Hi Yasora!
Here is my mod, sorry so late. -.-
[General]
[249's Easy]
Map Design/Rhythm
Hitsounds
[Hard]
Map Design/Rhythm
Great map, just a few suggestions.
Map Design/Rhythm
Honestly after changing that clap and the volumes, I'm falling in love with these maps. (: I'm happy to see you mapping again Yasora, your maps are very nice.
Anyways, I hope this is helpful to you, and please change the clap. ;w;
Here is my mod, sorry so late. -.-
[General]
- I feel that your chosen clap is really unfitting with this song. It's just super loud and stands out from the music so much that it takes a ton away from the song and really takes a lot of playability away from the mapset imo. Can I recommend a different clap?
http://puu.sh/263xH
This clap fits SO much better with the song imo. Please try it and please consider changing this. If you do, don't forget to make the slidertickclap the same clap. - I feel that outside of the kiai time the hitsounding is too loud and stands out above the music too much.
- 00:30:941 to 00:45:133 - 60%
- 00:45:364 to 00:59:902 - 50%
- 01:46:149 to 01:59:995 - 70%
This is the same section as 00:15:941 to 00:28:633. They should be the same volume and the 70% sounds really nice with this new clap.
[249's Easy]
Map Design/Rhythm
- 01:02:325 (3) - I recommend using a different slider shape here. I don't think this loop looks very nice at all because the SV is too low to create a tear. That and it's a bit awkward to read it as is imo. I would recommend a shape but sliders seem to be bugged atm. -.-
- 01:42:457 (5,1,2) - The pause is a bit awkward to me. Maybe instead you could have a spinner to hit with vocal hold, that might be nice. Consider this:
Delete the 01:42:457 (5,1). Then put a spinner at 01:42:457 and ending at 01:44:303. Also add a circle at 01:45:226 and remove NC from 01:45:687. Here we have a nice spinner instead of a weird pause, also we have this nice 01:45:226 (1,2) which follow those two base hits in the music before the finish at 01:46:149 and play very well imo. There is also plenty of time after the spinner and the spinner ends just as the vocal hold ends so it fits nice.
- 01:00:018 to 01:31:380 - I'm really confused as to why you didn't include any sort of clapping in this part even though it's the busiest part of the song in terms of clapping in the music. And then you start up claps again at 01:31:380 which is when the music slows down and there really aren't claps in the music. -.- It's not a huge deal, just strange that you would include clapping in the more quite parts and not include it in the louder parts such as the kiai and just before it.
- 00:31:402 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Why on-beat clapping? It doesn't fit at all imo. Maybe switch the claps so they fall on the offbeats instead. At 00:37:864 you switch to offbeat. o.o
- 01:30:457 (4) - Better to have the custom finish on the end and not a whistle imo. The finish accents the idea in the music better.
- 00:59:556 (4) - Maybe instead of a whistle here, put the custom finish to accent the fade out effect that is presented by the music.
- 01:31:380 to 01:46:149 - Maybe remove all the claps from here. I'm not sure why you chose to having clapping here because it's the softest part of the song. It better for clapping to begin again at 01:46:149 just like in the music.
- 01:46:149 (1) - I think it would be better to have a soft finish here rather than the custom finish due to the loud finish in the music and the return of the base line in the music.
- 02:00:457 (4) - Consider adding the custom finish here for a nice effect.
Hitsounds
- 01:30:918 - Maybe add a green line and reduce volume by 20% or so for the slider here like the other diffs to accent the idea in the music better.
- 02:00:457 - Reduce volume to 5% for slider end? It creates a nice effect, and this is the only diff that it could be done in. It might be fun.
[Hard]
Map Design/Rhythm
- 01:37:380 (2) - This can be a bit awkward in play. I think it's best to ignore trying to follow the vocals here at all. Extend this slider so that it's a 1/2 slider instead of 1/4.
- 00:59:094 (1) - Maybe add the custom finish to the end. I think it makes a nice effect, just like the normal diff.
Great map, just a few suggestions.
Map Design/Rhythm
- 00:32:094 (6,1) - I feel like we need larger spacing to the 1. Consider placing the 1 so that it completes the diamond made by 00:31:633 (4,5,6).
- 01:30:918 (4) - Consider adding a NC here to make the change in SV a little more clear. Just like you do at 02:00:457 (1).
- 01:45:687 (4) - Same, consider a NC for the same reason as above.
Honestly after changing that clap and the volumes, I'm falling in love with these maps. (: I'm happy to see you mapping again Yasora, your maps are very nice.
Anyways, I hope this is helpful to you, and please change the clap. ;w;