Lizellota wrote:

Hi~ from my q~

[Insane]

- Mapping:

00:18:554 (8) - move to x:60 y:284? alrite
00:32:519 (1) - move to x:64 y:204 i think the current pattern flows better, changing this would also screw up the spacing too
01:38:037 (2) - add NC instead of 01:37:347 (1) k

- Hitsounds:

00:13:524 - add finish instead of 00:13:352 (1) //sounds better for me~ there is a soft finish at 00:13:352 (1) in the music
00:38:036 - add whistle? //i think sounds nice >w<~ ok
00:40:450 (7,8) - add claps? //because you are added it here 00:43:554 (1) k
00:45:968 - ^ 00:46:140 (7) - ^ yep
00:58:381 - add finish? i dont hear a finish in the background...clap works better imo
01:04:933 - clap sounds a bit awkward to me
01:05:623 - finish? same as above
01:13:899 (1) - this finish doesn't fit with the music well //i suggest to remove it removed all finishes that sounds awkward in kiai
01:33:209 - change to soft finish? //i think would be better.. i usually put soft finishes at places where you can hear from the music...this part suggests a heavier finish to me

finishes for me have weird delays sometimes, so i tend to avoid using it if its not a heavy part of the song

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hello.

I love this song and I'm really excited to see people mapping it with various styles.

Here's my novice mod, hopefully it can be of some use. Keep in mind that I started playing the game about a month ago so I am still developing skills.


Easy

01:04:416 (2) - The syncopation feels confusing here. I would nudge the slider left on the timeline by 1/4th so that it falls on the white tick, the 3rd beat of the measure. I would then make the slider 1/4 beat longer. It sounds good and keeps to syncopation. I guess move the slider closer according to the distance snap also.
its meant to follow that very loud whistle in the music, if i change it then it sounds a bit awkward having that huge sound in the middle of a slider

Really great easy it flows nicely.

Normal

00:05:075 (1) - I think it feels better if you nudge the 1 repeating slider left 1/4 so that it begins on the blue tick before the 3rd measure starts here. That and add another repeat to the end of it, and move it closer to the previous slider according to distance snap. It follows the music and sticks to syncopation from the previous slider end. I suggest this because I had an urge to play it 1/4 beat earlier when I played the map, but that may be because I know the song. alrite done

01:35:967 (1) - Maybe enlarge these heart sliders to make it so each is 1 and 1/2 beats. Somehow I just didn't like having to wait so long to hit the 2 and complete the heart slider, it feels better if they're larger.
This or you could make it all one long slider like in the hard difficulty, but maybe you were going for variety with the heart sliders in each difficulty.
changed to one slider instead, 1 1/2 notes sounds a bit awkward

I like this normal.

Insane

This map is really hard. Really, really hard.
I couldn't complete it without No Fail on, so I don't have much helpful to say.

00:36:830 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps are crazy ridiculous hard, but maybe I'm the only one that thinks so. they are indeed hard, but i have seen someone SS this diff so i wont judge on that. If you look at the video you see that these notes are stacked on top of the pink-purple circles that appear when the characters disappear. it was intentional ^_^

01:10:450 (1) - This part is epic. lol thanks, this is another part that i get a miss quite often

Really cool map. I'll practice so I can complete it.

Also, if you include a taiko difficulty, I think that you need to include 2 or else it can't be ranked. t/92508
this mapset was submitted before the new rule came out so it can bypass it (by only two days, close call)

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

I love this song

[Easy]
00:09:213 remove whistle on the first half aite
00:09:903 ^ yep
00:50:278 end slider at 00:50:795 there is this very loud whistle at 00:50:967 which is why i chose to end it there

[Normal]
00:09:213 remove whistle k
00:09:903 ^ k
01:27:002 change slider so it has 4 beats ending at 01:27:519 the vocal here is more dominant, so i chose to map that which is the slider i have

[Insane]
00:09:213 remove whistle k
00:09:903 ^ k

Jayce Piltover wrote:

SO MANY DIFFS!! Luckily they're short, so whatever...

[Easy]
01:39:071 (1) - I think the space in between this and the next slider is too close for an easy diff. there are no spacing restrictions after a spinner, in fact on easier diffs the notes after a slider should be in the center which is easier to hit. Its just the low AR that makes it seem jumbled together...gameplay wise it is pretty smooth

[Moonlight's Hard]
00:40:105 (5) - Maybe move down a bit to fill that imaginary curve with (4) fixed upon permission

[Insane]
00:47:864 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Too jumbled together. Spread 6-8 out away, like on the opposite side. changed to a different pattern and added a slider...figured there is something wrong here lol
(AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SO MANY WEIRD JUMPS!!) Makes it a little more difficult than I originally thought, good job :p

All suggestions, blah blah blah (don't use them if you don't want to)... Great job.

Akashi_S wrote:

From the modding queue..
All modding is suggestion unless indicated in bold.

[General]
If not using storyboard delete .osb file and full submit got it
Wow.. great use of blue ticks. thanks

[Easy]
01:27:002 (3) - align it to center line?: if applied, check spacing kk

[Moonlight's hard]
00:41:312 (2,3) - nazi. better blanket? fixed upon permission
01:15:967 (1,2,3,4) - maybe curve this combo instead of 90-degrees? as above

Good luck mapping!
And Star~ for awesome map!

Underflow wrote:

Hi, jonathanlfj.
I mod this beatmap by your request.

[General]
- When i download your beatmap (no video), show "This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!". Please re-upload your beatmap. that has been a consistent issue for this map...will ask an admin to check it if i cant fix it
- Looks like you are not use storyboard. Please remove .osb file. i swear i tried to remove this like 3 times already...will try again
- Inconsistency in timing points at "Nyquill's Taiko Oni". Please change to same value as other difficulty. that was missed when i changed the offset. fixed
- Inconsistency in preview time at "710sane". Please change to same value as other difficulty. done by chamelepeace710

[Easy]
01:38:036 (3) - New Combo k
01:38:726 (1) - Remove New Combo k

[Insane]
01:29:416 (2) - Don't you think this slider would look better apply reverse section? yep done

Sorry, I can't found other suggestions or problem. T^T

Konei wrote:

From my Queue~


[General]

* You need an easier Taiko diff. Even if your map is submitted before the rule, it's still recomended to have an easier taiko diff for a better spread. So should add a Mutsukashii or a Futsuu alrite i will try to find someone to do it cause i don't map taiko orz
* You should get rid of those black bars on the BG. Not only they look stupid on the BG, they make the thumbnail scary aswell. aite i will fix this when i get home
* Audio Lead in 3000 is too much imo. 2500 is enough I think. alrite


[Easy]

*Why you use 2,00 Speed ups for general? It doesn't makes any sense and makes the SV too fast for this slow song and an easy diff this was originally mapped on 174bpm until i was told to half it. therefore i multiplied the slider velocity by 2.0x to achieve the original velocity which was 1.0x, which i think is fine for an easy diff
00:01:800 (2) - You shouldn't place a Slider on a blue tick for an Easy diff. It sounds mostly weird for beginners and confuses them music suggests the note be placed here or else it sounds off, and i believe the intro follows a different rhythm from the main song, which is why i think the blue tick is fine (under 174bpm, its actually red tick)
00:03:179 (2) - ^ as above
00:04:558 (2) - ^ ^
00:07:317 (2) - ^ ^
00:08:696 (2) - ^ ^
00:33:726 (2) - ^ ^
00:34:071 (3) - The finish on the start is too loud and sounds unfitting here anyway the finish sounds fine, i lowered the volume a bit cause yeah its a bit too loud
00:35:795 (2) - You know what I want to say here until the singer starts singing, the rhythm seems to follow that of the intro, so i cant do anything here orz
00:57:002 (3) - allgin with 2 done
01:08:381 (1,2) - This would flow better imo http://puu.sh/17eOv alrite


[Normal]

* You tend to make your angles often straight like: http://puu.sh/17eVN or http://puu.sh/17eXR consider using some other directions ahh i will see what i can do when ideas come up
00:22:692 (3,4,5) - This pattern is too confusing for Normal fixed
00:40:450 (4) - The repeat should also have a whistle imo, it's in the music i put it didnt i? lol fixed
00:43:554 (1) - Whistle is better than clap here I think this one has clap across all difficulties...the music has a drum too so i think its fine
00:49:071 (1) - ^ as above
00:53:899 (4) - Same like 00:40:450 aite


[Moonlight's Hard]
i will just fix it cause i've been given then permission to
00:19:933 (2,3) - Spacing mistake this was intentional for flow purpose i think, spacing around 1.45x to 1.50x for any slider-circle or circle-circle patterns
00:21:312 (5,6) - ^ as above
00:28:726 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:29:071 (6,7) - ^ ^
01:23:381 (5,6) - unclean stack fixed

Nice diff otherwise~

Good luck for your Mapset!

chaotic_iak wrote:

Yay from queue.

Unrankable (must fix), problematic (should fix), probable problem (may fix), good stuffs (keep and try to do something similar (but don't be repetitive))

[Easy]
I'd say slider velocity too fast for Easy. originally mapped for 174bpm, and then came the bpm half...it is indeed playable unless you 4mod it lol
01:39:071 (1,1) - Gap seems too short for Easy the slider after it is stationed in the center so i think its fine

[Normal]
00:04:903 (3) - Unexpected number of repeats (expecting 1), probably caused by unfamiliarity with the song fixed to note + slider
00:17:002 (2,3) - 1/4-beat gap is too short for Normal, but BPM is below 120 so probably okay yes it is ok, and the majority of the song is acctually 87bpm, only the last 2 stanzas are 120

[Moonlight's Hard]
00:15:968 and so on - Distance too large compared to slider velocity; either increase the slider velocity or shorten between-object distance slider-note distances are different from slider-slider distances on purpose, and jumps are usually placed at least 1/2 beats away from each other, and since the song is rather low in bpm stuff like this is fine (moonlight is already fixing some of the beats so lets see what happens then)
00:34:243 (6,7,8,9,1) - Probably unexpected jump reduced spacing
00:41:830 (3,1) - Unexpected jump (this one is not "probably" as above since it's a single jump between normal flow) changed to 2 notes for less spacing

[Insane]
Improve readability. Many hidden objects around and high AR, plus stacks that are actually 1/2-beat apart (as opposed to 1/4-beat apart), plus slow music = unreadable and/or annoying and/or devilish.you should have seen the original version, that was like stacking hell lol. This is already fixed so there aren't as many stacks/hidden objects before, and i have asked many people to test it and they can fc very easily (not sure about hd/dt though). If i can think of any other ideas that would replace these stacks well then i will do so.

Hm...not a long mod. Probably because I'm not used to slow songs or it's good already. Well, good luck!