1. Easy (2.74 stars, 112 notes)
2. Hard (4.82 stars, 276 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 188 notes)
4. Normal (3.61 stars, 136 notes)
5. Taiko DS (4.83 stars, 538 notes)

UI Hirasawa wrote:

My first modding
Hard
00:04:729 hitsound "finish"
00:10:509 (1) apply hitsound "clap"
00:10:891 (2) apply hitsound "clap"
00:11:082 (3) apply hitsound "clap"
00:11:464 (4) apply hitsound "clap"
00:11:656 (5) apply hitsound "clap"
00:15:668 (6) apply hitsound "clap"
00:15:859 (7) apply hitsound "clap"
00:17:770 (4) apply hitsound "clap"
00:17:961 (5) apply hitsound "clap"
00:31:337 (4) apply hitsound "clap"
00:47:770 (6) apply hitsound "clap"
00:49:299 slider finish apply hitsound "clap"
00:55:414 slider finish apply hitsound "clap"
01:00:955 (1) apply hitsound "clap"
01:01:337 (2) apply hitsound "clap"
01:01:528 (3) apply hitsound "clap"
01:01:910 (4) apply hitsound "clap"
01:02:101 (5) apply hitsound "clap"
01:06:687 (2) apply hitsound "clap"
01:08:407 (5) apply hitsound "clap"
01:14:522 (1) apply hitsound "clap"
01:26:656 (3) apply hitsound "clap"
01:26:942 (4) apply hitsound "clap"
01:27:133 slider start apply hitsound "clap"

I point out hitsound

wish your beatmap rank ~

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Can I make Insane diff?

[ S o R a ] wrote:

(short ver.) --> (Short Ver.)

Change the title please.

[Easy]
이지모드는 슬라이더 속도 변화 주지않습니다 지워주세요
00:03:836 (x) - 노트추가
00:45:491 (1) - 피니시 제거하시고 끝을 00:47:785로 해주세요 (빈공간은 노트추가)
01:18:358 (6) - 커브슬라이더로 만들어주세요
01:19:696 (1) - 뉴콤보제거

[Normal]
슬라이더 속도변화 이렇게 많이써주시지 말아주세요
00:06:892 (5) - 끝을 00:07:658로 해주세요
00:09:186 (2) - 00:09:569 (3)랑 순서를 바꿔주세요 http://puu.sh/ltxh
00:10:715 (1) - 00:11:862가 끝으로 오게해주세요 (00:12:244 노트추가)
00:13:772 (2) - 00:14:919가 슬라이더 끝으로 만들고(커다란 커브 슬라이더로 만들면 되겠네요) 00:15:110 (3) 은 00:15:301로 00:15:492 (4)은 00:15:683로 이동시켜주세요
00:15:873 (1) - 00:16:065로 이동 슬라이더 끝은 똑같이 끝내주세요
00:45:491 (1) - 피니시 제거하시고 끝을 00:47:785로 해주세요 (빈공간은 노트추가)
00:53:899 (1) - 커브슬라이더로 만들어주세요

[Hard]
한 난이도에 이렇게 많은 슬라이더 속도가 쓰면 안됩니다.
게다가 하드니까 좀만 줄여주세요 ..
00:01:352 (1) - 00:00:015 에 시작해서 00:03:072로 끝나는 스핀도 괜찮아보이네요 ( http://puu.sh/ltgI ) ( http://puu.sh/ltgV )
00:11:862 (1) - 두번째점 가운대로 오게해서 이쁘게 바꿔주세요
00:16:161 (2) - 가사 '매일' 이라는 거에 맞추시려면 그냥 서클노트로 바꿔주세요 그리고 00:16:257 여기로 옮겨주세요
00:20:269 (7) - 이쁘게 바꿔주세요 ex)http://puu.sh/ltpM
01:02:307 (6) - 슬라이더 꼬리를 01:02:690에 제대로 끝까지 오게 해주세요그리고 꼬리부분만 피니쉬
01:02:881 (1) - 머리피니쉬 제거
01:02:881 (1) - 삭제하고 01:03:072 부터 노트 찍어주세요
01:14:537 (1) - 뉴콤제거
01:17:212 (4) - 커브슬라이더 만들어주세요
01:25:989 (1,2,3,4) - 그냥 평범한 디스텐스에 맞는 점프가 나을거같아요
01:39:938 (7) - 가장 마지막 부분에 피니쉬 넣어주세요

1. Mp3 file must be 128~192kbps.
2. Since you map all osu standard diff yourself, you must use same Kiai section in them.
3. Preview points are needed in all diffs.

popner wrote:

Hi.

Just suggestions:

[General]

1. Mp3 file must be 128~192kbps.
2. Since you map all osu standard diff yourself, you must use same Kiai section in them.
3. Preview points are needed in all diffs.

[Easy]
00:04:600 (2,4) - the spacing should be 0.8x
00:21:225 (1) - same suggestion as [SeeU] (map the break section)
00:37:467 (1) - the shape is not good..This is better:

00:57:339 (3) - same as 00:21:225 (1)
01:19:696 (1,1) - a little overlap. Move 01:21:034 (1)? Like this:


[Normal]
AR+1 OD+2?
Keep constant spacing in Normal (open distance snap)
00:03:454 (1) - make a symmetric shape? Like this:


[SeeU]
00:03:072 (1) - add finish on slider head? (You can decrease the volume a little)
00:05:365 (4) - extend to 00:05:747? Or there will be a pause. It is weird and unexpected while playing.
00:22:562 (10) - why don't map this section? It is mapable and you don't need a break in such a short song. Also the sudden stop at 00:22:562 is unexpected.
00:29:823 (1,1) - remove NCs?
00:33:741 (1) - start at 00:33:645?
00:45:492 (1) - end at 00:47:212? So there will be enough time for player to prepare for next note.
00:57:339 (7,8,9) - spacing issue. Move farther?
01:02:594 - add a note here to catch the vocal?
01:12:817 (1,2) - the rhythm don't fit the vocal..
01:17:116 (3) - ^
01:17:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:24:569 (9) - add once repeat

GL~

Deni wrote:

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General

Hi from #modreqs.

Your background image is very pixelated, maybe find a new one with higher quality...

Remove Maplestory from the tags since it's already in the source.

Easy

Always remember to use distance snap in this difficulty. Sometimes spacing is 1.00 and then suddenly it's 0.50 or 1.86.. It always has to be the same. +- 0.2

You need a bit more work on the sliders. Add curves, make them symmetrical... Here's a useful link: t/37194

00:12:244 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Easy! You have to change that!
00:21:034 Why break here?
00:30:588 (3) - Add a curve make it look more interesting
00:42:435 (1) - ^
00:48:167 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Easy! You have to change that!
00:48:167 (1,2,3) - 1 and 2 are overlapping with 3. Not so pretty.
00:55:811 (1) - Add a curve make it look more interesting
01:02:690 (1) - ^
01:04:600 (3) - ^
01:15:301 (2) - ^
01:16:830 (4) - ^
01:27:530 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Easy! You have to change that!
01:32:116 (1) - Add a curve make it look more interesting
01:35:938 (1) - Veeeerryy long slider maybe start it later and map something before..

Normal

Always remember to use distance snap in this difficulty. You often didn't use it.

00:03:454 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Normal!
00:12:626 (1) - ^ + Make it look more interesting add a curve.
00:13:772 (2) - Make it more symmetrical
00:18:358 (4) - Add a curve or something
00:24:854 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Normal!
00:37:084 (1) - This circle is too close to the spinner before for Normal!
00:37:466 (2) - Add a curve or something
00:48:167 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Normal!
01:21:034 (3) - Add a curve make it more interesting...
01:26:002 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Normal! + Very boring slider lol
01:36:416 (1) - Same as in Easy

mebins wrote:

THIS IS A m4m mod! please remeber to mod one of my songs. Okay ~ in the near future
Such a cute song!
EASY
00:21:129 is this break really needed? removed and added new notes !
00:58:826^
00:50:314(3) make this slider more curvy ?
NORMAL
starting out with a spinner is kinda hard for the player since they cant even get ready
00:50:460(2) make this go to x 224 y 352
01:06:215(7) make this slider face upwards also more curvey?
01:32:116(1) please fix this slider ;-;... it looks bad Fixed !
HARD
00:19:792(5,7) these sliders look kinda wierd.. I love these slider type so I passed this point
01:14:919(1) i like this slider Me tooo
01:22:658(6) this slider is to choppy make it more smoother (curvey)?

Please tell me what you liked about this mod and didnt, also tell me why you did not accept some of my suggestions so i can improve.

Dark Fang wrote:

안녕하세요

[General]

offset +16 (31)

맵들의 표면적 상태를 보았을때 큰 문제는 없어 보입니다. 잡자면, Distance 가 일정하지 않다는 것입니다.
맵을 한번 다시한번 새로 만드셔 보는걸 추천드리고요. 만약 새로 만드시면 슬라이더도 예쁘게 만들어주시고( 요즘 도입된 새로운 시스템에는 슬라이더를 둥글고 예쁘게 만들 수 있는 시스템이 있습니다.)Distance도 일정하게 해주세요.
제 도움이 필요하시면 연락 주시고요.

I like this song <3
if you need my help. Call me via Forum, In-Game

HelloSCV wrote:

From mentee's reuqest xD

SPOILER

AIBat
이지 하고 노말은 00:00:031 - 이 오프셋인데 하드는 00:00:032 - 고 태고같은경우는 00:00:015 네요 조절해주세요
이지 하드 태고 난이도의 태그에 KDS 추가해주세요

General
개인적으로 인세인이 없는게 좀 아쉽네요 ㅠ 노래도 좋고 박자감도 있어서 좋을듯 한데
아티스트를 S.I.D-Sound 로 고쳐주세요 http://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/S.I.D-Sound
키아이 타임이 01:06:910 - 여기서 갑자기 끝나는데 저기 끝지점을 01:14:554 - 여기로 옮기시면 좋을거 같아요 ( 전난이도 공통 )
그리고 몇몇 Inherited point 가 언스냅으로 되어있어요 ( 초록색선 ) 특히 키아이 타임은 절때로 언스냅이 되면 안되니 조절해주세요
01:40:923 - 마지막 키아이 여기서 끝내주세요

Easy
이지에선 스피너 뒤 노트 간격이 좀 좁네요 적어도 2박을 비우시는걸 추천 하는데 좀 애매하네요;

00:08:056 (5) - 뉴콤보?
00:12:260 (1) - 끝에 피니시 삭제
00:33:661 (1) - 스피너 이동하시고 00:34:999 - 여기서 스피너 끝내주세요
00:45:508 (1) - 이건 00:47:228 - 여기서 끝
01:08:820 (1,2,3) - 이런 박자는 조금 그런거 같은데 http://puu.sh/1QkQu 이건 어떨까요?
01:21:050 (1,2,3) - ^

Normal
00:21:050 (9,10) - http://puu.sh/1QkEx 이건 어떨까요?
00:33:278 (4) - 노트 추가 + 00:33:661 (1) - 스피너 이동 ( 물론 뒤에 스피너 길이 조절해주시구요 )
00:45:508 (4) - ^ 00:45:890 (1) - ^
00:52:004 (7) - 뉴콤보
00:53:916 (1) - 뉴콤보 삭제
00:55:061 (7) - 뉴콤보
00:56:590 (1) - 여긴 뉴콤보 삭제
00:58:120 (1) - 반복 1번줄이시고 00:58:693 (2) - 여기로 2번 슬라이더 이동 00:59:457 (3) - 노트추가
01:17:991 (1) - 뉴콤보 삭제
01:19:330 (8) - 뉴콤보
01:21:050 (1) - 뉴콤보삭제
01:23:725 (1) - 스피너 이동
01:36:337 (1) - 여기로 스피너 이동

Hard
00:06:910 (1) - 리핏 1번 제거?
00:12:261 (1,2) - 박자 반대로 하시면 더 어울릴거 같아요
00:14:363 (7,8) - ^
00:22:579 (5) - 여기 슬라이더 보다 00:22:579 (5) - 00:22:770 (6) - 노트 2개가 더 박자에 맞는거 같아요
01:08:821 (1,2) - 요것도 박자 반대
01:09:586 (3,4) - ^
01:11:305 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2) - http://puu.sh/1QkzW 이게 더 박자에 잘맞지 않을까요?

힛사 넣는 방법에 대한 간단한 팁*

SPOILER

자 저기 마우스로 5분여간 그리다가 빡쳐서 그냥 동그라미 툴로 그린 원이 그려져있죠?
바로 저기에 클랩이나 휘슬같은걸 넣어주시면 어떤곡이든 잘맞는 편이에요 ㅋㅋ

맵이 깔끔하고 좋네요 xD 저도 시드사운드 좋아하는 편인데 ㅋㅋ
잘하면 빠른 시일내로 랭크가 가능할거 같아요
Good luck for rank!

Tony wrote:

Hi. I'm here because you posted on my queue

[General]
Too much kiai. delete the first section...
end the 3rd kiai 01:25:636 - instead of here 01:25:445 -

[Easy]
OD +1 or +2. The current settings are too low for it.
00:12:260 (1) - this is really ugly, and a little to early after a spinner.... maybe remove the spinner which in my opinion doesn't fit there.
00:21:432 (1) - ^
00:25:253 (4,5) - try ctrl+g for these two notes. the rhythm will sound better
00:49:330 (2) - this clap is awesome add some in that section of the song ... I'll help you with them
00:50:859 (4) - clap
00:52:005 (7) - clap on reverse
00:53:534 (9) - clap on end
00:56:973 (4) - clap
00:57:929 (1) - delete slider and map that part. It's so random there...don't be lazy please D:
01:01:368 (1,2) - fix distance between them
01:11:878 (5) - clap on end and remove clap from start
01:12:642 (6) - clap on end
01:13:406 (7) - whistle instead of clap
01:13:788 (8) - clap on end
01:14:935 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:33:279 (2) - finish on start?
01:35:954 (1) - add finish on this spinner :p

[Normal]
00:06:909 (4) - awww this is placed so wrong. try moving it somewhere else. it plays awful
00:11:495 (6) - try an 1/2 triplet here instead
00:12:260 (1,2,3) - rhythm is so bad... try like this : http://puu.sh/1Rtqe
00:16:081 (5) - delete the clap from end. it's random
00:16:655 (1) - add finish here
00:19:520 (6) - add a new combo
00:22:196 (10) - delete finish
00:48:183 (1) - finish on end
01:02:706 - you can improve rhythm by changing like this http://puu.sh/1Rtqe
01:05:762 (5,6) - ctrl+g these two
01:36:336 (1) - add finish like I said in easy

[Hard]
00:13:598 (5,6) - ctrl+g these two for better rhythm.
00:22:770 (6,1) - the distance between them is too small. move (1) farther
00:44:363 (1,2) - ctrl+g these two for better rhythm.
01:08:821 (1,2) - ^
01:09:586 (3,4) - ^
01:25:446 (6,1,2) - the distance between them is too smal... try to fix this please


Cute song. You need more mods. Good luck with it

MerryGate wrote:

from #modreqs

Only standard diff.

[General]
->AudioLeadIn change to 1500.
->You should adjust volume.
Please refer to example.


[Hard]
->Vol example
00:03:088 - Vol.80%
00:06:909 - 100%
00:07:674 - 80%
00:09:202 - 85%
00:10:540 - 90%
00:35:190 - 80%
00:35:572 - 75%
00:35:954 - 70%
00:36:336 - 65%
00:36:718 - 80%
01:02:706 - 100%
01:26:018 - 90%
01:27:164 - 100%

Try to avoid overlap as possible.
Take advantage of the stack.(But,you shouldnt use hard to read stack.)
That is small things. But that will make big difference to looks.

00:03:088 (1) - add finish to start
00:06:909 (1) - ~ 00:10:348 (9) - Doesnt fit to the music.

SPOILER

00:07:674 (2) - finish to start
00:08:438 (4) - ^
00:09:202 (6) - ^
00:09:967 (8) - ^
00:12:261 (1) - make symmetry
00:13:789 (6) - ^
00:13:597 (5) - remove whistle
00:13:788 (6) - whistle and finish to start
00:16:656 (1,2,3) - finish to start
00:20:000 (6) - whistle
00:20:094 (7) - whistle to start
00:20:477 (8) - finish to start
00:21:433 (1,2,3,4) - unnatural

SPOILER

00:22:196 (3,4,5,6) - uniform spacing
00:23:725 (2) - hmm...whistle to triple?
00:25:253 - Here should be the starting point of the object. Probably slider is suitable. and,whistle.
00:25:637 (6) - remove whistle
00:26:019 (7) - change to slider. and,whitsle
00:26:400 (8) - remove whistle
00:26:782 (10) - Listen to the music and,finish to end.

SPOILER

00:30:413 -~ 00:33:471 - Doesnt really fit the music...

SPOILER

Well,but,some of the triple may be omitted.
00:36:719 (5) - NC. and,finish to start
00:37:102 (1) - reNC
00:36:719 ~ very noisy. because you used so many whistle. I think just enough to add whistle to second and fourth white lines.
00:47:419 ~ 00:47:610 - Music doesnt exist.Over mapping.
00:47:228 (1) - finish to start
00:47:611 (2) - finish to end
00:48:949 (6) - NC
00:49:331 (1) - reNC
00:54:299 (1,2,3,4) - clap
01:00:796 (5) - clap to end
01:02:324 (5) - finish to start. and stack to 01:02:324 (5) -
01:02:706 - Here should be the starting point of the object.
01:07:102 (6,7,8) - finish to start
01:08:821 (1) -

SPOILER

01:13:025 (1) - finish to end
01:13:981 (5) - clap to end
01:17:801 (1) - finish to start
01:22:578 (6) - ^*4
01:26:019 ~ It is the same as described above.

I was going to mod to all diff.
But,I am tired. Because so many point out.
Refer to this mod,should be able to fix also other diff.

good luck.

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Suggestions, comments.
High recommend.

☢ Timing: offset 1572?

☢ Hard ☢

00:49:140 (2) - clap

Nothing else I can say about hard diff, cuz is very good

☢ Normal ☢

00:22:196 (5) - clap
00:50:859 (5) - clap on the top
00:52:387 (2) - ^
00:56:973 (5) - remove whiste and add a clap
01:03:851 (2) - clap on the top

☢ Easy ☢

CS -1

00:08:820 (2) - increase distance, it isn't enough. If this note increases distance , It's unrankable point :3
01:24:871 (6) - ^

Nice song~
I hope this will be useful
Reply this, please.
Good luck

K i A i wrote:

스마일~~
일꾼님 M4M에서 왔습니다

+이지 노멀 부분에 변속이 있군요.. 배치나 모양이나 힛사는 나쁘진 않은데 변속은 별로 좋지 않습니다;
+노멀과 하드의 난이도 격차가 심합니다. 하드를 인세인으로 바꾸시고, 노멀과 인세인 난이도 사이의 난이도를 구하는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

[이지]
00:00:413 (1) - 스피너 시작 부분을 00:00:031 로 당겨주세요~
00:11:878 (7) - 3그리드 오른쪽으로, 1그리드 아래로 내려주세요~
00:17:801 (1) - NC 제거
00:18:374 (2) - NC + 시작 부분에 피니시
00:23:725 (2) - 끝 부분에 피니시
00:33:661 (1) - 피니시~!
00:38:247 (2) - 중간 부분에 휘슬 제거
00:48:183 (1) - 끝 부분에 피니시

[노멀]
00:05:381 (2) - 1 그리드 왼쪽으로 옮겨주세요~
00:06:909 (4) - ^
00:12:260 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시~ + 좀 더 둥글게 만들어보세요~
00:21:050 (4) - 변속 없애주시고 디스턴스 지켜주세요

[하드]
00:06:910 (1) - 리버스 하나 더 늘려주세요~
00:07:866 (3) - 시작 부분 피니시 제거
00:08:630 (5,7,9) - ^
00:12:261 (1) - 시작 부분 피니시
00:35:000 (8) - 피니시
00:38:248 (7,9) - 모양을 둥글게 바꿔보세요~
00:47:801 (1) - 1그리드 위로 올려보세요~
00:55:063 (5) - NC + 피니시
01:20:668 (10) - 방향 y축 기준으로 대칭 되게 바꿔보세요
01:24:107 (2,3,5) - 모양을 조금만 둥글게 바꿔주세요
01:27:165 (3) - ^
01:27:165 (3) - NC
01:36:528 (5) - 모양을 둥글게 바꿔주세요

이상입니다~

indyinyou wrote:

hi

[Hard]
00:14:744 : clap
00:14:935 : ^
00:26:209 : NC
00:26:973 : remove NC
00:28:884 : Nc
00:17:992 : i think add only note better
00:21:432 : this silder end to 00:21:814 ? make like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/590160
00:45:890 : remove note here add only note at 00:46:081
01:05:190 : clap
01:05:381 : ^

they're just suggestions

scanter wrote:

[General]

SPOILER

색상에 초록색도 넣어보시는건 어떨까요?
http://puu.sh/1TWoe 밑에 Letterbox during breaks 해제하세여. 스토리보딩 작업을 하시는게 아니면 푸시는걸 추천.

[Easy]

Style

SPOILER

Circle Size랑 Overall Difficulty -1씩 하세요. http://puu.sh/1UXOc
전체적으로 중앙에 좀 몰려있다는 느낌입니다. 약간 퍼뜨려보세요.
직선 슬라이더가 많아서 플레이하다보면 지루할 수 있겠네여.
00:04:616 (2) - 00:05:381 끝을 이쪽으로.
00:12:260 (1) - 첫 번째 애로우를 00:13:788 이쪽으로. 여담이지만, 약간 지루해 보이기도 합니다. 모양에 변화를 줘보시거나 지우고 서클 and 슬라 조합으로 짜시는 걸 추천.
00:23:343 (1) - x:240, y:176 일로 옮기시는게 좋을듯.
00:30:604 (3) - 구부리시는게 좋을듯?
00:42:451 (1) - 이쪽도.
00:55:827 (3) - ^
01:02:706 (1,3) - ^
01:15:317 (2,4) - ^
01:27:546 (1,2,3) - 별로 좋은 패턴은 아니네여. 다시 짜보시는걸 추천
01:32:132 (1) - 00:30:604 (3) 이거랑 같습니다.
01:32:132 (1) - ^
01:35:954 (1) - 스핀 구간이 좀 긴거같네요. 01:39:394 스핀 끝을 이쪽으로 잡으시고, 예를들어 이렇게 해보시는게? http://puu.sh/1TWBr

Timing

SPOILER

00:04:616 - 언랭크 요소입니다. 이지에서는 슬라이더 속도에 변화를 주시면 언랭먹어요.
00:12:260 - 이쪽도 마찬가지.

Sound

SPOILER

전반적으로 음에 맞지않는 힛사가 많습니다. 하얀틱 또는 빨간틱에만 소리를 맞추시는걸 추천하고 드럼이나 보컬 따라가세요.

Combo

SPOILER

00:06:909 (4) - NC
00:08:056 (1) - NC 삭제
00:10:349 (4) - NC
00:16:081 (3) - NC
00:29:457 (1) - NC 삭제
00:30:604 (3) - NC
00:51:241 (5) - NC
01:00:795 (5) - NC
01:01:368 (1) - NC 삭제
01:12:642 (6) - NC
01:18:757 (7) - NC
01:24:107 (5) - NC?

일단 이지 제출

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from ♥Moe Moe Russian Modding Room♥

[General]

• Plz check Audio Lead-In on all diffs, it should be 1500ms

• Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:
Easy : 0
Hard : 1
Normal : 1
Taiko DS : 1

• 01:27:164 - 01:40:922 - I really don't see reason put here kiai time, it is not necessary here, if you want to use kiai time in ending, then make only 1 flash in the end 01:40:922 - start 01:41:018 end. It looks more pleasant~

[Hard]

• Oh for the consistency better put nc on every 2nd downbeat, It will be looks better and more follow for music

00:12:260(1,2) - stack it better
00:15:126(2,3) - http://puu.sh/285Fn wil be looks better and more convenient to play
00:21:432(1,2) - this slider not symmetrical~ http://puu.sh/285Hz and put note 3 in centre x256 y128
00:26:209(1,2,3) - this pattern looks randomly maybe try this ---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/628953
00:44:553(2,3) - make blanket here http://puu.sh/285KN
01:08:820(1,2) - make this sliders more roundish http://puu.sh/285LP

[Normal]

00:03:088 - very close to note for normal diff, http://puu.sh/285NW this best variant for this moment in music
00:18:374 - add nc and remove nc from next slider
00:21:050 - NC
00:24:489 - very close to spin again, http://puu.sh/285Qn this better follow for music and not will be confused players
00:35:954 - again ^
00:45:890 - this spin not sounds here, better replace it on this rhythm http://puu.sh/285U9 it feels better here
01:01:368(6) - Add NC here
01:13:406 - this rhythm sounds here much better http://puu.sh/285VR
01:17:992 - add nc
01:19:330 - remove nc
01:21:050 - add nc
01:20:476 - http://puu.sh/285YW put it so~ will be more playable and looks nicer

[Easy]

• For the consistency better put nc on every 2nd downbeat, It will be looks better and more follow for music

00:03:852 - remove this note, it's not sounds here
00:40:922 - I don't recommend put sliders 1/2 on easy~ better put here 2 sliders 1/1 it will be more playable for beginners http://puu.sh/2864b
00:44:744 - put this slider on x124 y176 for better flow
00:45:508 - replace this spin on this rhythm http://puu.sh/2867o it will be easier to play
00:48:183 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
01:27:164 - Very close to spin for easy diff >.< http://puu.sh/2869d make so~

[Taiko DS]

Unsnapped green section:
00:12:244 - snap to 00:12:260
00:24:473 - snap to 00:24:489
01:02:690 - snap to 01:02:706
01:27:148 - snap to 01:27:164

Non-Downbeat Kiai Times:
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:12:244, ends on 00:24:473
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:02:690, ends on 01:27:148

Good luck~