1. Why do you use AR9 on a 132 bpm map ;_; too fast
2. 00:34:166 - add note? o.o stack it like 3-note stream
3. 00:37:007 (6) - need 1/8!
4. 00:51:439 (1) - actually it's like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/366955
5. 01:08:370 (1) - move to (176,208)? looks better (the space in (2),(3))
6. 01:22:575 (5) - like this? looks better imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/366961
7. 01:50:189 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to make a perfect hexagon lol

1. 00:29:961 (1,2) - looks messy ._. try to make this look organized like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/366981
2. 00:51:552 (7) - needs 1/8 o.o
3. 01:02:689 (4) - whistle fits better here..?
4. 01:05:189 (1) - less curve like this..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/366986
5. 01:15:416 (4) - try to blanket slider (1) yellow...
6. 01:29:507 (5) - why not go inside 0.0

1. fine~

1. 00:50:416 (1) - move up and left 1grid 0.0
2. 0.0 fine

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hinsvar's Insane

1. Why do you use AR9 on a 132 bpm map ;_; too fast It's already AR8...
2. 00:34:166 - add note? o.o stack it like 3-note stream I've been making a star pattern here, unfortunately, so I won't do it.
3. 00:37:007 (6) - need 1/8! Done.
4. 00:51:439 (1) - actually it's like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/366955 ...You're correct. Done.
5. 01:08:370 (1) - move to (176,208)? looks better (the space in (2),(3)) Changed other things instead.
6. 01:22:575 (5) - like this? looks better imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/366961 Okay.
7. 01:50:189 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to make a perfect hexagon lol I suck at that (lol) Maybe I'll tweak it later, but for now, I'll let it be.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi~

Hard

1. 00:29:961 (1,2) - looks messy ._. try to make this look organized like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/366981 I think it's ok
2. 00:51:552 (7) - needs 1/8 o.o I think 1/4 good о.о
3. 01:02:689 (4) - whistle fits better here..?
4. 01:05:189 (1) - less curve like this..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/366986
5. 01:15:416 (4) - try to blanket slider (1) yellow...
6. 01:29:507 (5) - why not go inside 0.0 looks strange

Hard diff has some jumps which make its difficulty close to Insane I think, aside of that, nice map :3

Good luck~

-Bakari- wrote:

yo man, fix easy for me. i'll be glad

BeatofIke wrote:

General
-> Offset sounds a bit late when I first play the music on the editor. Offset 11760 sounds better.

Normal
-> Unsnapped timing sections?

Hard
-> Looks a bit too challenging for a Hard difficulty imo.
00:18:133 (2) - Add Whistle?
01:28:588 (3,4,5) - Dat spacing. O_O This jump looks too challenging for this difficulty imo.

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

[Hinsvar's Insane]
- You should place a spinner somewhere to have some differences with the scores as well ~ I can't really see a place to set a spinner on, so no.
01:14:714 (6) - Place this where 01:13:350 (3) was. Inverted; placed (3) where (6) was, instead.

kusano wrote:

[Hinsvar's Insane]

00:43:805 (1) - remove NC Okay.
00:56:078 (1) - ^ Nope; I'm using it to emphasize the polarity/syncopation/offbeat (so what term are we going to use anyway...) stuff.
00:59:714 (1) - ^ ^
01:06:987 (1) - ^ ^
01:09:260 (1) - ^ Okay.
01:09:260 (1) - ^ lol double line
01:49:714 (3,4,5) - ↓ like this? I'm fine with what it's like now.
01:51:305 (1) - remove NC Nope; I'm following the vocal here to decide the NC, but tweaked some NC around here anyways.

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested in my queue ~

[General]
- I think the second kiai would be better for the preview point. >.<
- 01:24:487 - 01:35:396 - Remove the kiai.
- End the second kiai at 01:53:464 and next one at 01:53:578
- Why put all the lyrics as diff specific? owo Cuz I use individual user nickname in each diff's...

Well mapped ~
Good luck and star ! >w<

kusano wrote:

hi there :3

[Hard]
OD+1 it's better imo

00:11:987 (2) - add whistle
00:13:123 (7) - add whistle at beginning
00:16:078 (3) - add whistle at ends
00:16:760 (5) - add whistle at beginning
00:26:532 (2) - add whistle
00:29:032 (4) - remove whistle
00:30:850 (3) - add whistle at beginning
00:31:305 (4) - ^
00:32:669 (2) - ^
00:33:805 (2) - ^
00:37:896 (2) - add whistle at ends
00:38:578 (3) - add whistle at beginning
00:58:805 (2) - remove whistle, and add whistle at 00:59:487 (4) -
01:47:896 (7,1) - switch NC

~ good luck

Fenya wrote:

Hi hi Ichi-kun n.n)/

Hard:
Copypaste? o.o
01:24:941 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I think you could do some jumps more "kawaii/sexy" :3
01:36:305 (6) - 2 grid up, 1 grid right
01:37:441 (3) - 1 grid right, 1 grid down

That's all, sorry for my nazi mod
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good map, good luck~

Hi hi Fenya thx for mod and star...but sorry, no change = =

Muya wrote:

[General]
Hard and Insane. these diff difficulty difference is too small. (I think both is Insane diff) it's just my style ^^'

[Hard]
02:04:260 (6,1) - overlap, fix because easy.

Leorda wrote:

Priveto! Yo!

[Hard]
00:19:032 (6) - New combo?
00:45:850 (3) - ^
01:18:123 (1) - I think this spinner is doesn't follows anything....
02:08:123 (6) - New combo?

Nice job~

Fenya wrote:

Hi hi Ichi-kun n.n)/

Bakari's Easy:
00:14:487 (4) - 1 grid down? nah, it doesn't make any sense

Muya wrote:

[Hinsvar's Insane]
00:29:032 (5,6) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/IIb1 Nope, that spot demands a 1/8 repeating slider.
00:14:259 (2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped orz I'm following the vocal's 'vibration' actually... But oh well. Changed (3,4,5) to a 1/2 slider.
00:29:032 (5) - See 00:29:032 (5,6).
00:31:305 (5) - ^
00:39:146 (1,2) - Don't really think there's a problem with this.

Leorda wrote:

[Hinsvar's Insane]
00:29:032 (5) - Remove 2 repeating slider, so players will click the next object with perfected timed Done.
00:31:305 (5) - ^ ^

Sandpig wrote:

I think this map has got enough mod.

just some little issue


Hard

00:58:805 (2,3,4) - this triplet is a little weird to me. and the whistle on 00:59:487 (3) seems too loud in compare with the part of the music here. Vol 50%
01:53:578 (6) - mb new combo?

good luck~

Sandpig wrote:

I think this map has got enough mod.

Easy

01:40:850 (3) - I think you still need a clap on 01:41:305. ~
01:58:123 (4) - ^ same stuff ~


good luck~

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Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

;^;
[General]
почему на бг труська? D:

-Bakari- wrote:

я бы мику на бг поставил.

Makar wrote:

The current offset is early; it should be 11,768 (compared and tested many times in editor with the upcoming taiko diff). ok :3 I take your offset

Also, add Sweet_Serenitee in the tags, it's her previous username that she uses to identify her difficulties since "Haruka" pulls a bunch of results.

Speaking of taiko, here is a very small part of an IRC mod for it while it wasn't submitted:

SPOILER

20:27 Haruka: : yeah
20:27 Haruka: : uh
20:27 Haruka: : I noticed that too
20:27 Haruka: : my taiko acc is bad
20:27 Haruka: : and sounds bad on auto
20:27 Haruka: : it's definitely off
20:28 Makar: : i fyou want to change yours
20:28 Makar: : th eoffset is 11768 js
20:28 Haruka: : okay
20:28 Haruka: : will do and I'll send update
20:28 Haruka: : if that's okay
20:28 Haruka: : for test
20:28 Makar: : mmk :3
20:29 Haruka: : does that mean
20:29 Haruka: : I gotta resnap everything
20:29 Makar: : not if you do it with the bar thing
20:29 Haruka: : is that f6 and something
20:29 Haruka: : I forget how to do it
20:29 Makar: : no
20:29 Makar: : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376234 this thing
20:29 Makar: : press the arrows
20:29 Makar: : if moves the notes fo ryou
20:29 Haruka: : .-.
20:29 Makar: : actually just resnap everything anyway
20:29 Makar: : lol
20:29 Haruka: : I clicked it
20:29 Haruka: : er
20:29 Haruka: : okay
20:29 Haruka: : how
20:30 Makar: : timing -> resnap all notes
20:30 Makar: : http://puu.sh/K2iE
20:30 Haruka: : thank you ;w;
20:31 Haruka: : http://puu.sh/K2jh
20:31 Haruka: : try it for me
20:31 Haruka: : er
20:31 Haruka: : unless you're ina mod
20:31 Haruka: : in a*
20:31 Makar: : testing
20:32 Haruka: : .-.
20:32 Haruka: : I wanted to see
20:32 Haruka: : :<
20:32 Makar: : its good
20:32 Makar: : I gtg eat sorry
20:32 Haruka: : YES
20:32 Haruka: : er
20:32 Haruka: : okay
20:32 Haruka: : ttyl then ;w;
20:32 Haruka: : thank you for the offset btw
20:44 Makar: : np and sorry for leaving suddenly
20:45 Haruka: : lol no worries :3
20:45 Haruka: : go eat :D
20:45 Makar: : im done
20:45 Makar: : xD
20:45 Makar: : small suggstion btw
20:46 Makar: : 01:38:131 (1,1,1) - this is kind ahard to hit after the break in the timing to me
20:46 Makar: : not sure what to suggest, but d dkd k d works for me ( adding a d at 01:38:358 - _
20:46 Haruka: : I was thinking about that
20:47 Haruka: : I really like this part though ;w;
20:47 Haruka: : can I keep it for now OTL
20:47 Makar: : I guess
20:47 Makar: : threw me off 3 times though, js xD
-random chatting that used to be here was removed-
20:58 Haruka: : http://puu.sh/K2FN
20:58 Haruka: : try that
20:58 Haruka: : I know you're gonna hate it
20:58 Haruka: : but whatever
20:59 Makar: : I like it
20:59 Makar: : o.ob
20:59 Makar: : I thought you were going to do something like
20:59 Haruka: : wut
21:00 Haruka: : srs
21:00 Makar: :  d d k ddd d k or something with a constant k pattern
21:00 Haruka: : oh
21:00 Haruka: : lol
21:00 Makar: : =w=
21:01 Haruka: : is that a bad thing? OTL
21:01 Makar: : the constant k pattern?
21:01 Makar: : in this part of the music yes
21:01 Makar: : just keep doing you have been xD
21:01 Makar: : dont think about it
21:01 Makar: : lol
21:02 Haruka: : ahdfgfryshj okayokayokay ahhhhh
21:02 Makar: : like
21:02 Makar: : 01:24:495 - 
21:02 Makar: : just listen to the katsu
21:02 Haruka: : are you sure you haven't become biased towards me now? Dx
21:02 Makar: : its constant
21:02 Makar: : which is good
21:02 Makar: : because in this part of the music
21:02 Makar: : it fits
21:02 Makar: : I thought you were going to do something similar
21:02 Makar: : in the second kiai
21:02 Makar: : but it doesnt fit there
21:02 Makar: : because the background is different
21:02 Haruka: : ohhh
21:03 Makar: : but you are not doing a constant k pattern
21:03 Haruka: : well derp
21:03 Haruka: : I know that silly
21:03 Makar: : youare following the background
21:03 Makar: : =w=
21:03 Haruka: : Dx
21:03 Haruka: : I can hear
21:03 Makar: : ofc
21:03 Haruka: : I'm not that retarded
21:03 Haruka: : OTL
21:03 Makar: : you mapped it
21:03 Makar: : lolol
21:03 Haruka: : no I meant
21:03 Haruka: : the first kiai is like
21:03 Haruka: : d k d k d k d k
21:03 Makar: : yeah I know
21:03 Haruka: : basically
21:03 Haruka: : and then the second kiai is back to that background funk or whatever
21:03 Haruka: : which is inconsistant
21:03 Makar: : >funk
21:03 Makar: : yus
21:03 Haruka: : LOL
21:04 Makar: : anyways keep mapping
21:04 Haruka: : xD
21:04 Haruka: : okiekie
21:04 : *Makar wanna see when finished
21:04 Makar: : :D
21:04 Haruka: : thank you for your opinion sharing
21:04 Haruka: : wwwww
21:04 Makar: : www
-random chatting that used to be here was removed-
21:52 Haruka: : I R DONE
21:52 Haruka: : there's a part that you'll rage at
21:52 Haruka: : BUT WHATEVER
21:52 Haruka: : I'M DONE
21:52 Haruka: : YEAAAAA
21:52 Makar: : lol
21:52 Makar: : send
21:52 Haruka: : http://puu.sh/K3mP
21:56 Haruka: : ohgod
21:57 Makar: : 00:34:495 (2,3,1) - 
21:57 Haruka: : mhm
21:57 Makar: : it feels awkward to play on-beat parts after playing all that complicated beat stuff
21:57 Makar: : not sure how to explain
21:57 Makar: : just ignore
21:57 Haruka: : er
21:58 Makar: : lol
21:58 Haruka: : why
21:58 Haruka: : sdgsftj
21:58 Makar: : you cant really do anything about it
21:58 Makar: : its not a big problem anyway
21:58 Haruka: : esfrttegyrtj
21:58 Haruka: : OTLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
21:59 Makar: : 01:38:131 (1,1,1,1) - I missed here
21:59 Makar: : again
21:59 Makar: : I highly suggest d kd k 
21:59 Makar: : lol
21:59 Makar: : as in
21:59 Haruka: : I noticed
21:59 Haruka: : edfrathu
21:59 Haruka: : fejgdhrtj
21:59 Haruka: : omg
21:59 Haruka: : OTL
21:59 Makar: : http://puu.sh/K3sI what you have now
22:00 Makar: : http://puu.sh/K3t4 what I suggest
22:00 Makar: : or http://puu.sh/K3tM
22:01 Makar: : preferably the second but the first suggestion follows the 2-plet style you had before
22:02 Haruka: : yeah
22:02 Haruka: : the second one is gross no offense
22:02 Haruka: : even if playability
22:02 Haruka: : though the first I'll consider
22:02 Haruka: : good replacement if at all
22:02 Makar: : I assume you just want to accent the vocals?
22:02 Makar: : thats the only thing there to really follow
22:03 Haruka: : I guess
22:03 Haruka: : why
22:03 Makar: : both suggestions do that so I dont see why you consider it "gross" since the katsu is on the vocals
22:03 Makar: : the extra don is just for playability
22:03 Haruka: : lololol ignore me xD
22:03 Haruka: : sorry OTL
22:04 Haruka: : anyways uh
22:04 Haruka: : keep pointing out shit
22:04 Makar: : you could change 01:38:131 (1) -  to a katsu if it makes the pattern better for you
22:04 Makar: : only for the secon dsuggestion though
22:05 Haruka: : right
22:05 Haruka: : though the second suggestion isn't bad
22:05 Makar: : everything else is awesome
22:05 Haruka: : I just checked it again
22:05 Haruka: : really
22:05 Haruka: : O_O
22:05 Makar: : yeah
22:05 Makar: : its
22:05 Makar: : "groovy"
22:05 Haruka: : I thought you would rage at 01:49:495 (1) - and subsequent parts that followed
22:05 Haruka: : and thank you T T
22:05 : *Haruka is so honoured
22:05 : *Haruka dies
22:06 Makar: : nah didnt have problems with it
22:06 Makar: : plays good to me xD
22:06 Haruka: : wow thank goodness
22:06 Haruka: : ;w;
22:06 Makar: : its just
22:06 Makar: : that one part
22:06 Haruka: : yay ヽ(；▽；)ノ
22:06 Haruka: : OTL
22:08 Haruka: : thank you for walking through this with me T T
22:08 Makar: : np o:

Haruka wrote:

I was gonna catch you in-game, but you logged out right before I could give it to you. OTL
so here it is with Makar's mod applied (including offset and addition of tag), and here is the bg~

Good good ^ ^ nice diff
And you change offset, but forgot change timing section and preview point :3 so, I fixed it....and change .png file on .jpg

1. HP+1 would be better in gameplay
2. 01:01:313 (2) - *nazi* move the second point to (60,320)? it's making better direction just in my opinion
3. 01:40:858 (3) - whistle instead of clap?
4. 01:58:131 (4) - ^
   
   
5. I don't like some NC pattern in this diff. The below is what I want to point out. Of course, you can ignore if you feel mine is wrong.
   
   about NC

   1. 00:48:131 (4,1) - replace NC
   2. 00:52:222 (3,1) - ^
   3. 01:02:677 (3) - NC
   4. 01:04:495 (1) - RNC
   5. 01:06:313 (4) - NC
   6. 01:08:131 (1) - RNC
   7. 01:09:949 (3) - NC
   8. 01:11:768 (1) - RNC
   9. 01:13:586 (3) - NC
   10. 01:15:404 (1) - RNC
   11. 01:17:222 (3) - NC
   12. 01:19:040 (1) - RNC
   13. 01:20:858 (4) - NC
   14. 01:48:131 (1) - RNC
   15. 01:49:949 (3) - NC
   16. 01:51:768 (1) - RNC
   17. 01:53:586 (3) - NC
   18. 01:55:404 (1) - RNC
   19. 02:01:313 (4,1) - replace
   20. 02:04:495 (3) - NC

1. 00:15:631 (2) - replace whistle end to head?
2. 00:16:768 (4) - whistle on the head?

1. 00:13:927 (2) - 1 grid down like 00:12:222 (3,4,5) - ?
2. 00:14:949 (6) - whistle?
3. 01:27:677 (3,1,2) - please make like this. The vocal between (3,1) can't be separate, because it says one word "onnaji(同じ)". It's ok if you make them with the same spacing, but please replace NC 01:27:904 (1,2) - at least. (I hope I can tell the thing correctly...)
4. I felt some difficulty gap between this and Normal because of high SV and many triplets... just saying

1. 01:39:495 (2) - missing clap? (head)

1. OD -1 because of slow BPM?
2. 00:51:540 - add k?
3. 00:51:654 - ^
4. 00:54:268 - ^
5. 01:24:495 (1) - I wonder that this D really fits here... I even suggest changing this to k
6. 01:50:177 - add d
7. 01:50:631 - add k?
8. 02:04:722 - , 02:05:177 - same to something like above

Naryuga wrote:

Hi~ via in-Game PM
All suggestions, so ignore some if you don't like~

NC = (add) New Combo
RNC = Remove NC

[Bakari's Easy]

1. HP+1 would be better in gameplay in my diffs HP and OD is alwas = AR -1.
2. 01:01:313 (2) - *nazi* move the second point to (60,320)? it's making better direction just in my opinion what? it feels better as is. (a specialy with FL :3)
3. 01:40:858 (3) - whistle instead of clap? nice catch~
4. 01:58:131 (4) - ^ ^
   
   
5. I don't like some NC pattern in this diff. The below is what I want to point out. Of course, you can ignore if you feel mine is wrong. nah, NC every 2nd ig white line feels good for me
   
   about NC

   1. 00:48:131 (4,1) - replace NC
   2. 00:52:222 (3,1) - ^
   3. 01:02:677 (3) - NC
   4. 01:04:495 (1) - RNC
   5. 01:06:313 (4) - NC
   6. 01:08:131 (1) - RNC
   7. 01:09:949 (3) - NC
   8. 01:11:768 (1) - RNC
   9. 01:13:586 (3) - NC
   10. 01:15:404 (1) - RNC
   11. 01:17:222 (3) - NC
   12. 01:19:040 (1) - RNC
   13. 01:20:858 (4) - NC
   14. 01:48:131 (1) - RNC
   15. 01:49:949 (3) - NC
   16. 01:51:768 (1) - RNC
   17. 01:53:586 (3) - NC
   18. 01:55:404 (1) - RNC
   19. 02:01:313 (4,1) - replace
   20. 02:04:495 (3) - NC

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332,336,74949,1,8
244,356,75404,6,0,B|160:320|64:344,1,180,2|0
60,252,76768,1,8
68,164,77222,2,0,B|124:172|140:216,1,90,4|8
224,188,78131,2,0,B|320:156,1,90,0|8
360,84,79040,5,2
284,36,79495,2,0,B|184:68,1,90,8|0
108,56,80404,1,8
140,140,80858,2,0,B|176:248|88:312,1,180,4|0
180,344,82222,1,8
228,268,82677,6,0,B|272:300|268:344,1,90,2|8
356,340,83586,1,0
444,316,84040,1,8
480,232,84495,6,0,B|452:164|452:164|472:132|468:88|436:60,1,180,4|0
372,124,85858,1,8
296,80,86313,2,0,B|196:56,2,90,2|8|0
276,168,87677,1,8
188,156,88131,6,0,B|184:204|212:240|240:248|240:248|212:316,1,180,4|0
304,308,89495,2,0,B|344:220,1,90,8|2
356,136,90404,2,0,B|344:88|280:80,1,90,8|0
204,52,91313,1,8
140,116,91768,6,0,B|52:80,2,90,4|8|0
216,164,93131,1,8
292,128,93586,2,0,B|320:176|396:160,1,90,2|8
432,228,94495,1,0
380,300,94949,1,8
316,236,95404,6,0,B|224:228|144:280,1,180,4|0
68,232,96768,1,8
88,144,97222,2,0,B|36:68,2,90,2|8|0
172,108,98586,1,8
248,56,99040,6,0,B|288:88|340:72,2,90,4|8|0
248,148,100404,1,8
336,172,100858,2,0,B|424:228|412:340,1,180,2|0
324,332,102222,1,8
236,360,102677,6,0,B|148:332,1,90,4|8
60,348,103586,1,0
52,260,104040,2,0,B|112:188|80:84,1,180,8|8
160,48,105404,2,0,B|256:56,1,90,0|8
244,144,106313,5,4
168,192,106768,2,0,B|200:240|256:232,1,90,8|0
332,236,107677,1,8
404,292,108131,6,0,B|484:356,2,90,2|8|0
320,320,109495,1,8
232,344,109949,2,0,B|148:288|48:300,1,180,4|0
44,208,111313,1,8
76,124,111768,6,0,B|116:92|112:36,2,90,2|8|0
132,192,113131,1,8
196,128,113586,2,0,B|284:108,2,90,4|8|0
216,216,114949,1,8
288,272,115404,6,0,B|336:288|388:260,1,90,2|8
424,188,116313,1,0
400,100,116768,2,0,B|476:32,2,90,8|4|8
320,56,118131,2,0,B|232:88|140:64,1,180,2|2
56,44,119495,5,8
64,132,119949,1,0
152,140,120404,2,0,B|144:192|100:212,1,90,8|4
108,300,121313,2,0,B|184:360|284:340,1,180,8|8
340,276,122677,5,2
428,300,123131,2,0,B|448:356|516:364,2,90,8|0|8
448,212,124495,2,0,B|472:112,1,90,4|8
404,60,125404,1,0
340,124,125858,1,8
284,52,126313,6,0,B|188:80,1,90,2|8
116,40,127222,2,0,B|88:80|100:132|136:176|200:168,1,180,0|4

Naryuga wrote:

Hi~ via in-Game PM
All suggestions, so ignore some if you don't like~

[Hard]

1. 00:13:927 (2) - 1 grid down like 00:12:222 (3,4,5) - ?
2. 00:14:949 (6) - whistle?
3. 01:27:677 (3,1,2) - please make like this. The vocal between (3,1) can't be separate, because it says one word "onnaji(同じ)". It's ok if you make them with the same spacing, but please replace NC 01:27:904 (1,2) - at least. (I hope I can tell the thing correctly...)
4. I felt some difficulty gap between this and Normal because of high SV and many triplets... just saying はい、少し

That's all I can find. Good luck!

Naryuga wrote:

[Hinsvar's Insane]

1. 01:39:495 (2) - missing clap? (head) ...You're correct. Will add.

HelloSCV wrote:

Hinsvar's Insane
00:29:495 (7) - add whistle start of slider ...Did you mod with the old offset? Anyway, done.
00:56:086 (1) - add whistle? Done.
00:57:904 (5) - how about this? http://puu.sh/K9ES Done in a different way to keep the spacing's consistency.
01:55:063 (5) - delete note? Done.
01:56:313 (4) - ^ i think this is better for rhythm ^

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue

SPOILER

Hard
00:36:995 (3) - add finish end of slider
00:51:540 (7) - ^
01:09:722 (3) - check distance ( I think this note have little bit different DS with 01:09:495 (1,2) - these notes)
01:21:313 (1) - whitsle -> clap
01:34:040 (1) - add clap start of slider
01:35:404 (2) - clap -> whislte

Nice song!! xD good luck!

thaaaanks

IchiGUN wrote:

Good good ^ ^ nice diff
And you change offset, but forgot change timing section and preview point :3 so, I fixed it....and change .png file on .jpg

Naryuga wrote:

Hi~ via in-Game PM hi~
All suggestions, so ignore some if you don't like~ let's see what I can change~

[Haruka's Taiko]

1. OD -1 because of slow BPM? usually I use 6 OD for my lower bpm maps, but due to the more complex patterns in this one, lowering it would probably be a good idea.
2. 00:51:540 - add k? I'm following the beat in the background for this segment with added notes for playability.
3. 00:51:654 - ^ ^
4. 00:54:268 - ^ ^
5. 01:24:495 (1) - I wonder that this D really fits here... I even suggest changing this to k there is undoubtedly a finish here, and kkK is unrankable, so this is a no-go; plus I believe this sounds better as a D.
6. 01:50:177 - add d this would break the flow of blue tick doubles for this part, making it hard to read and play (notice how these doubles are separated by 2 ticks each and all start on a 3/4 beat).
7. 01:50:631 - add k? ^
8. 02:04:722 - , 02:05:177 - same to something like above no change to the above, so no changes here either.

That's all I can find. Good luck! thanks for your suggestions!

1. Timing (offset), Priview Point, Tags: Inconsistent in Hinsvar's Insane

1. 00:11:767 (1) - maybe add whistle in slider's beginning? make the beginning not really quiet
2. 00:13:131 (2,1,3) - nice finish hitsounding, but more better again if you decrease the volume into 50% since this part just has a bit music sound and the finish sound make too loud
3. 00:40:404 (5) - this slider reverse make a bit overlap with (2) sliderborder. maybe, just moving the reverse point into x:224 y:120?
4. 00:48:131 (4) - move this some grid up? not good to look because too near with circle (2). like this imo..
5. 00:55:404 (1) - this new combo is not needed. make the combo set same as before.
6. 01:11:768 (1) - this slider curve is look a bit force the direction into (2). maybe, just make that more curve like usually?
   

   372,56,71768,6,0,B|440:44|496:112|468:188,1,180,2|0

7. 01:36:768 (2,3,4) - I guess more better if whistle in here instead the clap.. since the music is too silent. for (3), remove whistle in the beginning into the reverse.
8. 01:58:131 (4) - remove whistle in beginning?

1. 00:19:040 (4) - sorry for nazi.. maybe, move this into x:152 y:288? looks more symmetry with (1,2,3)
2. 00:54:949 - add a note in here? I felt a bit empty orz.. beside that for following vocal "be"
3. 01:02:677 (1,2,3) - please stack this as usually. this stack will make the newbie player confuse.
4. 01:26:313 (5) - add whistle in beginning for consistent hitsounding?
5. 01:38:358 (1) - mm, if you follow the vocal, this slider should begin at 01:38:131 if you worry about kiai begin, you can make this more longer until kiai begin. this way isn't broke the rhythm imo
6. 01:42:677 (1) - again, add whistle in slider's end for consistent hitsounding
7. 01:50:858 (3) - can you make this slider isn't touching slider (2)? not good to look when gameplay orz
8. 01:59:949 (3,4,1) - same with 01:02:677
9. 02:03:586 (1) - this new combo isn't necessary. the other combo set was until 4 or 5. so, remove it?

1. 00:14:495 (5) - add whistle? seems fit with vocal and make a combination with (6)
2. 00:29:040 (4) - similar think with above
3. 00:33:131 (4) - ^
4. 00:34:949 (7) - this... slider curve is mess orz. try this one maybe? don't forget to fix stack for next triplet
   

   296,96,34949,2,0,B|312:32|400:16|440:72,1,180

5. 00:51:995 (1,2,1,2,1) - honestly, this pattern make me confused. can change it to another easier pattern?
6. 00:56:313 (3) the clap sound is a bit weird to hear.. maybe change it into whistle? more soft in my ears. also, this suggestion is same for some spot in below:
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:57:222 (3) -
   2. 00:59:949 (1) -
   3. 01:00:858 (2) -
   4. 01:03:586 (2) -
   5. 01:04:495 (2) -
   6. 01:06:313 (6) -
7. 01:17:677 (2) - add clap for consistent hitsounding too?
8. 01:19:268 (1) - I don't think this note should be new combo. before mapset has too short combo, so remove this new combo is better.
9. 01:21:086 - add a note in here? I felt empty in here orz
10. 01:37:222 (2) - why suddenly clap sound in here? you just add whistle in before. so, change it?

1. note: I mod this after changed/fix the offset
2. 00:14:608 (3) - seriously, this slider is not comfortable to click and drag. I guess, just add a circle at 00:14:722 is more better.
3. 00:26:995 (3) - remove whistle in beginning. the whistle in there isn't fit with whistle in the end orz
4. 00:32:904 (5) - in here, remove whistle in the end. moar better to hear if not too many whistle in here imo
5. 00:39:722 (3) - this whistle should added in circle (4). the sound similar with 00:32:449 (4) -
6. 00:48:131 (3) - ..nazi.. 2 grid right? make more look symmetry triangle pattern in here orz
7. 00:53:813 (1) - don't spam too much new combo. remove please?
8. 00:59:722 (1) - add whistle in here like you did at 00:56:086 (1) - ?
9. 00:59:949 (2) - remove clap in slider's end. that's in the wrong place orz and not fit with the song
10. 01:02:449 (3) - ^
11. 01:03:586 (3) - in here same, please remove clap
12. 01:04:495 (3) - ^
13. 01:06:086 (5,1,1) - ^
14. 01:15:404 (1) - in slider's end, change the whistle with clap. be better following the drum sound with clap
15. 01:18:358 (4) - remove clap in slider's beginning. that's forcing fit with the music, but the result is not fit >_<

• 
  00:14:608 (3) - seriously, this slider is not comfortable to click It's only 1/4 beats apart from the previous slider, so yeah, I understand your feeling. Still won't change it though; I think this is the most fitting thing to do.
  00:26:995 (3) - remove whistle in beginning. the whistle in there isn't fit with whistle in the end orz Nope. I'm following the piano (or whatever instrument that is; sounds close to that though), and it's 1/2 beats long.
  00:32:904 (5) - in here, remove whistle in the end. moar better to hear if not too many whistle in here imo I'm emphasizing the vocal here, so no.
  00:39:722 (3) - this whistle should added in circle (4). the sound similar with 00:32:449 (4) - Okay.
  00:48:131 (3) - ..nazi.. 2 grid right? make more look symmetry triangle pattern in here orz ^
  00:53:813 (1) - don't spam too much new combo. remove please? ^
  00:59:722 (1) - add whistle in here like you did at 00:56:086 (1) - ? ^
  00:59:949 (2) - remove clap in slider's end. that's in the wrong place orz and not fit with the song Nope; I think it's fine as is.
  01:02:449 (3) - ^ ^
  01:03:586 (3) - in here same, please remove clap Fine.
  01:04:495 (3) - ^ ^
  01:06:086 (5,1,1) - ^ ^
  01:15:404 (1) - in slider's end, change the whistle with clap. be better following the drum sound with clap ^
  01:18:358 (4) - remove clap in slider's beginning. that's forcing fit with the music, but the result is not fit >_< ^

Hinsvar wrote:

Not sure why I can't quote Yasora's post, so I'll reply by my own way.