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Thanks for the input Pasonia. I've noticed some of the problems are based on the spacing, which it seems distance snap doesn't help too much for me on [since I just realized it was on 1.0x] but i'll make sure to have it corrected.... D:Pasonia wrote:
On Earth:
01:15:40 (2) - Kind of hard to see, stack with 1 and rearrange other beats. Do the same for the rest in the same pattern.
01:15:71 (3) - For patterns like this, given that this song is in EASY, I suggest not landing notes on blue ticks in order to not confuse newbies.
In Atmosphere:
01:04:18 (1,2,3) - This sequence can be confusing, because it gives players the wrong impression that the sliders might be clicked onto the same way over and over. To address this, either 2 or 3 has to be adjusted for consistent spacing. (I recommend adjusting 2)
01:10:71 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
02:00:88 ~ 02:59:21 - This whole sequence is really repetitive because of the dejavu. How about some rearrangement? It's a suggestion, so it can be ignored.
Out In Space:
00:24:72 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - for the different stacks with 1,5,8,10, can you adjust them further? It's a tad confusing here (especially since your 1 lands on a blue tick)
02:00:88 ~ 02:59:21 - Same problem. The center part seems like a horizontal flip of the opening.
Out in Deep Space:
00:24:72 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same issue. Space them further apart.
02:00:88 ~ 02:59:21 - Same problem.
Now for the problem regarding 2:00:88 to 2:59:21, I had an idea. How about you add some more content to the tail end of the sequence, so that you don't abuse that goldarn spinner? It's always the same length of spinning, and it gets really boring.
No worries :-3FluffRat wrote:
Right... apparently my ideal OU shifted 10ms when I wasn't looking. So make the offset 141ms.
Sorry for the inconvenience.
The idea sounds good, but it would cause offset disruption again ^_^;Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[On Earth]
[In Atmosphere]
00:13:60 (1,2,3,1...) - just a random thought, could you move all of these up to the slider 1/2 beat earlier and then extend the slider? it might sound better
I see what you mean now. I'll make sure to have that fixed right away.K2J wrote:
In Atmosphere has a lot of circles after sliders that are placed on the endpoint of the slider, even though they come a full beat later (i.e., 01:28:25 (1,2)). This is confusing, especially since right before the break you established a half-beat precedent.
For this one, it might be a universial offset issue because I even played the song at 25, 50, and 75% to see if it is in place and its right on target but thanks for checking on that anyways.K2J wrote:
For Out In Deep Space, I moved the "I'll take your brain to another dimension" lines a yellow tick back - maybe it's just me. Making an inherited timing section with lower volume for places like 00:13:39 (1) to 00:22:98 (11) would probably be a good idea, as well.
*nods* Works out better then where I had it. Thanks for the suggestion.ztrot wrote:
In atmosphere 01:21:52 (2) - would sound better on white tick i think. i could be wrong. other than that the timing is good
you will know this but if you move it to white tick01:21:732 make sure you redo you break time
Interesting. I wanted to figure out how to do the soft + normal hit sounds for a while and still having trouble with it ._. ;;Skyripper wrote:
[On Earth]
ohh make the beginning before the break the soft sampleset and switch to normal after that
01:49:06 - instead of all claps here, try making the *bounce* sound claps and everything else normal
[In Atmosphere]
Same thing about the sampleset at the beginning
02:27:41 (2) - move down a bit.. doesn't line up with the others that are high up
Maybe a little finish heavy toward the end?
[Out in Space] Great use of hitsounds in this one!
00:13:09 - Tone down this stream, make it more dynamic and fun
01:15:20 (1,2) - a LITTLE closer to match spacing
01:19:08 (3,4) - ^
01:51:20 (1,2) - Everywhere this happens (I think it would be better as a slider) Just IMO. a little complicated timing wise, so make it easier for them with only one thing to hit... combo will be the same
02:06:19 (2,3,4) - bring 2 closer to match spacing
02:10:17 (5,6) - ^
02:26:80 - just do to this stream whatever you do to the first
02:40:46 (2,3,4,5) - same spacing thing.. it's just for consistency
[Out in Deep Space]
Not a lot to say about this one.. You did pretty well. I would consider, however, making the "I'll take your brain to another dimension" patterns a little easier to read. Maybe through a repeating slider in the mix to lessen the "spam" feel to it. Nothing major though. You will think of something and it will end up being better than ever
star!
I fixed the score problem by lowering the overall difficulty by 1 and it reduced it to around 7.9 mil instantly. And about trying to fix the "voids", i've tried doing that a few times, but i've pwned myself in the process like "easy was not simple" or something like that. Still, I see your point and I do thank you for your time to take a look at the beatmap.Vexed wrote:
In Atmosphere
01:09:69 (4) - add this just after slider. Just try it and see how you like it. I think you could use a bit like this around the map. It's nothin really.
On Earth
I can't find anything here. I actually like the way it plays as long as it's easy Diff.
Out in Deep Space
Man.... i feel inadequite tehe :> I guess because im not really finding anything and believe me i can find the smallest of things.
Note your comos in this Diff, because of the way it's [ut together could use work. I think maybe combo using groupings in some areas. In other areas it's fine. The combos are perfect the way they are.
Out in Space.
I'm sorry, I havn't found anything here either, except the combo issue. You could really just break it up quite a bit and really seperate things with more combos in these 2 diff. to keep the max score in line.
Sorry dood, I think that you map is lookin pretty good. I mean some mapping could be reworked in the first 2 difficulties only because there is some space that could use filling, but not really necassarry.
Star!
I was able to get through with some of them but some of the parts about adding a missing note or chaging its timming kinda makes it sound odd to me but I'll see what I can do.Aeon wrote:
[in Atmosphere]
00:32:753(1) reduce slider by half a beat(same for the next slider)
00:32:753(3) take out repeat and add a beat 1 beat later after the end of this slider
00:36:897(2,3) same as in 0:32
00:40:971(1) sounds odd the way you have it move back half a beat and increase by half a beat
00:42:568(1) move back half a beat
00:43:404 missing note
00:44:200(1) same as in 00:40
01:29:279(2) turn into a slider 1 beat long
01:32:543(2)
01:35:603 missing note here
01:38:866 ^
02:03:753(3) move back half a beat
I fixed all the problems listed and fixed the slider as best as I couldvytalibus wrote:
[On Earth]
01:07:86 (1) - Horrible slider.
[In Atmosphere]
No obvious problems.
[Out in Space]
00:24:72 (1) - I disagree with the clap hitsound. It sounds very unnatural.
01:47:94 (1) - ^
01:49:57 (1) - ^
01:51:20 (1) - ^
02:59:64 (1) - Ugly slider.
[Out in Deep Space]
Find a better background.
Fix it, talk to me on IRC, and I'll star it.
well it kinda makes me feel like i should press the mouse button on those noteswhymeman wrote:
I was able to get through with some of them but some of the parts about adding a missing note or chaging its timming kinda makes it sound odd to me but I'll see what I can do.Aeon wrote:
[in Atmosphere]
00:32:753(1) reduce slider by half a beat(same for the next slider)
00:32:753(3) take out repeat and add a beat 1 beat later after the end of this slider
00:36:897(2,3) same as in 0:32
00:40:971(1) sounds odd the way you have it move back half a beat and increase by half a beat
00:42:568(1) move back half a beat
00:43:404 missing note
00:44:200(1) same as in 00:40
01:29:279(2) turn into a slider 1 beat long
01:32:543(2)
01:35:603 missing note here
01:38:866 ^
02:03:753(3) move back half a beat
(fixed)Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[On Earth]
00:39:30 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:01:33 (1) - hitsound end
01:41:31 (1) - ^
02:31:08 (3,4,1) - spacing?
(fixed)Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[In Atmosphere]
00:42:56 (1) - align w 3
00:47:46 (2) - align
01:16:02 (4) - remove finish from all these
02:25:37 (5) - finish
(fixed)Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Out in Space]
*00:18:29 (3,5) - whistle sounds irregular ergo bad
01:04:19 (1,2) - soft whistle
(fixed)Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Supernova]
*00:18:29 (3,5) - ew whistle
01:40:70 (9) - align w 6,7,8 curve
01:53:34 (1,2,3,4,5) - more hitsound dynamics