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Irreversible

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Irreversible 2012-10-02T00:04:57+00:00

Genshin wrote:
ok let's see:

first of all, can i suggest 01:21:856 - as preview point? yep
now let's MOD

[Easy]

00:49:043 (5) - new combo
00:52:793 (9) - new combo
01:18:575 (1) - move the end of this spinner to 01:21:387 - because in easy diffs there must be a space between spinners end and next notes
01:26:075 (2) - new combo
01:31:231 - add a note here
01:33:106 - ...and here
01:52:325 (3) - new combo
as last thing, kiai time must be the same for every diff, so add it on the easy too ..weird i already made this but ok o.O

changed everything of here XD

[Normal]

OD: 4

00:12:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - why this change of direction? i suggest you to flip these notes horizontally (select and ctrl + h) to keep the anti clockwise sense of these ones 00:11:075 (1,2,3,4) - it even matches correctly with next ones (00:16:700 (1,2,3) - )
00:31:231 (4,5) - spacing, it's just a normal, after all :3 you mean 3,4? i changed it.
00:33:575 (7) - new combo here
00:37:325 (11) - new combo here
00:37:793 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:746 (7) - new combo here
00:50:450 (1) - remove new combo
00:52:793 (6) - new combo here
00:53:262 (2,3,4) - not sure the shape of these sliders is allowed on normal... why not? xD
01:04:043 (7) - new combo here
01:20:215 (1) - this is not allowed on normal, move the end of this spinner 01:18:340 (1) - to 01:20:215 -
01:25:606 - a note here
01:32:871 (8) - change this slider with a single note
the rest is also changed
[Hard]

00:23:965 - add a note here
00:33:106 - instead of this note i suggest you a 3rd etna slider here 00:32:871 (8) - like this http://puu.sh/1ax15, OR make it as a reverse slider, deleting the next note (00:32:871 (8) - ) http://puu.sh/1ax6n (ofc if u do this, u may move this 00:33:575 (1) - closer) good idea

else is ok

[Insane]

General:
DAT OD o.o ...reduce it at 6 or 7 max... a 9 OD would be playing with hard rock all the time xD he..he..he.. i changed it ^^; XD
00:28:184 (2) - reverse this (ctrl + r) cool, ty
00:42:950 (5,6) - stack these 2 on this: 00:43:184 (7) - done
00:53:028 (2) - move to x72 y216 done
01:23:262 (4,6) - weird length... why 3 ticks? thats on purpose xD
01:42:246 (1,2,3) - just a suggestion, move these 3 here http://puu.sh/1axfT done
02:04:746 (1,2) - reverse direction of this
02:05:215 (1,2) - and this ops, wanted to change this anyways xD

thank you

Good Luck

thank you

RLC

Elite Mapper

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RLC 2012-10-02T01:38:33+00:00

DDD nice map

Easy:

Looks fine overall to me; I kind of want to hit something at 01:53:496 - though (but maybe that's just me).

Normal:

01:58:653 - For this ending part, I suggest that you put more of the sliders and hit circle on beats rather than off-beats so that it's more intuitive to play.

Hard:

00:16:700 (4) - New combo? This combo seems a little long.
00:18:575 (8) - Same ^
00:22:325 (7) - ^
01:14:825 - I REALLY want to hit something here.

Insane:

00:42:950 (5,6) - Stack these on the (7), maybe?
01:17:637 (5,6) - Make the spacing between these the same as the spacing between (1) and (2) (and (3) and (4)).
01:23:731 - Put a hit circle here under the tail of the slider at 01:23:262 - .
01:24:668 - Same ^
01:35:450 - The 2-3 and 4-5 are 1/2, but the 7-8-9 is 1/4 with the same spacing... it plays tricks on me D:
02:00:059 - A little hard to read, but nothing major.

Good luck

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2012-10-02T02:01:20+00:00

uh, love your mod <3 XD thank you =)

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2012-10-02T17:18:19+00:00

hi m4m ~

General
Grid Level 4 (Tiny) I recommend it.
A green line slips off. Please revise it.(Kiai Time Start)

Easy
00:07:325 - A slider is beautiful when I make a halfway point a symmetry. Let's put up LastPoint in the middle of the circle to clean it. http://puu.sh/1aITr
00:11:075 - ^
00:49:746 - I think that I am serious when rhythm of the red line is Easydiff.
01:48:106 - For EasyDiff, the person who does not employ some note after spin is easy.

It was an impression that there were many circles. The slider center recommends Easy

Normal
00:27:481 - Because it is difficult, some one-shot continuations will cover it with a slider if it is possible.
00:49:746 - 00:50:215 - Kick Slider Use ? because The one is easy.
01:36:856 - I thought that it was not easy to repeat it in Normal Diff. let's separate it.

Hard
A person with DS is beautiful as possible, and the Hard diff is all right.
01:14:590　- Placement will move it in the place looking incomprehensible.
01:26:075 - Add New Combo.
01:26:543 - Remove New Combo.
01:30:293 - ^
01:30:996 - ^
01:50:215 - Because I think that this jump is facing insane, I will simplify it a little more.

Insane
00:26:309 - Add new combo .
00:26:778 - Remove new combo.
00:29:590 - Add new combo.
01:12:950 - ^
01:14:121 - Remove New combo.

That's All

a variety of sliders cool

good luck ~!star

Parachute

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Joined October 2011

Parachute 2012-10-02T18:32:44+00:00

General
Youre using an other Kiai Time for Easy and Insane.. you should do it as in Normal and Hard.^^

Easy
01:11:543 (8) - Add combo
01:39:668 (3,4) - Add clap on the 3 and remove it from the 4
01:44:356 (7) - Add finish or clap
01:48:106 (1) - No hitsounds from here, use some claps on the 1 and every second 1/1 beat after that
02:04:512 (1) - drag the spinner to 02:07:325 ?

Normal
00:14:825 (4) - start using hitsounds from here? i would say you should do a clap at the end of that slider and another clap every second 1/1 beat (same beats for kiai time)
00:20:450 (1,2) - you should flip them vertically and stack the slider top on the 1 from the next circles ^^
01:51:856 (10) - use something else as hitsounds from here like more claps

02:01:934 (5,1) - i dont think that jumps are allowed in normal
02:07:325 - Add circle

Hard
Well heres the same as in Normal.. youre using no hitsounds.. i would recommend to do the same what i wrote in Normal xD
00:21:856 (4,5,6,1) - hmm kinda hard to read.. you should stack 5, 6 and 1 under the 4
00:23:028 (2) - same for this one you should make the spacing a bit bigger (use distant snap and drag it to the right so its gonna look good)
01:13:184 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm thats hard to read and a jump after that.. you should drag the 5 nearer to the 4 xD
02:07:325 - Add circle

Insane
00:14:356 (7) - New combo?
00:23:028 (3,4,5) - thats impossible to read xD
00:33:575 (6) - New combo
00:35:450 (5) - ^
00:35:684 (1) - Remove combo
00:36:387 (4) - New combo
00:44:121 (9) - ^
01:13:184 (7) - ^
01:14:121 (1) - Remove combo
01:41:309 (1) - ^ or
01:42:715 (4) - Add combo
02:06:621 (4) - ^
02:07:325 - Add circle

Last edited by Parachute 2012-10-02T22:44:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Nichiyouki

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Nichiyouki 2012-10-02T19:14:43+00:00

Hi, Irreversible

M4M request from pm in-game

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

Change PreviewTime of Insane diff to 81856, for same as others diff.
Disable enable countdown in Easy diff which it's different with other diff.
Kiai time of all diff is different. Please fix all diff to this
1. Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:325, ends on 01:52:325

Easy

00:25:606 (2) - Add clap here.
01:11:543 (8) - Add new combo. It has this combo 11 combo which its unrankable for Easy diff.
01:22:425 - Unsnapped a green line. Please move to 01:22:325.
01:48:106 (1) - After finish the spinner, (1) is appeared too early. Please remove it. Then don't forget add new combo in 01:48:575 (2).
01:53:731 (3,4) - Spacing is too far. Please fix it.

Normal

00:14:825 (4) - Add new combo.
01:05:450 (4,5) - Move (4) instead of (5), then use slider (5) start at 01:06:387 and end at 01:06:856.
00:57:481 (3,4,6,1) - Move (6) to stack with (4) and move (1) to stack with (3).
01:13:887 (3,1,2) - Spacing is too far. Please reduce spacing of them about 1.00x.
01:20:684 (1) - Add NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
01:36:856 (8) - Don't stack with slider end of (7).

Hard

01:31:700 (5) - Add new combo here.
00:35:450 (5) - ^
00:50:450 (4) - ^
01:00:293 (12,1) - Switch new combo.
01:11:309 (7) - Add new combo here.
01:15:059 (6) - ^
01:30:293 (1,1) - Remove new combo, but add it in 01:33:340 (5) stead.
02:04:278 (5) - Add new combo.

Insane

01:18:315 - Unsnapped a green line. Please move to 01:18:340.
00:44:121 (9,12,13) - Stack them.

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2012-10-02T21:50:00+00:00

P o M u T a wrote:
:P hi m4m ~

General
Grid Level 4 (Tiny) I recommend it. I don't really like grid level 4 :/
A green line slips off. Please revise it.(Kiai Time Start) fixed

Easy
00:07:325 - A slider is beautiful when I make a halfway point a symmetry. Let's put up LastPoint in the middle of the circle to clean it. http://puu.sh/1aITr
00:11:075 - ^ both fixed
00:49:746 - I think that I am serious when rhythm of the red line is Easydiff. it wouldn't fit another way >__<
01:48:106 - For EasyDiff, the person who does not employ some note after spin is easy. deleted

It was an impression that there were many circles. The slider center recommends Easy

Normal
00:27:481 - Because it is difficult, some one-shot continuations will cover it with a slider if it is possible. changed
00:49:746 - 00:50:215 - Kick Slider Use ? because The one is easy. didn't really got what you mean but i maked it round instead of kick-slider-like (wtf)
01:36:856 - I thought that it was not easy to repeat it in Normal Diff. let's separate it. ???

Hard
A person with DS is beautiful as possible, and the Hard diff is all right.
01:14:590　- Placement will move it in the place looking incomprehensible. changed number 4 to another place
01:26:075 - Add New Combo.done
01:26:543 - Remove New Combo.done
01:30:293 - ^done
01:30:996 - ^done
01:50:215 - Because I think that this jump is facing insane, I will simplify it a little more. no xD

Insane
00:26:309 - Add new combo . done
00:26:778 - Remove new combo.done
00:29:590 - Add new combo.done
01:12:950 - ^done
01:14:121 - Remove New combo. done

That's All a variety of sliders cool
good luck ~!star

Thank you for modding

DD gave you a star too

also thanks for your mod c:

Parachute wrote:
General
Youre using an other Kiai Time for Easy and Insane.. you should do it as in Normal and Hard.^^ done

Easy
01:11:543 (8) - Add combodone
01:39:668 (3,4) - Add clap on the 3 and remove it from the 4 no
01:44:356 (7) - Add finish or clap done
01:48:106 (1) - No hitsounds from here, use some claps on the 1 and every second 1/1 beat after that yeah i forgot XD
02:04:512 (1) - drag the spinner to 02:07:325 ? good idea :d

Normal
00:14:825 (4) - start using hitsounds from here? i would say you should do a clap at the end of that slider and another clap every second 1/1 beat (same beats for kiai time) i didn't even hitsound normal and hard xD but i will now :X
00:20:450 (1,2) - you should flip them vertically done and stack the slider top on the 1 from the next circles ^^ no xD
01:51:856 (10) - use something else as hitsounds from here like more claps
02:01:934 (5,1) - i dont think that jumps are allowed in normal done XD
02:07:325 - Add circle done

Hard
Well heres the same as in Normal.. youre using no hitsounds.. i would recommend to do the same what i wrote in Normal xD
00:21:856 (4,5,6,1) - hmm kinda hard to read.. you should stack 5, 6 and 1 under the 4 ok.. i changed it xD
00:23:028 (2) - same for this one you should make the spacing a bit bigger (use distance snap and drag it to the right so its gonna look good) color=#40BF0]cool idea[/color]
01:13:184 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm thats hard to read and a jump after that.. you should drag the 5 nearer to the 4 xD done
02:07:325 - Add circle done

Insane
00:14:356 (7) - New combo? done
00:23:028 (3,4,5) - thats impossible to read xD it kinda works if you just play the map, i don't know how to explain xD
00:33:575 (6) - New combodone
00:35:450 (5) - ^done
00:35:684 (1) - Remove combodone
00:36:387 (4) - New combodone
00:44:121 (9) - ^done
01:13:184 (7) - ^done
01:14:121 (1) - Remove combodone
01:41:309 (1) - ^ or done
01:42:715 (4) - Add combodone
02:06:621 (4) - ^done
02:07:325 - Add circle

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2012-10-02T22:58:20+00:00

nich95 wrote:
Hi, Irreversible

M4M request from pm in-game

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General
Change PreviewTime of Insane diff to 81856, for same as others diff. done
Disable enable countdown in Easy diff which it's different with other diff. ..it didn't have a countdown? o.O
Kiai time of all diff is different. Please fix all diff to this
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:325, ends on 01:52:325
done

Easy
00:25:606 (2) - Add clap here. done
01:11:543 (8) - Add new combo. It has this combo 11 combo which its unrankable for Easy diff.done
01:22:425 - Unsnapped a green line. Please move to 01:22:325.done
01:48:106 (1) - After finish the spinner, (1) is appeared too early. Please remove it. Then don't forget add new combo in 01:48:575 (2).
01:53:731 (3,4) - Spacing is too far. Please fix it.deleted the heart, because it looks ugly with distance snap xD

Normal
00:14:825 (4) - Add new combo. done
01:05:450 (4,5) - Move (4) instead of (5), then use slider (5) start at 01:06:387 and end at 01:06:856. changed it in a different way
00:57:481 (3,4,6,1) - Move (6) to stack with (4) and move (1) to stack with (3). no
01:13:887 (3,1,2) - Spacing is too far. Please reduce spacing of them about 1.00x. its not a jump, its only because a new combo is there :/
01:20:684 (1) - Add NC here, since this note follows a spinner.done
01:36:856 (8) - Don't stack with slider end of (7).

Hard
01:31:700 (5) - Add new combo here.done
00:35:450 (5) - ^done
00:50:450 (4) - ^done
01:00:293 (12,1) - Switch new combo.done
01:11:309 (7) - Add new combo here.done
01:15:059 (6) - ^done
01:30:293 (1,1) - Remove new combo, but add it in 01:33:340 (5) stead.done
02:04:278 (5) - Add new combo.
done

Insane
01:18:315 - Unsnapped a green line. Please move to 01:18:340.[/color]
00:44:121 (9,12,13) - Stack them.no

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~

thank you for your mod

sorry for double-post!!

i will add hitsounds at normal / hard and fix some details, then i'll ask for more mods

pandaikon

102 posts

Joined February 2011

pandaikon 2012-10-04T18:31:27+00:00

hi there~

[General]
Use the offset grumd provided. it may sound off to you because your universal audio offset.
Lower the volume of the hitsounds from 00:07:325 - to 00:14:825 -

[Easy]
What about removing this note 00:15:293 (1) - and replacing it with a slider that starts at 00:14:825 - and ends at 00:15:293 - ? sounds better to me

[Normal]
AR-1
It would be nice to find a place for a break in this diff, but i guess you could go without one.
00:12:950 (1) - it's not a good practice to end sliders on a blue tick in normal diffs. and it sounds odd. you could make the slider longer, it will sound better.
00:13:887 (2) - ^
00:14:825 (1,2) - ^
01:05:450 (4,5,1,2,3) - this kind of stuff could be hard to read for inexperienced players, try to move 01:07:325 (1,2,3) - so that the player would be able to see the notes easily.

[Hard]
00:10:606 (2,3,4,5) - and 00:14:356 (1,2,3,4,5) - look kinda ugly. you could line them to look nicer and easier to read.
00:48:809 (1,2) - this stuff breaks the rhythm, use a slider (may be reversed) that has its start and end on the red and white ticks, or notes placed on the 1/2 divisor.
01:03:809 (1,2) - ^
01:14:590 (4) - stack this with the end of 01:13:653 (2) -

[Insane]
00:15:996 (3,4) - once again, breaks the rhythm. use something like this, it sounds way better:

image

00:17:871 (3,4) - 00:19:746 (3,4) - 01:42:950 (2,3) - ^

sorry for a lame mod D:
nice map, and good luck with it.

-Neipezi

2,266 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2012-10-05T11:43:23+00:00

hi~chat 1:1
Have modding too late ..I'm sorry.

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:17:637 (4) - clap delete
00:20:450 (3) - Ctrl + R, 00:22:324 - finish, NC add
00:22:793 (5) - combo add?
00:24:668 (2) - ^
00:26:543 (4) - ^
00:28:418 (6) - ^
00:29:356 ~ 00:37:325 - Easy difficulty in break time?
01:52:793 (2) - combo & finish add?
01:52:793 (2) - clap,finish delete
02:04:512 (1) - clap delete

[Noraml]

SPOILER

00:14:825 (1,2) - 1/4 sild change
00:22:325 (1) - finish
00:36:387 (4) - Slide the end of the finish delete
01:18:340 (1) - finish
01:21:621 (2) - Slide the start of the finish - change
01:22:090 (1) - Slide the end of the finish, clap delete
01:35:450 (5) - NC?
02:00:293 (3) - finish add, clap delete
02:04:043 (3) - ^

Too difficult for the non-Normal.

Normal standards of 3.5 or less.

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:16:231 (3) - clap add
00:18:106 (4) - ^
00:19:981 (4) - ^
00:22:325 (1) - Slide the start of the finish
00:23:262 (3) - Slide the end of the Clap
00:25:137 (3) - ^
00:27:012 (3) - ^
00:28:887 (7) - ^
00:31:231 (4) - clap add
00:31:700 (5) - NC?
00:32:871 (8) - Slide the end of the Clap
00:34:981 (3) - clap add
00:36:387 (3) - clap add
00:38:731 (3) - ^
00:40:371 (1) - SlideArrow 1 clap
00:42:481 (5) - clap
00:46:231 (3) - Slide the start of the clap
00:51:856 (5) - clap
00:53:731 (4) - Slide the start of the clap
00:55:137 (8) - Slide the end of the Clap
00:57:481 (5) - Slide the start of the clap
01:01:231 (3) - clap
01:53:965 (6) - NC?

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:15:059 (1) - Slide the end of the Clap
00:16:934 (1) - ^
00:18:809 (1) - ^
00:18:809 (1) - ^
00:57:950 (6) - NC?
01:41:309 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Notes of the distance is too wide.

01:43:887 (5,6,7) - ^
01:45:996 (4,5,6) - ^
01:47:871 (10,11,1) - ^
02:05:918 - combo add?
02:06:387 - ^
02:07:090 - ^
02:07:207 - ^

Ranked hope~~

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2012-10-06T00:45:17+00:00

pandaikon wrote:
hi there~

[General]
Use the offset grumd provided. it may sound off to you because your universal audio offset. i'm getting pissed with offset, dunno what to believe, some people says its right, other people say its wrong.. i have to check this
Lower the volume of the hitsounds from 00:07:325 - to 00:14:825 - done

[Easy]
What about removing this note 00:15:293 (1) - and replacing it with a slider that starts at 00:14:825 - and ends at 00:15:293 - ? sounds better to me cool idea done

[Normal]
AR-1 why not, done
It would be nice to find a place for a break in this diff, but i guess you could go without one. i wouldn't know where to put one
00:12:950 (1) - it's not a good practice to end sliders on a blue tick in normal diffs. and it sounds odd. you could make the slider longer, it will sound better. i don't know why this happened, i never let them end at blue ticks.. well i changed it XD
00:13:887 (2) - ^
00:14:825 (1,2) - ^
01:05:450 (4,5,1,2,3) - this kind of stuff could be hard to read for inexperienced players, try to move 01:07:325 (1,2,3) - so that the player would be able to see the notes easily. no, i leave it like this xD

[Hard]
00:10:606 (2,3,4,5) - and 00:14:356 (1,2,3,4,5) - look kinda ugly. you could line them to look nicer and easier to read. i like it like this.
00:48:809 (1,2) - this stuff breaks the rhythm, use a slider (may be reversed) that has its start and end on the red and white ticks, or notes placed on the 1/2 divisor.
01:03:809 (1,2) - ^
01:14:590 (4) - stack this with the end of 01:13:653 (2) - it has already been there? xD

[Insane]
00:15:996 (3,4) - once again, breaks the rhythm. use something like this, it sounds way better:
image
00:17:871 (3,4) - 00:19:746 (3,4) - 01:42:950 (2,3) - ^also here, sorry but i'll leave it how it is . xD

sorry for a lame mod D:
nice map, and good luck with it.

thank you very much

-Kirito wrote:
hi~chat 1:1
Have modding too late ..I'm sorry.

[Easy]
SPOILER
00:17:637 (4) - clap delete
00:20:450 (3) - Ctrl + R, 00:22:324 - finish, NC add
00:22:793 (5) - combo add?
00:24:668 (2) - ^
00:26:543 (4) - ^
00:28:418 (6) - ^
00:29:356 ~ 00:37:325 - Easy difficulty in break time?
01:52:793 (2) - combo & finish add?
01:52:793 (2) - clap,finish delete
02:04:512 (1) - clap delete

[Noraml]
SPOILER
00:14:825 (1,2) - 1/4 sild change
00:22:325 (1) - finish
00:36:387 (4) - Slide the end of the finish delete
01:18:340 (1) - finish
01:21:621 (2) - Slide the start of the finish - change
01:22:090 (1) - Slide the end of the finish, clap delete
01:35:450 (5) - NC?
02:00:293 (3) - finish add, clap delete
02:04:043 (3) - ^

Too difficult for the non-Normal.
Normal standards of 3.5 or less.

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:16:231 (3) - clap add
00:18:106 (4) - ^
00:19:981 (4) - ^
00:22:325 (1) - Slide the start of the finish
00:23:262 (3) - Slide the end of the Clap
00:25:137 (3) - ^
00:27:012 (3) - ^
00:28:887 (7) - ^
00:31:231 (4) - clap add
00:31:700 (5) - NC?
00:32:871 (8) - Slide the end of the Clap
00:34:981 (3) - clap add
00:36:387 (3) - clap add
00:38:731 (3) - ^
00:40:371 (1) - SlideArrow 1 clap
00:42:481 (5) - clap
00:46:231 (3) - Slide the start of the clap
00:51:856 (5) - clap
00:53:731 (4) - Slide the start of the clap
00:55:137 (8) - Slide the end of the Clap
00:57:481 (5) - Slide the start of the clap
01:01:231 (3) - clap
01:53:965 (6) - NC?

[Insane]
SPOILER
00:15:059 (1) - Slide the end of the Clap
00:16:934 (1) - ^
00:18:809 (1) - ^
00:18:809 (1) - ^
00:57:950 (6) - NC?
01:41:309 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Notes of the distance is too wide.
01:43:887 (5,6,7) - ^
01:45:996 (4,5,6) - ^
01:47:871 (10,11,1) - ^
02:05:918 - combo add?
02:06:387 - ^
02:07:090 - ^
02:07:207 - ^

Ranked hope~~

i've done nearly all of your suggestins! thank you

RLC

Elite Mapper

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Joined August 2011

RLC 2012-10-12T02:46:39+00:00

I feel kinda (really) bad for not noticing this earlier.

BPM 127.930 (rather than 128--the timing at the end is very off with 128, and this could be why merely changing your offset isn't helping too much)
Offset 7304 (rather than 7325)

Make sure to snap everything (inherited timing sections and hit circles) to the new timing.

(i already informed Chii of this; his timing has been changed)

also,

(⊃ ´ω`)⊃ http://puu.sh/1e5cO ⊂(´ω` ⊂)

guest diff \:D/ hope you like it

Irreversible

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Topic Starter

Irreversible 2012-10-13T17:18:45+00:00

well then, i'm gonna change it

thanks

edit: i'm gonna change it, as far as I'm able to.. because there's some kind of bug, i don't know

Mixagji

625 posts

Joined March 2011

Mixagji 2012-10-15T14:08:36+00:00

hi~
I mod only Insane because others diff seem not finished mapping

[Insane]
00:10:606(4) - add Newcombo same as 00:14:356 - and whistle
00:10:840(6) - add whistle
00:11:075(8) - ^ on slider's head
00:14:356(1) - ^
00:14:590(3) - ^
00:14:825(5) - add finish
00:26:778(1) - remove NC
00:39:434(5) - add NC
00:44:707(4,5) - please stack parfectly on 00:44:121(1) -
00:47:403(6) - add NC
01:01:700(6) - ^
01:05:450(7) - ^
01:21:621(6) - ^
01:21:856(8) - remove finish
01:22:325(1) - add finish on slider's end
01:23:965(6) - NC
01:27:012(6) - ^
01:29:356(3) - remove finish
01:29:825(6) - remove clap and whistle. add finish and NC
01:33:575(8) - NC
01:38:965(6) - ^
01:46:465(7) - ^
01:50:450(6) - ^
02:06:387(5) - ^
02:06:621(1) - remoce newcombo
02:07:090(3,4,5) - These triple should stack imo.

good luck

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2012-10-16T01:07:46+00:00

Mixagji wrote:
hi~
I mod only Insane because others diff seem not finished mapping

[Insane]
00:10:606(4) - add Newcombo same as 00:14:356 - and whistle
00:10:840(6) - add whistle
00:11:075(8) - ^ on slider's head
00:14:356(1) - ^
00:14:590(3) - ^
00:14:825(5) - add finish
00:26:778(1) - remove NC
00:39:434(5) - add NC
00:44:707(4,5) - please stack parfectly on 00:44:121(1) -
00:47:403(6) - add NC
01:01:700(6) - ^
01:05:450(7) - ^
01:21:621(6) - ^
01:21:856(8) - remove finish
01:22:325(1) - add finish on slider's end
01:23:965(6) - NC
01:27:012(6) - ^
01:29:356(3) - remove finish
01:29:825(6) - remove clap and whistle. add finish and NC
01:33:575(8) - NC
01:38:965(6) - ^
01:46:465(7) - ^
01:50:450(6) - ^
02:06:387(5) - ^
02:06:621(1) - remoce newcombo
02:07:090(3,4,5) - These triple should stack imo.

good luck

Hey, sorry for the not finished things, there are a few bugs in my map and it kinda deleted some changes i made -_-
anyways, thanks, i'll change your things later

EDIT:
done most of the changes

thank you

there were some issues, because of offset changes.. and it seem like you had an old map. xD i dunno~
but thanks.

Last edited by Irreversible 2012-10-22T16:31:46+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Bread

64 posts

Joined January 2012

Bread 2012-10-19T00:38:46+00:00

oh I love this song

I'm a noob at mapping so sorry if this mod is like
uh
not very thorough
and coordinates are in the form x,y (too lazy to type x and y each time)

Insane
00:37:207 - you should add another hitcircle and move 00:37:325 (6) - to make it a stream
00:41:075 (12) - move to 280,264? lol I'm very nitpicky about circle locations xD
01:41:778 (1) - 152,240
01:56:309 (1) - uh what is this supposed to be? If you want a heart, I recommend something like

SPOILER

It still has the same timing
01:48:575 (2) - move the red point to 258,352
01:16:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I personally feel like these should be jumps. you can make whatever jumps you like but I have
01:16:700 (1) - 176, 34
01:16:934 (2) - 104, 264
01:17:168 (3) - 280, 136
01:17:403 (4) - 64, 136
01:17:637 (5) - 248, 264
01:17:871 (6) - 176, 34 (yes, overlapping 1)
01:18:106 (7) - 176, 160
01:27:481 (8) - move the point from 46,50 to 50,46

okay that's it for the insane.

Hard
01:23:965 (5) - 224,312 red point
01:46:231 (4) - looks unnatural, make it a straight slider instead?

and please make it AR7, 6 feels really slow, especially since it already has a low BPM

but other than that, really good map!

and I didn't mod easy or normal because I think they are very good already ^__^
okay GL with this map!

Irreversible

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Topic Starter

Irreversible 2012-10-22T16:32:44+00:00

Bread wrote:
oh I love this song

I'm a noob at mapping so sorry if this mod is like
uh
not very thorough
and coordinates are in the form x,y (too lazy to type x and y each time)

Insane
00:37:207 - you should add another hitcircle and move 00:37:325 (6) - to make it a stream
00:41:075 (12) - move to 280,264? lol I'm very nitpicky about circle locations xD
01:41:778 (1) - 152,240
01:56:309 (1) - uh what is this supposed to be? If you want a heart, I recommend something like
SPOILER
It still has the same timing
01:48:575 (2) - move the red point to 258,352
01:16:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I personally feel like these should be jumps. you can make whatever jumps you like but I have
01:16:700 (1) - 176, 34
01:16:934 (2) - 104, 264
01:17:168 (3) - 280, 136
01:17:403 (4) - 64, 136
01:17:637 (5) - 248, 264
01:17:871 (6) - 176, 34 (yes, overlapping 1)
01:18:106 (7) - 176, 160
01:27:481 (8) - move the point from 46,50 to 50,46

okay that's it for the insane.

Hard
01:23:965 (5) - 224,312 red point
01:46:231 (4) - looks unnatural, make it a straight slider instead?

and please make it AR7, 6 feels really slow, especially since it already has a low BPM

but other than that, really good map!

and I didn't mod easy or normal because I think they are very good already ^__^
okay GL with this map!

Thanks for the mod! There were some nice ideas ;D

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Haya 2012-10-22T20:49:41+00:00

IRC Modded :3

SPOILER

21:55 Haya: komm innen editor
21:55 Irreversible: egal
21:55 Irreversible: oki
21:55 Irreversible: musste lachen ab meinem super aus der bahn hau action slider
21:55 Irreversible: LOL
21:55 Irreversible: xD
21:55 Haya: Viele Triplets sind nicht richtig gesetzt
21:55 Haya: also passen nicht zum beat
21:55 Irreversible: das is mir auch grad aufgefallen
21:55 Irreversible: LOL
21:56 Irreversible: ich dachte so wtf voll scheisse iwie
21:56 Irreversible: beim refrain
21:56 Haya: Und manche sind optisch komisch gesetzt
21:56 Haya: 00:23:015 (3,4,5) - wie das HOLY SHIT
21:56 Irreversible: eigentlich war das
21:56 Irreversible: nur hier
21:56 Irreversible: aber habs beim andern auch gemacht
21:56 Irreversible: xD
21:56 Haya: 00:23:953 (1,2,3) - oder das WTF
21:57 Haya: 00:42:948 (5,6,7) - Das hier passt nicht
21:57 Haya: Lösch einfach nr 6
21:57 Irreversible: ne frage zu dem
21:57 Irreversible: kannst du mir ein tipp zu 8 geben
21:57 Irreversible: der is so hässlich
21:57 Haya: Welchen?
21:57 Irreversible: 00:43:652 (8) -
21:58 Irreversible: ah habs gelöt
21:58 Irreversible: gelöst
21:58 Haya: Soll der eckig sein?
21:58 Haya: Oh okay
21:58 Irreversible: dank 6 gelöscht
21:58 Irreversible: xD
21:59 Haya: 00:51:390 (3,4,5) - lösch 4
21:59 Haya: 00:55:846 (1,2) - hier zwischen passt perfekt ein triplet
22:00 Haya: 01:05:460 (7) - am anfang nen Clap
22:00 Irreversible: btw
22:00 Irreversible: kann ich das so lachen
22:00 Irreversible: 00:51:859 (5,6,7) -
22:00 Irreversible: lassen*
22:01 Haya: Jo
22:01 Haya: 01:13:668 (1) - remove new combo
22:01 Haya: like, wie kommst du überhaupt auf die new combo
22:01 Irreversible: das is bisschen komisch
22:01 Irreversible: weil
22:01 Irreversible: ich habs modden lassen
22:01 Irreversible: und geändert
22:01 Irreversible: und bin nich mehr drausgekommen
22:01 Irreversible: ^^; XDD
22:01 Haya: xD
22:01 Haya: Passiert
22:01 Haya: xD
22:01 Irreversible: xDDDD
22:02 Irreversible: 00:59:363 (5) - der slider is mein ganzer stolz XD
22:02 Haya: hahaha
22:02 Haya: Ist gut so
22:02 Haya: 01:19:296 (3,4,5) - lösche 4
22:02 Irreversible: okay
22:02 Haya: 01:19:882 - Pack dafür hier nen hin
22:03 Haya: Du Lappen
22:03 Haya: XD
22:03 Irreversible: XDDDDD
22:03 Irreversible: kannsu mit anordnung
22:04 Irreversible: 01:19:765 (5) -
22:04 Irreversible: bei dem part helfen?
22:04 Irreversible: xD
22:04 Haya: 01:28:676 (4) - am ende nen clap
22:04 Haya: Ehm
22:04 Irreversible: obwohl
22:04 Haya: Irgendwie so? http://puu.sh/1hBYz
22:04 Irreversible: ich find das voll komsich
22:04 Irreversible: o_O
22:05 Haya: Naja mir egal
22:05 Haya: ist meine Meinung
22:05 Irreversible: ich mach einfah beide triplets
22:05 Irreversible: yeayy
22:05 Irreversible: xDD
22:05 Haya: lol
22:05 Haya: geht auch
22:06 Haya: 01:30:083 (2) - Anfang clap weg dafür ende clap hin
22:06 Haya: 01:35:242 (1,1,1,1,1,2) - 1 combo
22:06 Haya: 01:36:649 - Dafür das hier ne eigene combo
22:07 Haya: 01:41:339 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Was hälst du davon?
22:08 Haya: http://puu.sh/1hC3N
22:08 Haya: Finde ich optisch viel cooler
22:08 Haya: 01:56:348 (1) - Delete
22:08 Irreversible: FU
22:08 Irreversible: XD
22:09 Haya: Jop das wars
22:09 Irreversible: hm
22:09 Irreversible: bei deiner idee da
22:09 Irreversible: sieht cool aus
22:09 Irreversible: aber
22:09 Irreversible: der flow bro
22:09 Irreversible: der flow
22:09 Irreversible: XDD
22:09 Irreversible: warte ich probier mal
22:10 Irreversible: und was sollte ich anstatt des herzes machen?
22:10 Irreversible: e__e
22:10 Haya: Warn scherz
22:10 Haya: lass den
22:10 Haya: ders halbwegs gut gemacht
22:10 Irreversible: achso xD
22:11 Irreversible: weisst du was
22:11 Irreversible: deine idee
22:11 Haya: Ey
22:11 Irreversible: könnte ich am schluss machen
22:11 Haya: Hab das fl prob gelöst
22:11 Haya: flow*
22:11 Irreversible: anstatt diesen sliders
22:11 Irreversible: ja? wie denn
22:11 Haya: 01:40:870 (1) - http://puu.sh/1hC8W
22:12 Irreversible: ich meinte eher deshalb
22:12 Irreversible: ware
22:12 Irreversible: jetzt kommt pro paint
22:12 Haya: Shit
22:12 Haya: puush voll
22:13 Irreversible: guggst du
22:13 Haya: ja
22:13 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/1hCb6
22:13 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/1hCc7
22:14 Haya: Nene
22:14 Haya: Weiß und braun wechseln seiten
22:14 Haya: Das hab ich eben vercheckt
22:14 Irreversible: ja dann gehts
22:14 Irreversible: xDD
22:14 Haya: Jop
22:14 Irreversible: warte
22:14 Irreversible: was haltest du davon
22:14 Haya: Dem paint skills
22:14 Irreversible: wenn wir sowas hier hin machen
22:15 Irreversible: 02:01:038 (1) -
22:15 Irreversible: weisst du bei diesen sliders
22:15 Irreversible: slidern*
22:15 Haya: Kannste auch machen
22:15 Haya: Aber du weißt wie das geht oder?
22:15 Irreversible: nö
22:15 Haya: CTRL + Shift + R
22:15 Haya: Dann um 120° entweder Clock oder Anticlockwise
22:16 Irreversible: ok ich probier mal
22:16 Haya: Musst das ding aber auch anvisieren

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2012-10-22T20:52:13+00:00

ty

!

KilladeKill

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Joined November 2010

KilladeKill 2012-10-22T21:49:03+00:00

irc mod ~
http://puu.sh/1hEiM

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2012-10-22T21:50:25+00:00

danke

Cristian

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Cristian 2012-10-23T03:10:35+00:00

well well well, nice to know people are still looking on #modreqs :>

[General]
You need to know witch spacing you should do, if you do if more better, try with distance snapping.

[Insane]
00:07:303 - 00:10:352 - Can you put hitsounds on there too?, soft with wistle sounds better.
00:11:525 - 00:14:104 - ^
00:22:077 (5,6,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470777 also, if 00:22:077 (5,6) Got more spacing than 00:23:015 (3,4) is rong, please fix it.
00:29:581 (1) - is insane so... can you put sliders?, looks more fun.
00:33:333 - Sounds like triple notes there
02:01:507 (1,2,3,4) - Overlap here doesn't fit, please move.
02:05:259 (1,2,3,1) - ^

[Somnambulist]
00:10:587 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I didn't catch the rhythm there, please change the hitsounds.
00:32:630 (3) - Look nice like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470783
00:37:789 (2) - Please no overlap, and make it like ^
00:41:072 (1) - ^
00:45:293 (2) - ^ and the others.
01:19:530 (3) - i didn't read it very well, please reduce this slider.
01:23:283 (1) - Bad slider is bad please fix as these sliders 01:27:035 (1) - 01:30:787 (1) - 01:42:512 (2) - 01:45:795 (1) - 01:51:892 (4) - 01:56:348 (2)
02:07:135 (4,5,1) - doesn't look nice.
Really this map is more fun then the insane one, nice.

[Hard]
00:10:587 (2,3,4,5) - 3 notes pls, and no 4.
00:33:568 (1) - only one retourn to the slider look's fine.
00:40:368 (1) - ^
00:49:514 (3) - ^
01:08:978 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:19:967 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470794 and obiously, moving, some notes for spacing

[Easy]
01:17:185 (2) - move to, 01:16:716

:3

Irreversible

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Topic Starter

Irreversible 2012-10-23T16:14:14+00:00

Kurisuchianu wrote:
well well well, nice to know people are still looking on #modreqs :>

[General]
You need to know witch spacing you should do, if you do if more better, try with distance snapping.

[Insane]
00:07:303 - 00:10:352 - Can you put hitsounds on there too?, soft with wistle sounds better.
00:11:525 - 00:14:104 - ^
00:22:077 (5,6,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470777 also, if 00:22:077 (5,6) Got more spacing than 00:23:015 (3,4) is rong, please fix it.
00:29:581 (1) - is insane so... can you put sliders?, looks more fun.
00:33:333 - Sounds like triple notes there
02:01:507 (1,2,3,4) - Overlap here doesn't fit, please move.
02:05:259 (1,2,3,1) - ^

[Somnambulist]
00:10:587 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I didn't catch the rhythm there, please change the hitsounds.
00:32:630 (3) - Look nice like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470783
00:37:789 (2) - Please no overlap, and make it like ^
00:41:072 (1) - ^
00:45:293 (2) - ^ and the others.
01:19:530 (3) - i didn't read it very well, please reduce this slider.
01:23:283 (1) - Bad slider is bad please fix as these sliders 01:27:035 (1) - 01:30:787 (1) - 01:42:512 (2) - 01:45:795 (1) - 01:51:892 (4) - 01:56:348 (2)
02:07:135 (4,5,1) - doesn't look nice.
Really this map is more fun then the insane one, nice.

[Hard]
00:10:587 (2,3,4,5) - 3 notes pls, and no 4.
00:33:568 (1) - only one retourn to the slider look's fine.
00:40:368 (1) - ^
00:49:514 (3) - ^
01:08:978 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:19:967 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470794 and obiously, moving, some notes for spacing

[Easy]
01:17:185 (2) - move to, 01:16:716

:3

Ty!!

Gonna mod yours in like 5 minutes, after i changed these things

!

Krenyez

79 posts

Joined May 2012

Krenyez 2012-10-25T09:28:17+00:00

Star !
Just like I said : " MOD request ( 1 Kudosu star if you MOD my map) "
sorry about late giving you the star ;w;
thanks for your participation

BeatofIke

4,172 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2012-10-28T21:06:59+00:00

Good Map!

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2012-10-31T15:20:50+00:00

m4m and so
[General]

If Somnambulist was made by RLC then add his name to the tags in all diffs, please
00:14:339 - unsnapped green inherit line in Insane
00:14:808 - unsnapped green inherit line in Easy, Normal and Insane
01:18:358 - ^ in Insan, Hard
01:19:765 - ^ Insane, Hard
01:22:345 - ^ Hard, Normal, Easy
01:24:924 - ^ Easy
01:25:393 - ^ Easy
01:28:911 - ^ Easy
01:29:380 - ^ Easy
01:34:304 - ^ Easy
01:35:242 - ^ Easy
01:37:353 - ^ Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane
01:38:056 - ^ Easy
01:38:525 - ^ Easy
01:40:401 - ^ Easy
01:40:870 - ^ Easy
01:42:277 - ^ Easy
01:42:746 - ^ Easy
01:52:126 - ^ Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane
01:56:348 - ^ Normal, Hard, Insane
01:58:693 - ^ Hard, Insane
02:00:100 - ^ Insane
02:02:445 - ^ Insane
02:03:852 - ^ Insane

I know I just could have said that you have alot of unsnapped green lines but I was very bored xD

[Easy]

00:14:808 (4) - new combo
00:19:967 (5) - new combo (or on previous slider)
00:49:045 (1,2,3) - bad spacing. Try using a constant Distance Snap for Easy diffs. Change atleast spacing between (2) and (3)
00:50:921 (3) - Maybe new combo
01:27:504 (4) - new combo
01:31:725 (4) - new combo
01:41:574 (5) - new combo
01:48:609 (1) - repeats feel out of place. Use two sliders instead. Repeats are fine on (2) though

Overall okay. Some bow sliders could look better though

[Normal]

00:22:312 (1,2) - Could you please change the postion a bit. They lie under 00:20:436 (1) - a bit. Doesn't look so nice
00:22:781 (3) - is not on the same Y coordinate like (1). Would look better if you change that
00:24:188 (5) - new combo
00:27:471 (1) - remove new combo, add that better to 00:27:940 (2) -
00:33:568 (1) - maybe make it the same way like (2)
00:53:266 (2,3,4) - these sliders look weird/bad. Move the 3rd slider point a bit farther away so the spike looks better
01:16:716 (3) - maybe new combo
01:23:986 (5) - new combo
01:27:738 (3) - new combo
01:28:676 (7) - repeater don't fit. Use 2 sliders instead
01:31:256 (3) - new combo
01:38:994 (5) - new combo
01:46:967 (5) - ^
01:42:746 (3) - remove one repeater and use a Hit circle instead
01:50:250 (6) - new combo
01:54:002 (4) - new combo
02:00:803 (4) - so many repeats don't fit.
02:04:555 (4) - ^
02:06:666 (6) - new combo

[Hard]

00:17:622 (3,4) - it is okay to use a anti jump here, but i would prefer it a bit further away. Try (3) X: 328 Y: 192. Mirror (4) with strg + h then
00:19:498 (3,4) - ^ If you do that just place (3) on (4) of previous combo and do the same for (4) like ^
00:27:940 (5,6,7) - why not continue hitsound pattern you used for (1,2,3,4) in this combo?
00:31:223 (4,1) - jump doesn't feel good. This super slow spacing from 00:29:816 (1,2,3,4) - leads to this uncomfortable jump
00:48:811 (1,2) - Hitsounds feel bad here D: change it a bit or so. They feel to loud
01:03:819 (1,2) - ^
01:11:323 (7) - new combo

01:18:358 (7) - I made the slider more symmetrical. Use this code

320,104,78358,2,0,B|432:104|472:192|432:280|320:280,1,315.000012016297

01:25:628 (9,10,1) - The new combo feels like it should start on (9) or (10) but (1) is fine to ... the combo just feels a bit to long :/
01:46:264 (4,1) - start new combo on (4) instead of (1)
01:56:113 - add Hitcircle
02:03:148 (3,4) - slider look bad D:
02:07:369 (2) - flow would be better if it were under 02:06:197 (1) - instead next to it

[Somnambulist]

00:22:077 (5) - Instead of this short slider try Hitcircle. They have a better flow
00:51:976 (6,7,8,1) - I miss some Hitsounds. Maybe clap on (1)
02:01:272 (4,5,6) - dunno these claps feel meh
02:15:811 - until end. pointless green inherit lines

nice diff

[Insane]

00:08:711 (4) - whistle on repeat feels wrong
00:15:980 (3,4) - claps feel bad/ to loud
00:19:732 (3,4) - ^
00:59:363 (5) - not sure about this slider
01:21:172 (1) - wow this slider is to fast. A SV of 1,25 would be better instead of 1,5
01:53:065 (3,4,5) - feel to close to (2)

Not much to complain. Just that alot of these claps that are so close to each other don't fit really but I cannot suggest anything better, because no hitsounds don't sound better

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2012-11-01T12:44:53+00:00

Thanks for your mod

Changed nearly all of the things.
00:59:363 (5) - not sure about this slider I'm sure about this slider

01:21:172 (1) - wow this slider is to fast. A SV of 1,25 would be better instead of 1,5 And i don't think that this is too fast ^^;

zaczac

409 posts

Joined September 2011

zaczac 2012-11-01T18:04:41+00:00

Hi~
●=unrankable

[General]

● Inconsistency in Kiai Times

SPOILER
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:325, ends on 01:52:090
- [Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:325, ends on 01:52:090
- [Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:20:234, ends on 01:20:469
　　　　　　　 Kiai #2: Starts on 01:21:172, ends on 01:21:407
　　　　　　 Kiai #3: Starts on 01:22:110, ends on 01:52:090
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:325, ends on 01:52:090
should fix just your diffs~. please unify kiai time.

If you have guest diff,please add a guest mapper name in Tags.

●Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
SPOILER
- [Easy] : 81856
- [Hard] : 81856
- [Insane] : 81856
- [Normal] : 81856
- [Somnambulist] : 81876
please rename and change those hitsound. normal-slidertick →soft-slidertick2 and all N:C1 part →S:C2 part.
Because Those hitsound different sliderslide hitsound.(normal-sliderslide,soft-sliderslide) It was feell strange. I think it need to unify.

[Easy]

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) please should snap it.
"Unsnapped Green line"
00:07:325
00:14:825
01:22:325
01:24:903
01:25:371
01:28:887
01:29:356
01:34:278
01:35:215
01:37:325
01:38:028
01:38:496
01:40:371
01:40:840
01:42:246
01:42:715
01:52:090
00:48:107 - use this tick,add a clap
00:52:328 (2) - add a finish(slider end) I heard sound here,It will be better.
00:59:363 (5) - remove finish,add a clap(slider start). and add a finish(slider end) It's better.
01:14:371 (3) - add a clap(slider end)
01:14:840 (4) - remove clap
01:22:345 (1) - add a finish(slider start)
01:27:504 (1) - remove new combo (If you set NC pattern along the lyrics,I think that should set this.)
01:27:973 (2) - add a New combo (^)
01:42:043 (2) - hmm...nice idea....But It look ugly... please this?
SPOILER
01:53:299 (1) - I don't think that this NC don't need... remove this New combo?
02:04:555 (1) - please add a finish this spinner. It will be better :3

[Normal]

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) please should snap it.
"Unsnapped Green line"
00:07:325
00:14:825
01:22:325
01:37:325
01:52:090
01:56:309
00:12:932 (1) - stack by 00:11:056 (1) ? It looks better.
00:14:808 (1) - add a finish(slider start)

00:18:560 (5) - make this? It looks better.

SPOILER

336,48,18560,2,0,B|260:112|260:112|156:88|104:180,1,280

00:37:320 (1) - add a finish.
00:59:832 (6) - perfectly stack by 00:57:956 (4) sorry nazi
01:02:646 (5) - ah....remove clap please... so noisy...But add a clap sliderstart and reverse please. not need sliderend. It's better
02:07:369 (2) - same as easy diff. please add a finish.

[Hard]

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) please should snap it.
"Unsnapped Green line"
01:18:340
01:19:746
01:22:325
01:37:325
01:52:090
01:56:309
01:58:653
00:17:622 (3) - perfectly stack by 00:16:215 (3) sorry nazi
00:37:320 (6) - add a finish(slider start)
01:11:323 (7) - add a New combo
01:13:199 (1,2,3,4) - I like this circle placement <3
01:22:110 (1) - please change something 1/2 rhythm... I want to put finish-hitsound for 01:22:345.
01:37:822 (2) - add a finish. It will be better
01:52:361 (1) - perfectly stack by 01:51:657 (4)(slider start and end) sorry nazi

[Insane]

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) please should snap it.
"Unsnapped Green line"
00:14:356
00:14:825
01:18:340
01:19:746
01:37:325
01:52:090
01:56:309
01:58:653
02:00:059
02:02:403
02:03:809
01:52:361 (1) - add a finish(slider end)

[Somnambulist]

00:37:320 (1) - add a finish(slider start)
00:48:342 (5,1,2) - try this rhythm? I think fits your rhythm pattern.
SPOILER
01:02:412 (3) - perfectly stack by 01:01:708 (1) sorry nazi
01:22:110 (1) - add a finish(slider end)
01:38:291 (1) - this slider extend about 1/4 rhythm? I think better your rhythm.
02:14:873 (1) - add a finish.

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2012-11-03T18:00:39+00:00

Hey

!

Thanks for your Modd Lizsig, it really helped me a lot.

Last edited by Irreversible 2012-11-03T19:35:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

RLC

Elite Mapper

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RLC 2012-11-03T19:28:09+00:00

bomber34 wrote:
[Somnambulist]
00:22:077 (5) - Instead of this short slider try Hitcircle. They have a better flow changed
00:51:976 (6,7,8,1) - I miss some Hitsounds. Maybe clap on (1) changed
02:01:272 (4,5,6) - dunno these claps feel meh i think i'll keep them lol
02:15:811 - until end. pointless green inherit lines oops totally forgot about removing these

Lizsig wrote:
00:37:320 (1) - add a finish(slider start)
00:48:342 (5,1,2) - try this rhythm? I think fits your rhythm pattern.
SPOILER (click to toggle)
01:02:412 (3) - perfectly stack by 01:01:708 (1) sorry nazi
01:22:110 (1) - add a finish(slider end)
01:38:291 (1) - this slider extend about 1/4 rhythm? I think better your rhythm.
02:14:873 (1) - add a finish.

all changed lol

Kurisuchianu wrote:
[Somnambulist]
00:10:587 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I didn't catch the rhythm there, please change the hitsounds. i think i'll leave this
00:32:630 (3) - Look nice like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470783 i don't see anything wrong with overlap sorry
00:37:789 (2) - Please no overlap, and make it like ^
00:41:072 (1) - ^
00:45:293 (2) - ^ and the others.
01:19:530 (3) - i didn't read it very well, please reduce this slider.
01:23:283 (1) - Bad slider is bad please fix as these sliders 01:27:035 (1) - 01:30:787 (1) - 01:42:512 (2) - 01:45:795 (1) - 01:51:892 (4) - 01:56:348 (2) oops, the inherited timing sections broke lol, fixed
02:07:135 (4,5,1) - doesn't look nice. changed

thanks guys

Tenshichan

595 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2012-11-05T19:44:07+00:00

M4M From my queue~

[Easy]

00:10:118 (2) - 1 grid down
00:13:870 (2) - 1 grid up
00:14:808 (1) - 1 grid down
00:20:905 (4) - Only repeat it once, and add a note at 00:22:312 instead, for better flow
00:44:355 (5,6) - Make them to a slider; Fits better to the song
00:49:514 (2,1) - Imo you should give those sliders a slight curve, just straight doesn't look soo good
00:56:549 (1) - Please fix the spacing here, for aesthetics
01:07:336 (1,2,3,4) - (4) isn't in the line, and it looks odd, probably fix this pattern that for example (2) is a bit left, but regard the spacing
01:15:309 (1) - Spacing
01:26:097 (1) - Move to: x:412 y:300
01:27:973 (1) - 1 grid down
01:28:442 (2) - 2 grid down

[Normal]

00:13:870 (2) - Try better spacing here
00:27:002 (3,4) - This is better
00:28:409 (2,3) - Try this?
01:25:862 (1) - Don't make it repeat, and add a slider from 01:26:566 to 01:26:800
01:43:450 (4) - Pretty tricky note for a normal diff, maybe change it?

[Hard]

00:10:118 (1) - Give it a curve, to make it fit to the previous sliders
00:10:587 (1,2,3,4) - It's users preference, but I would recommend not to stack them
00:14:339 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:16:215 (3) - Doesn't look sexy because of wrong spacing, adjust it a bit
01:02:881 (6) - Move it under (5)?
01:29:145 (10) - Not straight please? To fit with the flow of the next slider pattern
01:31:725 (4) - ^
01:37:118 (1) - Make it go around (2) more smooth
01:46:264 (1,2) - Don't know if intended or not, but this spacing is a bit confusing
01:52:361 (1,2) - Move them in a perfect line with the slider end of (4)?
01:53:064 (3) - Imo this note should be at 01:52:830
01:56:113 (5) - This note disappears unter the slider edge, which doesn't make it look so sexy
01:58:696 - Unsnapped green line
01:59:396 (2) - Fix spacing, because it looks weird
02:07:369 (2) - Imo you should move it under the slider end, or to the middle

[Somnambulist]

00:10:587 - I think this 2 streams would look better if they are not in a straight line, but maybe its just a matter of taste
00:13:401 (3) - Let it end at 00:13:635, it doesn't sound right imo, or probably add a note sandwiched between those 2 sliders
00:17:153 (2,3) - I would suggest to arrange this like (4), (5) and (1)
00:35:796 (2) - Let it begin on the white tick and delete (3)
00:39:196 (1,2,3,4) - Random note placement; Arrange them better
00:54:673 (2) - Make it parallel to (1) and (3)
01:30:318 (3) - Don't make it overlap with (1)
01:38:760 (2,1) - Random jump, please fix it
01:47:671 (1) - This slider looks ugly, you can do it better
02:14:873 (1) - Random placement for the last note, re-arrange it

[Insane]

00:30:988 (4) - CTRL + G for better flow
01:02:881 (11) - I don't like this slider and it doesn't really fit to the map, so maybe you should consider to change it
01:38:291 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern seems a bit off to me
01:56:348 (1) - If this is supposed to be a heart ... then please make it better xD

nice Insane

Good luck with your map! The song is really awesome!

+ Star

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2012-11-11T16:07:39+00:00

Tenshichan wrote:
M4M From my queue~

[Easy]

00:10:118 (2) - 1 grid down
00:13:870 (2) - 1 grid up
00:14:808 (1) - 1 grid down
00:20:905 (4) - Only repeat it once, and add a note at 00:22:312 instead, for better flow
00:44:355 (5,6) - Make them to a slider; Fits better to the song
00:49:514 (2,1) - Imo you should give those sliders a slight curve, just straight doesn't look soo good
00:56:549 (1) - Please fix the spacing here, for aesthetics
01:07:336 (1,2,3,4) - (4) isn't in the line, and it looks odd, probably fix this pattern that for example (2) is a bit left, but regard the spacing
01:15:309 (1) - Spacing
01:26:097 (1) - Move to: x:412 y:300
01:27:973 (1) - 1 grid down
01:28:442 (2) - 2 grid down
[Normal]

00:13:870 (2) - Try better spacing here
00:27:002 (3,4) - This is better
00:28:409 (2,3) - Try this?
01:25:862 (1) - Don't make it repeat, and add a slider from 01:26:566 to 01:26:800
01:43:450 (4) - Pretty tricky note for a normal diff, maybe change it?
[Hard]

00:10:118 (1) - Give it a curve, to make it fit to the previous sliders
00:10:587 (1,2,3,4) - It's users preference, but I would recommend not to stack them
00:14:339 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:16:215 (3) - Doesn't look sexy because of wrong spacing, adjust it a bit
01:02:881 (6) - Move it under (5)?
01:29:145 (10) - Not straight please? To fit with the flow of the next slider pattern
01:31:725 (4) - ^
01:37:118 (1) - Make it go around (2) more smooth
01:46:264 (1,2) - Don't know if intended or not, but this spacing is a bit confusing
01:52:361 (1,2) - Move them in a perfect line with the slider end of (4)?
01:53:064 (3) - Imo this note should be at 01:52:830
01:56:113 (5) - This note disappears unter the slider edge, which doesn't make it look so sexy
01:58:696 - Unsnapped green line
01:59:396 (2) - Fix spacing, because it looks weird
02:07:369 (2) - Imo you should move it under the slider end, or to the middle
[Somnambulist]

00:10:587 - I think this 2 streams would look better if they are not in a straight line, but maybe its just a matter of taste
00:13:401 (3) - Let it end at 00:13:635, it doesn't sound right imo, or probably add a note sandwiched between those 2 sliders
00:17:153 (2,3) - I would suggest to arrange this like (4), (5) and (1)
00:35:796 (2) - Let it begin on the white tick and delete (3)
00:39:196 (1,2,3,4) - Random note placement; Arrange them better
00:54:673 (2) - Make it parallel to (1) and (3)
01:30:318 (3) - Don't make it overlap with (1)
01:38:760 (2,1) - Random jump, please fix it
01:47:671 (1) - This slider looks ugly, you can do it better
02:14:873 (1) - Random placement for the last note, re-arrange it
[Insane]

00:30:988 (4) - CTRL + G for better flow
01:02:881 (11) - I don't like this slider and it doesn't really fit to the map, so maybe you should consider to change it
01:38:291 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern seems a bit off to me
01:56:348 (1) - If this is supposed to be a heart ... then please make it better xD
nice Insane

Good luck with your map! The song is really awesome!
+ Star

Danke für den Star & den mod

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RLC

Elite Mapper

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Joined August 2011

RLC 2012-11-11T16:13:00+00:00

hello

Tenshichan wrote:
[Somnambulist]

00:10:587 - I think this 2 streams would look better if they are not in a straight line, but maybe its just a matter of taste i think i'll leave this, as the lines made by the streams and the next slider fit
00:13:401 (3) - Let it end at 00:13:635, it doesn't sound right imo, or probably add a note sandwiched between those 2 sliders ok shortened
00:17:153 (2,3) - I would suggest to arrange this like (4), (5) and (1) i changed 00:19:967 (5,6,1) - , now there's a better rhythm pattern lol
00:35:796 (2) - Let it begin on the white tick and delete (3) that's the rhythm here though
00:39:196 (1,2,3,4) - Random note placement; Arrange them better made into parallelogram
00:54:673 (2) - Make it parallel to (1) and (3) isn't it already? i went and adjusted it a little just to be sure
01:30:318 (3) - Don't make it overlap with (1) i like that kind of overlap /runs
01:38:760 (2,1) - Random jump, please fix it oh the reason that jump seemed random was because i forgot to make the other ones jumps... changed now lol
01:47:671 (1) - This slider looks ugly, you can do it better done
02:14:873 (1) - Random placement for the last note, re-arrange it
placed under (1)

thank you~

Moway

1,143 posts

Joined January 2012

Moway 2012-11-26T17:54:47+00:00

Hi, M4M

General

Remove the (Short Ver.) from your title. Ranking rules say that you can't have this.

01:22:345- I think its better for the kiai to begin here, even though the vocal
part begins before the downbeat, the music starts here and that's when the
song should be exciting, not when there is just vocal

Easy

on your easy difficulty, you want to have basically the same distance spacing
between everything. I'd suggest also maybe upping the distance spacing to 1.0
just to spread things out a bit to make them easier to read. With the low SV
this shouldn't be a problem. Just go through the map with distance snap on
and move everything.

00:07:304- unnecessary green line, remove and change the red line volume to 50%
00:17:153(1)- remove NC
00:36:320(1)- finish
00:51:378(1)- whistle on end
01:03:115(3)- NC
01:22:345-01:54:237- your comboing is a bit inconsistent in the kiai. Sometimes
you have it NC on every new measure, sometimes every two measures. Pick one
or the other and stick to it. I'd suggest having a NC every two measures since
you did that in the rest of the song.

Normal

AR+2, with SV 1.4 the approach rate needs to be higher

Things in general seemed cramped on this diff, maybe use distance snap of 1.2 instead of 1.0

00:07:303-00:14:808- you need to add some hitsounds here, I'd suggest using the
standard soft-whistle since you used it as a slidertick on Easy diff
00:07:303- same as easy
00:12:932(1)- remove NC to be consistent with previous combo
00:16:560(5)- NC
00:31:692(5)- NC
00:35:444(3)- NC
00:49:045(6)- NC
00:49:749(1)- remove NC
00:53:266(2,3,4)- these sliders are a bit ugly.maybe try something like this.
http://puu.sh/1uzaf
01:05:460(4)- NC
01:13:902(3,4,1)- This is a bit cramped for my liking. Try this. http://puu.sh/1uzbq
01:20:234(1)- This finish is slightly jarring. Lower the volume of this
01:31:256(1)- remove NC
01:31:725(2)- NC
01:33:366(1,3)- These sliders are kind of ugly as well. What I did at 00:53:266(2,3,4)
can also work here if you like that shape.
01:41:808(1)- remove NC
01:42:746(3)- NC
02:00:803(4)- NC

Hard

00:07:303-00:14:808- you need to add some hitsounds here, I'd suggest using the
standard soft-whistle since you used it as a slidertick on Easy diff
00:10:118(1)- remove NC
00:11:056(6)- NC
00:11:525(1)- remove NC
00:14:339(1)- remove NC
00:14:808(5)- NC
00:27:940(5)- NC
00:29:816(1,2,3,4)- anti jumps don't really fit this part of the song, space
them normally or make them jumps I think.
00:36:382(3,4,5)- use distance snap of 0.7 or 0.8 when you have 1/16th note sections
00:40:368(1)- remove NC
00:41:306(2)- NC
00:42:948(7)- NC
00:54:439(5)- NC
01:06:867(3,4,5,6,7)- distance snap of 0.7 or 0.8
01:15:075(1,4)- try this shape. http://puu.sh/1uzw9
01:16:358(7)- NC
01:34:070(2)- clap
01:46:264(1)- remove NC
01:48:609(5)- NC
01:50:250(4)- remove NC
01:56:448- unsnapped green line

Somnambulist

00:28:878(1)- remove NC
00:49:280(3,4)- make spacing here consistent. The current spacing makes it
look like these circles are played in a different way than they are.
02:07:369-02:14:873- I'd cut this part to stay consistent with the times of
all the other difficulties.

Insane

HP+1, AR-1. I don't think AR9 fits this song really since it's only 128 bpm.
00:26:767(1)- remove NC

incomplete mod, pm me if I forget to come back

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2012-11-26T18:34:15+00:00

Thanks for the mod, changed most of it ~

Last edited by Irreversible 2013-01-10T18:10:34+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2012-11-30T19:18:19+00:00

Well sorry for delay lol..
But please don't push it next time >.< Really difficult for me if I'm busy

[General]

Inconsistency in tags. Normal has tags, other diffs don't. You will have to fix it
Inconsistency in preview time for your guest diff. Fix it.
I highly suggest you to use a silent Sliderslide, it sounds noisy during gameplay. Use one like http://puu.sh/1w2el

[Easy]

In general, this diff lacks of hitsounds. You could add whistles on pretty many good places or just use costume hitsounds if you want to. But like this it's too empty and odd to hear.
Actually, Distance snap is strange. 8,5 is low. A bit too low. Like this it actually gets more boring for beginners, as 1,0 would be perfectly acceptable for this song. With this DS, nice blankets and symmetric are difficult nearly impossible to work nicely.
00:14:808 (1,2) - This transition plays odd. Having an angle which is on a fully other direction as circle plays rarely good. Consider changing Slider's angle up
00:20:905 (4) - Remove whistle from Sliderbody, it sounds noisy and strange on this part
00:23:719 (1,1,1,1) - Note patterns like this are kinda really random placed. In general I would really recommend to think for a good formation or a neat pattern here.
00:46:700 (4) - Slidershape looks ugly. This is mainly because you didn't put effort on a symmetric shape nor on a nice waving. Some tweaking with this would be appriciated
01:00:301 (1,2) - Sliders like this are actually used to blanket each other, but this is not really possible due to your low DS
01:05:929 (5) - Again, this Slidershape could really use more effort as it looks pretty crumbled at the moment.
SPOILER
01:11:557 (1) - Slidershape ugly, needs more effort
01:13:433 (3) - This one also of course as it is a copy of above one
01:24:221 (1) - Hm, actually fine, but if you pulled the first red point more down, you'd have a better Slider here
01:33:601 (1) - Ugly needs more effort
And so on and so on. Well, this needs mainly work on Slidershape. While regular shapes are pretty much fine, more complex shapes are starting to look poor which could be fixed with creating them with more effort. Also like mentioned the DS is too low - while I'm pretty sure 8,5 is unrankable due you can't create it with Editor. Hitsound on start is missing and empty, but rhythm is pretty fine here ~

[Hard]

00:33:568 (1) - Double repeat plays really odd here. Just changing to 2 Sliders would create a better sulution while you should be aiming to get a nice flow here.
00:35:444 (1) - Well, now these Slidershapes are the ones you should be improving. While they are not unrankable and such, you can surely create neater ones with 2 Sliderpoints or even using the new Slider tool
00:41:541 (3) - And these ones aswell, the edges are looking too sharp to create a nice Slider, they should look more like
SPOILER
00:49:045 - Listen closely and you will notice that here is a sound. So making 1 a repeating kick Slider would be a sulution more pleasing sulution according to the music
00:55:846 (9) - Absoultely not fiting the music. Also such Sliders on red ticks play really bad when not following the music, you should remember that.
01:02:881 (6) - This stack with 5 is much too hard to play for a hard. Confuses really much and the hitburst is not a combination you should be using on a hard difficulty.
01:11:323 (1,2) - Such small wave Sliders flow bad. Really bad, you should keep complex shapes for longer Sliders.
01:14:606 (4) - As this is a circle and not a Slider, this is confusing. Really confusing as hitbursts are making the whole pattern confusing enough, I highly suggest unstacking here
01:37:118 (1) - Add finish on start to keep consistency to previous part and emphasize the strong beat.
01:38:994 (5) - Remove repeat and focus on white ticks as the music is playing there (and vocal too)
Slider cleaning up is needed here. Also pattern could be neater if you put more effort on them. Currently rhythm and placement looks a bit wry to be honest, but I'm sure this can be fixed with some mods.

Well, for here some general advice :3

Good luck~

Irreversible

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Topic Starter

Irreversible 2012-12-31T23:12:49+00:00

Hey, thanks for the mod

I really kinda changed everything on these two Maps, i "remaked" them xD

So i need some new mods

Thanks Konei ^^;

Z-Aune

Z-Aune 2013-01-13T19:53:05+00:00

Hey~

Almost nothing, sorry :' < (And i don't know if it's better or not haha. What ever :3)

Normal

00:49:749 - The beatspacing is too far, even if that's a new combo :3

Hard :

00:55:846 (9) - You should move the slider to x:140; y:36 or something like that.
01:00:301 - New combo
01:29:145 - Remove this new combo

Irreversible

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Topic Starter

Irreversible 2013-01-13T21:38:09+00:00

At least something

Thank you

RLC

Elite Mapper

1,006 posts

Joined August 2011

RLC 2013-01-13T22:50:50+00:00

took another look

chatlog

15:40 Irreversible: hey
15:40 Irreversible: can you re-mod my capsule map?
15:40 Irreversible: i think after your post i can ask a mat @@
15:40 RLC: re-mod
15:40 RLC: what do you mean
15:40 Irreversible: like
15:40 Irreversible: check everything again
15:40 Irreversible: you already modded it once
15:40 RLC: b-but
15:40 RLC: if i already modded it once 
15:40 RLC: i really won't be of much use to recheck it
15:40 Irreversible: i made easy normal and hard new
15:40 RLC: the only people that usually recheck are people that bubble / pop bubbles
15:40 Irreversible: and the hitsounds are differnet in insane
15:40 Irreversible: so i changed a lots of thinks
15:41 Irreversible: things*
15:41 Irreversible: @__@
15:41 RLC: ok..
15:41 Irreversible: well you don't have to do it now
15:41 Irreversible: and you would get 2 kudos xD
15:41 RLC: i'll do it in a sec
15:41 RLC: lol
15:41 Irreversible: well..
15:41 Irreversible: but do it good? =D xD
15:41 RLC: wat
15:41 RLC: i do it
15:42 RLC: how to do it bad
15:42 RLC: or do it good i don't know
15:42 RLC: i'll just do it
15:42 Irreversible: dunno
15:42 Irreversible: if you write
15:42 Irreversible: normal : 00:123:19191 - new circle
15:42 Irreversible: thats it
15:42 Irreversible: xD
15:44 RLC: i'll mod it here
15:44 RLC: and then post the log in the thread
15:44 Irreversible: ok
15:44 Irreversible: wait
15:44 Irreversible: if i come online you start
15:44 Irreversible: XD
15:44 RLC: wat
15:44 RLC: wut
15:44 Irreversible: kk
15:44 Irreversible: xF
15:44 Irreversible: xD*ç
15:45 RLC: ok
15:46 RLC: was the Easy remapped
15:46 Irreversible: yeh why?
15:46 RLC: or just the Normal and Hard
15:46 RLC: oh
15:47 RLC: 00:25:126- this part here
15:47 RLC: feels really sparse and pretty boring
15:47 RLC: [Easy]
15:47 RLC: you have a break right after it, so you might as well put some more stuff in it
15:48 Irreversible: uhm
15:49 Irreversible: so i should put more things in it?
15:49 Irreversible: xd
15:49 RLC: that's what i think yeah
15:49 Irreversible: like
15:49 Irreversible: on every white tick?
15:50 RLC: that would be too boring
15:50 RLC: also something i'm noticing
15:51 RLC: by looking through your Easy and Normal is that
15:51 RLC: the difficulty of the rhythm is about the same
15:51 RLC: it's all 1/1 stuff
15:51 RLC: the only main difference
15:51 RLC: is that Normal is spaced more and the SV is higher
15:51 Irreversible: is the kiai time
15:51 Irreversible: xD
15:51 Irreversible: someone said my normal is too hard for a normal.. so i put normal+
15:52 RLC: yeah this is too hard for a Normal indeed
15:52 RLC: you have a lot of 1/2s in there
15:52 RLC: ok wait
15:52 RLC: 00:29:816- to 01:01:708- 
15:53 RLC: your rhythm in [Normal] 
15:53 RLC: is almost entirely 1/1
15:53 RLC: and it's kind of repetitive
15:54 RLC: i'm trying to think of how
15:54 RLC: you could make it more interesting
15:54 Irreversible: ok i made the part in easy with sliders and circles now
15:55 RLC: that's good
15:55 RLC: i'll take another look once you update later
15:56 RLC: oh you already updated
15:56 Irreversible: yeah
15:56 Irreversible: but i have another problem
15:56 Irreversible: i used a different DS at the very begin
15:56 Irreversible: -.- xD
15:57 RLC: lol
15:57 Irreversible: maybe thats ok
15:57 RLC: you should probably keep consistent DS throughout but w/e
15:57 Irreversible: [i bet its not]
15:57 Irreversible: xD
15:57 RLC: 00:28:878 (3)- i would
15:57 RLC: add a repeat to this slider
15:57 Irreversible: @ easy?
15:57 RLC: it feels much better having the break start at 00:29:816- 
15:57 RLC: yeah in easy
15:58 Irreversible: ki
15:58 Irreversible: oki
15:58 Irreversible: made that
15:58 Irreversible: xD
15:58 RLC: ok
15:58 RLC: oh oh oh
15:58 RLC: you know what would make your Easy both more easier and more interesting?
15:58 RLC: removing some notes
15:58 RLC: here, lemme tell you a few
15:58 Irreversible: oki
15:59 RLC: hmm
16:00 RLC: wait first i notice this
16:00 RLC: 01:00:301 (6)- the reverse on this slider
16:00 RLC: may be concealed by the hitburst of 00:58:894 (4)- 
16:00 RLC: and that's unrankable
16:00 RLC: however
16:01 RLC: it MAY happen to be far enough away in time... but to be safe, i would move it so that they're not on top of each other
16:01 Irreversible: no
16:01 Irreversible: its ok i guess
16:02 Irreversible: i just tested
16:02 Irreversible: o.
16:02 Irreversible: o:
16:02 RLC: ok
16:02 RLC: 00:39:899- go to this time
16:02 RLC: i'm going to give yo ua screenshot of my timeline
16:02 RLC: which is positioned at this time
16:03 RLC: http://puu.sh/1NmYi
16:03 RLC: try this rhythm?
16:03 RLC: (the middle of that screenshot is the time i posted, where my line is)
16:04 Irreversible: done
16:04 RLC: ok
16:04 RLC: and do the same thing here:
16:04 RLC: at
16:04 RLC: 00:43:652- 
16:04 RLC: screenshot:
16:04 Irreversible: and tell me if the placing looks shit or smth
16:05 RLC: http://puu.sh/1Nn1h
16:05 RLC: lol first let's take care of the rhythm, that's more important
16:05 Irreversible: kk
16:05 RLC: the placement looks ok
16:05 Irreversible: ehm
16:05 Irreversible: your screenshot
16:05 Irreversible: o,o
16:05 RLC: what about it
16:06 Irreversible: are you sure its 00:43:652?
16:06 Irreversible: xD
16:06 RLC: the middle of my screenshot
16:06 RLC: where my line is
16:06 RLC: is 00:43:652- 
16:06 RLC: not the beginning of the screenshot
16:06 Irreversible: ah
16:06 Irreversible: i didn't get that the slider should be longer
16:06 Irreversible: xD
16:07 RLC: yeah, that's what i'm suggesting
16:07 RLC: the same as the previous suggestion
16:07 Irreversible: uff wait
16:07 Irreversible: oh the one before is longer?
16:07 Irreversible: xD
16:07 RLC: um....
16:07 RLC: let's go back...
16:07 Irreversible: got it now
16:08 Irreversible: no its ok
16:08 RLC: ok
16:08 Irreversible: i got it
16:08 Irreversible: silly me
16:08 RLC: ok
16:08 Irreversible: xDD
16:08 RLC: lolo
16:08 Irreversible: let me place
16:08 RLC: ok
16:08 RLC: does this rhythm sound good to you? if not, you don't have to use it lol
16:09 Irreversible: yepp
16:09 RLC: ok
16:09 RLC: the song actually does the same things again
16:09 RLC: 00:54:204 (3)- if you listen here
16:09 RLC: and stuff
16:10 RLC: whether you change those too is up to you
16:11 Irreversible: kk
16:11 RLC: 01:33:601 (1)- it seems like you want this slider to be wavy
16:11 RLC: but it doesn't really look wavy
16:11 RLC: it looks straight unless you look reallyreally closely lol
16:11 RLC: so make it a bit more wavy i gues :p
16:11 RLC: *guess
16:12 Irreversible: XD
16:12 Irreversible: kk
16:12 Irreversible: also i'm not sure with the hitsounds later [in the other diffs]
16:12 Irreversible: xD
16:13 RLC: hm
16:13 RLC: 01:41:574 (1,2)- i would move these
16:13 RLC: to make the (2) centered
16:14 RLC: since that slider is symmetric in a way that feels like it should be centered
16:14 Irreversible: IT HITS THE HP BAR THEN
16:14 Irreversible: caps
16:14 RLC: then move stuff down
16:14 RLC: lel
16:14 RLC: adjust the stuff around it as necessary
16:15 Irreversible: kk
16:15 Irreversible: xD
16:15 RLC: ok easy looks ok
16:15 Irreversible: yaay
16:16 RLC: this Normal does indeed look hard for a Normal
16:16 RLC: but i'm not sure i like the Normal+ title
16:16 RLC: it's just weird
16:16 RLC: and you don't see that on ranked maps usually
16:16 Irreversible: special things are always good
16:16 Irreversible: xdd
16:17 RLC: nope
16:17 *RLC runs
16:17 RLC: hmm
16:17 RLC: yeah the rhythm here
16:17 RLC: is really similar to the rhythm in easy..
16:17 RLC: hmm
16:18 RLC: at the beginning of this diff
16:18 RLC: you use some 1/2s
16:18 RLC: but in the section following 00:37:320-  you start using entirely 1/1 rhythm and it gets really boring
16:18 RLC: since you already threw in some 1/2s in the beginning, i would suggest throwing in some more to make it less repetitive
16:18 RLC: but not too many, since this diff is already pretty hard
16:18 RLC: for a Normal
16:18 Irreversible: well i don't know
16:19 Irreversible: what we should do:
16:19 Irreversible: put some 1/2's of kiai time
16:19 Irreversible: and put them into the other parts
16:19 Irreversible: xD
16:19 RLC: well
16:19 RLC: 00:37:320- this part is just really really repetitive
16:19 RLC: i would definitely change it somehow
16:19 RLC: adding 1/2s seems like a natural way
16:20 RLC: oh
16:20 RLC: here's an idea
16:20 Irreversible: i just put 1/2's every third time or smth
16:20 Irreversible: xDD
16:20 RLC: ...
16:20 RLC: please have pattern please
16:20 RLC: here try this
16:20 Irreversible: ok ok
16:20 Irreversible: xDD
16:20 RLC: 00:40:368- a note here
16:20 RLC: 00:44:121- here
16:20 RLC: 00:47:873- here
16:21 RLC: do you see the rhythmical pattern i'm getting at?
16:22 Irreversible: ah
16:22 Irreversible: yeah
16:22 RLC: ok
16:23 RLC: 01:06:398- position yourself at this time
16:23 RLC: here's a screenshot:
16:23 RLC: http://puu.sh/1NnuM
16:23 RLC: 01:06:398 (2)- i suggest you change this slider to be like that lol
16:23 RLC: it fits the music more
16:24 Irreversible: ho
16:24 Irreversible: yeah
16:24 Irreversible: even if i liked the other as well
16:24 Irreversible: this is bette
16:24 Irreversible: rXD
16:24 RLC: lolol
16:24 RLC: 01:18:592 (1)- 
16:24 RLC: even though it doesn't make that much of a difference, i'd rather this spinner start at 01:18:592- 
16:25 RLC: it just feels more in time
16:25 RLC: if you get what imean
16:26 RLC: 01:27:738 (1,2,3,4)- this is really hard
16:26 RLC: for a Normal, i think
16:27 Irreversible: hm
16:27 RLC: 01:50:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)- i would DEFINITELY replace parts of this with sliders
16:27 RLC: and stuff 
16:27 Irreversible: someone told me that too
16:27 Irreversible: XD
16:28 RLC: lol
16:28 RLC: 02:01:976 (2,1)- this rhythm on the red ticks
16:28 RLC: is really hard
16:28 RLC: and may throw people off
16:28 RLC: even though it's only two notes
16:29 RLC: i would resist
16:29 RLC: starting stuff on red ticks
16:29 Irreversible: 01:51:657 (6)- i dunno how to place that
16:29 RLC: since it's a bit unintuitive for normal-players lol
16:29 Irreversible: xD
16:29 RLC: hmm
16:29 Irreversible: ah wait
16:29 RLC: lolol
16:29 RLC: i'll check it again after you update later
16:30 RLC: ok i'm going to move on to the [Hard]
16:30 RLC: was the Hard remapped
16:30 Irreversible: yupp
16:30 RLC: ok
16:30 RLC: i'm going to test it on DT
16:30 Irreversible: especially theh itosunds
16:31 Irreversible: hitsounds
16:32 Irreversible: ..
16:32 Irreversible: i wanted a spoilerbox in my submit test
16:32 Irreversible: text
16:32 Irreversible: look what i've done
16:32 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/1NnI1
16:32 Irreversible: xDDD
16:32 RLC: oh this looks nice
16:32 RLC: this Hard, 
16:32 RLC: that is
16:33 RLC: oh
16:33 RLC: to do spoilerbox
16:33 RLC: do [spoilerbox] [/spoilerbox]
16:33 RLC: not [spoiler] [/spoiler]
16:33 RLC: lol
16:33 Irreversible: XD
16:33 RLC: ok this hard looks
16:33 RLC: really good yo
16:33 RLC: just a few things
16:33 RLC: 00:55:142 (8,9)- threw me off a lOT
16:34 RLC: pls change
16:34 Irreversible: xD
16:34 Irreversible: OKAY <.<
16:34 Irreversible: xD
16:34 Irreversible: u really like the hard? lol xD
16:35 RLC: it's pretty nice
16:35 RLC: 01:06:867 (3,4,5,6,7)- 
16:35 RLC: this spacing seems a bit much for a Hard
16:35 RLC: make the stream tighter
16:35 RLC: from 01:30:318-  to 01:32:897- 
16:36 RLC: the rhythm you have with the one-repeat sliders is really weird... i wuold change it
16:36 RLC: i'll come back to this in a second
16:36 Irreversible: oh
16:36 Irreversible: yeah
16:36 Irreversible: i was angry about that since it threw of my hitsounds-strategy
16:36 Irreversible: xDDD
16:36 RLC: 02:00:100- same here
16:36 RLC: also really weird
16:36 RLC: should change
16:37 RLC: at the very end you might as well do this http://puu.sh/1NnR5
16:37 RLC: since you already have 1/4 in this diff
16:38 Irreversible: ok i'll change those weird sliders tomorrow
16:38 RLC: ok
16:38 RLC: oh wow
16:38 RLC: now that i look at the [Insane]
16:39 RLC: i really feel like it should be AR8 and not AR9
16:39 RLC: AR9 is just really too high for this low bpm
16:40 Irreversible: well o,o
16:40 Irreversible: xD
16:43 RLC: i like these new hitsounds
16:43 RLC: sec i'm going to try DTing the Insane with AR8
16:43 Irreversible: at the kiai time
16:43 Irreversible: i took this clap clap combination from your diff
16:43 Irreversible: xD
16:45 RLC: lolol
16:45 RLC: 01:01:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6)- 
16:45 RLC: this spacing is really confusing
16:45 RLC: you've used a number of streams that are spaced like that
16:45 RLC: and yet those are separated by 1/2
16:45 RLC: not 1/4
16:45 RLC: i would just spread them out lol
16:45 Irreversible: well
16:45 Irreversible: if you look
16:45 Irreversible: you can see that its not a stream
16:45 Irreversible: xD
16:46 Irreversible: and its not like that the song is like super fast
16:46 Irreversible: and you fucking can't stop
16:46 Irreversible: omggg miss
16:46 RLC: >doubletime
16:46 Irreversible: ..its .. easy
16:46 Irreversible: xd
16:46 Irreversible: oh
16:46 Irreversible: XD
16:46 RLC: it's just going to piss off a lot of people
16:46 RLC: on DT
16:46 RLC: another reason why the spacing is weird is that
16:46 RLC: 01:01:708 (1,2,3,4,5)- these are really close together
16:46 RLC: and suddenly
16:46 RLC: (6)
16:46 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/1No61
16:46 Irreversible: look at that evil pattern
16:46 Irreversible: 4 is under 2
16:46 Irreversible: Xd
16:46 RLC: where is that
16:47 Irreversible: this what we've talked before
16:47 RLC: i actually find that easier to read than this packed 1/2 lol
16:48 RLC: 01:56:348 (1)- such a fat heart LOL
16:48 RLC: anyway, [Insane] looks solid, as it did before
16:48 RLC: the new hitsounding is nice
16:48 RLC: i'm going to skip my diff because... it's my diff lel
16:49 Irreversible: no you have to modd it
16:49 Irreversible: xD jk
16:49 RLC: lolol

B2IN

B2IN 2013-01-14T03:13:09+00:00

hi~ Irreversible :3

[General]
tag : i think that 'J-Pop' is not necessary.
[Hard]
00:14:808 (5) - remove whistle. add finish and increase volume to 80%.
00:22:077 (5) - NC 00:22:312 (1) - remove NC
00:55:846 (9) - some weird beat. you could do this instead ?

01:29:614 (1) - add finish on slider start.
01:44:388 (10,1) - arrangement for a more smooth flow ?
[Somnambulist]
00:49:749 (1) - hidden repeat arrow here. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/568361 .
01:37:118 (1) - add finish on slider end. same as 01:22:110 (1).
[Insane]
00:15:042 (1) - remove finish on slider start ? sounds better.
01:25:628 (1,2,3) - you should space 1.0x
01:25:862 (2) - if follow above suggestion, move to x324 y76 will more interested.

gl ~

Irreversible

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Topic Starter

Irreversible 2013-01-15T16:59:55+00:00

Hey

Ty for your mod, nearly changed everything (in my diffs)
I think I'll leave J-Pop o.o

cirno-_old

cirno-_old 2013-01-16T18:57:41+00:00

IRC mod

SPOILER

12:33 Irreversible: cirnoo
12:33 Irreversible: wanna mod my map?
12:33 Irreversible: xD
12:34 cirno-: "/np it

12:34 cirno-: is it this?
12:34 *cirno- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/185176 capsule - dreamin dreamin]
12:36 cirno-: ... you dissapeared
12:37 Irreversible: nuh
12:37 Irreversible: i'm just doing homework
12:37 Irreversible: and yeah it is
12:37 cirno-: ok
12:37 *cirno- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/180194 capsule - dreamin dreamin [Insane]]
12:37 Irreversible: i hope
12:37 Irreversible: xDD
12:37 cirno-: 00:59:363 (5) - unrankable I think
12:37 Irreversible: i'm just semi afk
12:37 Irreversible: nah
12:37 Irreversible: thats ok
12:37 cirno-: 00:54:204 (7) - few grids lower for flow
12:38 cirno-: 01:21:172 (1) - I like this

12:39 Irreversible: yeah thats cool
12:39 Irreversible: and i made this other one
12:39 Irreversible: xD
12:40 cirno-: Some of the jumps felt a little awkward but I think that might be because I play nothing but hard jump maps recently
12:41 *cirno- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/185176 capsule - dreamin dreamin [Somnambulist]]
12:41 cirno-: 00:29:112 (2) -
12:41 cirno-: this should be here 00:27:940 (1) -
12:42 cirno-: 00:29:347 (3,4,5) - then these where 00:28:174 (2) - is
12:44 Irreversible: eh
12:44 Irreversible: yeah i can't help you with that sincei ts a guest diff
12:44 Irreversible: btw do you wanna make /savelog here? for kduso
12:45 cirno-: Sure but I'll do that later, checking all diffs

I'll post for his diff too.
12:46 *cirno- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/179881 capsule - dreamin dreamin [Hard]]
12:46 cirno-: 01:14:606 (4) - consider default DS
12:47 cirno-: 01:58:224 (7) - same
12:48 cirno-: 02:07:369 (2) - and that too probably more so since it's the last note
12:49 *cirno- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/180043 capsule - dreamin dreamin [Normal+]]
12:50 cirno-: 01:13:902 (3) - this could use a clap on slider end
12:51 *cirno- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/179848 capsule - dreamin dreamin [Easy]]
12:52 cirno-: 00:28:878 (3) - remove clap on the big tick. it doesnt sound good
12:53 cirno-: whistle if you want something there
12:53 cirno-: 01:00:301 (6) - clap slider end
12:54 cirno-: that's all I got

small mod for GD in there too:
00:29:112 (2) - this should be here 00:27:940 (1) -
00:29:347 (3,4,5) - then these where 00:28:174 (2) - is

GL~ star

Irreversible

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Topic Starter

Irreversible 2013-01-16T19:38:17+00:00

Thanks cirno

Fixed the things

!

RLC

Elite Mapper

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Joined August 2011

RLC 2013-01-23T05:54:03+00:00

hi
sorry for absence ;;
http://puu.sh/1Rq9o pretty much all changes made

cirno- wrote:
small mod for GD in there too:
00:29:112 (2) - this should be here 00:27:940 (1) -
00:29:347 (3,4,5) - then these where 00:28:174 (2) - is

i prefer the flow reversal... but I have moved things a little (the second pattern is now a triangle instead of the same pentagon)

wcx19911123

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Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2013-01-27T17:50:10+00:00

from my queue, sorry for the huge delay, I have some download problems this days..

[General]
preview time is different in Somnambulist diff, this need to be fixed
kiai time is not the same in all diffs, it's not a must but it's better to make them the same in all diffs

[Easy]
01:00:301 (6) - hope you can change a direction of the slider, to make the reverse arrow not hide under the circle. though this arrow is kinda visible when playing, this pattern is not friendly to newbies

[Normal+]
this diff's SV is really too high imo..
00:33:099 (6,1) - don't know why you add a jump here, here sounds no difference in the music
00:44:121 (5) - you need to make this circle up a bit, the spacing here is too large
00:49:045 (7,1) - wrong spacing here
01:20:000 - the spinner should end at here or at 01:20:234 - , right?
01:45:326 (2,3,4) - the circles and the head of the slider are not on a line, it'll looks better to put them on a line
01:58:693 - I don't know why you slow down the patterns from here, this is really too suddenly.. and the following sliders, wich has many times repeating, is too hard to read when they end, this's really confusing. especially the patterns like this 02:01:976 - , a circle 1/2 after a reverse slider, this is too hard to know when the slider end and when to click the circle, cuz you used different repeating times on every similar slider.. this part need to remap a bit

[Hard]
I don't know your difficulty setting now, the HP is much higher than OD in this diff, but OD is much higher than HP in Normal+ diff.. this feels strange. I suggest HP+1 on Normal+ and HP-1 on this diff
01:14:606 (4,1) - this anti-jump is kinda hard to read, and don't fit the song well imo, hope you can use normal spacing here
01:32:194 (8,10) - they can stack better
01:51:657 (4,1) - this pattern looks not good imo, putting circle near a single-repeat slider's arrow makes people hard to read the rhyme. put the circle to x:48 y:316 will looks much better
01:58:224 (7,1) - same as 01:14:606 (4,1) - , anti-jump here doesn't fit the song well imo

[Somnambulist]
the slider sounds really odd to me in this diff, why not use the soft-sliderslide.wav?
OD need to +1, it's too low to be set in an Insane diff
00:51:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this streams seems not on a perfect straight line, you can make it better
this diff is interesting, the speed changing is kinda fun. for better to read the speed changing patterns, I suggest you to use a special combo color on every speed-up pattern(white seems nice), and don't use that color on normal parts, it'll be much easier to read the speed change then

[Insane]
HD+1 plz, it's too low for an Insane
00:35:678 (2,3,4) - this spacing is kinda too huge imo, I suggest you to make 00:34:506 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this pentagon bigger, and stack this notes in the middle, would be better to play
00:59:363 (5) - this shape is kinda hard to read, you'd better to make the knot smaller
01:02:646 (5,6) - why not use 1.5x spacing as usual here? this spacing looks really odd
01:42:981 (2,3) - this rhyme sounds not fit the song too much, I suggest add a note at 01:43:215 - , and change 01:43:333 (3) - to a note at 01:43:450 -

that's all, map still need much works now imo

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-01-29T15:33:28+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
from my queue, sorry for the huge delay, I have some download problems this days..

[General]
preview time is different in Somnambulist diff, this need to be fixed
kiai time is not the same in all diffs, it's not a must but it's better to make them the same in all diffs

[Easy]
01:00:301 (6) - hope you can change a direction of the slider, to make the reverse arrow not hide under the circle. though this arrow is kinda visible when playing, this pattern is not friendly to newbies i don't think that's necessarily, since the slider is fully seen when it appears.. and 4 is already dissappeard then e.e

[Normal+]
this diff's SV is really too high imo.. that's why it's normal+
00:33:099 (6,1) - don't know why you add a jump here, here sounds no difference in the music fixed
00:44:121 (5) - you need to make this circle up a bit, the spacing here is too large fixed
00:49:045 (7,1) - wrong spacing here fixed
01:20:000 - the spinner should end at here or at 01:20:234 - , right? yupp xD
01:45:326 (2,3,4) - the circles and the head of the slider are not on a line, it'll looks better to put them on a line done
01:58:693 - I don't know why you slow down the patterns from here, this is really too suddenly.. and the following sliders, wich has many times repeating, is too hard to read when they end, this's really confusing. especially the patterns like this 02:01:976 - , a circle 1/2 after a reverse slider, this is too hard to know when the slider end and when to click the circle, cuz you used different repeating times on every similar slider.. this part need to remap a bit i changed it

[Hard]
I don't know your difficulty setting now, the HP is much higher than OD in this diff, but OD is much higher than HP in Normal+ diff.. this feels strange. I suggest HP+1 on Normal+ and HP-1 on this diff fixed
01:14:606 (4,1) - this anti-jump is kinda hard to read, and don't fit the song well imo, hope you can use normal spacing here fixed
01:32:194 (8,10) - they can stack better fixed
01:51:657 (4,1) - this pattern looks not good imo, putting circle near a single-repeat slider's arrow makes people hard to read the rhyme. put the circle to x:48 y:316 will looks much better fixed
01:58:224 (7,1) - same as 01:14:606 (4,1) - , anti-jump here doesn't fit the song well imo fixed

[Insane]
HD+1 plz, it's too low for an Insane
00:35:678 (2,3,4) - this spacing is kinda too huge imo, I suggest you to make 00:34:506 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this pentagon bigger, and stack this notes in the middle, would be better to play i like it this way.
00:59:363 (5) - this shape is kinda hard to read, you'd better to make the knot smaller i leave it o:
01:02:646 (5,6) - why not use 1.5x spacing as usual here? this spacing looks really odd dunno why, changed
01:42:981 (2,3) - this rhyme sounds not fit the song too much, I suggest add a note at 01:43:215 - , and change 01:43:333 (3) - to a note at 01:43:450 -
that's cool ^^
that's all, map still need much works now imo if you say this, you should bring a lot more suggestions, or at least tell me where the "bad" parts are, so i could change them.

still - thank you ^^

Momochikun

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Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2013-02-01T22:24:18+00:00

M4M Time~

Easy
00:07:304 (1) - Whistle
00:10:587 (3) - Whistle
00:13:401 (2) - Whistle
00:14:339 (4) - Whistle
00:18:091 (5) - Remove fin
00:18:560 (1) - Add fin at the tail
01:33:601 (1) - lol ? this tail clap it's for normal. change it
01:44:857 (1) - I think this spinner doesn;t fit the song
01:59:865 (3) - Clap here
02:00:334 (4,5) - Remove clap from the head, add it to the tail

Normal
00:11:056 (1) - Fin here ?
00:44:355 (6) - Remove the clap from the head then add it to 00:44:121 (5)
00:49:983 (2) - Remove fin
00:54:204 (3) - ^

Hard
01:47:905 (4) - ^
01:52:361 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bad rthym. the drum doesn't hit there

Somnambulist
Remove the sound of sliderslide
01:10:619 (7) - ^
01:20:703 (2) - Remove clap
01:31:256 (2) - Remove clap
01:31:256 (2) - Remove clap

Insane
Fine ^^ just reduce the hitsound volume

Good Luck~!

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-02-02T00:40:47+00:00

Hi o/

Consider this a "random" mod :v

[General]

The Preview Time is not the same in all diffs
Easy, Normal+, Hard and Insane

PreviewTime: 81856

Sonambulist

PreviewTime: 82110

[Easy]

00:07:304 (1,2,3,1) - This is aesthetical, these are spaced 1.00x but the rest of the song is spaced 1.20x, not a problem but looked weird to me.
00:20:905 (4) - What about removing a repeat and adding a circle in 00:22:312 ?
00:46:700 (4) - This is a bit curious.
00:56:549 (1) - Make the curve here open in the opposite side, leading the flow to the next circles.

01:00:301 (6) - The reverse arrow is slightly covered with the hitburst of 00:58:894 (4), correct this please
01:13:433 (3) - Make this a bit inclined to the right /

01:49:547 (2) - No clap in the start of this?

"Nazi", feel free to follow or not
01:05:929 (3) - Move the 2nd node around x:220 y:104 and the red one around x:184 y:128, it gives a nice effect while playing and passing over the tick.

01:24:221 (1) - Move the 1st red around to x:308 y:268 and the 2nd around x:360 y:328
01:28:442 (2) - Move the red node around x:120 y:232

[Normal+]
Name this Normal and increase HP Drain and OD by 1, 3 is too low for both.
00:10:118 (4,5,1) - This flow doesn't look good, it may destroy your symetric pattern, but it'll look better if you make (5) and (1) follow the curve given by (4)

[Hard]
Maybe increase OD by 1.
AR goes up by 1, it makes easier to read the objects, specially jumps and antijumps.
00:10:587 (2,3,4,5,6) - I recommend not stack many circles like this, you can arrange it in a linear way, or decrease stack leniency a bit.
00:14:339 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:52:328 - Add a finish in the end
00:55:846 (9) - Make it a 1/2 beat slider and move it to the large white tick 00:56:080, and add a circle in 00:55:846,
01:31:959 (7,8,9,10) - This back and forth looks a bit weird, try moving (9) around x:264 y:364, keeping (10) stacked
02:00:100 (4,5,6) - Check your claps here.

[Insane]
00:48:576 - Add a circle here.
00:59:363 (5) - This looks good but it completely destroys the flow imo. This shape would be better to play as it doesn't return.

248,72,59363,2,0,B|312:72|312:72|328:92|328:92|328:52|328:52|344:72|344:72|444:72,1,250,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:56:348 (1) - This shape is on purpose?

Nothing to say in RLC's diff, it played nice.

That's all from my part, good luck :3

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-02-02T01:50:55+00:00

Hey you both! Thanks for the mod. I'll changed nearly everything

Too lazy to write what I didn't change, but as i said, i fairly changed all things.

Yuki-kun

568 posts

Joined December 2010

Yuki-kun 2013-02-06T07:29:16+00:00

Hi~

Just some small error but can make your map become Unrankable.

+ Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 81856
- [Hard] : 81856
- [Insane] : 81856
- [Normal+] : 81856
- [Somnambulist] : 82110

+ Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:345, ends on 01:52:126

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:110, ends on 01:52:126

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:110, ends on 01:52:126

- [Normal+] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:345, ends on 01:52:126

- [Somnambulist] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:110, ends on 01:52:361

+ In my opinion, you can add more hitsound to make map better. I can see you only use default whistle and clap in some part. That's too boring. Why don't you try to use finish and another custom hitsound? Because it's your feeling after all so i won't mod it here. If you want some suggestion, PM me in-game instead. xD

> My mod <

[Easy]

01:22:110 - Unecessary timing point.

[Hard]

01:56:448 - Green timing here not only unsnapped but also unecessary.

[Normal+]

00:51:390 (2) - finish at end of slider.

[Somnambulist]

[Insane]

Nothing here ATM :3

Well then, good luck

qkenan

134 posts

Joined October 2010

qkenan 2013-02-08T10:01:23+00:00

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion

Mod from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

Easy

00:10:118 (2,3) - Unconsistant DS

Normal

00:16:684 (1,2,3,4) - Unconsistant DS
00:23:250 (4) - ^
00:25:126 (4) - ^
01:09:212 (1) - Do not suggest to use repeat slider over 1 time in Normal diff

Hard

01:22:110 Kiai time should start from long while line
Keep consistent with other diffs (except Guest diff)
00:35:444 (1) - Align the head and the end
00:36:382 (3) - ^
00:36:968 (4,5) - Closer
emmm. arent you a little lazy to make hard diff ?
the latter part of this diff doesnt have the quality it ought to do.

Somnambulist

00:35:444 (1,2,3) - Place them closer like one next to another ? Current placing may confuse player.Just suggestion.
01:02:881 (4,5) - Slider ends at (384,136) seems better.So does the ⑤circle
Good work

Insane

01:22:110 Kiai time should start from long while line
Keep consistent with other diffs (except Guest diff)
00:22:077 (5,6,1) - Place them closer ?
00:48:576 (4,1,2,3,4) - Diffilcult to read the pattern.Suggest to place the ①② / ④⑤ farther from ③ or reduce the distance of the two doubles
00:57:018 (4,5,1,2) - Rotate them so as to make them towards the top ？like “↗↖”
01:19:530 (5) - Remain the previous ds plz
01:21:876 (3) - Suggest to place it farther as the sv very fast here
01:46:029 (4,5,6) - Why the triple placed so far from each other...
I like this diff. Very nice and fits the music well.Some details can be improved but it's still very awesome.

Good luck with rank ~

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2013-02-08T15:34:41+00:00

Hi, M4M!

General

Make sure the kiai starts 01:22:110 - on every diff

Easy

00:22:312 (5,1) - Reverse NC, so it matches the melody
00:24:188 (2) - NC to keep it consistent
00:26:064 (4,1) - Reverse NC
00:27:940 (2) - NC for consistence
01:00:301 (6) - To follow your combo pattern NC here
01:24:221 (1) - Remove NC, it not needed

Normal+

Normal only is fine for the diff

01:22:110 - Combo should start here
02:06:666 (1,2) - Move them opposite the previous pattern so it doesnt go to far up into the Health Bar, also the circle 2 feels wrong when its placed under the slider, move it above it then

Hard

00:19:498 (3,4) - Keep the spacing normal here please
00:27:940 (5,6,7) - ^ it is not consistent
01:32:897 (11,1) - Tiny spacing change fix this
01:43:919 (8,9,10) - ^ keep it consistent
01:48:374 (1,2) - ^

1st Insane

I advise you to use Slider tick rate 2! So the slider speed changes are more readable

00:08:711 (3,1) - The spacing here is also inconsistent, make normal spacng
00:25:712 (5) - Circle is too much, remove it
00:34:037 (1,1) - Combo spam, remove them two
01:45:795 (1) - NC is unnecessary
02:14:873 (1) - ^

2nd Insane

I advise you to use Slider tick rate 2! So the slider speed changes are more readable

00:26:298 (1) - Remove NC, too much
01:21:172 - Sliderspeed change is too sudden, add a SB warning or make it different or just delete it
01:36:649 (1) - Remove NC
01:40:870 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Combo spam, reduce it

GL

Irreversible

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Topic Starter

Irreversible 2013-02-08T17:49:08+00:00

Yuki-kun wrote:
Hi~

Just some small error but can make your map become Unrankable.

+ Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 81856
- [Hard] : 81856
- [Insane] : 81856
- [Normal+] : 81856
- [Somnambulist] : 82110 thanks, this is confusing @@~

+ Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:345, ends on 01:52:126

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:110, ends on 01:52:126

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:110, ends on 01:52:126

- [Normal+] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:345, ends on 01:52:126

- [Somnambulist] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:22:110, ends on 01:52:361 fixed
+ In my opinion, you can add more hitsound to make map better. I can see you only use default whistle and clap in some part. That's too boring. Why don't you try to use finish and another custom hitsound? Because it's your feeling after all so i won't mod it here. If you want some suggestion, PM me in-game instead. xD

> My mod <

[Easy]

01:22:110 - Unecessary timing point.

[Hard]

01:56:448 - Green timing here not only unsnapped but also unecessary.

[Normal+]

00:51:390 (2) - finish at end of slider.

[Somnambulist]

[Insane]

Nothing here ATM :3

fixed everything

Well then, good luck

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2013-02-08T18:44:17+00:00

was just quickly looking over this map and noticed a totally unrankable pattern

on insane
01:20:469 (4,1,2) - this speed up its totally blind, no slider ticks, no visible or musical reason or anything, sorry but this pattern must be deleted and remapped with no speed up. im shocked the mat who posted did not notice such a huge error tbh but yes, it needs changing before this map can go anywhere within the ranking process

also naming a diff normal+ is pointless

just had to post to get it fixed *ninjas out*

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-02-08T18:59:40+00:00

qkenan wrote:
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
Mod from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

Easy
00:10:118 (2,3) - Unconsistant DS

Normal
00:16:684 (1,2,3,4) - Unconsistant DS
00:23:250 (4) - ^
00:25:126 (4) - ^
01:09:212 (1) - Do not suggest to use repeat slider over 1 time in Normal diff

Hard
01:22:110 Kiai time should start from long while line
Keep consistent with other diffs (except Guest diff)
00:35:444 (1) - Align the head and the end
00:36:382 (3) - ^
00:36:968 (4,5) - Closer
emmm. arent you a little lazy to make hard diff ?
the latter part of this diff doesnt have the quality it ought to do.

Somnambulist
00:35:444 (1,2,3) - Place them closer like one next to another ? Current placing may confuse player.Just suggestion.
01:02:881 (4,5) - Slider ends at (384,136) seems better.So does the ⑤circle
Good work

Insane
01:22:110 Kiai time should start from long while line
Keep consistent with other diffs (except Guest diff)
00:22:077 (5,6,1) - Place them closer ?
00:48:576 (4,1,2,3,4) - Diffilcult to read the pattern.Suggest to place the ①② / ④⑤ farther from ③ or reduce the distance of the two doubles
00:57:018 (4,5,1,2) - Rotate them so as to make them towards the top ？like “↗↖”
01:19:530 (5) - Remain the previous ds plz
01:21:876 (3) - Suggest to place it farther as the sv very fast here
01:46:029 (4,5,6) - Why the triple placed so far from each other...
I like this diff. Very nice and fits the music well.Some details can be improved but it's still very awesome.

Good luck with rank ~ thanks ! i nearly changed everything, but i sometimes didn't agree with you. (for example in normal or easy D:) pm me if you wanna know more details.

BounceBabe bei dir habe ich alles rote geändert, und auch das andere~

jericho2442 wrote:
was just quickly looking over this map and noticed a totally unrankable pattern

on insane
01:20:469 (4,1,2) - this speed up its totally blind, no slider ticks, no visible or musical reason or anything, sorry but this pattern must be deleted and remapped with no speed up. im shocked the mat who posted did not notice such a huge error tbh but yes, it needs changing before this map can go anywhere within the ranking process

also naming a diff normal+ is pointless

just had to post to get it fixed *ninjas out* ..changed

RLC

Elite Mapper

1,006 posts

Joined August 2011

RLC 2013-02-08T23:37:28+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
I advise you to use Slider tick rate 2! So the slider speed changes are more readable TR2 seems too much for this... I think white colorhaxing will suffice?

00:08:711 (3,1) - The spacing here is also inconsistent, make normal spacng players are naturally carried farther when exiting a slider because of momentum
00:25:712 (5) - Circle is too much, remove it no, there is something in the music there
00:34:037 (1,1) - Combo spam, remove them two the pattern is neater with NC
01:45:795 (1) - NC is unnecessary SV change

changed everything else. thanks everyone!

http://puu.sh/1ZwRX

Low

2,006 posts

Joined July 2011

Low 2013-02-09T19:52:09+00:00

From my queue. You also asked me to take a good look at the hitsounds, so... yeah. This is more of a check for hitsounds over anything.

[General]

The kiai times are slightly inconsistent on the easy difficulty and RLC's difficulty. Make them start on the same spot and end at the same place in each difficulty.

[Easy]

00:13:870 (2,3,1) - Form a triangle pattern with these like this so that (2) doesn't overlap with (1). It also looks neater.
00:18:560 (1) - Remove the finish from the end of this slider, but not the clap. It doesn't fit the music.
00:39:196 (4) - There should be a clap at the end of this slider. Follows your hitsound pattern and it's in the music.
01:00:301 (1) - ^
01:03:115 (1) - What happened to all of the claps on this slider..?

There's quite a few odd hitsounds in this difficulty. There's also a few missing claps, which I mentioned above. Overall, this difficulty feels rather bland because it's just constant 1/1 the entire time, and most patterns are really linear.

[Normal]

00:11:056 (1) - Remove the finish from this. It doesn't fit the song here at all.
00:11:056 (1,2,3,4,1) - Form a perfect pentagon with these.
00:40:603 (7) - All of the sliders that look like this are really odd. I suggest changing it.
01:04:757 (3) - Clap on the reverse of this slider.

The hitsounds in the chorus for this difficulty seem really odd. Why not just put a clap on every other white tick? Also, some patterns seem sloppy and just randomly placed, like the one I mentioned.

[Hard]

The patterns, sliders, and hitsounds in this difficulty are much neater and consistent than the easy and normal. Not many complaints here.

[Insane]

Turn the AR down by 1 tick. AR9 is a bit too much for this difficulty.
00:48:811 (1,2,3,4) - Please space these closer together. I think it's silly to have 1/4 jumps this large.
01:04:288 (3) - The reverse arrow of this slider is hard to see because it's practically covered by the hitburst of 01:02:881 (6).

This difficulty flows pretty nicely. I'm still not fond of some patterns (for example, 00:28:878 (3) - reverse this slider. it matches the previous 2 in direction) and some of the hitsounds, though. You have a unique style of hitsounding, though.

[Somnambulist]

I really don't get this difficulty name.
Nothing much to say about this.

Honestly, RLC's difficulty is well made and the best difficulty in this mapset. Perhaps you can use some ideas from his mapping style to help improve your difficulties (especially the hitsound patterns. they're a bit odd). In my opinion, this difficulty needs some work, but you've come a long way since you started mapping.

Good luck! Starred.

Autumn

501 posts

Joined October 2011

Autumn 2013-02-10T07:52:15+00:00

Hi~
Mod from my queue~
Nice hitsounds

[Easy]
Good

[Normal]
01:27:504 - Clap?
01:42:512 - ^
02:02:445 - ^
Btw, improve your mapflow.Use more curve sliders!

[Hard]
00:44:590 - Remove the clap
01:47:905 - Add a clap?
02:05:493 - move this clap to 02:05:728 (Clap & finish together)

[Somnambulist]
Nice diff

Delete 00:11:173 (8) and 00:12:111 (6) then make a jump from one stream to another like this:

SPOILER

00:39:665 (3) - Clap
00:45:293 - Clap
00:47:169 - Clap

01:49:195 (3) - Delete and Stack like this to fit the vocal:

SPOILER

01:49:781 (2) - Move to the right to avoid overlap with 01:48:843 (2)

SPOILER

[Insane]
Good..nothing to mod
01:56:348 (1) - I like it

GoGoGo~~Star~

Parachute

317 posts

Joined October 2011

Parachute 2013-02-10T20:52:45+00:00

He is forcing me to post that IRC mod ._.

SPOILER

19:15 Parachute: 00:33:568 (1) - 00:35:913 (4) - hast du die whistles gelöscht was ich übrigends sehr schlecht finde weil es sich ohne die echt.. ned so toll anhört xD
19:15 Irreversible: du hast gesagt nur auf den roten linien
19:16 Parachute: ja und dann hab ich noch gesagt da und da auch xD
19:16 Irreversible: sind wieder drauf
19:16 Parachute: ok xD
19:16 Parachute: dann warte jetz.
19:16 Parachute: wow.. du hast bei den "additions" voll oft normal.. o-o
19:17 Irreversible: das ist wegen dem background clap
19:17 Irreversible: da würde der s:1 clap nicht passen
19:17 Parachute: doch.. xD
19:17 Irreversible: WHISTLESSS
19:17 Irreversible: xD
19:17 Parachute: ja hallo das isn problem
19:17 Parachute: weil da dann ein "normal" whistle kommt
19:17 Irreversible: ja das kann ich ja wegmachen
19:18 Parachute: o.o...
19:18 Irreversible: und dort wo die background claps sind bleibt sowieso nen clap
19:18 Parachute: ja.. aber... ehm
19:18 Irreversible: das wort clap nervt mich langsam
19:18 Irreversible: XD
19:18 Parachute: ok ich.. ich mach einfach mal .. o_o
19:18 Irreversible: oki
19:19 Parachute: 00:41:072 (12) - also bis da
19:20 Parachute: machst du auf jedem roten strich UND
19:20 Parachute: 00:40:603 (10) - da am anfang ein whistle
19:20 Parachute: hast? xD
19:20 Irreversible: whistle + clap?
19:20 Parachute: ja o.o
19:21 Irreversible: hab
19:21 Parachute: 00:44:824 (6) - dann bis dahin auf jedes rotes und
19:21 Parachute: 00:44:355 (2) - und 00:44:824 (6) - ein whistle o-o
19:23 Parachute: hast?xD
19:36 Irreversible: .
19:36 Irreversible: hallo
19:36 Irreversible: u.u
19:36 Irreversible: dat schock wieder
19:36 Parachute: oh man xDDDD
19:36 Parachute: 00:44:824 (6) - hast alles bis hier?
19:37 Irreversible: denk scho
19:37 Irreversible: ja
19:37 Parachute: 00:52:328 (5) - dann jetz bis da o.o
19:37 Parachute: 00:48:576 (4) - bis hierhin immer am roten balken
19:38 Parachute: 00:48:811 (1) - 00:49:162 (3) - 00:49:749 (6) - da am anfang des sliders
19:38 Parachute: 00:50:218 (1) -
19:38 Parachute: 00:50:452 (2) - da in der mitte
19:38 Parachute: 00:51:390 (1,2) -
19:38 Parachute: 00:51:859 (3,4,5) - bei den slidern immer am slideranfang xD
19:38 Parachute: sag wenn du fertig bist xD
19:40 Irreversible: bin fertig
19:40 Irreversible: können wir beim nächsten part dieses whistle-whistle pattern brauchen? =D
19:41 Parachute: was.. für whistle whistle.. bin eig schon fertig mit dem whistle dings o.o
19:41 Irreversible: ab 00:52
19:41 Parachute: ja was willst du da machen.
19:41 Irreversible: 00:53:032 (2,3) -
19:41 Irreversible: 00:53:970 (6,7) - ( slider anfang)
19:41 Irreversible: und so
19:42 Parachute: x_x
19:42 Irreversible: halt so spannung aufbauen
19:42 Irreversible: das jetzt dann kiai time kommt
19:43 Irreversible: und das es nicht lw wird

19:43 Parachute: warte.
19:44 Parachute: also ok..
19:44 Parachute: 00:53:032 (2,3) -
19:44 Parachute: 00:53:970 (6,7) -
19:44 Parachute: 00:54:908 (1) - da anfang und ende und
19:44 Parachute: 00:55:377 (2) - da anfang
19:44 Parachute: 00:55:846 (1) - anfang
19:45 Parachute: 00:56:080 (2) - anfang und ende
19:45 Parachute: 00:56:549 (3) - ende
19:45 Parachute: 00:57:018 (4) - beides
19:45 Parachute: 00:57:487 (5) - ende
19:45 Parachute: 00:57:956 (1) - beides
19:45 Parachute: 00:58:425 (2) - ende
19:45 Parachute: 00:59:129 (4) -
19:45 Parachute: 01:00:067 (1) -
19:45 Parachute: 01:00:536 (3) -
19:45 Parachute: 01:00:770 (4) - beides
19:45 Irreversible: warte bei 00:53:970 (6,7) nur slider anfang odeR?
19:45 Parachute: 01:01:239 (5) - ende
19:46 Parachute: x_x
19:46 Parachute: ehm
19:46 Parachute: so wie dus gesagt hast also denk ich mal ja xD
19:46 Parachute: 01:01:943 (2) -
19:46 Parachute: 01:02:412 (4) -
19:46 Irreversible: 00:53:970 (6,7) hallo ich bin der der im hyperlink schreiben kann @@ XDD op
19:46 Parachute: 01:02:881 (6) - ende
19:46 Parachute: xDDDDDD
19:46 Parachute: 01:04:991 (2) -
19:46 Parachute: 01:05:460 (1) - ende
19:46 Parachute: 01:07:102 (3) -
19:46 Parachute: so.
19:46 Parachute: das machst du jetz mal und sag was nicht passt >_>
19:48 Irreversible: ist das ein test?
19:48 Parachute: warum test.
19:48 Irreversible: ok ich hör mal
19:49 Irreversible: ok also:
19:50 Irreversible: 00:56:080 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - es würde passen mit dem was vorhin ist, aber klingt wie son abspielfehler also wie.. ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-hallo
19:50 Irreversible: dafür ist der nächste part echt gut
19:50 Irreversible: 01:03:584 (1,2,3) - nur find ich die claps ein bisschen plötzlich..
19:51 Parachute: also 56 würd ich auch ändern.. aber die claps.. nich xD
19:51 Parachute: 00:57:018 (4) - und 00:57:956 (1) - am ende weg o.o
19:51 Parachute: aber hört sich auch komisch an.
19:51 Parachute: ich glaub das ganze muss man 1 nach rechts verschieben xD
19:51 Parachute: 00:56:549 (3) - also ab da
19:52 Parachute: hmm passt auch ned iwie o.o
19:52 Parachute: mach mal mom.
19:53 Parachute: 00:59:363 (5) - bis dahin würd ich wieder nur rote striche machen
19:53 Parachute: o.o
19:53 Irreversible: von wo aus?
19:53 Parachute: 00:56:080 (2) - xD
19:54 Irreversible: dort aber einen lassen?
19:54 Parachute: obwohl
19:54 Parachute: ich würd 00:58:894 (3) - machen und00:59:129 (4) - da nich
19:54 Parachute: und ja da lassen xD
19:54 Parachute: wenn du das alles hast
19:54 Parachute: tu mal submitten
19:55 Irreversible: oh ja jetzt ist viel besser
19:55 Irreversible: ghey das wird ja echt was

19:55 Parachute: o.o
19:56 Parachute: 00:40:603 (10) - nich dein ernst oder xDDD
19:56 Parachute: 00:51:859 (3) - x_x
19:57 Irreversible: was is da? D:
19:57 Parachute: "normal" whistle..
19:57 Parachute: xD
19:57 Parachute: 01:04:991 (2) - da auch..
19:57 Irreversible: ist normal whistle nich so was sirenen ähnliches?
19:57 Parachute: ja.. xD
19:57 Irreversible: ich hör das gar nicht
19:57 Parachute: o.ô
19:58 Parachute: deswegen.. fandest du die hitsounds bei meiner map vll ned so schlimm XD
19:58 Irreversible: ja bei mir ist es ein soft whistle xDDD
19:58 Parachute: o..o
19:58 Irreversible: weil das normal bedeutet nur das .. es halt s ist anstatt s:1 oder so
19:58 Parachute: ne
19:59 Parachute: da isses n
19:59 Parachute: o_o
19:59 Irreversible: nein das wärs wenn oben n wäre
19:59 Irreversible: es ist aber oben s
19:59 Parachute: nein
19:59 Parachute: du hast normal hitsounds für den circle benutzt
19:59 Parachute: es is das normal whistle o.o
19:59 Irreversible: nein
19:59 Parachute: doch xD
19:59 Irreversible: den template anstatt des customs
19:59 Irreversible: ach is ja egal wenn mans nicht hört
19:59 Irreversible: nächster mat mod: man hörts deine map ist scheisse BYE
19:59 Parachute: ehm man hörts aber o_o
19:59 Irreversible: lol XD
19:59 Parachute: xDDDDD
19:59 Irreversible: ich hörs aber nicht D: XD
20:00 Parachute: ja dann geh auf die 3 circles die ich dir gezeigt hab und dann
20:00 Parachute: 00:40:603 (10) -
20:00 Parachute: da am anfang das klickst du an
20:00 Parachute: dann oben links statt normal machst du "auto"
20:00 Parachute: 00:51:859 (3) - da auch
20:00 Irreversible: also
20:00 Irreversible: bei addtitions?
20:00 Irreversible: additions
20:01 Parachute: 01:04:991 (2) -
20:01 Parachute: ja
20:01 Parachute: additions
20:01 Parachute: machst du auto
20:02 Irreversible: ok
20:02 Irreversible: gemacht
20:02 Parachute: ok xD
20:03 Irreversible: 01:56:348 (1) - DET SIEHT AUS WIEN LOLLYLUTSCHER *Q*
20:03 Irreversible: XDD
20:03 Parachute: o.o....
20:03 Parachute: spinner o-o
20:03 Irreversible: nein, slider
20:03 Irreversible: ;D!
20:03 Irreversible: XDDD
20:04 Parachute: 01:54:237 (1,2,3,4,5) - wieso hast du das verändert
20:04 Irreversible: gelungenes konterwortspiel :3
20:04 Parachute: fand ich vorhin besser o.O
20:04 Irreversible: ehm..
20:04 Parachute: spinner.. nein slider.. was soll das fürn wortspiel sein x
20:04 Parachute: xD
20:04 Irreversible: ja weil es ein slider ist und kein spinner
20:04 Irreversible: (ja ich weiss du meintest ich bin ein spinner)
20:04 Irreversible: XDDD
20:04 Parachute: oh x_x
20:04 Parachute: jetz kapier ichs xD
20:04 Irreversible: er war echt gut
20:04 Irreversible: XDD
20:04 Parachute: xDDDD
20:05 Parachute: warte mal. o.o
20:07 Irreversible: muss kurz 1 runde multi
20:12 Irreversible: und nu?
20:12 Parachute: und nu was ? ^^
20:12 Parachute: kannst wieder?xD
20:12 Irreversible: gehts weiter?
20:12 Parachute: ja xD
20:13 Parachute: bis zum refrain hab ich schonmal alles ô.ô
20:16 Irreversible: ok
20:16 Irreversible: aber der refrain mit den claps fand ich gut
20:16 Irreversible: ausser whistles
20:16 Irreversible: und paar claps
20:16 Parachute: schau ich dann noch xD
20:17 Irreversible: ok
20:17 Irreversible: los
20:17 Parachute: ja mom o_o
20:18 Parachute: 01:07:336 (5) - bis01:22:110 (1) -
20:19 Parachute: soll ich dir jetz alles einzeln aufschreiben.. omg..
20:19 Parachute: 01:07:805 (6) - clap am anfang
20:19 Parachute: 01:08:274 (7) - whistle
20:19 Parachute: 01:08:743 (1) - clap am anfang
20:19 Parachute: 01:09:212 (2) - whistle am anfan
20:19 Parachute: g
20:19 Parachute: 01:09:681 (3) - clap
20:19 Parachute: 01:10:150 (5) - whistle am anfang xD
20:20 Irreversible: also ist das meine version?
20:20 Parachute: 01:10:619 (6) - clap am anfang.
20:20 Parachute: was weiß ich nö hab viele sachen verändert.
20:20 Irreversible: eh..
20:20 Irreversible: sehr schlau
20:20 Irreversible: xD
20:20 Parachute: du hattest noch nichmal so viel hitsounds
20:20 Parachute: wihstles hattest du fast gar keine
20:20 Parachute: also was heißt hier deine version o_o
20:20 Parachute: 01:11:088 (1) - finish und whistle
20:21 Parachute: 01:11:557 (3) - clap am anfang
20:21 Parachute: 01:12:026 (4) - whistle am anfang
20:21 Parachute: und clap am ende
20:21 Irreversible: ach das is ja nich kiai time
20:21 Parachute: 01:12:964 (2) - whistle
20:21 Parachute: ja xDDD
20:21 Parachute: 01:13:433 (4) - clap am anfang
20:21 Parachute: 01:13:902 (5) - whistle am anfang
20:21 Parachute: 01:14:371 (6,7) - clap
20:22 Parachute: 01:14:840 (1) - whistle und finish am anfang
20:22 Parachute: 01:15:309 (2) - clap am anfang
20:22 Parachute: 01:15:778 (3) - whistle am anfang clap am ende
20:22 Parachute: 01:16:716 (1) - whistle
20:22 Parachute: 01:17:185 (3) - clap
20:22 Parachute: 01:17:654 (5) - whistle
20:22 Parachute: 01:18:123 (7) - clap
20:22 Parachute: 01:18:358 (1) - whistle finish am ende
20:23 Parachute: 01:18:827 (2) - whistle am ende
20:23 Parachute: 01:19:530 (5) - whistle
20:23 Irreversible: ohne finish?
20:23 Parachute: 01:19:999 (2) - clap
20:23 Parachute: wo ohne finish?
20:23 Irreversible: 18:827 und 19:530
20:23 Parachute: 01:20:234 (1) - whistle finish am anfang, whistle am ende
20:23 Parachute: ohne finish. nur das was ich dir sag^^
20:23 Parachute: 01:18:358 (1) - nur da am ende ein finish
20:24 Parachute: 01:21:172 (3) - clap am anfang
20:24 Parachute: 01:21:641 (4) - whistle
20:24 Parachute: 01:21:876 (6) - whistle finish
20:24 Parachute: 01:22:110 (1) - finish am ende.. so jetz mach das mal alles und dann o.o
20:24 Parachute: dann sag mir wies is o.ô
20:24 Irreversible: ok
20:24 Irreversible: *O*
20:24 Parachute: xD
20:25 Irreversible: omg viel besser mit clap
20:25 Parachute: xDDD
20:25 Irreversible: 01:18:358 (1,2,3,4,5) -
20:25 Irreversible: für diesen part gern nochmal die hitsounds
20:25 Irreversible: XD
20:25 Parachute: nochmal schreiben? x.x
20:25 Irreversible: sind ja nur 5
20:25 Irreversible: gern
20:25 Irreversible: xD
20:26 Parachute: 01:18:358 (1) - whistle und finish am ende
20:26 Parachute: 01:18:827 (2) - whistle am ende
20:26 Parachute: 01:19:530 (5) - whistle o.o
20:26 Irreversible: das klingt nicht gut
20:26 Parachute: bei mir schon.. xD
20:27 Irreversible: 01:19:296 (3,4) -
20:27 Irreversible: haben die nix?
20:27 Parachute: nö
20:27 Irreversible: o.o
20:27 Parachute: o-o
20:27 Parachute: was
20:28 Irreversible: klingt so leer
20:28 Irreversible: ich submitte mal
20:28 Parachute: ok xD
20:28 Parachute: mal schaun obs so is wie ichs hatte.
20:29 Parachute: o.o
20:30 Irreversible: jz
20:30 Parachute: duu
20:30 Parachute: ich hab dir schon viel weiter die hitsounds gesagt xD
20:31 Parachute: 01:22:110 (1) - bis da hatte ichs schon gesagtx D
20:31 Parachute: 01:07:102 (3) - ein finish?xD
20:31 Irreversible: hab doch
20:31 Parachute: o.o
20:31 Parachute: neee
20:31 Parachute: da soll kein finish hin o.O
20:31 Parachute: hört sich.. sehr komisch an
20:31 Parachute: bzw nach zu viel
20:31 Parachute: 01:12:730 (1) - whistle? o.o
20:32 Parachute: 01:14:371 (6,7,1) - 3 finishes ?xD
20:32 Parachute: du hättest glaub ich
20:32 Parachute: erstmal alles löschen solln bevor du meinst gemacht hast xD
20:32 Irreversible: lol
20:32 Irreversible: omg glaubs oder nicht
20:32 Irreversible: aber als ich durchgehört hab
20:32 Irreversible: fand ich die parts besonders gut
20:32 Irreversible: XDDDDD
20:32 Parachute: o_o....
20:33 Parachute: ehh..
20:33 Parachute: mach mal
20:33 Parachute: 01:14:371 (6,7) - die finishes weg..
20:33 Parachute: 01:13:902 (5) - da hast dun whistle vergessen o.o
20:34 Parachute: 01:20:703 (2) - da kommen die claps weg.. warte jetz weiß ich nichmehr wie ichs hatte x_x
20:34 Irreversible: ich finds gut
20:34 Irreversible: o,o
20:35 Parachute: ne die claps.. passen gar nich o_o
20:35 Parachute: 01:22:110 (1) - da kommt am anfang das finish weg..
20:36 Parachute: 01:20:234 (1) - also da am anfang finish und whistle und am ende whistle
20:36 Parachute: 01:20:703 (2) - da nix o.o
20:36 Parachute: 01:21:172 (3) - clap am anfang
20:36 Parachute: den rest.. müsstest du haben xD

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-02-10T20:54:08+00:00

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-02-13T17:39:59+00:00

Autumn wrote:
Hi~
Mod from my queue~
Nice hitsounds

[Easy]
Good

[Normal]
01:27:504 - Clap?
01:42:512 - ^
02:02:445 - ^
Btw, improve your mapflow.Use more curve sliders!

[Hard]
00:44:590 - Remove the clap
01:47:905 - Add a clap?
02:05:493 - move this clap to 02:05:728 (Clap & finish together)

[Somnambulist]
Nice diff

Delete 00:11:173 (8) and 00:12:111 (6) then make a jump from one stream to another like this:
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00:39:665 (3) - Clap
00:45:293 - Clap
00:47:169 - Clap

01:49:195 (3) - Delete and Stack like this to fit the vocal:
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01:49:781 (2) - Move to the right to avoid overlap with 01:48:843 (2)
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[Insane]
Good..nothing to mod
01:56:348 (1) - I like it

GoGoGo~~Star~

Thanks for the mod! I changed everything. Also, i will improve my normal~

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2013-02-14T13:57:33+00:00

Hi, M4M, actually more advising!

General

You added custom skin, so you have to keep in mind this should be complete at least circle wise. So you have to add a "lighting.png" to complete the custom circle skin.

Hard

00:21:843 (4,1) - You kept a consistent spacing at the previous pattern and then there is a different once, you should follow a normal spacing
00:37:320 (6) - Doesnt fit much, i suggest just adding a single cicle at 00:37:320
02:01:507 (6,1) - Consistent spacing please
02:03:148 (1) - Remove NC for consistence

1st Insane

Some parts are nice mapped others are so random, it needs more improvment

00:08:711 (3,1) - Like i said on previous post, tiny spacing change, not needed and super annoying in my eye, please fix this, should be consistent so it matches previous spacing
00:25:712 (5) - Too much, delete circle to fit the song, theres no related sound to it
00:29:464 (4) - ^
00:34:037 (1,1) - Remove NC, combo spam orz

2nd Insane

Also still needs improvment after all

01:30:552 (6,7,8,9) - These jumps arent fitable, and not similar, so keep them consistent

Example

that way you would have a better spacing and jump

01:35:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Example

01:46:029 (4,5,1) - ^
01:38:291 (4,1) - Not visible enough, due to overlapping each other

GL again

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Irreversible 2013-02-17T12:24:47+00:00

I'm currently remapping easy / normal. Please don't mod them, (better don't mod this map now)
Don't be confused, i'll delete the unnecessary diffs afterwarsd.

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Irreversible 2013-02-19T19:32:50+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Hi, M4M, actually more advising!

General

You added custom skin, so you have to keep in mind this should be complete at least circle wise. So you have to add a "lighting.png" to complete the custom circle skin.
i can't find this D: OTL
Hard

00:21:843 (4,1) - You kept a consistent spacing at the previous pattern and then there is a different once, you should follow a normal spacing
00:37:320 (6) - Doesnt fit much, i suggest just adding a single cicle at 00:37:320
02:01:507 (6,1) - Consistent spacing please
02:03:148 (1) - Remove NC for consistence changed everything

2nd Insane

Also still needs improvment after all

01:30:552 (6,7,8,9) - These jumps arent fitable, and not similar, so keep them consistent
Example

that way you would have a better spacing and jump
01:35:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ changed
Example
01:46:029 (4,5,1) - ^ mh.. don't really see what's wrong with my jump xD
01:38:291 (4,1) - Not visible enough, due to overlapping each other[/color] i think it's visible enough o.o i'll wait for more comments

GL again

hey..

thanks ~

Yuki-kun

568 posts

Joined December 2010

Yuki-kun 2013-02-21T03:42:18+00:00

Fully mapped
Hope you like it

http://puu.sh/25WCU

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 81856
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

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Title:dreamin dreamin
TitleUnicode:dreamin dreamin
Artist:capsule
ArtistUnicode:capsule
Creator:Irreversible
Version:Yuki's Dream
Source:
Tags:RLC J-Pop Yasutaka Nakata Toshiko Koshijima
BeatmapID:221623
BeatmapSetID:60111

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
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368,320,108843,2,0,B|320:304|320:304|272:304,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,232,109312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,232,109547,2,0,B|76:204|76:204|64:208|64:208|40:184,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,120,110016,6,0,L|152:40,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,110485,2,0,L|355:106,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,304,110954,2,0,L|413:291,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,111423,1,4,0:0:0:0:
400,64,111657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,111892,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,112126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,112244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,112361,6,0,L|153:187|135:198|80:192,2,85,4|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
376,280,113299,2,0,L|411:294|421:313|472:336,2,85,0|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
424,192,114002,2,0,B|440:96|440:96|416:48|352:48,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,124,114706,1,10,0:0:0:0:
240,195,114940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,267,115175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,195,115409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
22,122,115644,6,0,B|56:88|56:88|96:80,2,85,8|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,194,116348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
22,265,116582,2,0,B|56:299|56:299|96:307,2,85,12|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,194,117286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,117520,2,0,L|280:192,1,85,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,236,117872,1,2,0:0:0:0:
329,279,117989,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,224,118224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,120,118458,6,0,L|336:120,1,85,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,40,118927,1,2,0:0:0:0:
177,40,119162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,120,119396,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,152,119513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,200,119631,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,248,119748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,280,119865,2,0,P|160:296|208:296,2,85,2|0|12,0:0|0:0|2:1,0:0:0:0:
194,297,120569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,280,120803,2,0,P|352:296|304:296,2,85,0|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
317,297,121507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,121741,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,144,121976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,122210,1,12,0:1:0:0:
304,96,122327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,144,122445,2,0,B|232:136|232:152|152:152,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,224,123148,1,8,0:1:0:0:
192,224,123383,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,312,123617,5,4,0:1:0:0:
240,312,123852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,312,124086,1,12,0:1:0:0:
344,312,124321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,224,124555,1,4,0:1:0:0:
296,224,124790,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,224,125024,1,12,0:1:0:0:
400,224,125141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,125259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
471,152,125493,6,0,L|416:80,2,85,2|2|12,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
419,84,126197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,152,126431,2,0,L|256:152,2,85,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,40,127135,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,40,127252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,40,127369,5,4,0:0:0:0:
279,236,127604,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,114,127838,1,2,0:0:0:0:
319,114,128073,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,236,128307,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,152,128542,2,0,L|320:176,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
400,192,129011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,296,129245,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,264,129480,2,0,L|221:244,2,85,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,244,130183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,172,130418,1,2,0:0:0:0:
221,100,130652,1,8,0:1:0:0:
256,192,131121,12,4,134873,0:0:0:0:

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-02-24T20:18:30+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
I'm currently remapping easy / normal. Please don't mod them, (better don't mod this map now)
Don't be confused, i'll delete the unnecessary diffs afterwarsd.

PM When you finish re-mapping easy and normal.

Irreversible

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Topic Starter

Irreversible 2013-02-25T21:10:07+00:00

Hey there! I remapped easy and normal. But i'm not happy with my hard! And someone wanted to do a GD. So i have to wait for it .. so for every modder: Please don't mod it yet! It will be finished soon. I hope you're okay with that, if you have any questions, PM me.

SOrry for these circumstances.

Irreversible

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Topic Starter

Irreversible 2013-02-26T18:28:54+00:00

Hi!

Finally, this mapset is finished. And for now, i won't remap anything again!
For these who have to mod this map, you can do it now

Thanks in advance!

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2013-02-27T09:58:08+00:00

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• Set the same combo colors on all diffs. (use the same colors on Somnambulist diff, they're really nice)
• Set the same tags on all diffs. (also, add DakeDekaane)
• Set the same kiai on all diffs. (as you can see, it's not consistent between the diffs)

Easy

• Approach Rate: 3
• 00:18:560 (4) - Add a new combo.
• 00:22:312 (3) - ^
• 00:28:409 (4) - ^
• 00:30:000 (break) - Is this break really necessary? Delete it and map this part.
• 00:51:390 (1,2) - Delete these circles. Start a slider at 00:51:390, end it at 00:51:859 and add a repeat.
• 00:52:797 (3) - Add a new combo.
• 00:59:363 (1) - Remove the new combo here...
• 01:00:301 (2) - ...and add it here.
• 01:05:460 (7) - Add a new combo.
• 01:18:592 (1) - End this spinner at 01:21:407.
• 01:24:221 (1) - Remove the new combo.
• 01:26:097 (3) - Add a new combo.
• 01:33:601 (5) - ^
• 01:41:105 (5) - ^
• 01:48:609 (5) - ^
• 01:54:237 (3,1) - Delete (3) and start the next spinner 1/1 earlier.
• 02:00:334 (4) - Add a new combo.
• 02:02:210 (x) - Add a circle.
• 02:04:086 (1) - Delete this spinner and map this part like you did in Normal.

Normal

• 00:18:560 (5) - Add a new combo.
• 00:30:000 (break) - Is this break really necessary? Delete it and map this part.
• 00:49:045 (x) - Add a circle. (with a new combo)
• 00:49:514 (x) - Add a circle.
• 00:49:749 (1) - Remove the new combo.
• 00:54:204 (1) - ^
• 01:03:819 (8) - Add a new combo here...
• 01:04:757 (1) - ...and remove it here.
• 01:14:840 (5) - Add a new combo.
• 01:35:477 (1) - Remove the new combo.
• 01:39:229 (4) - Add a new combo.

Dekaane's REM

• 00:31:692 (5) - Add a new combo here...
• 00:32:630 (1) - ...and remove it here.
• 00:35:444 (5) - Add a new combo here...
• 00:36:382 (1) - ...abd remove it here.
• 01:18:358 (1) - End this spinner 1/2 later.
• 01:22:110 (1) - Add a new combo.

Yuki's Dream

• 00:08:242 (3,4,7,8) - Select all these circles then flip them horizontally.
• 00:14:808 (5) - Add a new combo.
• 00:23:953 (5) - Convert this slider in 3 1/4 circles and add a new combo on the last one.
• 00:48:576 (5) - Add a new combo.
• 00:55:846 (8) - Convert this slider in 3 1/4 circles and add a new combo on the last one.
• 00:59:363 (1) - Remove the new combo. End this slider at 00:59:598 and add a circle at 00:59:832 with a new combo.
• 01:03:819 (7) - Add a new combo here...
• 01:04:757 (1) - ...and remove it here.
• 01:05:460 (4) - Add a new combo.
• 01:20:234 (7) - ^
• 01:24:221 (8) - ^
• 01:27:973 (7) - ^
• 01:31:725 (6) - ^
• 01:38:994 (5) - Convert this slider in 3 1/4 circles and add a new combo on the last one.
• 01:42:512 (1) - Remove the new combo here...
• 01:42:981 (3) - ...and add it here.
• 01:50:016 (1) - Remove the new combo here...
• 01:50:485 (2) - ...and add it here.
• 01:54:002 (3) - Add a new combo.
• 01:55:644 (1) - Convert this slider in 3 1/2 circles and add a new combo on the last one.
• 01:59:865 (8) - Add a new combo.
• 02:10:887 (x) - Add a circle.

Somnambulist

Really nice, did you make this diff? If you didn't, then add the mapper's name in the diff name/tags. (I'm saying this because this diff is using a different mapping style compared to the one used in Insane, sorry if I'm wrong lol)

Insane

• 00:16:215 (x) - Add a circle.
• 00:18:091 (x) - ^
• 00:19:967 (x) - ^

Yuki-kun

568 posts

Joined December 2010

Yuki-kun 2013-02-27T16:32:30+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Yuki's Dream

• 00:08:242 (3,4,7,8) - Select all these circles then flip them horizontally. >> Fixed
• 00:14:808 (5) - Add a new combo.
• 00:23:953 (5) - Convert this slider in 3 1/4 circles and add a new combo on the last one. >> Nope. Still keep but fix combo
• 00:48:576 (5) - Add a new combo.
• 00:55:846 (8) - Convert this slider in 3 1/4 circles and add a new combo on the last one. >> Nope
• 00:59:363 (1) - Remove the new combo. End this slider at 00:59:598 and add a circle at 00:59:832 with a new combo. >> Fixed
• 01:03:819 (7) - Add a new combo here...
• 01:04:757 (1) - ...and remove it here.
• 01:05:460 (4) - Add a new combo.
• 01:20:234 (7) - ^
• 01:24:221 (8) - ^
• 01:27:973 (7) - ^
• 01:31:725 (6) - ^
• 01:38:994 (5) - Convert this slider in 3 1/4 circles and add a new combo on the last one.
• 01:42:512 (1) - Remove the new combo here...
• 01:42:981 (3) - ...and add it here.
• 01:50:016 (1) - Remove the new combo here...
• 01:50:485 (2) - ...and add it here.
• 01:54:002 (3) - Add a new combo.
• 01:55:644 (1) - Convert this slider in 3 1/2 circles and add a new combo on the last one. >> Fixed
• 01:59:865 (8) - Add a new combo.
• 02:10:887 (x) - Add a circle. >> Fixed

All combo is fixed.
Thanks for modding :3
http://puu.sh/29gaF

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-02-27T17:13:57+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• Set the same combo colors on all diffs. (use the same colors on Somnambulist diff, they're really nice) i have to for wait for this.. because it's not my diff, and he made something special with fast / slow sliders, and special color patterns xD I'll check that
• Set the same tags on all diffs. (also, add DakeDekaane) oh, yeah xD
• Set the same kiai on all diffs. (as you can see, it's not consistent between the diffs)omg.. i changed kiai time like 100 times now, i hope it's ok now -.- xDD

Easy

• Approach Rate: 3 ok
• 00:18:560 (4) - Add a new combo.
• 00:22:312 (3) - ^
• 00:28:409 (4) - ^
• 00:30:000 (break) - Is this break really necessary? Delete it and map this part. you said i should fix it, but i'm not sure about it. i think a break is okay for easy/normal, i'll think abotu it though.
• 00:51:390 (1,2) - Delete these circles. Start a slider at 00:51:390, end it at 00:51:859 and add a repeat. good idea!
• 00:52:797 (3) - Add a new combo.
• 00:59:363 (1) - Remove the new combo here...
• 01:00:301 (2) - ...and add it here.
• 01:05:460 (7) - Add a new combo.
• 01:18:592 (1) - End this spinner at 01:21:407. sure
• 01:24:221 (1) - Remove the new combo.
• 01:26:097 (3) - Add a new combo.
• 01:33:601 (5) - ^
• 01:41:105 (5) - ^
• 01:48:609 (5) - ^
• 01:54:237 (3,1) - Delete (3) and start the next spinner 1/1 earlier. done
• 02:00:334 (4) - Add a new combo.
• 02:02:210 (x) - Add a circle. ..why? xD
• 02:04:086 (1) - Delete this spinner and map this part like you did in Normal.
ok

i fixed every new combo! i'm thinking.. what i was thinking o,o' LOL so many errors -.- thanks.

Normal

• 00:18:560 (5) - Add a new combo.
• 00:30:000 (break) - Is this break really necessary? Delete it and map this part. same as easy
• 00:49:045 (x) - Add a circle. (with a new combo) yes
• 00:49:514 (x) - Add a circle. but no to this one
• 00:49:749 (1) - Remove the new combo.
• 00:54:204 (1) - ^
• 01:03:819 (8) - Add a new combo here...
• 01:04:757 (1) - ...and remove it here.
• 01:14:840 (5) - Add a new combo.
• 01:35:477 (1) - Remove the new combo.
• 01:39:229 (4) - Add a new combo.
like in easy, yes to the combos !

Somnambulist

Really nice, did you make this diff? If you didn't, then add the mapper's name in the diff name/tags. (I'm saying this because this diff is using a different mapping style compared to the one used in Insane, sorry if I'm wrong lol)
i didn't make this diff, but i think i added his name in the tags. . o,o'

Insane

• 00:16:215 (x) - Add a circle.
• 00:18:091 (x) - ^
• 00:19:967 (x) - ^ added a repeat instead of circle~

thanks for the mod!

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-02-27T18:11:37+00:00

All fixed in my diff, thanks for modding /o/

Update here: http://puu.sh/29iLN

Make tags consistent in all diffs (and add me) :v

RLC

Elite Mapper

1,006 posts

Joined August 2011

RLC 2013-02-27T23:03:24+00:00

hi http://puu.sh/29rKf combo colors updated
also can you change the gray to something else (i used white for sv colorhax)

Makyu

424 posts

Joined April 2012

Makyu 2013-03-01T20:16:02+00:00

I know I'm too late, sorry :c

[Insane]
00:15:042 (1) - Remove finish from head, and add clap
00:15:511 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:16:684 (5) - Remove finish
00:16:918 (1) - Remove finish from head
00:17:387 (2) - Made this note like this http://puu.sh/2aoFi
00:18:560 (5) - Remove finish
00:18:794 (1) - Remove finish from head
00:19:263 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:27:236 (3,4) - Spacing, made (4) a mirror of (2) http://puu.sh/2aoBp
00:29:581 (1,2,3) - This is cool, but I think is better is you move (1) x364 y248 and continue (2) and (3) with that
00:35:678 (2,3,4) - Stack this three notes in (2)
00:45:762 (3) - Stack the head in (2)'s tail and made it like this http://puu.sh/2aoQm
00:56:080 (2) - Put the tail in Y axis, and (3) too
01:00:067 (1) - Remove this note
01:08:743 (1) - Stack this note with (3)
01:12:495 (6) - Same, with (5)
01:20:234 (1) - Spacing
01:38:291 (4,1) - Those both sliders in the same position just are too confusing.
01:46:029 (4) - Spacing with previous one

[Somnabañfaj]
(Sorry I just can't write the whole name)
00:22:699 - I can't listen sounds from here D:
00:29:816 (1) - Move this note to x256 y 256
00:30:988 (4) - Put this note perfectly in the Y axis (head in x256 y240)
00:46:700 (1,2) - I think this is unrankeable because they are out of screen http://puu.sh/2apcs
00:51:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I don't see any use of this stream
00:52:563 (2) - Remove this note
01:37:822 (3) - add finish at the head

[Yuki]
01:31:490 (5) - maybe, just maube, a finish here
01:38:994 (5) - same here, at the start
01:38:994 (5) - I was expecting finish here due your previous souds patterns
Thi is soo perfect for me sorry I was useless D:

[Dekanae]
01:43:450 (6) - Ctrl+G
02:07:252 (3) - Move this to x200 y300
Same here, this is too perfect for me D:

[Normal]
01:33:601 (1) - This may confuse newbies, I was following vocals, then you follow rhythm :c
In the next sliders is the same problem
Same here, this is way a good diff for me D:

[Easy]
This diff is perfect in my head, I just couln't mod it sorry D:

I love the song

as alwways if you don't do anything, just don't give me kd
good job

OEvil

299 posts

Joined December 2012

OEvil 2013-03-01T20:48:05+00:00

Mod Easy:
00:10:118 (3) - Check this slider i thinks it is good

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635523
01:08:274 (3) - Check this slider too

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635537
01:10:150 (2) - Check this slider too

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635544
01:12:026 (2) - Check this slider too

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635545
01:15:309 (1) -

Remove the note and put a Slider here

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635550
-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
Normal Is Good Done (Checked)
Dekanae Is Good Done (Checked)
Yuki Is Very Good Done (Checked)
Somnambulist Is Good Done (Checked)
Insane Is Good Done (Checked)

And everything else is good i think.

Irreversible

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Topic Starter

Irreversible 2013-03-02T23:10:33+00:00

[quote="OEvil"]Mod Easy:
00:10:118 (3) - Check this slider i thinks it is good

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635523
01:08:274 (3) - Check this slider too

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635537
01:10:150 (2) - Check this slider too

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635544
01:12:026 (2) - Check this slider too

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635545
01:15:309 (1) -

Remove the note and put a Slider here

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635550

hey there! thanks for the mod, i didn't change the first suggestion, but i changed the other 4! good idea, thanks!

Last edited by Irreversible 2013-03-02T23:13:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Irreversible

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Topic Starter

Irreversible 2013-03-02T23:12:15+00:00

Makyu wrote:
I know I'm too late, sorry :c
[Insane]
00:15:042 (1) - Remove finish from head, and add clap
00:15:511 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:16:684 (5) - Remove finish
00:16:918 (1) - Remove finish from head
00:17:387 (2) - Made this note like this http://puu.sh/2aoFi
00:18:560 (5) - Remove finish
00:18:794 (1) - Remove finish from head
00:19:263 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:27:236 (3,4) - Spacing, made (4) a mirror of (2) http://puu.sh/2aoBp
00:29:581 (1,2,3) - This is cool, but I think is better is you move (1) x364 y248 and continue (2) and (3) with that
00:35:678 (2,3,4) - Stack this three notes in (2)
00:45:762 (3) - Stack the head in (2)'s tail and made it like this http://puu.sh/2aoQm
00:56:080 (2) - Put the tail in Y axis, and (3) too
01:00:067 (1) - Remove this note
01:08:743 (1) - Stack this note with (3)
01:12:495 (6) - Same, with (5)
01:20:234 (1) - Spacing
01:38:291 (4,1) - Those both sliders in the same position just are too confusing.
01:46:029 (4) - Spacing with previous one

this mod was good i didn't change many things though, there were some good suggestions, but i want to leave them like they are (for example the spacing, its just a jump nothing else) nevertheless, i changed some things, no worry! ;D

[Normal]
01:33:601 (1) - This may confuse newbies, I was following vocals, then you follow rhythm :c
In the next sliders is the same problem
Same here, this is way a good diff for me D:

i think this is okayo ,o

[Easy]
This diff is perfect in my head, I just couln't mod it sorry D:

thanks <3

I love the song ^-^

as alwways if you don't do anything, just don't give me kd nah, i changed some things XD
good job thanks

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-03-04T02:37:45+00:00

Took a while to get to, but I'm finally here

Overall:
I love your creative clapping, but make sure there's always a clap on the 1st and 3rd little white tick of each measure (Or beats 2 and 4, if you think of it in a music theory stance), or else it won't drive as well.
01:22:345 - Start kiai time here. You're starting it on the pick-up note right now. This also messes up the beats to be on the red ticks instead of white ticks.
Repeats on white notes look weird: http://puu.sh/2bKzb

Insane:
00:09:649 (2) - Sliders like these usually never look good, especially going upward. Change it to something simpler.
00:10:118 (3) - ^
00:11:056 (5) - Nothing in the music calls for this repeat, so remove it
00:31:457 (1,2,3) - Same as before
00:54:908 (1,2) - ^
00:56:080 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:57:956 (1,2) - ^
01:01:708 (1) - Stack this with the beginning of (3)?
01:02:881 (6) - Stack this with (1)?
01:10:619 (7) - Same as before
01:42:746 (1) - Why is this the same color as before?
01:43:215 (3,4,5) - Really awkward feel
02:11:121 (1) - Really random spinner as it starts in the middle of a musical phrase. Try to find somewhere else to put this.

Other insane with the weird name:
00:15:042 (2,3) - Really sudden jump that breaks so much from the previous pattern, confusing players in the wrong way.
00:40:134 (5) - Maybe make this a part of the jumps?
01:21:641 (4,5,6) - Really unfitting.
All of the speedups in the chorus just no
01:57:051 (1,2,3) - Really unfitting jump

Yuki:
Is this another insane or is this a hard?
00:09:180 (7) - Add NC
01:12:026 (3) - Make this curve more notable
02:11:121 (1) - Same as Insane

Remmy:
00:43:886 (4) - Can you move this to avoid overlap?
01:38:291 (1,2) - I'd prefer the overlap to be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/639183
02:11:121 (1) - Same as insane

Normal:
For this beginning part, put the whistles on 2 and 4
00:29:816 - Map this part go go go
02:06:900 (2) - Add finish on end of slider?

Easy:
00:29:816 - Map this part go go go
Majorly look at the hitsounds for this

uguu.

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-03-04T22:55:44+00:00

ty for the mod :3 i'll fix it later and tell you what i've changed xD i've already seen some good suggestions

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-03-04T23:01:14+00:00

Makyu wrote:
[Dekanae] orz
01:43:450 (6) - Ctrl+G /*Done
02:07:252 (3) - Move this to x200 y300 /*I prefer how it is arranged now.
Same here, this is too perfect for me D:

CDFA wrote:
Took a while to get to, but I'm finally here

Overall:
01:22:345 - Start kiai time here. You're starting it on the pick-up note right now. This also messes up the beats to be on the red ticks instead of white ticks.
/*I'll keep my kiai as it would look weird if it starts in the middle of a slider

Remmy:
00:43:886 (4) - Can you move this to avoid overlap? /*Done
01:38:291 (1,2) - I'd prefer the overlap to be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/639183 /*It'd kill my flow there :c
02:11:121 (1) - Same as insane /*Put circles and sliders

uguu. /*uguu for you~

Thanks both~
Update here~ http://puu.sh/2cc7E

Yuki-kun

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Yuki-kun 2013-03-05T00:44:52+00:00

Makyu wrote:
I know I'm too late, sorry :c

[Yuki]
01:31:490 (5) - maybe, just maube, a finish here >> Nope, too loud for me.
01:38:994 (5) - same here, at the start >> Nope
01:38:994 (5) - I was expecting finish here due your previous souds patterns >> Same suggestion?
Thi is soo perfect for me sorry I was useless D:

as alwways if you don't do anything, just don't give me kd
good job

Anw, thanks for the mod

CDFA wrote:
Yuki:
Is this another insane or is this a hard? >> This is Hard + :p (J/k)
00:09:180 (7) - Add NC >> Ok
01:12:026 (3) - Make urve more notable >> Ok
02:11:121 (1) - Same as Insane >> Ok

Thanks.
http://puu.sh/2ceXd

@Irreversible : If you're going to change the kiai time, change it for me too. xD

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-03-06T19:02:29+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Took a while to get to, but I'm finally here

Overall:
I love your creative clapping, but make sure there's always a clap on the 1st and 3rd little white tick of each measure (Or beats 2 and 4, if you think of it in a music theory stance), or else it won't drive as well.
01:22:345 - Start kiai time here. You're starting it on the pick-up note right now. This also messes up the beats to be on the red ticks instead of white ticks.
Repeats on white notes look weird: http://puu.sh/2bKzb

i dunno about the kiai time.. also i can't really find issues about the hitsounds xD

Insane:
00:09:649 (2) - Sliders like these usually never look good, especially going upward. Change it to something simpler. yes to these two , but not for the other ones, i'll leave them
00:10:118 (3) - ^
00:11:056 (5) - Nothing in the music calls for this repeat, so remove it it feels weird to me if i leave it
00:31:457 (1,2,3) - Same as before
00:54:908 (1,2) - ^
00:56:080 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:57:956 (1,2) - ^
01:01:708 (1) - Stack this with the beginning of (3)? done
01:02:881 (6) - Stack this with (1)? done
01:10:619 (7) - Same as before done
01:42:746 (1) - Why is this the same color as before? bug q.q fixed
01:43:215 (3,4,5) - Really awkward feel changed
02:11:121 (1) - Really random spinner as it starts in the middle of a musical phrase. Try to find somewhere else to put this. ..o,o no

Normal:
For this beginning part, put the whistles on 2 and 4
00:29:816 - Map this part go go go same as easy
02:06:900 (2) - Add finish on end of slider? done

Easy:
00:29:816 - Map this part go go go i think this break fits ><
Majorly look at the hitsounds for this i can't find any issues D:

uguu.

thanks for the mod

Itachi_Uchiha

188 posts

Joined December 2011

Itachi_Uchiha 2013-03-08T18:26:05+00:00

IRC Mod

19:12 Itachi_Uchiha: welche diff?
19:13 Irreversible: insane
19:14 Itachi_Uchiha: schaust zu`?
19:17 Itachi_Uchiha: der eine part hat mich verwirrt
19:17 Itachi_Uchiha: sek
19:18 Itachi_Uchiha: 01:14:840 (1) -
19:18 Itachi_Uchiha: den würd ich von oben nach unten kommen lassen
19:18 Irreversible: lol warum war der von unten ee
19:19 Itachi_Uchiha: ?
19:21 Itachi_Uchiha: ansonsten isses gut
19:21 Itachi_Uchiha: finds bissl lw zu spielen
19:21 Itachi_Uchiha: weil viel direkt auf den schlag kommt
19:21 Irreversible: is halt langsam xD
19:21 Itachi_Uchiha: weisst?
19:21 Irreversible: mhh nich ganz
19:22 Irreversible: ah meinst du weils halt bisschen 1/2 1/1 lastig ist?
19:22 Itachi_Uchiha: jop
19:22 Irreversible: musst ich hauptsächlich umändern weil praktisch jeder mat / bat gesagt hat
19:22 Irreversible: listen to the music
19:22 Irreversible: 1/4 isn't very good
19:22 Irreversible: also nur in manchen parts
19:22 Irreversible: aber bin iwie nich so gut für das ^^
19:23 Irreversible: deshalb lass ichs glaub einfach mal so, ausser du hast grad nen super part ^^
19:23 Itachi_Uchiha: hör net so auf deren gesang
19:23 Irreversible: muss man doch..
19:23 Itachi_Uchiha: hör merh auf die percussions im hintergrund
19:23 Irreversible: achso
19:23 Irreversible: naja, als ichs damals gemappt hab wusst ichs iwie nicht
19:23 Irreversible: xDD
19:23 Itachi_Uchiha: weil für ne insane is die ausser die snapping changes bissl lame
19:23 Itachi_Uchiha: weisst?
19:23 Irreversible: schon
19:23 Itachi_Uchiha: is merh ne hard+
19:24 Irreversible: naja, will jez aber nich so ne super insane machen

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-03-08T18:26:40+00:00

danke ^^

moonlightleaf

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moonlightleaf 2013-03-08T21:14:19+00:00

Easy

Easy

00:40:603(5)(6) new combo(1)(2)

Normal

Normal

Beat Snap Divisor please use 1/4 →http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/645435

00:48:107(6) delete

01:03:584 add note

01:04:522 add note

01:09:212(1) move to 01:09:447

01:09:916(2) delete

01:10:385 add note

01:11:088(1) move to 01:11:323

01:12:964(1) delete

01:13:199 add note

01:14:840(1) move to 01:15:075

01:16:716(1) move to 01:16:951 , 01:18:358 add note

or like this → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/645415

01:25:628(3) delete then 01:26:097(1) move to 01:25:862 just try
(if (3) do not want to delete, 01:26:097(1) move to 01:25:862 is must i think~ and add a return →https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/645424

①: 01:33:601(1) move to 01:33:366 and add a return , 01:33:132(4) Whether delete is Depends on you

01:41:105(1) the same to ↑

01:39:229(1) move to 01:38:994 end at 01:39:932

01:44:857(1) move to 01:44:622 and add a teturn

01:46:733(1) move to 01:46:498 end at 01:47:436

01:48:609(1) the same to ①

Insane

Insane

00:42:713(4) delete ?

00:46:466(4)(5) delete ?

all diffs's kika should be the same

All are my opinion , hope can help you , wish it be ranked quickly

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2013-03-10T18:25:18+00:00

IRC mod Insane

19:12 Irreversible: kannst du meine map mal testplayen? q.q
19:24 bomber34: bin gerade am speccen xD
19:24 Irreversible: oki
19:26 bomber34: lol übersetzungsfehler
19:26 bomber34: http://puu.sh/2e752
19:26 Irreversible: was sollte es sein?
19:27 bomber34: Skin
19:27 bomber34: einfach
19:27 bomber34: stattdessen wird der eintrag ausm Visual settings angezeigt
19:28 Irreversible: oh
19:28 Irreversible: sag denen das
19:28 Irreversible: xD muss kurz essen
19:28 bomber34: so was soll ich testen?
19:28 bomber34: Is bereits korrigiert aber peppy muss das updaten
19:28 Irreversible: ehm meine dreamin insane
19:35 bomber34: keine katastrophe aber die hat schon n paar schwächen :/
19:35 bomber34: es gibt unschöne overlapps.
19:35 bomber34: Spacing probleme an ein paar stellen
19:35 bomber34: und flow stimmt nicht überall
19:35 bomber34: der letzte Spinner fühlt sich total fehl am platz an
19:36 bomber34: manche patterns sind aber schön
19:36 bomber34: Hitsoundmäßig is mir nix aufgefallen ^^ heißt also das ich es mag
19:45 Irreversible: back
19:45 Irreversible: kannst du mir sagen wo?
19:47 Irreversible: einfach so schnell hier nennen, musst nicht modden (kannst rotzdem irc mod posten)
19:47 bomber34: ich spiels nochmal mit HT da fällt mir das am besten auf xD also die Stellen habs auch bereits nomod gespielt
19:47 bomber34: aber daselbe
19:47 Irreversible: also ein overlap gefällt mir selber nicht
19:47 Irreversible: nach dem stern son kurven slider
19:50 Irreversible: aber hab nich so wirklich ne ahnung wohin damit
19:51 bomber34: 00:21:843 (4,5) - füllt sich komisch an
19:51 bomber34: hätte lieber ein größeres spacing oder n stack
19:52 Irreversible: 00:37:554 (5,6,1) - so wie hier?
19:52 bomber34: ja das geht
19:52 bomber34: aber dort
19:52 bomber34: sind die früheren Hitcircle nich so weit weg
19:52 bomber34: wodurch das eher möglich is ^^
19:53 bomber34: 00:25:595 (5,1) - komischer Flow :S
19:53 bomber34: liegt hauptsächlich an der sliderform von (1)
19:54 bomber34: wenn du (1) auf X:256 und Y:312 legst und den slider zb zu test zwecken gerade machst
19:54 bomber34: fühlt es sich viel besser an
19:54 bomber34: muss halt gucken wie du dann von (1) auf (2) übergehen willst
19:55 bomber34: 00:27:002 (4,5) - spacing :S Ich hab nich gegen spacing innerhalb der kombo ändern aber die beiden sind meh. (5,6) is aber in Ordnung
19:56 Irreversible: ehm nochmal zum spacing oben
19:56 Irreversible: das ist alles iwie 0.5
19:56 Irreversible: lol
19:56 Irreversible: 00:25 änder ich
19:57 Irreversible: ja und diesen 00:27 part änder ich foglch auch xD
19:57 bomber34: 00:27 könnteste ja n slider probieren
19:58 bomber34: 00:30:519 (3,1) - behalte lieber das spacing von 00:29:581 (1,2,3) - bei
19:58 bomber34: oder leg es weiter weg
19:58 bomber34: 00:30:988 (1,2) - flow is meh. Leg (2) weiter nach oben
19:59 bomber34: will aber nich nur mekeln xD 00:33:568 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ist toll :3
19:59 Irreversible: wartee
19:59 Irreversible: XD
19:59 Irreversible: ich änder die sachen und dann schau nochmal an obs besser geworden ist xDD
19:59 Irreversible: also 00:27 ist jez fixed
19:59 bomber34: 00:41:072 (12,1) - flow
19:59 bomber34: ... meh
19:59 Irreversible: 00:29:581 (1,2,3) - ?
19:59 Irreversible: spacing von?
20:00 bomber34: das is in ordnung
20:00 bomber34: aber (3,1) is dadurch kacke
20:00 bomber34: darum sollteste (3,1) genauso halten vom spacing her
20:00 bomber34: wie (1,2,3)
20:01 bomber34: 00:41:541 (2,3) - flow. Leg (3) weiter nach oben
20:02 bomber34: 00:43:652 (7,8) - entweder fügste 00:43:886 - n circle hinzu oder du machst aus dem stack ne art jump oder irgendwas mit spacing
20:02 bomber34: 00:46:231 (4,5,6,7) - spacing von (4,5) fühlt sich etwas zu heftig an.
20:02 Irreversible: 00:41:306 (1) - wohin damit?
20:03 Irreversible: 00:43:652 (7,8) - das stacking will ich iwie lassen
20:03 bomber34: 00:46:466 (5,6,7) - leg die drei auf X:220 Y:288
20:03 bomber34: dann füg aber n circle dazwischen noch
20:04 Irreversible: da gefällt mir der flow voll zwischen
20:04 Irreversible: 00:46:700 (7,8) -
20:06 bomber34: 00:41:072 (12,1) - ... lol ka irgw.. scheint der flow doch nich so meh zu sein ka. moment.
20:06 bomber34: vllt aber (1) n tick höher mit DS 1 oder so .__.
20:07 bomber34: nichts dramatisches aber eben minimal ka
20:07 bomber34: xD
20:07 bomber34: 00:46:700 (7,8) - sag ich gar nix gegen
20:07 bomber34: is auch gut
20:07 bomber34: aber 00:46:231 (4,5) - is das problem
20:07 Irreversible: update mal
20:08 Irreversible: jez
20:08 bomber34: okay und nun?
20:08 Irreversible: 00:45:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ist iwie komisch
20:08 Irreversible: xD
20:08 bomber34: besser
20:09 Irreversible: obwohl iwie ist es schon gut xD
20:09 Irreversible: der jump zu 9 ist cool
20:09 bomber34: also 00:46:231 (4,5) - jetz
20:10 bomber34: flow is gut von 7,8,9 allerdings bin ich unsicher über das spacing von 7,8
20:10 Irreversible: habs bisschen runter genommen
20:10 bomber34: 8 vllt auf X:112 Y: 56 ? oder so
20:11 bomber34: das ging meiner meinung nach
20:11 bomber34: 00:47:404 (9,1) - flow is jetz aber schrecklich hier
20:11 bomber34: 00:47:873 (1,2,3,4) - vllt Ctrl + h?
20:12 Irreversible: oh ja das ist cool
20:12 Irreversible: o,o
20:13 bomber34: 00:51:859 (3,4,5) - weiß nich ... flow und alles is in Ordnung fühlt sich aber zu hektisch an
20:13 bomber34: vllt n tick runter im spacing?
20:13 bomber34: ka was sich da machen lässt
20:14 bomber34: 00:52:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - flow is komisch. nicht schrecklich aber auch nich gut
20:14 Irreversible: omg mein editor spackt wie behindert
20:14 Irreversible: es ist halt ein.. pentagon xD
20:14 bomber34: wobei mir 6,7 am meisten n dorn im auge is
20:15 bomber34: hab ich gemerkt das es n pentagon ist
20:15 bomber34: aber es is trotzdem meh
20:15 Irreversible: hab das hektische bisschen näher gemacht
20:15 Irreversible: aber ja du hast recht mit dem flow
20:16 Irreversible: irgendwie ist der part sowieso komisch
20:16 Irreversible: 00:52:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - kannst du mir helfen den besser zu machen? :<
20:17 bomber34: 00:56:080 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - die stelle is zwar nett allerdings würde ich 00:57:956 (1,2) - wie 00:56:080 (2,3) - setzen. Fühlt sich imo besser an. Allerdings hast du dann ein Problem mit 00:58:894 (3) -
20:17 bomber34: 00:56:080 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - die stelle is zwar nett allerdings würde ich 00:57:956 (1,2) - wie 00:56:080 (2,3) - setzen. Fühlt sich imo besser an. Allerdings hast du dann ein Problem mit 00:58:894 (3) -
20:18 Irreversible: will irgendwie von der symmetrie weg
20:18 bomber34: Die grund idee bei 0:52 sollte sein
20:19 bomber34: das du dich von (2) nach (3) nach unten bewegst
20:19 bomber34: also gegen den Uhrzeigersinn
20:19 bomber34: da der slider eins bereits gegen den uhrzeigersinn läuft
20:19 Irreversible: hm
20:19 Irreversible: wenn man das pentagon ctrl + j?
20:20 bomber34: hab bereits probiert is aber eher eh ka
20:20 bomber34: setz 00:53:032 (2) mal auf X: 52 und Y:192
20:20 bomber34: erstmals sollte der übergan von 1 zu 2 besser sein
20:20 Irreversible: gemacht
20:21 Irreversible: btw
20:21 Irreversible: hörst du das whistle pattern?
20:21 Irreversible: man könnte ja immer
20:21 Irreversible: nach den 2 whistles nne jump machen
20:21 Irreversible: obwohl nein .. bring du nen vorschlag, kommt besser raus xD
20:21 bomber34: ne bleib mal lieber bei den konstanten DS 1
20:22 bomber34: hab zwar n besseren flow gerade gefunden aber es sieht nich gut aus und es gibt n jump von 7 über 8 zu 1
20:23 Irreversible: zeig ma
20:24 bomber34: bin selber noch nich 100% zufrieden aber :<
20:24 bomber34: aber nun gut
20:24 Irreversible: ah
20:24 Irreversible: dann lass dir zeit
20:24 Irreversible: ich such auch mal
20:24 bomber34: ich kann dir schonmal die grund idee geben
20:24 bomber34: 2 auf 52 und 192 (reihenfolge wird immer X und Y bleiben >> keine Lust das ständig zu schreiben
20:25 bomber34: 3 auf 100 und 308
20:25 bomber34: 4 auf 225 und 308
20:25 bomber34: 5 auf 292 und 204
20:25 bomber34: 6 auf 212 und 108
20:25 bomber34: 7 auf 116 und 188
20:26 bomber34: 8 kann so bleiben. Führt aber zu nem jump
20:26 bomber34: jedenfalls is das schonmal meine "Flow Idee"
20:26 bomber34: wie man das jetz aber artistisch schön umsetzen soll weiß ich nicht
20:27 Irreversible: 00:52:563 (1) -
20:27 Irreversible: wenn wir den umserten?
20:27 bomber34: naja ich bin jetz davon ausgegangen das 1 so bleibt wie es ist. Ist dir überlassen
20:27 Irreversible: vllt sollte ich machen
20:27 bomber34: ich versuch nur deine Arbeit zu verbessern und nich was neues zu erzwingen

20:27 Irreversible: circle slider circle circle slider
20:28 bomber34: also der slider sollte aber trotzdem gegen den uhrzeiger sinn laufen
20:28 Irreversible: die map ist sowieso gar nicht mehr wie ich sie mal wollte
20:28 bomber34: passt besser mit dem flow von 00:52:328 (5,1) -
20:30 Irreversible: hm
20:30 Irreversible: kann ich kurz uploaden?
20:30 Irreversible: hab bne idee
20:30 Irreversible: wegn dem jump
20:30 Irreversible: gibt so nen runden flow
20:30 bomber34: ....
20:30 bomber34: es is deine Map xd
20:30 Irreversible: update
20:30 Irreversible: ich bezeichne es auch gern als: verstümmelt :d
20:30 Irreversible: xD
20:31 Irreversible: irgendwie passt es zu diesem hintergrund
20:31 Irreversible: XD
20:31 bomber34: :S
20:32 bomber34: 00:52:328 (5,1) - geht vom jump her
20:32 bomber34: fühlt sich jetz nich 100% top an ... is aber noch akzeptable
20:33 bomber34: 2 auf 56/40
20:34 Irreversible: hmm
20:34 bomber34: ich probier gerade was
20:34 Irreversible: oki
20:35 bomber34: 3 auf 8 / 156
20:35 bomber34: 4 auf 100 /240
20:35 bomber34: 5 auf 188 / 156
20:35 bomber34: äh 5 auf 192 / 156
20:35 bomber34: 6 auf 100 / 68
20:36 bomber34: frage is jetz wohin mit 7 und 8 ?
20:36 bomber34: 00:52:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is aber schonmal schön meiner meinung nach
20:37 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/2eeS6
20:37 Irreversible: sollte das so aussehen?
20:37 Irreversible: o_o
20:37 bomber34: ja
20:37 bomber34: wie gesagt 7 und 8 bilden jetz n problem meiner Meinung nach
20:38 Irreversible: hm
20:38 Irreversible: nein
20:38 Irreversible: wenn man spielt
20:38 bomber34: aber der teil davor is gut meiner meinung nach
20:38 Irreversible: ist 2 3 und 4
20:38 Irreversible: schon verschwunden
20:38 Irreversible: deswegen siehts echt gut aus
20:38 Irreversible: und 7 könnte man
20:38 Irreversible: 00:53:032 (2,6) -
20:38 Irreversible: = winkel von
20:38 Irreversible: 00:53:266 (3,7) -
20:38 bomber34: naja mach erstma xD
20:38 bomber34: ich weiß nich was du meinst
20:39 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/2eeVx
20:39 bomber34: jedenfalls geht dieser IRC mod bereits ne stunde xD
20:39 bomber34: joa
20:39 bomber34: aber was machste mit 8
20:39 bomber34: son super jump is nich das wahre
20:39 Irreversible: place ich einfach da iwo
20:39 Irreversible: xDD
20:39 Irreversible: nein das kommt wo anders hin
20:40 Irreversible: du musst nicht helfen wenn du nicht willst
20:40 Irreversible: ><
20:40 bomber34: naja xD ich hab einfach noch viel zu tuen xD
20:40 Irreversible: xD
20:40 bomber34: ich meine xD
20:40 bomber34: du wolltest nur n testplay xD
20:40 Irreversible: xD
20:41 Irreversible: 00:54:908 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - der part .. xDD
20:42 bomber34: jedenfalls das was du bereits gefixed hast is jetz alles viel besser xD
20:42 Irreversible: yay

20:43 Irreversible: und nun? D:
20:43 Irreversible: xD
20:43 Irreversible: überspringen wir 00:54:908 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - mal xD
20:43 Irreversible: falls du noch willst D:
20:43 Irreversible: xD
20:43 bomber34: lol
20:44 bomber34: 00:57:956 (1,2) - Y Achse lassen
20:44 bomber34: aber X mäßig solltest du 00:56:080 (2,3) - kopieren
20:44 bomber34: bekommst aber n problem mit 00:58:894 (3) -
20:45 Irreversible: wenn ich die 3 unten lasse
20:45 bomber34: bin kurz was essen
20:45 Irreversible: es lässt sich noch gut spielen
20:52 bomber34: naja immerhin mag jemand deine map x)
20:52 Irreversible: uh wer?
20:52 Irreversible: & wb
20:52 bomber34: ~~censored link~~
20:53 bomber34: wegen sowas sollte man mappen

nich wegen ranked
20:53 Irreversible: cool XDD
20:53 Irreversible: -freu
20:53 Irreversible: hab mal geupdated
20:53 Irreversible: musste die 2 wellenslider danach wechseln
20:54 bomber34: also ^^ nimm den ranking prozess nich so ernst ;P
20:54 Irreversible: 00:54:908 (9) - ist aber voll gefailt orz
20:55 Irreversible: den kenn ich
20:55 bomber34: 00:54:908 (9) - mach mal ctrl + h
20:55 Irreversible: ...
20:55 bomber34: ...
20:55 Irreversible: cool :d
20:56 bomber34: ...
20:56 Irreversible: :d
20:56 Irreversible:

*
20:57 Irreversible: also mit ctrl h ist es noch gut
20:57 bomber34: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/645485
20:57 bomber34: probier das mal
20:58 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/2efuc
20:58 Irreversible: ich machs so
20:58 Irreversible: omg voll gut
20:58 Irreversible: warum komm ich nich auf sowas
20:58 Irreversible: xD
20:59 bomber34: 00:57:956 (1,2) - : Kopier mal 00:56:080 (3,4) - an diese stelle
21:00 Irreversible: omfg
21:00 Irreversible: editor nerv nicht
21:00 Irreversible: ich klick auf dein time teil
21:00 Irreversible: 00:04:000
21:00 Irreversible: -.-
21:00 Irreversible: also das es zu auf zu geht?
21:00 Irreversible: oder auf zu auf
21:00 bomber34: ja. Spacing wird halt nach den ersten 2 slidern weiter
21:01 bomber34: und dann wieder kleiner
21:01 Irreversible: also klein gross kein
21:01 bomber34: ja so kann man es auch sagen
21:01 Irreversible: dsa is cool
21:01 bomber34: ka was du davon hälst ^^ gefällt mir besser als klein groß größer
21:01 Irreversible: ja das unterste war echt.. doof
21:02 bomber34: nich immer so negativ sein
21:02 bomber34: das kann ich schon gut genug
21:02 Irreversible: xD
21:02 Irreversible: 01:27:035 (4,6) - ich mag das?
21:02 Irreversible: xDDD
21:02 Irreversible: ok hab was positives gesagt xD
21:02 bomber34: HAB MATHE VERFICKT NOCHMAL GENAILED

Ne 1 Geschrieben YES!
21:02 Irreversible: angst?
21:02 Irreversible: XDD
21:02 Irreversible: nice

D
21:03 bomber34: indirekter overlapp 01:02:412 (4,6) -
21:03 bomber34: ka. mir fällts auf
21:03 bomber34: aber es spielt sich gut >.>
21:03 Irreversible: ja eben
21:03 Irreversible: ich weiss nicht wohin mit 6
21:03 Irreversible: ja eben XDD
21:04 bomber34: schweigen wir einfach drüber bis sich jemand anders beschwerd

21:04 Irreversible: warte
21:04 Irreversible: ich könnte den stern grösser machen
21:04 Irreversible: und dann ist der circle halt ganz drauf
21:04 Irreversible: find ich aber bessr als nur son halber overlap
21:05 bomber34: 01:04:288 (3,1,2,3) - geiler flow allerdings
21:05 bomber34: 01:03:584 (1,2,3) - ka
21:05 bomber34: spacing is zu gering
21:06 Irreversible: update nochmal
21:06 Irreversible: hab den overlap weggemacht
21:06 Irreversible: ist jez iwie was anderes
21:06 Irreversible: aber iwie cool XD
21:06 bomber34: ka also 01:04:288 (3,1,2,3) - sollteste lassen
21:06 Irreversible: ja
21:06 bomber34: aber irgendwas mit 01:03:584 (1,2) - machen
21:07 Irreversible: update
21:07 Irreversible: und staune
21:07 Irreversible: XD
21:07 Irreversible: ich find das hab ich gut gemacht >< XD
21:07 bomber34: top
21:07 bomber34: 1,5 h mittlerweile xD
21:07 Irreversible: hab grad voll mut geschöpft durch diese veränderung
21:07 Irreversible: XDD
21:07 Irreversible: ja egal immerhin wirds jez besser D:
21:07 Irreversible: also nicht egal D:
21:08 bomber34: also egalception?
21:08 Irreversible: ..vielleicht?
21:08 Irreversible: xD
21:08 bomber34: haben fast 50% erst xd
21:09 Irreversible: xD
21:09 Irreversible: hurra?
21:09 Irreversible: XD
21:09 bomber34: ich würde aber gerne aufhören und wann anders weitermachen. Ich saveloge den chat hier
21:09 Irreversible: okay das ist gut
21:09 bomber34: und wenn wir fertig sind poste ich beide im thread

Only first half xD lost the second one

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-03-10T18:26:30+00:00

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Frostmourne 2013-03-11T04:10:35+00:00

hi

General
remove RLC from tag since his diff doesn't belong here anymore
add "DakeDekaane" to Yuki's Dream as well
you should snap your preview time , it isn't a big deal but just to make it proper more than this
offset 7309 (+5) , the current is a bit early

Easy
01:22:345 (1) - this slider is weird , the vocal impact on 01:22:110 is heavier than the finish at this point (also you have kiai start at 01:22:110)
so I suggest you start this slider at 01:22:110 (with finish sound),and end at 01:23:283 like the old one.
01:27:973 (3) - clap tail for consistency with 01:42:981 (3) -

Normal
00:07:303 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - whistle are really mess I would say , some heavy sound , you didn't add .... some light sound , you added and some unfit
00:07:303 (1) - whistle only tail
00:08:242 (2) - ^
00:09:180 (3) - ^
00:10:118 (4) - ^
00:11:056 (1) - ^
00:11:994 (2) - ^
00:13:401 (3) - whistle
00:13:870 (4) - remove whistle
00:14:339 (5) - whistle
00:22:312 (1) - better start with finish because the music has strong sound at this point
00:29:347 (2) - clap along with finish works very well
00:52:797 (1) - this slider can be improved , the curve is not so well imo

SPOILER

00:56:549 (1) - you can use from ^ here
01:02:881 (6) - clap?
01:22:110 (1) - finish head instead of whistle like I mentioned in Easy diff
01:37:118 (1) - try adding finish at tail here
01:52:361 (1) - ^
02:06:900 (2) - end with clap is quite weird imo , ending by only finish is pretty nice

Dekaane's REM
fine

Yuki's Dream
00:24:422 (2) - move down 1-2 grid here , the spacing (overlapping) with 00:23:953 (1) - makes me confused because you did some spacing like this but different rhythm way at 00:11:056 (5,6,7) -
00:36:851 (6,7,8) - claps a bit weird here , I would add following the vocal on (6) and (7) (try playback 25%)

Insane
01:58:693 (1) - this note starts under this slider 01:56:348 (8) - , imo it doesn't look quite good , you better start at some point like in that heart
(something around x:156 y:144)

for the bubble , xxheroxx is willing to give you if you ask him. (I asked him about it yesterday) so I will leave it to him.
Good Luck!

Yuki-kun

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Yuki-kun 2013-03-11T13:47:54+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
hi

Yuki's Dream
00:24:422 (2) - move down 1-2 grid here , the spacing (overlapping) with 00:23:953 (1) - makes me confused because you did some spacing like this but different rhythm way at 00:11:056 (5,6,7) - >> Fixed in another way.
00:36:851 (6,7,8) - claps a bit weird here , I would add following the vocal on (6) and (7) (try playback 25%) >> Fixed

http://puu.sh/2fUeq

@Irreversible : Please change offset and TAG in my diff for me if you want to do that.

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-03-11T18:57:53+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
hi

General
remove RLC from tag since his diff doesn't belong here anymore
add "DakeDekaane" to Yuki's Dream as well
you should snap your preview time , it isn't a big deal but just to make it proper more than this
offset 7309 (+5) , the current is a bit early

Easy
01:22:345 (1) - this slider is weird , the vocal impact on 01:22:110 is heavier than the finish at this point (also you have kiai start at 01:22:110)
so I suggest you start this slider at 01:22:110 (with finish sound),and end at 01:23:283 like the old one.
01:27:973 (3) - clap tail for consistency with 01:42:981 (3) -

Normal
00:07:303 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - whistle are really mess I would say , some heavy sound , you didn't add .... some light sound , you added and some unfit
00:07:303 (1) - whistle only tail
00:08:242 (2) - ^
00:09:180 (3) - ^
00:10:118 (4) - ^
00:11:056 (1) - ^
00:11:994 (2) - ^
00:13:401 (3) - whistle
00:13:870 (4) - remove whistle
00:14:339 (5) - whistle
00:22:312 (1) - better start with finish because the music has strong sound at this point
00:29:347 (2) - clap along with finish works very well
00:52:797 (1) - this slider can be improved , the curve is not so well imo
SPOILER
00:56:549 (1) - you can use from ^ here
01:02:881 (6) - clap?
01:22:110 (1) - finish head instead of whistle like I mentioned in Easy diff
01:37:118 (1) - try adding finish at tail here
01:52:361 (1) - ^
02:06:900 (2) - end with clap is quite weird imo , ending by only finish is pretty nice

Dekaane's REM
fine

Yuki's Dream
00:24:422 (2) - move down 1-2 grid here , the spacing (overlapping) with 00:23:953 (1) - makes me confused because you did some spacing like this but different rhythm way at 00:11:056 (5,6,7) -
00:36:851 (6,7,8) - claps a bit weird here , I would add following the vocal on (6) and (7) (try playback 25%)

Insane
01:58:693 (1) - this note starts under this slider 01:56:348 (8) - , imo it doesn't look quite good , you better start at some point like in that heart
(something around x:156 y:144)

for the bubble , xxheroxx is willing to give you if you ask him. (I asked him about it yesterday) so I will leave it to him.
Good Luck!

hey! thanks :3
I changed everything, except the offset. Also: Dakedekaane was already in his tags o,o' also i changed preview time

Lally

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Lally 2013-03-11T19:43:29+00:00

ohai o3o/ sorry for delay

[General]

still a inconstency in tags
Incostency in combo colors, i see no reason to use in Yuki's Dream other colours

[Easy]

00:27:471 (3,4) - spacing
01:07:336 (1,2) - spacing
01:18:592 (1) - finish
01:28:911 - add here a clap since you have a slidertick
01:33:601 (1) - calp on reverse arrow and here : 01:35:008 -
01:54:237 (1) - whistle

[Normal]

00:15:746 (x) - add a circle here
00:17:153 - start here your reverse-slider 00:16:684 - atm it son't fit very much with the music
00:17:622 (x) - add a circle here too
00:29:816 - delete this line is useless same with 00:31:223 - or add here a spinner owo
01:13:902 (3) - clap on slider end
01:18:592 (1) - finish
01:37:353 - this line is useless
01:54:237 (1) - whistle

[Dakaane's REM]

what about ar +1 ?
00:44:355 - this slider looks not so nice :X same about 00:59:363 -

[Insane]

00:40:603 (10) - new combo

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-03-11T22:09:22+00:00

I changed everything except these ones:
00:15:746 (x) - add a circle here
00:17:153 - start here your reverse-slider 00:16:684 - atm it son't fit very much with the music
00:17:622 (x) - add a circle here too
00:29:816 - delete this line is useless same with 00:31:223 - or add here a spinner owo (i deleted the line though)

thanks lally o/

Yuki-kun

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Yuki-kun 2013-03-12T00:20:14+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
hey! thanks :3
I changed everything, except the offset. Also: Dakedekaane was already in his tags o,o' also i changed preview time

Because i added it yesterday xD

Lally wrote:
ohai o3o/ sorry for delay

[General]
still a inconstency in tags
Incostency in combo colors, i see no reason to use in Yuki's Dream other colours

Actually, i don't see any Inconsistency in combo color. @@
Only inconsistency in tag xD

Fixed

http://puu.sh/2gaU2

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-03-12T02:08:33+00:00

Lally wrote:
ohai o3o/ sorry for delay

[Dakaane's REM]orz
what about ar +1 ? /*Hm, maybe it works nice, let's give it a try
00:44:355 - this slider looks not so nice :X same about 00:59:363 - /*But they play nice with the noisy thing in the background

Thanks~ c:
Irre~ can you increase the AR to 8 in my diff :3?

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2013-03-12T08:29:35+00:00

Sorry for the delay! I will mod this map tomorrow!

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-03-12T13:14:25+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
Lally wrote:
Irre~ can you increase the AR to 8 in my diff :3?

yepp ;D

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2013-03-12T23:59:23+00:00

Hello Irreversible! Mod 4 Mod request from your modding queue!

[General]

(optional) Consider adding Kiai Time at 01:22:345 so AIBat don't detect this as a downbeat Kiai Time!

[Easy]

00:15:277 (1) - I know what you are trying to emphasize here, however it would be more consistent to replace this soft-clap with a soft-whistle so it has the same emphasis as 00:17:153 (1) and 00:18:560 (1) at the slider end. That way, the soft-whistles will emphasize the softer claps in the BGM and the soft-claps will emphasize the louder claps in the BGM!
00:23:250 (3) - Hmm...I suggest removing this soft-whistle at the head of this slider, since you did not add one at the end of 00:24:657 (2) or 00:27:002 (2). It would be more consistent to either remove the soft-whistle at the head of 00:23:250 (3), or add the soft-whistles at the end of 00:24:657 (2) and at 00:27:002 (2).
00:41:541 (1) - I would add a soft-whistle at the head of this slider (and the start of 00:45:293 (1)) to be consistent with 00:37:789 (1). Otherwise remove the soft-whislte at 00:37:789 (1).
00:51:390 (4) - Since the piano is starting to play here, I would add a soft-whistle at the end of this slider.
01:02:646 (4) - I can still hear the piano sounds in the BGM. I think you should add a soft-whistle here as well. :3
01:07:336 (1,2) - I would add a soft-whistle at 01:07:805 (2) instead of 01:07:336 (1), because it will be consistent with 01:09:681 (1), 01:11:557 (1) and the head of 01:13:433 (1).
01:18:592 (1) - Remove this soft-finish at the end of this spinner, since there is nothing to emphasize in the music.
01:34:851 (2) - Similar to 00:18:560 (1). I think you meant to add N:C2 instead of S:C2 on this timing section. You did so at this slider -> 00:46:700 (3).

[Normal]

00:14:808 (1) - On the end of this slider, try removing the soft-clap here? You seem to be using soft-claps to emphasize the louder claps in the BGM.
00:29:347 (2) - I would remove the soft-finish here. Even though there is a break afterwards, it is not necessary to add a soft-finish here. You didn't add one on your Easy difficulty.
00:44:355 (3) - Remove this soft-whistle to emphasize the 'skip' of the kick sounds. You did so on your Easy difficulty.
00:49:045 (1) - Replace this soft-finish with the soft-clap here, so it stays consistent with the percussions.
00:53:735 (2) - Similar suggestion as above. Replace this soft-whistle with the soft-clap here, so it stays consistent with the percussions.
00:54:673 (4) - I would add a N:C2 timing section here in order to add a clap on this slider tick.
02:05:024 (5) - Try removing the soft-finish here to be consistent with 02:01:272 (5).

[Dekaane's REM]

Everything looks fine. Nothing to suggest!

[Yuki's Dream]

Consider adding the tags in the folowing order. AIBat is marking this as inconsistent tags, because of it!
DakeDekaane J-Pop Yasutaka Nakata Toshiko Koshijima Yuki-Kun

[Insane]

00:33:333 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This star shape patten can be improved more.

That's pretty much it! Good luck for bubble!

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Irreversible 2013-03-13T11:33:12+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
Hello Irreversible! Mod 4 Mod request from your modding queue!

[General]
(optional) Consider adding Kiai Time at 01:22:345 so AIBat don't detect this as a downbeat Kiai Time!

[Easy]
00:15:277 (1) - I know what you are trying to emphasize here, however it would be more consistent to replace this soft-clap with a soft-whistle so it has the same emphasis as 00:17:153 (1) and 00:18:560 (1) at the slider end. That way, the soft-whistles will emphasize the softer claps in the BGM and the soft-claps will emphasize the louder claps in the BGM!

00:23:250 (3) - Hmm...I suggest removing this soft-whistle at the head of this slider, since you did not add one at the end of 00:24:657 (2) or 00:27:002 (2). It would be more consistent to either remove the soft-whistle at the head of 00:23:250 (3), or add the soft-whistles at the end of 00:24:657 (2) and at 00:27:002 (2).
00:41:541 (1) - I would add a soft-whistle at the head of this slider (and the start of 00:45:293 (1)) to be consistent with 00:37:789 (1). Otherwise remove the soft-whislte at 00:37:789 (1).
00:51:390 (4) - Since the piano is starting to play here, I would add a soft-whistle at the end of this slider.
01:02:646 (4) - I can still hear the piano sounds in the BGM. I think you should add a soft-whistle here as well. :3
01:07:336 (1,2) - I would add a soft-whistle at 01:07:805 (2) instead of 01:07:336 (1), because it will be consistent with 01:09:681 (1), 01:11:557 (1) and the head of 01:13:433 (1).
01:18:592 (1) - Remove this soft-finish at the end of this spinner, since there is nothing to emphasize in the music.
01:34:851 (2) - Similar to 00:18:560 (1). I think you meant to add N:C2 instead of S:C2 on this timing section. You did so at this slider -> 00:46:700 (3).
[Normal]
00:14:808 (1) - On the end of this slider, try removing the soft-clap here? You seem to be using soft-claps to emphasize the louder claps in the BGM.
00:29:347 (2) - I would remove the soft-finish here. Even though there is a break afterwards, it is not necessary to add a soft-finish here. You didn't add one on your Easy difficulty. i added a finish @ easy instead ^^
00:44:355 (3) - Remove this soft-whistle to emphasize the 'skip' of the kick sounds. You did so on your Easy difficulty.
00:49:045 (1) - Replace this soft-finish with the soft-clap here, so it stays consistent with the percussions.
00:53:735 (2) - Similar suggestion as above. Replace this soft-whistle with the soft-clap here, so it stays consistent with the percussions.
00:54:673 (4) - I would add a N:C2 timing section here in order to add a clap on this slider tick. you mean the slider before? because there's no slider tick at this one
02:05:024 (5) - Try removing the soft-finish here to be consistent with 02:01:272 (5).

[Dekaane's REM]
Everything looks fine. Nothing to suggest!
[Yuki's Dream]
Consider adding the tags in the folowing order. AIBat is marking this as inconsistent tags, because of it!
DakeDekaane J-Pop Yasutaka Nakata Toshiko Koshijima Yuki-Kun
[Insane]
00:33:333 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This star shape patten can be improved more.
That's pretty much it! Good luck for bubble!

Hey!

Yes to all the suggestions in easy, and nearly to everything in normal, except the ones i wrote smth in bold (but i also kinda changed it)
Also, I like the pattern in insane D: I'll leave it ^^

i think this is the 394578934th time i have the tags wrong. so op

thanks for the mod <3 great suggestions!

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Diasios 2013-03-13T13:08:18+00:00

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• I just noticed that there's no real order in the sequence of combo colors, why? Remove the grey one because it kinda blends with the BG then keep this order of colors: purple --> yellow --> green --> blue --> purple and so on.
• Add a silent "normal-sliderslide2" and a silent "soft-sliderslide2", some sliders are noisy.
• 01:22:110 (kiai) - Start it at 01:22:345 and end it at 01:52:361. (if you want to add a kiai fountain then add it at 01:37:353)

Easy

• 00:27:471 (3) - Convert this slider in 2 circles and add a new combo on the second one.
• 00:37:320 (x) - Add a circle here to follow the music.
• 00:46:700 (3) - This is the longer slider in the diff so try to give it a nice shape, right now it is really boring to play. Anyway, If I were you I'd try to do something like this, this slider isn't really necessary:
SPOILER
• 01:54:237 (1) - You should delete this spinner and map this little part, I got the feeling that you added it because you were lazy to map this part, but having a spinner here and another one at 02:04:086 (1) it's not really necessary, this diff would be much better without it imo.

Normal

• 00:31:223 (green timing section) - Delete it since it's not necessary.
• 00:37:320 (x) - Add a circle here to follow the music.
• 01:54:237 (1) - Same as Easy, a spinner here it's not really necessary, delete it then start a new one at 02:04:086 and end it at 02:07:369.

Dekaane's REM

• Normal is AR5 and this diff is AR8, as you can see the jump is too big here, set AR7.
• 00:09:180 (3) - Flip this slider horizontally and move it at x:112 y:224.
• 00:48:107 (x) - Add a circle with a clap.
• 01:03:115 (x) - ^
• 01:25:159 (7) - Try this:
SPOILER
• 01:52:830 (x) - You should add a circle here, right now it seems that there's a "hole" here. (if you add a circle here then add it to the next patterns as well)

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