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Etsuko Yakushimaru and the Metro Orchestra - Shounen yo Ware

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Kuria
1,390 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Kuria
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 14 Juni 2012 at 5:17:13

Artist: Etsuko Yakushimaru and the Metro Orchestra
Title: Shounen yo Ware ni Kaere (TV Size)
Source: Mawaru Penguindrum
Tags: opening 2 shinkuria brain's base takakura kanba shouma himari
BPM: 180
Filesize: 16528kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,26 stars, 75 notes)
  2. Hard (4,94 stars, 237 notes)
  3. Insane (4,82 stars, 256 notes)
  4. Normal (4,19 stars, 163 notes)
Download: Etsuko Yakushimaru and the Metro Orchestra - Shounen yo Ware ni Kaere (TV Size)
Download: Etsuko Yakushimaru and the Metro Orchestra - Shounen yo Ware ni Kaere (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mawaru Penguindrum's 2nd opening :O
Last edited by Kuria , edited 9 times in total.
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
Mapnya Envi kayaknya gagal upload. Ga ada preview sounds sama thumbnailnya.
Terus error loading audio waktu Miya buka mapnya. >.<
Kuria
1,390 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Kuria
buat yang thumbnail emang beberapa map ada kasus seperti ini, aku ud dikasi tau MAT/BAT kalo buat thumb nya ntar bakal muncul sendiri, butuh waktu beberapa hari.

lagi fullsubmit :3
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
hi there~

General:

-put custom combo colors?

Easy:

01:08:933 (3) - add NC?

Normal:

01:02:938 (1) - IMO, remove clap?
01:05:603 (1) - ^
01:24:753 (2) - finish on start?
01:26:085 (5) - ^

Hard:

00:13:314 - add note with clap?
00:15:812 (4) - remove clap?
00:38:959 (1) - too close to (8)
00:54:945 (1) - add finish on start?
01:05:603 (1) - add finish on start?
01:19:424 (2) - add finish on start?
01:21:589 (1) - add finish on start?
01:22:089 (2) - add finish?
01:24:253 (1) - add finish?
01:24:753 (4) - add finish?
01:25:586 (7,10) - add finish?
01:27:251 (2) - add whistle on start?
01:28:250 (5) - add whistle on start?

Insane:

00:15:979 - add note with clap? then, remove clap from 00:15:479 (5,1)
00:23:805 (6) - change into a 1/2 slider? then, add clap on end
01:19:424 (4) - add finish
01:22:089 (4) - add finish
01:24:253 (1) - add finish
01:24:753 (4) - add finish
01:25:419 (6) - try it like this? http://puu.sh/zV6x then, add finish on (8)
01:25:919 (9) - add finish on end?
01:28:250 (4) - add whistle

nice map~
Kuria
1,390 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Kuria

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi there~

General:

-put custom combo colors? will be working on this later

Easy:

01:08:933 (3) - add NC? k

Normal:

01:02:938 (1) - IMO, remove clap? actually there wasn't any clap there, instead of it, im adding a finish on that part
01:05:603 (1) - ^ same
01:24:753 (2) - finish on start? k
01:26:085 (5) - ^ k

Hard:

00:13:314 - add note with clap?
00:15:812 (4) - remove clap?
00:38:959 (1) - too close to (8)
00:54:945 (1) - add finish on start?
01:05:603 (1) - add finish on start?
01:19:424 (2) - add finish on start?
01:21:589 (1) - add finish on start?
01:22:089 (2) - add finish?
01:24:253 (1) - add finish?
01:24:753 (4) - add finish?
01:25:586 (7,10) - add finish?
01:27:251 (2) - add whistle on start?
01:28:250 (5) - add whistle on start?

fix'd all

Insane:

00:15:979 - add note with clap? then, remove clap from 00:15:479 (5,1)
00:23:805 (6) - change into a 1/2 slider? then, add clap on end
01:19:424 (4) - add finish
01:22:089 (4) - add finish
01:24:253 (1) - add finish
01:24:753 (4) - add finish
01:25:419 (6) - try it like this? http://puu.sh/zV6x then, add finish on (8)
01:25:919 (9) - add finish on end?
01:28:250 (4) - add whistle

fix'd all

nice map~ thanks!
thanks for the mod!
Saturnalize
1,490 posts
Joined March 2011
Saturnalize
Karena ada kata shounen jadi aku tertarik
Untuk sekarang aku star dulu, mungkin besok aku bakal mod. Good Luck.
Kuria
1,390 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Kuria

Loli Cjj wrote:

Karena ada kata shounen jadi aku tertarik
Untuk sekarang aku star dulu, mungkin besok aku bakal mod. Good Luck.
trims bintangnya^^
Atema
193 posts
Joined March 2011
Atema
Hi ! Fom my modding queue :)

Easy

00:12:315 (1) - From here, you’ve got a lot of 1,2,1,2 combos : maybe could you group them into 1,2,3,4 ? I think it’ll be better, but that’s just a suggestion :)

Normal

- I found nothing wrong in this diff, except that the star gap between this one and the Easy one is kinda huge, maybe should you try to lower it by making the settings a little bit easier for this one / “”harder”” for the Easy ? Because imo when people will see it, some new players could think “damn, I can do better than 1 star but I don’t wanna risk a 4 star”.

Hard

- AR 6 instead of 7 ? After all, it’s not supposed to be the harder diff even though the star rating says the contrary XD

00:22:640 (7) - Start the NC here instead of here 00:22:973 (1) - ?
00:24:138 (4) - NC ?
00:25:470 (1) - Remove NC ?
00:38:459 (7) - Start the NC here instead of here 00:38:959 (1) - ?
01:23:920 (6,1,2,3,4) - I’d make a combo here

Insane

- I think there’s not much difference between this diff and the hard one : sometimes you use the same patterns, it’s the same way of mapping when you could expect more streams or jumps in an Insane. So except the slider velocity, the AR and the HP, I did not see a big change like I’ve seen between the Normal & Hard diff ^^


This being said, thi is still a very good mapset, and I only was able to point out really minor things.
Of course, those are only suggestions, feel free to follow them or not :)
Good luck ! :)
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
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General
  1. Priview time: ga konsisten tuh di hard diff bang '~'
  2. Kiai time: sama ga konsisten di hard diff
  3. Timing: BPM = 180.000 | Offset = 328. sekarang aku bisa mencet 300 smua '~' jgn lupa resnap smua note dan timing pointnya
  5. berdasarkan hal diatas, ubah smua hitsoundnya dari soft-default ke S:C1.. kan pake blank buat slider-slide nya..
  6. Storyboarding:
    1. Disabled countdown?
    2. disable letterboxduringbreaks too..
Easy
  1. 00:02:327 (4,2) - beneran lo, clap + finish disini aneh banget di dengernya.. delete clap nya jauh lebih bagus dibanding bareng2 gini sama finish '~' agak strange.
  2. 00:03:661 (1,3) - kasih whistle?? bagus lo biar agak ngefek sama suara di musiknya
  3. 00:38:994 (1,1) - lalu ini slider bentuk nya agak gimana gitu '~' coba nih kodenya
    120,344,38994,6,0,B|80:288|128:216|144:192|128:168|72:112|128:32,1,320,4|0
  4. 00:54:996 (1) - hapus dong finish di awalnya.. aneh didengernya.. agak berisik gimana gitu pas gameplay
  5. 01:19:496 (1,2) - ini circle mending dibuat satu slider aja deh.. kena trap disini '~' dari white tick trs ke red tick itu sebenernya lumayan susah di ikutin walaupun ngikutin musik. aku jg jadi kena trap disini '~' oh iya, jangan di tengah2 dong taro note nya. masih overlap tu sama hitburst abis spinner. more visible for newbie is da best :3 dan remove pula clap di (2).. anehnya '_'; mod ini berlaku untuk note yang sejenis selanjutnya.
  6. the last, buang smua break nya. ga perlu-perlu amat kok dan ga akan sampe ngebunuh pemain drainnya
Normal
  1. 00:03:996 (2) - error spacing '~'
  2. 00:03:162 (1,3) - disini juga sama, finish + clap nyampur aduk gini kurang enak didenger. remove clap nya 'w'
  3. 00:26:663 (5) - kasih new combo biar sama (1-2-3-4-1-2-3-4)
  4. 01:22:997 (5) - kepanjangan ni combo nya, kasih new combo disini
Hard
  1. 00:03:162 (1,3) - sama kayak di normal diff
  2. 00:15:996 (x) - kasih note? kayaknya terlalu kosong disini '~'
  3. 00:43:996 (6,7,8) - kenapa tiba2 triplet? kayaknya ga cocok deh sama musiknya.. remove (7)?
  4. 01:09:663 (7) - kasih new combo? terlalu panjang di sini
  5. 01:25:662 (7) - ^
Insane
  1. Difficulty Setting: kurangi (-1) HP sama OD nya.. gila itu '~'
  2. 00:01:663 (4) - 1 grid up biar sejajar sama (6).. lebih bagus keliatannya selama gameplay
  3. 00:02:163 (7) - ini ga di sejajarin aja sama (5)? biar zig-zag nya keliatan bagus jg..
  4. 00:03:163 (1,3) - sama kayak di normal diff, remove clap nya
  5. 00:14:830 (1,2,3) - ini triplet nya stack yang bener dums
  6. 00:40:330 (7) - kasih new combo '~'
  7. 00:43:663 (5,6) - ini.. spacingnya kejauhan? o ya kasih note juga di 00:43:829 trus jadiin triplet disini.. cocok buat lagunya '~'
  8. 00:49:664 (1,2,3,4) - ini belah ketupat patternnya bisa dibuat lebih simetris. seperti ini?
hau patternya kurang rapih ;_; jangan tersinggung ya bang, cuma pendapat '~'
hm gitu aja deh.. gud luck 'w'
Kuria
1,390 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Kuria

Atema wrote:

- I found nothing wrong in this diff, except that the star gap between this one and the Easy one is kinda huge, maybe should you try to lower it by making the settings a little bit easier for this one / “”harder”” for the Easy ? Because imo when people will see it, some new players could think “damn, I can do better than 1 star but I don’t wanna risk a 4 star”. i'm still looking for a way to make the spread of easy and normal became par til now, still working on this orz

Hard
00:38:459 (7) - Start the NC here instead of here 00:38:959 (1) - ? i think the current one are better, since i'm try to make it easy readable when ppl play this on tag multiplayer
fix everything except above.

thanks^^
Saturnalize
1,490 posts
Joined March 2011
Saturnalize
Tumben loh, beatmapnya cukup berantakan kali ini, aku sedikit... kecewa :(
Tapi overall, permainan hitonnya ihik banget ( owo)b (meski kekurangan cring" dari whistle)

=General=
Offset 300. Much better.

=Easy=
1. 00:20:327 (1) - Second point 1 grid medium ke kiri, biar lebih simetris.
2. 00:28:327 (1,2,1) - Bentuk arch kurang cocok kalau mau bilang blanket, coba betulkan.
3. 01:10:994 (1) - Second point 1 grid med ke kanan, biar lebih simetris.

=Normal=
Loh dari 1.3 star rating ke 4.2 , gede amat \oAo\ Let's try to trim things down.
1. 00:03:994 (2) - Buang saja, masih diff normal tidak perlu ini (menyesuaikan sedikit dengan suara trompet di belakang)
2. 00:31:994 (2,3) - Buat yang (3) tolong dibetulkan seperti di gambar ini http://puu.sh/AR38
3. 00:45:661 (3) - Lagi, betulkan seperti ini http://puu.sh/AR3E
4. 01:03:633 (2,2) - How about whistle here and there?

=Hard=
Star ratingnya lebih besar dari Insane, AIMod lagi ngeseems legit
1. 01:01:827 (6) - 1 grid small ke bawah, buat pattern segitiga yang cantik.
2. 01:13:661 (11) - (320,256). Lagi, pattern segitiga yang cantik.

=Insane=
1. 00:49:662 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern jajargenjangnya diperbaiki :(

Ya, slidernya cukup banyak yang berantakan dan patternnya banyak yang sedikit aneh, tapi aku suka kok.
Ayo semangat & Good luck
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Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki


Hi, Envi

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Fine

Easy

  1. 00:04:327 (2,3) - Change is 1 slider be better, and remove clap in (2).
  2. 00:50:994 (2) - Add finish in slider begin

Normal

  1. 00:01:994 (1) - Remove new combo
  2. 00:03:161 (1) - Remove clap in slider end
  3. 00:04:327 (3) - ^
  4. 00:18:994 (3,4) - (nazi) Move (3) to up 1 grid and move (4) to left 1 grid
  5. 00:50:994 (3,4,5) - Remove clap in (3,4), then add finish in (3,5)
  6. 01:13:994 (1) - Spinner start at 01:13:744 -

Hard

  1. 00:06:661 - (Timing) This has rhythm. I think that remove timing in here be better.
  2. 00:16:161 (5) - Move at 00:15:994, would match with rhythm more.
  3. 00:23:994 - Add a note?
  4. 00:38:327 - ^
  5. 00:38:827 - ^
  6. 01:13:827 (1) - Same as 01:13:994 (1) in Normal diff

Insane

  1. 00:06:661 - Same as Hard diff
  2. 00:14:994 (3) - It isn't congruent with (1,2)
  3. 01:13:828 (1) - Same as 01:13:994 (1) in Normal diff
  4. 01:27:495 (2,6) - Stack it

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
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