All Fixed!LKs wrote:
some suggestions
[I]
00:14:116 (5) - 00:14:671 (6) - small adjust can make it looks much better http://puu.sh/MEPb
00:18:560 (1) - NC? since the SV change
00:40:042 (7,8) - your current pattern doesn't plays the best, try this to get better flow and looking? http://puu.sh/MEQA
00:42:264 (1,2) - same thing, but you can try some different ideas
00:48:190 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't understand this shape, what're you aiming for while arrange this pattern?
00:50:968 (3,4,5,6,7) - a oblique pentagon, use the polygon creator plz
00:58:190 (3,4,5,6,7) - plays not good and looks bad. simple change might work http://puu.sh/MEW8
01:27:264 (7,1,2,3,4) - this is kind of random(also some other places), I can find your design but you know spacing/arrangement is hard to control. it's easy to fail if you can't get the correct feeling/enough experience, which is comes from try and try.
thereby, you should be careful of things related to spacing, pattern, aesthetic feeling. GL
thank you for mod~