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Make bombs longer, make lamp oil less confusing.
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Download: igiulamam - The Shopkeeper Under the Sea (vytalibus) [Larto's Bombs].osu
Download: igiulamam - The Shopkeeper Under the Sea (vytalibus) [Larto's LAMP OIL!].osu
Download: igiulamam - The Shopkeeper Under the Sea (vytalibus) [Larto's Bombs].osu
Download: igiulamam - The Shopkeeper Under the Sea (vytalibus) [Larto's LAMP OIL!].osu
[Larto's Bombs]
00:48:01 (3,4,5,6,7) - stack is a bit confusing for an easy map
[vyt's Bombs]
00:10:96 (2) - line this up horizontally with the end of 1
00:30:15 (2) - move so it isnt partly under 1
00:30:82 (4,1) - slider overlap
00:32:82 (2) - move so it isnt partly under 1
00:40:00 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is a wee tad claustrophobic here
00:45:34 (1,2) - ^
00:50:68 (2,3) - stack the ends
00:53:35 (4) - a huge part of this slider is hidden by 3
[vyt's Lamp Oil]
00:36:91 - stack on the fading end of 4
[Larto's Lamp Oil]
00:02:12 (1,2,3,4,5) - the pattern sounds weird, like the 4 is out of place
00:32:82 (1,1) - spinners do not meet current length standards
00:48:01 (3,4,5,6,7) - stack is a bit confusing for an easy map
[vyt's Bombs]
00:10:96 (2) - line this up horizontally with the end of 1
00:30:15 (2) - move so it isnt partly under 1
00:30:82 (4,1) - slider overlap
00:32:82 (2) - move so it isnt partly under 1
00:40:00 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is a wee tad claustrophobic here
00:45:34 (1,2) - ^
00:50:68 (2,3) - stack the ends
00:53:35 (4) - a huge part of this slider is hidden by 3
[vyt's Lamp Oil]
00:36:91 - stack on the fading end of 4
[Larto's Lamp Oil]
00:02:12 (1,2,3,4,5) - the pattern sounds weird, like the 4 is out of place
00:32:82 (1,1) - spinners do not meet current length standards
Just a friendly reminder that what I say is mostly *suggestion* on how to possibly improve your map and not a *command* that you change your map!
[Larto's Bombs]
00:51:02 (3) - stack under fading 7
[vyt's Bombs]
00:31:49 (1) - spacing?
00:50:68 (2,3,4) - these arent quite perfectly stacked
[vyt's Lamp Oil]
00:02:11 (1,2) - not quite stacked right
00:04:79 (1,2) - ^
00:13:13 (1,2) - ^
00:15:80 (4,5) - ^ (hint: when the edges of the circles you are trying to stack are no longer blurry, theyre stacked right)
00:24:81 (3,4) - ^
[Larto's Lamp Oil]
00:03:78 (2) - stack under fading 3?
00:08:62 (1) - stack under fading 2?
00:16:80 (6,7) - stack these plz
00:32:82 (1,1) - both illegally short
00:58:61 (1) - ^
[Larto's Bombs]
00:51:02 (3) - stack under fading 7
[vyt's Bombs]
00:31:49 (1) - spacing?
00:50:68 (2,3,4) - these arent quite perfectly stacked
[vyt's Lamp Oil]
00:02:11 (1,2) - not quite stacked right
00:04:79 (1,2) - ^
00:13:13 (1,2) - ^
00:15:80 (4,5) - ^ (hint: when the edges of the circles you are trying to stack are no longer blurry, theyre stacked right)
00:24:81 (3,4) - ^
[Larto's Lamp Oil]
00:03:78 (2) - stack under fading 3?
00:08:62 (1) - stack under fading 2?
00:16:80 (6,7) - stack these plz
00:32:82 (1,1) - both illegally short
00:58:61 (1) - ^
☆
This song is FUCKING annoying.
Larto's Bombs:
This song is FUCKING annoying.
Larto's Bombs:
- 00:05:45 (2) - align with 00:04:79 (1)
- Fine.
- Fine.
- The 1/4 things seem like they were put there for the sake of putting them there.
- 00:02:45 (3) - 1 level 3 grid to the left
- 00:02:62 (4) - 2 level 3 grid to the left
- 00:54:35 (2) - move closer to 00:54:19 (1) then fix the notes than follow.
Larto's Bombs
00:19:47 (4,5) - Nazi but space these farther, I don't nazi things unless they trip me up, this did.
00:35:49 (2) - OH GODDAMNIT DON'T END REPEATING SLIDERS IN THE OPPOSITE DIRECTION THAT THE SONG IS GOING. PET PEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVEEEE
00:38:17 (1) - OH GODDAMNIT YOU DID IT AGAIN
00:54:19 (1,2,3,4) - Pick a spacing damnit it look ugleh
vyt's Bomb's
Nothing
vyt's LAMP OIL!
Nada
Larto's LAMP OIL
00:09:46 (5) - OH GOD WHYYYYYYYYYY oh well it doesn't really trip me up here
00:35:49 Onward - the repeating sliders are a little hard to nail, just throwing that out there.
00:19:47 (4,5) - Nazi but space these farther, I don't nazi things unless they trip me up, this did.
00:35:49 (2) - OH GODDAMNIT DON'T END REPEATING SLIDERS IN THE OPPOSITE DIRECTION THAT THE SONG IS GOING. PET PEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVEEEE
00:38:17 (1) - OH GODDAMNIT YOU DID IT AGAIN
00:54:19 (1,2,3,4) - Pick a spacing damnit it look ugleh
vyt's Bomb's
Nothing
vyt's LAMP OIL!
Nada
Larto's LAMP OIL
00:09:46 (5) - OH GOD WHYYYYYYYYYY oh well it doesn't really trip me up here
00:35:49 Onward - the repeating sliders are a little hard to nail, just throwing that out there.
high fivelukewarmholiday wrote:
larto is my victim
Great use of sound effects and hitcircle placement on this here map gets it a star from me.
Fuck you guys :<Download: igiulamam - The Shopkeeper Under the Sea (vytalibus) [Larto's Bombs].osuTakuma wrote:
high fivelukewarmholiday wrote:
larto is my victim
Download: igiulamam - The Shopkeeper Under the Sea (vytalibus) [Larto's LAMP OIL!].osu
Morshu finally got insane xD
Anyways, I became, for some reason, really interested in this song
, and I already started to map my own version of it called [Roley's ROPE?!]. Its still under way, and I still need some stuff to edit.
Would you mind accepting my map once it done? I am pretty definite that it should be done by May 22 (GMT-4 Canada Time).
Anyways, I became, for some reason, really interested in this song
, and I already started to map my own version of it called [Roley's ROPE?!]. Its still under way, and I still need some stuff to edit.Would you mind accepting my map once it done? I am pretty definite that it should be done by May 22 (GMT-4 Canada Time).
EDIT: As Morshu the Shopkeeper says: "YOU WANT IT?!" lol
Anyway, here is my map if you are interested in adding it. Sorry if this map will slow down the pending process, but I really would like to contribute to this map alot :3
Since no more maps will be accepted for this song, I removed it from the forums.
*sigh* Oh well
Good luck with this map, anyways.
Anyway, here is my map if you are interested in adding it. Sorry if this map will slow down the pending process, but I really would like to contribute to this map alot :3
Since no more maps will be accepted for this song, I removed it from the forums.
*sigh* Oh well
Good luck with this map, anyways.
Topic Starter
Sorry for not replying early. I am not taking new difficulties.
[Larto bombs]
00:16:80 (3) - try removing the last clap
00:42:17 (3) - the spacing is really unintuitive, maybe new combo?
00:41:50 (2,4) - move 1/2 earlier
[vyt bombs]
00:07:46 (1,2) - double finish is a bit jarring, try either using a different hitsound or decreasing hit volume?
[vyt lampoil]
nothing specific but you seem to be overusing finishes
[Larto lampoil]
00:04:37 (2) - either this is 1/4 early or the next "lamp oil" combo ends 1/4 late, and im leaning towards this one being wrong
00:12:38 (7) - ^
00:16:80 (3) - try removing the last clap
00:42:17 (3) - the spacing is really unintuitive, maybe new combo?
00:41:50 (2,4) - move 1/2 earlier
[vyt bombs]
00:07:46 (1,2) - double finish is a bit jarring, try either using a different hitsound or decreasing hit volume?
[vyt lampoil]
nothing specific but you seem to be overusing finishes
[Larto lampoil]
00:04:37 (2) - either this is 1/4 early or the next "lamp oil" combo ends 1/4 late, and im leaning towards this one being wrong
00:12:38 (7) - ^
Larto's Bombs
00:41:50 (2), 00:42:84 (4) - Try moving these a half-beat to the left on the timeline. I think it sounds better this way. That's just me though, do what you think feels right!
Awesome song, great maps! I'm going to give this a regular star and a kudosu star because it's been here for a while...
00:41:50 (2), 00:42:84 (4) - Try moving these a half-beat to the left on the timeline. I think it sounds better this way. That's just me though, do what you think feels right!
Awesome song, great maps! I'm going to give this a regular star and a kudosu star because it's been here for a while...
[vyt bombs]
unchanged
[Larto bombs]
looks good
[vyt oil]
not updated
[larto oil]
looks good
bubbled
unchanged
[Larto bombs]
looks good
[vyt oil]
not updated
[larto oil]
looks good
bubbled
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I am afraid to rank this, but not going to pop it. Few concerns for the next BAT to consider
vyt's LAMP OIL:
High slider tick rate?
00:35:49 (4,4) - crazy sliders
Larto's LAMP OIL:
00:04:37 (2) - This note sounds off for some reason. It's snapped correctly, but doesnt sound like its on the right tick.
00:12:38 (7) - ^
Sorry, I can't give credit. Come back when you're a little -mmmmm- RICHER.
vyt's LAMP OIL:
High slider tick rate?
00:35:49 (4,4) - crazy sliders
Larto's LAMP OIL:
00:04:37 (2) - This note sounds off for some reason. It's snapped correctly, but doesnt sound like its on the right tick.
00:12:38 (7) - ^
Sorry, I can't give credit. Come back when you're a little -mmmmm- RICHER.
mtmcl
I don't see any of these as problems. The two notes mentioned in Larto's LAMP OIL are a little strange, but they're the closest you can get to properly mapping the "lamp oil".RemmyX25 wrote:
I am afraid to rank this, but not going to pop it. Few concerns for the next BAT to consider
vyt's LAMP OIL:
High slider tick rate?
00:35:49 (4,4) - crazy sliders
Larto's LAMP OIL:
00:04:37 (2) - This note sounds off for some reason. It's snapped correctly, but doesnt sound like its on the right tick.
00:12:38 (7) - ^
Sorry, I can't give credit. Come back when you're a little -mmmmm- RICHER.
So I'm pretty much saying...
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