pimpG wrote:

^ the biggest mod i see in these 2 years of osu

and finally a mod from #modreqs thx

kei, that mod is really huge and detailled, and just for 1 kudosu, i dont know how can i apologise , i fixed / i'm fixing everything you sugest in easy

pimpG wrote:

Kei wrote:

Hi. Mod request taken from # modreqs. (*0*)


[General]

1. Remove "Naruto" from tags because that's already written at the Source. (kay)
   
2. lol@tags: "Super Deformed ending". Oh btw, Maito Gai looks kinda creepy. (lol~)

[Easy]

1. 00:22:988 (3,4) - I don't recommend you to stack notes in Easy diffs. You can do this in a Normal diff, but not in a Easy, because easy diffs are like an "introduction" to the game. Beginners play this diff level to understand how the game works, so try to make friendly patterns for them(i got it). Also, there's a spacing problem. Check it out and fix it with distance snap. (fixed)
2. 00:25:412 (3,4) - ^ Same thing about stacking. (fixed)
3. 00:26:927 (1,2,3) - Hmmm this rhythm sounds kinda weird to me. I suggest you to try this rhythm out. I think it follows better the music:
   
   SPOILER

   
   (fixed)
4. 00:40:563 (2) - I think you should delete this note. Leave those kind of rhythms to Normal diffs. Try to make this diff as simple as possible. (fixed)
5. 00:42:988 (2) - ^ (fixed)
6. 00:45:412 (2) - ^ (fixed)
7. 00:47:533 (1,2) - ^ (same reason as above) so I suggest you to try this rhythm. Follows good the music too, and it is more simple imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
   (fixed)
8. 00:52:382 (1) - Since you added whistles before, but not here, I feel this slider kinda empty. I suggest you to add a whistle at the repeat. Sounds good to me. (fixed)
9. 00:52:382 (1) - This combo is very short if you followed the pattern that I suggested before (00:47:533 (1,2)). If you did, I suggest you to remove nc here and add nc to 00:54:806 (1) to keep following the voice. (fixed)
10. 00:55:412 (1) - This spinner starts way too early after clicking that slider for an easy diff. Beginners are slow to read spinners that start early (i'll fix asap). Also, this spinner is way too long. It looks made with the purpose of unnecessarily skipping part of the song imo (lazyness maybe?) (no ^^ .. that was the 1st diff i mapped, and a long spinner is easyer than a normal one, right? ^^). The singer is still singing so this spinner doesn't fit here so you should consider mapping this part instead of placing a spinner like this. (i'll fix asap)
11. 00:59:654 (1) - ^ Also, this note is kinda far away from the spinner's centre. It's better and more friendly for beginners to place notes more closer to there. (fixed)
12. 01:09:654 (2) - Again, I suggest you to remove this note. Same reasons as I mentioned already in the mod. (fixed)
13. 01:12:079 (2) - ^ (fixed)
14. 01:14:503 (2) - ^ (fixed)
15. 01:15:412 (4) - This slider is almost off screen so I recommend you to move it a tad up. (fixed)
16. 01:16:624 (1,2) - Same rhythm and reasons that I suggested you already (00:47:533 (1,2)) (fixed)
17. 01:23:897 (3,1) - Saaaame thing about that spinner. (it's just all the same about the previous kiai since you copy pasted everything). (i'll fix asap)
    
    That copy paste in the 2nd kiai dissapointed me. .-. Oh, also, you should add whistles like you did in your [Normal] difficulty for consistency. (you added whistles before the 1st kiai in your Normal diff but not in this difficulty).

[Normal]

1. 00:14:503 (1,2,3,4) - Those whistles don't seem to follow the voice at all to me. I think that they should be like this to follow better the voice:
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:14:503 (1) - Whistle here (fixed)
   2. 00:14:806 (2) - No whistle here (fixed)
   3. 00:15:109 (3) - Whisle at the end and start of this slider (fixed)
   4. 00:15:715 (4) - Whistle at the end and start of this slider(fixed)
2. 00:17:836 (2) - That whistle sound at this sliderbody sounds pretty noisy to me. I highly recommend you to remove it, because it doesn't fit with the music. (fixed)
3. 00:19:048 (1,2,3,4) - There's a clear lack of whistles. I think that you should add whistles like this to follow better the voice:
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:19:351 (2) - Whistle at the start and end of this slider (fixed)
   2. 00:19:957 (3) - Whistle at the start of this slider (fixed)
   3. 00:20:563 (4) - Whistle at the start and end of this slider(fixed)
4. 00:22:988 (4) - To keep using whistles to follow the voice, I suggest you to add a whistle at the end of this slider. (fixed)
5. 00:24:200 (2) - Again, noisy whistle at the sliderbody. It sounds bad at this part of the song so you should remove it(fixed). Also, to keep following the voice, I suggest you to add a whistle at the end of this slider(fixed). If you do this, try adding a whistle to 00:25:109 (3) too. Sounds nice imo. (fixed)
6. 00:26:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here's a lack of whistles again. For consistency, you should add a whistle to 00:26:624 (1), whistle at the start of 00:27:230 (3) and at the end too, but remove whistle at the repeat, because it ruins your whistle's pattern, and to finish, 00:28:139 (4) whistle at the end and start of this slider sounds cool with the vocals imo. Try it out.~ (fixed)
7. 00:31:170 (3) - Hmmm the end of this slider sounds empty since you added whistle at the sliderbody. I think that a whistle at the end of this slider sounds and follows better the music. Perhaps add it? (yes)
8. 00:39:654 (8) - Place this note with distance snap. That anti-jump all of a sudden doesn't make sense at all, since you didn't do this before. Also, this isn't a good idea for a Normal difficulty. (fixed)
9. 00:40:260 (1) - A whistle here follows better the voice don't you think? (fixed)
10. 00:42:685 (1) - ^ (fixed)
11. 00:45:109 (1,2,3,4) - Here's a lack of whistles again. To avoid this and keep following your whistles pattern, try adding whistle at the end and start of 00:45:109 (1), to 00:46:321 (3), and at the end of 00:46:624 (4). (fixed)
12. 00:48:745 (3) - Here's a missing whistle. For consistency, you should add it. (fixed)
13. 00:52:382 (1) - Another missing whistle here~ (fixed)
14. 01:00:260 (3) - Whistle at the end of this slider sounds better than leaving this slider without sound sample. (fixed)
15. 01:02:079 (1) - Another missing whistle! (fixed)
16. 01:04:503 (1) - ^ (fixed)
17. 01:07:230 (2) - For consistency with your whistles pattern, you should remove this whistle. (fixed)
18. 01:09:351 (1) - Missing whistle again (fixed)
19. 01:11:776 (1) - ^ (fixed)
20. 01:14:200 (1,2,3,4) - And, lack of whistles again. For consistency and to avoid this, add whistle to the start of 01:14:200 (1), and to 01:15:412 (3). (fixed)
21. 01:21:473 (1) - Another missing whistle. For consistency (as always) I recommend you to add it. (fixed)
    
    This difficulty is better hitsounded than [Easy]. Take a look at your Easy and add samples like you did here. They sound very good(thanks ^^).

[Hard]

1. 00:17:836 (4) - This slider lacks whistles. A whistle at the repeat should solve this little problem. (fixed)
2. 00:19:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Lack of whistles again! This part sounds.. perfect for whistles so you should add some here too like I suggested you already in your other diffs. (fixed)
3. 00:21:776 (1) - Try adding a whistle here. Sounds better and follows more the voice in my opinion. (fixed)
4. 00:24:806 (5) - For consistency, add a whistle at the end of this slider since you did that before. (fixed)
5. 00:26:624 (4) - ^ At the end of this slider. (fixed)
6. 00:28:139 (1) - This stream sounds kinda empty, without hitsounds. Try adding a whistle here. Sounds good to me. (fixed)
7. 00:34:806 (6) - Why do you added a whistle randomly like this? It is very inconsistent with your previous whistles and also with your other diffs whistles. In this part, your Normal is better hitsounded than this diff. You should add whistles like you did there in your other diff. (because the notes are a lot diferent in normal and hard, the normal sliders are better to do it, fixed)
8. 00:35:412 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (fixed)
9. 00:40:866 (4) - ^ Same thing applies to this kiai time. (fixed)
10. 00:56:624 (3) - This slider end sounds off. Try ending this slider at 00:56:927. Sounds much better in my opinion. (i wont follow this for now, i'm not good at making long sliders, now the slider ends in the previous white divisor)
11. 01:24:503 (5) - I dislike a lot how this slider gets overlapped with the previous stream. Try placing this slider in some other way. Maybe rotated like this? You don't have to make your patterns so boxy.
    
    SPOILER

    the image is not loading here, my internet is too slow ^^, i'll fix asap
12. 01:25:715 (6) - Again, this slider end sounds awful imo. Try ending it at 01:26:018.
    
    Cool and catchy rhythm you got here. I like it. I don't like very much some big jumps in some parts (me too, but >>) but I guess it's ok since you don't have an Insane in your mapset. (<<< you got it ^^, i wont map insanes for now, i cant play them because i'm left handed, i'm still a average player, btw is a bit strange trying to map something i cant play, i'm still a newbie mapper too )

That's all. Good luck!!

check my ★☆ in your maps

pimpG wrote:

check my ★☆ in your maps

1. 00:23:897 (1) This note is the only one which follow a "weird" rhythm in the song, I suggest to delete it, beginners needs easy-to-read patterns.
2. 00:59:654 (1) This note is very close to the spin, you need at least two big ticks after the spin, I suggest to delete it, also, if you do it, don't forget to add a new combo in the next slider.

1. 01:17:836 (3) Move this note to avoid the overlap with (2).
2. 01:25:715 (3) In my opinion you must unstack this note.

1. 00:15:715 (4,5,6,7,8) I'm not sure if it is a mistake, but it plays terrible, strongly suggest to change it.
2. 00:34:806 (6) This note is well placed, but feels a little close to the previous slider, do you can increase the space a little?
3. 00:54:048 - I think you need a note here.
4. 00:56:624 (3) The end of the slider don't follow the rhythm, in my opinion the end must be here 00:56:927.
5. 01:23:139 - You need a note here too.
6. 01:25:715 (6) Same about the slider.

eldnl wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:23:897 (1) This note is the only one which follow a "weird" rhythm in the song, I suggest to delete it, beginners needs easy-to-read patterns. (i'll try to fix asap)
2. 00:59:654 (1) This note is very close to the spin, you need at least two big ticks after the spin, I suggest to delete it, also, if you do it, don't forget to add a new combo in the next slider.(looks easy enough imo)

[Normal]

1. 01:17:836 (3) Move this note to avoid the overlap with (2). (fixed)
2. 01:25:715 (3) In my opinion you must unstack this note.(i'll try to fix asap)

[Hard]

1. 00:15:715 (4,5,6,7,8) I'm not sure if it is a mistake, but it plays terrible, strongly suggest to change it. ( i'll try to create something new )
2. 00:34:806 (6) This note is well placed, but feels a little close to the previous slider, do you can increase the space a little? (3 grids up)
3. 00:54:048 - I think you need a note here. (i dont like it)
4. 00:56:624 (3) The end of the slider don't follow the rhythm, in my opinion the end must be here 00:56:927. (i'll try to create something, but i'm not good at making long sliders : ( )
5. 01:23:139 - You need a note here too. (i dont like it)
6. 01:25:715 (6) Same about the slider (i'll try to create something, but i'm not good at making long sliders : ( ) .

~

thanks, lets mod4mod again

• 00:31:624 (6) - Add clap
  00:32:079 - ^ (only in the repeat)
  00:36:473 (6) - ^
  00:36:927 - ^
  01:03:139 (6) - ^
  01:03:291 (7) - Remove clap on first and add clap on the repeat
  01:05:563 (6) - Add clap
  01:06:018 - ^ (only the repeat)

RoxasGrylls94 wrote:

Mod o/

HARD

• 00:31:624 (6) - Add clap
  00:32:079 - ^ (only in the repeat)
  00:36:473 (6) - ^
  00:36:927 - ^
  01:03:139 (6) - ^
  01:03:291 (7) - Remove clap on first and add clap on the repeat
  01:05:563 (6) - Add clap
  01:06:018 - ^ (only the repeat)

pimpG wrote:

Had a chat with him over the IRC... he said that only hard diff was downloaded

please click in the other diffs in the download page and click Grab latest .osu file and paste in my map's folder

try to mod them too, please

RoxasGrylls94 wrote:

pimpG wrote:

Had a chat with him over the IRC... he said that only hard diff was downloaded

please click in the other diffs in the download page and click Grab latest .osu file and paste in my map's folder

try to mod them too, please

He's right.

New mod o/

EASY

Haven't found errors (*0*)

Normal
00:59:654 (1,2,3) - Put them like the screen http://puu.sh/EMrB (looks good, but kills the spacing a bit more, i'll decide asap)
01:02:079 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/EMtF (looks good, but kills the spacing a bit more, i'll decide asap)
01:04:503 (1,2,3,4) - I grid down and 1 grid right (fixed spacing and simmetry)

HARD
Like the old mod (should i give kudos to the old mod too? )

thanks, lets mod 4 mod again

pimpG wrote:

should i give kudos to the old mod too? )

pimpG wrote:

thanks, lets mod 4 mod again

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Normal

SPOILER

00:12:079 (1) - Anti-jump. Too close to the slider before it. (only 0,10 ~ 0,15 is ok imo)

Hard

SPOILER

no problems found (... ...)

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi pimpG (HI o/ )

General

1. 60 ~ 50 in audio sounds better to me, normal-hitnormal sounds too loud IMO (agree, now its 50 in normal parts, 60 in kiai)

Easy

1. 00:11:776 (3) - Add a note whit finish, it will fill the empty in this part and flows whit the instrumental (fixed)
2. 00:45:715 (2) - Hold shift and move it a little up, add next notes spacing (fixed)
3. 00:49:957 (1) - A finish at the end sounds good, it adds some rhythm to the song (fixed)
4. 00:52:382 (3) - Hold shift and move it a little up, same whit the next note 00:54:200 (4) (fixed)
5. 01:19:048 (1) - A finish at the end sounds good, it adds some rhythm to the song (fixed)
6. 01:26:321 (1) - Adding a whistle sounds good here, it mixes whit the piano in the instrumental (okay)

Normal

1. 00:11:170 (2) - I think this slider its too far from 00:10:563 (1), maybe move it 2 or 3 grids up (2 grids up)
2. 00:25:715 (5) - 1 grid up to line it whit 00:25:109 (3) (fixed)
3. 00:31:170 (3) - Next time don't add unnescesary slider points http://puu.sh/FBDr (HAI o\)
4. 00:38:139 (6) - Replace the whistle for a clap, to keep the consistency at claps (fixed)
5. 01:20:260 (2) - Flip it like this http://puu.sh/FBFV it really looks better (totally agree)
6. 01:26:321 (1) - Adding a whistle sounds good here, it mixes whit the piano in the instrumental (okay)

Hard

1. 00:11:776 (1) - Add Finish, it fits whit the instrumental (fixed)
2. 00:32:382 (8) - To far from the end of 00:31:927 (7) IMO (fixed?)
3. 00:37:230 (8) - ^ (this one completes the simmetry, i'll try to create something )
4. 00:40:866 (1) - Add NC, it low down the combos in 00:42:079 (8,9) . (i dislike it a bit but i gess you are right)
5. 00:50:260 (3) - A finish at the end sounds good, it adds some rhythm to the song (fixed)
6. 01:09:957 (1) - Add NC, Follow the Instrumental finish (i dislike it a bit but i gess you are right)
7. 01:19:351 (3) - A finish at the end sounds good, it adds some rhythm to the song (fixed)
8. 01:26:321 (1) - Adding a whistle sounds good here, it mixes whit the piano in the instrumental (okay)

Good map , Hope it was helpful my mod (it was really helpful )

Good Luck ! And Star ! (THANK YOU *0*)

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Hi~！
here's my mod~!

Hard

SPOILER

didn't find anything.

Normal

SPOILER

looks good~! (thx )

Easy

SPOILER

01:02:685 (4) - right by 3 grids?(looks good, fixed )

here's my star, good luck~! ( thanks *0* )

mrkyee wrote:

Nice map. (sankyuu )

Haven't found anything bad in all diffs, your improvements are astonishing (i hope i can make it ranked as sooner as possible, and good luck with your map too, its a lot better then mine imo )

256,101,13594,2,0,B|264:172|228:232|160:252,1,192,2|0

Strawberry wrote:

sry I'm late. (but now you are here, no prob : 3)

Nice map already, some small point could be noticed. :3

[General]
`Combo colour 3 is similar as 4. You should delete one of them I think.. (its the original combo colors of the editor)

[Hard]
00:11:776 (7) - from some of suggestions.you have a big jump in (3,4),and I think it is really better if you move (7) to x:200 y:88,then remove nc here. (i tryed to follow the video in this jump, and imo (7) does not call for a jump like the previous notes)
00:12:079 (1) - of course. Add nc there. (i don't like it, i hope its ok)
00:13:594 (4) - the shape is a bit strange imo..however it's better but if make it more rounded (looks good, but i'll keep the original)

256,101,13594,2,0,B|264:172|228:232|160:252,1,192,2|0

00:18:745 - um..maybe there should be added a note? I think put a 1/1slider is suitable and remove 00:19:048 (1) - (looks good, but i like this short pause)
00:35:109 - ^ (looks good, but i like this short pause)
00:56:624 (3) - changed to 1/1 slider looks better. (fixed)
01:25:715 (6) - ^ (fixed)

nice.

[Normal]
all looks ok.

[Easy]
00:16:927 (1,2) - touch the hp bar..move them down. (one tiny grid down)
00:48:745 (2) - add finish at tail (fixed, "tail" looks cool, maybe i'll start using this word too : 3)
00:54:200 (4) - add finish? (yes *0*)
01:02:685 (4) - it is also touch the hp bar i think..so.. (the slider itself is not touching it, i hope its ok)
01:15:412 (3) - the middle point at x:504 y:336 (fixed)

really good map. I can't find something more .good luck for rank!

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. 00:14:503 (3) - NC
2. 00:19:351 (3) - ^
3. 00:26:321 (4,1) - (4) NC and (1) re NC
4. 00:52:382 (3) - NC
5. 01:21:473 (3) - ^

[Normal]

1. 00:32:988 (4) - NC (because I see 01:02:079 (1) - there have NC)
2. 00:37:836 (5) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:39:957 (1,2) - (1) re NC and (2) NC ?

l1106188 wrote:

Request from myself (what...?!) (hehe)

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. 00:14:503 (3) - NC (fixed)
2. 00:19:351 (3) - ^ (fixed)
3. 00:26:321 (4,1) - (4) NC and (1) re NC (fixed)
4. 00:52:382 (3) - NC (fixed)
5. 01:21:473 (3) - ^(fixed)

[Normal]

1. 00:32:988 (4) - NC (because I see 01:02:079 (1) - there have NC) (fixed)
2. 00:37:836 (5) - ^(fixed)

[Hard]

1. 00:39:957 (1,2) - (1) re NC and (2) NC ?(looks strange, i hope its ok)

good song ~ star for 1st map & good luck~
and sorry to my poor English (your english is fine : 3)

- t e n n y a - wrote:

nyanyanya M4M from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestion ~

[General]
nothing ( )

[Easy]
nothing, seems fine ( )

[Normal]
- 00:18:442 : remove whistle? (okay)

[Hard]
- 00:29:351 : change it to another style? 3x reverse seems weird o v o (i'll try to fix asap)
- 00:29:957 : finish? (x)
- 01:09:048 :remove nc? (okay)
- 01:09:351 : nc? since the vocal start at there o v o (fixed)

thats all I can found, rank good luck X3

• • Title: Twinkle Twinkle (TV Size)
  • Source: "Naruto SD: Rock Lee no Seishun Full-Power Ninden "
  • Tags: add "spin-off" and remove "Anime".
  • Preview Point: 00:40:200
  • Video Offset: 200ms

• • 00:33:594 (5) - Delete this slider. Start a slider here and end it at 00:33:897 (white tick). Start another slider at 00:34:048 (red tick) and end it at 00:34:351 (red tick). Add a circle at 00:34:503 (white tick), one at 00:34:654 (red tick) and another one at 00:35:109 (white tick).
  • 00:38:442 (5) - Delete this slider. Start a slider here and end it at 00:38:745 (white tick). Start another slider at 00:38:897 (red tick) and end it at 00:39:200 (red tick). Add a circle at 00:39:351 (white tick) and another one at 00:39:654 (white tick).
  00:54:200 (8) - Delete this circle. Start a slider at 00:54:048 (red tick) and end it at 00:54:351 (red tick).
  • 01:00:260 (5) - Do the same thing as before.
  • 01:07:533 (5) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • Title: Twinkle Twinkle (TV Size) (fixed)
  • Source: "Naruto SD: Rock Lee no Seishun Full-Power Ninden " (fixed)
  • Tags: add "spin-off" and remove "Anime". (fixed, but its ok if i keep anime, right?... anime will be the genre )
  • Preview Point: 00:40:200 - (fixed)
  • Video Offset: 200ms (fixed)

[Hard]

• • 00:33:594 (5) - Delete this slider. Start a slider here and end it at 00:33:897 (white tick). Start another slider at 00:34:048 (red tick) and end it at 00:34:351 (red tick). Add a circle at 00:34:503 (white tick), one at 00:34:654 (red tick) and another one at 00:35:109 (white tick). (looks good but i'll keep my current slider; i hope its ok)
  • 00:38:442 (5) - Delete this slider. Start a slider here and end it at 00:38:745 (white tick). Start another slider at 00:38:897 (red tick) and end it at 00:39:200 (red tick). Add a circle at 00:39:351 (white tick) and another one at 00:39:654 (white tick). (looks good but i'll keep my current slider; i hope its ok)
  00:54:200 (8) - Delete this circle. Start a slider at 00:54:048 (red tick) and end it at 00:54:351 (red tick). (fixed)
  • 01:00:260 (5) - Do the same thing as before. (looks good but i'll keep my current slider; i hope its ok)
  • 01:07:533 (5) - ^ (looks good but i'll keep my current slider; i hope its ok)

Nice beatmap~(*0*)

• 
  00:16:927 (1,2,1) - strange pattern. how about this?
  
  
  00:24:200 (1,2,3) -
  
  if you do this, place whistle on (2) and delete whistle on (3)
  00:26:927 (2,3) -
  
  00:54:200 (2) - finish on this beat looks bad

• 
  00:16:927 (1,2) -
  
  00:19:351 (2,4) - finish+clap+whistle?this need more work, how I think
  00:23:897 (5) - words begins on 00:24:200
  00:30:867 (2) - place whistle, delete clap?
  00:33:291 (2) - ^
  00:36:018 (3) - end of this slider so... loud
  00:40:563 (2,3) -
  

• 
  00:31:624 (6) - this beat looks strange
  00:36:473 (6) - ^
  01:00:109 (4) - delete clap?

tiper wrote:

Use only maximum grid level and check spacing on all diffs after it (kay)

Easy:

• 
  00:16:927 (1,2,1) - strange pattern. how about this? (looks good but i wont stack)
  
  
  00:24:200 (1,2,3) - (?)
  
  if you do this, place whistle on (2) and delete whistle on (3)
  00:26:927 (2,3) - (i'll decide asap)
  
  00:54:200 (2) - finish on this beat looks bad (fixed)

Normal:

• 
  00:16:927 (1,2) - (fixed)
  
  00:19:351 (2,4) - finish+clap+whistle?this need more work, how I think (removed claps D=)
  00:23:897 (5) - words begins on 00:24:200 (you mean new combo? i dont like it)
  00:30:867 (2) - place whistle, delete clap? (x)
  00:33:291 (2) - ^ (x)
  00:36:018 (3) - end of this slider so... loud (its ok imo)
  00:40:563 (2,3) - (spacing? i fixed a bit)
  

Hard:

• 
  00:31:624 (6) - this beat looks strange (fixed)
  00:36:473 (6) - ^ (fixed)
  01:00:109 (4) - delete clap? (x)

GL with rank (thanks, lets mod4mod again )

Konei wrote:

Hello :3 o/

mod time~


Easy


00:12:685 (1) whistle the end for constant whistle (okay)

00:13:291 (2) ^ for the beginning of slider (okay)

00:15:109 (2) remove whistle (okay)

00:18:139 (1) ^ (okay)

00:18:442 (2) add whistle (okay)

01:09:957 (2) remove the one slider point (fixed)



Normal


00:23:897 (1) the spacing isn't correct (fixed)

00:26:624 (1) ^ (fixed)



Hard


00:14:503 (1) incorect spacing (its ok in hard)

00:55:412 (2) yay for this slider <3 ( : 3 )



That's it nice done (*o*)


Good luck!!(thanks, lets mod4mod again )

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~

[Easy]
00:14:503 (1,2) - maybe change a slider?~ as same as 00:12:079 (1) - ~ (looks to work too, but this diff has already too many sliders, its strange in taiko mode)
00:43:291 (2) - not too beautiful!~but idk how to make.....orz~~~orz~just suggestion..... (looks to work too, i'll decide asap)

SPOILER

this code is fix......sor

184,256,43291,2,2,B|248:256|312:168|248:84|188:84,1,256,6|2
296,16,45109,5,2
420,44,45715,1,6

01:12:382 (2) - ^ , think by urself~xD.....i just lazy.... (okay)

[Normal]
look fine~...... (: 3)

[Hard]
00:13:594 (5) - try this rhythm~?~because .............Triple hit like ...later part ?~@#^#$&....sor my poor english...orz (i'll decide asap)

SPOILER

01:02:079 (1,3,4,1,3,4,1,3,4) - add clap~? as same as 00:59:654 (1,3,4) - ~ (i'll try to add some)

00:39:503 (6) - maybe move a little..~xD (not sure, i'll decide asap)

SPOILER

176,192,38442,2,2,B|180:236|248:260|292:232,2,144
192,144,39503,1,2
332,176,39957,1,0

very nice song~
and mapset...
Star!~☆♪~
Good Luck！~！~xD

TheVileOne wrote:

Easy

good pacing in this difficulty. Really close to nothing to say about this difficulty. It makes great use of the unique aspects of the song, and that's hard to do in an Easy. (thanks, *.*)

00:28:139 (3) - Slider shape is unfitting IMO. Change design? (you are right, i'll try to fix asap)

Normal

Very little wrong with this. I really enjoyed it. ( )

00:15:715 (4) - Add a finish with the whistle at the end? (x)
00:30:260 - A note would sound so nice here. I recommend you try to figure out a way to have a note here. Just try not to completely ruin your symmetry or flow. (i made a circle in the previous slider repeat cordinate, i can use another repeat too)
00:49:957 (1,2) - Maybe there is a better slider shape than this. Hmm... (You designed the sliders in a more appealing way here 01:19:048 (1,2) - ) (i'll try to fix asap )

Hard

Three nearly flawless difficulties. I look forward to this being ranked. (i'll keep improving *0*)

00:13:594 (5) - Slider curve is random compared the curves of 3,4 (its ok imo)
00:23:897 (3) - Maybe finish? (okay)
00:53:442 (6) - This part would sound better if there wasn't a note here IMO. (i'll decide asap)
01:11:170 (5,6,1) - All 1.5? (fixed)


Edit: I might do a recheck for your hitsounds. I can't hitsound mod right now.(you are a good person, i really need a hitsound check )

tutuhaha wrote:

Easy:
00:59:654 (1) - suggestion to delete this note because it is too close between spinner and this note in easy.
it is litter bit hard to the new player <3. (its close to spinner centre, it would look too empty if i remove it)

Normal:
01:09:957 (3) - ...litter bit ugly :/............ (a little bit changed ^^)

Hard
00:10:867 (3,4) - try to make this too close than now, because 00:11:473 (6,1) - is too close Orz (this is a special case jump..from choreography)
00:21:473 (1) - NC begin there (fixed)
00:29:654 (6) - move to x:256 y:120 (okay)
00:36:473 (6) - fix this Overlapping Problem (0.02x -> 0.00x) (fixed)
00:39:806 (X) - add note (x)
01:01:776 (7,1) - too close (i'll try to create something new)
01:05:563 (6) - fix this Overlapping Problem (0.02x -> 0.00x) (fixed)
01:08:897 (X) - add note (x)
01:09:048 (8,1) - too close (i'll try to fix it asap D =)

Good lucky ~

1. 00:43:291 (2) - clean this shape? suggestion:
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:12:382 (2) - ^

1. 00:43:291 (3) - better to use 1 point for curve:
   SPOILER

   
   slightly move following notes so no overlap

1. 00:12:382 (3) - add whistle to end
2. 00:12:988 (4) - move whistle to end
3. 00:15:109 (3) - ^
4. 00:15:715 (4) - ^
5. 00:55:412 (2) - ugly shape... try code?

   256,28,55412,2,2,B|224:44|200:80|224:128|256:144|288:168|308:212|276:252|224:280,1,288,2|8

   move following slider~