Here's my part of m4m.
Yay some rock![General]
01:41:049 - I think the lyrics move too fast here and it's a slow part, make them move slower~~
[Easy]
00:27:028 (4) - I don't really like this slider's shape D: maybe try something a bit less linear.. Linear stuff doesn't fit calm songs.. calm songs tend to be better with circular patterns.
00:33:024 (6) - (nazi) Stack the end properly with the other slider (you need to disable grid snapping)
00:35:273 (7) - New combo here and remove new combo from 00:36:023 (1) - . Look at the previous patterns, you did this, so you must apply this change for consistency.
00:41:270 (5) - I think this stack doesn't fit the music... move (5) somewhere else, also, you have another stack after the slider and it's boring.
00:47:266 (5) - Same as 00:35:273 (7).
00:54:013 (1) - Make the curve a bit less sharp~~
00:57:011 (3) - Finish at the start sounds much more energic
*also move the first sliderpoint 2 grids down
01:00:009 (1) - ^ Finish at start
01:09:004 (2) - Finish (note: You can put finishes here but with a bit less volume so it isnt SO noisy but it's still energic and nice. Also if you do this put them on all kiais ><)
01:56:977 (3) - Make the curve less sharp
02:02:974 (3) - ^ And also I don't like the way it touches the previous slider D:
02:23:962 (3) - Make curve less sharp and also finish at start
02:44:950 (3) - You already know..
[Normal]
Some distances between notes are a bit unpolite here... some of them seem intentional but I really don't know... check them please? Stuff like 00:29:651 (2,3,4) - 00:53:263 (1) - Move it a bit more to the centre, it's a note after a spinner and it should be close to the centre
01:00:009 (4) - Same as easy... try adding finish at start of this slider and maaaaaaaybe with lower volume so it doesn't sound noisy... and same for all of these on kiais.
01:04:507 (5) - Finish sounds weird here.. add it on 01:03:008 (3) - (start) instead
01:14:813 (4) - Why suddenly 1/2? You didn't put any others so far, kinda weird. I suggest that you move the slider to the big white tick and shorten it by 1/2.
01:55:478 (1,2,3) - Make them equal? Or you can copypaste them and rotate (2) a bit and then (3) a bit more.
01:57:727 (4) - I dislike how it is so close to (2)'s end
02:17:965 (8,2) - Wow these 2 sliders look bad together. Move (2) up a bit like this:
02:32:957 (8) - New combo here and remove it from 02:34:456 (1) - for consistency with the other kiais
02:36:705 (4) - wtf this finish? Sounds so off maybe it was a mistake? XD
02:38:954 (1) - Make the finish sound lower?
[Hard]
The slow intro sounds bad in this diff because of some things:
- You should combine soft samples and normal for snares
- Overmapping a slow part sounds very bad and even more with those hitsounds, just map what you hear at slow parts (you overmapped stuff like 00:35:461 (4) - )
- You didn't follow the vocals well... and the beats either. I dunno what did you map here o.O for example 00:34:898 (3) - this should start on 00:35:086 (3) - . And there is lots of stuff like this. You should check this whole part of the song and fix the notes which aren't following the music, trust me it'll be much nicer and flow better, also remember the hitsounds. Contact me ingame for some suggestions ^^. You should map it like the kiai, you followed the music very well on the kiai00:47:266 (2) - Finishes sound so bad on this pattern >< remove them! You should seriously combine soft and normal hitsounds D: Soft whistles would sound veeeeeeery nice here instead of finishes
01:44:703 (1) - Make the finish sound lower D:
01:47:233 (1) - Why 1/2's? Should be like this:
and it gives a nice feeling to this part
01:53:979 (5) - Should start on 01:53:792 (4) - and then remove the repeat and add a slider like this:
02:01:475 (1) - This makes you think it has another repeat because of the next slider's spacing.
02:32:957 (4) - - Exactly same as before. Move this slider to 02:32:770 (3) - , remove repeat, add another slider then
02:46:449 (1) - Uhmmmmm grey combos...?
That's all~~
Good luck 
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