This is my first map and ive tried editing it and getting other players to help me as well but there always seems to be a problem with either the patterning of certain parts. If anyone can help me I would much appreciate it. 
https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1011944#osu/2182022
https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1011944#osu/2182022