NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
It's kinda strange to have a kiai time difference... that... Insane's last kiai ends 1ms later.fix

[Easy]
01:06:418 (2) - just simply start at 01:06:111 ? Easy players may not understand this beat well (though it fits nice)这里map的时候失误了没听到鼓。。确实应该有
02:03:356 - add a note?k
02:04:886 - same thing, maybe you'd like to just keep your idea though.k
02:31:520 (3) - start this 1/2 later (as a 1/1 slider), then make 02:32:285 (4,5) - a slider too?k

[Normal]
00:39:019 (4) - seems you want to follow the vocal here, but the following beats doesn't really fit.. simply start 1/2 later?K
01:00:447 (2) - starts at a strange place...K
01:10:856 (5) - starts 1/2 earlier?这里背景音乐我觉得足够强啊这里跟个vocal把叮叮叮叮去了反而感觉不舒服
02:08:559 (1) - 中文说这个吧不然表达不清。既然你想很明确的两个一组，就索性1,2同形，34构成的整体也和12同形，一条斜线刷下来，气势好太多。姜还是老的辣
02:29:988 (4) - if possible, make the end a circle? (it's a finish where a part ends, so a slider's end is kinda not enough)K
02:33:968 (2) - a circle here and another slider start from 02:34:274 - ?K[/color是
02:48:815 (3,4,5) - make it more...straight? (in a line where 3 turned ...)

[Pokie]
00:52:0B9 (8) - maybe you have your reasons.. but... ends 1/2 earlier seems just better?
02:30:295 (4) - change to 2 circles?知心大姐姐说她都改了

[Insane]
第一段很好只是你太喜欢0.5x了，这在我看来可能是得治……开头本来就不太适合快SV而且你看后面音乐史快的我觉得这样也不会有多大问题
00:46:519 (1) - 不要为了折红点而折红点比较好。。。？K
01:09:784 (1) - 这真心是个我也不敢泡的桥段，虽然真的很不错。求先过。
01:51:111 (4) - 个人感觉结尾如果三连带进更给力K
02:38:560 (3) - 如果是我的话这基本必死，是你的话，活路也不大。K
02:41:621 (1) - 这梗用的不错我喜欢 好

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

刚刚拿来打了一下, 01:58:458 (5,6,7,1) - 好像这样是unrank的啊哪里unrankable

还有, 01:06:417 (2) - 这里有点看不清确实是不过感觉放这里蛮好玩的

233 好图不过这combo color可能会被黑就是了

don't give kd thx

SapphireGhost wrote:

Another one!

[General]
- That first break is so long... can you try to map part of it? It'll be a lot less waiting for the player.make the same sense as NR's Poker Face
- Some difficulties don't play video for me... is it just me?seems so

[Insane]
01:57:233 (4,1,2) - It's a bit hard to tell (2) is a slider with hitbursts on, can it be moved somewhat to prevent this?I already put some patterns which are similar to these.I think It's not to hard to tell this.
01:58:611 (6,7,1) - Worried about hidden repeat arrow here, try to make sure it doesn't happen.fixed

[Pokie]
02:50:040 - Break should start here like on Gu's difficulties.yes

[Easy]
03:09:785 (1,1) - I think a new player might not expect the last note...no better idea about this.and maybe a challenge here is fine?

Sorry I didn't get to this sooner. Just let me know when you've made changes.

Jacob wrote:

I thought that you ranked and unranked it for a second.

Byakugan249 wrote:

Ooh 2nd checkmate got ranked. I bet if someone maps this again, Sapphi will be the one to rank it . anyways congratz on the rank

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

What a sad story

其实我觉得这个比较好啊233

kanpakyin wrote:

No_Gu的代表作...確實覺得這個比2哈的好一點- -打起來帶感

congrats

S h i o n wrote:

眼花

其实这样就可以了...