204,56,25002,2,0,B|168:64|140:80,1,50,8|0
152,148,25219,2,0,B|180:148|208:136,1,50

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
00:16:959 - kdd k?
00:32:611 - kk聽起來糾結 還不如不要
01:04:133 - vocal -> kdddk
01:05:872 - 感覺不適合1/6
01:09:350 - vocal最後一下才高音, 所以ddddk更好
01:20:437 - move 1/4 later
02:27:176 - 這太鬼畜了
02:28:698 - ^
03:38:480 - 再見

長犯懶
吃棉花糖~

wmfchris wrote:

- inconsistancy in preview time
- [Never] 03:15:002 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
- 感覺第3個kiai不用存在...

[Never]
00:25:002 (3,4) - 避免重疊(5)

204,56,25002,2,0,B|168:64|140:80,1,50,8|0
152,148,25219,2,0,B|180:148|208:136,1,50

00:31:959 (3) - 結尾那一下音效有點糾結
01:23:263 (1) - remove NC (和00:13:698 - 一樣
03:47:611 (1) - ^

[Now]
00:15:654 (6) - highly covered by (3)
03:06:306 - start the break here exactly

[Normal]
00:27:176 (5) - 頭+whistle (之前也是這樣

[Taiko]
00:16:959 - kdd k?
00:32:611 - kk聽起來糾結 還不如不要
01:04:133 - vocal -> kdddk
01:05:872 - 感覺不適合1/6
01:09:350 - vocal最後一下才高音, 所以ddddk更好
01:20:437 - move 1/4 later
02:27:176 - 這太鬼畜了
02:28:698 - ^
03:38:480 - 再見

長犯懶
吃棉花糖~

Byakugan249 wrote:

alright~ let me see this again~. found this on #modreqs

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Easy]
00:25:437 (2) - perhaps you can make the slider like this for a smooth transition to the next note?FIX~
00:36:741 (3) - make this slider look like (1) since the vocal tone here is the same in this part of the song. this straight slider breaks the flow during gameplay.FIX~
00:43:698 (2) - same as above, but for a smoother flow during gameplay.FIX~
01:46:959 (4) - same as 00:25:437, but like this.FIX~
01:51:524 (1) - maybe a finish at the beginning to emphasize the vocals?FIX~
02:01:524 (1) - replace this for a circle and a 1/1 slider, or you can remove (1) and extend (4) by 1/2 to follow the vocals. add a 1/1 slider if you do this as well. also make that slider a NC because of new lyrics.FIX~

[Normal]
perhaps increase the HP, AR and OD by 1 to make it a bit challenging for players?FIX~
00:37:828 (5) - i don't like this repeat slider. it doesn't follow the vocals that accurate here. i suggest removing it and adding 3 circles like this as it follows the vocals accurately increasing the flow in this part of the song.I really like this part so no change >_<
00:41:306 (5) - extend this slider by 1/2 for emphasis in the vocals in this part of the song.FIX~
00:45:872 (2) - hmm...reduce this by 1/2 and add a circle at the next 1/2 tick. same reason as above.FIX~
00:53:480 (2,3,4) - re-arrange the pattern like this. the flow will increase and the transition as well during gameplay.
01:02:828 (3) - NC here because of new lyrics.FIX~
01:03:698 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above, the lyrics are connected here.FIX~
01:04:567 (3) - same as 01:02:828.FIX~
01:05:437 (2) - same as 01:03:698.FIX~
01:06:306 (4) - same as 01:02:828.FIX~
01:08:915 (2) - maybe you can add another repeat since the vocals are still going?FIX~
03:02:393 (4) - make this slider look like (2). i feel that the flow is broken by hitting this note during gameplay.FIX~
03:19:350 - how about a circle here to follow the drums?I dont think it follow the rhythm Orz...
03:33:263 (2) - same as 01:08:915.FIX~

[Hard]
00:45:872 (2) - replace this for a circle and a 1/1 slider at the next 1/2 tick here. it'll follow the vocals accurately during gameplay.FIX~
01:51:524 (1) - maybe you can move this down so that it'd be aligned to the end of the purple (5). i think the flow would be smoother during gameplay if you do this.FIX~
02:32:828 (3) - maybe a finish at the end for emphasis in the drums. the finish acts as the cymbals here.FIX~
03:12:828 (2) - same as 01:09:350.FIX~

[Sp3's Taiko]
00:54:785 - add another D. the drums and guitar are still going here.
03:26:088 (1) - this K sounds unfitting to the song and it ruins the flow in this part. a k should fit perfectly here to avoid any distractions.
are you sure that you don't want to map the end? i mean the drums are still going here. other than that, it's a pretty fun diff to play.

[Now]
04:01:959 (7) - how about stacking this on (1)? it'll look like as if the pattern is going around in a circle during gameplay.FIX~

[Never]
01:10:980 (5) - perhaps you can move this between (4,6)? idk...that overlap bothers me during gameplay.FIX~
02:20:980 (1) - i feel that this 1/4 slider doesn't fit here since the beginning isn't following anything here. replace this for a circle at the downbeat to make it easier for players to read.FIX~
02:22:393 (6) - maybe you can add a repeat for emphasis in the vocals, and to follow the guitar?FIX~

i guess that's it. catch me in-game for a re-check after you're done with the fixes . i feel that this is ready.

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Sp3's Taiko]
00:54:785 - add another D. the drums and guitar are still going here. Umm... I want keep my pattern because 00:54:785 - to 00:55:654 - it's a sentence. but I want used empty to emphasize kiai time.
03:26:088 (1) - this K sounds unfitting to the song and it ruins the flow in this part. a k should fit perfectly here to avoid any distractions. fixed

are you sure that you don't want to map the end? i mean the drums are still going here. other than that, it's a pretty fun diff to play. added
http://puu.sh/127MZ

Byakugan249 wrote:

Re-check~. no kd for this post.

[Easy]
01:41:089 (1) - *nazi* move this down a bit so that it'd be stacked perfectly on the other (1).FIX~

[Normal]
00:53:480 (2,3,4) - you forgot about this suggestion. consider doing this to make the diff fun for players. :O I forgot to reply this..because it look very well between slider1 and slider3
00:57:611 (3,1) - NC here. it'll be consistent with the other (1,2) (not at the same time) FIX~
00:59:133 (3) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above because of new lyrics. FIX~

[Hard]
00:15:002 (3,1) - remove (1) and add a repeat on (3) for consistency with the other (3). add a circle at the downbeat and make it a NC if you do this.It play very well in this part so I dont want to change it >_<..
00:46:089 (3) - *nazi* move the end point down. it looks unparalleled during gameplay. FIX~

[Never]
01:41:524 (2) - can you tilt the slider end a bit to the left for the repeat arrow to be fully visible? FIX~
02:22:828 (1,2) - make these 2 sliders the same as the other for a smoother transition during gameplay. FIX~

and that's all i got .

SapphireGhost wrote:

I'm so sleeeepy.

[General]
- For me, it makes more sense to end the second kiai at 02:33:263 on all difficulties.

[Now]
02:41:741 (1) - Move to x:384,y:200 and fix (2)'s spacing, it looks nicer.
02:48:698 (1) - Same idea, move to x:128,y:184 and fix (2)'s spacing.
03:38:263 (3,4,5,6,1) - Separate (3) and (1) so they don't touch?

I don't have a problem with the other difficulties, this is all.

Alduric wrote:

When you will make a good map? Please :C, because this is another crap.

Alduric wrote:

When you will make a good map? Please :C, because this is another crap.

Alduric wrote:

When you will make a good map? Please :C, because this is another crap.