Lissette wrote:

Hi~

[Hard]
AR -1
AR8 seems fine to this diff, there're lots of jumps
00:10:968 (3) - feels better if you unstack this note
I think it's fine..
00:36:968 (2) - remove note? maybe convert into a slider with 1
this notes all follow vocal here, so it's fine imo
00:46:539 (4) - unpredictable jump, imo
here has a kinda high vocal, so I add a jump here
01:05:396 - to 01:13:396 - It wouldn't be a bad a idea changing your combo pattern to follow the vocals here, for example.... 01:06:539 (1) - remove new combo, 01:06:968 (2) - new combo, 01:07:682 (1) - remove new combo, 01:08:111 (2) - new combo, 01:08:825 (1) - remove new combo, etc.... looks better, imo
ok, all newcomo fixed

[Insane]
00:24:682 (3) - extend until next white tick and remove 00:24:968 (4) - then stack next notes under the slider end point
I'm following the same vocal using same objects here, here's "la la la" in vocal, so I use circle on every beat. seems not too hard to read and play, so I think it's fine o.o
00:29:254 (3) - same ^
00:35:111 (3,4) - this doesn't fit, feels weird while playing it longer slider till 4, and remove 4, adding a note at 00:35:539 -
I'm following vocal here, 00:35:325 - here has "no" in vocal, so I use a 3/4 slider to follow it, it's not too hard to read/play imo
01:05:396 - to 01:13:396 - same suggestion as Hard with the combos here
fixed
01:07:825 (2) - remove note, kills the flow D:
this is following the "s" in the word "yes", seems fine imo o.o
01:10:111 (2) - ^ ^
01:12:396 (2) - ^ ^
when i modded Hard didn't this diff existed, I kinda like Hard diff better, this one is a bit over-mapped ><
oops, this diffs is fine imo, Hard diff is kinda hard as a usual Hard diff, so I make the Insane a bit harder than a usual one o.o

[Normal]
00:37:539 (2) - this doesn't fit, maybe if you remove this slider, and add a reverse to 00:36:825 (1) -
this slider is following the vocal "no" at 00:37:539 - , it's fine imo

[Easy]
00:36:825 (1,2) - i don't like how this sounds, can you find another way to do it?
this is fine imo, my objects are always following vocal and the claps are following drums, not confusing imo
add at least one spinner to vary scores?
I had tried to add spinner, but seems there isn't a good place to add it, or the spinner is too short to play as an Easy diff.. orz

[Beginner]
00:02:539 (2) - I don't like where the slider ends, but cant find a better place ><
the end is following "a~" in the vocal o.o/
I thought this was going to be easier than this >< oops

Lissette wrote:

[Hard]
00:12:254 (2,3) - these two sliders are totally off, if you play it on 50% you will notice, this makes it awkward to play, not sure if you have to move to prev blue tick (happens in the other diffs too)
here sounds not too off imo, when I play it on 25% and listening carefully, I feel it's kinda off. but this's fine imo, here only has less than 10ms deviation, it's fine when playing(also if move it to blue line, it'll be totally vocal off..)
01:05:396 (1,2) - 1 remove new combo, 2 add new combo, so is like the next combos
fixed
01:23:111 (2,3) - same as 00:12:254 (2,3) - explained the reason above

[Insane]
00:52:254 (5) - i don't remember this being like this, this slider is kinda hidden by previous hit bursts, it also doesn't fit the map style, imo
uh.. I never changed this pattern before. also, in fact this is easy to read the pattern as this Insane diff, AR9 helps a lot
00:35:111 (3,4) - of you following the vocals then shouldn't be a note (in this case start of the slider) here 00:35:396 -
I use a 3/4 slider and 1/2 slider here to follow both vocal and drums. 00:35:396 - here hasn't vocal but drums, that's what I'm following

[Normal]
00:36:825 (1,2,3) - if you following the voice here, plz shorten 1 until 00:37:111 - and add a note at 00:37:254 -
cuz slider 2 doesn't start at downbeat(to follow vocal), so it's kinda hard to read/play if change slider1 into a 1/1 slider and a circle 1/2 after it imo

I'm kinda worry about the spreed here since you have the easiest (Beginner) with 2.17 star difficulty then the next is Easy with 4.09 which is a big jump imo, I was going to suggest to lighten the Easy a bit, but then will be far from your actual Normal, that feels like a light hard to me, so I dont know, poke me in-game to see what do you think about it.
I think the spared is fine, maybe the diffs name are not too appropriate. it's not a big deal imo, cuz the Beginner has 0.3m scores and Easy has 0.8m scores, not a score jump and the pattern in Easy isn't much harder than Beginner

kanpakyin wrote:

[General]

1. I had tested the timing again and feel that yours one is too late, so I tested a new one for you. Offset: 243 I got 3ms late when I used this offset.
   changed offset to 248, I think it's best offset now
2. As Regou said, you can rename the difficulties' name. It is quite weird because of beginner''.
   diff name changed: Beginner>Easy, Easy>Normal, Normal>Normal+, also fixed difficulty setting deal to diff name changed

[Beginner]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. OD or HP +1 to fit the overall difficulty setting.
      fixed
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:14:825 (1,2,1,2) - I had seen that you used this pattern at the beginning of this diff, I would suggest changing it to another pattern so it will be more fun.
      it's fine imo, also it won't be confusing for newbies, cuz same part using same patterns
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:43:968 (3) - I would suggest a whistle at the beginning of the slider due to high pitch part.
      sound kinda odd to me if add whistle here, so I keep for now
   2. 01:07:254 (x) - Remove the slidertick sound please, I feel weird of that here.
      volume down a bit now, it's fine now imo
   3. 01:08:825 (3) - ^ ^
   4. 01:11:111 (3) - ^ ^

[Easy]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:17:968 (2,3,1) - I would align the end of (2)- ,(3)- and the beginning of (1)- if I were you. The intention of doing this is going to make it more mellifluent and sure, Maintaining the flow.
      I think arc here is much better, cuz the sliders here are all arc, also it's the same to read as straight patterns
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:07:254 (x) - Remove the slidertick sound please, I feel weird of that here.
      volume down a bit now, it's fine now imo
   2. 01:08:825 (3) - ^ ^
   3. 01:11:111 (3) - ^ ^

[Normal]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:14:111 (x) - I feel like a note here because the entire part are following the vocal, so a note here can make it more consistent.
      I'm following only durms here, it'll be too hard to play if add new circle to follow the vocal here imo
   2. 00:42:682 (5) - I don't recommend such slider in normal diff, it is pretty confused for some recruit. As we know some recruit will play normal diff. Therefore, consider their ability. A normal diff shouldn't be confused.
      this slider is totally readble imo, it doesn't cover itself. also the diff is Normal+ now, so I think it's fine
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:16:254 (4,5,6,7) - I would add a whistle on (4)- and (6)- if I were you because the pitch of (4.6)- are higher than (5.7)- ,so place the whistle like this can show a cool effect during gameplay.
      sound kinda odd to me if add whistles here, so I keep them for now
   2. 00:20:825 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
   3. 01:27:111 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR-1 please.After my testing, I an read the map in AR7, so it is perfectly fine.
      I think AR7 is kinda low to this diff. the BPM is more than 200, and the diff design is nearly a usual Insane, so I think AR8 is fine
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:40:254 (1) - I feel like jump here since this hard is a jumpy hard, so it doesn't matter if you add a jump here. As I heard, the scale is going upward and the accent, so a jump here can impress the player and more fun. A small jump is enough.
      nice idea, fixed patterns here
   2. 00:41:396 (1) - ^ ^
   3. 00:42:539 (1) - ^ ^
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:16:254 (1,2,3,4) - Same as normal.
      I still feel kinda odd if add whistles o.o so keep for now
   2. 00:20:825 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
   3. 01:27:111 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

[Insane]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. I would swap OD setting and HP setting if I were you. OD8 HP7.
      I think HD8 with OD7 is fine, though HD8 is high, but with OD7 and many newcombo in this diff, it's not hard now
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:24:968 (4,5,6,1) - I prefer a jump here because 'la la la' is a staccato which make a jump-like feeling.
      a jump here isn't bad idea, but before it here's a 4/3 slider, if changing spacing it'll kinda hard to read the patterns, so I keep this for now
   2. 00:29:539 (4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:08:825 (3) - How about a whistle at the beginning of the slider?
      sound not bad, added
   2. 00:16:253 (1,2,3,4) - Same as normal
      same here ;_;
   3. 01:27:111 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^