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eikkaleyd - Kachou Fuugetsu (PV Ver.)

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Scorpiour
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Scorpiour
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年8月14日 at 0:38:20

Artist: eikkaleyd
Title: Kachou Fuugetsu (PV Ver.)
Source: Touhou
Tags: Nymph sherrie__fay ZUN Shikieiki Yamaxanadu Fate of Sixty Years Phantasmagoria of Flower View
BPM: 123
Filesize: 10430kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lunatic (4.93 stars, 499 notes)
  2. Normal (2.82 stars, 207 notes)
  3. Nymph's Hard (4.39 stars, 259 notes)
Download: eikkaleyd - Kachou Fuugetsu (PV Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#6 - Touhou - Vocal

the 1000 post here~~

enjoy eikka's wonderful voice~~

Nymph's Hard by Nymph

Storyboard & Skin by sherrie__fay and updated on 14/Aug/2012
Last edited by Scorpiour , edited 34 times in total.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
好
Flower
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Flower
占个坑以观后效
x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
x847606653
呵呵._.
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd
;_;
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L_P
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Joined July 2011
L_P
haha
Ulysses
1,911 posts
Joined September 2010
Ulysses
lol finally I trust you were a girl eikka :o

SPOILER

WAT,not completely mapped
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
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Topic Starter
Scorpiour
ye...not finished yet but don't worry i will finish it in time :>
Regou
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Regou

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

好
raririn
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raririn
好
edit:真的好想做QUQ
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Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,466 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
好
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
a32
瞎
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
plz remove (PV ver.) in the title

t/89198

ok i self heavy
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

plz remove (PV ver.) in the title

t/89198

ok i self heavy
I think PV ver. is OK because I found that in niconico, also it's not Cut ver.
我找来的伴奏就是这个名字。
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
RL_Tibbar
0.0
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019
哇
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
……总感觉今天射了一堆星……
Ryu_old
Ryu_old
[moesea]
00:01:568 - 00:03:519 - slider 1 repeat
00:27:909 - make more nice like dat http://puu.sh/GPuD
00:33:763 (1,2) - do more symmetrical
00:57:176 - 00:58:152 - slider 1 repeat
00:58:640 - circle
00:59:128 - 01:01:079 - slider 1 repeat
01:05:957 - 01:06:932 - slider
01:08:396 - make like dat http://puu.sh/GPxD
01:29:371 - make like dat http://puu.sh/GPoF

[moeph]
00:53:763 - circle
00:54:007 - ^
00:54:737 - 00:55:225 - slider 1 repeat
00:55:469 - circle
00:55:713 - ^
00:55:957 - ^
00:57:176 - ^
00:57:420 - ^
00:57:664 - ^
00:59:128 - 00:59:859 - slider
01:07:420 - circle

[moepiour]
i see nothin wrong. u worked very hard and good :3

goodluck ~
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-
Yo~~~~~~~~~

Lunatic
SPOILER
00:08:885 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得位置不大好吧。。。只是觉得哪里怪怪的。。。一起移动到5和下一个1重叠？ 我也不知道。。。。
00:20:104 (5) - 向上一个格会好点我会告诉你吗。。。
00:43:275 (4,5,6,1) - 这个如果是四方的话会有点歪。。。
中间一大段没放音效啊。。。是还没想好还是不打算放了。。。
01:45:225 (2) - 这个也有点歪

Nymph's Hard
SPOILER
找不到。。。。

deepsea's Normal
SPOILER
话说这拉条形状不是很好看啊。。。
00:33:763 (1) - 这个我不得不说了。。。。
00:33:763 (1,2) - 不对称吧。。。
01:06:445 (1) - 向上1个？
01:21:567 (3) - NC？
01:29:371 (3) - 这个也有点。。。
02:14:737 (2) - 加个whistler？
02:53:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 摆成对称的多好！

好nazi的一个mod。。。。 :o
Niko-nyan
1,990 posts
Joined June 2011
Niko-nyan
hi there~

Easy~
HP Drain 0 OMG so lol'ed today :3 +1 if you want
AR too high for newbie try - it
OD ^

just that
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi~


General

  1. 这个BG我觉得不好看, 可以换成vocal的照片(?
Lunatic

  1. 00:54:981 (4,1) - 这里做下slider blanket...
  2. 00:06:446 (5,6) - ^ (?)
  3. 00:58:152 (1) - 这个建议跟vocal放歌长点的slider
  4. 00:59:128 (3) - ^
  5. 01:10:835 (3) - 这个是3/4吧0.0 1/2滑条下面放个note, 然后那边二连, 再单点下去如何0.0
  6. 01:12:786 (4) - ^
  7. 01:21:567 (1) - 可以放个五连...
  8. 01:52:786 (1,2,3) - 我觉得放1/3梗比较顺=_=这个还是算了=_=
  9. 02:08:152 (5) - 这个去掉比较好玩w
  10. 02:13:274 (4) - 往后jump下 o.o?
  11. 02:13:518 (5,6,7) - 这个换成两个2连o.o?
  12. 02:18:152 (1,2,3,4,5) - 画星星吧 o.o
  13. 00:46:202 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  14. 02:29:371 (5) - 这个和前面对称 往下走, 比较美观0.0
Nymph's Hard

  1. 00:06:933 (3) - 这个往外点
  2. 01:01:567 (1) - new combo._.
  3. 01:02:054 (1) - 去掉._.
  4. 01:04:006 (1) - new combo
  5. 02:43:030 (5) - 这样吧0.0 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/365687 打着舒服点
  6. 02:45:469 (4) - blanket
  7. 妮姆芙专业送分
Deepsea's Normal

  1. 00:20:592 (5) - 摆对称
  2. 00:23:519 (8) - ^
  3. 00:33:763 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/365693
  4. 00:56:201 (3) - new combo..?
  5. 01:32:298 (1) - ._.别放
  6. 这个diff的话new combo多放几个, 滑条要再做的精美一点o.o 后期的二分拍减少点比较好
最后发张图www http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/365697
/___\

Good luck~
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
a32

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

  1. 这个BG我觉得不好看, 可以换成vocal的照片(?
这个中
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
哭了，1diff变3diffs了

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

  1. 这个BG我觉得不好看, 可以换成vocal的照片(?
施工完毕
[General]
2个osb.

[Normal]
00:32:299 (5) - 压HP条。。
02:13:762 (5) - 我觉得这个放在02:13:640比较好，考虑(4,5,6)换成折返滑条？
02:15:713 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:42:543 (1) - 我觉得可以在00:46:933结束
01:20:103 (6,7,8) - nazi - 间距不相等
02:43:030 (5) - 多折返一次？音乐是这样

[Lunatic]
00:05:470 (3) - 0.5x?
01:22:298 (2,3) - 这两个交换一下如何？
01:43:762 (2,3) - 这两个分别ctrl+r一下貌似好一些？
Last edited by popner , edited 2 times in total.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO


[General]
* BG2.jpg seems useless. Remove it from your map folder
* I have 2 OSB inside your map folder. Remove the wrong one


[deepsea's Normal]
* Any combos are higher that 8 combos are too high for normal difficulty

00:33:763 (1) - This slider is offscreen
00:36:689 (2) - ^
01:25:225 (10) - Remove this note, 1/2 streams are too hard for Normal difficulty
02:12:054 (2) - ^
02:27:176 (6) - ^
02:54:737 (6,7) - Move 1 grid up for fix the pattern (Nazi)


[Nymph's Hard]
01:37:664 (2,3,4,5,8) - This slider needs more wavy, I guess
02:00:591 (1) - ^
02:01:567 (4) - ^


[Lunatic]
00:58:640 - Add note here? Feels empty for me....
00:59:615 - ^
01:36:689 (7) - How about tail slider is snap with 01:35:469 (2)? Since the head slider is snap at (3)
02:10:347 (5) - New combo for streams pattern?


eikkaleyd's voice are awesome! She need to join in EastNewSound!!
L_P
1,370 posts
Joined July 2011
L_P
哈啊啊啊啊

insane
general: 我真的无法mod了，只好学2花 mod形状

00:04:494 (1,2) - 感觉弧度大一点比较漂亮


00:46:933 (1) - stack and NC?

00:57:176 (4) - 这里eikk明显有点。。嗯 拖拍？ 不调调下吗

01:09:859 (1) - 还是finish把？

01:25:469 (1) - 同上（这些感觉真的finish一下吧

01:39:128 (1,2) - 这排列尾巴那里不大好看。。。做像01:49:859 (7,8) - 吧

02:01:810 (5) - NC

02:07:908 (4) - 这里的喘气有些煞风景。。不是故意弄的话建议静音


Nymph

02:43:518 (1,2) - 整首歌只有这地方这种map法。。即使SFG没找你麻烦还是建议从良善良吧 orz

Deepsea

加kiai吧。。虽说GD可以不一样但是。。嗯还是觉得加个kiai比较好

00:20:592 (5) - 这感觉好随便

00:36:689 (2) - 这个的头本来是上个的尾巴（废话）但就因为这样所以头好难看


01:05:957 (7,1) - 换NC

01:23:518 (5) - NC?

02:00:591 (7) - NC吧 拜托了

02:08:396 (7) - ^


0kuds了。。。
Nymph
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2010
Nymph

Ryu wrote:

[moeph]
00:53:763 - circle
00:54:007 - ^
00:54:737 - 00:55:225 - slider 1 repeat
00:55:469 - circle
00:55:713 - ^
00:55:957 - ^
00:57:176 - ^
00:57:420 - ^
00:57:664 - ^
00:59:128 - 00:59:859 - slider
01:07:420 - circle

ehh actually I make the pattern currently on purpose, so I am pretty sure I wouldn't add more circles so.... sry TAT

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Nymph's Hard

[list][*]00:06:933 (3) - 这个往外点 这主要想Y坐标跟1一致
[*]01:01:567 (1) - new combo._.
[*]01:02:054 (1) - 去掉._. 现在就行没啥必要o.o
[*]01:04:006 (1) - new combo 感觉也是没啥必要TAT
[*]02:43:030 (5) - 这样吧0.0 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/365687 打着舒服点 关键这个鼓点确实得跟一下……还是不改了
[*]02:45:469 (4) - blanket 欸？

Leorda wrote:

[Nymph's Hard]
01:37:664 (2,3,4,5,8) - This slider needs more wavy, I guess
02:00:591 (1) - ^
02:01:567 (4) - ^
lol actually these are on purpose, so I think they are fine.

L_P wrote:

Nymph

02:43:518 (1,2) - 整首歌只有这地方这种map法。。即使SFG没找你麻烦还是建议从良善良吧 orz

没所谓的 他来我就战个痛快

thanks 4 modding guys~
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
[deepsea]
00:10:348 (1) - 开头whistle?
00:14:738 (4) - ^
00:20:592 (5) - ^ 后面类似这个音的还有很多，我觉得加上比较好听
00:33:763 (1,2) - 这么大出界没问题?
01:24:493 (7,8,9,10) - 这个都加上whistle和前面配起来更霸气，顺带一说这combo有点长了
02:08:396 (7) - NC

[2ph]
除了人是个基佬之外别的都还行

[反震の嫁]
01:25:469 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 不加whistle的话好难听啊
其实这SV没问题么。。。
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour
Thanks guys >.<

fix most of the mods and please forgive me that i can't reply details because i'm too busy recently >.<
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay
http://115.com/file/an3jzz13#
SB finished
7th fullver SB progress
signature updated.
no kds thx :>
重装完机器没有puush..
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry
scor~ form m4m

[General]
咦? 2个osb文件是肿么回事>_> 神SB! 膜拜膜姐

[Lunatic]
`恩..OD+1感觉比较适合这个难度..
00:33:763 (6) - (nazi- -;)第三个锚点x:100 y:312 感觉让slider更平滑点还能和00:34:982 (3) - 叠好点..
00:46:933 (5) - add whistle或者finish?
01:09:615 (4,5) - 这里听起来像是
01:15:591 - add a note?
01:15:713 - ^ 因为感觉前面都是一口气顺下来然后..
01:20:957 - ^
01:31:323 (1,3) - add whistle 然后01:31:567 (2) - remove whistle?
02:15:225 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376243 ？
02:20:957 - 感觉这里也可以加一个note
02:39:006 - ^

[Nymph's Hard]
00:54:737 (2) - 尾巴+whistle?
00:56:689 (2) - ^
00:58:640 (2) - ^
01:03:396 - ^
01:06:445 (2) - 这个感觉去掉repeat合适. 然后在尾巴whistle o.o

[deepsea's Normal]
00:01:568 - ~01:06:201 - 建议音量降一些..
00:04:494 (1) - 感觉和00:01:568 (1) - 像一点比较好 
256,48,4494,6,0,B|248:144|176:200|72:184,1,256
00:33:763 (1,2) - 噗!
01:21:567 (3) - nc?
01:29:371 (3) - 
104,152,89371,2,0,B|88:288|176:384|320:392|448:296,1,479.999985694886

star! enjoy & good luck for rank!
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
T T 才发现这神曲 来射星
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

Strawberry wrote:

scor~ form m4m

[Lunatic]
`恩..OD+1感觉比较适合这个难度..
00:33:763 (6) - (nazi- -;)第三个锚点x:100 y:312 感觉让slider更平滑点还能和00:34:982 (3) - 叠好点.. :arrow: 好的～
00:46:933 (5) - add whistle或者finish? :arrow: 加了whistle~
01:09:615 (4,5) - 这里听起来像是 :arrow: 其实5连或者3连都可以的～
01:15:591 - add a note? :arrow: no~~
01:15:713 - ^ 因为感觉前面都是一口气顺下来然后.. :arrow: 01:15:469 (6) - no，因为01:15:469 (6) - 这里其实很干净，如果多了note反而不那么舒服了
01:20:957 - ^ :arrow: still no..
01:31:323 (1,3) - add whistle 然后01:31:567 (2) - remove whistle? :arrow: 这里是转的红线whistle啦～
02:15:225 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376243 ？ :arrow: 因为音效的缘故所以不是很适合这么放，而且其实这里潇子是压在了半音上，所以感觉还好了～
02:20:957 - 感觉这里也可以加一个note :arrow: 我的三连多用在长音的过渡和填充节奏所以这里也不了～
02:39:006 - ^ :arrow: 同上～

star! enjoy & good luck for rank!
非常感谢mod和星星～～

顺便也谢谢雪梦的星星～
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hello ~ Scorpiour ~ :)

As per your request ~



[General]


  1. Using same kiai time point?

[Lunatic]


  1. 00:48:397 - resnap break time point.
  2. 01:36:689 (7) - Try let end point stack on 01:35:469 (2).

[Hard]


  1. 00:42:543 (1) - Add whistle sound better to me.


[Normal]


  1. 00:32:299 (5) - Almost touch HP bar,try move this slider.
  2. 00:39:616 - 00:48:397 - Add some whistle.
  3. 01:12:054 - Add a circle sound much better.
  4. 02:00:591 (7) - Add new combo,too long imo.
  5. 02:06:445 (4,6) - Make symmetry here.
  6. 02:53:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make symmetry curved imo, like this.

Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ Scorpiour ~ :)

As per your request ~

[Lunatic]


  1. 00:48:397 - resnap break time point. :arrow: [/color]
  2. 01:36:689 (7) - Try let end point stack on 01:35:469 (2). :arrow: er...it's ....impossible T.T
thanks very much for your modding >.<
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728

Thank you for request

[General]
  • #2 Timing section - Offset +17(±2)
[Normal]
  • consider to the lowest diff, how about AR -1
    00:54:250 ~ I feel the hitsounds are so loudly. how about turn down the volume? 50% is enough imo.
    01:52:786 (1,1) - there is little interval between these notes. how about end this spinner at 01:55:713 ?
    02:00:591 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this rhythm is hard for newbie players. how about remove 02:02:298 (4) ?
you put many notes on red tick and the rhythm is hard, especially in Kiai Time. consider to reduce it.

[Nymph's Hard]
  • 00:03:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - you make jump between 00:02:543 (5,1), so I think it's kind if you put these note in this order.
    SPOILER
    00:42:543 (1) - I think this slider is too long. how about end at 00:46:933 ?
oh..there is really nothing to say

[Lunatic]
  • 00:04:982 (2,3) - nazi. half of the end point of (3) is covered with (2) and it doesn't look clear. I think it will look better if you completely stack the end of these slider, or completely let them not to cover each other.
    00:11:080 (4,1) - ^
    00:17:665 (7) - you should move (7) to other place because, sure I can see the start and the end point of this slider clearly but can't see the path of this slider at all.
    00:23:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pentagon is too large and the distance doesn't match with the song imo.
    00:54:250 ~ same as Normal
    01:23:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the volume is too low and it's hard to find how many notes I hit. consider to turn up.
    01:25:081 - unsnapped inheriting section
    01:33:762 (2,3,4) - I think the distance between these notes doesn't match with the song. consider to reduce.
    01:40:103 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - you didn't put NC at all, though you put NC in 01:32:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) two times. is this intentional?
    01:47:908 (3,4,5,6,7) - I wonder why you didn't stack only these notes.
    02:10:347 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - volume
    02:10:835 (1) - I feel strange to this NC because there is nothing no change of the melody
    02:56:201 (3) - nazi. move to x:436 y:228 and it will blanket (2) well.
that's all.
awesome maps and nothing to say. good luck
Banana
794 posts
Joined October 2010
Banana
Hi~ Banana here for m4m

Lunatic

00:58:884 (2) - 节奏听着有点不自然，我的建议 准备改的话可以把(4)叠到(3)的尾巴上 (8)和下一个combo的(3)重叠
01:05:957 (1) - 和前两个滑条方向相同比较好吧 Ctrl+R？
01:34:249 (3) - 试图时候断了，下一个滑条没接上，于是觉得间距有点大（咦），理由什么的嘛，我觉得前面的滑条已经能把歌曲过渡过来了，间距很大的跳不是很必要。建议是这个滑条(3)顺时针40度。

Nymph's Hard

od-1？Lunatic也是6
01:53:274 (2,3) - 形状和(5,6)摆一样的吧
02:52:298 (2) - 这里 因为音比较低 所以我觉得滑条向下弯效果会比较好

Normal

00:55:469 (3) - 一开头就来红线起手的滑条有点奇怪吧

喵喵喵~
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

h-728 wrote:


Thank you for request

[General]
  • #2 Timing section - Offset +17(±2)
    :arrow: tested but not very comfortable for myself...i think i need to find more timing...
[Normal]
  • consider to the lowest diff, how about AR -1 :arrow: i suppose AR4 is okay because of several overlaps,
    00:54:250 ~ I feel the hitsounds are so loudly. how about turn down the volume? 50% is enough imo. :arrow: it's okay ~~reduced~
    01:52:786 (1,1) - there is little interval between these notes. how about end this spinner at 01:55:713 ? :arrow: i finish it at 01:56:201 - because i don't wanna miss the drum there....that is , if i end the spinner earlier, i need to add a note. so the same :>
    02:00:591 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this rhythm is hard for newbie players. how about remove 02:02:298 (4) ? :arrow: let me think about it...
you put many notes on red tick and the rhythm is hard, especially in Kiai Time. consider to reduce it. :arrow: yep because of low bpm i think red lines could be chosen. i may avoid to use red ticks if i make an Easy diff, but it is Normal :>

[Nymph's Hard]
  • 00:03:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - you make jump between 00:02:543 (5,1), so I think it's kind if you put these note in this order.
    SPOILER
    00:42:543 (1) - I think this slider is too long. how about end at 00:46:933 ?
oh..there is really nothing to say

[Lunatic]
  • 00:04:982 (2,3) - nazi. half of the end point of (3) is covered with (2) and it doesn't look clear. I think it will look better if you completely stack the end of these slider, or completely let them not to cover each other. :arrow: ahh~~~it's a transformed pattern :>
    00:11:080 (4,1) - ^ :arrow: here's for blank~~
    00:17:665 (7) - you should move (7) to other place because, sure I can see the start and the end point of this slider clearly but can't see the path of this slider at all. :arrow: nice~~i remake here~~
    00:23:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pentagon is too large and the distance doesn't match with the song imo. :arrow: i make these four patterns together~~~
    00:54:250 ~ same as Normal :arrow: okay~~
    01:23:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the volume is too low and it's hard to find how many notes I hit. consider to turn up. :arrow: i feel it's fine for me....
    01:25:081 - unsnapped inheriting section :arrow: fixed~~~
    01:33:762 (2,3,4) - I think the distance between these notes doesn't match with the song. consider to reduce. :arrow: don't worry about slider jumps ~~ it's much more easier than you see
    01:40:103 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - you didn't put NC at all, though you put NC in 01:32:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) two times. is this intentional? :arrow: 01:32:786 (1) - here's a vocal down beat~~but prev has not~
    01:47:908 (3,4,5,6,7) - I wonder why you didn't stack only these notes. :arrow: it's a manually stack leniency for over 4 notes :> a little skill for mapper to control the end position of stack notes
    02:10:347 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - volume :arrow: fine for me now~
    02:10:835 (1) - I feel strange to this NC because there is nothing no change of the melody :arrow: remove NC~~my mistake >.<
    02:56:201 (3) - nazi. move to x:436 y:228 and it will blanket (2) well. :arrow: fixed~~
that's all.
awesome maps and nothing to say. good luck
thank you very much for your modding and star~
Scorpiour
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Scorpiour

Banana wrote:

Hi~ Banana here for m4m

Lunatic

00:58:884 (2) - 节奏听着有点不自然，我的建议 准备改的话可以把(4)叠到(3)的尾巴上 (8)和下一个combo的(3)重叠 :arrow: 唔……这里是专门做的节奏来慢慢的带出主旋律～
01:05:957 (1) - 和前两个滑条方向相同比较好吧 Ctrl+R？ :arrow: 嗯……这里我自己读图的时候感觉这个方向比较好……再考虑考虑的……
01:34:249 (3) - 试图时候断了，下一个滑条没接上，于是觉得间距有点大（咦），理由什么的嘛，我觉得前面的滑条已经能把歌曲过渡过来了，间距很大的跳不是很必要。建议是这个滑条(3)顺时针40度。 :arrow: 我好喜欢这个梗的QAQ

Nymph's Hard

od-1？Lunatic也是6
01:53:274 (2,3) - 形状和(5,6)摆一样的吧
02:52:298 (2) - 这里 因为音比较低 所以我觉得滑条向下弯效果会比较好

Normal

00:55:469 (3) - 一开头就来红线起手的滑条有点奇怪吧 :arrow: 因为是红线所以才放的滑条～放心吧=v=

喵喵喵~
非常谢谢mod的说～～那个slider间距的地方让我再想想的Q.Q
LKs
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Joined August 2009
LKs
[General]

  1. kiai time里nymph和N和L的这种不同感觉略奇怪 有没有统一的可能?
  2. L里有许多疑似无用绿线 请检查
[Normal]

02:23:517 (4) - 此间距变化不知道依据何在
02:25:957 (1,2,3) - 尽管这里节奏变化比较合适 但作为N感觉这样也会被挑 edit: 只有一个staff对这两个部分发表了看法表示觉得作为最简单难度有点复杂所以想想有没有可替代的简单节奏 我个人看好http://puu.sh/NiKW
02:02:542 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 这里我建议是两个1/2变成一个1/1

[Nymph's Hard]

00:28:397 (2,3) - 这两个互换位置感觉更好
00:33:763 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这两个我不太确定是不是换了更好 不过一致性会更好
01:40:591 (9) - 间距
02:04:249 (10) - ^

[Lunatic]

00:03:031 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 救命准mat做图偷懒 http://puu.sh/NiPj 问题1 00:02:787 (4,3) - 这种overlap可以直接上移整个五角星来解决 问题2 五角星本身
00:06:202 (4) - x324y106
00:16:933 (4) - 我个人觉得外凸比内凹的弧线好
00:22:055 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五角星苦逼
00:23:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:25:714 (4,5,6,1) - 这半圆看着太死板了
00:28:885 (3) - 需要修slider
00:33:763 (6) - ^
00:45:470 (1) - ^
01:03:030 (4) - 红点位置的设计如果是为了环绕下一个slider头不如不要红点直接环绕
01:08:640 (2) - 中间和结尾clap
01:09:371 (3,4,5) - clap
01:23:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 弧线不给力
02:57:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^

L的细节显得诚意不够

其他都还好
Nymph
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Nymph
fixed some guys sorry I can't reply mod here because my computer at home sucks...
thanks a lot!
Scorpiour
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Topic Starter
Scorpiour

LKs wrote:

[General]

  1. kiai time里nymph和N和L的这种不同感觉略奇怪 有没有统一的可能? :arrow: 唔……看看妮姆芙的想法吧
  2. L里有许多疑似无用绿线 请检查 :arrow: 咦～～～
[Normal]

02:23:517 (4) - 此间距变化不知道依据何在 :arrow: fixed.....
02:25:957 (1,2,3) - 尽管这里节奏变化比较合适 但作为N感觉这样也会被挑 edit: 只有一个staff对这两个部分发表了看法表示觉得作为最简单难度有点复杂所以想想有没有可替代的简单节奏 我个人看好http://puu.sh/NiKW
:arrow: 尝试了下～～accept~~~
02:02:542 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 这里我建议是两个1/2变成一个1/1 :arrow: 02:04:006 - 这里有一个vocal的重音起……所以想留一个一个“向下的”重音在这里，也就是click，如果做成1/1slider的话这里变成了slider尾压重音感觉略违和……嗯……让我再好好想想的

[Nymph's Hard]

00:28:397 (2,3) - 这两个互换位置感觉更好
00:33:763 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这两个我不太确定是不是换了更好 不过一致性会更好
01:40:591 (9) - 间距
02:04:249 (10) - ^

[Lunatic]

00:03:031 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 救命准mat做图偷懒 http://puu.sh/NiPj 问题1 00:02:787 (4,3) - 这种overlap可以直接上移整个五角星来解决 问题2 五角星本身
00:06:202 (4) - x324y106
00:16:933 (4) - 我个人觉得外凸比内凹的弧线好
00:22:055 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五角星苦逼
00:23:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ :arrow: remake all these part
00:25:714 (4,5,6,1) - 这半圆看着太死板了 :arrow: try various patterns...hmm... a harder one~
00:28:885 (3) - 需要修slider
00:33:763 (6) - ^
00:45:470 (1) - ^ :arrow: all has been adjusted~~
01:03:030 (4) - 红点位置的设计如果是为了环绕下一个slider头不如不要红点直接环绕 :arrow: i think i was dazing ... remake this slider~
01:08:640 (2) - 中间和结尾clap
01:09:371 (3,4,5) - clap :arrow: fixed~~
01:23:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 弧线不给力
02:57:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^ :arrow: all adjusted~

L的细节显得诚意不够

其他都还好
非常感谢mod~~~L还在慢慢看～～～～而且也打算再多找几个mod的不过最近queue好难排啊QAQ
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suzutsukikanade
653 posts
Joined July 2011
suzutsukikanade
Hope i can help you :D

[General]

Inconsistency in Kiai


[Normal]

01:14:734 (3): Move repeat to white tick?

Like so much this normal.

[Nymph's Hard]

00:06:933 (3): Move this to x:288 y:320.

[Lunatic]

00:03:031 (1): Move 3 grids left.
02:48:396 (7,8): Make spacing like this?
SPOILER

Really nothing to point here, amazing map. Really love your mapping style in this map.
Good luck~
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
MineC24
Is perfect. But

Lunatic

02:01:810 (1) - distance a little Confusing
02:10:835 (9) - new combo

Nymph's Hard

HP Drain Rate +1 (Subjective opinions... no change this...)

01:35:225 (5) - new combo
01:39:128 (5) - ^
01:46:932 (5) - ^
01:54:737 (7) - ^


This beatmap...
Very Good!

I'm novice
Therefore no need to follow all...


Sorry. This is Google Translate...
Scorpiour
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Topic Starter
Scorpiour

suzutsukikanade wrote:

Hope i can help you :D

[General]

Inconsistency in Kiai

:arrow: i suppose it doesn't matter since Nymph doesn't pretend to change kiai~~
[Normal]

01:14:734 (3): Move repeat to white tick? :arrow: hmm...the beat here is following the vocal's start and end~~

Like so much this normal.

[Nymph's Hard]

00:06:933 (3): Move this to x:288 y:320.

[Lunatic]

00:03:031 (1): Move 3 grids left. :arrow: er...why..?
02:48:396 (7,8): Make spacing like this? :arrow: sorry no change...i don't like this shape..
SPOILER

Really nothing to point here, amazing map. Really love your mapping style in this map.
Good luck~
thank you very much for the modding >.<
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
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Topic Starter
Scorpiour

jaehn215 wrote:

Is perfect. But

Lunatic

02:01:810 (1) - distance a little Confusing :arrow: emm....it's designed pattern because i don't wanna make just a stack...
02:10:835 (9) - new combo :arrow: no NC here because vocal's stress is 02:11:810 - , so a NC here may not very suit for the music :>

Nymph's Hard

HP Drain Rate +1 (Subjective opinions... no change this...)

01:35:225 (5) - new combo
01:39:128 (5) - ^
01:46:932 (5) - ^
01:54:737 (7) - ^


This beatmap...
Very Good!

I'm novice
Therefore no need to follow all...


Sorry. This is Google Translate...
so happy that u like map ~~and thanks for your modding =v=
Scorpiour
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Scorpiour
er...what happened no_gu?
LKs
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Joined August 2009
LKs
Lunatic



204,48,12543,2,0,B|260:42|300:83,1,104,0|2
392,148,18153,6,0,B|336:144|288:187|278:237,1,156,2|0
300,232,45470,6,0,B|225:227|184:143|222:75,1,208,0|2


no KD
Scorpiour
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Scorpiour

LKs wrote:

Lunatic



204,48,12543,2,0,B|260:42|300:83,1,104,0|2
392,148,18153,6,0,B|336:144|288:187|278:237,1,156,2|0
300,232,45470,6,0,B|225:227|184:143|222:75,1,208,0|2


no KD
thank you very much >.< all fixed...似乎和我开着grid snap有关的缘故…………唔……该试试关掉了…………

这两个月都感觉自己的mapping卡在瓶颈上怎么也找不到下一步的方向……这张应该是这个时期做的最后一个图了，后面的图我自己也在努力想该怎么做一些改变……唔……其实也被L_P的那张白雪公主给刺激到了一下。

Low/Mid BPM的曲子应该可以在不破坏美观和节奏的前提下做的可玩性更强一些的……AHO的low bpm也拆过，几张经典的低bpm曲包括花舞在内也反复的拆解过了但是自己就是找不到方向到底应该在哪儿………
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Scorpiour wrote:

thank you very much >.< all fixed...似乎和我开着grid snap有关的缘故…………唔……该试试关掉了…………

这两个月都感觉自己的mapping卡在瓶颈上怎么也找不到下一步的方向……这张应该是这个时期做的最后一个图了，后面的图我自己也在努力想该怎么做一些改变……唔……其实也被L_P的那张白雪公主给刺激到了一下。

Low/Mid BPM的曲子应该可以在不破坏美观和节奏的前提下做的可玩性更强一些的……AHO的low bpm也拆过，几张经典的低bpm曲包括花舞在内也反复的拆解过了但是自己就是找不到方向到底应该在哪儿………
好 神麻婆的心路历程vol.1
Scorpiour
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

好 神麻婆的心路历程vol.1
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