1. Lunatic (4.93 stars, 499 notes)
2. Normal (2.82 stars, 207 notes)
3. Nymph's Hard (4.39 stars, 259 notes)

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

好

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

plz remove (PV ver.) in the title

t/89198

ok i self heavy

1. 这个BG我觉得不好看, 可以换成vocal的照片(?

1. 00:54:981 (4,1) - 这里做下slider blanket...
2. 00:06:446 (5,6) - ^ (?)
3. 00:58:152 (1) - 这个建议跟vocal放歌长点的slider
4. 00:59:128 (3) - ^
5. 01:10:835 (3) - 这个是3/4吧0.0 1/2滑条下面放个note, 然后那边二连, 再单点下去如何0.0
6. 01:12:786 (4) - ^
7. 01:21:567 (1) - 可以放个五连...
8. 01:52:786 (1,2,3) - 我觉得放1/3梗比较顺=_=这个还是算了=_=
9. 02:08:152 (5) - 这个去掉比较好玩w
10. 02:13:274 (4) - 往后jump下 o.o?
11. 02:13:518 (5,6,7) - 这个换成两个2连o.o?
12. 02:18:152 (1,2,3,4,5) - 画星星吧 o.o
13. 00:46:202 (2,3,4,5) - ^
14. 02:29:371 (5) - 这个和前面对称 往下走, 比较美观0.0

1. 00:06:933 (3) - 这个往外点
2. 01:01:567 (1) - new combo._.
3. 01:02:054 (1) - 去掉._.
4. 01:04:006 (1) - new combo
5. 02:43:030 (5) - 这样吧0.0 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/365687 打着舒服点
6. 02:45:469 (4) - blanket
7. 妮姆芙专业送分

1. 00:20:592 (5) - 摆对称
2. 00:23:519 (8) - ^
3. 00:33:763 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/365693
4. 00:56:201 (3) - new combo..?
5. 01:32:298 (1) - ._.别放
6. 这个diff的话new combo多放几个, 滑条要再做的精美一点o.o 后期的二分拍减少点比较好

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

1. 这个BG我觉得不好看, 可以换成vocal的照片(?

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

1. 这个BG我觉得不好看, 可以换成vocal的照片(?

Ryu wrote:

[moeph]
00:53:763 - circle
00:54:007 - ^
00:54:737 - 00:55:225 - slider 1 repeat
00:55:469 - circle
00:55:713 - ^
00:55:957 - ^
00:57:176 - ^
00:57:420 - ^
00:57:664 - ^
00:59:128 - 00:59:859 - slider
01:07:420 - circle

ehh actually I make the pattern currently on purpose, so I am pretty sure I wouldn't add more circles so.... sry TAT

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Nymph's Hard

[list][*]00:06:933 (3) - 这个往外点 这主要想Y坐标跟1一致
[*]01:01:567 (1) - new combo._.
[*]01:02:054 (1) - 去掉._. 现在就行没啥必要o.o
[*]01:04:006 (1) - new combo 感觉也是没啥必要TAT
[*]02:43:030 (5) - 这样吧0.0 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/365687 打着舒服点 关键这个鼓点确实得跟一下……还是不改了
[*]02:45:469 (4) - blanket 欸？

Leorda wrote:

[Nymph's Hard]
01:37:664 (2,3,4,5,8) - This slider needs more wavy, I guess
02:00:591 (1) - ^
02:01:567 (4) - ^
lol actually these are on purpose, so I think they are fine.

L_P wrote:

Nymph

02:43:518 (1,2) - 整首歌只有这地方这种map法。。即使SFG没找你麻烦还是建议从良善良吧 orz

没所谓的 他来我就战个痛快

256,48,4494,6,0,B|248:144|176:200|72:184,1,256

104,152,89371,2,0,B|88:288|176:384|320:392|448:296,1,479.999985694886

Strawberry wrote:

scor~ form m4m

[Lunatic]
`恩..OD+1感觉比较适合这个难度..
00:33:763 (6) - (nazi- -;)第三个锚点x:100 y:312 感觉让slider更平滑点还能和00:34:982 (3) - 叠好点.. 好的～
00:46:933 (5) - add whistle或者finish? 加了whistle~
01:09:615 (4,5) - 这里听起来像是 其实5连或者3连都可以的～
01:15:591 - add a note? no~~
01:15:713 - ^ 因为感觉前面都是一口气顺下来然后.. 01:15:469 (6) - no，因为01:15:469 (6) - 这里其实很干净，如果多了note反而不那么舒服了
01:20:957 - ^ still no..
01:31:323 (1,3) - add whistle 然后01:31:567 (2) - remove whistle? 这里是转的红线whistle啦～
02:15:225 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376243 ？ 因为音效的缘故所以不是很适合这么放，而且其实这里潇子是压在了半音上，所以感觉还好了～
02:20:957 - 感觉这里也可以加一个note 我的三连多用在长音的过渡和填充节奏所以这里也不了～
02:39:006 - ^ 同上～

star! enjoy & good luck for rank!

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ Scorpiour ~

As per your request ~

[Lunatic]

1. 00:48:397 - resnap break time point. [/color]
2. 01:36:689 (7) - Try let end point stack on 01:35:469 (2). er...it's ....impossible T.T

• #2 Timing section - Offset +17(±2)

• consider to the lowest diff, how about AR -1
  00:54:250 ~ I feel the hitsounds are so loudly. how about turn down the volume? 50% is enough imo.
  01:52:786 (1,1) - there is little interval between these notes. how about end this spinner at 01:55:713 ?
  02:00:591 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this rhythm is hard for newbie players. how about remove 02:02:298 (4) ?

• 00:03:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - you make jump between 00:02:543 (5,1), so I think it's kind if you put these note in this order.
  SPOILER

  
  00:42:543 (1) - I think this slider is too long. how about end at 00:46:933 ?

• 00:04:982 (2,3) - nazi. half of the end point of (3) is covered with (2) and it doesn't look clear. I think it will look better if you completely stack the end of these slider, or completely let them not to cover each other.
  00:11:080 (4,1) - ^
  00:17:665 (7) - you should move (7) to other place because, sure I can see the start and the end point of this slider clearly but can't see the path of this slider at all.
  00:23:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pentagon is too large and the distance doesn't match with the song imo.
  00:54:250 ~ same as Normal
  01:23:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the volume is too low and it's hard to find how many notes I hit. consider to turn up.
  01:25:081 - unsnapped inheriting section
  01:33:762 (2,3,4) - I think the distance between these notes doesn't match with the song. consider to reduce.
  01:40:103 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - you didn't put NC at all, though you put NC in 01:32:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) two times. is this intentional?
  01:47:908 (3,4,5,6,7) - I wonder why you didn't stack only these notes.
  02:10:347 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - volume
  02:10:835 (1) - I feel strange to this NC because there is nothing no change of the melody
  02:56:201 (3) - nazi. move to x:436 y:228 and it will blanket (2) well.

h-728 wrote:

Thank you for request

[General]

• #2 Timing section - Offset +17(±2)
  tested but not very comfortable for myself...i think i need to find more timing...

[Normal]

• consider to the lowest diff, how about AR -1 i suppose AR4 is okay because of several overlaps,
  00:54:250 ~ I feel the hitsounds are so loudly. how about turn down the volume? 50% is enough imo. it's okay ~~reduced~
  01:52:786 (1,1) - there is little interval between these notes. how about end this spinner at 01:55:713 ? i finish it at 01:56:201 - because i don't wanna miss the drum there....that is , if i end the spinner earlier, i need to add a note. so the same :>
  02:00:591 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this rhythm is hard for newbie players. how about remove 02:02:298 (4) ? let me think about it...

you put many notes on red tick and the rhythm is hard, especially in Kiai Time. consider to reduce it. yep because of low bpm i think red lines could be chosen. i may avoid to use red ticks if i make an Easy diff, but it is Normal :>

[Nymph's Hard]

• 00:03:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - you make jump between 00:02:543 (5,1), so I think it's kind if you put these note in this order.
  SPOILER

  
  00:42:543 (1) - I think this slider is too long. how about end at 00:46:933 ?

oh..there is really nothing to say

[Lunatic]

• 00:04:982 (2,3) - nazi. half of the end point of (3) is covered with (2) and it doesn't look clear. I think it will look better if you completely stack the end of these slider, or completely let them not to cover each other. ahh~~~it's a transformed pattern :>
  00:11:080 (4,1) - ^ here's for blank~~
  00:17:665 (7) - you should move (7) to other place because, sure I can see the start and the end point of this slider clearly but can't see the path of this slider at all. nice~~i remake here~~
  00:23:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pentagon is too large and the distance doesn't match with the song imo. i make these four patterns together~~~
  00:54:250 ~ same as Normal okay~~
  01:23:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the volume is too low and it's hard to find how many notes I hit. consider to turn up. i feel it's fine for me....
  01:25:081 - unsnapped inheriting section fixed~~~
  01:33:762 (2,3,4) - I think the distance between these notes doesn't match with the song. consider to reduce. don't worry about slider jumps ~~ it's much more easier than you see
  01:40:103 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - you didn't put NC at all, though you put NC in 01:32:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) two times. is this intentional? 01:32:786 (1) - here's a vocal down beat~~but prev has not~
  01:47:908 (3,4,5,6,7) - I wonder why you didn't stack only these notes. it's a manually stack leniency for over 4 notes :> a little skill for mapper to control the end position of stack notes
  02:10:347 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - volume fine for me now~
  02:10:835 (1) - I feel strange to this NC because there is nothing no change of the melody remove NC~~my mistake >.<
  02:56:201 (3) - nazi. move to x:436 y:228 and it will blanket (2) well. fixed~~

that's all.
awesome maps and nothing to say. good luck

Banana wrote:

Hi~ Banana here for m4m

Lunatic

00:58:884 (2) - 节奏听着有点不自然，我的建议 准备改的话可以把(4)叠到(3)的尾巴上 (8)和下一个combo的(3)重叠 唔……这里是专门做的节奏来慢慢的带出主旋律～
01:05:957 (1) - 和前两个滑条方向相同比较好吧 Ctrl+R？ 嗯……这里我自己读图的时候感觉这个方向比较好……再考虑考虑的……
01:34:249 (3) - 试图时候断了，下一个滑条没接上，于是觉得间距有点大（咦），理由什么的嘛，我觉得前面的滑条已经能把歌曲过渡过来了，间距很大的跳不是很必要。建议是这个滑条(3)顺时针40度。 我好喜欢这个梗的QAQ

Nymph's Hard

od-1？Lunatic也是6
01:53:274 (2,3) - 形状和(5,6)摆一样的吧
02:52:298 (2) - 这里 因为音比较低 所以我觉得滑条向下弯效果会比较好

Normal

00:55:469 (3) - 一开头就来红线起手的滑条有点奇怪吧 因为是红线所以才放的滑条～放心吧=v=

喵喵喵~

1. kiai time里nymph和N和L的这种不同感觉略奇怪 有没有统一的可能?
2. L里有许多疑似无用绿线 请检查

LKs wrote:

[General]

1. kiai time里nymph和N和L的这种不同感觉略奇怪 有没有统一的可能? 唔……看看妮姆芙的想法吧
2. L里有许多疑似无用绿线 请检查 咦～～～

[Normal]

02:23:517 (4) - 此间距变化不知道依据何在 fixed.....
02:25:957 (1,2,3) - 尽管这里节奏变化比较合适 但作为N感觉这样也会被挑 edit: 只有一个staff对这两个部分发表了看法表示觉得作为最简单难度有点复杂所以想想有没有可替代的简单节奏 我个人看好http://puu.sh/NiKW
尝试了下～～accept~~~
02:02:542 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 这里我建议是两个1/2变成一个1/1 02:04:006 - 这里有一个vocal的重音起……所以想留一个一个“向下的”重音在这里，也就是click，如果做成1/1slider的话这里变成了slider尾压重音感觉略违和……嗯……让我再好好想想的

[Nymph's Hard]

00:28:397 (2,3) - 这两个互换位置感觉更好
00:33:763 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这两个我不太确定是不是换了更好 不过一致性会更好
01:40:591 (9) - 间距
02:04:249 (10) - ^

[Lunatic]

00:03:031 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 救命准mat做图偷懒 http://puu.sh/NiPj 问题1 00:02:787 (4,3) - 这种overlap可以直接上移整个五角星来解决 问题2 五角星本身
00:06:202 (4) - x324y106
00:16:933 (4) - 我个人觉得外凸比内凹的弧线好
00:22:055 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五角星苦逼
00:23:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ remake all these part
00:25:714 (4,5,6,1) - 这半圆看着太死板了 try various patterns...hmm... a harder one~
00:28:885 (3) - 需要修slider
00:33:763 (6) - ^
00:45:470 (1) - ^ all has been adjusted~~
01:03:030 (4) - 红点位置的设计如果是为了环绕下一个slider头不如不要红点直接环绕 i think i was dazing ... remake this slider~
01:08:640 (2) - 中间和结尾clap
01:09:371 (3,4,5) - clap fixed~~
01:23:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 弧线不给力
02:57:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^ all adjusted~

L的细节显得诚意不够

其他都还好

suzutsukikanade wrote:

Hope i can help you

[General]

Inconsistency in Kiai

i suppose it doesn't matter since Nymph doesn't pretend to change kiai~~
[Normal]

01:14:734 (3): Move repeat to white tick? hmm...the beat here is following the vocal's start and end~~

Like so much this normal.

[Nymph's Hard]

00:06:933 (3): Move this to x:288 y:320.

[Lunatic]

00:03:031 (1): Move 3 grids left. er...why..?
02:48:396 (7,8): Make spacing like this? sorry no change...i don't like this shape..

SPOILER

Really nothing to point here, amazing map. Really love your mapping style in this map.
Good luck~

jaehn215 wrote:

Is perfect. But

Lunatic

02:01:810 (1) - distance a little Confusing emm....it's designed pattern because i don't wanna make just a stack...
02:10:835 (9) - new combo no NC here because vocal's stress is 02:11:810 - , so a NC here may not very suit for the music :>

Nymph's Hard

HP Drain Rate +1 (Subjective opinions... no change this...)

01:35:225 (5) - new combo
01:39:128 (5) - ^
01:46:932 (5) - ^
01:54:737 (7) - ^


This beatmap...
Very Good!

I'm novice
Therefore no need to follow all...


Sorry. This is Google Translate...

204,48,12543,2,0,B|260:42|300:83,1,104,0|2

392,148,18153,6,0,B|336:144|288:187|278:237,1,156,2|0

300,232,45470,6,0,B|225:227|184:143|222:75,1,208,0|2

LKs wrote:

Lunatic

204,48,12543,2,0,B|260:42|300:83,1,104,0|2

392,148,18153,6,0,B|336:144|288:187|278:237,1,156,2|0

300,232,45470,6,0,B|225:227|184:143|222:75,1,208,0|2

no KD

Scorpiour wrote:

thank you very much >.< all fixed...似乎和我开着grid snap有关的缘故…………唔……该试试关掉了…………

这两个月都感觉自己的mapping卡在瓶颈上怎么也找不到下一步的方向……这张应该是这个时期做的最后一个图了，后面的图我自己也在努力想该怎么做一些改变……唔……其实也被L_P的那张白雪公主给刺激到了一下。

Low/Mid BPM的曲子应该可以在不破坏美观和节奏的前提下做的可玩性更强一些的……AHO的low bpm也拆过，几张经典的低bpm曲包括花舞在内也反复的拆解过了但是自己就是找不到方向到底应该在哪儿………

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

好 神麻婆的心路历程vol.1

Scorpiour wrote:

这两个月都感觉自己的mapping卡在瓶颈上怎么也找不到下一步的方向……这张应该是这个时期做的最后一个图了，后面的图我自己也在努力想该怎么做一些改变……唔……其实也被L_P的那张白雪公主给刺激到了一下。那我对下一张图反而更有期待 你别这么说 会降低我泡的意愿

Low/Mid BPM的曲子应该可以在不破坏美观和节奏的前提下做的可玩性更强一些的……AHO的low bpm也拆过，几张经典的低bpm曲包括花舞在内也反复的拆解过了但是自己就是找不到方向到底应该在哪儿………瓶颈的话 慢慢来就好了 时间会带来改变

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Scorpiour wrote:

thank you very much >.< all fixed...似乎和我开着grid snap有关的缘故…………唔……该试试关掉了…………

这两个月都感觉自己的mapping卡在瓶颈上怎么也找不到下一步的方向……这张应该是这个时期做的最后一个图了，后面的图我自己也在努力想该怎么做一些改变……唔……其实也被L_P的那张白雪公主给刺激到了一下。

Low/Mid BPM的曲子应该可以在不破坏美观和节奏的前提下做的可玩性更强一些的……AHO的low bpm也拆过，几张经典的低bpm曲包括花舞在内也反复的拆解过了但是自己就是找不到方向到底应该在哪儿………

好 神麻婆的心路历程vol.1

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Scorpiour wrote:

thank you very much >.< all fixed...似乎和我开着grid snap有关的缘故…………唔……该试试关掉了…………

这两个月都感觉自己的mapping卡在瓶颈上怎么也找不到下一步的方向……这张应该是这个时期做的最后一个图了，后面的图我自己也在努力想该怎么做一些改变……唔……其实也被L_P的那张白雪公主给刺激到了一下。

Low/Mid BPM的曲子应该可以在不破坏美观和节奏的前提下做的可玩性更强一些的……AHO的low bpm也拆过，几张经典的低bpm曲包括花舞在内也反复的拆解过了但是自己就是找不到方向到底应该在哪儿………

好 神麻婆的心路历程vol.1

SapphireGhost wrote:

Very good vocals! Sorry for taking so long to mod this.

[General]
- Nymph's kiai times highlight the choruses better, so I'd make the other difficulties consistent with his. That's okay~~~i adjust other kiais =v=
- For the storyboard, I think it'd be better to have a more gentle transition (like a white flash or fade) at 01:25:469, 01:41:079, 01:56:689 and 02:12:298.
sherrie added some white flash for transition :>
[Normal]
01:41:810 (3) - If you make this slider path more clear and have the slidertick visible, it'd be easier to read for newer players. Something like this could work. looked nice~~~thanks for the idea ~~fixed~~

That's it, just small suggestions. PM me when you're done.

Leorda wrote:

eikkaleyd's voice are awesome! She need to join in EastNewSound!!

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hao

shen qu rank le

Leorda wrote:

eikkaleyd's voice are awesome! She need to join in EastNewSound!!