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Hyadain - Start it right away (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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S h i o n
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S h i o n
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年7月10日 at 18:42:42

Artist: Hyadain
Title: Start it right away (TV Size)
Source: Kuroko no Basuke
Tags: JoJo No_Gu Yasora kanpakyin ending basketball KnB
BPM: 165
Filesize: 14524kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Gu's Hard (3.26 stars, 200 notes)
  2. Insane (3.96 stars, 285 notes)
  3. JoJo's Normal (1.97 stars, 125 notes)
  4. Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni (4 stars, 418 notes)
  5. Yasora's Easy (1.29 stars, 79 notes)
Download: Hyadain - Start it right away (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Yasora's Easy - Yasora
JoJo's Normal - JoJo
Gu's Hard - No_Gu
Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni - kanpakyin
Last edited by S h i o n , edited 16 times in total.
JoJo
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JoJo
液 沙发 :>
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
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kanpakyin
As per your request:

Timing here:

offset: 732
suzutsukikanade
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suzutsukikanade

S h i o n wrote:

I need a nice BG for the map!!!
If you want you can use one of these two BG's

SPOILER


I love this music *--*
GL in ranking!
S h i o n
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S h i o n

suzutsukikanade wrote:

S h i o n wrote:

I need a nice BG for the map!!!
If you want you can use one of these two BG's

SPOILER


I love this music *--*
GL in ranking!
Thanks!!
The first one is good and I'll consider use it~

Kd for taking the time
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
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kanpakyin
Done.

Taiko Oni 8~9*

Diff and BG Here.

Timing: Offset試試 731~732?

No kuds plz.
S h i o n
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S h i o n
好~

offset changed to 731
Yasora
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Yasora
done~
KuronumaSawako
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KuronumaSawako
Source maybe Kuroko no Basuke?
S h i o n
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S h i o n

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Source maybe Kuroko no Basuke?
Yes, you're right~ Thanks!!
tutuhaha
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tutuhaha
重新full一遍
不要用太鼓难度full
现在网页显示你是没video的=A=
No_Gu
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No_Gu
http://puu.sh/11hcK done
直接解压进去，放了俩音效文件
Kiiwa
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Kiiwa
Good map
Citrus
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Joined January 2011
Citrus
[General]
tags不填么?

[Yasora's Easy]
00:35:640 (3) - remove the clap
01:01:640 kiai time start from here
01:01:821 (1,2) - try this

01:03:276 (4) - end at 01:04:185
01:04:731 (1) - start at 01:04:549

01:26:549 spinner and kiai time end at here

[JoJo's Normal]
00:58:912 何不像easy难度一样用两个spinner？如果改了的话就把00:57:458 (1) - 的finish去掉然后加到第二个spinner上

[Gu's Hard]
00:08:912 加个note
00:32:912 (2) - （148,208）
00:56:003 (1) - 开头whistle
00:58:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里太难读了，建议换一种排列方式；如果坚持这么排列的话，就试试在00:59:458 (4) - 和01:00:003 (7) - 处NC

[Insane]
00:07:821 (1,2,3) - 这里是要对称么？最好再修改一下
00:10:731 (1) - 稍微修了一下这个圆形
263,216,10731,6,0,B|223:216|183:250|167:298|183:356|223:394|287:394|343:378|367:330|367:282|351:240|315:216|272:215,1,450,2|2
00:22:185 (5) - （92,244）就是使前后距离一样

水平有限，只能找到这些了，希望能有帮助，怒射
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel
as your request via in-game PM ~ :)




Red words = Unrankable stuff
Blue words = the thing I think it must be fixed
Black words = If I were you,I would do that.
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice




Insane

  1. 00:10:549 (6) - 這顆的間距看起來略怪，看看要弄成等間距或是疊在00:10:731 (1)上，看起來舒服點
  2. 00:13:276 (1) - 加個"S:1 100%"的clap在尾部 ? 雖說效果不大明顯就是/.\
  3. 00:22:549 (1) - 頭上finish，這裡有鑼聲
  4. 00:27:640 (4,5,1) - 把這些移到(120,84)，不然00:27:640 (4)和00:27:276 (3)碰在一起會不好看呀/.\
    這類細節注意一下圖會更美觀(:
  5. 00:58:549 (9) - 這個疊在短slider下面我感覺詆毀了一點flow，建議放在(332,244)
  6. 00:58:731 (1) - 頭上的whistle換成finish，除了有鑼聲的原因外
    finish也有助於提醒一段旋律進入另外一段的功用，所以在過渡時放finish效果會較好
  7. 01:00:912 (1) - 頭上放個finish很合音樂啊\:D/
  8. 01:04:185 (2) - 這裡的whistle換成finish有強調的作用，而且也較合音樂
  9. 01:04:549 (1) - 唔，slider弄成跟01:04:185 (2)一樣的看起來會好點吧/.\，突然個尖的看不大順眼lol
    其實01:01:640 (1)也是，因為前一個slider是圓的，可黏在後面的slider卻是尖的就會有些違和感
    另一個原因可能就是你這難度幾乎都用圓滑slider而導致尖的slider的存在有些突兀
  10. 01:07:094 (2) - 同whistle換finish
  11. 01:17:458 (5,1) - 這之間的間距縮小對我而言打起來就是不舒服，可能是因為人聲仍在進行中你卻停止放跳
    我的建議是這樣
  12. 感覺沒有難到要用AR9的程度lol，雖然以歌曲來說是OK的，但是圖沒有；OD8的話...也不大適合
  13. 雖然圖稍微亂了些(也就是一點點)但是打起來舒服，放心去找mod啦o.o

Gu's Hard

  1. 00:25:276 - 加個note嗎 ? 我知道你作圖基本上是跟鼓點，但是
    我認為00:24:549 (1,1)之間的間距會讓玩家confused(按太快)
    另一點是note加上後譜面較有連貫性，而且對於我來說聽起來會舒服挺多
  2. 01:00:731 (2) - 這note不要跟slider重疊在一起會比較方便玩家判斷
    其實我覺得對Haerd來說這pattern難了，若是我我會刪note加折返，這樣也算難了
    嘛我知道你八成不會改成那樣所以就建議分開囉/.\
  3. 01:14:912 (1,2,3,4) - 由於前面01:13:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6)音效和節奏較飽滿
    這段就顯得相當單調，而且有些無聊，也許能換其他形式。
    還有一點，這裡也沒有變換為更簡單的節奏和排列的理由，
    這感覺就像歌曲仍在進行，你卻硬要讓它變慢一樣，所以會感到一些違和
  4. 01:24:821 (3) - ...沒有變慢的要素，絕對很奇怪，完全只需要平常速度就好lol

Normal

  1. 00:28:367 (1) - 頭上finish，有鑼聲的說030
  2. 沒了 !? lol

Yasora's Easy



  • fine


mod之後就感覺不難聽了xD
別再墳了快rank ! \ˋAˊ/
等到泡的時候我再射星
gl ~
:)
No_Gu
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No_Gu

thou bad wrote:

[Gu's Hard]
00:08:912 加个note不加
00:32:912 (2) - （148,208）可
00:56:003 (1) - 开头whistle可
00:58:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里太难读了，建议换一种排列方式；如果坚持这么排列的话，就试试在00:59:458 (4) - 和01:00:003 (7) - 处NC先保留意见看看别人怎么说

DarknessAngel wrote:

Gu's Hard

  1. 00:25:276 - 加個note嗎 ? 我知道你作圖基本上是跟鼓點，但是
    我認為00:24:549 (1,1)之間的間距會讓玩家confused(按太快)
    另一點是note加上後譜面較有連貫性，而且對於我來說聽起來會舒服挺多个人来说我比较喜欢跟曲子里的怪声音，这里跟那个声音之后如果再加note的话整个感觉就没了
  2. 01:00:731 (2) - 這note不要跟slider重疊在一起會比較方便玩家判斷
    其實我覺得對Haerd來說這pattern難了，若是我我會刪note加折返，這樣也算難了
    嘛我知道你八成不會改成那樣所以就建議分開囉/.\是个问题但是还是不想改，看看别人意见
  3. 01:14:912 (1,2,3,4) - 由於前面01:13:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6)音效和節奏較飽滿
    這段就顯得相當單調，而且有些無聊，也許能換其他形式。
    還有一點，這裡也沒有變換為更簡單的節奏和排列的理由，
    這感覺就像歌曲仍在進行，你卻硬要讓它變慢一樣，所以會感到一些違和    K
  4. 01:24:821 (3) - ...沒有變慢的要素，絕對很奇怪，完全只需要平常速度就好lol那就太长了，而且tick也多所以没问题
http://puu.sh/1dxwH
S h i o n
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S h i o n

DarknessAngel wrote:

Insane

  1. 00:13:276 (1) - 加個"S:1 100%"的clap在尾部 ? 雖說效果不大明顯就是/.\
  2. 01:04:549 (1) - 唔，slider弄成跟01:04:185 (2)一樣的看起來會好點吧/.\，突然個尖的看不大順眼lol
    其實01:01:640 (1)也是，因為前一個slider是圓的，可黏在後面的slider卻是尖的就會有些違和感
    另一個原因可能就是你這難度幾乎都用圓滑slider而導致尖的slider的存在有些突兀 01:01:640和01:01:640之后都是跟的连打 个人感觉不用圆滑的辨识度更高... 先放着吧
  3. 感覺沒有難到要用AR9的程度lol，雖然以歌曲來說是OK的，但是圖沒有；OD8的話...也不大適合 [/color]
除了这几个之外，别的都改了。 很有用的mod!
Yasora
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Yasora
here~
http://puu.sh/1dAvA
JoJo
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Joined July 2010
JoJo
抱歉来晚了> < 图载了十几遍都没载下来囧死我了...

thou bad wrote:

[JoJo's Normal]
00:58:912 何不像easy难度一样用两个spinner？如果改了的话就把00:57:458 (1) - 的finish去掉然后加到第二个spinner上 //可~加了个spinner

DarknessAngel wrote:

Normal

  1. 00:28:367 (1) - 頭上finish，有鑼聲的說030 //好的加了~
  2. 沒了 !? lol
Thanks all =v=/
http://puu.sh/1e51D
564944103
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:? :?
lkx_Shore
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lkx_Shore
[Insane]
00:04:912 (3) - whistle
00:10:731 (1) - 拉到白线吧...?不拉到白线实在不好打
00:13:276 (1) - 尾巴finish
00:25:821 (4) - 这个到红线停,蓝线加个note感觉好点(虽然不换也没什么
00:37:640 (1) - 改成这样好看点http://puu.sh/1wEfU
00:57:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 人性丧失
01:13:821 (3,4) - 同到红线停，蓝线加note
01:19:094 (2,3,4) - 没融入节奏.听着好别扭

flow挺好的.就是连打部分打起来还是有点不顺手...

[Gu's Hard]
01:13:458 (1,2) - 感觉挺别扭的...
01:24:549 - 加note
01:24:731 (3,4) - 感觉2连不是很好...滑条直接白线起就是了

[JoJo's Normal]
AR-1
HP+1
01:24:731 (6) - ......看不清轨迹

[Yasora's Easy]
01:01:640 (1) - change into http://puu.sh/1wElM
S h i o n
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Topic Starter
S h i o n

lkx_shore wrote:

[Insane]
00:04:912 (3) - whistle 好
00:10:731 (1) - 拉到白线吧...?不拉到白线实在不好打 感觉这样好点= =
00:13:276 (1) - 尾巴finish 这里加什么都有点奇怪其实.. 所以没加
00:25:821 (4) - 这个到红线停,蓝线加个note感觉好点(虽然不换也没什么 no
00:37:640 (1) - 改成这样好看点http://puu.sh/1wEfU no
00:57:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 人性丧失 恩改了排列了
01:13:821 (3,4) - 同到红线停，蓝线加note 我觉得挺合拍的呀， 和后面的01:15:458 (3,4) -也对应
01:19:094 (2,3,4) - 没融入节奏.听着好别扭 先留着吧..

flow挺好的.就是连打部分打起来还是有点不顺手...
多谢
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Hi Shion :3 Mod4Mod on your queue~

Red = Must fix
Black = Suggestion

General:
  1. Add "ending" and the guest diffs names on tags~

Ya-chan's Easy:
There is no video here ></
  1. 00:14:185 (2) - move this 1 grid right so it'll line with the last slider~
  2. 00:30:185 (4,1) - switch those nc because the vocal started on the 4 not the 1~
  3. 00:46:912 (4) - add finish on the slider's end it's fits will with music~
  4. 00:50:185 (1) - ^ but add one too on the slider's start~
  5. 01:01:821 (1) - whistle on the start sounds too low tbh >< i think i suggest you to add a finish instead ~
  6. 01:12:003 (3) - ^
  7. 01:23:640 (1) - ^
  8. 01:24:731 (2) - add finish instead of clap sounds much better too me~


BakaJo's Normal:
the sv is too fast for normal imo maybe you should lower it down a bit~
Just this and good work on it :3


Gu's Hard:
  1. 00:29:821 (1) - add finish on the start it's sound better with it~
  2. 00:37:094 (1) - ^

Insane:
  1. 00:37:094 (2) - Add finish here same as i said on the other diffs~
  2. 00:40:003 (1) - finish here so it's fits with music~
  3. 00:42:731 (1) - ^ but at end~
  4. 00:44:367 (1) - ^ at the start~
  5. 00:45:821 (1) - ^
  6. 00:47:276 (6) - Add finish on this note~
  7. 00:48:731 (1) - ^
  8. 00:50:185 (1) - ^ but on the start of the slider~
  9. 00:54:549 (1) - ^
  10. 01:11:821 (1,5) - those looks bad ></ maybe you should stick them together~
  11. 01:21:458 (2,4) - The 2 is hidden by a revers so it's unrankable ~ fix it plz~


tbh i dont like the gap btw the Easy and normal. because the normal seems too hard for a normal diff.

But anyways good mapset as always :3 and good luck~
S h i o n
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Topic Starter
S h i o n

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hi Shion :3 Mod4Mod on your queue~

Red = Must fix
Black = Suggestion

General:
  1. Add "ending" and the guest diffs names on tags~ ok
Insane:
  1. 00:37:094 (2) - Add finish here same as i said on the other diffs~ fixed
  2. 00:40:003 (1) - finish here so it's fits with music~
  3. 00:42:731 (1) - ^ but at end~
  4. 00:44:367 (1) - ^ at the start~
  5. 00:45:821 (1) - ^
  6. 00:47:276 (6) - Add finish on this note~
  7. 00:48:731 (1) - ^
  8. 00:50:185 (1) - ^ but on the start of the slider~
  9. 00:54:549 (1) - ^ all those i think a whistle will be enough, finish's too much.
  10. 01:11:821 (1,5) - those looks bad ></ maybe you should stick them together~ ok
  11. 01:21:458 (2,4) - The 2 is hidden by a revers so it's unrankable ~ fix it plz~ actually, the reverse arrow can be seen to some extent. http://puu.sh/1wYt2 And the same rhythm appears 2 times ,so it should be ok~


tbh i dont like the gap btw the Easy and normal. because the normal seems too hard for a normal diff.

But anyways good mapset as always :3 and good luck~
thanks~
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
Taiko Mod from My Queue ♪

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Taiko Oni]
不会感觉hitsound太小声？建议都放Normal 100%

00:20:731 - 试试放d?
00:28:549 - ddd?
00:28:549 - ddk
00:28:912 - d
00:30:912 - ^
00:32:549 - D
01:00:367 - d
01:01:640 - D
01:01:821 (1,2) - 这....建议删除, 好奇怪...
01:02:003 - d
01:04:549 - D
01:04:731 (1,2) - 同上觉得删除比较好.
01:12:185 - d
01:16:912 - k

就这样，加油 0.0/
athiota33
547 posts
Joined January 2011
athiota33
M4M
Sorry late ><

[Yasora's Easy]

No video for this diff?
01:01:821 (1) - I think this note should start at 01:01:640
01:04:003 (3) - Make 2 sliders for this part. More fit imo ><
01:06:185 (1) - ^
01:12:003 (3) - Spacing ><

[JoJo's Normal]

00:09:094 (1) - Move up a bit
01:24:731 (6) - Change this slider into spinner?

[Gu's Hard]

01:24:821 (3) - Change this slider into spinner?

[Insane]

01:22:003 (4) - Move it somewhere because (2) covering (4)'s reverse arrow

That's all~
Good luck~
Pokie
osu! Alumni
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Pokie
C83禁黑子同人真是那啥…咦等等好像跑題了/me runs
No_Gu
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Joined January 2011
No_Gu

Pokie wrote:

C83禁黑子同人真是那啥…咦等等好像跑題了/me runs
Po婆注意节操

no change
Pokie
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2009
Pokie

No_Gu wrote:

Pokie wrote:

C83禁黑子同人真是那啥…咦等等好像跑題了/me runs
Po婆注意节操

no change
剛好昨天看見這消息啊nopgu
Alltur
530 posts
Joined July 2012
Alltur
My mod is not great- but OMG it's Kuroko no Basuke! xD

[General]
add KnB to the tags, which is short for Kuroko no Basuke
add basketball to the tags, because the English title of the manga/anime is The Basketball which Kuroko plays, and searching with basketball will not reach to this mapset.


[Yasora's Easy]
This is just my opinion, but easy difficulty is really hard to make (I tried myself) since the rhythm is not simple at all..

00:52:185 (2) - end this slider at 00:52:731 instead?

00:30:185 (4) - start the slider at 00:30:367 and end at 00:31:094 ?

01:01:821 (1) - it sounds really weird since the slider starts later than the lyric of the chorus: start from 01:01:640

01:24:731 (2) - add finish here?

01:13:276 (1,2,3) - How about the rhythm like this? I know it's easy but I was not able to play at all with the rhythm that you had there.

01:18:731 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - every note move 1/2 ahead. I think they sound better when they start at red tick though this is easy diff.

[Jojo's normal]
Ugghh pretty high SV for normal (1.60) and the BPM of the song is not low (165)..

00:34:185 (1) - I think you should map this part and start the spinner around 00:35:640

00:53:094 (1) - I thought it was red licorice xD

01:24:731 (6) - just use spinner here..?

[Gu's Hard]
00:09:094 (1) - how about move this slider to 00:08:912 and add one repeat arrow to follow vocal?

00:26:731 - add note here?

00:58:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this seems hard to read, but if you think it's fine, ignore this.

01:24:821 (3) - instead of slider, use spinner?

[Insane]
I kinda already knew there will be some kind of stream-ish in the kiai time for sure-and was correct lol

looks fine to me but

00:57:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think the drum sound is 'increasing' here, the hitsound should be like that too imo. maybe use inherited points to increase the hitsound gradually

Good luck! I hope my mod was any help~
and star~
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu
M4M
I'm modding mainly unperfect things here, because I don't think there is something bad with patterns style or hitsounding.

[Insane]

00:04:185 (4) - Weird flow and overlap - Paste 00:03:640 (2) instead of (4) on 210;288
00:10:549 (6) - Better move it on 263;217, it's imo good stack and it flows better that weird little distance between previous slider
00:15:276 (1) - CTRL+J to make it more symmetrical with 00:14:912 (4)
00:16:367 (4) - Move on 248;249 for perfect stack
00:19:276 (4) - Move on 377;170 ^
00:20:185 (5) - Move on 377;170 ^
00:24:731 (1) - Move on 140;64 ^
00:30:367 (2) - Oh... I like this type of slider so much, but it can't be co smooth. Try to move 3rd slider point (after red point) and move it on 236;206. I think it looks much better when it's sharp
00:37:640 (1) - If you move this on 351;48, you can prevent slider break and flowkill - it's very high chance to confuse player when you kill the flow
00:44:912 (5) - Move ending point on 412;140 and move 00:44:185 (3) on 412;140 for perfect stack
00:45:640 (2) - Move this on 412;140 too, perfect stack again
00:55:276 (3) - Move ending point on 208;190 and move 00:56:003 (1) on 208;190

[Gu's Hard]

00:24:549 (1) - I know it's not stack so much, but it can be stacked better. Move red point on 292;199 and move 00:23:458 (2) ending point on 292;199
00:53:094 (1) - Add white slider point (it will be 5th) on 450;139 and move ending point on 463;181 - it's better when it looks symmetricaly
00:57:458 (1,2) - Well... even though it looks it's perfectly stacked, it's not. You can fix it like this:
00:57:458 (1) - Move on 205;168
00:58:549 (2) - Move ending point on 205;168 - this is why it wasn't perfect, because ending slider point wasn't on center of its circle
00:58:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well... I hate this pattern, it's unplayable with so low AR so remap this pattern with something more easier, or this diff will be harder than Insane. I think this is very important to don't confuse players. It's not AR for these patterns so please, please remake this pattern I can suggest you this:
00:59:094 (2) - 119;34
00:59:276 (3) - 199;34
00:59:458 (4) - 239;103
00:59:640 (5) - 199;173
00:59:821 (6) - 119;173
01:00:003 (7) - 79;103
01:00:185 (8) - 79;103

[JoJo's Normal]

00:19:276 (5) - Move on 282;242 for perfect stack
01:23:094 (2) - Ending point should be visible on easier diffs.

[Yasora's Easy]

Fine

If you don't understand something, tell me ingame.
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Akashi_S wrote:

My mod is not great- but OMG it's Kuroko no Basuke! xD

[General]
add KnB to the tags, which is short for Kuroko no Basuke
add basketball to the tags, because the English title of the manga/anime is The Basketball which Kuroko plays, and searching with basketball will not reach to this mapset. ok added.

[Insane]
I kinda already knew there will be some kind of stream-ish in the kiai time for sure-and was correct lol

looks fine to me but

00:57:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think the drum sound is 'increasing' here, the hitsound should be like that too imo. maybe use inherited points to increase the hitsound gradually doesn't sound such nice , so didn't apply it

Good luck! I hope my mod was any help~
and star~
Thanks for your mod and ssstar!


dragonxcz wrote:

M4M
I'm modding mainly unperfect things here, because I don't think there is something bad with patterns style or hitsounding.

[Insane]

00:04:185 (4) - Weird flow and overlap - Paste 00:03:640 (2) instead of (4) on 210;288 flow's good imo and it's my design
00:10:549 (6) - Better move it on 263;217, it's imo good stack and it flows better that weird little distance between previous slider
00:15:276 (1) - CTRL+J to make it more symmetrical with 00:14:912 (4) nice
00:16:367 (4) - Move on 248;249 for perfect stack
00:19:276 (4) - Move on 377;170 ^
00:20:185 (5) - Move on 377;170 ^
00:24:731 (1) - Move on 140;64 ^ all done, but not very necessary imo..
00:30:367 (2) - Oh... I like this type of slider so much, but it can't be co smooth. Try to move 3rd slider point (after red point) and move it on 236;206. I think it looks much better when it's sharp fixed
00:37:640 (1) - If you move this on 351;48, you can prevent slider break and flowkill - it's very high chance to confuse player when you kill the flow anywhere else will break the flow imo.. because the music stops so comes the stop of spacing
00:44:912 (5) - Move ending point on 412;140 and move 00:44:185 (3) on 412;140 for perfect stack
00:45:640 (2) - Move this on 412;140 too, perfect stack again
00:55:276 (3) - Move ending point on 208;190 and move 00:56:003 (1) on 208;190 stacking things all fixed



[JoJo's Normal]

00:19:276 (5) - Move on 282;242 for perfect stack
01:23:094 (2) - Ending point should be visible on easier diffs. all done
useful mod indeed, thanks :3
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can someone find a better BG for the map...? i would appreciate it
kd of course..
Alltur
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EDIT: I don't know why it quoted my own post =_= sorry
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L_P
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[Insane]
00:04:185 (4) - swap whistle
00:04:549 (1,2,3) - 有点不明意图，因为之前之后都没这种antijump，放在这有点格格不入
00:10:549 (6) - 这感觉距离真的有点太小,而且这样一来无法突出慢sv,不如就放在slider中间？
00:13:821 (1) - stack在上一个slider尾巴？感觉停顿一下不错哦
00:17:276 (5) - 头whistle
00:20:185 (5) - 头whistle?
00:20:912 (7) - 头尾whistle
00:23:094 (2) - finsih?
00:24:185 (3) - whistle?
00:30:003 (1) - 头whistle
00:45:458 (1) - 删whistle , 放在00:46:185 (5) - ？
00:48:731 (1) - 头40% finish?
00:57:549 (6) - 这我是觉得串到红线有点怪,如果这删了我是觉得比较舒服..
00:58:912 (1,1,1) - finish?

01:22:276 (1) - 这...太容易早按了,间距有点小哦

排列无力给意见啊 你看过我的图就知道我排列乱乱的 见谅呵呵
但是就spacing来说我不觉得会乱啊

最后kiai部分的SC2 whistle感觉不大稳定，好像01:04:003 (3) - 这没whistle,但是01:06:912 (3) - 这却放了 之类的
然后01:07:458 (1) - 这里突然有一段没有whistle的..


丫 债又清了一个
AngelHoney
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owo/

insane

00:06:185 (4) - whistle加在尾?
00:07:094 (2) - ^加在头?
00:10:549 (6) - ^
00:12:731 (2) - 用40%音量and whistle不是更好么?
00:46:003 (4) - whistle?
00:46:185 (5) - 删?
00:49:640 - note?
00:57:094 - 这两组串用70音量貌似高了? 用60?
01:03:458 - 这跟绿线应该加在后面1/4拍? 要不然01:03:276 (1) - 这个slider的两个whistle音效不同 , 参照01:02:549 (1) -
01:06:185 (1) - ^
01:22:185 - 你确定蓝线起手串串么 , 这里不来个note么._.
01:23:458 (3) - 这样? (3的尾用30%左右音量) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/527196
01:24:912 (1) - 结束在01:26:912 ?

hard

00:10:912 (1,1,1,1) - 这一组这么下的话 00:11:458 (1) - 这个听起来偏太多了._. (要么就是往前移1/8拍
00:31:458 (1) - 50%比30%更好 或者不用N-whistle 直接用70%
00:55:094 (2,3) - 这两个换下节奏? 先slider再note 感觉更顺
00:57:094 (5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 你该去找些一般选手来测试这part , 太难读了 对于hard难度
01:13:458 - 为啥突然换音响了 不唐突么? 而且还是突然跳到85%音量 , 改成从60%起? 然后5%累加?
01:24:731 (2,3) - 这里真不如直接删掉note 把slider前移 , 听起来和玩起来都别扭 然后也是结束在01:26:912 ?

normal

bpm165 , sv1.6的normal ._. 和hard一样高的sv 这是在求吐槽么?

00:57:458 (1) - 结束在00:58:912 ?

01:24:731 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/527204 这是normal? 彩笔表示很难看清


easy

01:13:458 (1,2,3,4) - 你这样白线音 还附带whistle音效 略诡异 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/527210 下红线跟歌词更清晰?
01:23:640 (1) - 应该提前1/2拍 红线结尾? 然后来个来回? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/527213

all suggestions , fighto~ :)
tutuhaha
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BG试试这个？格式我没转
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tutuhaha wrote:

BG试试这个？格式我没转
还是有点不适合啊 不过谢了 ;)
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