1. 00:14:094 (1) - weird, pointing in the opposite direction. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354460
2. 00:54:244 Overlap under at 00:52:440 (2). It's can't read for new player.
3. 01:38:455 (4) - Too high ><

1. 00:14:996 (2) - Don't use the reverse 2 times or more, because the new players do not adapt, it is easy to overlook and miss a second reverse. Only suggest to use reverse 1 time of sliders.
2. 00:19:507 (2) - Unsnap slider, move this to 00:19:508
3. 00:29:432 (2) - ^
4. 01:28:079 (1) - Too little time between the spinner and the next note, which will lead to new players do not have enough time to regain the control of the mouse. You must be separated by more than two of 1/1 beat.

1. 00:08:681 - Unsnap inherited point, Resnap this pls.
2. 00:43:417 - Useless inherited point.
3. 01:42:177 - Double inherited point.

1. 00:42:064 (3,4) - Do some curve? It's because this part you rarely use straight http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354474

1. 00:08:681 - Unsnap inherited point, Resnap this pls.

1. 01:12:741 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - Confusion so I don't suggest. And why it's anti-clockwise? You make clockwise at 01:11:838 (1,2,3,4,5)
2. 01:26:726 (1) - Remove NC

1. 00:08:681 - Unsnap inherited point, Resnap this pls.
2. 00:58:192 - Useless inherited point.

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Request from Modding Queue

[Advanced]

[Layout]

1. 00:42:064 (3,4) - Do some curve? It's because this part you rarely use straight http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354474

fixed
[Setting]

1. 00:08:681 - Unsnap inherited point, Resnap this pls.

[Extreme]

[Layout]

1. 01:12:741 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - Confusion so I don't suggest. And why it's anti-clockwise? You make clockwise at 01:11:838 (1,2,3,4,5)
2. 01:26:726 (1) - Remove NC

fixed
[Setting]

1. 00:08:681 - Unsnap inherited point, Resnap this pls.
2. 00:58:192 - Useless inherited point.

Seen good. Good luck
我mod完才發覺腦殘地用了英文，原諒我QQ

1. I'm not sure with the current source. Some staff says a simple jubeat is enough for source. Although the jubeat knit has no wrong, I still suggest asking some ppl around

250,101,20184,1,0

LKs wrote:

ahuang

[General]

1. I'm not sure with the current source. Some staff says a simple jubeat is enough for source. Although the jubeat knit has no wrong, I still suggest asking some ppl around

01:15:447 (5) - 这部分的这种位置可以考虑加大鼓 太鼓或者其他一些鼓 感觉应该会好

[Extreme]

00:35:297 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/FaQN 调整一下 直接说取消nc不就好啦..fixed
00:39:132 (1) - whistle fixed
00:58:868 (9) - clap? fixed
01:12:064 (2) - clap?
01:14:996 (5) - http://puu.sh/FaSf 我觉得这就很好
01:26:500 (3) - clap?
01:34:620 (1,2,3,4) - NC? 参考的是01:41:162 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 不懂...

不得不说真心比印象中之前的好得多 好阿黄 555你以前印象中的我是什么妖怪..

LKs wrote:

[Advanced]

00:13:643 (3,4) - 2ha问题在这种细节处 虽然有点风格但我建议还是调整下

BakaHuang wrote:

[Extreme]

00:35:297 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/FaQN 调整一下 直接说取消nc不就好啦..fixed 不是取消NC..我觉得五边形不太规则 可以弄得更好

wmfchris wrote:

[Ext]
00:14:094 (1,3,5,7) - while accents coming, the original melody is still going. Consider + whistle on these notes?fixed
01:13:192 - Just can't see the need to NC here... if necessary NC at 01:12:741 - and last for all 9 notes fixed
01:22:665 (1,2) - swap new combo; the light bass is a consequence of previous musical notes fixed

[Adv]
01:19:056 (5,1) - same as ext fixed
01:26:274 (1,2) - ^ by similar logic NC should be put on (2)...but visually does not look good

[Basic]
00:14:996 (2) - avoid 1/2 sliders with multiple reversing tick fixed
00:29:432 (2) - ^fixed

做太鼓也不錯 想做也可以！XDD
把22haha扇100下我就回來看loool

wcx19911123 wrote:

inb4 rank

[Basic]
01:42:177 - here has 2 green sections, need to remove the 100% volume one imo, or the spinner sound really odd fixed

good luck

wmfchris wrote:

[Ext]
把22haha扇100下我就回來看

wmfchris wrote:

[Basic]
00:14:094 (1,2) - make this looks like triplet more (so no one thinks it has 4 ticks) like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/373763
00:28:530 (1,2) - ^

no kd

Genre: Pop (Japanese)

arken1015 wrote:

Genre: Pop (Japanese)

At least, it is not general pop but Rhythm game music :3



Also... I don't know if this would be unrankable issue but
this song is not from jubeat (original) but jubeat knit~jubeat copious APPEND.
So, it might be needed source changing but... As this is just little thing orz
Whatever <3