MyLonelyAlpaca wrote:

nm please, thank you! https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/998070#osu/2088442
(its a map pack, but you dont need to view all diffs)

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1. At the beginning of the map, where things haven't started getting built up yet, try using smaller jumps and a slower slider velocity. Also, I see you established a pattern at 00:06:415, which I thought was pretty neat, so I would use a similar technique for the entire intro.
2. 00:21:242 - Try not to land a repeating slider on the downbeat, because then you have your repeating sliders that are supposed to be leading to the stream on the 1/2 bar, which is a bit awkward to do in a stream. Also, at the beginning of that stream, you can use a new combo, it fits with the song.
3. 00:16:070, 00:17:449, 00:18:829 - It was a bit hard to read when the approaching slider was supposed to move. Try splitting the stacks up a bit so it's not in place for the entire combo.
4. 00:34:001 - Make sure your distance snapping matches your slider velocity if that's what you were going for here, otherwise, I'd spread the notes out a little more dramatically.
5. 01:29:173 - This slider is causing your buildup sliders to start on the 1/2 beat, making this a bit hard to read for gameplay. I would cut this slider to a single hit or make it much shorter.
6. 01:40:208 - This part could use some combo changes to go with the complexity of the music, as well as the complexity of your sliders and your spacing differences between the notes in this section.
7. Try this: Next time you go in to check out your map, go ahead and play it. Ask yourself these questions.
   -How does the cursor movement feel?
   -Do my fingers/clicks go along with the music?
   -Would I be able to read a good portion of this map on the first try?
   -Could I tell if that slider was going to be at that speed?
   -Does my map have direction with the music?
   These are questions I ask myself honestly, and they help me every now and then. Think about these when you go into edit again.