1. Dekaane's REM (4.68 stars, 277 notes)
2. Easy (2.03 stars, 127 notes)
3. Insane (4.99 stars, 375 notes)
4. Normal (3.33 stars, 171 notes)
5. Yuki's Dream (4.96 stars, 374 notes)

Old Text

My first Beatmap! I hope you enjoy it!
Easy - finished
Normal - finished
Dekaane's REM - finished by DakeDekaane [Hard]
Yuki's Dream - finished by Yuki-Kun [Insane]
Insane - finished
REDOWNLOAD IF YOU DOWNLOADED IT BEFORE 10/04/2013, new mp3

SPOILER

30.11.2012: Removed (Short Ver.)
11.02.2013 Added Wiinter's skin! (sliderball made by Gems)
17.02.2013: Remapped Easy
18.02.2013: Remapped Normal
21.02.2013: Added Yuki's Dream
26.02.2013: Added Dekaane's REM
23.03:2013: Added some new Numbers of the skin, the old ones where annoying
24.03.2013: Changed BPM everywhere. fml
24.03.2013: Bubble by Frostmourne
25.03.2013: Pop da bubble xD
25,03.2013: rebubbled by Frostmourne
26.03:2013: bubble pop by lolcubes
31.03.2013: rebubble by lolcubes
10.04.2013: new mp3

Thanks to my waifu Linn / Garven shortened mp3 file!!
Thanks to Wiinter / Gems for the Skin!
Thanks to all my friends who are supporting me, and thanks for the awesome GD's
Hello DakeDekaane o/ xD

Hyguys wrote:

This is your first map , so I'll try to tell some tips on mapping.Kinda a mod.

General
Like grumd said , the offset should be 7300 , and you should kudosu him
You should put hitsounds , to make the music have another feel , and make your beatmap confortable & fun to play.
This kiai 01:22:090 (1) - Should start 1/2 later , and should end 1/2 later. Make sure to make this change on all difficulties, and add the kiai on Easy difficulty. done
You must put new combos , like on these big combos on easy 01:28:418 (7) - and remove some random new combos 01:48:106 (1) -[/color]
You must set an preview point. Go to the point on the map where you like to hear on the beatmap selection , and go on Timing , then Set preview point. Do this on all difficulties!
Use AiMod (Ctrl + Shift + A) That will really help you

Easy
Put more hitsounds , like clap , whistle , finish... But don't flood / spam them! Do like , whistle , normal , clap , normal , whistle , use your creativity
Do the things I have said on general
00:49:043 (5) - New combo
00:52:793 (9) - New combo
01:11:543 (8) - ^
01:14:825 (11) - ^
01:41:543 (5) - ^
01:48:106 (1) - Remove new combo

Normal
Do the things on general
This is very hard for an normal , but whatever ...
The new combos , you should put them on the big tick of the timing. And if the big tick is occupied by and slider end you should put the new combo on the other beats... if you understand me.
When the combo goes over 7~13 , you should put an new combo , like on these situations 01:04:043 (7) -
The note is so close to the spinner 01:18:340 (1) -

Hard
Do things on general...
00:18:575 (8) - New combo

Insane
00:18:575 (8) - This slider is kinda ugly, and unrankable... So you might change it...
This is the best difficulty , with only hitsounds missing , and some new combos... don't know why its unrankable, but i changed it

Great on your first map. I wait for your reply. And also give me an kudosu if you think this mod is helpful. yup, it was helpful, thank you changed most of the things you suggested

Genshin wrote:

ok let's see:

first of all, can i suggest 01:21:856 - as preview point? yep
now let's MOD

[Easy]

00:49:043 (5) - new combo
00:52:793 (9) - new combo
01:18:575 (1) - move the end of this spinner to 01:21:387 - because in easy diffs there must be a space between spinners end and next notes
01:26:075 (2) - new combo
01:31:231 - add a note here
01:33:106 - ...and here
01:52:325 (3) - new combo
as last thing, kiai time must be the same for every diff, so add it on the easy too ..weird i already made this but ok o.O

changed everything of here XD

[Normal]

OD: 4

00:12:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - why this change of direction? i suggest you to flip these notes horizontally (select and ctrl + h) to keep the anti clockwise sense of these ones 00:11:075 (1,2,3,4) - it even matches correctly with next ones (00:16:700 (1,2,3) - )
00:31:231 (4,5) - spacing, it's just a normal, after all :3 you mean 3,4? i changed it.
00:33:575 (7) - new combo here
00:37:325 (11) - new combo here
00:37:793 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:746 (7) - new combo here
00:50:450 (1) - remove new combo
00:52:793 (6) - new combo here
00:53:262 (2,3,4) - not sure the shape of these sliders is allowed on normal... why not? xD
01:04:043 (7) - new combo here
01:20:215 (1) - this is not allowed on normal, move the end of this spinner 01:18:340 (1) - to 01:20:215 -
01:25:606 - a note here
01:32:871 (8) - change this slider with a single note
the rest is also changed
[Hard]

00:23:965 - add a note here
00:33:106 - instead of this note i suggest you a 3rd etna slider here 00:32:871 (8) - like this http://puu.sh/1ax15, OR make it as a reverse slider, deleting the next note (00:32:871 (8) - ) http://puu.sh/1ax6n (ofc if u do this, u may move this 00:33:575 (1) - closer) good idea

else is ok

[Insane]

General:
DAT OD o.o ...reduce it at 6 or 7 max... a 9 OD would be playing with hard rock all the time xD he..he..he.. i changed it ^^; XD
00:28:184 (2) - reverse this (ctrl + r) cool, ty
00:42:950 (5,6) - stack these 2 on this: 00:43:184 (7) - done
00:53:028 (2) - move to x72 y216 done
01:23:262 (4,6) - weird length... why 3 ticks? thats on purpose xD
01:42:246 (1,2,3) - just a suggestion, move these 3 here http://puu.sh/1axfT done
02:04:746 (1,2) - reverse direction of this
02:05:215 (1,2) - and this ops, wanted to change this anyways xD

thank you


Good Luck

P o M u T a wrote:

:P hi m4m ~

General
Grid Level 4 (Tiny) I recommend it. I don't really like grid level 4 :/
A green line slips off. Please revise it.(Kiai Time Start) fixed


Easy
00:07:325 - A slider is beautiful when I make a halfway point a symmetry. Let's put up LastPoint in the middle of the circle to clean it. http://puu.sh/1aITr
00:11:075 - ^ both fixed
00:49:746 - I think that I am serious when rhythm of the red line is Easydiff. it wouldn't fit another way >__<
01:48:106 - For EasyDiff, the person who does not employ some note after spin is easy. deleted

It was an impression that there were many circles. The slider center recommends Easy

Normal
00:27:481 - Because it is difficult, some one-shot continuations will cover it with a slider if it is possible. changed
00:49:746 - 00:50:215 - Kick Slider Use ? because The one is easy. didn't really got what you mean but i maked it round instead of kick-slider-like (wtf)
01:36:856 - I thought that it was not easy to repeat it in Normal Diff. let's separate it. ???

Hard
A person with DS is beautiful as possible, and the Hard diff is all right.
01:14:590　- Placement will move it in the place looking incomprehensible. changed number 4 to another place
01:26:075 - Add New Combo.done
01:26:543 - Remove New Combo.done
01:30:293 - ^done
01:30:996 - ^done
01:50:215 - Because I think that this jump is facing insane, I will simplify it a little more. no xD

Insane
00:26:309 - Add new combo . done
00:26:778 - Remove new combo.done
00:29:590 - Add new combo.done
01:12:950 - ^done
01:14:121 - Remove New combo. done

That's All a variety of sliders cool
good luck ~!star

Parachute wrote:

General
Youre using an other Kiai Time for Easy and Insane.. you should do it as in Normal and Hard.^^ done

Easy
01:11:543 (8) - Add combodone
01:39:668 (3,4) - Add clap on the 3 and remove it from the 4 no
01:44:356 (7) - Add finish or clap done
01:48:106 (1) - No hitsounds from here, use some claps on the 1 and every second 1/1 beat after that yeah i forgot XD
02:04:512 (1) - drag the spinner to 02:07:325 ? good idea :d

Normal
00:14:825 (4) - start using hitsounds from here? i would say you should do a clap at the end of that slider and another clap every second 1/1 beat (same beats for kiai time) i didn't even hitsound normal and hard xD but i will now :X
00:20:450 (1,2) - you should flip them vertically done and stack the slider top on the 1 from the next circles ^^ no xD
01:51:856 (10) - use something else as hitsounds from here like more claps
02:01:934 (5,1) - i dont think that jumps are allowed in normal done XD
02:07:325 - Add circle done


Hard
Well heres the same as in Normal.. youre using no hitsounds.. i would recommend to do the same what i wrote in Normal xD
00:21:856 (4,5,6,1) - hmm kinda hard to read.. you should stack 5, 6 and 1 under the 4 ok.. i changed it xD
00:23:028 (2) - same for this one you should make the spacing a bit bigger (use distance snap and drag it to the right so its gonna look good) color=#40BF0]cool idea[/color]
01:13:184 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm thats hard to read and a jump after that.. you should drag the 5 nearer to the 4 xD done
02:07:325 - Add circle done


Insane
00:14:356 (7) - New combo? done
00:23:028 (3,4,5) - thats impossible to read xD it kinda works if you just play the map, i don't know how to explain xD
00:33:575 (6) - New combodone
00:35:450 (5) - ^done
00:35:684 (1) - Remove combodone
00:36:387 (4) - New combodone
00:44:121 (9) - ^done
01:13:184 (7) - ^done
01:14:121 (1) - Remove combodone
01:41:309 (1) - ^ or done
01:42:715 (4) - Add combodone
02:06:621 (4) - ^done
02:07:325 - Add circle

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Irreversible

M4M request from pm in-game

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Change PreviewTime of Insane diff to 81856, for same as others diff. done
2. Disable enable countdown in Easy diff which it's different with other diff. ..it didn't have a countdown? o.O
3. Kiai time of all diff is different. Please fix all diff to this
   
   1. Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:325, ends on 01:52:325

done

Easy

1. 00:25:606 (2) - Add clap here. done
2. 01:11:543 (8) - Add new combo. It has this combo 11 combo which its unrankable for Easy diff.done
3. 01:22:425 - Unsnapped a green line. Please move to 01:22:325.done
4. 01:48:106 (1) - After finish the spinner, (1) is appeared too early. Please remove it. Then don't forget add new combo in 01:48:575 (2).
5. 01:53:731 (3,4) - Spacing is too far. Please fix it.deleted the heart, because it looks ugly with distance snap xD

Normal

1. 00:14:825 (4) - Add new combo. done
2. 01:05:450 (4,5) - Move (4) instead of (5), then use slider (5) start at 01:06:387 and end at 01:06:856. changed it in a different way
3. 00:57:481 (3,4,6,1) - Move (6) to stack with (4) and move (1) to stack with (3). no
4. 01:13:887 (3,1,2) - Spacing is too far. Please reduce spacing of them about 1.00x. its not a jump, its only because a new combo is there :/
5. 01:20:684 (1) - Add NC here, since this note follows a spinner.done
6. 01:36:856 (8) - Don't stack with slider end of (7).

Hard

1. 01:31:700 (5) - Add new combo here.done
2. 00:35:450 (5) - ^done
3. 00:50:450 (4) - ^done
4. 01:00:293 (12,1) - Switch new combo.done
5. 01:11:309 (7) - Add new combo here.done
6. 01:15:059 (6) - ^done
7. 01:30:293 (1,1) - Remove new combo, but add it in 01:33:340 (5) stead.done
8. 02:04:278 (5) - Add new combo.

done

Insane

1. 01:18:315 - Unsnapped a green line. Please move to 01:18:340.[/color]
2. 00:44:121 (9,12,13) - Stack them.no

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~

pandaikon wrote:

hi there~

[General]
Use the offset grumd provided. it may sound off to you because your universal audio offset. i'm getting pissed with offset, dunno what to believe, some people says its right, other people say its wrong.. i have to check this
Lower the volume of the hitsounds from 00:07:325 - to 00:14:825 - done

[Easy]
What about removing this note 00:15:293 (1) - and replacing it with a slider that starts at 00:14:825 - and ends at 00:15:293 - ? sounds better to me cool idea done

[Normal]
AR-1 why not, done
It would be nice to find a place for a break in this diff, but i guess you could go without one. i wouldn't know where to put one
00:12:950 (1) - it's not a good practice to end sliders on a blue tick in normal diffs. and it sounds odd. you could make the slider longer, it will sound better. i don't know why this happened, i never let them end at blue ticks.. well i changed it XD
00:13:887 (2) - ^
00:14:825 (1,2) - ^
01:05:450 (4,5,1,2,3) - this kind of stuff could be hard to read for inexperienced players, try to move 01:07:325 (1,2,3) - so that the player would be able to see the notes easily. no, i leave it like this xD

[Hard]
00:10:606 (2,3,4,5) - and 00:14:356 (1,2,3,4,5) - look kinda ugly. you could line them to look nicer and easier to read. i like it like this.
00:48:809 (1,2) - this stuff breaks the rhythm, use a slider (may be reversed) that has its start and end on the red and white ticks, or notes placed on the 1/2 divisor.
01:03:809 (1,2) - ^
01:14:590 (4) - stack this with the end of 01:13:653 (2) - it has already been there? xD

[Insane]
00:15:996 (3,4) - once again, breaks the rhythm. use something like this, it sounds way better:

image

00:17:871 (3,4) - 00:19:746 (3,4) - 01:42:950 (2,3) - ^also here, sorry but i'll leave it how it is . xD

sorry for a lame mod D:
nice map, and good luck with it.

-Kirito wrote:

hi~chat 1:1
Have modding too late ..I'm sorry.

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:17:637 (4) - clap delete
00:20:450 (3) - Ctrl + R, 00:22:324 - finish, NC add
00:22:793 (5) - combo add?
00:24:668 (2) - ^
00:26:543 (4) - ^
00:28:418 (6) - ^
00:29:356 ~ 00:37:325 - Easy difficulty in break time?
01:52:793 (2) - combo & finish add?
01:52:793 (2) - clap,finish delete
02:04:512 (1) - clap delete

[Noraml]

SPOILER

00:14:825 (1,2) - 1/4 sild change
00:22:325 (1) - finish
00:36:387 (4) - Slide the end of the finish delete
01:18:340 (1) - finish
01:21:621 (2) - Slide the start of the finish - change
01:22:090 (1) - Slide the end of the finish, clap delete
01:35:450 (5) - NC?
02:00:293 (3) - finish add, clap delete
02:04:043 (3) - ^

Too difficult for the non-Normal.
Normal standards of 3.5 or less.

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:16:231 (3) - clap add
00:18:106 (4) - ^
00:19:981 (4) - ^
00:22:325 (1) - Slide the start of the finish
00:23:262 (3) - Slide the end of the Clap
00:25:137 (3) - ^
00:27:012 (3) - ^
00:28:887 (7) - ^
00:31:231 (4) - clap add
00:31:700 (5) - NC?
00:32:871 (8) - Slide the end of the Clap
00:34:981 (3) - clap add
00:36:387 (3) - clap add
00:38:731 (3) - ^
00:40:371 (1) - SlideArrow 1 clap
00:42:481 (5) - clap
00:46:231 (3) - Slide the start of the clap
00:51:856 (5) - clap
00:53:731 (4) - Slide the start of the clap
00:55:137 (8) - Slide the end of the Clap
00:57:481 (5) - Slide the start of the clap
01:01:231 (3) - clap
01:53:965 (6) - NC?

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:15:059 (1) - Slide the end of the Clap
00:16:934 (1) - ^
00:18:809 (1) - ^
00:18:809 (1) - ^
00:57:950 (6) - NC?
01:41:309 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Notes of the distance is too wide.
01:43:887 (5,6,7) - ^
01:45:996 (4,5,6) - ^
01:47:871 (10,11,1) - ^
02:05:918 - combo add?
02:06:387 - ^
02:07:090 - ^
02:07:207 - ^

Ranked hope~~

Mixagji wrote:

hi~
I mod only Insane because others diff seem not finished mapping

[Insane]
00:10:606(4) - add Newcombo same as 00:14:356 - and whistle
00:10:840(6) - add whistle
00:11:075(8) - ^ on slider's head
00:14:356(1) - ^
00:14:590(3) - ^
00:14:825(5) - add finish
00:26:778(1) - remove NC
00:39:434(5) - add NC
00:44:707(4,5) - please stack parfectly on 00:44:121(1) -
00:47:403(6) - add NC
01:01:700(6) - ^
01:05:450(7) - ^
01:21:621(6) - ^
01:21:856(8) - remove finish
01:22:325(1) - add finish on slider's end
01:23:965(6) - NC
01:27:012(6) - ^
01:29:356(3) - remove finish
01:29:825(6) - remove clap and whistle. add finish and NC
01:33:575(8) - NC
01:38:965(6) - ^
01:46:465(7) - ^
01:50:450(6) - ^
02:06:387(5) - ^
02:06:621(1) - remoce newcombo
02:07:090(3,4,5) - These triple should stack imo.

good luck

Bread wrote:

oh I love this song

I'm a noob at mapping so sorry if this mod is like
uh
not very thorough
and coordinates are in the form x,y (too lazy to type x and y each time)

Insane
00:37:207 - you should add another hitcircle and move 00:37:325 (6) - to make it a stream
00:41:075 (12) - move to 280,264? lol I'm very nitpicky about circle locations xD
01:41:778 (1) - 152,240
01:56:309 (1) - uh what is this supposed to be? If you want a heart, I recommend something like

SPOILER

It still has the same timing
01:48:575 (2) - move the red point to 258,352
01:16:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I personally feel like these should be jumps. you can make whatever jumps you like but I have
01:16:700 (1) - 176, 34
01:16:934 (2) - 104, 264
01:17:168 (3) - 280, 136
01:17:403 (4) - 64, 136
01:17:637 (5) - 248, 264
01:17:871 (6) - 176, 34 (yes, overlapping 1)
01:18:106 (7) - 176, 160
01:27:481 (8) - move the point from 46,50 to 50,46

okay that's it for the insane.

Hard
01:23:965 (5) - 224,312 red point
01:46:231 (4) - looks unnatural, make it a straight slider instead?

and please make it AR7, 6 feels really slow, especially since it already has a low BPM

but other than that, really good map!

and I didn't mod easy or normal because I think they are very good already ^__^
okay GL with this map!

Kurisuchianu wrote:

well well well, nice to know people are still looking on #modreqs :>

[General]
You need to know witch spacing you should do, if you do if more better, try with distance snapping.

[Insane]
00:07:303 - 00:10:352 - Can you put hitsounds on there too?, soft with wistle sounds better.
00:11:525 - 00:14:104 - ^
00:22:077 (5,6,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470777 also, if 00:22:077 (5,6) Got more spacing than 00:23:015 (3,4) is rong, please fix it.
00:29:581 (1) - is insane so... can you put sliders?, looks more fun.
00:33:333 - Sounds like triple notes there
02:01:507 (1,2,3,4) - Overlap here doesn't fit, please move.
02:05:259 (1,2,3,1) - ^

[Somnambulist]
00:10:587 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I didn't catch the rhythm there, please change the hitsounds.
00:32:630 (3) - Look nice like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470783
00:37:789 (2) - Please no overlap, and make it like ^
00:41:072 (1) - ^
00:45:293 (2) - ^ and the others.
01:19:530 (3) - i didn't read it very well, please reduce this slider.
01:23:283 (1) - Bad slider is bad please fix as these sliders 01:27:035 (1) - 01:30:787 (1) - 01:42:512 (2) - 01:45:795 (1) - 01:51:892 (4) - 01:56:348 (2)
02:07:135 (4,5,1) - doesn't look nice.
Really this map is more fun then the insane one, nice.

[Hard]
00:10:587 (2,3,4,5) - 3 notes pls, and no 4.
00:33:568 (1) - only one retourn to the slider look's fine.
00:40:368 (1) - ^
00:49:514 (3) - ^
01:08:978 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:19:967 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470794 and obiously, moving, some notes for spacing

[Easy]
01:17:185 (2) - move to, 01:16:716

:3

1. If Somnambulist was made by RLC then add his name to the tags in all diffs, please
2. 00:14:339 - unsnapped green inherit line in Insane
3. 00:14:808 - unsnapped green inherit line in Easy, Normal and Insane
4. 01:18:358 - ^ in Insan, Hard
5. 01:19:765 - ^ Insane, Hard
6. 01:22:345 - ^ Hard, Normal, Easy
7. 01:24:924 - ^ Easy
8. 01:25:393 - ^ Easy
9. 01:28:911 - ^ Easy
10. 01:29:380 - ^ Easy
11. 01:34:304 - ^ Easy
12. 01:35:242 - ^ Easy
13. 01:37:353 - ^ Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane
14. 01:38:056 - ^ Easy
15. 01:38:525 - ^ Easy
16. 01:40:401 - ^ Easy
17. 01:40:870 - ^ Easy
18. 01:42:277 - ^ Easy
19. 01:42:746 - ^ Easy
20. 01:52:126 - ^ Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane
21. 01:56:348 - ^ Normal, Hard, Insane
22. 01:58:693 - ^ Hard, Insane
23. 02:00:100 - ^ Insane
24. 02:02:445 - ^ Insane
25. 02:03:852 - ^ Insane

1. 00:14:808 (4) - new combo
2. 00:19:967 (5) - new combo (or on previous slider)
3. 00:49:045 (1,2,3) - bad spacing. Try using a constant Distance Snap for Easy diffs. Change atleast spacing between (2) and (3)
4. 00:50:921 (3) - Maybe new combo
5. 01:27:504 (4) - new combo
6. 01:31:725 (4) - new combo
7. 01:41:574 (5) - new combo
8. 01:48:609 (1) - repeats feel out of place. Use two sliders instead. Repeats are fine on (2) though

1. 00:22:312 (1,2) - Could you please change the postion a bit. They lie under 00:20:436 (1) - a bit. Doesn't look so nice
2. 00:22:781 (3) - is not on the same Y coordinate like (1). Would look better if you change that
3. 00:24:188 (5) - new combo
4. 00:27:471 (1) - remove new combo, add that better to 00:27:940 (2) -
5. 00:33:568 (1) - maybe make it the same way like (2)
6. 00:53:266 (2,3,4) - these sliders look weird/bad. Move the 3rd slider point a bit farther away so the spike looks better
7. 01:16:716 (3) - maybe new combo
8. 01:23:986 (5) - new combo
9. 01:27:738 (3) - new combo
10. 01:28:676 (7) - repeater don't fit. Use 2 sliders instead
11. 01:31:256 (3) - new combo
12. 01:38:994 (5) - new combo
13. 01:46:967 (5) - ^
14. 01:42:746 (3) - remove one repeater and use a Hit circle instead
15. 01:50:250 (6) - new combo
16. 01:54:002 (4) - new combo
17. 02:00:803 (4) - so many repeats don't fit.
18. 02:04:555 (4) - ^
19. 02:06:666 (6) - new combo

1. 00:17:622 (3,4) - it is okay to use a anti jump here, but i would prefer it a bit further away. Try (3) X: 328 Y: 192. Mirror (4) with strg + h then
2. 00:19:498 (3,4) - ^ If you do that just place (3) on (4) of previous combo and do the same for (4) like ^
3. 00:27:940 (5,6,7) - why not continue hitsound pattern you used for (1,2,3,4) in this combo?
4. 00:31:223 (4,1) - jump doesn't feel good. This super slow spacing from 00:29:816 (1,2,3,4) - leads to this uncomfortable jump
5. 00:48:811 (1,2) - Hitsounds feel bad here D: change it a bit or so. They feel to loud
6. 01:03:819 (1,2) - ^
7. 01:11:323 (7) - new combo
8. 01:18:358 (7) - I made the slider more symmetrical. Use this code
   

   320,104,78358,2,0,B|432:104|472:192|432:280|320:280,1,315.000012016297

9. 01:25:628 (9,10,1) - The new combo feels like it should start on (9) or (10) but (1) is fine to ... the combo just feels a bit to long :/
10. 01:46:264 (4,1) - start new combo on (4) instead of (1)
11. 01:56:113 - add Hitcircle
12. 02:03:148 (3,4) - slider look bad D:
13. 02:07:369 (2) - flow would be better if it were under 02:06:197 (1) - instead next to it

1. 00:22:077 (5) - Instead of this short slider try Hitcircle. They have a better flow
2. 00:51:976 (6,7,8,1) - I miss some Hitsounds. Maybe clap on (1)
3. 02:01:272 (4,5,6) - dunno these claps feel meh
4. 02:15:811 - until end. pointless green inherit lines

1. 00:08:711 (4) - whistle on repeat feels wrong
2. 00:15:980 (3,4) - claps feel bad/ to loud
3. 00:19:732 (3,4) - ^
4. 00:59:363 (5) - not sure about this slider
5. 01:21:172 (1) - wow this slider is to fast. A SV of 1,25 would be better instead of 1,5
6. 01:53:065 (3,4,5) - feel to close to (2)

bomber34 wrote:

[Somnambulist]

1. 00:22:077 (5) - Instead of this short slider try Hitcircle. They have a better flow changed
2. 00:51:976 (6,7,8,1) - I miss some Hitsounds. Maybe clap on (1) changed
3. 02:01:272 (4,5,6) - dunno these claps feel meh i think i'll keep them lol
4. 02:15:811 - until end. pointless green inherit lines oops totally forgot about removing these

Lizsig wrote:

00:37:320 (1) - add a finish(slider start)
00:48:342 (5,1,2) - try this rhythm? I think fits your rhythm pattern.
SPOILER (click to toggle)
01:02:412 (3) - perfectly stack by 01:01:708 (1) sorry nazi
01:22:110 (1) - add a finish(slider end)
01:38:291 (1) - this slider extend about 1/4 rhythm? I think better your rhythm.
02:14:873 (1) - add a finish.

Kurisuchianu wrote:

[Somnambulist]
00:10:587 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I didn't catch the rhythm there, please change the hitsounds. i think i'll leave this
00:32:630 (3) - Look nice like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470783 i don't see anything wrong with overlap sorry
00:37:789 (2) - Please no overlap, and make it like ^
00:41:072 (1) - ^
00:45:293 (2) - ^ and the others.
01:19:530 (3) - i didn't read it very well, please reduce this slider.
01:23:283 (1) - Bad slider is bad please fix as these sliders 01:27:035 (1) - 01:30:787 (1) - 01:42:512 (2) - 01:45:795 (1) - 01:51:892 (4) - 01:56:348 (2) oops, the inherited timing sections broke lol, fixed
02:07:135 (4,5,1) - doesn't look nice. changed

1. 00:10:118 (2) - 1 grid down
2. 00:13:870 (2) - 1 grid up
3. 00:14:808 (1) - 1 grid down
4. 00:20:905 (4) - Only repeat it once, and add a note at 00:22:312 instead, for better flow
5. 00:44:355 (5,6) - Make them to a slider; Fits better to the song
6. 00:49:514 (2,1) - Imo you should give those sliders a slight curve, just straight doesn't look soo good
7. 00:56:549 (1) - Please fix the spacing here, for aesthetics
8. 01:07:336 (1,2,3,4) - (4) isn't in the line, and it looks odd, probably fix this pattern that for example (2) is a bit left, but regard the spacing
9. 01:15:309 (1) - Spacing
10. 01:26:097 (1) - Move to: x:412 y:300
11. 01:27:973 (1) - 1 grid down
12. 01:28:442 (2) - 2 grid down

1. 00:13:870 (2) - Try better spacing here
2. 00:27:002 (3,4) - This is better
3. 00:28:409 (2,3) - Try this?
4. 01:25:862 (1) - Don't make it repeat, and add a slider from 01:26:566 to 01:26:800
5. 01:43:450 (4) - Pretty tricky note for a normal diff, maybe change it?

1. 00:10:118 (1) - Give it a curve, to make it fit to the previous sliders
2. 00:10:587 (1,2,3,4) - It's users preference, but I would recommend not to stack them
3. 00:14:339 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
4. 00:16:215 (3) - Doesn't look sexy because of wrong spacing, adjust it a bit
5. 01:02:881 (6) - Move it under (5)?
6. 01:29:145 (10) - Not straight please? To fit with the flow of the next slider pattern
7. 01:31:725 (4) - ^
8. 01:37:118 (1) - Make it go around (2) more smooth
9. 01:46:264 (1,2) - Don't know if intended or not, but this spacing is a bit confusing
10. 01:52:361 (1,2) - Move them in a perfect line with the slider end of (4)?
11. 01:53:064 (3) - Imo this note should be at 01:52:830
12. 01:56:113 (5) - This note disappears unter the slider edge, which doesn't make it look so sexy
13. 01:58:696 - Unsnapped green line
14. 01:59:396 (2) - Fix spacing, because it looks weird
15. 02:07:369 (2) - Imo you should move it under the slider end, or to the middle

1. 00:10:587 - I think this 2 streams would look better if they are not in a straight line, but maybe its just a matter of taste
2. 00:13:401 (3) - Let it end at 00:13:635, it doesn't sound right imo, or probably add a note sandwiched between those 2 sliders
3. 00:17:153 (2,3) - I would suggest to arrange this like (4), (5) and (1)
4. 00:35:796 (2) - Let it begin on the white tick and delete (3)
5. 00:39:196 (1,2,3,4) - Random note placement; Arrange them better
6. 00:54:673 (2) - Make it parallel to (1) and (3)
7. 01:30:318 (3) - Don't make it overlap with (1)
8. 01:38:760 (2,1) - Random jump, please fix it
9. 01:47:671 (1) - This slider looks ugly, you can do it better
10. 02:14:873 (1) - Random placement for the last note, re-arrange it

1. 00:30:988 (4) - CTRL + G for better flow
2. 01:02:881 (11) - I don't like this slider and it doesn't really fit to the map, so maybe you should consider to change it
3. 01:38:291 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern seems a bit off to me
4. 01:56:348 (1) - If this is supposed to be a heart ... then please make it better xD

Tenshichan wrote:

M4M From my queue~

[Easy]

1. 00:10:118 (2) - 1 grid down
2. 00:13:870 (2) - 1 grid up
3. 00:14:808 (1) - 1 grid down
4. 00:20:905 (4) - Only repeat it once, and add a note at 00:22:312 instead, for better flow
5. 00:44:355 (5,6) - Make them to a slider; Fits better to the song
6. 00:49:514 (2,1) - Imo you should give those sliders a slight curve, just straight doesn't look soo good
7. 00:56:549 (1) - Please fix the spacing here, for aesthetics
8. 01:07:336 (1,2,3,4) - (4) isn't in the line, and it looks odd, probably fix this pattern that for example (2) is a bit left, but regard the spacing
9. 01:15:309 (1) - Spacing
10. 01:26:097 (1) - Move to: x:412 y:300
11. 01:27:973 (1) - 1 grid down
12. 01:28:442 (2) - 2 grid down

[Normal]

1. 00:13:870 (2) - Try better spacing here
2. 00:27:002 (3,4) - This is better
3. 00:28:409 (2,3) - Try this?
4. 01:25:862 (1) - Don't make it repeat, and add a slider from 01:26:566 to 01:26:800
5. 01:43:450 (4) - Pretty tricky note for a normal diff, maybe change it?

[Hard]

1. 00:10:118 (1) - Give it a curve, to make it fit to the previous sliders
2. 00:10:587 (1,2,3,4) - It's users preference, but I would recommend not to stack them
3. 00:14:339 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
4. 00:16:215 (3) - Doesn't look sexy because of wrong spacing, adjust it a bit
5. 01:02:881 (6) - Move it under (5)?
6. 01:29:145 (10) - Not straight please? To fit with the flow of the next slider pattern
7. 01:31:725 (4) - ^
8. 01:37:118 (1) - Make it go around (2) more smooth
9. 01:46:264 (1,2) - Don't know if intended or not, but this spacing is a bit confusing
10. 01:52:361 (1,2) - Move them in a perfect line with the slider end of (4)?
11. 01:53:064 (3) - Imo this note should be at 01:52:830
12. 01:56:113 (5) - This note disappears unter the slider edge, which doesn't make it look so sexy
13. 01:58:696 - Unsnapped green line
14. 01:59:396 (2) - Fix spacing, because it looks weird
15. 02:07:369 (2) - Imo you should move it under the slider end, or to the middle

[Somnambulist]

1. 00:10:587 - I think this 2 streams would look better if they are not in a straight line, but maybe its just a matter of taste
2. 00:13:401 (3) - Let it end at 00:13:635, it doesn't sound right imo, or probably add a note sandwiched between those 2 sliders
3. 00:17:153 (2,3) - I would suggest to arrange this like (4), (5) and (1)
4. 00:35:796 (2) - Let it begin on the white tick and delete (3)
5. 00:39:196 (1,2,3,4) - Random note placement; Arrange them better
6. 00:54:673 (2) - Make it parallel to (1) and (3)
7. 01:30:318 (3) - Don't make it overlap with (1)
8. 01:38:760 (2,1) - Random jump, please fix it
9. 01:47:671 (1) - This slider looks ugly, you can do it better
10. 02:14:873 (1) - Random placement for the last note, re-arrange it

[Insane]

1. 00:30:988 (4) - CTRL + G for better flow
2. 01:02:881 (11) - I don't like this slider and it doesn't really fit to the map, so maybe you should consider to change it
3. 01:38:291 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern seems a bit off to me
4. 01:56:348 (1) - If this is supposed to be a heart ... then please make it better xD

nice Insane

Good luck with your map! The song is really awesome!
+ Star

Tenshichan wrote:

[Somnambulist]

1. 00:10:587 - I think this 2 streams would look better if they are not in a straight line, but maybe its just a matter of taste i think i'll leave this, as the lines made by the streams and the next slider fit
2. 00:13:401 (3) - Let it end at 00:13:635, it doesn't sound right imo, or probably add a note sandwiched between those 2 sliders ok shortened
3. 00:17:153 (2,3) - I would suggest to arrange this like (4), (5) and (1) i changed 00:19:967 (5,6,1) - , now there's a better rhythm pattern lol
4. 00:35:796 (2) - Let it begin on the white tick and delete (3) that's the rhythm here though
5. 00:39:196 (1,2,3,4) - Random note placement; Arrange them better made into parallelogram
6. 00:54:673 (2) - Make it parallel to (1) and (3) isn't it already? i went and adjusted it a little just to be sure
7. 01:30:318 (3) - Don't make it overlap with (1) i like that kind of overlap /runs
8. 01:38:760 (2,1) - Random jump, please fix it oh the reason that jump seemed random was because i forgot to make the other ones jumps... changed now lol
9. 01:47:671 (1) - This slider looks ugly, you can do it better done
10. 02:14:873 (1) - Random placement for the last note, re-arrange it

placed under (1)

1. Inconsistency in tags. Normal has tags, other diffs don't. You will have to fix it
   
   
2. Inconsistency in preview time for your guest diff. Fix it.
   
   
3. I highly suggest you to use a silent Sliderslide, it sounds noisy during gameplay. Use one like http://puu.sh/1w2el

1. In general, this diff lacks of hitsounds. You could add whistles on pretty many good places or just use costume hitsounds if you want to. But like this it's too empty and odd to hear.
2. Actually, Distance snap is strange. 8,5 is low. A bit too low. Like this it actually gets more boring for beginners, as 1,0 would be perfectly acceptable for this song. With this DS, nice blankets and symmetric are difficult nearly impossible to work nicely.
3. 00:14:808 (1,2) - This transition plays odd. Having an angle which is on a fully other direction as circle plays rarely good. Consider changing Slider's angle up
4. 00:20:905 (4) - Remove whistle from Sliderbody, it sounds noisy and strange on this part
5. 00:23:719 (1,1,1,1) - Note patterns like this are kinda really random placed. In general I would really recommend to think for a good formation or a neat pattern here.
6. 00:46:700 (4) - Slidershape looks ugly. This is mainly because you didn't put effort on a symmetric shape nor on a nice waving. Some tweaking with this would be appriciated
7. 01:00:301 (1,2) - Sliders like this are actually used to blanket each other, but this is not really possible due to your low DS
8. 01:05:929 (5) - Again, this Slidershape could really use more effort as it looks pretty crumbled at the moment.
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:11:557 (1) - Slidershape ugly, needs more effort
10. 01:13:433 (3) - This one also of course as it is a copy of above one
11. 01:24:221 (1) - Hm, actually fine, but if you pulled the first red point more down, you'd have a better Slider here
12. 01:33:601 (1) - Ugly needs more effort
13. And so on and so on. Well, this needs mainly work on Slidershape. While regular shapes are pretty much fine, more complex shapes are starting to look poor which could be fixed with creating them with more effort. Also like mentioned the DS is too low - while I'm pretty sure 8,5 is unrankable due you can't create it with Editor. Hitsound on start is missing and empty, but rhythm is pretty fine here ~

1. 00:33:568 (1) - Double repeat plays really odd here. Just changing to 2 Sliders would create a better sulution while you should be aiming to get a nice flow here.
2. 00:35:444 (1) - Well, now these Slidershapes are the ones you should be improving. While they are not unrankable and such, you can surely create neater ones with 2 Sliderpoints or even using the new Slider tool
3. 00:41:541 (3) - And these ones aswell, the edges are looking too sharp to create a nice Slider, they should look more like
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:49:045 - Listen closely and you will notice that here is a sound. So making 1 a repeating kick Slider would be a sulution more pleasing sulution according to the music
5. 00:55:846 (9) - Absoultely not fiting the music. Also such Sliders on red ticks play really bad when not following the music, you should remember that.
6. 01:02:881 (6) - This stack with 5 is much too hard to play for a hard. Confuses really much and the hitburst is not a combination you should be using on a hard difficulty.
7. 01:11:323 (1,2) - Such small wave Sliders flow bad. Really bad, you should keep complex shapes for longer Sliders.
8. 01:14:606 (4) - As this is a circle and not a Slider, this is confusing. Really confusing as hitbursts are making the whole pattern confusing enough, I highly suggest unstacking here
9. 01:37:118 (1) - Add finish on start to keep consistency to previous part and emphasize the strong beat.
10. 01:38:994 (5) - Remove repeat and focus on white ticks as the music is playing there (and vocal too)
11. Slider cleaning up is needed here. Also pattern could be neater if you put more effort on them. Currently rhythm and placement looks a bit wry to be honest, but I'm sure this can be fixed with some mods.

cirno- wrote:

small mod for GD in there too:
00:29:112 (2) - this should be here 00:27:940 (1) -
00:29:347 (3,4,5) - then these where 00:28:174 (2) - is