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Piko - Make My Day! (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Midasmens
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年10月12日 at 10:19:25

Artist: Piko
Title: Make My Day! (TV Size)
Source: Binbougami ga!
Tags: opening sunrise samfree banana star stream kds
BPM: 182
Filesize: 13471kb
Play Time: 01:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Banana's Day! (2.44 stars, 85 notes)
  2. KDS' Taiko Day! (4.83 stars, 560 notes)
  3. My Day! (5 stars, 271 notes)
  4. Normal Day! (4 stars, 125 notes)
  5. Star's Day! (4.99 stars, 220 notes)
Download: Piko - Make My Day! (TV Size)
Download: Piko - Make My Day! (TV Size) (no video)
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Make My Day!
My 3rd beatmap~
贫乏神が!

2012/07/30 add Taiko diff~

Banana's Day! (Eazy) by Banana done~
Normal Day! by me done~
Star's Day! (Hard) by Star Stream done~
My Day! (Insane) by me done~
KDS's Taiko by KDS done~
raririn
支持~
没kd了QAQ
Banana
cmn_891127
前排支持~奉上我的心~
Topic Starter
Midasmens
謝謝支持~
Updated Banana’s diff
raririn
Piko~!
渣渣mod Just Suggestions

[General]
*Tag里的Samefree→Samfree 你懂的orz
*在Tag里删除op 因为这个不能搜索没用
*Tag里加上star_stream?

[Banana's Day]
00:23:735 - 很明显的音,加个note?
00:27:032 (1) - 第2个点→(x=335,y=264)?
00:34:944 (1) - 加finish?
00:45:494 (1) - 这个转盘结束消音掉?
01:24:724 - 在这里才5%吧?
没啥可挑的/ \

[Normal Day]
00:03:296 (1,2,3) - 明明可以做成包围的嘛/ \这样多不好看
00:38:571 (2) - 没stack到 还差了0.02
00:50:768 (1) - ……不好吧
01:06:263 (4) - 没stack到 0.01
01:21:922 (1) - 这个还是做成渐弱效果吧?

[Star's Day]
00:33:626 (1,2) - remove whistle on either beginning or reverse,it sounds strange
00:34:944 (1) - finish on the beginning
Fine.

[My Day!]
*100%N太吵了>_<
00:51:757 (7,8) - 这两个位置略偏了
Nice Diff

/ \真是不好意思只写了这么点但是实在挑不出啥了
star~
Topic Starter
Midasmens

raririn wrote:

Piko~!
渣渣mod Just Suggestions

[General]
*Tag里的Samefree→Samfree 你懂的orz fix~
*在Tag里删除op 因为这个不能搜索没用 fix~
*Tag里加上star_stream? X

[Banana's Day] no change
00:23:735 - 很明显的音,加个note?
00:27:032 (1) - 第2个点→(x=335,y=264)?
00:34:944 (1) - 加finish?
00:45:494 (1) - 这个转盘结束消音掉?
01:24:724 - 在这里才5%吧?
没啥可挑的/ \

[Normal Day]
00:03:296 (1,2,3) - 明明可以做成包围的嘛/ \这样多不好看 X
00:38:571 (2) - 没stack到 还差了0.02 fix~
00:50:768 (1) - ……不好吧 0.0
01:06:263 (4) - 没stack到 0.01 fix~
01:21:922 (1) - 这个还是做成渐弱效果吧?X

[Star's Day]
00:33:626 (1,2) - remove whistle on either beginning or reverse,it sounds strange X
00:34:944 (1) - finish on the beginning it's a finish already
Fine.

[My Day!]
*100%N太吵了>_< 調到70%
00:51:757 (7,8) - 这两个位置略偏了 fix~
Nice Diff

/ \真是不好意思只写了这么点但是实在挑不出啥了
star~ Thanks
感謝Mod~ :3
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi~


My Day!

  1. 00:04:615 (1,2) - 这里这样摆怎么样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/369201 原来的不太美观
  2. 00:18:955 (8) - 这里三连比较好ww http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/369205
  3. 01:06:428 (4) - ^
  4. 00:58:680 (1,2) - 试试不要让slider尾那么近- -
  5. 01:01:318 (3,4,5,6) - 这样多无聊, 来把no way的部分改成往外走
  6. 话说no way的话其实可以考虑用circle代替slider呢 因为way|slider path是不是/_\ 然后go way的部分也可以下变速嗯
  7. 01:13:351 (5) - 这个感觉好奇怪=_= 能不能放成三连叠上下个note, jump一下也行
  8. 01:20:768 (1) - new combo。。。
  9. 01:21:757 (1) - 加个note? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/369204
Star's day!

  1. 00:17:801 (1,2,3,4) - make star? it's star's day after all~
  2. 00:47:637 (1,2,3,1) - ^ ~~
  3. 00:52:911 (2,3,4) - ^ for this one, large spaced 1/2 notes with less angle is pretty hard~
  4. 01:08:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 01:13:845 (1,2,3,4) - ^ don't use square jump, too hard for a Hard diff imo ;_;
  6. 00:19:779 (2) - here looks better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/369208
  7. 00:20:439 (1,2,3,4,5) - missing claps..?
  8. 00:23:900 (2) - o.o space it
  9. 00:27:527 (2) - make smoother..??
  10. 00:40:219 (1,2,3,4) - just feel that it doesn't llok nice ;_;
  11. 01:07:252 (3) - like this..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/369210
    320,72,67252,2,0,B|260:112|256:204|328:240,2,192.000004577637,0|8|4
  12. 01:09:889 (2) - remove note o.o
Normal Day!

  1. 00:04:615 (3) - 往下一格就对称了0.0
  2. 00:23:735 (2) - spacing too close ._.
  3. 01:10:713 (3,4) - 这一段为什么不跟歌词了o.o
  4. 01:16:648 (4) - 不科学o.o
Banana's Day!

  1. 00:03:296 (1,2) - 我想挑对称...
  2. 00:28:351 (3,1) - 稍不美观...
  3. 好 没了/.\
<banana> 我做的某gd原来是贫神的op- -

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Midasmens
Fix a little
Thanks~ Mod
Wreath


hello everyone :oops:

Blue : its not so good, you should fix it

[My Day!]
  1. DR-1. DR8 is too high, its not so good
  2. OD-1. ^
  3. 00:01:977 (5) - NC
  4. 00:11:867 (1) - remove NC
  5. 00:13:186 (1) - ^
  6. 00:14:505 (1) - ^
  7. 00:48:790 (1) - ^
  8. 00:50:109 (1) - ^
  9. 00:51:428 (5) - NC
  10. 00:58:598 (8) - move to x:92 y:224 i think better is this
  11. 00:59:340 (1) - remove NC
  12. 01:00:659 (1) - ^
  13. 01:01:318 (3) - NC
  14. 01:11:208 ~ 01:11:867 - this part is unnatural. i think unnecessary is SV change, unless if you have a reason
[Star's Day!]
  1. DR-1. DR7 is too high, is like insane
  2. OD-1.^
  3. 00:03:955 (2) - hit a score, i think you should fix this placement
  4. 00:47:637 (1,2,3) - distance 4.20!? ...i think this distance is insane, its not so good. i really hope change this
[Normal Day!]
  1. 01:06:263 (4) - i think this stack is not so good,gives confusion to beginners. i hope change this placement
[Banana's Day!]
  1. OD-1. i think better is this
i love piko XD
good song and map :)
thx for request ^^
good luck :oops:
Tur00
Hi, From queue.

[Banana's Day!]

00:12:197 (2,3) - this overlap is weird change it .
00:13:516 (4,1) - ^ same .
00:15:823 (3) - ctrl + H .
00:42:197 (2,3) - overlap.
00:52:746 (3) - ctrl + j .
00:58:680 (1) - try move this note to other place to dont disturb the Hp Bar.
01:00:659 (4,1) - Overlap.

[Normal Day!]

00:38:900 (3) - 2 grid up 1 right.
00:39:889 (4) - 2 grid up 2 right.
00:40:219 (1) - snap with 00:38:571 (2) .
00:42:856 (5,6) - replace this notes for a slider with "clap" in the last part of this slider.
00:56:043 (1,2,3,4) - this sliders is little hard to newbie try change it.
00:59:340 (3,4,3,4) - change this notes for sliders with "whistle" in the 1st part of the sliders
and "whistle & clap" in the 2nd part.
01:03:955 (1,3) - overlap weird.
01:09:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this sliders is little hard to the newbies dont use it. change it.

[Star's Day]

00:47:637 (1,2,3) - this is little hard to a lvl hard . is more usefull in a insane.

Only it.
Very good Diff =)


~~~//~~~
That's All.
Good Luck with the map go for ranked and.....
Good Day , no way , no way , no way ~(8) Lol
This song :X
Topic Starter
Midasmens
Update Banana's Day!
Thank~ mod
Mystica
here comes my mod.

[Easy]
00:11:208 (1,2,3) - 錯開點?
00:45:494 - 這的轉盤感覺有些不合適

[Normal]
00:33:955 - 感覺可以用2連做變化
00:37:582 (1) - 1/1slider感覺更合適
00:56:043 (1,2,3,4) - 這幾個間距可以稍微拉開點看起來好

[S.S]
00:46:812 (3,1,2,3,1) - really feels a little hard to read..so may ar+1?
01:13:845 (1,2,3,4) - these jump I feel not very fit..but it depends on you
01:22:087 - use greedline to decrease the volume?

[I]
00:31:318 - 這個白線起手三連感覺不是很好
00:37:252 - 根據你前面的來說這邊應該是三連 >_>
00:52:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個至少做到kiai段相互對應比較好?

good luck
-kevincela-
Hi \o/

[Banana's Day!]

  1. 00:11:208 (1) - 1 grid up just to make the blanket with 00:10:549 (2) - better?
  2. 00:21:428 (1) - Make it 1/1 shorter to follow the voice? As now the spinner's ending doesen't fit that well,and it doesen't follow anything!
  3. 00:48:132 (2) - Add a new combo here,since this note is the following of a spinner (that's a bug,so it would be better to fix!)
  4. 01:09:230 (3) - New combo here?
  5. 01:10:878 (1) - Move the new combo on 01:12:197 (2) - ,so that you keep the consistency with the following pattern
[Normal Day!]

  1. 00:04:285 (2) - 1 grid left? It won't ruin the spacing but instead will make the blanket with 00:03:296 (1,3) - perfect!
  2. 00:14:505 (1) - The New combo here doesen't have much sense, it would be better to remove it
  3. 01:02:637 (3) - New combo to keep the consistency with the previous pattern?
  4. 01:05:274 (3) - What do you think on doing an overlap just like in this picture? Imho,it suits better there.
  5. 01:12:032 (1,2,3,4) - The way you placed these sliders could have been better. Try to use this code,and see if it's ok for you. By using this code
    SPOILER
    348,260,72032,6,0,B|396:272,2,50,2|8|2
    336,160,72691,2,0,B|368:124,2,50,2|8|2
    236,172,73350,2,0,B|196:144,2,50,2|10|2
    248,272,74010,2,0,B|208:300,2,50,2|8|2
[Star's Day!]

  1. 01:02:637 (4) - New Combo here to keep the consistency with the previous pattern?
    Pretty good diff. Also,I don't see why the other guys are complaining about 00:47:637 (1,2,3) -,it fits pretty much good and it isn't actually that difficult to do. But opinions are opinions,so c:
[My Day!]

  1. 01:00:329 (2) - Is this misalignment done on puropose? If not,just fix by moving this at x:209 y:304
  2. 01:01:318 (3) - New Combo here to keep the consistency with the previous pattern?
Really good work! You stile has really improved,Midasmens!
Good luck with your map :3
Topic Starter
Midasmens
Thanks~ Mystica & -kevincela-
Fix a lot~
:3
KDS
Can I make a Taiko diff for you? >3<
Leorda
Hi


[General]
* Your diff name makes players are confuse about which is normal, hard or insane diff. Please included the difficulty name for all diff


[Banana's Day!]
00:12:527 (3) - Move further away from previous note, so it doesn't overlapped? (Nazi)
00:13:845 (1) - ^
00:14:834 - Add note here?


[Normal Day!]
00:13:845 (5,1) - Swap new combo?
00:48:131 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. Makes hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object)


That's all I got....
Topic Starter
Midasmens

KDS wrote:

Can I make a Taiko diff for you? >3<
If you want~ >3<


SPOILER

Leorda wrote:

Hi


[General]
* Your diff name makes players are confuse about which is normal, hard or insane diff. Please included the difficulty name for all diff


[Banana's Day!]
00:12:527 (3) - Move further away from previous note, so it doesn't overlapped? (Nazi)
00:13:845 (1) - ^
00:14:834 - Add note here?


[Normal Day!]
00:13:845 (5,1) - Swap new combo?
00:48:131 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. Makes hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object)


That's all I got....

Thanks~ mod :3
KDS
Topic Starter
Midasmens
Update~ Taiko diff
Thanks KDS x3~
Chewin
Hi Midasmens, mod request from my modding queue ;3

[General]
Clear :3

[Banana's Day!]
00:00:659 (1) - Add finish on this slider's start. It's awesome
00:07:252 (2) - Remove whistle to keep your pattern's hitsounds consistency
00:11:208 (1) - Finish here too :3
00:17:801 (2) - Remove whistle
00:21:428 (1) - This spinner should start 1/1 late reducing its end till 00:22:911 (In this way it follows the vocal much better)
00:30:988 (2) - You forgot NC:2 clap on this slider's repeat
00:34:944 (1) - I can hear a finish from the BGMusic, so you should remove the whistle on this slider's head adding a finish instead
00:45:164 (1) - Use distance snap please. This is your easiest diff and this small spacing would confuse beginners
00:48:132 (1) - Kiai time starts here and a finish would fit perfectly on this slider's head
00:58:680 (1) - Finish
01:09:230 (3) - Same of 00:34:944 (1) above
01:09:230 (3) - New combo
01:10:878 (1) - Remove New combo
01:12:197 (2) - Add New combo
01:18:461 (1) - Remove New combo
01:19:779 (2) - New combo

[Normal Day!]
00:11:208 (1) - I would add a finish on this slider's head since I can hear one from the song
00:15:164 (1) - Remove New Combo to keep consistency with 00:04:615 (3)
00:16:483 (3) - Use New Combo here instead
00:17:801 (1) - You can remove New combo
00:25:713 (4,5,6) - Select them and move to x:220 y:200. It flows much better because you would create a blanket between 00:23:735 (1) and 00:25:713 (4)
00:34:944 (1) - What about to remove finish (That in my opinion sounds TOO loud) adding a whistle instead? How you can hear from the music a whistle would fit much better than a finish hitsound here.
00:48:131 (1) - Same of Easy
00:58:680 (1) - ^
01:11:373 (4) - This slider really doens't follow the vocal/music so.. it's really bad in my opinion. You could make in this way:

01:14:010 (4) - ^
01:15:988 (3) - ^
Good map here

[Star's Day!]
00:22:087 (2) - CTRL + R flows much better.
01:06:593 (1,2,3) - I don't like this pattern, make in this way instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/387108
296,372,66593,6,0,B|404:364|436:252,1,191.999994140625,4|8
368,164,67087,1,0
272,100,67252,2,0,B|236:208|328:266,2,192.000004577637,0|8|4
01:10:549 (1) - Remove New combo.
01:10:713 (2) - Add New combo.
01:11:867 (1,2) - ^ Change new combo
01:13:186 (1,2) - ^
01:13:845 (1) - Remove New combo.
01:14:505 (1,2) - Change New combo.
01:15:823 (1,2) - ^ You should set combos following the vocal.

[My Day!]
01:21:922 (1) - Move 1/4 late and add a circle on 01:21:922:

That's all :3 Good luck >w<
Topic Starter
Midasmens
Thanks~ Mod :3
Flask
來了~~Request From In-Game PM

窮神!

[General]
  1. Kiai Time不一致, 雖然是GD不一樣但是我最喜歡Star的Kiai, 所以看你要不要修正吧~~
  2. Tags的"open"變"opening"
  3. TaikoBG.png 應該要.jpg, 可以省下300多KB的空間! 幫你轉好了~~~ http://puu.sh/OBex
[Banana]
  1. 00:12:197 (2) - 呃...這裡壓到(3)但spacing沒事...就很醜orz, 試著放到304,36?
  2. 00:13:516 (4) - ^ (472,272)
  3. 00:24:724 - 這裡為什麼要變回原來的聲音呢._.?? 2424下在這裡斷掉很詭異
  4. 00:31:318 - ^
  5. 00:35:274 - ^
  6. 00:36:593 - ^
  7. 00:43:186 - ^
  8. 00:42:856 (3) - 壓到一點點了被(2)!
  9. 01:00:659 (4,1) - 真的不喜歡這種overlap...你要搞成這樣還能接受... http://puu.sh/OB10
[Normal]
  1. 00:36:263 (4) - 最後那個錨點往上2 girds, 可以作個包住的效果
  2. 00:47:637 - 這條綠線有什麼意義x_x? 假如是降低spinner音量那應該設在spinner尾
  3. 00:48:131 (1) - 基本上這個會被"押忍"壓到. 可修可不修但建議修~
  4. 01:01:318 (1,2) - 為什麼我覺得這兩個是不一樣的orz... 假如真的是就弄成一樣, 假如不是的話我該睡了 (現在時間凌晨02:51)
[KDS' Taiko Day]
  1. Maybe diff name "Taiko DS Day"?
  2. 01:02:470 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
That's all hahahahahahahahaha.

[Star's Day]
  1. Seems fine!
[My Day]
我看不出什麼- -



加油~~射顆星!!
Topic Starter
Midasmens

Flask wrote:

來了~~Request From In-Game PM

窮神!

[General]
  1. Kiai Time不一致, 雖然是GD不一樣但是我最喜歡Star的Kiai, 所以看你要不要修正吧~~ 不變吧 :3
  2. Tags的"open"變"opening" fix~
  3. TaikoBG.png 應該要.jpg, 可以省下300多KB的空間! 幫你轉好了~~~ http://puu.sh/OBex 這個問題不大~ :3

[Normal]
  1. 00:36:263 (4) - 最後那個錨點往上2 girds, 可以作個包住的效果 fix~
  2. 00:47:637 - 這條綠線有什麼意義x_x? 假如是降低spinner音量那應該設在spinner尾 fix~
  3. 00:48:131 (1) - 基本上這個會被"押忍"壓到. 可修可不修但建議修~ fix~
  4. 01:01:318 (1,2) - 為什麼我覺得這兩個是不一樣的orz... 假如真的是就弄成一樣, 假如不是的話我該睡了 (現在時間凌晨02:51) 是一樣的呀 0.0 話說這麼晚了 lol
[KDS' Taiko Day]
  1. Maybe diff name "Taiko DS Day"?
  2. 01:02:470 (3) - Unsnapped circle. fix~
That's all hahahahahahahahaha.

[Star's Day]
  1. Seems fine!
[My Day]
我看不出什麼- -



加油~~射顆星!!
感謝Flask君~Mod
這麼晚了~真是感謝www >3<
lepidopodus
Taiko mod, requested by KDS.

[KDS' Taiko Day!]
- If you really want to, you can add one more go-go time in 00:00:659 ~ 00:23:076. That part of song is similar with current kiai part and also, you used the similar patterns in both parts.
- I don't recommend to put go-go time gap like one in 00:58:350, actually.

00:22:252 (2,1) - Try 'd k' than 'k d' here? Considering pitch of vocal and background drum sounds.
00:23:571 (1,2,1,1) - I don't know you like adjusting volume or not but how about lowering volume a bit for just these notes a bit? Though it isn't important at all... (Maybe 00:24:230 (1) too.)
00:45:494 (11) - Need to reconsider more about this drum roll, maybe. No significant 'dragging' sound or something like that to put drum roll, I think. Maybe remove this and add a note in 00:45:329, 00:45:494, 00:46:153 or something like that, it is calm part anyway.
01:14:505 (3) / 01:17:142 (2) - You really don't need this big note, I think. You didn't use one in the first beat of the measure previously and it is really feel different with big notes like 01:11:208 (1,2,1).

Pattern is pretty simple and solid. Not much to say about those patterns, good job.
Beren
O.O/


[Easy]
E最好不要有任何遮挡o.o
00:12:527 (3) - 不要和(2)相交
00:13:845 (1) - ^
00:19:779 (1) - 删nc
00:42:856 (3) - 碰到(2)了
00:45:164 (1) - 移远一点
01:01:318 (1) - 碰到(4)了
01:16:812 (3) - 节奏太猎奇
01:20:768 (1,2,3) - E来说太难了


[Normal]
00:47:472的绿线音量20?
01:13:845 (4) - 结束在01:14:340?


[Hard]
00:23:900 (2) - add N2-clap


[Insane]
这歌感觉用不到AR9
全部1/4放满和一些无意义的三连感觉不是很好
00:08:406 (7) - 加note
00:08:571 (1) - 放在00:08:406上面用长不折回slider 结束在00:08:900
00:09:230 (3) - 放在00:09:065上面长slider和前面一样
00:09:889 (5,7) - ^
00:30:906 (2) - 删除
00:31:400 (5) - ^
00:32:060 (7) - ^
00:32:389 (8) - 加note
00:34:944 (1) - 结束在00:35:191
00:36:016 (6) - 删除
00:36:263 (1) - 结束在00:36:510
00:37:582 (1) - 再结尾加note或者延长到 00:37:829
00:38:653 (7) - 删除
00:41:455 (4) - 加note
00:44:257 (2) - 删除
01:09:230 (2) - 开始的一段应该多些长slider和空拍
01:21:922 (1) - 加note 转圈移到后面的蓝线

good luck
KDS

lepidopodus wrote:

Taiko mod, requested by KDS.

[KDS' Taiko Day!]
- If you really want to, you can add one more go-go time in 00:00:659 ~ 00:23:076. That part of song is similar with current kiai part and also, you used the similar patterns in both parts.
- I don't recommend to put go-go time gap like one in 00:58:350, actually. fixed about both suggestion :3

00:22:252 (2,1) - Try 'd k' than 'k d' here? Considering pitch of vocal and background drum sounds. hmm.. ok
00:23:571 (1,2,1,1) - I don't know you like adjusting volume or not but how about lowering volume a bit for just these notes a bit? Though it isn't important at all... (Maybe 00:24:230 (1) too.) good idea! fixed :D
00:45:494 (11) - Need to reconsider more about this drum roll, maybe. No significant 'dragging' sound or something like that to put drum roll, I think. Maybe remove this and add a note in 00:45:329, 00:45:494, 00:46:153 or something like that, it is calm part anyway. Original Taiko and OSU! Taiko. These two game's role note are a little different from each other, you know. yeah... anyway, fixed.
01:14:505 (3) / 01:17:142 (2) - You really don't need this big note, I think. You didn't use one in the first beat of the measure previously and it is really feel different with big notes like 01:11:208 (1,2,1). ok fixed. that's right.

Pattern is pretty simple and solid. Not much to say about those patterns, good job.



thx mod! Dr. lepi :)


http://puu.sh/QXuz
Topic Starter
Midasmens
Thanks~ Mod
Fix~ some :3
Updated~
Banana
Topic Starter
Midasmens
Fine~ :3
Kite
[Banana's Day]
00:14:834 - add note for consistency
00:19:779 (1) - remove new combo
00:51:757 - add note for consistency
00:58:680 - this part seem a bit weird to leave out some white ticks, maybe map it like other similar sections?

[Star's Day]
Seem a bit too hard for "hard" diff imo
01:03:296 (5,6,7,8) - better stack 5,6 on same spot then make jump to 7,8 stack too.. with current AR its too confusing to read

[My Day]
A bit overmapped with triplets
00:52:334 - soft volume section here
00:52:417 - normal volume section here
^ repeat for next few
00:48:790 (1) - Remove new combo
00:50:109 (1) - ^
00:59:340 (1) - ^
01:00:659 (1) - ^
01:01:318 (5) - New combo
00:01:977 (5) - ^
00:11:867 (1) - remove new combo
00:13:186 (1) - ^
00:14:505 (1) - ^
00:22:417 (1) - ^
CivelMamosora
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