Konei wrote:

Hello ~ :3



Must fix

Should fix

Nazi

Suggestion


[General]

* Disable Letterboxes during breaks as you don't have any breaks. It's more good if settings are disabled when not usesdon't need I think...

* Hm, mp3 quality is not really good. Try to get a better oneyeah I'll

* Parts like 00:05:854 feel like they should be emphasized - consider using a finish like this
In fact It's not the same..
* That adress in BG doesn't look moe >.< Also it's png, although changing to jpg doesnt need less space. Try thisin fact I don't think this BG can fit the song very well..maybe I will find a more beautiful one


[Normal]

* AR - 1? Current feels too high for this songk
00:02:951 (5,6) - That could be a bit hard to read for beginners. They could think like. "Where's the next note D:" and dont expect it to be there where the last one was. Consider changing spacingI don't think so..
00:03:274 (1) - I think you should remove whistle from end. This tone is deeper than the one at start :3no
00:07:467 (2) - Remove this note? Doesn't sound pretty needed herein fact 00:05:854 (1,2,3) - these are all 1/2 piano
00:32:306 (2) - Sounds odd to ignore vocals here imo, because 1 pretty much followed them nicely. Consider shortning this and add repeatit will be harder
00:42:467 (2,3) - Flows bad imo. Consider changing so that starts are touching in a nicer way. But this backsteping with mouse feels a bit oddchanged the part
00:51:016 (3,4) - Making 4 a curved Slider that blankets with 3 could be more nicethis is enough imo
01:01:983 (3) - Touches HP Barno problem imo


[Hard]

00:00:532 (1) - Add whistle to end as you have it in Normal?it already has
00:03:274 (3) - Same thing about this as in Normal#no
00:12:145 (4) - Remove? :< There is no soundyou will sound it if you remove it
00:14:725 - Add note for following vocal?no
00:36:177 - ^no
00:39:403 (1,2,3,4) - Could look cooler imo :3 How about thisno...
00:48:274 (6) - How about moving one tick later and add a circle on it's current position? Sounds better imo (Maybe also short this Slider by one tick)follow drums here


That's all I found :3

Nice mapset and good luck ~ o/

Nymph wrote:

MP3音质有点挫啊 我的耳机啊 震死我了

HARD:
00:02:951 (1,2,3) - 这里spacing间距跟前面比有所变化 我1PCDT的时候读错了大胶布
00:05:854 (1) - 这里之后音量大点？很难听清了我换个MP3看看啥样再说

Normal：
AR4就够了吧 用得上5么可
00:29:080 (4,5,6) - 这里全没whistle故意的？我还觉得稍微加上点好了忘加了。。
00:42:467 (2,3,4,5,6) - 虽然知道跟的啥……但是吧 感觉跟前面比 这里节奏还是突然了点恩


这种图哪需要mod

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[General]
mp3爆音严重，能换个不我这几天找找
use Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai as source, and move the original source to tags pleasek,但还是做了点改动
[Normal]
AR-1/2, it's too high now-1
remove the useless green timing secitons pleasek
00:43:435 (3) - better to end it at 00:43:919 - , follow vocal here is better than follow music imok
00:46:500 - ^k

[Hard]
AR+1?这个先看看别人咋说
and maybe OD-1分数没变可以
00:29:080 (1) - change direction a bit? like 00:31:016 (6) - ? looks much betterk
00:37:145 (1,2) - I highly suggest repeat the first slider 1 time less and the second slider 1 time more. spacing will be wrong, but it's not hard to read, also the rhyme is much more easy to read(2 sliders repeat the same times)本来1上面4个beat压的vocal是一起的，2上面俩beat压的vocal是一起的，而且2上面没repeat，1有repeat而且spacing是这样的我觉得没什么问题。等等看别人这么说吧
00:48:435 - slider start at here? if you fix this, you should add note at 00:48:274 - 这段都跟鼓的我就不动了


kinda nice, but please find some more mods before call be back o.o