Parachute: was
20:28 Irreversible: klingt so leer
20:28 Irreversible: ich submitte mal
20:28 Parachute: ok xD
20:28 Parachute: mal schaun obs so is wie ichs hatte.
20:29 Parachute: o.o
20:30 Irreversible: jz
20:30 Parachute: duu
20:30 Parachute: ich hab dir schon viel weiter die hitsounds gesagt xD
20:31 Parachute: 01:22:110 (1) - bis da hatte ichs schon gesagtx D
20:31 Parachute: 01:07:102 (3) - ein finish?xD
20:31 Irreversible: hab doch
20:31 Parachute: o.o
20:31 Parachute: neee
20:31 Parachute: da soll kein finish hin o.O
20:31 Parachute: hört sich.. sehr komisch an
20:31 Parachute: bzw nach zu viel
20:31 Parachute: 01:12:730 (1) - whistle? o.o
20:32 Parachute: 01:14:371 (6,7,1) - 3 finishes ?xD
20:32 Parachute: du hättest glaub ich
20:32 Parachute: erstmal alles löschen solln bevor du meinst gemacht hast xD
20:32 Irreversible: lol
20:32 Irreversible: omg glaubs oder nicht
20:32 Irreversible: aber als ich durchgehört hab
20:32 Irreversible: fand ich die parts besonders gut
20:32 Irreversible: XDDDDD
20:32 Parachute: o_o....
20:33 Parachute: ehh..
20:33 Parachute: mach mal
20:33 Parachute: 01:14:371 (6,7) - die finishes weg..
20:33 Parachute: 01:13:902 (5) - da hast dun whistle vergessen o.o
20:34 Parachute: 01:20:703 (2) - da kommen die claps weg.. warte jetz weiß ich nichmehr wie ichs hatte x_x
20:34 Irreversible: ich finds gut
20:34 Irreversible: o,o
20:35 Parachute: ne die claps.. passen gar nich o_o
20:35 Parachute: 01:22:110 (1) - da kommt am anfang das finish weg..
20:36 Parachute: 01:20:234 (1) - also da am anfang finish und whistle und am ende whistle
20:36 Parachute: 01:20:703 (2) - da nix o.o
20:36 Parachute: 01:21:172 (3) - clap am anfang
20:36 Parachute: den rest.. müsstest du haben xD
Irreversible
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Autumn wrote:

Hi~
Mod from my queue~
Nice hitsounds

[Easy]
Good

[Normal]
01:27:504 - Clap?
01:42:512 - ^
02:02:445 - ^
Btw, improve your mapflow.Use more curve sliders!

[Hard]
00:44:590 - Remove the clap
01:47:905 - Add a clap?
02:05:493 - move this clap to 02:05:728 (Clap & finish together)

[Somnambulist]
Nice diff

Delete 00:11:173 (8) and 00:12:111 (6) then make a jump from one stream to another like this:
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SPOILER

00:39:665 (3) - Clap
00:45:293 - Clap
00:47:169 - Clap

01:49:195 (3) - Delete and Stack like this to fit the vocal:
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01:49:781 (2) - Move to the right to avoid overlap with 01:48:843 (2)
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[Insane]
Good..nothing to mod
01:56:348 (1) - I like it

GoGoGo~~Star~
Thanks for the mod! I changed everything. Also, i will improve my normal~
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
Hi, M4M, actually more advising!

General

You added custom skin, so you have to keep in mind this should be complete at least circle wise. So you have to add a "lighting.png" to complete the custom circle skin.

Hard

00:21:843 (4,1) - You kept a consistent spacing at the previous pattern and then there is a different once, you should follow a normal spacing
00:37:320 (6) - Doesnt fit much, i suggest just adding a single cicle at 00:37:320
02:01:507 (6,1) - Consistent spacing please
02:03:148 (1) - Remove NC for consistence

1st Insane

Some parts are nice mapped others are so random, it needs more improvment

00:08:711 (3,1) - Like i said on previous post, tiny spacing change, not needed and super annoying in my eye, please fix this, should be consistent so it matches previous spacing
00:25:712 (5) - Too much, delete circle to fit the song, theres no related sound to it
00:29:464 (4) - ^
00:34:037 (1,1) - Remove NC, combo spam orz


2nd Insane

Also still needs improvment after all

01:30:552 (6,7,8,9) - These jumps arent fitable, and not similar, so keep them consistent
Example

that way you would have a better spacing and jump
01:35:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Example
01:46:029 (4,5,1) - ^
01:38:291 (4,1) - Not visible enough, due to overlapping each other

GL again
Irreversible
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4,315 posts
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I'm currently remapping easy / normal. Please don't mod them, (better don't mod this map now)
Don't be confused, i'll delete the unnecessary diffs afterwarsd.
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BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, M4M, actually more advising!

General

You added custom skin, so you have to keep in mind this should be complete at least circle wise. So you have to add a "lighting.png" to complete the custom circle skin.
i can't find this D: OTL
Hard

00:21:843 (4,1) - You kept a consistent spacing at the previous pattern and then there is a different once, you should follow a normal spacing
00:37:320 (6) - Doesnt fit much, i suggest just adding a single cicle at 00:37:320
02:01:507 (6,1) - Consistent spacing please
02:03:148 (1) - Remove NC for consistence changed everything



2nd Insane

Also still needs improvment after all

01:30:552 (6,7,8,9) - These jumps arent fitable, and not similar, so keep them consistent
Example

that way you would have a better spacing and jump
01:35:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ changed
Example
01:46:029 (4,5,1) - ^ mh.. don't really see what's wrong with my jump xD
01:38:291 (4,1) - Not visible enough, due to overlapping each other[/color] i think it's visible enough o.o i'll wait for more comments

GL again
hey.. :D thanks ~
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Yuki-kun
Fully mapped
Hope you like it :D

http://puu.sh/25WCU

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: capsule - dreamin dreamin.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 81856
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:dreamin dreamin
TitleUnicode:dreamin dreamin
Artist:capsule
ArtistUnicode:capsule
Creator:Irreversible
Version:Yuki's Dream
Source:
Tags:RLC J-Pop Yasutaka Nakata Toshiko Koshijima
BeatmapID:221623
BeatmapSetID:60111

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

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301,134,46700,6,0,P|312:88|304:40,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,237,47169,2,0,P|360:248|408:240,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,250,47638,2,0,P|200:296|208:344,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,147,48107,2,0,P|152:135|104:144,1,85,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,280,48576,2,0,P|96:320|168:328,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,329,49045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,248,49280,2,0,P|318:208,2,42.5,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,248,49749,2,0,P|120:209|120:185,2,85,0|8|0,0:0|2:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,95,50452,6,0,P|312:112|336:80|392:112,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,104,50921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,192,51156,2,0,P|416:232|376:256,1,85,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,216,51625,2,0,P|256:236|232:276,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
232,276,51976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,276,52094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,56,52328,6,0,P|120:40|216:56,1,170,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,128,53032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,216,53266,2,0,P|345:264|337:312,2,85,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
440,216,53970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,320,54204,2,0,P|376:320|376:320|336:336|336:336|272:336,2,170,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,216,55377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,145,55611,1,8,0:1:0:0:
295,72,55846,2,0,P|295:30,2,42.5,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,72,56315,6,0,P|72:160,1,85
176,136,56784,2,0,P|224:208,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,224,57253,2,0,P|96:312,1,85,0|8,0:0|2:1,0:0:0:0:
200,296,57722,2,0,P|248:368,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,294,58191,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,294,58425,2,0,P|448:248|456:208,2,85,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,218,59129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
455,116,59363,6,0,P|464:64|368:72,1,170,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,59,60067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,181,60301,2,0,P|128:224|168:237,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,203,60770,2,0,P|384:160|344:147,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,61239,2,0,P|256:152,1,85,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,328,61708,5,2,0:0:0:0:
107,328,61943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,328,62177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,328,62412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,328,62646,2,0,P|288:288|288:240,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,152,63115,2,0,P|211:119|126:163,1,170,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,63819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,63936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,64053,2,0,P|328:248|368:240,2,85,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,144,64757,5,0,0:0:0:0:
368,56,64991,1,8,0:1:0:0:
280,56,65226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,144,65460,2,0,P|152:144|88:160,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,159,65929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,231,66164,1,2,0:0:0:0:
162,368,66398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
243,257,66633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,299,66867,1,8,0:1:0:0:
243,342,67102,2,0,P|294:342,2,42.5,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,40,67571,6,0,P|432:120,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,48,68040,2,0,P|272:48,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,120,68509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,40,68743,2,0,P|106:123|138:195,1,170,8|0,2:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,344,69447,6,0,P|80:264,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,336,69916,2,0,P|240:336,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,264,70385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,344,70620,2,0,P|406:261|374:189,1,170,8|0,2:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,48,71323,6,0,P|112:112,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,180,71792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,72026,2,0,P|312:264|370:244|424:264,2,170,2|8|0,0:0|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,40,73199,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,111,73433,1,2,0:0:0:0:
327,38,73668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,109,73902,1,2,0:0:0:0:
182,36,74137,2,0,P|128:64|120:96,2,85,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,312,74840,6,0,P|136:312,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,256,75309,2,0,P|301:256,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,328,75778,2,0,P|400:264|368:176,2,170,2|8|2,0:0|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,40,76951,5,0,0:0:0:0:
189,216,77185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
37,128,77420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,128,77654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
87,216,77889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,40,78123,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,40,78358,6,0,P|376:40,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,112,78827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,112,79061,1,2,0:0:0:0:
291,184,79296,2,0,P|375:184,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,256,79765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
363,256,80000,1,8,0:0:0:0:
291,327,80234,2,0,P|248:320|216:288,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,292,80703,1,2,3:3:0:0:
120,176,80938,2,0,P|248:192|224:224|224:224|200:192|328:176,1,255.000009727478,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,48,81641,2,0,P|464:104,2,42.5,2|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,112,82110,5,4,0:0:0:0:
456,184,82345,1,4,0:0:0:0:
384,255,82579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,182,82814,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,112,83048,2,0,P|176:96|152:96,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,197,83517,2,0,P|138:197|74:213,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
136,296,83986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,296,84221,2,0,P|296:296|352:280,2,85,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,84924,2,0,P|336:200|384:216,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,140,85393,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,67,85628,1,8,0:1:0:0:
269,67,85862,6,0,P|208:64|176:80,1,85
243,317,86331,2,0,P|304:320|336:304,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,238,86800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,165,87035,2,0,P|280:160|208:160,1,85
167,86,87504,1,8,0:1:0:0:
144,184,87738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,96,87973,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,200,88207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,304,88442,2,0,P|116:299|188:299,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,297,88911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,89145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,288,89380,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,184,89614,6,0,P|368:88|304:48,1,170,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,90318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,72,90552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,90787,2,0,P|328:96|432:112,1,170,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
352,184,91490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,256,91725,2,0,P|256:256|256:256|224:288|224:288|200:288,2,85,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,184,92428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,92663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,184,92897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,93132,1,8,0:1:0:0:
472,40,93366,6,0,P|384:40,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,112,93835,2,0,P|376:160,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,184,94304,2,0,P|464:272,2,85,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,40,95008,6,0,P|128:40,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,112,95477,2,0,P|136:160,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,184,95946,2,0,P|48:272,2,85,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,320,96649,2,0,P|208:256,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,97118,6,0,P|256:192|296:288,1,170,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,264,97822,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,192,98056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,96,98291,2,0,P|408:120|368:192,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
296,120,98994,2,0,P|240:120,2,42.5
368,192,99463,2,0,P|413:205|448:256,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,304,99932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,304,100167,2,0,P|176:304,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,304,100636,1,8,0:1:0:0:
40,128,100870,6,0,P|144:128,1,85
224,128,101339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,55,101574,2,0,P|336:88|352:136,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,208,102043,2,0,L|296:208,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,312,102512,1,8,0:1:0:0:
220,328,102746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,312,102981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,208,103215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,312,103450,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,208,103684,2,0,B|296:160|296:160|256:128,2,85
208,208,104388,1,8,0:1:0:0:
152,128,104622,6,0,P|232:112|320:128,1,170,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,152,105209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,184,105326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,272,105560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,216,105795,2,0,P|256:296|176:312,1,170,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
168,216,106498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,216,106616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,216,106733,2,0,P|192:168|232:144,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,107202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,112,107436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,107671,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,64,107905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,108140,1,8,0:1:0:0:
464,184,108374,6,0,P|464:248|456:280,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,320,108843,2,0,B|320:304|320:304|272:304,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,232,109312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,232,109547,2,0,B|76:204|76:204|64:208|64:208|40:184,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,120,110016,6,0,L|152:40,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,110485,2,0,L|355:106,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,304,110954,2,0,L|413:291,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,111423,1,4,0:0:0:0:
400,64,111657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,111892,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,112126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,112244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,112361,6,0,L|153:187|135:198|80:192,2,85,4|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
376,280,113299,2,0,L|411:294|421:313|472:336,2,85,0|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
424,192,114002,2,0,B|440:96|440:96|416:48|352:48,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,124,114706,1,10,0:0:0:0:
240,195,114940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,267,115175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,195,115409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
22,122,115644,6,0,B|56:88|56:88|96:80,2,85,8|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,194,116348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
22,265,116582,2,0,B|56:299|56:299|96:307,2,85,12|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,194,117286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,117520,2,0,L|280:192,1,85,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,236,117872,1,2,0:0:0:0:
329,279,117989,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,224,118224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,120,118458,6,0,L|336:120,1,85,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,40,118927,1,2,0:0:0:0:
177,40,119162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,120,119396,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,152,119513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,200,119631,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,248,119748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,280,119865,2,0,P|160:296|208:296,2,85,2|0|12,0:0|0:0|2:1,0:0:0:0:
194,297,120569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,280,120803,2,0,P|352:296|304:296,2,85,0|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
317,297,121507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,121741,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,144,121976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,122210,1,12,0:1:0:0:
304,96,122327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,144,122445,2,0,B|232:136|232:152|152:152,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,224,123148,1,8,0:1:0:0:
192,224,123383,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,312,123617,5,4,0:1:0:0:
240,312,123852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,312,124086,1,12,0:1:0:0:
344,312,124321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,224,124555,1,4,0:1:0:0:
296,224,124790,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,224,125024,1,12,0:1:0:0:
400,224,125141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,125259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
471,152,125493,6,0,L|416:80,2,85,2|2|12,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
419,84,126197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,152,126431,2,0,L|256:152,2,85,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,40,127135,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,40,127252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,40,127369,5,4,0:0:0:0:
279,236,127604,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,114,127838,1,2,0:0:0:0:
319,114,128073,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,236,128307,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,152,128542,2,0,L|320:176,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
400,192,129011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,296,129245,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,264,129480,2,0,L|221:244,2,85,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,244,130183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,172,130418,1,2,0:0:0:0:
221,100,130652,1,8,0:1:0:0:
256,192,131121,12,4,134873,0:0:0:0:
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani

Irreversible wrote:

I'm currently remapping easy / normal. Please don't mod them, (better don't mod this map now)
Don't be confused, i'll delete the unnecessary diffs afterwarsd.
PM When you finish re-mapping easy and normal.
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Irreversible
Hey there! I remapped easy and normal. But i'm not happy with my hard! And someone wanted to do a GD. So i have to wait for it .. so for every modder: Please don't mod it yet! It will be finished soon. I hope you're okay with that, if you have any questions, PM me.

SOrry for these circumstances.
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Irreversible
Hi!

Finally, this mapset is finished. And for now, i won't remap anything again!
For these who have to mod this map, you can do it now :)

Thanks in advance!
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

  • • Set the same combo colors on all diffs. (use the same colors on Somnambulist diff, they're really nice)
    • Set the same tags on all diffs. (also, add DakeDekaane)
    • Set the same kiai on all diffs. (as you can see, it's not consistent between the diffs)

Easy

  • • Approach Rate: 3
    • 00:18:560 (4) - Add a new combo.
    • 00:22:312 (3) - ^
    • 00:28:409 (4) - ^
    • 00:30:000 (break) - Is this break really necessary? Delete it and map this part.
    • 00:51:390 (1,2) - Delete these circles. Start a slider at 00:51:390, end it at 00:51:859 and add a repeat.
    • 00:52:797 (3) - Add a new combo.
    • 00:59:363 (1) - Remove the new combo here...
    • 01:00:301 (2) - ...and add it here.
    • 01:05:460 (7) - Add a new combo.
    • 01:18:592 (1) - End this spinner at 01:21:407.
    • 01:24:221 (1) - Remove the new combo.
    • 01:26:097 (3) - Add a new combo.
    • 01:33:601 (5) - ^
    • 01:41:105 (5) - ^
    • 01:48:609 (5) - ^
    • 01:54:237 (3,1) - Delete (3) and start the next spinner 1/1 earlier.
    • 02:00:334 (4) - Add a new combo.
    • 02:02:210 (x) - Add a circle.
    • 02:04:086 (1) - Delete this spinner and map this part like you did in Normal.

Normal

  • • 00:18:560 (5) - Add a new combo.
    • 00:30:000 (break) - Is this break really necessary? Delete it and map this part.
    • 00:49:045 (x) - Add a circle. (with a new combo)
    • 00:49:514 (x) - Add a circle.
    • 00:49:749 (1) - Remove the new combo.
    • 00:54:204 (1) - ^
    • 01:03:819 (8) - Add a new combo here...
    • 01:04:757 (1) - ...and remove it here.
    • 01:14:840 (5) - Add a new combo.
    • 01:35:477 (1) - Remove the new combo.
    • 01:39:229 (4) - Add a new combo.

Dekaane's REM

  • • 00:31:692 (5) - Add a new combo here...
    • 00:32:630 (1) - ...and remove it here.
    • 00:35:444 (5) - Add a new combo here...
    • 00:36:382 (1) - ...abd remove it here.
    • 01:18:358 (1) - End this spinner 1/2 later.
    • 01:22:110 (1) - Add a new combo.

Yuki's Dream

  • • 00:08:242 (3,4,7,8) - Select all these circles then flip them horizontally.
    • 00:14:808 (5) - Add a new combo.
    • 00:23:953 (5) - Convert this slider in 3 1/4 circles and add a new combo on the last one.
    • 00:48:576 (5) - Add a new combo.
    • 00:55:846 (8) - Convert this slider in 3 1/4 circles and add a new combo on the last one.
    • 00:59:363 (1) - Remove the new combo. End this slider at 00:59:598 and add a circle at 00:59:832 with a new combo.
    • 01:03:819 (7) - Add a new combo here...
    • 01:04:757 (1) - ...and remove it here.
    • 01:05:460 (4) - Add a new combo.
    • 01:20:234 (7) - ^
    • 01:24:221 (8) - ^
    • 01:27:973 (7) - ^
    • 01:31:725 (6) - ^
    • 01:38:994 (5) - Convert this slider in 3 1/4 circles and add a new combo on the last one.
    • 01:42:512 (1) - Remove the new combo here...
    • 01:42:981 (3) - ...and add it here.
    • 01:50:016 (1) - Remove the new combo here...
    • 01:50:485 (2) - ...and add it here.
    • 01:54:002 (3) - Add a new combo.
    • 01:55:644 (1) - Convert this slider in 3 1/2 circles and add a new combo on the last one.
    • 01:59:865 (8) - Add a new combo.
    • 02:10:887 (x) - Add a circle.

Somnambulist

  • Really nice, did you make this diff? If you didn't, then add the mapper's name in the diff name/tags. (I'm saying this because this diff is using a different mapping style compared to the one used in Insane, sorry if I'm wrong lol)

Insane

  • • 00:16:215 (x) - Add a circle.
    • 00:18:091 (x) - ^
    • 00:19:967 (x) - ^
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