This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 6 января 2014 г. at 22:59:54

Artist: Poets of the Fall
Title: The Happy Song
Source: Alan Wake's American Nightmare
Tags: reiji-rj EvilElvisV2 psycho
BPM: 142
Filesize: 9057kb
Play Time: 03:45
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2,19 stars, 195 notes)
2. Elvis' Normal (4,33 stars, 312 notes)
3. Insane (4,97 stars, 473 notes)
4. Reiji's Hard (4,83 stars, 463 notes)

Download: Poets of the Fall - The Happy Song
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I told you
I'm a PSYCHO
[Phobia] - Elvis
[Paranoia] -Reiji
(re-dl 24/12/13)
omg it's finally ready to mod ._.
RIP
moar creepy: nightcore+auto->halfspeed = enjoy

ЭТО ЛУЧШЕЕ У ТЕБЯ
ЛУЧШЕЕ
ЛУЧШЕЕ
ОХРЕНЕННАЯ
Kureiji, да

: o

тащи. хорошая группа же.

сложно тащить, с сб проблемы

OMG VASS /o/
collab with me, plz

Quiz-chan wrote:

OMG VASS /o/
collab with me, pls

whywhywhywhy what?

Rue wrote:

i told yo i'm a

ZAIKAH

ya loled

хай
так как мапсет идеален
буду придираться к мелочам
temple of thought - название альбома
если нужно

[Insomnia]

00:35:832 (3) - второй узелок на клетку выше, чтобы параллельно было. ну а если так задумано, то ок
01:01:184 (1) - пониже?
02:50:198 (5,6) - может убрать их вниз? а то мне не нравится вот это движение назад. но офк, если тебе нравится, то ..

[Phobia]

01:51:044 (3) - вывернешь его в другую сторону?

cos rly
u're pro

[Paranoia]

i told u
u're pro

[Schizophrenia]

02:15:550 (5) - может не будешь использовать эту форму? ;_; а то она одна такая на всю диффу. колет мне глаза ._.

did i tell u..?

удачки, кисы
u knew i'm bad modder

WHYWHYWHYWHY

.....uhm hi!

[General]
wonderful mapset <33

[Insomnia]
mhhm...... aha.

00:50:198 (2) - Why not a whistle on sliderpath? because "PSY-CHO".... and stuff
00:53:579 (2) - Same.... but it doesn't ~have~ to be here, too. It kinda feels right without whistle, here.
00:56:959 (2) - hmm, I believe it's ok to have one, here.
01:29:917 (1,2,3) - uhm.... I believe it would be better to have two sliders with two repeats each....... true beginners might not do well here.
01:36:677 (1,2,3) - That's actually only my idea, but I think it can be necessary.
01:44:705 (2) - LOL, cool idea with the whistle
01:58:649 (1,2,3) - Excellent.
02:07:945 (5) - I don't think that the whistle on the repeat is needed. it doesn't fit to the song since there is no new note played :/

Brilliant difficulty, not too hard and not too easy. I like it!

[Phobia]
hmmm.... Evil Elvis..... okay!

03:07:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm... I think these whistles are offset. They are kinda "inverted".... they should emphasize the highest tone of the string orchestra... which is the one on which you didn't yet put a whistle.
03:27:382 (2) - I think this slider should be 1/1.... because "PSY-CHO" or guitar in the background... I didn't yet notice this on other parts though.
03:34:142 (2) - oh right, this one too. Maybe all the others that are like this as well.... ^__^;
03:38:368 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Those claps are lacking on snares in the background.... means they don't really fit IMO.

Cool diff, definitely not just an everyday map!

And now the exciting part......!! omg

[Paranoia]
omg reiji <33

00:25:480 (7,1) - I think this jump is superhyper.... maybe reduce it a little?
00:34:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Excellent!
00:41:748 (3) - mhhm.... I'd make the red nodes white ones and make the wave smoother.
00:56:959 (3,4) - uuuhmm.... personally, I would erase (4) and make (3) a 1/1 slider; the 1/2 doesn't feel so right IMO :/
01:03:720 (3,4,5) - I guess it would be better to make these a slider because now, the hitsounding sounds .... "static", I guess? Sliderpath whistles are smoooooooth. IMO, this is applicable for ~all the other parts~ that are like this.... it is not so drastic, but I think a slider would sound better.
01:29:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I somehow have the feeling that some of the jumps are exaggerated.... I don't know *shrug*
01:36:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same actually.
01:45:551 (6,7) - Make (6) a circle and shift (7) 1/2 beat back... sounds better in terms of rhythm!
01:46:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hmmm... I'd say you make (3,7) a soft whistle, it feels better with the "song's flow"... dunno what to call it
01:49:776 (4) - I am sure that this should be a circle.... the tone to which you mapped this slider is actually short.
02:01:607 (8) - hmm... maybe make this a 1/2 slider like in Schizophrenia?
02:02:452 (2,3) - This jump flows oddly.... maybe try something like this?
02:24:001 (1,2,3,4) - I'd say, only 1/2 please. 3/4 is pain to play.... at least for me ;~;
03:06:255 (1,2,3) - ahaa..... although this is acceptable, I'd personally erase (2). It feels right for me like this, too.
03:21:888 (6,7,8) - Okay, now listen carefully. I'd...
03:31:607 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - marvellous.... harsh and with momentum! <33
03:41:748 (1,2,3,4) - this too!! *_*

WONDERFUL difficulty... *-----* <33 I simply love it.... and it has sweeeeg

[Schizophrenia]
oh mai god....!!!

00:22:100 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - nice!
00:33:931 (5) - Hmmmpf..... I think this circle is unnecessary. (4) already carries most of the emphasis.
00:26:959 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - awesome! <3
01:29:917 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Those can be really hard to play because of the 3/4.... neither 1/1 nor 1/2 would be ok here though... I'd still consider reducing the jumps.
01:33:297 (1,2,3,4,5) - wow, cool!
01:36:677 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Same as the other point.
02:15:550 (5,6) - Gameplay break. The diff played well before, but this 3/4 comes sudden and it also is very unnecessary. I suggest you do it the way you did it before... because I loved it!
02:21:255 (8,9,10,1) - I kinda don't like this flow. I know it can be hard to come up with new ideas on such a repeating song, but I don't think this works out. Maybe you should try something else.
02:46:818 (3,4) - IMO this carries quite a lot of momentum. But I still don't think that the 3/4 is needed here.
02:50:198 (8,9) - This isn't needed ~and~ doesn't carry that much momentum. Please consider erasing.
03:21:255 (6,7,8,9,10) - wonderful!

this is how it's done....... this diff is darn fun to play.... it's awesome!!

I TOLD YOU I'M A PSYCHO

Thanks!

Классно. Супер. Ахриненно. Звезда <3

[General]

1. You should set the light effects of the storyboard (00:45:973 (1) - ) in every difficulty, at this moment they are all set like in the Paranoia difficulty!
2. The correct artist is "Poets of the Fall", without the uppercase letters O and T.
3. Combo 5 and Combo 6 colors are too similar, you must change one of them to emphasize the combo changing since it's really hardly noticeable.

[Schizophrenia]

1. There's a meaningless greenline at 20304. There are two another ones at 145586 and 213191.
2. 00:24:846 (4) - I think you've skipped an important note here in the middle of this slider (on the red tick): there are vocals and there's also an instrument, so adding a note here would have more sense instead of skipping it with a 1/1 slider!
3. 01:13:015 (1,2) - Consider making these two sliders perfectly parallel respect to 01:12:170 (9) - this one for a better esthetic effect.
4. 01:28:226 (1) - Well, you have added a new combo on this element but you didn't on 00:25:691 (6) - this other one in the beginning. This isn't a big problem, and I'm not really going to suggest removing it since it would ruin all the combo colors you have set, I'm just reporting in the case you are able to fix it easily! This repeats in some patterns after this one, 01:34:987 (1) - here for example, even if it's not a square.
5. 01:41:748 (1,3) - What about stack these two object? At this moment the stack looks broken, in fact it doesn't work. Same in 01:51:677 (4,6) - this pattern, it would be a lot better if stacked, in my opinion!
6. 02:49:353 (6) - You have missed an important combo here! In this case I think you should really fix it, I find it important. Maybe consider adding it and then removing 02:48:086 (1) - this one, I think it would have more sense!
7. 03:20:621 (5,7) - What about increasing the distance between these two elements a little bit? They are too close at this moment.
8. 03:38:367 (1) - Add a finish on its head to keep the whistle+finish consistency in this red part?

[Paranoia]

1. There's a meaningless greenline at 20304. Same at 145586 and 191325.
2. 01:09:424 (5,1) - I'd suggest to add a note between these two objects obtaining a triple as you did 02:18:720 (3,4,1) - here, I think it fits the music very well here!
3. 01:16:396 (1) - Here Vass in her difficulty used the another red combo colour, you should add it too to keep the same combo logic (you've also done the same 02:25:691 (1) - here).
4. 01:47:663 (5) - Consider adding a new combo on this note to emphasize 01:47:663 (5,6,7,8) - this square pattern and to distinguish it from 01:46:818 (1,2,3,4) - this, it would be really great. Same thing 02:16:396 (5) - here for the same square-pattern reason.
5. 01:51:044 (3,4) - I think you are skipping a really important note between these two objects (on the red tick), you should add it! You could move 01:51:889 (4) - this slider 1/2 before to fill it and then add a note in the empty space.
6. 02:40:691 (4) - What about reversing (CTRL+G) this slider for a better flow between 02:40:057 (3,4) - these two objects?

[Phobia]

1. Remove the greenlines at 20304 and 181184, they are unneeded.
2. 01:44:283 (3,1) - Consider stacking these two objects please, this is a normal difficulty and beginners could get confused seeing them unstacked!
3. 01:48:508 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this is too much for a normal difficulty: the notes are pretty hidden and also fast, you should really remove them or use a slider instead. Same 01:57:804 (1,2,3,4) - here and 03:12:170 (1,2,3,4,1) - here, even if they aren't hidden but still too fast imo. Controversely, 03:44:283 (1,2,3,4,5) - keep this one, It looks really good at the end of the song.
4. 03:18:086 (1,2,3,4,1) - Here you should make the spacing costant, it could probably confuse the players since this spacing chaning is unpredictable!

[Insomnia]

1. Here in this diff just remove the greenline at 181184 and consider improving 01:03:297 (1,2) - this blanket a little bit, there's nothing else to say.

Well, this mapset is awesome, I love it and I think you already know! sorry I have reported some new combo issues, I know fixing them will be a bit hard since there are some parts with different combo colours, but I wanted to report them anyway 'cause I think they have to be changed somehow. Anyway, I have to sat one really important thing: the mapset is really unbalanced! There's a HUGE jump between the Phobia and the Paranoia, really huge. Making the Paranoia diff softer wouldn't be a good idea, I really think it would get ruined doing this, so consider adding another diff to fix this big difficulty jump.

I didn't have much stuff to suggest, I love all the patterns you made, guys! Good luck ❤

Omg, thank you, Quiz-chan and Nemi ! *^*
Almost all fixed!

Schizophrenia
00:43:015 (1,5) - move to x316 y256 to fix the square
01:29:917 (1,2) - the spacing is too large imo, especially when there's not much to read that it's 1/4 away.
it would be better if you had the easier 01:36:677 - version of this first, and then the harder version 01:29:917 -
02:05:410 (1,2,3) - keep the same space between 1 - 2 and 2 - 3? 1 and 2 looks too close

I can't find anything on the other diffs. This is too good :p

Thanks, Damnae :3
It was nazi, but helpful

Это сб заставило мою кожу покрыться мурашками.
Привет!
[Schizophrenia]

• 
  00:20:409 (5) - Может, перенести его на ~ х:144; у: 240? И хвост 00:21:043 (2) - туда же
  00:24:001 (1) - На 104;212? И 00:24:424 (2) - на 24;296
  00:58:226 (6) - На 140;100?
  01:40:269 (2) - Может, сделать его выходящим из той же точки, что и 01:40:902 (4) - ?
  01:41:748 (1) - На 140;128 его, треугольник будет более ровный
  02:08:790 (1) - Сделай его параллельным концу 02:07:945 (7) - этого слайдера. Ну и 02:09:212 (2) - с этим поправить
  02:21:466 (9) - Не уверен, но может, ктрлджи?

[Paranoia]

• 
  00:23:156 (6) - На 136;140?
  00:45:339 (3,4) - Может, ктрлджи?
  00:48:508 (1,2,3,4) - По-моему, слишком сложно для харда, но раз уж сб такое... Они в инсе смотрелись бы лучше
  01:11:748 (2,3) -
  SPOILER

  
  но не уверен
  01:57:804 (1,2,3,4) - Опять же, сложно для харда (наверно), но это сб.. А может вы сториборд чуть-чуть поменяете, чтобы они чуть ближе были и там и тут?
  02:45:550 (4) - На 288;280?
  03:11:325 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Ну правда >_>
  03:26:959 (2) - Ctrl+J Ctrl+G и на исходную точку?

[Phobia]

• 
  01:01:185 (1) - На 352;280?
  02:15:551 (1,2) - Мне такое расположение больше нравится
  SPOILER

  

[Insomnia]

• 
  Я не нашел ничего

Вообще, вы все няши и офигенно намапали, мне очень сложно было найти, к чему придраться.

Привет!
Дад, спасибо огромное, нацихелп очень кстати, поправила и жду Рейджи
всем ктрлджи

элвис кинул помоддить, nuboмоddyu оvо

[гэнэраль]
ябпридралась к названиям дифф, т.к. я лалка в теме фобий и отклонений, не поняла б где какая сложность
рул

[insomnia]
01:48:508 (1,2,1) - мб это чуть ниже опустить? о3о тут еще и интонация у мелодии хорошо поменялась, ябэто немного выделила :'D
02:03:719 (1) - а тут лучше смену кривостей под музыку сделать, не? просто впихнуть слайдерпоинты в слайдертики например
02:20:198 (2) - бит-слайдер бы сюда, вместо этого длинного http://puu.sh/5QQET.jpg ; лучше по ритму имхо, хз
02:51:043 (1) - rip flow и спейсинг → опусти чуть ниже 02:50:621 (6) - , 02:51:043 (1) - ctrl h ему, 02:51:888 (2) - ctrl h тут все понятно
03:24:001 (3) - http://puu.sh/5QReH.jpg :О!
03:26:536 - тут бы что-нибудь начать, а не кончить

[phobia]
00:49:776 (1,2) - странный такой
01:02:452 (4) - вот я б куда-нибудь его дела в другое место. while testplaying this рука хочет движения вверх-вниз-вверх-вниз. тут еще ж и repetitive part
01:14:706 (1,2,3,4,5) - лолицветочек сделай его на 0.1x больше. сильно tiny имхо
01:49:142 (2,3,4,5) - what about unstack их и сместить например сюда? твой вариант вроде легкий по чтению, но имхо такое хорошо читается с 1/1 битами, 1/4 как-то перебор на конце u.u
03:16:818 (2) - ну совсем сплющено о.ó го ~0,40 или 50, как у тебя позже идет

ня

дальше пойдет оверол на глаз ибо времени чет помоддить больше не будет и надо делать домашку

[paranoia]
01:29:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - сделать бы такую бурду одним (например красным ну или что там) комбоцветом? >: хотя хз, в конце тоже есть слайдеры с красным :C

хз что еще лол

[schizophrenia]
00:34:987 (3) - сделай его мягеньким, нэээ? http://puu.sh/5QU9L.jpg :< как-то SHARP всё ;w;
01:03:719 (3) - ктрл g плс, няшный флоу пойдет. ну и всю бурду дальше чуттть выше поставить, если да
01:29:917 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - имхо, соединить бы их в одну комбу как в диффе рейджи.. и цветокомбу для таких
02:07:733 (6) - сильно гигантоджамп, чуть ближе к предыдущему его поставь :О

всьо


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