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Topic Starter
Axey

LKs wrote:

ahuang

[General]

  1. I'm not sure with the current source. Some staff says a simple jubeat is enough for source. Although the jubeat knit has no wrong, I still suggest asking some ppl around
01:15:447 (5) - 这部分的这种位置可以考虑加大鼓 太鼓或者其他一些鼓 感觉应该会好

[Extreme]

00:35:297 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/FaQN 调整一下 直接说取消nc不就好啦..fixed
00:39:132 (1) - whistle fixed
00:58:868 (9) - clap? fixed
01:12:064 (2) - clap?
01:14:996 (5) - http://puu.sh/FaSf 我觉得这就很好
01:26:500 (3) - clap?
01:34:620 (1,2,3,4) - NC? 参考的是01:41:162 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 不懂...

不得不说真心比印象中之前的好得多 好阿黄 555你以前印象中的我是什么妖怪.. :cry:
thanks for modding <3
tutuhaha

LKs wrote:

[Advanced]

00:13:643 (3,4) - 2ha问题在这种细节处 虽然有点风格但我建议还是调整下
=A=.............................................搞成对称?...
http://puu.sh/Fsls
LKs

BakaHuang wrote:

[Extreme]

00:35:297 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/FaQN 调整一下 直接说取消nc不就好啦..fixed 不是取消NC..我觉得五边形不太规则 可以弄得更好

EDIT:

fixed source

added a hitsound

nazi

Nice flow, big progress, good spread, decent mapping, jubeat song, baka

EDIT: wrong submittion and some missing issues, waiting for fix

(going to)EDIT: fixed inconsistency on tags, fixed hitsound, corrected subbmition

EDIT: Bubbled
Beren
\o/
wmfchris
[Ext]
00:14:094 (1,3,5,7) - while accents coming, the original melody is still going. Consider + whistle on these notes?
01:13:192 - Just can't see the need to NC here... if necessary NC at 01:12:741 - and last for all 9 notes
01:22:665 (1,2) - swap new combo; the light bass is a consequence of previous musical notes

[Adv]
01:19:056 (5,1) - same as ext
01:26:274 (1,2) - ^ by similar logic NC should be put on (2)...but visually does not look good

[Basic]
00:14:996 (2) - avoid 1/2 sliders with multiple reversing tick
00:29:432 (2) - ^

做太鼓也不錯
把22haha扇100下我就回來看
Topic Starter
Axey

wmfchris wrote:

[Ext]
00:14:094 (1,3,5,7) - while accents coming, the original melody is still going. Consider + whistle on these notes?fixed
01:13:192 - Just can't see the need to NC here... if necessary NC at 01:12:741 - and last for all 9 notes fixed
01:22:665 (1,2) - swap new combo; the light bass is a consequence of previous musical notes fixed

[Adv]
01:19:056 (5,1) - same as ext fixed
01:26:274 (1,2) - ^ by similar logic NC should be put on (2)...but visually does not look good

[Basic]
00:14:996 (2) - avoid 1/2 sliders with multiple reversing tick fixed
00:29:432 (2) - ^fixed

做太鼓也不錯 想做也可以!XDD
把22haha扇100下我就回來看loool
thanks for modding :)
wcx19911123
inb4 rank

[Basic]
01:42:177 - here has 2 green sections, need to remove the 100% volume one imo, or the spinner sound really odd

good luck
Topic Starter
Axey

wcx19911123 wrote:

inb4 rank

[Basic]
01:42:177 - here has 2 green sections, need to remove the 100% volume one imo, or the spinner sound really odd fixed

good luck
tutuhaha

wmfchris wrote:

[Ext]
把22haha扇100下我就回來看
有你这么没人性的么DDDDDDD:!!!!!!!!!!!
wmfchris
[Basic]
00:14:094 (1,2) - make this looks like triplet more (so no one thinks it has 4 ticks) like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/373763
00:28:530 (1,2) - ^

no kd
Topic Starter
Axey

wmfchris wrote:

[Basic]
00:14:094 (1,2) - make this looks like triplet more (so no one thinks it has 4 ticks) like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/373763
00:28:530 (1,2) - ^

no kd
fixed~
wmfchris
sounds nice.

ranked!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
rank了啊, 恭喜。。
kyuten
哇好快
Beren
8-)
abalee
阿黄快掉点节操
miss_master_old
nice ranked,
No_Gu
哇阿黄
fanzhen0019
哇哦 恭喜~XD
spboxer3
恭喜
vizzy
Congrats!
arien666
Genre: Pop (Japanese)
At least, it is not general pop but Rhythm game music :3



Also... I don't know if this would be unrankable issue but
this song is not from jubeat (original) but jubeat knit~jubeat copious APPEND.
So, it might be needed source changing but... As this is just little thing orz
Whatever <3
Topic Starter
Axey

arken1015 wrote:

Genre: Pop (Japanese)
At least, it is not general pop but Rhythm game music :3



Also... I don't know if this would be unrankable issue but
this song is not from jubeat (original) but jubeat knit~jubeat copious APPEND.
So, it might be needed source changing but... As this is just little thing orz
Whatever <3

LKs asked ppy , ppy said that jubeat is ok <3 thanks for checking
DarknessAngel
哇 恭喜了
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