1. bigfrog's Hard (3.1 stars, 343 notes)
2. Easy (1.25 stars, 143 notes)
3. Insane (3.82 stars, 461 notes)
4. Normal (2.15 stars, 248 notes)

dubbadeni wrote:

From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much!
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General

The bitrate of your mp3 is very low (64 kBit/s ). You should get one with at least 128 kBit/s. ok
Your background image is too tiny (768x768). Get a new with 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768. ok

Easy

You should set the distance snap a bit higher, maybe 1.0, because the circles are too close to each other. 1.1 now

00:20:039 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod) fixed
00:27:430 (4) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner. fixed
00:33:517 (1,2,3,4,1) - This stream is too hard for Easy. fixed
00:48:300 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod) seems fine
00:57:865 (3,4,5,6) - This stream is too hard for Easy. fixed
00:59:604 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner. fixed
01:06:560 (1,2,3,4) - Could be too hard for easy. fixed
01:10:039 (3,4,5,6) - ^ fixed
01:20:473 (1) - This spinner is too short for Easy (Check AiMod) fixed
01:22:213 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod) no spinner now
01:23:952 (3) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner. fixed
02:07:430 (3,4,5,6) - Too hard for Easy. fixed
02:17:864 (1) - This spinner is too short for Easy (Check AiMod) fixed
02:19:604 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod) no spinner now
02:21:343 (3) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner. fixed
02:28:734 (4) - ^ fixed
02:33:952 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod) fixed
02:35:691 (4) - New Combo ok
02:38:952 (4) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner. fixed
02:44:387 (3,4,5,6,7) - Too hard for beginner. fixed

Normal

00:42:213 (1) - Remove New Combo make
00:43:082 (2) - New Combo some
00:42:430 - 00:43:517 Why so empty here? change
00:52:647 (1) - Remove New Combo ok
00:53:300 (2) - New Combo ok
00:56:126 (1) - Remove New Combo ok
00:56:778 (2) - New Combo ok
01:15:256 (1) - Remove New Combo ok
01:15:691 (2) - New Combo ok
02:12:647 (1) - Remove New Combo ok
02:13:082 (2) - New Combo ok
02:44:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too hard for Normal! make some change

Thanks your mod
It's helpful

Dick wrote:

hey there~　hi~

General:
> delete unused .osb in folder I just saw one .osb in folder

[Easy]
01:13:489 (3) - that shape is kinda ugly fixed
01:27:402 (3) - 1smallgrid left fixed
01:32:185 (5) - also some kind of weird sliderbody ._. find a better shape please ok
02:29:793 (5) - ^ ok

[Normal]
00:10:880 (1,2,3) - dont like this pattern, try this for example: like your pattern,thanks

SPOILER

00:17:837 (1) - clap on spinnerend? sounds good!
00:20:445 (2,3,4,5) - move everything 1smallgrid up and 1smallgrid to the right fixed
00:48:272 (1,2,3) - this blue tick circles are hard to read for beginner players, so they don't fit into a normal map, even if the music is like "blue-tick".. you can use a slider with a reverse arrow here:

^ this is even readable for beginners that's true...fixed
01:01:315 (1,2,3) - pls move this more up or something, cause the overlapping with 00:59:359 (4,5) - looks strange fixed
02:24:793 (3) - adjust that slider to the previous sliderend, just like this: ok

SPOILER

looks better :p

02:29:359 - add note ok
02:29:576 - ^ ok

[Insane]
00:45:011 (8) - this slider is not perfectly horizontinal *nazi* haha~~fixed
00:52:619 (1) - symmetrical plz fixed
01:32:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - i don't like this random stream, maybe replace it with a spinner or at least symmetrical somehow!
I replace it like 02:44:576(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) maybe looks better
nice diff though..

very well done for your 2nd map :0! my second map was biggest rubbish ever created by humans.. but you are a great modder now
good luck~ hope my mod helped~ ofcourse

thanks your mod,it's considerate

Walaaa wrote:

Dick wrote:

hey there~　hi~

General:
> delete unused .osb in folder I just saw one .osb in folder

Xierra wrote:

Hey there, this one is from our tiny modding queue. Thanks for requesting! Alright, second modding ever, here I go!
Here's the mod. My modding are mostly suggestions, so you may ignore this.

General

Clean! Nothing wrong with the files.
Make a Hard diff? I'll consider or find a GD

Easy

00:50:011 (2,4) - Add whistles here. ok
00:53:489 (2,4) - ^ ok
00:59:793 (1) - Add whistle on the repeat. nice
01:23:924 (3) - Add whistles on start and end of slider. ok
02:21:315 (3) - ^ ok
02:28:706 (4) - Add whistle here. fixed...miss this guy..thanks

Normal

00:10:445 - Add a hitcircle with whistle. sorry I won't add it
00:13:924 (4) - Add Whistle here. ok
00:29:793 (3,4) - Add whistle on slider end. ok
01:15:011 (4) - Remove whistle? ok
02:12:402 (4) - Remove whistle? ok
02:12:402 (3,4) - Unsnapped hitcircle! fixed thanks
02:36:098 (5) - Add another repeat with whistle. add the repeat will make two slider too close(only 0.218s)too hard for a beginner
02:40:880 (2) - Add whistle here. nice

Insane

01:01:315 (3) - Add whistles on both ends. add (3) end only
01:02:619 (6) - Add whistle. ok
01:19:141 (2,4) - Remove finish? ok
01:32:619 (1,5,9) - Add whistles here. hmmm ok
01:33:271 (7) - Remove whistle. fixed
02:16:532 (2,4) - ^ ok
02:29:793 (3) - Remove whistle on slider start, add whistles on the upbeats. sorry I won't change it.
Maybe you can heard from 02:26:532 02:30:880 again and you will agree with me
02:44:793 (3,11) - Add whistles here. ok

Good luck and hope it gets ranked!
PS: This is not my favourite type of song, but never mind. It's pretty good too, hehe

Thanks your mod.I fixed lots of hitsounds
And good luck for you too

shojimeguro wrote:

Easy
change bacground picture 1024x768 to 800x600
try to put some clap or finish sound effect at KIAI time it will fit the song better ok
well anyway all the beats seems to fit the song so i have no comment

Normal
change slider tick rate to 2 ok
change overall diff to 6 and apporach rate to 7 OD5 AR7
01:41:016 - put spinner ?
01:50:445 - fill it with notes ???
try to put some clap or finish sound effect at KIAI time it will fit the song better ok
well anyway all the beats seems to fit the song so i have no comment

since the song is >2 minutes so i only mod 2 diff
that's all i can mod
i hope your beatmap will be ranked soon!!!

Thanks your mod
Though this mod is strange

KonataN wrote:

Hey from my modding queue.

This will be a short mod, because your map is pretty good, sorry.

Normal:

OD=5 fixed

01:43:706 (2) - I'd recommend not stacking this circle, its more clear to play if you put it next to the slider fixed
01:45:228 (4) - ^ fixed
02:27:619 (1,2,3) - this is pretty hard for a Normal diff, Maybe think about an alternative?
02:28:489 (1,2,3) - ^
02:29:359 (1,2,3) - ^
if so..that means 01:30:228(1,2,3,1,2,3)are too hard?
02:33:924 (1) - objects that appear fast after a spinner + in the middle are not easy to hit by new players fixed
02:40:445 (1) - Maybe don't stack this one? fixed
02:44:359 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is pretty hard for a Normal diff, Maybe think about an alternative? ok

Insane:

The Objects are not that nice arranged as from the other diffs. Maybe more symmetric stuff and more shapes?

02:38:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - I see you put much effort in this one. But it's not good to play I think it's ok in Insane


Easy:

Looks fine!


Good luck

Thanks your mod
I'll consider your suggestion
Good luck for you,too

• according to the ranking criteria, the difficulties in the mapset must be in a consecutive order. so I highly recommend you to make Hard.
  also, I think the gap of diffyculty between Insane and Normal is large. you should adjust the gap of difficulty to more people can enjoy this map.
  slidertickrate of normal is 2, and others are 1. do you have any reason to this? if not, you should unify them.

• through of this diff, you should keep a certain distance. for example, beginning of the song, you use about 1.2x distance, but middle, you use about 1.0x.
  00:07:402 (2,3,4) - I think these notes don't follow the music at all. listen the melody more.
  00:20:445 (1) - too short slider for Easy. and be corvered with the hitburst of previous spinner, newbie players may not be able to consider this note as a slider.
  00:23:924 (4) - replace with a 1/1 slider. the short slider isn't kind for newbie players.
  00:48:272 (1) - you shouldn't use blue tick. this is Easy.
  00:59:793 (1) - this note(put on red tick) break the flow of rhythm and may cause the mistake.
  02:37:837 (2,3,4) - the rhythm is too hard.
  
  I point out only a certain section, but please review through this diff.

• I wrote that you should make Hard, but you can rename this diff as Hard if you add a few notes and make this diff a little harder.
  first I want to ask you how you want to do, so I can't mod this diff now.
  one thing, if I regard this diff as Normal, you use too many red tick and the rhythm is difficult for Normal imo...
  anyway, I want your reply.

• I think SV 1.4 is too slow for Insane. how about use 1.8 or so.
  00:17:837 (1) - this spinner should be started from 00:17:619.
  00:24:793 (3,4,5) - this stream doesn't match with the song imo. shorten the slider and move this stream like this and it follows the song well.
  SPOILER

  
  if you accept this, you should put note at 00:25:445.
  00:34:141 (2) - listen the song more well. the melody starts at 00:34:359, not at 00:34:141. so you should put slider at 00:34:359.
  if you do this, please shorten the slider.
  00:36:750 (6,7,1) - how about this rhythm? I think you should put some note at 00:37:619, because there is enough sound to put note.
  SPOILER

  
  00:45:663 (1) - I don't like to put spinner on the lyrics. and this is Insane, so I want you to make this section more atractive.
  00:57:619 (1,2,3) - almost same as 00:34:141. you should be attention to when the lyrics starts and ends more.
  01:03:054 (1,1) - same as 00:45:663
  01:15:772 (2) - remove this. this stream doesn't match with the song imo.
  01:21:750 - don't to be silent the end of spinner. I couldn't find the reason enough to be silent this.
  01:29:685 (3) - same as 01:15:772
  01:30:337 (6) - ^
  01:31:206 (2) - ^
  01:33:924 (1) - same as 00:45:663
  02:08:163 (6,7) - how about move these note 1/2 later and make stream with 6~8?
  02:13:163 (2) - same as 01:15:772
  02:19:141 - same as 01:21:750
  02:27:076 (3) - same as 01:15:772
  02:27:728 (6) - ^
  02:31:315 (1) - same as 00:45:663. how about put spinner form 02:29:793 to 02:30:880, and put some notes from 02:31:315 ~?
  02:46:967 (1) - listen the melody more. this spinner should be started from 02:47:185.

DarkDunskin wrote:

Hi!
Here's your requested Mod from Kin's Lair~

[Easy]

1. 00:07:402 (2) - Remove Finish. I want
2. 00:07:837 - Add Note + Finish. to keep
3. 00:10:880 (1) - Remove Finish. these like
4. 00:11:315 - Add Note + Finish. Normal and
5. 00:14:359 (1) - Remove Finish from Sliderstart, add Finish on Sliderend. Insane,sorry.
6. 00:43:924 (3,4) - Replace with a Slider from 00:43:706 to 00:44:576. Add Finish.Like this ok
7. 00:45:663 (1) - Let the spinner start at 00:45:445. fixed
8. 00:48:272 (1) - Ugly Slider, make it straight. Remove Finish from Start and Reverse-Arrow. agree
9. 00:57:837 (3,4) - Replace with slider on the left red Tick like above! ok
10. 00:59:793 (1) - Replace with slider from 00:59:359 to 01:00:228. Add Finish. ok
11. 01:00:880 (5) - Move this Note to 01:01:098 and add Finish. hard to judge?
12. 01:49:141 (4,5) - Nazi: Not properly stacked lol, disable grid snap and distance snap and move (5) under (4). fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:15:880 (3,4) - Add Finish on Sliderstart. ok
2. 00:17:837 (1) - Let the Spinner start at 00:17:619. fixed
3. 00:29:793 (3,4) - Unrakable Stack bug: No stacking appears in-game when sliderend and sliderstart are at the same point. Use grid level 4 and move (4) one grid down and one to the right to fix. Should look like this afterwards: http://puu.sh/YZYg fixed
4. 00:42:185 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart. ok
5. 00:45:663 (1) - Let the Spinner start at 00:45:445. fixed
7. 00:48:272 (1) - Remove Finish from Start and Reverse-Arrow. removed
8. 00:54:141 (2,3) - Unrakable Stack bug: No stacking appears in-game when sliderend and sliderstart are at the same point. Use grid level 4 and move (4) one grid down and one to the right to fix. fixed
9. 00:57:619 (2,3,4,5) - Same here :< ^

[Hard]

1. 00:10:880 (1) - Nazi: Disable Gridsnap and move note to x:106. fixed
2. 00:17:837 (1) - Let the Spinner start at 00:17:619. fixed
3. 00:20:554 (3) - Delete Note, doesn't fit there imo. agree
4. 00:42:185 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart. ok
5. 00:45:663 (1) - Let the Spinner start at 00:45:445. fixed
6. 02:38:924 (1,2,3,4) - This is okay btw. Here appears stacking ingame, you can compare with the other points i mentioned if you want. It looks fine when I test.

Okay everything else is fine it seems.
The Sliderbug I mentioned is just an error in the Editor.
When you don't fix it and play it ingame it will look like you used stack-leniency 0 and stack leniency 0 is unrankable lol.
But its easy to fix so dont worry. thanks for teaching this sliderbug

That's all.
Good luck and have fun mapping! You too!

Aldwych wrote:

Hello! walaaa!
I think there is something wrong when you mod.Maybe redownload when you saw these message.
[General]

This beatmap has lot of finish note, do you have a finish hitsound for it? Because your finish hitsound is a whistle in a soft hitsound, and we can't hear it.

Be carefull when you put NC, sometimes, they are not at the same time for all diff. Some NC for preventing of long combo

Why Distance snap in easy = 1,1 , normal = 0,8 and insane = 1,5 ? You should stay at 1,0 it's better.

Imo, Slider velocity is too lazy.
For easy : 1,0
For normal : 1,30
For insane : 1,70

Slider tick rate must be the same at all diff.

00:17:837 Spinner should start at 00:17:619 fixed
02:31:315 Spinner should strat at 02:31:532 fixed
02:46:976 Spinner shoud start at 02:47:185 fixed

[Easy]

Hp drain -1

00:09:141 I'm sorry but i don't see what note is here? At 00:08:924 yes but here no. If you make a circle here, add finish.
Why not make something like that :
00:12:142 : ^

[Normal]

AR = 4 Maybe this Normal will become Hard soon.

00:43:906 Use lot of reverse arrow in a slidder is ugly. Use juste one reverse and finish it at 00:44:576, it follows the lyrics and it's better.
00:49:793 Same like previous slider, finish it at 00:50:228
00:51:532 Finish the slider at 00:51:597
00:52:619 Move the circle to 00:52:402 nope,sorry.
01:15:228 NC Should be here makes two color at same place?
02:14:793 Use one arrow for this slider. I'll consider if I keep this as a Normal
02:19:793 I prefer see a long slider here (imo) for lyrics. ??

[Insane]

HPd -2

00:34:141 Slider should start at 00:34:359 nope,sorry.
00:57:619 Curve more these 3 sliders. agree
01:10:011 Delete NC
01:15:228 Same for NC
01:45:663 Tornado combos? t/48512 I want to make hidden player confused here.I've use this combo at 02:28:054(1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3)
02:07:402 Delete NC
02:14:359 ^
02:35:228 ^

I think you will work hard for this map for rank it. Yes,thank you!

Good luck to you! (and sorry for nazi mod)
Thanks your mod

h-728 wrote:

thank you for request

[General]

• according to the ranking criteria, the difficulties in the mapset must be in a consecutive order. so I highly recommend you to make Hard.
  also, I think the gap of diffyculty between Insane and Normal is large. you should adjust the gap of difficulty to more people can enjoy this map.
  slidertickrate of normal is 2, and others are 1. do you have any reason to this? if not, you should unify them.

got it.I'll make Normal become Hard.And slidertickrate has no reason...it's 1 now~~

[Easy]

• through of this diff, you should keep a certain distance. for example, beginning of the song, you use about 1.2x distance, but middle, you use about 1.0x. fixed
  00:07:402 (2,3,4) - I think these notes don't follow the music at all. listen the melody more. fixed
  00:20:445 (1) - too short slider for Easy. and be corvered with the hitburst of previous spinner, newbie players may not be able to consider this note as a slider. changed
  00:23:924 (4) - replace with a 1/1 slider. the short slider isn't kind for newbie players. changed
  00:48:272 (1) - you shouldn't use blue tick. this is Easy. agree..fixed
  00:59:793 (1) - this note(put on red tick) break the flow of rhythm and may cause the mistake. changed
  02:37:837 (2,3,4) - the rhythm is too hard. changed
  
  I point out only a certain section, but please review through this diff.

overall, I want you to review the rhythm.
two things. first, listen the melody more well and follow it better. second, make the rhythm more easy to read visually.
newbie players may not be able to judge the rhythm by seeing approach circle. please consider this.
and about spinner, I can say same things as Insane. okay

[Normal]

• I wrote that you should make Hard, but you can rename this diff as Hard if you add a few notes and make this diff a little harder.
  first I want to ask you how you want to do, so I can't mod this diff now.
  one thing, if I regard this diff as Normal, you use too many red tick and the rhythm is difficult for Normal imo...
  anyway, I want your reply.

I decided to make this as Hard.I'll pm if I finished this.

[Insane]

• I think SV 1.4 is too slow for Insane. how about use 1.8 or so. agree..1.8 now
  00:17:837 (1) - this spinner should be started from 00:17:619. fixed
  00:24:793 (3,4,5) - this stream doesn't match with the song imo. shorten the slider and move this stream like this and it follows the song well.
  SPOILER

  
  if you accept this, you should put note at 00:25:445. accept!
  00:34:141 (2) - listen the song more well. the melody starts at 00:34:359, not at 00:34:141. so you should put slider at 00:34:359.
  if you do this, please shorten the slider. okay
  00:36:750 (6,7,1) - how about this rhythm? I think you should put some note at 00:37:619, because there is enough sound to put note.agree..added
  SPOILER

  
  00:45:663 (1) - I don't like to put spinner on the lyrics. and this is Insane, so I want you to make this section more atractive. hm..changed
  00:57:619 (1,2,3) - almost same as 00:34:141. you should be attention to when the lyrics starts and ends more. fixed
  01:03:054 (1,1) - same as 00:45:663 changed
  01:15:772 (2) - remove this. this stream doesn't match with the song imo. removed
  01:21:750 - don't to be silent the end of spinner. I couldn't find the reason enough to be silent this. okay
  01:29:685 (3) - same as 01:15:772 removed
  01:30:337 (6) - ^ ^
  01:31:206 (2) - ^ ^
  01:33:924 (1) - same as 00:45:663 sorry I want save this...cause It's hard enough from 01:31:098
  02:08:163 (6,7) - how about move these note 1/2 later and make stream with 6~8? sorry I don't like.It's easier to read by 3.1.3.1
  02:13:163 (2) - same as 01:15:772 removed
  02:19:141 - same as 01:21:750 okay
  02:27:076 (3) - same as 01:15:772 removed
  02:27:728 (6) - ^ ^
  02:31:315 (1) - same as 00:45:663. how about put spinner form 02:29:793 to 02:30:880, and put some notes from 02:31:315 ~? removed spnner and put some notes
  02:46:967 (1) - listen the melody more. this spinner should be started from 02:47:185. hmm..fixed

that's all. if you have any trouble, please ask me in game or forum PM.

• 00:13:054 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - spacings are too narrow and they look like a stream.
  00:30:445 (5,1,2,3) - ^
  00:35:880 (2,3,4) - this stream doesn't look good in game play.
  SPOILER

  
  00:40:880 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - same as 00:13:054
  00:45:445 (9) - NC here. the combo seems too long.
  00:48:054 (4,5) - these notes aren't connected well. how about rotate (5) like this?
  SPOILER

  
  00:49:141 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:13:054
  01:04:793 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
  01:27:402 (7,8) - this overlapping doesn't look good.

• 01:03:054 (1) - start at 01:02:837.
  01:05:663 - Idk why you silent the end of this slider. the song goes swell.
  01:32:185 (5) - this slider should be staredt at 01:32:402 to follow the lyrics.
  01:33:924 (1) - should be started at 01:34:141.
  02:31:315 (1) - should be started at 02:31:532.

Satellite wrote:

こんにちは
From My queue

[General]
Normalはどこに。。。？ I think the Hard diff is easy enough like a Normal...0.0

[Insane]
AR+1 OD+1 agree
CS+1...? ﾏｷﾞで？
00:43:706 (5) - 最初にFinishを追加 added
00:45:445 (1) - ^ added
00:54:359 (6,7) - リズムの提案 nice!accept

00:57:619 (1) - 最初にFinishを追加 added
00:58:924 (4) - Ctrl+G? accept
01:04:793 (6) - Newcombo? 確かに..俺のミスだ
01:28:272 (8) - Ctrl+G? なんで？
02:38:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - cooooooooooooool :>　:>

[Hard]
00:21:750 (6) - Newcombo? fixed
00:28:706 (2) - 00:28:272 (1) - ここを反転させたものを使うといいでしょう changed
02:14:793 (3) - リズムの提案 accept


[Easy]
looks fine~

good luck~

Thanks your mod.Good luck you too

Sieg wrote:

Hello

General:
Your mp3 quality is low, you should try to find better one Okay,I'll change if I found better one
You need Normal diff for good spread Got it

Easy:
00:49:793 (2,3,4) - maybe try this http://puu.sh/2u7QB plays better I changed here
02:16:098 (1,2,3,4) - is this intend to be symmetrical? It's like a circle now
02:34:359 (1) - nc ok
Your chosen SV\DS is not so good, next time try to choice that you have not this tiny overlaps all over the map. Got it.I'll work hard to learn about mapping.

Hard:
AR OD +1 ok
00:21:750 (1) - 00:34:359 (6) - did you forget to add HS? Yeah...haha
00:30:445 (6) - to make perfect stack under slider, turn off grid snap http://puu.sh/2u8c7 ok
00:31:315 (8) - ^ and so on ^
01:25:663 (1,2) - ^ same for sliders ^
00:41:750 (9) - lower down this to make something like flow? http://puu.sh/2u8dr Remapped these notes.
01:03:054 (1,1) - double spinners not a good style Remapped first spinner.

Insane:
00:27:402 (3) - make new 3 point slider instead, looks 20% cooler http://puu.sh/2u8l1 How to map a slider like that only with one stick
00:29:793 (4) - ^ fixed
00:36:750 (6,8) - ^ http://puu.sh/2u8pY ok seems this was mapped long ago, i suggest to rework ALL such sliders into new ones, don't be lazy That's true...I mapped these slider long ago.
01:32:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - overmap I think it's okay
02:34:249 (3,4) - this kind of blue-white plays so bad, consider to make this http://puu.sh/2u8zU or http://puu.sh/2u8A9 Seems the second one is better.Changed.
02:37:728 (5,6) - ^ ^
02:41:206 (3,4) - ^^
I don't really like such style

That's all, mapset definitely need more hard work. Good Luck with this!

Thanks your mod.It's really helpful.Good luck you too.

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi From My Queues~
Sorry I'm late T.T

Easy

1. 00:30:880 - Add Note? Sounds better.Added.
2. 00:33:924 - ^ ^
3. 00:40:445 (8) - Try This? Remapped here.
   
4. 00:43:054 (2) - How About This Patten? Seems too hard in Easy diff.
   
5. 00:49:793 (2) - Do you like this slider? changed
   
   00:53:272 (5) - ^ ^
   

Hard

1. 00:16:532 - Add Note? agree
2. 00:21:750 (1) - Twice sys-ply with the slider. No,seems a little too hard.
3. 00:29:141 (3,4) - Overlap do you see bad, I think better out separately Remapped here.
4. 00:29:793 (5) - Try This Accept.Looks well.
   
   00:31:532 (1) - ^ ^
   
   

Good Luck~

Thanks HaHo.It's a nice mod.Good luck you too.

bigfrog wrote:

是首好歌 因為是新手所以希望不要期待太多,可能會有許多錯誤的mod...

Easy
00:23:924(5,6,1) 變成這樣? 我擺彎了=_=..fixed

01:22:185(1) 看起來有點奇怪? 是要對稱嗎?
01:22:185(1,2,3) 都貼合會不會比較好看? 我的想法→ 確實 已調整

01:25:663(1,2,3) and 02:05:663(1,2) 跟上面這個一樣的疑問 ^
然後 02:07:402(3) 往下移一個距離讓它跟下一個circle平行? 樓上調整過後 這顆剛好平行了XD
02:23:054(1) 移到X:352 Y:284 ? 我移到X:350 Y:282囉
02:36:532(3,1,2) 讓3,2的距離變成跟3,1的一樣? 同意!

Hard
00:15:880(4) 讓這個slide頭跟尾到00:15:228(2,3)的距離一樣? 做了點變化
00:24:793(1,2) 擺成這樣? 不錯 拿來用囉

(純個人想法)
00:48:272(1) 改成來回到00:48:924? 疏忽了 本來這是為了Normal難度拿掉的折返 現在做Hard忘了改 3Q
01:14:359(4,5,6,7,8) 是為了美觀而擺成這樣的?,改成這樣呢? 我也不知為何之前這樣擺=_=

01:15:228(8,1) 然後(1)改成這樣? 我改到更左邊跟4,7切齊了

01:31:098(1,2,3) 擺成這樣呢?不過我必須承認我實在沒什麼審美觀QAQ.. 不了 這樣跟前三顆一模一樣 過於單調

01:31:967(1,2,3) 也讓這1,2,3成三角形排列? ^同理
02:13:924(2,3) 這裡的距離是對的,可是看起來有點怪,要不要改一下? 改了 以前做的太粗糙
01:49:141(4,5) 往右移一格在往下移一格? 讓距離看起來跟1,2,3相等? 已修正
02:37:837(3) 讓這個slide跟02:36:098(4)對稱? 我覺得平行就夠了
02:46:098(2,3,4) 讓1,2,34變成三角形? 不了 我刻意讓他們重疊 因為這四拍節奏感很強 讓開HD的玩家玩起來比較有挑戰性

Insane
look fine


另外normal呢
這是全部~希望對你有幫助~good luck 有空會開始做Normal

謝謝囉H蛙 果然很有美感 而且觀察細心 是個很棒的mod唷

smallbeans wrote:

因為自己手殘已經跳到別的頁面兩次
所以懶得再打第三次英文mod...

還是個mod新手，以下只是建議

[Easy]
I think this is very well.

[Hard]
再難一點點吧，4.20對Hard來說有點低 hmm..I'll consider
00:28:706(2) 滑條沒有跟(1)疊好 fixed
01:45:663(4,5) 這兩個滑條用成對稱會比較好看 seems ok
02:11:750(4,5,6,7,8) 用成正五角形會美觀一些，像是x:424 y:196，x:397 y:250，x:336 y:242，x:326 y:182，x:380 y:153 fixed
02:28:924(3) x:420 y:264 會比較整齊一些 fixed
02:29:793(3) x:236 y:240 會比較整齊一些 fixed
02:38:924(5) 很奇怪的一個滑條，折返點的地方似乎不太適合下在藍線上 same as Insane

[Insane]
00:33:272(1) 距離沒有錯，可是看起來會覺得兩個滑條擠在一起不太好看 跟哪個擠在一起?
00:34:141 加個circle會比較流暢一些 agree
01:26:532(3) 移到 x:284 y:136 比較好看，不過距離會稍微拉大一點點 fixed.It looks better now.
02:38:924(1,2,3,4) 嗯...如果這裡的聲音真是這樣那可以忽略Hard的最後一條，不過滑條串在一起會判斷錯誤，能不能讓滑條依照間距擺放呢? I think it's okay in Insane


我能做的就這樣了

bigfrog wrote:

Resurrect!~Resurrect!~Resurrect!!!~ :3b
抱歉我來亂的 lol (逃

Walaaa wrote:

bigfrog wrote:

Resurrect!~Resurrect!~Resurrect!!!~ :3b
抱歉我來亂的 lol (逃

less than a minute ago
Aoba Ringo - Hirogaru Hoshizora no Shita de has been revived from eternal slumber.

我做...我做就是了!!

neonat wrote:

Hard

00:26:098 (3,4) - same as Normal no,i don't think so..
00:38:489 (1,2,3) - does not fit, put 00:38:706 (3) - starting at 00:38:489 and 00:38:489 (1,2) - at 00:39:032 and 00:39:141 ok
00:40:228 (1,2) - slider start 00:40:228 - hold the vocals...... 00:40:228 (1) - at 00:40:880 instead hold the vocal o.o ok
00:47:185 (5,6) - swap, slider before circle your suggestion is fit too,but i prefer mine
01:15:880 (2,3) - vocals again, slider before circle okay
01:17:402 (6) - remove, put a circle at 01:17:402 and move 01:17:837 (7) - to 01:17:619 and add a note at 01:18:272 i really don't want to change any there notes,sorry
01:22:185 - you have 2 inherited points here, remove one it's intentional..

Rhythm-wise, the Insane needs a lot more work to suit the song better.

smallbeans wrote:

真是太令我驚訝了!!
這首歌竟然被大青蛙侵入了!!
改天來mod一下好了~

我不知道該怎麼mod 放棄
抱歉貼了個無用post

neonat wrote:

Normal

I suggest after every 4 white lines or so, use a new combo. Eg. NC at 00:08:924 (4) - 00:12:402 (4) - 00:15:880 (4) - 00:22:837 (4) - 00:29:793 (6) - 00:33:489 (5) - 00:36:750 (5) - 00:40:228 (4) - 00:43:706 (5) - added
00:26:098 (4,5) - change this to this to follow along the vocals: agree,changed.

SPOILER

00:45:445 (7) - NC here instead added
00:46:750 (4) - shorten to end at 00:46:967 and move 00:47:402 (5) - to 00:47:185 sounds better,changed.
00:52:619 (9) - replace with a slider from 00:52:402 to 00:52:619 replaced
01:02:837 - Kay now you can see why your 2 bar phrasing might just be too long....
01:04:576 (5) - NC added
01:33:924 (1) - start the spinner when the cymbals play, at 01:34:141 fixed.

Insane

00:26:315 (10) - NC here instead added
00:26:967 (2,3) - remove 00:26:967 (2) - and put a circle at 00:26:967 and 00:27:837 and move 00:27:402 (3) - to 00:27:185 changed
00:35:989 (3) - move to x:424 y:152 fixed
00:44:576 (7) - finish on start of slider added and removed finish at 00:45:445
01:00:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this rhythm is really bad for this part of the song, it has to be reworked, something like this: I was so lazy here,some changed.

SPOILER

01:06:424 - add a note It hits so strange,sorry.
01:07:945 - ^ ^
01:29:467 - ^ ^
01:32:076 - ^ ^
01:32:293 - ^ ^
01:32:728 (2) - remove, doesn't follow any music behind it I think it's ok.
01:32:945 (4) - ^
01:33:162 (6) - ^
01:33:380 (8) - ^
01:33:706 - add a note
01:33:924 - ^ I added combo until here.
02:09:141 (3) - make it more aligned with the previous 2 circles/ straighter: fixed

SPOILER

02:29:793 (7) - NC added
02:32:619 (4) - shorten slider to end at 02:32:837 and add notes at 02:32:945 - 02:33:054 - 02:33:163 - 02:33:380 sorry I don't like
02:33:489 (1) - change to a slider ending at 02:33:706 changed
02:36:641 - add a note changed like ^
02:38:598 (10) - remove note nope,sorry.
02:41:750 (6) - remove. Put a circle at 02:41:750 and move 02:42:185 (1) - to start at 02:41:967 and add a note at 02:42:402 seems good....changed!
02:43:489 (5,6) - swap. put 02:43:924 (6) - at 02:43:489 and 02:43:489 (5) - at 02:43:706 ^
02:44:467 - add a note nope

Rhythm-wise, the Insane needs a lot more work to suit the song better.

Thanks you mod
Fixed some slider and combo have shorten distance now.

- H i N a - wrote:

Hi from my queue

bigfrog's Hard

00:09:576 (3) - did you forgot to add whistle at the start slider ? maybe,thanks
00:15:880 (1) - ^ add finish at the start slider ? forgot hahahaha(?) fix~
00:16:750 (3) - ^ add finish at the start slider ? ^
01:36:315 - I think you should add breaktime at 01:37:837 like this good idea

SPOILER

02:40:445 (1) - add whistle at the start slider ? because you add whistle at 02:36:967 (1) okay.


Good Luck

- H i N a - wrote:

Hi from my queue


Easy

everything fine!
01:36:315 - I think you should add breaktime at 01:37:837 like this Now is fine,thx.

SPOILER

Normal

I think CS 3 is better than 4 Looks more like an Normal diff...thx
00:47:837 - add note here ? added
01:36:315 - I think you should add breaktime at 01:37:837 like this ^

SPOILER

Insane

00:09:793 (7) - add whistle at the end slider ? I think now is fine.
01:02:619 (6) - I think you should convert slider to stream to follow the music sound I change this slider to 2 circles now.

SPOILER

01:36:315 - I think you should add breaktime at 01:37:837 like this ^

SPOILER

01:43:054 (1) - change whistle to finish nope,thx.
02:44:467 - add note here to follow music sound sry,I think now is fine.


Good Luck

Walaaa wrote:

Sorry for such a long long time to reply it

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hi there~ modding from our queue~

General

1. Kanji name for the source is 星空へ架かる橋. Change it and move the english one to the tags.

added~

bigfrog's Hard

00:15:119 (4) - Move this to y=116. no, i prefer this pattern
00:40:880 (7) - New combo. Makes it avoid too long combos. okay
02:09:032 (2) - 1 grid up. no, why?
02:22:837 (6) - Add new combo to avoid too long combos again. okay
This difficulty is nice~ 1 suggestion though: Instead of using lots of straight sliders, try to use slider which has curves, even if its very small.

Sorry my mod was pretty short :/ You will need to do lots of work to make this ranked. GL~