Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from queue~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Add ZUN to tags

[Storyboard]

1. 00:00:424 - a sudden darken here is pretty weird, i suppose your "black.jpg" doesn't work correct. Check your layers plz~~
   my suggestion is move your "black.jpg" to foreground layer first, and change the start time to -2000 and set a end time for Scale codes.

[Normal]

1. 00:25:687 (1,1,1,1) - how about an anti-jmp here? eg
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:36:147 (2) - suggest to remove it for difficulty issue >.< or change (2,3) to a slider?
3. 00:52:529 (2) - add a finish to head for consistent hitsound?
4. 00:56:081 (4) - finish on end is weird a bit...i can't hear any finish related sample in music here so suggest to delete the finish.
5. 01:30:422 (3) - add a finish on head?
6. 01:46:211 (3) - ^
7. 01:52:527 (1) - remove finish on the end
8. 02:14:632 (3) - ^
9. 03:29:433 (5) - remove finish on head

[Hard]

1. 00:06:739 (1,2,3) - compared with, i prefer the beats at 00:05:160 (1,2) - because there's nothing different between these two parts in music, and obviously the beats you chose prev is better.
   
   to myself, if some changes in beat for the following part are needed, i may choose this:
   
2. 00:17:792 (1,2) - i suppose the stack here may break your flow~
3. 00:20:555 (3,4) - also weird place.... stack (4) to (3)? or 00:20:950 (1) - ?
4. 00:23:713 (3,4) - ^
5. 01:09:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe too hard for a hard diff...?
6. 01:40:685 (4) - finish here maybe not suitable..
7. 01:53:317 (1,2,3) - here, actually, the drum here is not 1/4 but 1/6....
8. 01:59:829 (2,3,4) - suggest a repeat slider here, also for difficulty issue...
9. 02:02:790 (3) - remove finish on the end?
10. 02:06:638 (4) - stack to 02:06:737 (1) - ?
11. 02:09:106 (4) - remove finish?
12. 03:23:315 (1,2) - move them to next red tick separately?
13. 03:35:946 (1,2) - ^

[Lunatic]

1. 00:06:739 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - similar to hard, white-tick based beat here maybe not suitable
2. 00:46:213 (1) - add a finish on head?
3. 00:52:529 (1) - ^
4. 03:23:117 (3) - weird finish here...suggest to remove...

that's all~~ i suppose we need a deeper discussion about the beats of instrumental parts in Hard/Luna diffs but anyway, nice work :>
give me a call when you're ready for further irc-recheck~

All fixed ~

OnosakiHito wrote:

Requested Taiko Mod.

[Muzukashii]
01:09:107 (3) - Broken slider.
02:12:263 (2) - ^
02:37:527 (4) - ^
03:09:105~03:11:473 - remove the break here.
03:24:499 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You may move on with the k d d k ddd D pattern.
01:00:423 - To be honest, I'm not sure if it is a good idea to have the same SV on this part. It is confusing when you play it since you can't figure out if it is 1/3 or 1/4. Good idea/solution, but rather something for Oni level. Consider this please.
01:53:711 (1,2,3) - These notes are not necessary. Could confuse players.
02:00:421 - Such SV changes are in a Muzukashii are improper so I suggest to delete them. Also the change is minimal so it has no real effect.
02:32:592 (1) - Better to move it to 02:32:691, so it fits better with the previous parts.
02:34:171 (1) - ^
02:35:750 (2) - ^
02:53:316 (3) - Maybe deleting this note is advisable.
02:57:262 - I suggets using d d k d pattern. Fits better with the 02:54:894 (2,1,1,2) - pattern and the transition is better. Also, you don't need to stick that much to the vocal in general, just as advice for the next map. Having a mix of beat and vocal is fine as well.

Map is overall fine, lacks maybe a bit of structure, but this shouldn't be a big problem here.
This muzukashii is harder as the average, but that's okay. Though, you should delete the SV changes.

[Oni]

00:03:581 (2) - Not D?
00:08:713~00:12:858 - Tbh, you can map this better Firce. How about following pattern constalation: http://puu.sh/1Wz6j The problem is that there are many kats at first but then they suddenly disappear at 00:09:897.
{
01:03:581 (2) -
01:05:160 (2) -
} I'm really not sure about these notes. Maybe it's better to make it just to normal hitcircles or find another solution? (same goes to similiar notes)
02:54:105 - The bar-line has a weird apperience. Try to change it if possible(you know how to).
03:24:104~03:36:736 - I like the stream but you need to delete one note somewhere. Using suddenly such a long stream dosen't fit to the whole map.
03:38:907 - kiai end

That's all for the Oni. Pretty solid Oni, I like it.

Hope I could help you guys. Good luck with it!

Scorpiour wrote:

irc rechecked with mapper, fixed inconsistent tags and preview time, and changed several patterns in Lunatic.

bubbled~~

Melophobia wrote:

The title is a bit wrong, change it to "Sakura no Sakanu wa Eiketsu no" please! I can rebubble after a quick check if you're willing to fix it up~

Melophobia wrote:

Rebubbled!

Flask wrote:

(no kd)
D: 把閃瞎眼提示打開



你沒看到從00:11:575 - ~ 00:12:167 - 多閃
前面沒看到人提過不過我覺得應該要tick ;w;
然後我覺得可以tag l1106188...這個就看你了 lol

這個問題不大 等BAT來再改就行! 可以找MMzz

咱覺得這閃程度還Okay, 如果有人再提的話咱就改 :3
嗯~ flask醬 謝謝你 >w<!
咱會盡力去找BAT的

Melophobia wrote:

Changes were applied correctly. Rebubbled.

Next time please don't hesitate to change something just because of bubble. You're always free to ask the bubbler to rebubble. (but better to talk with him/her first.)

LKs wrote:

除了777太鼓 其他我都看了没问题

一会我去问一下太鼓的变速和SV问题

wmfchris wrote:

嘿嘿嘿嘿

wmfchris wrote:

嘿嘿嘿嘿

LKs wrote:

[Timing]

BPM 228 for kiai-times is not required. just keep it as 152 with 4/4 signture and use 1/3&1/6. Only when BPM changes(including gradual BPM change, irregular BPM change), or donwnbeat changes, could we set new timing sections. no new sections are needed if you can map it well by using Beat snap divisor with current BPM


you'd adjust SV in all diffs. sry for inconvenience caused by

---

and wmf may post taiko mod later

wmfchris wrote:

[Timing]
Such a BPM shift is unecessary. BPM152 2/3 beat handles the song at best.
人性呢

SPOILER

落楓飄紅(~~~) 0:46:46
01:00:423 - 我覺得BPM228不對
152 2/3
LKs(~~~) 0:47:46
。我沒看見紅線變化 對
這不用換BPM

[777]
00:09:108 - Like what you've done 00:07:529 - it's still preferrable to leave it blank here. Similarly you can remove the note at 00:10:489 - .
01:10:290 - I don't see any need to accelerate this section, comparing to 00:15:029 - .
01:53:711 - fitted the drum but it does connects to the next phrase in a very poor way. Consider that the drum is soft enough you can remove them.
02:00:421 - unecessary acceleration.
03:03:578 - From the music this phrase goes back to a lower and more calm state. If there was some sort of acceleration, this should be slowered, probably something like 03:00:420 - . 03:06:736 - is another phrase that should get slower then you can acclerate the bar note-by-note, which fits the drum sound in the song as well.
03:24:104 - No, thank you!

The 1/8 (1/6 before adjustment) drum do exist in the song, but the taiko hit is too loud and exaggerating them to the top. Besides the acceleration problem the pattern doesn't contain much problem, a bit repetitive though.

Flask wrote:

猥瑣wmf 幹

LKs wrote:

rebubbled

Garven wrote:

[General]
You've got something weird going on in the intro for the storyboard from 00:06:739 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/658488
but, I use 1024x768 test play to see there, no weird going on there
Use tick rate 1 please. The changes between the swing section and the normal section just sound horrible with rate 2. That or silence the offbeat ticks during the 1/3 section since you have tick sounds all over the place. okay~
Go through your difficulties and make sure the kiai green line sections are snapped correctly please. fixed

[Normal]
02:55:687 (1,1) - Please don't new combo spam I want to follow like 01:39:897 (1) - , 01:02:002 (1) - >~<!
Really nice Normal. Good work.
thank you :3
[Hard]
00:09:897 (1) - The end of this slider is snapped incorrectly
02:06:345 (3,4,1) - This was... unexpected. Especially with that kind of spacing. I really don't recommend you do this as it sticks out against the mapping of the 2 minutes prior. That or at least use spacing like at 02:12:266 (1,2,3) -
02:53:713 (2,1) - I was kind of expecting this to have the weird overlap like at 02:50:950 (1,2) -
03:35:456 (2,1) - Wow, bad place for an anti-jump. Use normal spacing here please.
all fixed~
[Insane]
01:38:318 (1) - Please make these combos longer.
02:14:634 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is a little off. Maybe try ctrl + g on the 2 and 3? If you do this, be careful fixing the hitsounds afterward.
02:15:424 (5,6) - This snapping just feels wrong in context of the rest of this kiai section.
02:17:792 (1,2) - I found if you ctrl + g these individually, the flow is much much better. Don't forget to fix the hitsounds. You might want to reposition the stream too. I think flow is better for me, so keep it

Something that bugged me about the map in general was the 1/4 spacing. It seemed mostly random or dependant upon the patterns rather than any sort of musical cue when it came to when you used larger spacing as opposed to distance snapping. it made for kind of a frustrating play compared to the relatively smooth play of the Normal and Hard. Okay, I will improve next time ~

Garven wrote:

Use tick rate 1 please.

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
02:56:476 (1) - Remove new combo
lol! I don't know why here have NC www, fixed~

[Insane]
01:39:108 (1) - Remove new combo okay~
01:40:687 (1) - ^ okay~
01:42:266 (1) - ^ okay~
01:43:845 (1) - ^ okay~
01:45:423 (1) - ^ okay~
01:47:002 (1) - ^ okay~
01:48:581 (1) - & xD
01:50:160 (1) - % lol
01:51:739 (1) - $ :3
01:53:318 (1) - * w

[Muzukashii]
REMOVE the ・ from the title. Not add it on ;_;
fixed, but it is blank in my verison, lol

Garven wrote:

[Insane]
01:53:318 (2) - Ah whoops, I missed this. You need to make this longer. You can't have two sliders that look exactly the same but have different speeds without visible ticks.

Garven wrote:

Ack, sorry, didn't notice the reply. Rebubbled!

Garven wrote:

Oops, a couple things that AIBAT missed, sorry lol, It's okay, my fault

[General]
Snap your kiai start/ends

[Lunatic]
03:05:160 (1) - Slider end not snapped

Garven wrote:

Update it and PM me and I'll recheck.

Edit: Rebub

Thank you, Garven

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Amazing map and Cool SB ~ Nothing to say ~

Here you go <3

!!! thank you very much daze, Rika醬!! !!!!!

Flask wrote:

恭喜飛翔 幹 :3

Flask wrote:

恭喜飛翔 幹 :3

Scorpiour wrote:

congratz~

bossandy wrote:

Flask wrote:

恭喜飛翔 幹 :3

qoot8123 wrote:

恭喜~

Scorpiour wrote:

congratz~

bossandy wrote:

恭喜飛翔 幹 :3

Satellite wrote:

gratz!

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Congrats ~ >w<

Thank you, Crystal (pokes

1491625364981 wrote:

喔喔 RANK了!!

pimpG wrote:

congratulations for rank

Strawberry wrote:

恭喜飛翔 幹 :3

Firce777 wrote:

神mapper配上神sb 神一般的圖 幹 :3